备战2025中考英语高分作文以个人经历成长故事为核心打造高分叙事作文高分框架结构万能模板（学生版+教师版）

备战2025中考英语高分作文以个人经历成长故事为核心打造高分叙事作文高分框架结构万能模板学生版
1.1写作模板:三段式结构
核心公式：
Introduction（引入）→ Details（展开）→ Reflection（感悟）
段落详解与步骤指导：
开头段 :
功能定位:点明主题，引发兴趣
具体操作步骤:1. 时间/场景描写 2. 核心事件引入
万能句型示例: The moment I heard..., my heart raced. Looking back, the memory of... still shines in my heart.
主体段:
功能定位:细节描写，情感递进
具体操作步骤:按时间顺序展开 2.加入动作/语言/心理描写
万能句型示例: Just as I was..., suddenly... "Don’t give up!" my teacher’s voice echoed in my mind.
结尾段
功能定位:升华感悟，呼应主题
具体操作步骤:1.总结收获 2. 关联现实意义 |
万能句型示例 : This experience taught me that... From then on, I’ve learned to...
思维导图模板：
事件引入 → 细节描写（5W1H） → 情感变化 → 哲理升华
│ │ │ │
↓ ↓ ↓ ↓
When/Where What happened How I felt What I learned
(环境渲染) (动作链描写) (心理活动) (价值观体现)
1.2 常用素材包:成长类词汇库
多维素材分类：
| 类别 | 基础表达 | 高级升级版 | 适用场景示例
|--------------|--------------------------|-----------------------------------|----------------------------------|
| 情感描写 | nervous | butterflies in my stomach | 考试/比赛前
| 动作描写 | run fast | dash like a shooting star | 体育比赛/紧急情况
| 环境渲染 | It was raining. | Raindrops danced on the window. | 回忆性开头/情绪烘托
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主题词思维树：
成长类核心词 → Challenge（挑战）
├─ Overcome fear（克服恐惧）
├─ Learn from failure（从失败中学习）
└─ Gain confidence（获得自信）
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万能衔接金句：
Just when I thought all hope was lost...
A warm hand gently patted my shoulder...
Time seemed to freeze at that moment...
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1.3 分类押题范文:实战演练
范文①：A Special Birthday Gift
【结构拆解】
▌开头段（场景式引入）：
"The smell of freshly baked cookies always reminds me of my 13th birthday. It was 2 AM, but soft noises kept coming from the kitchen..."
▌主体段（多感官描写）：
视觉：My parents’ shadows dancing on the wall
听觉：The gentle clinking of bowls
触觉：Flour-covered hands hugging me
▌结尾段（双升华技巧）：
"Now I finally understand: the best gifts aren’t wrapped in paper, but in silent love. (个人感悟) Maybe this is how family love works – it’s always there, quietly waiting to be discovered. (社会价值)"
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范文②： My First Stage Performance
【亮点标注】
比喻修辞：
"My legs felt like jelly as I stepped onto the stage."
"The spotlight lit up the audience’s smiles like summer fireflies."
情感曲线设计：
Fear（紧张手抖）→ Surprise（观众掌声）→ Confidence（挺直腰杆）
金句模板：
"Though my voice shook at first, the warmth in their eyes became my strength."
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范文③： When I Failed the Exam
【错误→成长模型】
事件：数学考砸（58分） → 反应：躲房间哭泣 → 转折：老师留言鼓励 → 行动：制定学习计划 → 结果：期末进步
【哲理表达】
"The red marks were not an ending, but a compass pointing to new beginnings."
