模板08 建议信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
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题型 真题示例 关键词
建议信 【2023 新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议
考点关键词： 建议
考点揭秘 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信可能写给某个人，就某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。也可以写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 建议信通常简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 建议信的时态通常以一般现在时或一般将来时为主。
第一段 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。
第二段 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。
第三段 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
1.I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Beijing，I think it is a good choice to visit the Great Wall.
很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。
I have learned that you have some trouble in... and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
4. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。
5. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
7. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
8. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
9. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world.
这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。
In the first place, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you...
我认为如果……，将会受益。
Doing...is a good/great/better choice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
It is also a good idea/also helps to do..., which can...
做……也不错，这能……
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.
如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。
2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。
3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear classmates,
Have you realized Mother's Day is ________________________________________即将到来 And what ideas have you_________________________________________ to celebrate it
In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be overwhelmingly aware of__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before.
My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023 新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
建议信一般使用第一、二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。学生们在落笔前需要确定好每一段的中心内容，列出提纲，从而避免跑题。
Para1：收到来信，得知……（问题）；安慰；写作目的（提建议）；
Para2：具体的建议与理由；
Para3：希望采纳并祝福，期待情况改善。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答题思路】
1、首先，我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动，邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋，让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。
2、其次，关于活动内容，可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览，邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容，让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。
3、此外，还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动，带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场，让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱，增强环保意识。
Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
【2025届广东省广州市高三上学期12月调研测试】假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI 技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的看法；
2. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：表明身份，对外教使用 AI 辅助作文批改这一想法表示关注，说明写信目的。
看法：可从积极和消极两方面阐述。积极如批改速度快、指出语法错误精准；消极如可能忽略文章情感表达、写作风格等。
建议：建议 AI 与人工批改结合，利用 AI 先进行基础语法、拼写检查，再由老师针对文章深度和创意点评；或建议优化 AI 算法，使其能更好理解文章内涵。
结尾：表达对这一举措的期待，感谢外教关注学生需求，期待回复。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I think using AI technology to assist in correcting English compositions is a brilliant idea. It can significantly save your time and offer prompt feedback to us students. This enables us to get a clear understanding of our mistakes and make improvements in a timely manner.
However, I also have a couple of suggestions. Firstly, while AI can provide objective evaluations, I still hope you can give some manual comments from time to time. Secondly, it would be extremely helpful if you could explain how the AI works and its limitations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【2025届青海大通朔山中学高三上学期一轮复习第三次阶段检测英语试题（2） 】假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校正准备对课程进行改革以适应AI时代。请你给校长写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明当前课程存在的问题；
2. 提出你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
【新疆乌鲁木齐市第二中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，你校英文报决定减少刊登音乐方面的内容，你认为这种做法存在问题。请你给该报主编写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 反馈问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【2025届陕西省高考适应性检测（一）英语试题（含听力）】假设你是李华。近期，你的美国朋友Chris给你发邮件阐述了他自己在网络交友过程中遇到的困惑，请你给他写一封邮件，并提出建议。
内容包括：1. 安全上网；
2. 谨慎交友；
3. 甄别网络信息。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 在正确位置作答；
3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
【Z20名校联盟 （浙江省名校新高考研究联盟） 2025届高三第二次联考 英语试题】假设你是李华，你校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行，一个在火车站，另一个在市文化博物馆。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，写信向你寻求建议。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；
2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
【江苏省南菁高中、常州一中、南京二十九中等五校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假定你是李华，外教 Mr. Smith计划拍摄一部校园微电影，现就电影主题征集同学们的建议。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你认为最好的主题；
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 6
【山东省日照市校际联合考试2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，你校外教Susan将组织英语短剧比赛活动，请给她写一封邮件报名参加。内容包括：
（1）表达参加意愿；
（2）对活动提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Susan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
【黑龙江省哈尔滨市师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试】假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Tom给你写信说他所在的学校即将开设中国传统艺术选修课，课程内容包括书法、中国画及篆刻等，并就学习内容的选择向你征求意见。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议选择的学习内容;
2. 做出该选择的具体理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 8
【 三省一区名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期毕业班第一次质量检测】假定你是李华，你班英语夏令营时，有人建议取消英语辩论比赛。请给随队外教Smith写封邮件表达你的想法，内容包括：
1．反对取消；
2．你的建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
Passage 9
【福建省泉州市安溪一中，惠安一中，养正中学，实验中学2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，你校广播站就将增加15分钟的英语节目（Special English）征求大家的意见。请你给负责的外教Jonathan写一个邮件，内容包括：
1. 对该举措的看法；
2. 对内容的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jonathan,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)模板08 建议信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
建议信 【2023 新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议
考点关键词： 建议
考点揭秘 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信可能写给某个人，就某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。也可以写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 建议信通常简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 建议信的时态通常以一般现在时或一般将来时为主。
第一段 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。
第二段 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。
第三段 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
1.I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Beijing，I think it is a good choice to visit the Great Wall.
