模板10 道歉信
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2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
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2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
道歉信 【2021年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.表达歉意并说明原因; 2.提出建议并给出理由。
考点关键词: 道歉
考点揭秘 道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽,给别人造成了损失或带来了麻烦,或因为自己不能履行约定需要向对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。 道歉信的语言应当简练、诚恳,并且希望收件人能够原谅自己。 时态通常以一般过去时为主,一般将来时为辅。通常以第一人称为主。
第一段 表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意。
第二段 说明道歉的具体事由,希望对方谅解或再次约定。
第三段 再次表明歉意,请求谅解 并提出补救措施。
模板01 满分必备词块
单词 apologize道歉; forgive原谅; pardon原谅; inconvenience不便; appointment约定; negligence疏忽大意; engagement约定; indeed确实; sincerely真诚地;
短语 much to one’s regret令某人非常遗憾的是; make up 和解; make a choice选择; apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 ; say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉; be absent/present from 缺席/出席; beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅; cause inconvenience 造成不便; miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会; make up for.…弥补; express my regret表达我的道歉; be considerate of 体谅; accept my apology接受我的道歉; conflict with... 与……冲突; make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 make up for.…弥补 beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅 cause inconvenience 造成不便 miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会be considerate of 体谅 express my regret表达我的道歉 have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...
很抱歉告诉你……,我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...
对于我做的事,我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……
4. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
5. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.
请原谅我没能通知你。
6. I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.
我没能帮助你,应该向你道歉。
7. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要......。
Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
I feel awfully sorry about it and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another time.
为此我感到非常抱歉,我想知道你是否方便另约时间。
Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am feeling.
恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦,同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。
I just do not know what to say about the matter.
关于这件事我不知该说些什么。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。
I did not mean to hurt your feelings.
我不想伤害你的感情。
I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴,但是希望你能原谅我。
It would be very kind( considerate)of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again.
你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .
对于造成的不便,我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allow me to say sorry again
请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.
我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
5. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
对于任何带来的不便,请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ________,
I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). ②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to ___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Sincerely Yours, Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二】
Dear ________(对象),
I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for _____________________ (未能去书店with you at our appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.
______________________________(我会缺席的原因是因为)my grandfather ________________________________(突然生病) yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. _____________________________(我真诚地希望) you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile, __________________________________(我将感激不尽) if you could allow me to fix another date.______________________________________(如果你方便的话), shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday If not, please ________________________________(让我提前知道)what time suits you best.
Sorry again for the inconvenience ______________________________所引起的.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2021年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头:简要问候并说明写信的目的。
表达歉意:明确表示因故不能赴约,并说明具体原因。
提出建议:提出一个替代的建议,并解释为什么提出这个建议。
结尾:表达对未能赴约的遗憾,并感谢Jim的理解。
Dear Jim,
I am writing to make a sincere apology to you that I will not be able to attend the photographic exhibition which is scheduled to take place this Saturday. I do feel bad about informing you on such a short notice,but I need to have a physical checkup this Saturday afternoon and I almost forgot.
To visit the exhibition, first you need to take the bus and then change subway lines twice. It is kind of complicated. Considering that you have only been in Beijing for a week and are likely to have a problem getting around, I could ask my cousin, who was born and bred in Beijing, to go with you to the exhibition venue. Not only is he familiar with Beijing, he is fluent in English as well. In other words, he could be your perfect tour guide.
If my cousin is not available on Saturday, as a last resort, we might go to the photographic exhibition some other time. I hear that it will be held again next month.
Anyway, I am sorry again for not being able to go with you this time, but do not hesitate to1contact me if I can be of any further help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2016年全国卷1】假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意:
2. 说明原因:
3. 另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
开头:简要问候并说明写信的目的。
表达歉意:明确表示因故不能赴约,并表达歉意。
说明原因:具体说明不能赴约的原因。
补救措施另约时间:提出一个新的时间建议,并表达希望对方能接受。
结尾:再次表达歉意,并感谢对方的理解。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2024-2025高三上学期月考卷(一)】假定你是李华,你班同学决定本周日下午为外教 Daniel举办生日聚会,你因故无法参加,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
We’ re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头:直接点明写信目的,为不能参加生日聚会向 Daniel 表达诚挚歉意。
说明原因:清晰、诚恳地阐述无法参加的具体原因,如家庭突发状况需陪同家人就医,或已提前安排重要考试的准备事项等。
表达祝愿:衷心祝福 Daniel 生日快乐,希望他度过一个愉快、难忘的生日,未来工作顺利、生活幸福。
结尾:再次致歉,期待后续有机会弥补。
Dear Daniel,
We’re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon. But I am here to express my sincerest apologies for not being able to attend it.
