模板09 感谢信
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题型 真题示例 关键词
感谢信 【2019年浙江6月卷】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 表示感谢； 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 临别祝愿。
考点关键词： 感谢
考点揭秘 感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。 写作时通常以一般过去时为主、一般现在时为辅。开头应当点明写信目的；中间详细描述事情经过；最后再次表示感谢，并表达回报的心情。
第一段 表达感谢之情并说明原因
第二段 详细描述事情的经过并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段 再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
模板01 满分必备词汇
单词 assistance援助； generous慷慨的； warm热情的； sincere真诚的； appreciate感谢； express表达； accept接受； reception接待； kindness友善； timely及时的； selfless无私的； convey传达； hospitality热情好客的； thoughtful体贴周到的；
短语 be grateful to sb for sth因某事而感谢某人； show sb. around领某人参观；
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing the letter to thank you for …
我写这封信是要感谢你......。
2. On behalf of …, I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help.
我想代表……在这封信里，对你无私的帮助表达我诚挚的谢意。
3.with the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks for your kindness when I was.
怀着最深的感激，我写信给您，感谢您在我在……时对我的关心。
4. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to…
非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
5. Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
听说你很快就要回国了，我感到有些伤心。但同时，我想对你在我英语学习上给予的善意帮助表示衷心的感谢。
6.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。
I am obliged to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1.Had it not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
要不是你的帮助的话，我就不会赢得这个奖项了。
I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.
我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。
Without your instruction, I couldn't have won first place in the competition.
没有你的指导，我不可能在比赛中获得第一名。
It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to help me with...
你在......帮助我真的太善良/周到了。
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit…
You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.
你真的给我的整个旅程带来了极大的方便与快乐。
Not only do I miss the time when you…with me, but also I am grateful for the help you gave me.
我不仅怀念你与我……的时光，而且很感激你对我的帮助。
Additionally, without your help, I wouldn't have been a top student in English and would not have won the English speech contest.
此外，没有你的帮助，我不会成为一名英语拔尖的学生也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Again, I would like to express my thanks to you./ Thanks again for your kind help.
再次感谢你的热心帮助。
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助
Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...
如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
My gratitude is beyond description./I appreciate it more than I can say./ I can never thank you enough.
感激之情，无以言表。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear Jason,
It's really hard to say goodbye to you! （语言无法表达我对你的感激之情）___________________________________ in this letter, as you have done so much for me.
毫无疑问，正是你的支持与鼓励才________________________________________ lit me up when I （遇到困难时）________________________________in English learning. Whenever you had time, you would help me practice my oral English. （除此之外）________________, you also （真诚地分享了你的学习经验）_____________________________________ with me. （要不是你的帮助的话）_____________________________________，（我就不会取得这么多的进步的）________________________________________________________________________________.
（再次感谢）___________________________ for your kind and generous help. Wish you a good journey and good luck in everything you do.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【2019年浙江6月卷】）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
表示感谢；
回顾Alex对你的帮助；
临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。首段一般为写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助，最后一段表达祝愿。
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【山东省烟台市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业水平考试】假定你是李华，上个月在英国学习期间借宿在外教Mrs Smith家，你归国后打算给她邮寄一份具有中国特色的礼物。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达感谢；
（2）挑选的礼物；
（3）提醒对方查收。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mrs Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：热情问候，表明写信人身份，直抒胸臆表达对 Mrs Smith 借宿期间照顾的感激之情。
挑选的礼物：介绍挑选的具有中国特色礼物，如中国传统茶具，阐述选择原因，像能体现中国茶文化，帮助她感受中国传统文化魅力。
提醒查收：告知已寄出礼物，提醒留意查收，提及快递单号方便查询，表达期待她收到礼物后的感受。
结尾：再次致谢，送上美好祝福 。
Dear Mrs Smith,
I’ve returned home, safe and sound. Never will I forget the wonderful time I spent in your house. I really appreciate your kind hospitality, which made me feel so comfortable during my stay there.