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常见误区警示
| 错误类型 | 问题案例 | 修正方案 |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|---------------------------------------|
| 时态混乱 | I am scared that day. | 全篇统一为一般过去时 |
| 主次不分 | 用5句话描写穿什么衣服去考试 | 聚焦核心动作/心理变化 |
| 中式英语 | "My heart very painful." | "My heart ached like being squeezed."|
| 结尾说教 | "We must study hard." | "I realized true progress starts from accepting imperfections." |
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即时训练任务
题目1： 《The Day I Grew Up》
写作导航：
1. 用天气描写暗示心情（例：The heavy clouds mirrored my anxiety...）
2. 包含一个反转情节（例：原以为会批评，却得到拥抱）
3. 使用文末"双升华法"（个人+社会）
题目2： 《A Meaningful Mistake》
分步指导：
Step 1: 列举3个可能场景（做饭失败/迷路/说错话）
Step 2: 选择1个场景，用"5W1H"法扩展细节
Step 3: 用比喻句改写平淡表达（原句：I was sad → My heart felt like broken glass）
学习工具包
自评打分表：
| 评分维度 | 达标要求 | 自评分数（1-5★） |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|------------------|
| 结构清晰度 | 三段式完整，过渡自然 | □□□□□ |
| 细节丰富度 | 包含2种以上感官描写 | □□□□□ |
| 语言准确性 | 无时态/单复数错误 | □□□□□ |
知识卡片：
高分秘诀：
"让故事呼吸"法则 → 每写3句叙述，加入1句心理/环境描写
（例：I opened the door. → I slowly turned the doorknob, its cold metal biting into my palm, wondering what awaited me inside...）
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【24H复习计划】
晨间6:30：朗读范文①，重点模仿场景描写
午间12:00：记忆5个情感动词（tremble, sigh, grin...）
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1．（24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期末）俗话说“生活处处有惊喜”。为了让同学们留意身边的美好，你校英文报以此为主题面向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求，以“My unexpected surprise”为题，用英语写一篇关于自己经历的短文进行投稿。
提示：
1. 你的意外惊喜来自你的父母；
2. 你的父母是如何让你感到惊喜的；
3. 你的感慨。
要求：
1. 短文中应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 不少于70词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect.
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2．（24-25九年级上·山东青岛·期末）改变是成长的必经之路。学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My biggest change”为主题的征稿活动，请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你学习或生活中的重大改变。
My biggest change
☆What’s the change
☆How did it happen
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实人名或校名；
2．可适当增加细节使行文流畅；
3．词数80～100。
My biggest change
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3．（24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末）亲爱同学们，时光荏苒，九年级上学期的学习生活已悄然落幕，在这个充满挑战与机遇的学期里，你一定经历了许多，也收获了满满的成长；中考的战鼓愈发急促，需要你做好充分准备迎接挑战。假设你是杨林，请根据下面的写作要点写一篇日记，肯定一学期积极努力的自己，也祝愿自己下学期与更多的美好相遇。
写作要点：
1. 本学期的经历和收获：遇到的困难；解决的过程；要感谢的人。
2. 下学期的期许和计划：下学期的目标，预定的计划。
写作要求：
1. 表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，结构完整；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
Dear Diary,
Time flies! The first term of Grade 9 has nearly come to an end. Looking back, I’m really proud of what I’ve achieved.
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4．（2024·浙江宁波·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请阅读笔友 Peter的邮件，并给他回一封邮件，回答 Peter 提出的问题。
TO: Li Hua SUBJECT: Great changes Dear Li Hua, My family will move to a new city because my parents have found new jobs there. I think it will be a great change for me. I’m looking forward to my new life there, but I’m also a little nervous. What big changes have you experienced in your life How did you deal with them Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Peter
注意：
（1）邮件内容要求完整，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（24-25九年级上·湖南长沙·期末）假设你是李华，九年级上学期的学习生活即将结束。你想和你的美国笔友Jack分享你在学校的生活，请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
Used to be Now
Changes free on study, can learn what I am really interested in; many kinds of activities, such as playing basketball… work hard/ exercise every day don’t have too much spare time get high scores…
Feelings relaxed/ happy/ colorful/… busy/ sleepy/ meaningful…
Expectations be allowed to relax from time to time/ be supposed to take up an interest/…
※温馨提醒：
（1）注意审题和要点；
（2）80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been a Grade Nine student for one term. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末）初三的学习生活宛如紧张刺激的马拉松比赛，总是充满挑战，在一些艰难时刻，是谁帮助了你？请以My Inspiring Story为标题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，让我们一同分享在困境中汲取力量、砥砺奋进的故事，传递向上的青春正能量。
要求：1. 讲述一个自己的故事；
2. 你的感悟；
3. 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
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7．（2024·江苏常州·三模）生活学习中充满了很多挑战，也是每个人成长过程中必不可少的经历。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活中是怎样应对挑战的，有哪些收获。
提示词语：overcome, practice, error, make progress
提示问题：What kind of challenge did you ever face in your life
How did you face challenges in your life
What have you achieved
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
It is important for us to face challenges in our lives.
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8．（2024·江苏常州·二模）心若芬芳，花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一个偶遇、亦或是一次成功……
某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请您根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历，为什么心生欢喜，并谈谈你的收获。
要点：
1. What happened
2. Why were you happy at that time
3. What have you learned from the experience
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it.