很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。
I have learned that you have some trouble in... and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
4. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。
5. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
7. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
8. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
9. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1. The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world.
这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。
In the first place, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you...
我认为如果……，将会受益。
Doing...is a good/great/better choice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
It is also a good idea/also helps to do..., which can...
做……也不错，这能……
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.
如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。
2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。
3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear classmates,
Have you realized Mother's Day is ________________________________________即将到来 And what ideas have you_________________________________________ to celebrate it
In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be overwhelmingly aware of__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before.
My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023 新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
建议信一般使用第一、二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。学生们在落笔前需要确定好每一段的中心内容，列出提纲，从而避免跑题。
Para1：收到来信，得知……（问题）；安慰；写作目的（提建议）；
Para2：具体的建议与理由；
Para3：希望采纳并祝福，期待情况改善。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答题思路】
1、首先，我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动，邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋，让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。
2、其次，关于活动内容，可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览，邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容，让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。
3、此外，还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动，带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场，让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱，增强环保意识。
Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
【2025届广东省广州市高三上学期12月调研测试】假定你是李华，外教Ryan打算使用AI 技术辅助英语作文批改，并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的看法；
2. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：表明身份，对外教使用 AI 辅助作文批改这一想法表示关注，说明写信目的。
看法：可从积极和消极两方面阐述。积极如批改速度快、指出语法错误精准；消极如可能忽略文章情感表达、写作风格等。
建议：建议 AI 与人工批改结合，利用 AI 先进行基础语法、拼写检查，再由老师针对文章深度和创意点评；或建议优化 AI 算法，使其能更好理解文章内涵。
结尾：表达对这一举措的期待，感谢外教关注学生需求，期待回复。
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I think using AI technology to assist in correcting English compositions is a brilliant idea. It can significantly save your time and offer prompt feedback to us students. This enables us to get a clear understanding of our mistakes and make improvements in a timely manner.
However, I also have a couple of suggestions. Firstly, while AI can provide objective evaluations, I still hope you can give some manual comments from time to time. Secondly, it would be extremely helpful if you could explain how the AI works and its limitations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【2025届青海大通朔山中学高三上学期一轮复习第三次阶段检测英语试题（2） 】假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校正准备对课程进行改革以适应AI时代。请你给校长写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明当前课程存在的问题；
2. 提出你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Principal,
I’ve been reflecting on our school’s current curriculum and feel that there are areas we might reconsider in the AI era.
Our current curriculum heavily emphasizes traditional knowledge, which might not equip students for the AI-driven future. I suggest we integrate more AI-related subjects and activities into our curriculum. Encouraging hands-on projects, critical thinking and problem-solving in an AI context could be invaluable. This would not only provide students with the technical skills, but also the ethical and societal understanding to use AI responsibly.
Thank you for considering my thoughts.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，就学校对课程进行改革以适应AI时代的计划提出个人建议，应首先说明当前课程存在的问题，然后依据问题提出改革方面的具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
仔细思考：reflect on→meditate on, ponder over
强调：emphasize→stress, highlight
宝贵的：invaluable→precious
使用：use→employ, exploit
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Encouraging hands-on projects, critical thinking and problem-solving in an AI context could be invaluable. This would not only provide students with the technical skills, but also the ethical and societal understanding to use AI responsibly.
拓展句：Encouraging hands-on projects, critical thinking and problem-solving in an AI context could be invaluable, which would not only provide students with the technical skills, but also the ethical and societal understanding to use AI responsibly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve been reflecting on our school’s current curriculum and feel that there are areas we might reconsider in the AI era. (运用了that引导宾语从句、关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略)
[高分句型2] Our current curriculum heavily emphasizes traditional knowledge, which might not equip students for the AI-driven future. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I suggest we integrate more AI-related subjects and activities into our curriculum. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略、虚拟语气)
Passage 2
【新疆乌鲁木齐市第二中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，你校英文报决定减少刊登音乐方面的内容，你认为这种做法存在问题。请你给该报主编写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 反馈问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor-in-chief,
I’m writing to say I’m not happy about cutting music content in our school’s English newspaper. Music is fun and connects us all.
I think we should keep some music stories, like about different kinds of music or student bands. It would make the paper more interesting and show our school’s talent. Plus, it’s a great way for students to express themselves and share their passions. Many students love music and look forward to these articles.
Hope you’ll think again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校英文报决定减少刊登音乐方面的内容给出自己的观点，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不高兴：not happy → unhappy/dissatisfied
减少：cut → reduce/lessen
展示：show → exhibit/demonstrate
热情：passion → enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many students love music and look forward to these articles.
