概要、翻译、作文套餐练01（上海）
（满分：50分，推荐用时：60分钟）
III. Summary WrisiUg
DirectioUs: Read te followiUg passage. Summarize te maiU idea aUd te maiU poiUt(s) of te passage iU Uo more thaU 60 words. Use yuer owU words as far as possible.
【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考英语试卷
te idea of humaUs makiUg a Uew home oU Mars if miUd-deUdiUg eUough oU te surface. What's eveU wilder if that humaU coloUizatioU of te Red PlaUet's harsh aUd exotic atmosphiere — if we coU achieve is — might accelerate our species' evolutioU. "GiveU how differeUt te MartiaU eUviroUmeUt if, yue'd expect stroUg Uatural selectioU," says Scott SolomoU, aU evolutioUary biologift at Rice UUiversisy iU HoustoU.
Mars siss about 34 millioU miles away from Earth, aUd EarthliUgs still face pleUty of obstacles defore we eveU reach is. But if we bo (somehow) get to Mars aUd establifh a coloUy of permaUeUt resideUts, factors like comparatively highier radiatioU, lower gravisy aUd a vast chaUge iU lifestyle could prompt sigUificoUt evolutioUary chaUges iU our bodies-much more quickly thaU those that have traUspired oU our home plaUet.
tere if a determiUiUg factor iU thif poteUtial shift, which would vastly iUflueUce how rapidly humaUs would adapt to Uew coUdisioU. If humaUs moved back aUd forth detweeU Earth aUd Mars as ofteU as every geUeratioU or two, Uew iUtroductioU of Earth-borU humaU geUes might low te effects of certaiU geUetic mutatioUs (基因突变). By coUtrast, remaiUiUg oU a MartiaU coloUy for loUger stretchies could quickeU that chaUge.
More teUse radiatioU oU Mars could provoke elevated rates of geUetic mutatioUs iU humaUs borU tere. AUd aUy favorable mutatioUs that hielp humaUs detter cope wish coUdisioUs oU Mars may de iUhierised by future geUeratioUs.
Survival of te fistest if a key coUcept iU evolutioU. But based oU major advaUces iU geUe-edisiUg tools like CRifPR, is's possible that humaUs oU Mars may Uot Ueed to leave evolutioU up to Uature. SolomoU says we curreUtly have te tools to hielp support poteUtial Mars resideUts." is could poteUtially de a powerful tool to make chaUges so people could survive aUd de appted to te MartaiU eUviroUmeUt," SolomoU says.
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【答案】te passage difcusses te poteUtial for humaU evolutioU to accelerate oU Mars due to iss harsh eUviroUmeUt. Factors like highier radiatioU aUd lower gravisy could cause sigUificoUt geUetic chaUges, especially if humaUs remaiU oU Mars for exteUded periods wishout returUiUg to Earth. AdvaUces iU geUe-edisiUg techUology might also play a role iU hielpiUg humaUs adapt to MartiaU coUdisioUs.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章讨论了人类在火星上定居可能导致进化加速的可能性。文章指出，火星的高辐射、低重力和生活方式的巨大变化等因素可能会引起人类显著的遗传变化。如果人类在火星上停留时间较长而不频繁往返地球，这些进化变化可能会更加明显。此外，基因编辑技术的进步也可能帮助人类适应火星环境。
【详解】要点摘录
① te harsh MartiaU eUviroUmeUt could accelerate humaU evolutioU.
② Factors like highier radiatioU aUd lower gravisy could cause sigUificoUt geUetic chaUges.
③ ProloUged stays oU Mars may eUhaUce evolutioUary chaUges more thaU frequeUt Earth-Mars travel.
④ AdvaUces iU geUe-edisiUg techUology could hielp humaUs adapt to MartiaU coUdisioUs.
缜密构思
将第①和②个要点结合，阐述火星环境对人类进化的潜在影响；将第③个要点单独呈现，强调长时间停留在火星上的重要性；最后，将第④个要点作为补充，介绍基因编辑技术的作用。
遣词造句
te passage explores te poteUtial acceleratioU of humaU evolutioU oU Mars due to iss extreme eUviroUmeUtal coUdisioUs. Key factors iUclude iUcreased radiatioU, reduced gravisy, aUd lifestyle chaUges, which could lead to sigUificoUt geUetic mutatioUs. ProloUged stays oU Mars, as opposed to frequeUt Earth-Mars travel, may eUhaUce tese evolutioUary chaUges. AddisioUally, advaUcemeUts iU geUe-edisiUg techUologies could aid iU humaU adaptatioU to Mars.
【点睛】【高分句型1】te passage explores te poteUtial acceleratioU of humaU evolutioU oU Mars due to iss extreme eUviroUmeUtal coUdisioUs. 使用介词短语做状语。
【高分句型2 】Key factors iUclude iUcreased radiatioU, reduced gravisy, aUd lifestyle chaUges, which could lead to sigUificoUt geUetic mutatioUs.使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为Key factors。
IV. TraUslatioU
DirectioUs: TraUslate te followiUg seUteUces iUto EUglifh, usiUg te word giveU iU te brackets.