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9．（2024·浙江温州·模拟预测）青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。
注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
How I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2025·陕西咸阳·一模）假如你是李明，寒假期间，你在咸阳市民文化中心 (Xianyang. City Public Cultural Center) 接待了外国游客，请你根据图片写一篇日记，记录你带领他们参观茶博物馆并体验中国茶文化的过程以及你的感受。
参考词汇：
show…around…, tea sets, how to drink tea, pour…into, teapot, learn to make tea in a Chinese way, take photos together
要求：
1、参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4、词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
January 30th, 2025
Dear Dairy,
Today some foreign visitors came to Xianyang City Public Cultural Center. We spent a wonderful day together.
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11．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）同学们在不断成长，学习技能，体验生活的过程中，一定做过许多突破自我的尝试。我校英语杂志正在开展“I try, I succeed”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。
要求：1.写一次尝试的经历并谈感受；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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12．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们实现目标的过程中，努力是必不可少且关键的因素之一。请以“The harder you work, the better you will be.”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1．描述一件与努力有关的事件；
2．谈谈你对努力的理解和感悟。
要求：1．不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学习名称。
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13．（24-25九年级上·湖北恩施·期末）假如你是李明，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“Some Changes in My Life”为题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students, How time flies! You are in Grade 9 now. In the past two years of middle school life, you must have changed a lot. Please write a short passage about your changes. Here are some questions to help you. ◆What did you use to be like ◆How have you changed ◆What will you do for better changes We are looking forward to your passage. School English Club
要求：
1. 短文必须包含上述要求提供的所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
Hello, I’m Li Ming. I have changed a lot in the past two years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们的成长中总会面对各种各样的麻烦，压力与担忧，良好的处理问题方式能够帮助我们解决问题。某英文网站正在开展以“Problem-solving”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述一次你成功解决问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获和感悟。
要求：
1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整。
2.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
3.不少于80词。
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15．（2024·江苏徐州·三模）你校微信公众号英语栏目组正在组织题为“Learning by doing”的征文活动，请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你参加实践探究活动的原因；
2.你参与实践探究活动的一次经历；
3.你的收获及感受。
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3.短文中不得泄露个人信息。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：practice activity 实践活动
Learning by doing
Learning by doing is a simple idea: we are able to learn more about something when we experience it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________备战2025中考英语高分作文以个人经历成长故事为核心打造高分叙事作文高分框架结构万能模板教师版
1.1写作模板:三段式结构
核心公式：
Introduction（引入）→ Details（展开）→ Reflection（感悟）
段落详解与步骤指导：
开头段 :
功能定位:点明主题，引发兴趣
具体操作步骤:1. 时间/场景描写 2. 核心事件引入
万能句型示例: The moment I heard..., my heart raced. Looking back, the memory of... still shines in my heart.
主体段:
功能定位:细节描写，情感递进
具体操作步骤:按时间顺序展开 2.加入动作/语言/心理描写
万能句型示例: Just as I was..., suddenly... "Don’t give up!" my teacher’s voice echoed in my mind.
结尾段
功能定位:升华感悟，呼应主题
具体操作步骤:1.总结收获 2. 关联现实意义 |
万能句型示例 : This experience taught me that... From then on, I’ve learned to...
思维导图模板：
事件引入 → 细节描写（5W1H） → 情感变化 → 哲理升华
│ │ │ │
↓ ↓ ↓ ↓
When/Where What happened How I felt What I learned
(环境渲染) (动作链描写) (心理活动) (价值观体现)
1.2 常用素材包:成长类词汇库
多维素材分类：
| 类别 | 基础表达 | 高级升级版 | 适用场景示例
|--------------|--------------------------|-----------------------------------|----------------------------------|
| 情感描写 | nervous | butterflies in my stomach | 考试/比赛前
| 动作描写 | run fast | dash like a shooting star | 体育比赛/紧急情况
| 环境渲染 | It was raining. | Raindrops danced on the window. | 回忆性开头/情绪烘托
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主题词思维树：
成长类核心词 → Challenge（挑战）
├─ Overcome fear（克服恐惧）
├─ Learn from failure（从失败中学习）
└─ Gain confidence（获得自信）
```
万能衔接金句：
Just when I thought all hope was lost...
A warm hand gently patted my shoulder...
Time seemed to freeze at that moment...
```
1.3 分类押题范文:实战演练
范文①：A Special Birthday Gift
【结构拆解】
▌开头段（场景式引入）：
"The smell of freshly baked cookies always reminds me of my 13th birthday. It was 2 AM, but soft noises kept coming from the kitchen..."
▌主体段（多感官描写）：
视觉：My parents’ shadows dancing on the wall
听觉：The gentle clinking of bowls
触觉：Flour-covered hands hugging me
▌结尾段（双升华技巧）：
"Now I finally understand: the best gifts aren’t wrapped in paper, but in silent love. (个人感悟) Maybe this is how family love works – it’s always there, quietly waiting to be discovered. (社会价值)"
```
范文②： My First Stage Performance
【亮点标注】
比喻修辞：
"My legs felt like jelly as I stepped onto the stage."
