英语写作课(怎样提建议）

课件25张PPT。English writingDo you have any trouble in your life or study?Warming-upMy trouble is that/to...I have to ...
V.ing... is my trouble.
too much homework every dayI have...My trouble is that...
... is my trouble.
I don't know...How to keep healthy?argued with my parents yesterdayI...V.ing is my trouble.My trouble is that...my troubleMy trouble is that ...I don't have ...I can't ...I have to ...OthersI did ... V.ing... is my trouble.I am not good at math.Doing so much homeworkargued with my parents.get up at 6:00 am.get on well with my classmates.a mobile phone.写简单句时，要避免句子单一化哦!
卢勤Lu Qin is a person who is
kind, helpful and famous.
Lu Qin is a hostess.
She is a good mother.Lu Qin is a hostess, she is_____ a good mother.Lu Qin is a hostess, she is a good mother, ______.alsotooA big earthquake happened.
Lu Qin went to Sichuan. as soon as/afterLu Qin went to Sichuan as soon as a big earthquake happened.Lu Qin went to Sichuan after a big
earthquake happened.Lu Qin is good at educating children.
She is good at educating grown-ups, too.not only...but also...Lu Qin is good at educating not only children but also grown-ups.提供建议的不同方法：(Maybe)You should/shouldn't...
(Maybe)You could/can...
You have to...
You'd better...
Why not...?/Why don't you...?
What/How about...?
Let's..., shall we?
Is it a good idea to...?
I often feel tired.You could have a good rest.
You'd better not work so hard.
Why not listen to some light music?
You should relax yourself.I don't know how to keep healthy.Maybe you should eat different colors of fruits and vegetables.
You have to do exercise at least once a day.
You'd better join a sports club.
Why don't you read a book about keeping healthy?
Is it a good idea to run every morning?I miss my old classmates.You shouldn't miss them very much.
Maybe you could call them or write to them.
You have to regard us as your friends.
How about visiting them on the internet?
Let's have a look at some old photos together, shall we?
Dear kids,
Are you middle school students? I'm your elder sister. I love you so much. I know you have a lot of problems. You can't get on well with your classmates. You study hard, you can't get good grades. Sometimes, you argue with your parents.
Here is some advice for you. Why not try to be more friendly and helpful than others? Your classmates will like people. People are friendly and helpful. Next, you have to study harder and learn from others, you can't do well in the subjects. As for arguing with your parents, you should think it over doing that. And make sure not to be angry with them.
I believe you. You will solve these problems soon.

Your friend,
Bosom sister需要连词吗?Dear kids,
Are you middle school students? I'm your elder sister. I love you so much. I know you have a lot of problems. ________________, you can't get on well with your classmates. You study hard, you can't get good grades. Sometimes, you argue with your parents.
Here is some advice for you. __________, why not try to be more friendly and helpful than others? Your classmates will like people. People are friendly and helpful. Next, you have to study harder and learn from others, _________you can't do well in the subjects. As for arguing with your parents, you should think it over _______doing that. And make sure not to be angry with them.
I believe you. You will solve these problems soon.

Your friend,
Bosom sisterFirstorbeforeFor exampleDear kids,
Are you middle school students? I'm your elder sister. I love you so much. I know you have a lot of problems. For example, you can't get on well with your classmates. You study hard, you can't get good grades. Sometimes, you argue with your parents.
Here is some advice for you. First, why not try to be more friendly and helpful than others? Your classmates will like people. People are friendly and helpful. Next, you have to study harder and learn from others, or you can't do well in the subjects. As for arguing with your parents, you should think it over before doing that. And make sure not to be angry with them.
I believe you. You will solve these problems soon.


Your friend,
Bosom sisterYour classmates will like people who are friendly and helpful. I believe that you will solve these problems soon. Although you study hard, you can't getgood grades. 两个简单句合并成一个复合句怎么样？Dear kids,
Are you middle school students? I'm your elder sister. I love you so much. I know you have a lot of problems. For example, you can't get on well with your classmates. Although you study hard, you can't get good grades. Sometimes, you argue with your parents.
Here is some advice for you. First, why not try to be more friendly and helpful than others? Your classmates will like people who are friendly and helpful. Next, you have to study harder and learn from others, or you can't do well in the subjects. As for arguing with your parents, you should think it over before doing that. And make sure not to be angry with them.
I believe that you will solve these problems soon.

Your friend,
Bosom sister For example,get on well withargue with why not try to be do well inAs for make sure not to be 帮忙找找其他优美词句吧! "知心姐姐"卢勤快乐人生三名句: *Facing to the life, say smilely,"So wonderful."
*Facing to the trouble, say bravely,"I can do it."
*Getting on with others, say actively,"Do you have any difficulties? Let me help you."
读了"知心姐姐"卢勤快乐人生三名句后,你有什么新的认识呢? 赶快告诉我们. I think they are____________.
From now on, I will be more_________ and__________ well with my classmates. I won't _________ computer games so often and_________________.
Tips(小提示):
great, wonderful, educational...
helpful, friendly, kind...
play, hear, get on,
waste time, study hard... Army,一名来自四川地震灾区的学生,最近在学习生活中存在一些困惑,请你当一回像"知心姐姐"卢勤一样的有心人,写一封信帮助她.字数90左右. 具体内容包括:
1. Army最近学习生活中的三个困惑:
isn't good at study, especially English; don't know how to keep healthy; miss his old classmates and friends;
2. 你给Army每个困惑提出的合理的建议;
3. 你对Army及灾区同龄朋友的安慰和鼓励.
WritingDear Army,
You have some problems, don't you?_______________
_________________________________________________
_______________________________.（主要用一般现在时）
Here is some good advice. ___________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
_________________.(用不同句式提供建议)
Make sure to be confident! I hope_____________________ __________________. (可考虑用一般将来时)

Yours,
Close friend
卷面整洁不一定加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分!请适当用两三个文采句添色Sample（范文）
Dear Army,
You have some problems, don't you? It's possible that you sometimes miss your old classmates and friends around you. And you don't know how to keep healthy. For study, your English isn't good, is it? Please don't worry. I'm trying to help you.
Here is some good advice. Firstly, please don't miss your classmates and friends so much. You can regard us as your best classmates and friends. Although we live far from you, our hearts are together. Secondly, taking care of yourself is very important. You'd better eat different colors of fruits and vegetables and take exercise every day. As for English, why not try to use it as often as possible?
Make sure to be confident! I hope you'll feel better soon.

Your friend,
Bosom Sister
Writing skills (写作技巧)：
总体把握，要点齐全；
人称时态，逻辑清楚；
关键词汇，动词第一；
组词成句，结构完整；
组句成文，连词增色；
此路不通，绕道迂回；
字迹工整，留好印象；
从句适量，高分有望。 Summary