Filled with gratitude, I’ve been thinking of sending you a favored gift to convey my feeling. Considering you’re a Chinese tea addict, I finally decided on a delicate porcelain tea set, each item beautifully crafted with traditional Chinese patterns. I hope it can bring you more enjoyment while having tea. I’ve chosen a reliable international shipping service, which promised the gift will reach your house in a month. Please check the package in time. Hoping you’ll like it.
Looking forward to seeing you next time!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【2025届安徽省淮北市和淮南市高三上学期第一次质量检测】假定你是李华，你校外教 Ryan 经常帮助你练习口语，请你给 Ryan老师写封电子邮件表示感谢，同时，你亲手制作了一套中国剪纸送他以表谢意。邮件内容包括：
(1) 对 Ryan 老师表示感谢；
(2) 介绍你即将送他的剪纸。
注意：
(1) 词数80左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
First of all, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you. You have been helping me practice my spoken English a great deal, which has improved my English skills significantly.
To show my appreciation, I made a set of Chinese paper-cuttings for you by myself. Chinese paper-cuttings are very famous traditional handicrafts in China. They are full of Chinese cultural elements, with beautiful patterns and vivid shapes. I hope you will like it.
Thank you again for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给帮助自己练习口语的外教Ryan写一封电子邮件表示感谢，同时介绍送给外教的一套中国剪纸。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
表达：express→convey
著名的：famous→well-known
英语口语：spoken English→oral English
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To show my appreciation, I made a set of Chinese paper-cuttings for you by myself. Chinese paper-cuttings are very famous traditional handicrafts in China.
拓展句：To show my appreciation, I made a set of Chinese paper-cuttings for you by myself, which are very famous traditional handicrafts in China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You have been helping me practice my spoken English a great deal, which has improved my English skills significantly.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you will like it.（运用了省略连词that的宾语从句）
Passage 2
【广东省实验中学2024-2025学年高三上学期11月月考】假如你是李华, 刚刚参加完一个夏令营从纽约回来。在纽约期间，你住宿在Smith先生家，得到了他很多的帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达谢意。内容包括：
(1)表示感谢；
(2)回顾Smith先生对你的帮助与照顾；
(3)你打算如何感谢他。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your kind hospitality during my stay in New York.
Your warm welcome and thoughtful care made my experience truly unforgettable. I deeply appreciate all the guidance you provided, especially in helping me navigate the city and introducing me to local culture. Your support was invaluable to me, making my trip both enjoyable and enlightening.
In return for your generosity, I would love to send you some traditional gifts from my hometown. I hope we can keep in touch, and I look forward to welcoming you here someday. Thank you once again for everything.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是篇应用文。要求考生感谢Smith先生在纽约期间的帮助与照顾，并表达回报的意愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
感谢：gratitude→appreciation
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
珍贵的：invaluable→precious
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your support was invaluable to me, making my trip both enjoyable and enlightening.
拓展句：Your support, which was invaluable to me, made my trip both enjoyable and enlightening.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I deeply appreciate all the guidance you provided, especially in helping me navigate the city and introducing me to local culture.（运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词guidance）
【高分句型2】I hope we can keep in touch, and I look forward to welcoming you here someday.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作hope的宾语）
Passage 3
【重庆市沙坪坝区重庆市第八中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，上个月外教Robert在你班“运动与健康”主题班会上进行了分享，请你写封邮件表达感谢，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢;
2. 分享收获;
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Dear Robert,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your wonderful presentation during our “Sports and Fitness” class meeting.
Your insights into the importance of regular exercise and maintaining a healthy lifestyle have been truly inspiring. Many of my classmates, including myself, have started making positive changes in our daily routines, incorporating more physical activities. It’s amazing how a single talk can make such a big difference!