"The spotlight lit up the audience’s smiles like summer fireflies."
情感曲线设计：
Fear（紧张手抖）→ Surprise（观众掌声）→ Confidence（挺直腰杆）
金句模板：
"Though my voice shook at first, the warmth in their eyes became my strength."
```
范文③： When I Failed the Exam
【错误→成长模型】
事件：数学考砸（58分） → 反应：躲房间哭泣 → 转折：老师留言鼓励 → 行动：制定学习计划 → 结果：期末进步
【哲理表达】
"The red marks were not an ending, but a compass pointing to new beginnings."
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常见误区警示
| 错误类型 | 问题案例 | 修正方案 |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|---------------------------------------|
| 时态混乱 | I am scared that day. | 全篇统一为一般过去时 |
| 主次不分 | 用5句话描写穿什么衣服去考试 | 聚焦核心动作/心理变化 |
| 中式英语 | "My heart very painful." | "My heart ached like being squeezed."|
| 结尾说教 | "We must study hard." | "I realized true progress starts from accepting imperfections." |
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即时训练任务
题目1： 《The Day I Grew Up》
写作导航：
1. 用天气描写暗示心情（例：The heavy clouds mirrored my anxiety...）
2. 包含一个反转情节（例：原以为会批评，却得到拥抱）
3. 使用文末"双升华法"（个人+社会）
题目2： 《A Meaningful Mistake》
分步指导：
Step 1: 列举3个可能场景（做饭失败/迷路/说错话）
Step 2: 选择1个场景，用"5W1H"法扩展细节
Step 3: 用比喻句改写平淡表达（原句：I was sad → My heart felt like broken glass）
学习工具包
自评打分表：
| 评分维度 | 达标要求 | 自评分数（1-5★） |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|------------------|
| 结构清晰度 | 三段式完整，过渡自然 | □□□□□ |
| 细节丰富度 | 包含2种以上感官描写 | □□□□□ |
| 语言准确性 | 无时态/单复数错误 | □□□□□ |
知识卡片：
高分秘诀：
"让故事呼吸"法则 → 每写3句叙述，加入1句心理/环境描写
（例：I opened the door. → I slowly turned the doorknob, its cold metal biting into my palm, wondering what awaited me inside...）
```
【24H复习计划】
晨间6:30：朗读范文①，重点模仿场景描写
午间12:00：记忆5个情感动词（tremble, sigh, grin...）
```
1．（24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期末）俗话说“生活处处有惊喜”。为了让同学们留意身边的美好，你校英文报以此为主题面向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求，以“My unexpected surprise”为题，用英语写一篇关于自己经历的短文进行投稿。
提示：
1. 你的意外惊喜来自你的父母；
2. 你的父母是如何让你感到惊喜的；
3. 你的感慨。
要求：
1. 短文中应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 不少于70词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect.
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【满分优秀范文】
My unexpected surprise
Life is full of surprises, often from those we least expect. Now I will tell you a story about a nice surprise of mine.
That day was my birthday. When school was over, I quickly walked home. But to my surprise, my parents weren’t at home. I felt very sad. I thought they forgot my birthday. Suddenly, the door was opened. My parents held a big cake and said “ Happy Birthday!”. I was so surprised that I couldn’t say a word. Then we enjoyed the cake together.
After this, I learn that parents love their children all the time.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，生活处处充满惊喜；
第二步，具体阐述作者的父母如何让作者感到惊喜；
第三步，书写结语，表达作者感受。
[亮点词汇]
①to my surprise令我惊讶的是
②so...that...如此……以至于……
③all the time一直
[高分句型]
①When school was over, I quickly walked home. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②After this, I learn that parents love their children all the time. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．（24-25九年级上·山东青岛·期末）改变是成长的必经之路。学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My biggest change”为主题的征稿活动，请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你学习或生活中的重大改变。
My biggest change
☆What’s the change
☆How did it happen
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实人名或校名；
2．可适当增加细节使行文流畅；
3．词数80～100。
My biggest change
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【满分优秀范文】
My biggest change
The biggest change in my life was when I moved to a new city and started attending a different school. I used to be very shy and introverted, but the move forced me to step out of my comfort zone. At first, I was scared and felt lonely in the new environment. However, joining various school clubs and making new friends helped me open up and become more confident. My teachers and classmates were supportive, which made the transition smoother. Now, I am more outgoing and ready to face new challenges.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述生活中的重大改变；
第二步，具体介绍在这种改变中的心路历程；
第三步，介绍这个改变给作者带来的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①step out of踏出
②comfort zone舒适区
③be ready to准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①The biggest change in my life was when I moved to a new city and started attending a different school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②My teachers and classmates were supportive, which made the transition smoother. (which引导的定语从句)
3．（24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末）亲爱同学们，时光荏苒，九年级上学期的学习生活已悄然落幕，在这个充满挑战与机遇的学期里，你一定经历了许多，也收获了满满的成长；中考的战鼓愈发急促，需要你做好充分准备迎接挑战。假设你是杨林，请根据下面的写作要点写一篇日记，肯定一学期积极努力的自己，也祝愿自己下学期与更多的美好相遇。
写作要点：
1. 本学期的经历和收获：遇到的困难；解决的过程；要感谢的人。
2. 下学期的期许和计划：下学期的目标，预定的计划。
写作要求：
1. 表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，结构完整；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
Dear Diary,
Time flies! The first term of Grade 9 has nearly come to an end. Looking back, I’m really proud of what I’ve achieved.
