高中英语学业水平测试复习专题五书面表达课时教学课件

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专题五　书面表达
题型解读
PART
01
第一部分
广东省高中英语学业水平考试要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：(1)清楚、连贯地获取信息、传递信息、表达信息。(2)有效运用所学语言知识，写出90词左右的短文。
[解题思路]
1．认真审题，确定写作的体裁与题材。
2．记叙文明确五个“W”和一个“H”，即what(什么事)、who(什么人)、when(什么时候)、where(什么地点)、why(什么原因)、how(怎么样)。要清楚地知道表达什么。
3．文章内容一般可以按所给提示内容的顺序来写，但要注意叙事的角度、采用的人称、时态与语态的形式。
4．正确使用各种句式、句型，恰当地使用简单词汇，适时运用高级词汇，在此基础上，正确地运用连接词，如表示转折、并列、递进、因果等关系的连接词。
5．成文后注意修改、润色，更要注意书写，力求工整、美观。
技巧点拨
PART
02
第二部分
策略1　词汇高级，“语”众不同
高级词汇就像一颗耀眼的明珠，为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两个原则：
1．不“人云亦云”原则
写作时恰当使用其他考生可能想象不到的词汇会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。如：
(1)tell→inform告诉
I'm writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match next month.
我写信告诉你我们下个月将有一场排球赛。
(2)lie in→be located at位于
Surrounded by green trees，the farm is located at the foot of the hill near our school.
农场位于我们学校附近的山脚下，四周绿树环绕。
(3)many→various各种各样的
There will be various fantastic performances given by talented students.
多才多艺的学生们将进行各种精彩的表演。
2．短语优先原则
短语的意思往往比单个单词的意思更为饱满，因此考生宜利用短语巧妙地表达文章的意思。如：
(1)realise→become aware of意识到
Through participating in this picking activity, I have become aware of the significance of work.
通过参加这次采摘活动，我意识到了劳动的重要性。
(2)plan→make a plan计划
Finn and his friend Tom Sawyer made a plan to save Jim from the farm.
费恩和他的朋友汤姆·索亚计划把吉姆从农场里救出来。
(3)many→a large number of许多
There stands a big stadium in our school，where a large number of sports activities are held there.
我们学校有一个大体育馆，很多体育活动在那里举行。
策略2　句式丰富，彰显能力
精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，因此考生应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子高人一等，亮点纷呈，彰显自己的写作能力。
1．精彩的复合句
(1)增加亮点的定语从句
Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China.It has a history of more than 1，500 years.
→Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a history of more than 1，500 years.
(2)吸引眼球的状语从句
①Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture (原因状语从句)，I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.
②If you're interested in the Chinese folk art(条件状语从句), please e-mail me.
(3)提升档次的名词性从句
①That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice (表语从句).
②I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you(宾语从句).
2．新颖的强调句和省略句
(1)It is the spirit that the story conveys that really matters.
(2)As scheduled, an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum.
3．传神的被动结构
Your timely help will be very much appreciated by me.
4．言简意赅的非谓语动词结构
To get admitted, I have made good preparations, trying to know as much as I could about my city.
策略3　过渡巧妙，完美文章
过渡词就像纽带一样把文章紧紧地联系起来，使文章衔接流畅。
1．文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语
to begin with/first of all/in the first place(首先)、as you know(如你所知)、as is known to all(众所周知)、as is shown in...(正如在……中显示的那样)等
2．文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语
therefore/thus(因此)、in conclusion/to sum up/in a word(总之)、in brief(简言之)、generally speaking(一般来说)、on the whole(总的来说)等
3．常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语
first(第一)、second(第二)、next(其次)、last but not least(最后但同样重要的)、after that(之后)、eventually/finally(最后，最终)、since then(从那以后)、afterwards(后来)、meanwhile(同时)、immediately(立刻)等
适用于两点的情况：on the one hand...on the other hand...、for one thing...for another (thing)...
适用于三点或以上的情况：to begin with、then、furthermore、finally；to start with、next、in addition、last but not least；most importantly、moreover/furthermore、finally
4．常用的表示因果关系的过渡词语
accordingly/consequently(因此、所以)、for this reason(由于这个原因)、as a result of(由于、因为)、due to/thanks to(由于)、therefore/thus(因此)、because of(由于)等
5．常用的表示比较和对比的过渡词语
in contrast with/in comparison with(与……相比)、similarly(同样地)、on the contrary(相反)、different from...(与……不同)、on the other hand(另一方面)等
6．常用的表示举例的过渡词语
a case in point(恰当的例子)、that is to say(也就是说)、for instance/for example/such as(例如)等
7．常用的表示强调的过渡词语
furthermore/moreover(而且)、besides(此外)、actually/in fact(实际上)、also(而且、也)、indeed(的确)、in particular(尤其、特别)、naturally(当然)、hopefully(有希望地)
热考体裁
PART
03
第三部分
体裁1　邀请信
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．I am pleased to invite you to attend.../It's a pleasure for me to invite you to attend...