Once again, thank you for your valuable sharing. I wish you all the best and look forward to your future engagements with our class.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Robert就关于“运动与健康”主题班会上进行了分享写一份感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→ thankfulness
精彩的：wonderful→ fantastic
神奇的：amazing→ miraculous
宝贵的：valuable→ precious
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Your insights into the importance of regular exercise and maintaining a healthy lifestyle have been truly inspiring.
同义句：Your thoughts on the significance of regular exercise and keeping a healthy lifestyle have been really motivating.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Many of my classmates, including myself, have started making positive changes in our daily routines, incorporating more physical activities. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】It’s amazing how a single talk can make such a big difference! (运用了It作形式主语)
Passage 4
【山西省忻州市2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考】假定你是李华，假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示谢意；
2. 回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom.
I have just arrived home. Thank you very much for the hospitality I have received during my stay at your home! I’ll remember forever the time we spent together.
I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me. Their flavors are still lingering in my mouth! I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture and history. It is your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience!
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生Tom写一封感谢信，感谢对方的热情款待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
永远：forever→ permanently
尤其：particularly → especially
对……感激的：be grateful for→ show gratitude to
体贴：thoughtfulness→ consideration
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me. Their flavors are still lingering in my mouth!
拓展句：I’m particularly impressed by the local dishes you prepared for me, whose flavors are still lingering in my mouth!
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m also grateful for your showing me around the town, which has given me a deeper insight into the local culture and history.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is your warmth and thoughtfulness that has made my travel such an unforgettable experience!（运用了强调句型结构）
Passage 5
【辽宁省名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联合考试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris是音乐老师，在校园合唱比赛中，你班荣获一等奖，请你写邮件分享喜悦并感谢Chris给你的合唱建议。内容包括：
1. 分享喜悦；
2. 表示感谢；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Hearing that our class won the first prize in the campus chorus competition, I can’t wait to share the exciting news with you and convey my heartfelt gratitude for your professional guidance and assistance.
This achievement brought us immense joy, and I believe it was partly due to your invaluable advice. Your detailed tips on voice control and harmony not only improved our technical skills but also boosted our overall stage presence, making our final presentation deeply impressive.
Participating in the competition was a rewarding experience, deepening our passion for chorus and enhancing our appreciation for the power of teamwork.
Best wishes,
Yours ,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友Chris是音乐老师，在校园合唱比赛中，你班荣获一等奖，要求考生写邮件分享喜悦并感谢Chris给你的合唱建议。
【详解】 词汇积累
激动人心的：exciting→thrilling
感激：gratitude→appreciation
建议：advice→suggestion
提高：inprove→develop
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Participating in the competition was a rewarding experience, deepening our passion for chorus and enhancing our appreciation for the power of teamwork.
拓展句：Participating in the competition, which was a rewarding experience, deepened our passion for chorus and enhanced our appreciation for the power of teamwork.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearing that our class won the first prize in the campus chorus competition, I can’t wait to share the exciting news with you and convey my heartfelt gratitude for your professional guidance and assistance.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]This achievement brought us immense joy, and I believe it was partly due to your invaluable advice.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 6
【江西省部分高中学校2025届高三上学期开学第一次月考英语试卷（含听力】假定你是李华，在教师节来临之际你自制了一份有中国特色的礼物赠送给外教Chris，同时你想写一封信表达对外教的感谢，内容包括：
1．赠礼原因;
2．礼物简介;
3．表达期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you. I present you a handcrafted gift with Chinese characteristics because you have taught me so much and inspired me greatly. The gift is a beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes. It symbolizes the elegance and charm of our culture.
I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Chris一份有中国特色的礼物并写一封信表达对他的感谢。其内容包括：赠礼原因、礼物简介和表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
鼓励：inspire→motivate
代表：symbolize→stand for
快乐：joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
拓展句：As the Teachers’ Day is approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The gift is a beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.(hope后运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
【2024届河南省TOP二十名校高三下学期4月冲刺（一）】假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 难忘的一件事；
3. 你的祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Miss Gao,
I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day.