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【满分优秀范文】
Dear Diary,
Time flies! The first term of Grade 9 has nearly come to an end. Looking back, I’m really proud of what I’ve achieved.
This term, I had difficulties in physics and chemistry. But I didn’t give up. I bravely asked teachers for advice and discussed with classmates. Thanks to their help, I found effective learning methods and made great progress. I am always grateful to your teachers and classmates for their patience.
For the next term, I have got a plan. I am ready to study even harder, preview lessons regularly, and read more books to gain better grades for the senior high school entrance examination. Also, I will do more exercise to keep myself more energetic and healthier. I will try my best to balance my hobbies and schoolwork better.
I believe that I will have another wonderful term and successfully enter my dream high school.
【知识点】个人经历、计划、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态是现在完成时、一般现在时、一般过去时以及一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“本学期的经历和收获”和“下学期的期许和计划”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of以……而自豪
②give up放弃
③ask sb. for sth向某人寻求某物
[高分句型]
I believe that I will have another wonderful term and successfully enter my dream high school. (that引导的宾语从句)
4．（2024·浙江宁波·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请阅读笔友 Peter的邮件，并给他回一封邮件，回答 Peter 提出的问题。
TO: Li Hua SUBJECT: Great changes Dear Li Hua, My family will move to a new city because my parents have found new jobs there. I think it will be a great change for me. I’m looking forward to my new life there, but I’m also a little nervous. What big changes have you experienced in your life How did you deal with them Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Peter
注意：
（1）邮件内容要求完整，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Peter.
Life is full of changes. Don’t be afraid of them, as some can help you grow up. Here is one of my experiences.
I used to live with my family. My parents looked after me well and I didn’t need to care about anything except study. Later, I was sent to a boarding school. Living at school required me to do everything by myself. I felt very nervous at first, but I tried my best to learn new things. My teachers and roommates offered me lots of help, and gradually my abilities improved greatly.
I’m sure you’ll benefit from your new life, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件，回答笔友Peter关于生活变化的问题。
② 时态：文章使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”结合，描述过去的经历和对变化的看法。
③ 提示：根据Peter的邮件，简要描述自己曾经历的变化，表达如何应对并适应这些变化，同时鼓励Peter面对即将到来的新生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要回复Peter并表示自己理解他面临的变化；
第二步，讲述自己曾经历的重大变化，特别是转变过程中的挑战和应对方式；
第三步，鼓励Peter相信自己会适应新环境，并表达对他未来的支持。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid of 害怕
② grow up 成长
③ look after 照顾
④ at first 首先
⑤ try one’s best 尽最大努力
[高分句型]
① Don’t be afraid of them, as some can help you grow up. (原因状语从句)
② My parents looked after me well and I didn’t need to care about anything except study. (并列句)
③ I’m sure you’ll benefit from your new life, too. (宾语从句)
5．（24-25九年级上·湖南长沙·期末）假设你是李华，九年级上学期的学习生活即将结束。你想和你的美国笔友Jack分享你在学校的生活，请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
Used to be Now
Changes free on study, can learn what I am really interested in; many kinds of activities, such as playing basketball… work hard/ exercise every day don’t have too much spare time get high scores…
Feelings relaxed/ happy/ colorful/… busy/ sleepy/ meaningful…
Expectations be allowed to relax from time to time/ be supposed to take up an interest/…
※温馨提醒：
（1）注意审题和要点；
（2）80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been a Grade Nine student for one term. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been a Grade Nine student for one term. I used to be free on study and had too much spare time. But now I work hard and exercise every day. I used to be able to learn what I was really interested in. Now I have many kinds of activities, such as playing basketball.