我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
2．I wonder if you could come...
我想知道你是否能来……
3．My family and I would feel honored if you could come.
如果你能来，我和我的家人会倍感荣幸。
4．I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
相信你能在这儿过得愉快。
5．I am writing on behalf of all the students of our department to invite you to give a lecture on...
我代表全系学生邀请您为我们就……做一个演讲。
6．We look forward to seeing you.
我们期待见到你。
7．We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.
我们期待你参加聚会。
8．We would be very grateful if you could give a talk on...
如果你能就……发表演讲，我们将不胜感激。
【写作模板】
Dear ____________(称谓)，
I'm ____________(表明自己的身份). We/I'd like to invite you to ____________(邀请目的).
We're going to have ____________(活动名称). We'll gather at ____________(地点) at ____________(时间). And it's going to last about ____________(活动时长). I know you are ____________(邀请原因), and
I, on behalf of ____________(所代表的内容) sincerely invite you to ____________(活动内容). It'll be nice to ____________(活动的好处). I'm sure you'll have a good time. Will you be available during this time Please contact me at your earliest convenience.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
____________(写信人)
体裁2　告知信
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
现在我写信告诉你一些有关的细节。
2．You are supposed/expected to...
你应该……
3．You should/You'd better...
你应该/你最好……
4．There will be a lecture on...
将有一场关于……的讲座。
5．The lecture will last 3 hours./The lecture will begin at...and end at...
讲座将持续3个小时。/讲座将在……开始……结束。
6．Hopefully, this information would be helpful for you
希望这些信息对你有所帮助。
7．Please get there on time./Please get everything ready ahead of time.
请准时到那里。/请提前准备好所有的东西。
8．Don't miss the chance./Don't be late.
不要错过这次机会。/不要迟到。
9．Everyone is welcome to...
欢迎大家……
10．I sincerely hope you...
我真诚地希望你……
【写作模板】
Dear ____________(称谓)，
Aware of your enthusiasm for/Delighted to learn that ____________(活动主题/对主题的兴趣), I'm writing to express my ____________(看法/关心/欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
____________(活动信息).To begin with, ____________(要点一). Furthermore, ____________(要点二). To sum up, ____________(要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Yours sincerely，
____________(写信人)
体裁3　建议信
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信来表达我关于……的观点。
2．You have asked me for my advice about...in your letter, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.
你来信问我关于……的意见，我将尝试提出几条引导性的建议。
3．I would like to suggest that...
我建议……
4．Why not.../Why don't you...
为何不……？
5．I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could.
如果你可以的话，我认为它将是个好主意/更有利的。
6．It's important to.../It is helpful to.../It should be a good idea to...
……很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
7．I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning...
我写信提出几条关于……的建议。
8．Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks.
请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
9．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful.
我希望这些提议/建议对你有帮助/有用。
【写作模板】
Dear ________(称谓)，
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ________(对方求助内容). Here are my suggestions.
To get started, you had better ________(建议一). Besides, it's a good idea to ________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to ________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I'm sure you will ________(成功解决问题).
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
____________(写信人)
体裁4　道歉信
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．I would like to express my apology for...
对于……我想要表达我的歉意。
2．Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for...
请原谅我……
3．Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology.
请接受我最诚挚、最深切的道歉。
4．I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../I regret to inform you that...
我很抱歉地告诉你……/我很遗憾地通知你……
5．I write to you to express my deep regret.
我写信向你表示深深的懊悔。
6．I am writing to apologize to you for...
我写信向你致歉，因为……
7．Would you mind if I．..
你是否介意如果我……？
8．To make up my thoughtless behavior, I．..
为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
9．I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.
我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
【写作模板】
Dear ____________(称谓)，
I am very sorry that/It is a pity that ____________(道歉原因). I am writing this letter to show my deep regret.
I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for ____________(错误行为). I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my detailed explanation. The reason for ____________ is/was that
____________(事件的起因). Therefore, ____________(事件的结果). Would you please accept my apology and understand my situation I would appreciate your allowing me to ____________(补救措施).
Once again, I'm really sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.
Yours，
____________(写信人)
体裁5　申请信
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper.
我想申请你们在今天报纸上刊登的一个职位。
2．I have learned from a friend that...
我从一个朋友那里得知……
3．I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience.
我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
4．My name is...I graduated from..., majoring in...
我的名字是……。我毕业于……，专业是……
5．I am confident that my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
6．I am skilled in/good at...
我擅长……
7．I have good performance in every course, especially in...
我每门课成绩都很好，特别是……
8．I trust that I am capable of doing the work well.
我相信我能干好这份工作。
9．I believe that I am well qualified for the position as...
我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
【写作模板】
Dear ____________(称谓)，
I'm ____________ from ____________(自我介绍). I'm writing to ____________(写信目的), for I believe that ____________(申请原因).
