中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
热点主题书面表达 提前练
2025年中考英语复习备考
一、书面表达
1.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike写信告诉你他对DeepSeek很感兴趣,你需要给他写一封回信,要点如下:
1. 向Mike介绍DeepSeek是中国自主研发的新兴AI工具,非常受欢迎。
2. 告诉Mike你使用DeepSeek学英语,解难题,写文章;DeepSeek还帮你规划旅行和提供健康生活建议等。
3. 建议Mike使用DeepScek学汉语。
1. 词数80到100字;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 提示词:DeepSeek (深度求索) AI(人工智能) tool (工具) 研发 develop
Dear Mike,
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yours,
Li Hua
2.同学们,最近热映的《哪吒2》超燃!哪吒逆天改命,敖丙肩负使命仍坚守情义,他们的故事触动人心。其实我们身边也有这样充满力量的榜样,他/她或许是勇敢追梦的同学,或许是默默奉献的家人。现在,请你以“The Person I Admire”为题,根据以下提示,用英语写一篇介绍自己榜样的演讲稿!
要点:1. What does he/she look like
2. What is he/she like
3. Why do you admire him/her
注意:1.根据以上要点提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
3.随着全球化的发展,国家间的文化交流日益频繁。作为一名中国学生,你受邀在一场以“中国礼仪”为主题的国际文化交流活动中发表演讲。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
·Chinese manners in daily life
·an unforgettable experience about Chinese manners
·the reason why we should keep and spread Chinese manners in modern society
要求:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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4.俗话说:“民以食为天”。中国的饮食文化历史悠久,举世间名,假如你是学生会主席李华,今年暑假一批外国朋友要到你的学校参加文化交流夏令营。作为学生代表,请你以“When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat”为题,根据表格提示写一篇小短文,向对方介绍去中国家庭聚餐时的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并补充信息,适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3)词数80-100,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat
Before dinner: Manners: wash our hands; wait for the eldest… Reasons: pay attention to health; show respect(尊重)to… At dinner: Manners: eat with chopsticks; … Reasons: … After dinner: Manners: help to clear the table; … Reasons: …
Meaning of having dinner together: enhance(增强)the sense of happiness; provide a good chance to…
When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people, In China, we value the time of having dinner with our family, friends and others. If you’re invited to have dinner in others’ home, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tom 对中国的科技与体育发展感兴趣。请根据以下提示写一封邮件:
华为鸿蒙系统的全球影响;中国女拳击手的突破;民营企业的教育支持。
要求:80—120 词,开头结尾已给出。
Dear Tom,
I’m excited to share China’s latest developments with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6.参加体育锻炼能促进学生身心健康成长,请根据以下信息,以“Sports Are Important for Us”为题,推荐一项有益身心的运动并简述2~3点原因,号召同学们运动起来,锻炼身体,健康生活。
The meaning of exercise (运动的意义) The sports you suggest (推荐的运动) The reasons you like (推荐的原因) Your opinion (你的呼吁)
build up one’s body feel happy get into/ develop a habit of Cycling Running Playing basketball reduce stress feel free from enjoy nature take action
要求:
1. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数内);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
Sports Are Important for Us
Sports are good for us in many ways.
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7.随着网络技术的发展,在线学习越来越普遍。在线学习也有自身的优点和缺点,如方便快捷、资源丰富、自主学习等优点,以“Online learning”为题目,写一篇英文短文。
Advantages Disadvantages
convenient and fast easy to get distracted (分心的)
rich online resources (资源) not enough communication
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所选论点的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.阐述你的理由;
3.词数100字左右。
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8.在现代社会生活中,我们经常需要团队合作来完成各项任务。每一个团队都需要优秀的领导者来带领团队取得成功。请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文,向你的同学们介绍一下如何成为优秀的团队领导者。
注意:
(1)短文应包含表格中提示的所有信息,并补充一条;
(2)短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Ways to be a good leader 1. Encourage the whole group.
2. Be calm and wise
......
Nowadays, we often do lots of work in groups, and all groups need good leaders. In my heart, a good leader____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.你的学校最近开展了一次学生午餐情况调研,从午餐种类(variety)、品质(quality)、用餐体验(dining experience) 等方面进行了满意度调研 (satisfaction survey),相关调查结果见以下饼状图(pie chart)。
请你根据本次调查结果,写一份调查报告。
内容包括:
1、调查情况介绍
2、相关数据分析
3、改进建议
You may begin like this:
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches…
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10.研学是非常受欢迎并且有效的学生活动,假设你们学校有较多的外籍学生,为保障学生研学过程安全有序,现学校英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项征集建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
1.Key points:
2.Notes:
①文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;
②要求包含所有要点提示,并适当拓展和增加要点;
③词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Now study tours are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.
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参考答案
1.例文
Dear Mike,
I was thrilled to receive your letter expressing your keen interest in DeepSeek. Allow me to share some more insights about this remarkable AI tool.
DeepSeek is an emerging AI tool independently developed by China, and it has gained immense popularity. I’ve personally found it incredibly useful in various aspects of my life. For instance, I use DeepSeek to enhance my English learning, solve complex problems, and even draft articles with ease. What’s more, it helps me plan my travels and offers valuable advice for a healthy lifestyle.