These changes make me feel busy but meaningful. I hope to be allowed to relax from time to time and take up an interest.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封写给Jack的信。
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时。
③提示：向Jack讲述自己成为九年级学生后的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头感叹时光飞逝，表明自己已成为九年级学生一学期。
第二步，中间对比过去和现在在学习、兴趣活动方面的不同。
第三步，结尾表示这些变化让自己忙碌但有意义，同时希望能有时间放松和发展兴趣。
[亮点词汇]
①spare空闲的
②meaningful有意义的
③take up开始从事；占据
[高分句型]
①I have been a Grade Nine student for one term.（使用现在完成时，表明成为九年级学生的状态持续了一学期。）
②These changes make me feel busy but meaningful.（此句使用“make+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构，生动地表达出变化给自己带来的感受。）
6．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末）初三的学习生活宛如紧张刺激的马拉松比赛，总是充满挑战，在一些艰难时刻，是谁帮助了你？请以My Inspiring Story为标题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，让我们一同分享在困境中汲取力量、砥砺奋进的故事，传递向上的青春正能量。
要求：1. 讲述一个自己的故事；
2. 你的感悟；
3. 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
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【满分优秀范文】
My Inspiring Story
The journey of studying in the third year of junior high is like a thrilling marathon. In some tough moments, it was my English teacher who helped me. She not only taught me English but also taught me how to face adversity. I will never forget the time when I was struggling with my English grades. She encouraged me to keep practicing and never give up. With her help, I finally improved my English and gained confidence. I learned that perseverance is the key to success. No matter how difficult the situation is, we should never give up and always move on. This experience has inspired me to face challenges in life with a positive attitude.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在一些艰难时刻，帮助自己的人是谁；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②struggle with…与……斗争
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
④give up放弃
⑤move on继续前进
⑥inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①In some tough moments, it was my English teacher who helped me. (强调句)
②I will never forget the time when I was struggling with my English grades. (when引导定语从句)
③No matter how difficult the situation is, we should never give up and always move on. (no matter how引导让步状语从句)
7．（2024·江苏常州·三模）生活学习中充满了很多挑战，也是每个人成长过程中必不可少的经历。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活中是怎样应对挑战的，有哪些收获。
提示词语：overcome, practice, error, make progress
提示问题：What kind of challenge did you ever face in your life
How did you face challenges in your life
What have you achieved
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
It is important for us to face challenges in our lives.
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【满分优秀范文】
It is important for us to face challenges in our lives. I once faced a big challenge in learning English. I had great difficulty in remembering new words and understanding grammar.
To overcome these problems, I made a plan. I decided to practice English every day. I read English articles aloud in the morning and wrote diaries in English in the evening. When I made mistakes, I wrote them down and analyzed them carefully.
With continuous efforts, I have made great progress. Now, I can remember words more easily and use grammar correctly. I also become more confident in speaking English. Facing challenges makes me stronger and better. It helps me grow both in study and in life.
【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在生活中曾面临的挑战是什么；
第二步，介绍面对挑战自己是如何做的；
第三步，谈谈自己的收获并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in doing sth. 做某事有困难
②make a plan 做计划
③decide to do sth. 决定做某事
④make mistakes 犯错误
[高分句型]
①When I made mistakes, I wrote them down and analyzed them carefully. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Facing challenges makes me stronger and better. (动名词作主语)
8．（2024·江苏常州·二模）心若芬芳，花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一个偶遇、亦或是一次成功……
某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请您根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历，为什么心生欢喜，并谈谈你的收获。
要点：
1. What happened
2. Why were you happy at that time
3. What have you learned from the experience
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it.
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【满分优秀范文】
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. Most people can’t realize this point because they seem to be busy striving to achieve happiness. As for me, I will never forget what happened in class that day, which changed me completely and helped me find my happiness.
It was a September afternoon, we were told by our teacher that some students in our class failed in the exam. As a shy girl, I was always afraid of failing in the exam. However, on that day, I decided to pluck up my courage to face the terrible result. When the teacher told me my grades were not higher than others, I was very upset. But my teacher then added, “Your handwriting is the most beautiful in the class and I feel very proud of you. I believe it must take you lots of time to practice your writing.” All my classmates cheered for me and what my teacher said made me very happy. From then on, I have made up my mind to study better, answer more questions in class and work harder on tests.