拓展句：Many students, who love music, eagerly anticipate these articles.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to say I’m not happy about cutting music content in our school’s English newspaper. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think we should keep some music stories, like about different kinds of music or student bands, which would make the paper more interesting and show our school’s talent. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Plus, it’s a great way for students to express themselves and share their passions, something that many of us cherish. (运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
【2025届陕西省高考适应性检测（一）英语试题（含听力）】假设你是李华。近期，你的美国朋友Chris给你发邮件阐述了他自己在网络交友过程中遇到的困惑，请你给他写一封邮件，并提出建议。
内容包括：1. 安全上网；
2. 谨慎交友；
3. 甄别网络信息。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 在正确位置作答；
3. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Hearing you are facing some difficulties with online friendships, I am writing to offer some personal suggestions.
Firstly, be cautious while surfing the internet and don’t share too much personal information with strangers. You can never be too careful when it comes to your privacy and security. Additionally, building a friendship online is just as valid as those formed in person. Don’t rush into sharing personal details unless you feel confident in their intentions. Lastly, verify the information they provide and don’t hesitate to end conversations if something isn’t right. Remember to prioritize your safety above all else.
Hope the suggestions are helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给美国朋友Chris写一封邮件，为网络交友过程中遇到困惑的他提出建议，需从安全上网、谨慎交友、甄别网络信息三方面具体说明。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
面临：face→encounter
核实：verify→confirm
结束：end→stop, terminate
有帮助的：helpful→useful, constructive
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You can never be too careful when it comes to your privacy and security.
拓展句：You should be careful enough when it comes to your privacy and security.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing you are facing some difficulties with online friendships, I am writing to offer some personal suggestions.(运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句并省略that)
[高分句型2] Don’t rush into sharing personal details unless you feel confident in their intentions.(运用了unless引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型3] Lastly, verify the information they provide and don’t hesitate to end conversations if something isn’t right. (运用了关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略、if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 4
【Z20名校联盟 （浙江省名校新高考研究联盟） 2025届高三第二次联考 英语试题】假设你是李华，你校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行，一个在火车站，另一个在市文化博物馆。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，写信向你寻求建议。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；
2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you want to participate in volunteer activities! I recommend you choose the event at the city cultural museum. This is a great opportunity to learn about our local culture and history while helping others. What’s more, you can communicate with local people there. It’ll be really meaningful. Meanwhile, you’ll meet interesting people and gain valuable insights about our community.
On the other hand, the train station event might be busier and less organized. Enjoy your volunteering experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行，一个在火车站，另一个在市文化博物馆。考生的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，写信向考生寻求建议。请你写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
此外：What’s more→ Besides
参加：participate in→ take part in
获得：gain→ obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s more, you can communicate with local people there. It’ll be really meaningful.
拓展句：What’s more, you can communicate with local people there, which will be really meaningful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you want to participate in volunteer activities!（运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句。）
【高分句型2】This is a great opportunity to learn about our local culture and history while helping others.（运用了动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰opportunity和状语从句的省略。）
Passage 5
【江苏省南菁高中、常州一中、南京二十九中等五校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假定你是李华，外教 Mr. Smith计划拍摄一部校园微电影，现就电影主题征集同学们的建议。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你认为最好的主题；
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
I’m writing to share my opinion on the theme for your campus microfilm.
I strongly believe that “The Power of Campus Role Models” would be an exceptional choice. This theme holds great significance as it emphasizes the profound impact that role models have on students’ lives. Campus role models serve as a source of inspiration, encouraging students to excel academically and develop strong character. By showcasing their stories, we can encourage students to make every effort to contribute to society.
I hope my idea can assist you in determining the theme.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，就他计划拍摄的校园微电影，提出你认为最好的主题，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
极好的：exceptional→excellent/brilliant
强调：emphasize→put/lay/place emphasis on
鼓励：encourage→stimulate/inspire/fuel
帮助：assist→help/give assistance to
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to share my opinion on the theme for your campus microfilm.
拓展句：Extremely thrilled to know that you are asking students for suggestions on film themes, I’m writing to share my opinion on the theme for your campus microfilm.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This theme holds great significance as it emphasizes the profound impact that role models have on students’ lives.(运用了as引导原因状语从句以及that引导定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Campus role models serve as a source of inspiration, encouraging students to excel academically and develop strong character.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
Passage 6
【山东省日照市校际联合考试2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，你校外教Susan将组织英语短剧比赛活动，请给她写一封邮件报名参加。内容包括：
（1）表达参加意愿；
（2）对活动提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Susan,
Learning that you are organizing an English short play competition, I am writing to express my enthusiastic interest in participating in it. I believe it is a wonderful opportunity for students to improve their language skills and showcase their talents.
Regarding the event, I would like to suggest that we could include some props and costumes to make the performance more engaging and interesting. Additionally, it might be helpful to provide a list of recommended plays or themes for participants to choose from.