Considering your enthusiasm, I highly recommend giving DeepSeek a try for learning Chinese. Looking forward to hearing your experiences with DeepSeek!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封回信,属于书信写作;
②时态:采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求写一封80到100词的信给英国朋友Mike,介绍DeepSeek是中国自主研发的新兴AI工具,说明其在学习、解决问题、旅行规划和健康生活方面的应用,并建议他用DeepSeek学习汉语。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头部分回应Mike的兴趣表达,并简要介绍DeepSeek是一款由中国独立开发并广受欢迎的AI工具;
第二步,详细阐述DeepSeek在日常生活中的多种用途,包括英语学习、问题解决、文章撰写、旅行规划以及提供健康生活建议等具体例子;
第三步,基于上述信息,建议Mike尝试使用DeepSeek学习汉语,并期待听到他的使用体验。
[亮点词汇]
①emerging AI tool新兴的AI工具
②independently developed独立开发
③enhance one’s English learning增强某人的英语学习
④solve complex problems解决复杂问题
⑤draft articles撰写文章
⑥plan one’s travels规划某人的旅行
⑦valuable advice for a healthy lifestyle健康生活的宝贵建议
[高分句型]
Considering your enthusiasm, I highly recommend giving DeepSeek a try for learning Chinese. (现在分词短语作状语)
2.参考答案:
Version 1:
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my cousin, Mike.
He is short and kind of fat. He is popular with people around him. He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with their homework, and also helps the old people cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is brave enough to challenge all kinds of difficulties.
He sets a good example for me. I’ll learn from him to be brave enough to achieve my dream.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
Version 2:
The Person I Admire
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother.
She is in her forties. She is very tall and beautiful. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have trouble in my study, she always listens to my problems patiently. And she tells me how to solve them and encourages me to face these problems. As a doctor, she often says she must be more careful. She sets a good example for me in my study. She has spent most of her time working. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我最欣赏的人是我的母亲。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——所欣赏的人的外貌、性格、欣赏的原因等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听”的感激。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble in sth.在某方面有麻烦
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③pay more attention to更关注
[高分句型]
①I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. (宾语从句)
②So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. (not only...but also...用法)
3.例文
Good morning, everyone! Today I would like to talk about Chinese manners.
In our daily life, there are many examples of Chinese manners. When we meet someone for the first time, we usually shake hands. Also, we often let the elderly go first as a sign of respect. I still remember one experience. Once I visited my grandparents during the Spring Festival. I greeted them and wished them good health. They were very happy and gave me a red packet.
In modern society we should keep and spread Chinese manners because it is an important part of our culture. It helps us build good relationships with others and shows our respect and love. Thank you!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,包括三方面:日常生活中的中国礼仪,一次有关中国礼仪的经历,保持和传播中国礼仪的原因。可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍演讲主题:中国礼仪;
第二步,介绍常生活中的中国礼仪,以及一次有关中国礼仪的经历;
第三步,保持和传播中国礼仪的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①a sign of respect表示尊重
②wished them good health祝他们身体健康
③build good relationships建立良好的关系
[高分句型]
In modern society we should keep and spread Chinese manners because it is an important part of our culture. (because引导原因状语从句)
4.例文
When in China, Eat as the Chinese Eat
Food is the first necessity of the people, In China, we value the time of having dinner with our family, friends and others. If you’re invited to have dinner in others’ home, there are some table manners we need to remember.
We must wash our hands before dinner because we should pay attention to our health. And waiting for the eldest person takes their seat first to show our respect. We eat with chopsticks because they are the traditional culture. But it is impolite to stick chopsticks into the bowl. After dinner, we can help to clear the table to express our gratitude.
Chinese people like to eat together because it can enhance the sense of happiness and provide a good chance to communicate with each other.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分别列举用餐前后的礼仪与原因;
第二步,表明一起用餐的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②take one’s seat坐下
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①There are some table manners we need to remember.(省略that的定语从句)
②And waiting for the eldest person takes their seat first to show our respect.(动名词作主语)
③But it is impolite to stick chopsticks into the bowl.(不定式作主语)
5.参考例文
Dear Tom,
I’m excited to share China’s latest developments with you. Huawei’s HongmengOS has become the world’s third largest mobile operating system, powering over 320 million devices globally. Its seamless connectivity between phones, tablets, and cars has redefined smart living.
In sports, Chinese boxer Zhang Xiaoping made history by winning the WBA world title in 2024, the first Asian woman to do so. Her success inspired more girls to take up boxing, with a 350% increase in youth participation.
Meanwhile, private enterprises like Innovatech are transforming education. They donated 15 million yuan to rural schools, providing AI tutors and smart classrooms. Math scores in these areas improved by 30% after using their apps.