I think I am qualified for ____________(申请职位), because ____________(优点一). Moreover, I also have ____________(优点二). That's why I apply for the position./I hope I can join in the activity. I plan to ____________(计划一), have them ____________(计划二) and ____________(计划三). What's more important is ____________(达到的效果).
I hope you can offer me the opportunity. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours，
____________(写信人)
体裁6　活动介绍
【布局(思维导图)】
【高频句型】
1．The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of, which turned out to be a great success.
这项结果取得巨大成功的活动受到了高度评价。
2．Not only does it build up our body, but it also enriches our school life.
它不仅强健了我们的身体，而且丰富了我们的校园生活。
3．Undoubtedly these events have received high praise and everyone feels prouder of the school than ever before.
毫无疑问，这些活动受到了高度赞扬，每个人比以往任何时候都为学校感到骄傲。
4．Then followed a big party, where everyone had the opportunity to appreciate many a beautiful song and eye-catching talent show.
然后是一个大聚会，在那里每个人有机会欣赏了许多动听的歌曲和夺人眼球的才艺表演。
5．Last Sunday witnessed a grand Coming of Age Ceremony held in our school.
上周日，我们学校举行了盛大的成人典礼。
6．And you should arrive at the stadium of our school before 9 a．m.
你应该在上午9点之前到达我们学校的体育馆。
7．A lot of famous schoolmates will attend the ceremony.
许多著名的校友将参加这个典礼。
8．What's more, there will be plenty of wonderful performances.
此外，将会有很多精彩的表演。
9．Meanwhile, you can take photos of the ceremony if you like.
同时，如果你喜欢的话，你可以拍典礼的照片。
10．It is a pleasure to welcome you to the anniversary.
很高兴欢迎你来参加周年纪念活动。
【写作模板】
To ____________(活动目的), ____________(活动名称) was organized by ____________(组织者). The details are as follows.
In the beginning, ____________(活动内容一). Later, while doing ____________， we did a variety of activities, which ____________(活动内容二). The highlight of the activity was ____________， which ____________(活动内容三).
As far as I am concerned, the activity was unforgettable and rewarding, which turned out to be a great success. Through the activity, not only does it ____________(活动意义一), but it also ____________(活动意义二).
专题训练
PART
04
第四部分
Writing 1
(2022·广东1月)假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会。但你得了流感，医生建议你休息一段时间，因此不能赴约。请给Robert写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.告知不能赴约；
2.说明不能赴约的原因；
3.希望下次再约。
注意：1.词数90左右；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Robert，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can't attend the evening party next Monday.
I know I have promised you, but I've been having the flu unexpectedly. I didn't feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu. The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
If it's convenient for you, shall we make another appointment after my recovery Sorry again for any trouble this may cause.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 2
(2021·广东1月)假定你是李华。学校将在下周五下午2：30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时，英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加，并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
内容要点：(1)写信目的；
(2)活动时间、地点及主要内容；
(3)期待对方回复。
注意：1.词数90左右；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Robert，
Aiming to improve students' spoken English, our school is going to hold an English Corner and I'm writing to invite you to attend.
The English Corner will be held on the school playground at 2：30 p．m. next Friday. There will be various kinds of performances, including English dramas, poetry reciting and dancing. Besides, we will spend time together playing some exciting games. English teachers and students in our school will join in it. As you are one of the most popular teachers in our school, you're expected to make a speech about your middle school life.
We are looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 3
假定你是李华，你校计划举办校园艺术节，请你用英文写一封邮件给曾经在学校任职过的外教史密斯先生(Mr. Smith)，邀请他前来参加艺术节活动。内容包括：
1.时间：2月1日至3日；
2.参与人员和活动安排等。
注意：1.词数90左右；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr. Smith，
I'm pleased to tell you that an art festival will be held in our school. The festival will be held from February 1st to 3rd. During the festival, there will be a concert, an art exhibition, a speech contest, a photo exhibition and a Chinese poetry recital competition. All the activities are organized by students. For example, the music classes are in charge of the concert and
the art exhibition is organized by our art classes. As your students, we know you like traditional Chinese culture, so we invite you to come to the festival. Your presence is really important for the festival.
We are looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 4
假定你是校英文报的一名记者，8月3日，一批来自英国的高中生来你校进行了文化交流活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.活动内容(参观文化长廊、听文化讲座、观看文艺表演等)；
2.你对这次活动的评价。
注意：1.词数90左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
A group of high school students from England came to our school for a cultural exchange on August 3rd.
Upon their arrival at our school, we gave them a warm welcome. Then we showed them around our cultural corridor, where great paintings and sculptures are exhibited. Later, we attended a cultural lecture, during which they introduced some of their culture to us. At noon, we took them to our
student canteen to taste traditional Chinese food, which they thought highly of. After that, we watched an art performance given by students in our school.
This cultural exchange activity was really impressive and we all benefited a lot from it.