I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.
Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health.
Your student,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件事，并表达祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：gratitude→thankfulness
立刻：immediately→right away
买：buy→purchase
照顾：take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine.
拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 8
【2024届河北省承德市部分示范性高中二模】假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.目前状况及感谢；
2.介绍健身计划。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Oliver,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Oliver,
This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence. I feel warm to have friends like you.
Spring has arrived. A year’s plan lies in spring. I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said. Firstly, participate in more outdoor activities and breathe fresh air. Secondly, handle the relationship between learning and health correctly, and emphasize the role of physical health in learning. In the future, I will continue to communicate with you about this situation. I also wish you better health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺乏：lacked→ was short of
增强，提升：strengthened → enhanced
参加：participate in→ take part in
强调：emphasize→ stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor.
拓展句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, which led to my physical condition poor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。）
【高分句型2】I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。）
Passage 9
【2023届湖南省部分名校联盟高三5月冲刺压轴大联考英语试题（含听力）】假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动Work Creates a Better Life得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．外教的帮助；
3．活动的反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Patrick,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.
It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show. It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc. Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence.
Many thanks for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
惊人的：amazing→astonishing
表达：express→convey
各种各样的：a variety of→various
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.
拓展句：Their performances which impressed people, definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.(运用了it is...that强调句型)
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题型 真题示例 关键词
感谢信 【2019年浙江6月卷】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 表示感谢； 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 临别祝愿。
考点关键词： 感谢
考点揭秘 感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。 写作时通常以一般过去时为主、一般现在时为辅。开头应当点明写信目的；中间详细描述事情经过；最后再次表示感谢，并表达回报的心情。
第一段 表达感谢之情并说明原因
第二段 详细描述事情的经过并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段 再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
模板01 满分必备词汇
单词 assistance援助； generous慷慨的； warm热情的； sincere真诚的； appreciate感谢； express表达； accept接受； reception接待； kindness友善； timely及时的； selfless无私的； convey传达； hospitality热情好客的； thoughtful体贴周到的；
短语 be grateful to sb for sth因某事而感谢某人； show sb. around领某人参观；
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing the letter to thank you for …
我写这封信是要感谢你......。
2. On behalf of …, I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help.
我想代表……在这封信里，对你无私的帮助表达我诚挚的谢意。
3.with the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks for your kindness when I was.
怀着最深的感激，我写信给您，感谢您在我在……时对我的关心。
4. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to…
非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
5. Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
听说你很快就要回国了，我感到有些伤心。但同时，我想对你在我英语学习上给予的善意帮助表示衷心的感谢。
6.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。
I am obliged to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1.Had it not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
要不是你的帮助的话，我就不会赢得这个奖项了。
I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.
我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。
Without your instruction, I couldn't have won first place in the competition.
没有你的指导，我不可能在比赛中获得第一名。
It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to help me with...
你在......帮助我真的太善良/周到了。
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit…
You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.
你真的给我的整个旅程带来了极大的方便与快乐。
Not only do I miss the time when you…with me, but also I am grateful for the help you gave me.
我不仅怀念你与我……的时光，而且很感激你对我的帮助。
Additionally, without your help, I wouldn't have been a top student in English and would not have won the English speech contest.
此外，没有你的帮助，我不会成为一名英语拔尖的学生也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Again, I would like to express my thanks to you./ Thanks again for your kind help.
再次感谢你的热心帮助。
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助
Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...
如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
My gratitude is beyond description./I appreciate it more than I can say./ I can never thank you enough.
感激之情，无以言表。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear Jason,
It's really hard to say goodbye to you! （语言无法表达我对你的感激之情）___________________________________ in this letter, as you have done so much for me.
毫无疑问，正是你的支持与鼓励才________________________________________ lit me up when I （遇到困难时）________________________________in English learning. Whenever you had time, you would help me practice my oral English. （除此之外）________________, you also （真诚地分享了你的学习经验）_____________________________________ with me. （要不是你的帮助的话）_____________________________________，（我就不会取得这么多的进步的）________________________________________________________________________________.