I will always remember this experience, because it gives me confidence, courage and support from my classmates and teachers.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述幸福无处不在，引出我的经历。
第二步，讲述心生欢喜的具体事情和原因。
第三步，我的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①seem to似乎，好像
②decide to do决定做某事
③make up one’s mind下定决心
[高分句型]
①Most people can’t realize this point because they seem to be busy striving to achieve happiness.(原因状语从句)
②As for me, I will never forget what happened in class that day, which changed me completely and helped me find my happiness.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．（2024·浙江温州·模拟预测）青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。
注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
How I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】：
How I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally.
I used to be thin and short. But now I’m tall and strong. I’m a brave and outgoing student. However, I was a little bit shy before. My hobby has changed, too. I used to play computer games on weekends. But now I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has improved a lot. I used to be afraid of speaking English. Later I tried to listen more and speak more. Now I even dare to make speeches in public in English. The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed.
What great changes! I hope I can become better and better.
【知识点】个人经历、爱好、外貌与性格
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“在过去的几年里，我的身体和精神都发生了很大的变化”引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化以及启发；
第三步，总结全文，表明“我希望我能变得越来越好”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（2025·陕西咸阳·一模）假如你是李明，寒假期间，你在咸阳市民文化中心 (Xianyang. City Public Cultural Center) 接待了外国游客，请你根据图片写一篇日记，记录你带领他们参观茶博物馆并体验中国茶文化的过程以及你的感受。
参考词汇：
show…around…, tea sets, how to drink tea, pour…into, teapot, learn to make tea in a Chinese way, take photos together
要求：
1、参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4、词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
January 30th, 2025
Dear Dairy,
Today some foreign visitors came to Xianyang City Public Cultural Center. We spent a wonderful day together.
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【满分优秀范文】

January 30th, 2025
Dear Dairy,
Today some foreign visitors came to Xianyang City Public Cultural Center. We spent a wonderful day together.
I was excited to show them around the tea museum, where we explored the rich history and significance of Chinese tea culture. As we entered the museum, I introduced them to various tea sets and explained how to properly drink tea. We learned to pour the tea into a teapot and appreciate its aroma before tasting it. The visitors were fascinated by the process and eager to learn how to make tea in a traditional Chinese way. We also took photos together, capturing the joyful moments of our cultural exchange.
This experience not only allowed me to share my culture but also deepened my appreciation for the beauty of tea.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据参考提示语完成写作，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接日记开头；
第二步，根据图片及参考提示语写出带领外国游客参观茶博物馆并体验中国茶文化的过程。
第三步，描述活动感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited to do sth对做某事感到兴奋
②properly正确地；适当地
③appreciate欣赏
④be eager to do sth渴望做某事
⑤deepened加深
[高分句型]
①I was excited to show them around the tea museum, where we explored the rich history and significance of Chinese tea culture. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
②The visitors were fascinated by the process and eager to learn how to make tea in a traditional Chinese way. (被动语态)
11．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）同学们在不断成长，学习技能，体验生活的过程中，一定做过许多突破自我的尝试。我校英语杂志正在开展“I try, I succeed”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。
要求：1.写一次尝试的经历并谈感受；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【满分优秀范文】
I try, I succeed
As a student of the new era, we should have dreams, skills, and responsibilities. During the process of improving our skills, we often try many new things and break through ourselves.
Last year, I decided to run for the position of class monitor, which I had never done before. Despite feeling nervous, I prepared my speech and presented my ideas to my classmates confidently. Surprisingly, I won the election.
This experience taught me the importance of stepping out of my comfort zone and trying new things. By trying, I discovered my potential and gained more confidence.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍一次尝试的经历；
第三步，分享感受。
[亮点词汇]
①break through突破
②decided to do决定做
③comfort zone舒适区
[高分句型]
①Last year, I decided to run for the position of class monitor, which I had never done before.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②This experience taught me the importance of stepping out of my comfort zone and trying new things.(并列结构)
12．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们实现目标的过程中，努力是必不可少且关键的因素之一。请以“The harder you work, the better you will be.”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1．描述一件与努力有关的事件；
2．谈谈你对努力的理解和感悟。
要求：1．不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学习名称。
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【满分优秀范文】
The harder you work, the better you will be
In the process of our achieving our goals, hard work is one of the essential and crucial factors.
One summer, I was determined to improve my running speed for an upcoming school sports event. Every morning, I would wake up early and practice running in the park. Despite the exhaustion and muscle pain, I never gave up. On the day of the competition, my hard work paid off—I won the first place.
This experience taught me that effort is the foundation of success. The harder you work, the more progress you will make. Challenges may be tough, but perseverance and dedication will always lead to improvement.