Thank you so much for organizing such an enriching event. I am looking forward to your response and am excited about the opportunity to participate and learn from this experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Susan写一封邮件报名参加英语短剧比赛活动，并对活动提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
参加：participate in→take part in
机会：opportunity→chance
激动：excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am looking forward to your response and am excited about the opportunity to participate and learn from this experience.
拓展句：Not only am I looking forward to your response, but also I am excited about the opportunity to participate and learn from this experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are organizing an English short play competition, I am writing to express my enthusiastic interest in participating in it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe it is a wonderful opportunity for students to improve their language skills and showcase their talents. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
【黑龙江省哈尔滨市师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试】假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Tom给你写信说他所在的学校即将开设中国传统艺术选修课，课程内容包括书法、中国画及篆刻等，并就学习内容的选择向你征求意见。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议选择的学习内容;
2. 做出该选择的具体理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to hear that your school is offering a course on traditional Chinese arts. It must be an excellent opportunity for you to explore the rich cultural heritage of China.
As for the choice of what to learn, I would recommend Chinese calligraphy. Calligraphy is not only an art form but also a profound expression of Chinese culture and philosophy. It involves the use of brush and ink to create characters that are artistically pleasing and full of meaning. Besides, practicing calligraphy can help you understand the beauty of Chinese language and the discipline required to master it. Moreover, calligraphy is a skill that can be practiced for a lifetime, offering endless opportunities for improvement and personal expression.
I am looking forward to hearing about your experiences in this course and seeing your progress in calligraphy.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写信，针对他所在学校即将开设的中国传统艺术选修课给出学习内容的建议，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
提供：offer→provide
关于：as for→as to
推荐：recommend→suggest
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m thrilled to hear that your school is offering a course on traditional Chinese arts.
拓展句：I feel thrilled because I hear that your school is offering a course on traditional Chinese arts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Calligraphy is not only an art form but also a profound expression of Chinese culture and philosophy.（运用了not only…but also…并列结构）
【高分句型2】Practicing calligraphy can help you understand the beauty of Chinese language and the discipline required to master it.（运用了动名词作主语以及过去分词作后置定语）
Passage 8
【 三省一区名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期毕业班第一次质量检测】假定你是李华，你班英语夏令营时，有人建议取消英语辩论比赛。请给随队外教Smith写封邮件表达你的想法，内容包括：
1．反对取消；
2．你的建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my opposition to canceling the English debate competition in our summer camp. The competition enhances our critical thinking and English proficiency through engaging discussions. Instead of canceling, I suggest incorporating diverse topics and interactive sessions like team collaborations to make it more appealing. These changes can ensure that the activity remains beneficial and enjoyable for everyone. Looking forward to your understanding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在班英语夏令营时，有人建议取消英语辩论比赛。请考生给随队外教Smith写封邮件表达自己的想法
【详解】1.词汇积累
取消：cancel→call off
提高：enhance→promote
建议：suggest→recommend
确保：ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to express my opposition to canceling the English debate competition in our summer camp.
拓展句：I am writing to express my opposition to canceling the English debate competition that will be held in our summer camp.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Instead of canceling, I suggest incorporating diverse topics and interactive sessions like team collaborations to make it more appealing. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] These changes can ensure that the activity remains beneficial and enjoyable for everyone. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 9
【福建省泉州市安溪一中，惠安一中，养正中学，实验中学2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，你校广播站就将增加15分钟的英语节目（Special English）征求大家的意见。请你给负责的外教Jonathan写一个邮件，内容包括：
1. 对该举措的看法；
2. 对内容的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jonathan,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jonathan,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I am thrilled to hear the news of the upcoming addition of Special English. I believe it will not only increase the opportunities for our students to practice English listening, but also enrich our campus cultural atmosphere.
Given the limited time, I think the content should not only be novel but also short. I suggest the program should involve a variety of engaging content, such as interviews with native speakers, cultural exchanges, and popular English songs. This way, it will stimulate students’ enthusiasm for learning English and attract more listeners.
I believe that under your guidance, this program will win popularity with the students. Looking forward to the launch of the program.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jonathan写一封邮件，讲述对校广播站新增的英语节目的看法，并提出内容方面的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的；激动的：thrilled→excited
机会：opportunities→chances
激励/促进：stimulate→motivate/activate
热情：enthusiasm→passion
2.句式拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句：I believe it will not only increase the opportunities for our students to practice English listening, but also enrich our campus cultural atmosphere.
拓展句：I believe not only will it increase the opportunities for our students to practice English listening, but also enrich our campus cultural atmosphere.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe it will not only increase the opportunities for our students to practice English listening, but also enrich our campus cultural atmosphere.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I suggest the program should involve a variety of engaging content, such as interviews with native speakers, cultural exchanges, and popular English songs.（运用了虚拟语气）
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