(共23张PPT)
Unit 5
What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a - Self Check公开课
一、语言能力
能够围绕“重大事件”的话题，通过听、说、读等活动搜集、理解所需
要的语言基础信息；能够正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时记录过去的
一件事；能够熟悉记叙文的结构特点，用英语写记叙文记录一件最重要
的事，明白记叙文的基本要素，即事件，时间，地点，事件的经过和结果。
二、学习能力
能够通过多种渠道学习和复习，保持英语学习兴趣；认识了以读促写的
写作模式并尝试进行写作。
三、思维品质
能够在老师的帮助下，通过学习，多层次、多角度、多元化地内化有关“过去的重大事件”的语言知识；在写作中，注意到语篇的整体性、结构性、
逻辑性。
四、文化意识
能够懂得生活中重要的经历都可以促进我们学习，帮助我们明白很多道理。
What were you and your friends doing when these important event happened
She was doing her homework
They were playing basketball
They were preparing for the Spring Festival
We were watching TV.
The girl was listening to music.
What were you and your friends doing when these important event happened
Do you remember what happened in the past
Why do you remember it well 为什么你记得它？
Let's make some notes and write about it later.
an important exam
一场重要的考试
a piano competition
钢琴比赛
a school trip
学校旅行
an earthquake
一场地震
a big fire
一场大火
Work in pairs. One student asks WH-questions and the other one guesses what the event was.
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important
events
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
Why was it important
How did you feel
How can you write a passage about a past event Think of the elements that can be included in the passage.
what was
the event
when and where it happened
what were you and your friends/family doing
why you remember it
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Why do you remember this event
Event
Reasons
It started on February 4, 2022.
Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics.
At Bird Nest(鸟巢) in Beijing.
I was having dinner with my family.
My friends were doing homework.
It was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games
We enjoed a wonderful show .
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were others doing
Why was it important
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Why do you remember this event
Event
Reasons
On May 22, 2021.
Yuan Longping passed away.
In Changsha
I was reading books.
My parents were cooking lunch.
Yuan Longping spend all his life doing research on rice.
He is such a great hero that he will be remembered by the world forever.
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
3b
Para.1
Introduction
First,write about the event（ when and where it happended）.
An important thing that I remember well was ___________. It happened in/ on_____ at/in _____.
Para.2
Details
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
Next,write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Para.3
Reasons
Then, write about
why this event was important.
This event is very important to me because_______./ I remember this event well because____________.
Writing
instructions
A
审题
（三审）
B
内容
大纲
C
重点
句式
D
梳理
成文
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
3b
A
审题
（三审）
体裁
人称
时态
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
过去进行时
Try to find out the structure of this passage.找出这篇文章的结构
An important event that I remember well was that a group of foreign students visited our school. It happened on March 20th, 2019.
When this event happened, I was reading an article in the classroom. My friends were playing basketball in the playground.
This event is very important to me because this was the first time that I had communicated with foreigners. I was so excited that day.
事件
时间
地点
记得事件的原因
描述当时正在做的事情
时间
地点
事件
第一段：引入
第二段：
(事件的详细过程)
描述当时某事正在进行 was/were doing
第三段：
原因
写作结构
I remember well /I will never forget was ______.It happened in/ on_____at\in_____.
事件
时间
地点
When this event happened, I was______________ My friends were____________________.
或I was doing ________________while my friends were doing __________.
我在做的事
朋友在做的事
This event is very important to me because ____.
或I remember this event well because___
I learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _____________.
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
How to make the passage better
佳句集锦
历史是说过和做过事情的记忆。
过去的事就让它过去吧。
充实今天的生活，昨日已成历史，明天还是未知数。
◆ History is the memory of things said and done.
◆ Let bygones be bygones.
◆ Enrich your life today; yesterday is history; tomorrow is the unknown.
Let’s practice.
文
体裁
时
时态
第 人称
人称
.
话题
①审
记叙
过去进行/一般过去
一
难忘的经历
在你成长的过程中，有些事情会让你记忆犹新，经久难忘。请以 “An Unforgettable Experience” 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1.这件难忘的事情的经过。
2.它令你难忘的原因。
Let’s proofread
One possible version.
People often remember what they were doing when they heard the news of important news in history. An important event that I remember well was that the great man Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on May22,2021.
When I heard the news, I was reading books while my parents were making lunch. We were completely shocked and thought it was unbelievable. Later, we saw the report on the Internet. All of us felt very sad and finished the rest of lunch in silence. On hearing the news, hundreds of people came to the hospital in Changsha to see him off and shouted out words such as “Grandpa Yuan, have a good journey.”
As we all know, Yuan Longping spent all his life doing research on rice. He is such a great hero that he will be remembered by the world forever. As a teenager, I will pass on his spirit and try my best to build our country into a more prosperous one.
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了吗？
□你的每一段都有主旨吗？
□你包含介绍的基本信息了吗？
□ 你有拼写错误吗？
□ 你有语法错误吗？
□ 你使用连词and了吗？
Self check 1
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. ______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the stange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn't believe me.
3. _______my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
Self check 2
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I _____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I _________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher ______ (come) three times a week to ______ (help) me. Then the big day finally ________(arrive). I _____ (be) so nervous when they ______ (call) my name. I ______ (go) up and _______ (start) to play.
arrived
joined
was
came
help
practiced
was
called
went
started
Self check 2
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
While I ___________ (play), everyone _____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn't believe it. I _____ (win)! It _____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
won
heard
was beating
waited
was
Summary
in the library, on the street, at the bus stop, in the kitchen, outside his home, in the area, by the side of the road
A: What were you doing at eight last night
B: I was taking a shower.
A: What was Jenny doing while Linda was sleeping
B: While Linda was sleeping, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework.
Structures
Where
busy, serious, still, again, very, also, finally, suddenly, luckily, heavily, together, apart, in a mess, in bad shape
rainstorm, car accident, helping a dog by roadside, Martin Luther King's death, the World Trade Center
Past events & stories
How
What
When
at eight last night, at the time of the rainstorm, so far this year, when I woke up, while I was running home
Thank you for listening