【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
时态：一般过去时，一般现在时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏 “信息提示” 中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，明确努力的重要性；
第二步，描述实例，展示努力的过程；
第三步，书写结语，抒发感悟，强调努力的价值和意义。
[亮点词汇]
one of ... 其中之一
[高分句型]
This experience taught me that effort is the foundation of success. （that引导的宾语从句）
13．（24-25九年级上·湖北恩施·期末）假如你是李明，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“Some Changes in My Life”为题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
NoticeDear students, How time flies! You are in Grade 9 now. In the past two years of middle school life, you must have changed a lot. Please write a short passage about your changes. Here are some questions to help you. ◆What did you use to be like ◆How have you changed ◆What will you do for better changes We are looking forward to your passage. School English Club
要求：
1. 短文必须包含上述要求提供的所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
Hello, I’m Li Ming. I have changed a lot in the past two years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Some Changes in My Life
Hello, I’m Li Ming. I have changed a lot in the past two years.
In the past, I used to be very shy and quiet. I didn’t like to talk to others and always kept to myself. However, now I am much more outgoing and confident. I enjoy talking to people and making new friends. I also used to struggle with my studies, but now I am doing much better in school. I have learned to manage my time effectively.
To continue improving, I plan to join more clubs and activities at school. This will help me develop new skills and make even more friends. I also want to focus on my health by exercising regularly and eating healthier food.
Overall, these changes have made me a happier and more successful person. I look forward to seeing how I will continue to grow in the future.
【知识点】个人经历、计划
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍自己有什么改变；
第三步，介绍为了变得更好会怎么做；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be曾经是
②struggle with在……方面有困难
③focus on专注于
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①To continue improving, I plan to join more clubs and activities at school. (不定式作目的状语)
②I look forward to seeing how I will continue to grow in the future. (宾语从句)
14．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们的成长中总会面对各种各样的麻烦，压力与担忧，良好的处理问题方式能够帮助我们解决问题。某英文网站正在开展以“Problem-solving”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述一次你成功解决问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获和感悟。
要求：
1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整。
2.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
3.不少于80词。
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【满分优秀范文】
Problem-solving
In our growth, we always face all kinds of troubles, pressures and worries. Here I’d like to share an experience of solving a problem successfully.
Last term, I had a big problem with my math. I failed several tests and felt really stressed. But I didn’t give up. I decided to change the situation. I spent more time doing math exercises and asked my teacher and classmates for help. I also reviewed the knowledge I had learned before.
Finally, my efforts paid off. I made great progress in math and passed the final exam. Through this experience, I learned that when facing problems, we should be brave and take positive actions. As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any difficulties.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。
②时态：以一般过去时为主。
③主题：讲述作者成功解决数学学习问题的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇指出在成长中会面临各种问题，引出分享成功解决问题的经历。
第二步，详细叙述数学学习遇到的问题及解决措施，如花费更多时间做练习、向老师同学求助、复习旧知识。
第三步，结尾总结通过这次经历的收获，即面对问题要勇敢并采取积极行动，只要坚持就能克服困难。
[亮点词汇]
①stress压力；使紧张
②pay off取得成功；得到回报
③positive积极的；正面的
[高分句型]
Through this experience, I learned that when facing problems, we should be brave and take positive actions.（that引导宾语从句）
15．（2024·江苏徐州·三模）你校微信公众号英语栏目组正在组织题为“Learning by doing”的征文活动，请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你参加实践探究活动的原因；
2.你参与实践探究活动的一次经历；
3.你的收获及感受。
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3.短文中不得泄露个人信息。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：practice activity 实践活动
Learning by doing
Learning by doing is a simple idea: we are able to learn more about something when we experience it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Learning by doing
Learning by doing is a simple idea: we are able to learn more about something when we experience it.
I joined a practice activity last month because I wanted to learn more about science in a fun way. During the activity, we were asked to build a small bridge with sticks and glue. At first, I thought it would be easy. However, I soon found that it was not as simple as I thought. I had to think carefully about how to make the bridge strong and stable. I tried different ways and finally succeeded. I was so happy when I saw my bridge standing strong.
Through this experience, I learned a lot about teamwork and problem-solving. I also realized that learning by doing is much more interesting than just reading books.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍参与实践探究活动的一次经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你参加实践探究活动的原因；
第二步，介绍你参与实践探究活动的一次经历；
第三步，介绍你的收获及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be asked to do sth.被要求做某事
②at first首先
③as...as和……一样
[高分句型]
①I joined a practice activity last month because I wanted to learn more about science in a fun way. (原因状语从句)
②However, I soon found that it was not as simple as I thought. (宾语从句)
③I was so happy when I saw my bridge standing strong. (时间状语从句）