Unit4No Rules,No Order 第5课时 Section B 2a-2b(Writing)课件（2024鲁教版六年级下）

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Unit 4 No Rules, No Order
第五课时（写作课）
Section B 2a-2c
Lead-in
Watch a video
This boy is unhappy these days. He also wrote a letter to Dr Know to ask for help.
Free talk
1. Who is he
Eric
2. Why is he unhappy
Because he must follow too many rules at home and at school.
He needs help.
Read the letter in 2a quickly and answer the questions.
Read
Dear Dr Know
Can you help me I___________follow too many rules at home and at school.
I____________ clean my room every day, and I____________ let my desk get untidy.At school, I______________wear my own clothes. I____________wear my favourite cap, either. After school, I______________watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog,and do lots of other things!I can't even relax at weekends, because I_______________practise the violin every day! I never have fun. What_______________I do
Yours,
Eric
2a Complete the letter to Dr Know using can, have to /must, or
can’t/mustn’t.
have to/must
have to/must
can’t/mustn’t
can’t/mustn’t
can’t/mustn’t
can
have to/must
can
Read and number the rules for Eric in 2a.
Dear Dr Know,
Can you help me I have to follow too many rules at home and at school. I must clean my room every day, and I can’t let my desk get untidy. At school, I mustn’t wear my own clothes. I can’t wear my favourite cap either. After school, I can watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things! I can’t even relax at weekends, because I have to practise the violin every day! I never have fun. What can I do
Yours,
Eric
home rules
school rules






Choose three important rules and discuss the questions with your partner.
Eric’s Rules
must clean the room every day
can’t let the desk get untidy
mustn’t wear his own clothes
can’t wear his favourite cap
only can watch TV after finishing lots of things
have to practise the violin every day






2.Give your advice for each rule.
1.Tell why he should follow these rules.
rules
reasons
advice
You have to clean your room every day.
Because clean and tidy room can make you happy.
But you can have good living habits by cleaning
the room .
You can’t wear your own clothes.
Because wearing the uniform can build school spirit.
But you can wear your clothes on weekends.
Let’s discuss and share.
You have to practise the violin every day
Because it is cool to play the violin in front of classmates.
But you can talk with your parents and sometimes play sports with friends on weekends.
Let’s learn from letter 2 on page 14.
How can we write a reply to help him if we were Dr Know
Read and find out the structue and supporting details.
Dear Alice,
Yes, there are many rules in life! But they can help you to become a better person.
You mustn’t be late for class. That shows respect for your class and teacher. You can’t use your phone in class because you need to focus on learning. You have to wear a uniform because it builds school spirit.
You can also think about the things you can do! You can use your phone at home. You can relax after you finish your homework. And you can hang out with friends at weekends!
I know it’s hard, but rules can help to make the world better. Remember: No rules, no order!
Best,
Dr Know
salutation
signature
2、supporting details：
rules are important
3、give advice：
things can do
4、conclusion
1、show understanding+opinion
structure
Salutation (打招呼)
Body (正文)
Signature (落款)
Dear Alice,
Yes, there are many rules in life! But they can help you to become a better person.
You mustn’t be late for class. That shows respect for your class and teacher. You can’t use your phone in class because you need to focus on learning. You have to wear a uniform because it builds school spirit.
You can also think about the things you can do! You can use your phone at home. You can relax after you finish your homework. And you can hang out with friends at weekends!
I know it’s hard, but rules can help to make the world better. Remember: No rules, no order!
Best,
Dr Know
Let’s read and find out the supporting details.
2、supporting details：
rules are important
3、give advice
1、show understanding
+opinion
4、conclusion
A.We can use “I know ..., but ...” to show our understanding and opinions.
B.We can use “because”“that shows” to show why rules are important.
C.We can use “can” to give advice.
D.We can do the things in suitable place and time
Salutation (打招呼)
Body (正文) I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us. They can help you to become a better person.
You have to/ must__do sth___.Because__表原因的句子_
You can’t/ mustn’t __do sth___.Because__表原因的句子
There are a lot of things you can do. You can__do sth__You can__do sth_You can__do sth_...
I know it’s hard, but rules are very important .They can help to make us better persons and the world better.
Good luck!/ Best
Signature (落款)
Let’s learn how to write the reply.
2、supporting details：
rules are important
3、give advice
1、show understanding
+opinion
4、conclusion
Sample reply to Eric as Dr Know.
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us. They can help you to become a better person.
You must clean your room . Because clean and tidy room can make you happy.But you can have good living habits by cleaning the room.At school, You can’t wear your own clothes.,you have to wear a uniform .Because wearing the uniform can build school spirit. You can see some things in another way. Walking the dog is fun. It's a good way to relax.And it is cool to play the violin in front of classmates.
There are a lot of things you can do! You can wear your own clothes at weekends. You can watch TV after you finish your homework.
I know it’s hard, but rules are very important .They can help to make us better persons and the world better.
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules.But rules can be good for us.
Here are my reasons. First,You have to clean your room every day because it's
our duty to share housework.Second,You can't wear your own clothes because it is good to build school spirit to wear the uniform.Third,You can't relax at weekends because you want to be a musician.Don't give up!
You can also think about things you can do! You can do housework with your
parents.It is a happy moment. You can also wear your own clothes at weekends.If you are tired at weekends,you can talk with your parents and tell them your
feelings.Hanging out with friends is also a good way to relax.
I know it's hard,but rules can help to make the world better.Don't push yourself too hard and try to relax!
Best, one sample:
Dr Know
Good sentences
开头句 Hi there! I need your help.嗨!我需要您的帮助。
I have a problem. Can you help me 我有一
个问题。您能帮帮我吗
I feel unhappy and I need your advice.我感到不
开心，需要您的建议。
Good sentences
中间句 My parents make too many rules.我的父母制订了太
多的规矩。
I must finish my homework fist after school. It’s
so boring.放学后我必须先完成作业。这很无聊。
I can’t eat snacks. They think I should eat more
vegetables and fruit.我不能吃零食。他们认为
我应该多吃蔬菜和水果。
Good sentences
结尾句 These rules make me unhappy. I don’t know what to
do.这些规矩让我很不开心。我不知道该怎么办。
I hope you can give me some good ideas.我希望您能
给我一些好主意。
I’m looking forward to your reply.我期待您的回复。
Checklist Very well OK Needs work
Complete structure 结构完整 Have clear beginning,body and ending parts.
Rich content 内 容 充 实 Importance(重要性)
Reasons ( 原 因 )
Advice (建议)
Accurate language 语 言 准 确 Use imperative sentence and modal verbs: can,have to,must □ □ □
Handwriting ( 条 理 清 晰 ) 1.Use first,second,third,what's more,last and SO on. 2.Write topic sentences. □ □ □
Assessment
Remember what to do,
Understand them always. Learn well,act right,
Everyday'sa new fight.
your home and school rules and what you think about
them.
Write a passage to introduce
1.Polish your writing.
2.Preview Project.
Homework
Choose to do
Must do