As scheduled, there is going to be a science competition on Sunday afternoon. This competition is so important to me that I do not want to miss out on it. You are an amazing teacher, from whom I feel fortunate to have the opportunity to learn.
Once again, I apologize for not being able to join in the celebrations. May your birthday be filled with love, laughter, and wonderful memories. Wish you a fantastic birthday!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【福建省福州名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末联考】假定你是李华,今天上课时不小心弄坏了你同桌的笔。请你给你的同桌Chris写一封邮件,表达你的歉意,内容包括:
(1)道歉并说明情况;
(2)给出补救方案。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右,可以有适当细节的增添;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing this email to offer you my sincerest apology. I feel so awful about what happened in class today. I accidentally dropped your pen while I was clumsily reaching for my notebook, and it broke. It was all my fault and I’m truly regretful.
To make up for it, I’ve searched for the exact same pen on several reliable shopping platforms and placed an order. It’ll be delivered to you as soon as possible. I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and this way of making amends. I’ll be extra careful from now on to avoid such silly mistakes again.
Hoping for your forgiveness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给同桌Chris写一封邮件,因弄坏了他的笔表达歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物:offer sb sth→provide sb with sth
偶然:accidentally→by chance
寻找:search for→look for
愚蠢的:silly→stupid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing this email to offer you my sincerest apology.
拓展句:I’m writing this email so that I can offer you my sincerest apology.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I feel so awful about what happened in class today.(运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I accidentally dropped your pen while I was clumsily reaching for my notebook, and it broke.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 2
【重庆市第一中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假设你是李华,因为个人原因,无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告,特给他发送一封电子邮件道歉,要点如下:
1. 表达歉意并解释原因。
2. 提出补救措施。
3. 希望得到谅解。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Black,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Black,
I am writing to convey my heartfelt apologies for the delay in submitting my reading report on the English literature masterpieces on time. A sudden illness that struck me last week led to this delay.
Feeling a lot better now, I am eager to make it right. I will devote myself to working on it in the following couple of days, and I assure you that a thorough analysis and detailed reflection of the classics will be included in my assignment. I plan to finish it by next Friday morning and email it to you immediately.
I deeply regret any inconvenience this may have caused and hope you can understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告,给他发送一封电子邮件表示道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:convey→ express
计划:plan → schedule
立刻:immediately→ right now
导致:lead to→ cause
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Feeling a lot better now, I am eager to make it right.
拓展句:Because I feel a lot better now, I am eager to make it right.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A sudden illness that struck me last week led to this delay.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I will devote myself to working on it in the following couple of days, and I assure you that a thorough analysis and detailed reflection of the classics will be included in my assignment.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 3
【2025届河北省邢台市名校联盟高三上学期9月开学调研检测(一)】假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1. 写作词数应在80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Johnson,
With utter sincerity, I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition, which otherwise would be held next Friday.
Out of our expectations, a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday, which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement, making many competitors unavailable to the contest. Therefore, the contest has to be put off to next Sunday night. Would it be convenient for you
I apologize again for any inconvenience it may bring to you and your understanding will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,要求考生给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件表示歉意,并解释推迟原因及后续调整。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推迟:postponement→delay
至关重要的:vital→essential
比赛:contest→match
因此:therefore→thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Therefore, the contest has to be put off to next Sunday night.
拓展句:Therefore, it has become necessary that the contest should be put off to next Sunday night due to the scheduling conflict.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With utter sincerity, I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition, which otherwise would be held next Friday.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Out of our expectations, a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday, which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement, making many competitors unavailable to the contest.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
【黑龙江省龙东十校2024-2025学年高三上学期开学考试】假定你是李华,你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说。请你给她写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to sincerely apologize for losing the English novel you kindly lent me. I am truly sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused.
I misplaced the book during a recent trip to the library. Despite my best efforts to locate it, I have been unable to find it. I understand the importance of the book to you and deeply regret my carelessness.
To compensate for this, I will purchase a new copy of the book and have it delivered to you as soon as possible. Once again, I apologize for the trouble and appreciate your understanding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说,要求给她写一封电子邮件来道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely → genuinely
真地:truly → terribly
尽管:despite → in spite of
补偿:compensate → make up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I understand the importance of the book to you and deeply regret my carelessness.