（再次感谢）___________________________ for your kind and generous help. Wish you a good journey and good luck in everything you do.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【2019年浙江6月卷】）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
表示感谢；
回顾Alex对你的帮助；
临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。首段一般为写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助，最后一段表达祝愿。
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【山东省烟台市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业水平考试】假定你是李华，上个月在英国学习期间借宿在外教Mrs Smith家，你归国后打算给她邮寄一份具有中国特色的礼物。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达感谢；
（2）挑选的礼物；
（3）提醒对方查收。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mrs Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：热情问候，表明写信人身份，直抒胸臆表达对 Mrs Smith 借宿期间照顾的感激之情。
挑选的礼物：介绍挑选的具有中国特色礼物，如中国传统茶具，阐述选择原因，像能体现中国茶文化，帮助她感受中国传统文化魅力。
提醒查收：告知已寄出礼物，提醒留意查收，提及快递单号方便查询，表达期待她收到礼物后的感受。
结尾：再次致谢，送上美好祝福 。
Dear Mrs Smith,
I’ve returned home, safe and sound. Never will I forget the wonderful time I spent in your house. I really appreciate your kind hospitality, which made me feel so comfortable during my stay there.
Filled with gratitude, I’ve been thinking of sending you a favored gift to convey my feeling. Considering you’re a Chinese tea addict, I finally decided on a delicate porcelain tea set, each item beautifully crafted with traditional Chinese patterns. I hope it can bring you more enjoyment while having tea. I’ve chosen a reliable international shipping service, which promised the gift will reach your house in a month. Please check the package in time. Hoping you’ll like it.
Looking forward to seeing you next time!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【2025届安徽省淮北市和淮南市高三上学期第一次质量检测】假定你是李华，你校外教 Ryan 经常帮助你练习口语，请你给 Ryan老师写封电子邮件表示感谢，同时，你亲手制作了一套中国剪纸送他以表谢意。邮件内容包括：
(1) 对 Ryan 老师表示感谢；
(2) 介绍你即将送他的剪纸。
注意：
(1) 词数80左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
【广东省实验中学2024-2025学年高三上学期11月月考】假如你是李华, 刚刚参加完一个夏令营从纽约回来。在纽约期间，你住宿在Smith先生家，得到了他很多的帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达谢意。内容包括：
(1)表示感谢；
(2)回顾Smith先生对你的帮助与照顾；
(3)你打算如何感谢他。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【重庆市沙坪坝区重庆市第八中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华，上个月外教Robert在你班“运动与健康”主题班会上进行了分享，请你写封邮件表达感谢，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢;
2. 分享收获;
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Dear Robert,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
【山西省忻州市2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考】假定你是李华，假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示谢意；
2. 回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
【辽宁省名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联合考试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris是音乐老师，在校园合唱比赛中，你班荣获一等奖，请你写邮件分享喜悦并感谢Chris给你的合唱建议。内容包括：
1. 分享喜悦；
2. 表示感谢；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
Passage 6
【江西省部分高中学校2025届高三上学期开学第一次月考英语试卷（含听力】假定你是李华，在教师节来临之际你自制了一份有中国特色的礼物赠送给外教Chris，同时你想写一封信表达对外教的感谢，内容包括：
1．赠礼原因;
2．礼物简介;
3．表达期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 7
【2024届河南省TOP二十名校高三下学期4月冲刺（一）】假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 难忘的一件事；
3. 你的祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 8
【2024届河北省承德市部分示范性高中二模】假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.目前状况及感谢；
2.介绍健身计划。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Oliver,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 9
【2023届湖南省部分名校联盟高三5月冲刺压轴大联考英语试题（含听力）】假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动Work Creates a Better Life得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．外教的帮助；
3．活动的反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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