China is merging technology and sports to empower future generations. Let me know if you want more details!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”以及“现在完成时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,介绍华为鸿蒙系统的全球影响;
第二步、介绍中国女拳击手的突破;
第三步、民营企业的教育支持;
第四步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make history创造历史
②inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
③take up开始从事;喜欢上
[高分句型]
Huawei’s HongmengOS has become the world’s third largest mobile operating system, powering over 320 million devices globally.(“the + 序数词 + 最高级 + 名词”结构)
6.例文
Sports Are Important for Us
Sports are good for us in many ways. They help build up our bodies, and when we do sports, we can forget our troubles and feel happy. What’s more, doing sports allow us to cultivate hobbies and develop a habit of lifelong exercising.
For junior three students, there are some great sports to try. Running is a great option. It’s easy to start. As all you need is a pair of running shoes. Running makes our hearts stronger and helps reduce stress from learning. And running outdoors enables us to enjoy the fresh air and a healthier life, which is good for our mental health. Running can make you feel free from bad feelings and also enjoy the nature around you.
Let’s start today! Even 20 to 30 minutes daily makes a difference. Walk, run, or ride—every step counts. Remember, a healthy body brings a brighter future. Join me and make exercise a part of your life!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,介绍运动的意义;
第二步,介绍推荐的运动和推荐的原因;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家运动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①build up增强
②be good for对……有好处
③make a difference有影响
[高分句型]
①And running outdoors enables us to enjoy the fresh air and a healthier life, which is good for our mental health. (which引导的定语从句)
②They help build up our bodies, and when we do sports, we can forget our troubles and feel happy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
7.例文
Online learning
Online learning has become more popular with the development of Internet technology. I believe online learning has more advantages than disadvantages. One of the main advantages is that it’s very convenient and fast. You can study anytime and anywhere you want, which saves a lot of time and energy. Besides, there are rich online resources available. You can find all kinds of information and materials to help you with your studies. Of course, there are also some disadvantages. For example, it’s easy to get distracted. There are many other things online that can catch your attention. Moreover, online learning may not provide enough communication with teachers and classmates.
However, I still think online learning is a good way to learn. With self-discipline, we can overcome its disadvantages and enjoy its convenience and rich resources.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明在线学习有优点也有缺点;
第二步,重点介绍在线学习的优点和缺点;
第三步,表明自己对在线学习的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① one of+可数名词复数 ……之一
② help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人
③ provide sth. with sb.为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①You can study anytime and anywhere you want, which saves a lot of time and energy. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②There are many other things online that can catch your attention. (there be句型,that引导定语从句)
8.One possible version:
Nowadays, we often do lots of work in groups, and all groups need good leaders. In my heart, a good leader should encourage the whole group to work towards a goal. In this way, he can get on well with all the other people in the group. All the members can work together to reach the goal successfully. What’s more, a good leader should be calm and wise. Whatever happens, the first thing that a good leader should do is to keep calm and stay wise. He can lead the group to avoid making more mistakes. Besides, a good leader needs to be able to work out problems and make the right decisions under pressure. In a word, a good leader always tries to make the group a better team.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作时包含表格中所给提示,注意不要遗漏,并适当补充一条,可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明写作意图,表明优秀团队领导者很重要;
第二步,详细阐述怎样成为优秀的团队领导者;
第三步,书写结语,总结优秀领导者的特性。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
②get on well with sb 和某人相处融洽
③reach the goal 实现目标
④avoid doing 避免做某事
⑤make mistakes 犯错误
⑥work out 解决
⑦under pressure 压力之下
⑧try to do 努力做某事
[高分句型]
①Whatever happens, the first thing that a good leader should do is to keep calm and stay wise. (whatever引导让步状语从句,that引导定语从句,to do不定式作表语)
②All the members can work together to reach the goal successfully. (to do不定式作目的状语)
9.范文
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches. The survey focused on three main areas: variety, quality, and dining experience.
The results of the survey showed that the majority of students were satisfied with the variety of lunch options available. However, there was still a significant portion of students who felt that there was not enough choice. In terms of quality, the survey revealed that many students believed the food was tasty and fresh, but some complained about the portion sizes being too small.
Regarding the dining experience, the survey found that most students were happy with the cleanliness and organization of the lunchroom. However, some students expressed concerns about the noise levels and the lack of seating during peak times.
Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences. Additionally, the school should consider increasing portion sizes to ensure that all students are satisfied with their meals. Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.
[总体介绍]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文;
②时态:采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,句子衔接自然,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍具体的调查结果;
第二步,具体分析相关数据;
第三步,提出合适的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the majority of大多数
②in terms of就……而言
③the lack of缺少
[高分句型]
①Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences.(宾语从句)
②Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.(宾语从句)
10.例文:
Now study tours are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip Here’s my advice.
First, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, it’s important for us to follow the traffic rules. We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic light is red. Third, if we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. What’s more, we should be careful when we use electricity. Last but not the least, it’s dangerous to swim in the river. We mustn’t swim alone.
In short, safety must come first!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意拼写和语法正确,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“研学很受欢迎”来引出下文中对注意事项的描述;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、个人安全和求助”三方面入手,重点介绍研学时的注意事项和建议;
③第三步,书写结语。安全第一!
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②be supposed to do sth应该做某事
③do harm to对……有害
④instead of代替
⑤in danger处于危险之中
⑥in time及时
[高分句型]
①We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic light is red.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Third, if we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time.(if引导的条件状语从句)
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