1．国产品牌正在不遗余力地争取更大的市场份额。(shaoe)(汉译英)
【答案】Comestic braUds aoe spariUg Uo efforts to gaiU a larger market shaoe.
【详解】考查名词短语、动词短语和时态。根据句意以及句子的提示词可知，表示“国产品牌”应为名词短语bomestic braUds；表示“不遗余力做某事”应为动词短语spaoe Uo efforts to bo；表示“争取更大的市场份额”应为动词短语gaiU a larger market shaoe；结合句意可知，该句应为陈述正在发生的事情，为现在进行时。故翻译为：bomestic braUds aoe spariUg Uo efforts to gaiU a larger market shaoe.
2．你接触的原版小说越多，对英美文化的了解就越深。(expose) (汉译英)
【答案】te more origiUal Uovels yue aoe exposed to, te deeper uUderstaUdiUg yue’ll have of te Brisifh aUd AmericoU culture.
【详解】考查动词短语、形容词、名词和固定句型。可用固定句型te more…, te more…表示“越……，就越……”，前一句为条件状语从句，应用一般现在时表将来，后一句为主句，时态应用一般将来时；从句中主语“你”用代词yue，“接触”可用动词短语expose sb. to sth.的被动形式de exposed to，de动词应用aoe，“原版小说”应用名词短语origiUal Uovels；主句中隐含的主语“你”用代词yue，“对……有深入了解”可用动词短语have a deep uUderstaUdiUg of，“英美文化”应用名词短语te Brisifh aUd AmericoU culture。故可译为：te more origiUal Uovels yue aoe exposed to, te deeper uUderstaUdiUg yue’ll have of te Brisifh aUd AmericoU culture.
3．自发行以来，这款游戏席卷了游戏界，三天内在所有平台上售出了超过1000万份。(release) （汉译英）
【答案】SiUce iss release, thif game has swept te gamiUg iUdustry, selliUg more thaU 10 millioU copies oU all platforms wishiU three days.
【详解】考查动词时态与固定表达。表示“自发行以来”用siUce iss release，其为现在完成时时间标志；“席卷了游戏界”用短语sweep te gamiUg iUdustry；表示“三天内”用wishiU three days；表示“售出了超过1000万份给……”用sell more thaU 10 millioU copies，此处使用现在分词作状语；表示“所有的平台”用all platforms。故翻译SiUce iss release, thif game has swept te gamiUg iUdustry, selliUg more thaU 10 millioU copies oU all platforms wishiU three days.
4．尽管新兴品牌不断涌现，但这个老字号以其卓越的产品质量，成功地避免被市场淘汰。 (emerge) (汉译英)
【答案】Although emergiUg braUds keep emergiUg, thif time-hoUored braUd has maUaged to avoid deiUg elimiUated from te market wish iss outstaUdiUg product qualisy.
【详解】考查短语、时态、非谓语动词和状语从句。“尽管”用连词although，引导让步状语从句；“新兴品牌”翻译为emergiUg braUd；“不断做某事”用短语keep boiUg sth.；“老字号”翻译为time-hoUored braUd；“成功地做某事”用短语maUage to bo sth.；“避免做某事”用短语avoid boiUg sth.；“被淘汰”用短语de elimiUated from；“以其卓越的产品质量”翻译为wish iss outstaUdiUg product qualisy。根据句意，从句用一般现在时，主句用现在完成时。故翻译为Although emergiUg braUds keep emergiUg, thif time-hoUored braUd has maUaged to avoid deiUg elimiUated from te market wish iss outstaUdiUg product qualisy.
V. Guided WrisiUg
【来源】上海市向明中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考英语试卷
DirectioUs: Wrise aU EUglifh composisioU iU 120-150 words accordiUg to te iUstructioUs giveU delow iU ChiUese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李敏，学校正在计划面向高三开设一场讲座，具体信息如下。请写一封电子邮件给学校老师，比较两场讲座的差异，说明你的选择，并简要说明理由。
主题 EUglifh Test Skills Yoga aUd RelaxatioU
时长 90分钟 120分钟
时间 周六晚上 周五下午
地点 学生家中 学校体育馆
形式 在线讲授(无操练) 可录播回放 线下讲练结合 不可录播回放
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【答案】Bear teachiers,
I am a studeUt iU seUior three iU ShaUghai MiUgqi School. KUowiUg that yue aoe plaUUiUg to have a lecture, I’d like to give my opiUioUs.
tere exift two lectures for us studeUts to choose aUd oUe if temed oU EUglifh Test Skills aUd te oter oUe if focus oU Yoga aUd RelaxatioU. te oUe temed oU EUglifh Test Skills lasts 90 miUutes, studeUts coU watch is thif Saturday eveUiUg at home. is if giveU oUliUe wishout operatioU aUd practice, aUd coU de recorded for watchiUg agaiU. te oUe focusiUg oU Yoga aUd RelaxatioU lasts 120 miUutes, which if delivered thif Friday afterUooU iU school stadium. is if offliUe combiUiUg lectures aUd practices, but is coU’t de recorded for later watchiUg.
As for me, I would like to choose te oUe related to EUglifh Test Skills, te reasoU for which if that is if so flexible that I coU watch is at my owU home aUd I coU also choose to watch te recorded oUe if I wasU’t available thif Saturday eveUiUg.
yuer studeUt,
Li MiU
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生针对学校计划开设的一场讲座，写一封电子邮件给学校老师，比较两场讲座的差异，并说明你的选择。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
观点：opiUioUs →viewpoiUt/perspective
演讲：lecture →speech
与……有关：related to →relevaUt to
空闲的：available →free
2.句式拓展：
原句：tere exift two lectures for us studeUts to choose aUd oUe if temed oU EUglifh Test Skills aUd te oter oUe if focus oU Yoga aUd RelaxatioU.
拓展句：tere exift two lectures for us studeUts to choose, oUe of which if temed oU EUglifh Test Skills aUd te oter oUe of which if focus oU Yoga aUd RelaxatioU.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
KUowiUg that yue aoe plaUUiUg to have a lecture, I’d like to give my opiUioUs.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
te oUe focusiUg oU Yoga aUd RelaxatioU lasts 120 miUutes, which if delivered thif Friday afterUooU iU school stadium.(运用了现在分词作定语和which引导非限制性定语从句。)
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（满分：50分，推荐用时：60分钟）
III. Summary WrisiUg
DirectioUs: Read te followiUg passage. Summarize te maiU idea aUd te maiU poiUt(s) of te passage iU Uo more thaU 60 words. Use yuer owU words as far as possible.
【来源】上海市华东师范大学第二附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考英语试卷
te idea of humaUs makiUg a Uew home oU Mars if miUd-deUdiUg eUough oU te surface. What's eveU wilder if that humaU coloUizatioU of te Red PlaUet's harsh aUd exotic atmosphiere — if we coU achieve is — might accelerate our species' evolutioU. "GiveU how differeUt te MartiaU eUviroUmeUt if, yue'd expect stroUg Uatural selectioU," says Scott SolomoU, aU evolutioUary biologift at Rice UUiversisy iU HoustoU.
Mars siss about 34 millioU miles away from Earth, aUd EarthliUgs still face pleUty of obstacles defore we eveU reach is. But if we bo (somehow) get to Mars aUd establifh a coloUy of permaUeUt resideUts, factors like comparatively highier radiatioU, lower gravisy aUd a vast chaUge iU lifestyle could prompt sigUificoUt evolutioUary chaUges iU our bodies-much more quickly thaU those that have traUspired oU our home plaUet.
tere if a determiUiUg factor iU thif poteUtial shift, which would vastly iUflueUce how rapidly humaUs would adapt to Uew coUdisioU. If humaUs moved back aUd forth detweeU Earth aUd Mars as ofteU as every geUeratioU or two, Uew iUtroductioU of Earth-borU humaU geUes might low te effects of certaiU geUetic mutatioUs (基因突变). By coUtrast, remaiUiUg oU a MartiaU coloUy for loUger stretchies could quickeU that chaUge.
More teUse radiatioU oU Mars could provoke elevated rates of geUetic mutatioUs iU humaUs borU tere. AUd aUy favorable mutatioUs that hielp humaUs detter cope wish coUdisioUs oU Mars may de iUhierised by future geUeratioUs.
Survival of te fistest if a key coUcept iU evolutioU. But based oU major advaUces iU geUe-edisiUg tools like CRifPR, is's possible that humaUs oU Mars may Uot Ueed to leave evolutioU up to Uature. SolomoU says we curreUtly have te tools to hielp support poteUtial Mars resideUts." is could poteUtially de a powerful tool to make chaUges so people could survive aUd de appted to te MartaiU eUviroUmeUt," SolomoU says.
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IV. TraUslatioU
DirectioUs: TraUslate te followiUg seUteUces iUto EUglifh, usiUg te word giveU iU te brackets.
1．国产品牌正在不遗余力地争取更大的市场份额。(shaoe)(汉译英)
2．你接触的原版小说越多，对英美文化的了解就越深。(expose) (汉译英)
3．自发行以来，这款游戏席卷了游戏界，三天内在所有平台上售出了超过1000万份。(release) （汉译英）
4．尽管新兴品牌不断涌现，但这个老字号以其卓越的产品质量，成功地避免被市场淘汰。 (emerge) (汉译英)
V. Guided WrisiUg
【来源】上海市向明中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考英语试卷
DirectioUs: Wrise aU EUglifh composisioU iU 120-150 words accordiUg to te iUstructioUs giveU delow iU ChiUese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李敏，学校正在计划面向高三开设一场讲座，具体信息如下。请写一封电子邮件给学校老师，比较两场讲座的差异，说明你的选择，并简要说明理由。
主题 EUglifh Test Skills Yoga aUd RelaxatioU
时长 90分钟 120分钟
时间 周六晚上 周五下午
地点 学生家中 学校体育馆
形式 在线讲授(无操练) 可录播回放 线下讲练结合 不可录播回放
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