拓展句:I understand the importance of the book to you, deeply regretting my carelessness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to sincerely apologize for losing the English novel you kindly lent me.(运用了省略关系词的限制性定语从句和动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】To compensate for this, I will purchase a new copy of the book and have it delivered to you as soon as possible.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和过去分词作补足语)
Passage 5
【2024届江西省景德镇市高三下学期第三次质量检测】假定你是李华,与外教Peter约好周六下午一起去爬南山,但因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件表示歉意,内容包括:
1.表达不能赴约的歉意;2说明原因;3.另约时间;
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go climbing with you on Saturday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Sunday morning We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the breathtaking scenery. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇道歉信,要求考生给外教写信道歉,解释不能如期赴约的原因,并且提出补救措施。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
① 重要:important → crucial/ significant
② 改变:change → alteration/ modification
③ 麻烦:trouble → inconvenience/ difficulty
④ 享受:enjoy → appreciate/ savor
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I should be available any time after school next week.
拓展句:I should be available any time if it is after school next week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the breathtaking scenery.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
【高分句型2】If not, let me know what time suits you best.(运用了宾语从句)
Passage 6
【2023届浙江省金华十校高三上学期11月模拟考试英语试题(一模】假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,请你给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由;
3. 后续调整。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Katherine,
I’m Li Hua, leader of the English drama club.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Katherine,
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the English Dram a Competition scheduled for next Thursday will have to be rearranged.
The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use for five days next week due to essential maintenance. Thus, we’re made a decision to reschedule the competition for next Sunday evening when the maintenance work will be complete and the auditorium will be ready for use. Would you be available that day
Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,要求考生给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件表达歉意,说明理由并告诉他后续调整。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
通知:inform→notify
重要的:essential→important
因此:thus→therefore
完成:complete→finish
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use for five days next week due to essential maintenance.
拓展句:The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use because it will undergo essential maintenance for five days next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the English Dram a Competition scheduled for next Thursday will have to be rearranged.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Thus, we’re made a decision to reschedule the competition for next Sunday evening when the maintenance work will be complete and the auditorium will be ready for use.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 7
【2024届山东省实验中学高三下学期一模】假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Michael,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Michael,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am extremely grateful for you inviting me to attend your school’s coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday.
However, I regret to inform you that I won’t be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. Therefore, I’d like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it’s a special moment for you.
Wish your coming-of-age ceremony a complete success. Looking forward to sharing more wonderful time together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式, 但你无法应邀,要求考生写信告知。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
极度地:extremely→overly
感激的:grateful→appreciative
有空的:available→free
因此:therefore→thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am extremely grateful for yoa inviting me to attend your school’s coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday.
拓展句:I am extremely grateful because you have invited me to attend your school’s online coming-of-age ceremony, which is scheduled for next Monday.
【点睛】[高分句型1]However, I regret to inform you that I won’t be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Therefore, I’d like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it’s a special moment for you.(as引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 8
【江苏省扬州中学2023-2024学年高一下学期第一次月考】假定你是李华,你的外教Wilson明天下午要做一个关于“互联网+”(Internet Plus)的讲座,你因故不能参加,请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
1. 表示歉意;2. 解释原因;3. 询问是否有讲座的相关资料。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Wilson,
I am writing to express my sincere apologies for being unable to attend your lecture on “Internet Plus” tomorrow afternoon.
I have always been interested in the topic of “Internet Plus” and was looking forward to hearing your insights on the subject. However, due to my current health condition, I am unable to leave my bed and attend the lecture.
The question that I had been pondering over was whether it would be possible for you to offer me any materials or slides from the lecture. This would greatly help me understand the content and stay up to date with the topic.
Thank you for your understanding and support.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封道歉信。要求考生以李华的名义,对于不能参加你的外教Wilson明天下午做的关于“互联网+”(Internet Plus)的讲座一事,用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ have a passion for
期望:look forward to → have high expectations for
能够:be able to→ have the capacity to
帮助:help→ assist
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:However, due to my current health condition, I am unable to leave my bed and attend the lecture.
拓展句:However, owing to my present health status, I am incapacitated and unable to arise from my bed and participate in the lecture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my sincere apologies for being unable to attend your lecture on “Internet Plus” tomorrow afternoon.(使用了非谓语动词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】The question that I had been pondering over was whether it would be possible for you to offer me any materials or slides from the lecture.(使用了以question为先行词、关系代词that为引导词的定语从句和whether引导的宾语从句)
Passage 9
【2023届黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三中学校高三第三次高考模拟考试】假定你是李华,你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆,但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;
2.表达歉意并解释原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jenny,
Thank you very much for inviting me to visit the museum with you this weekend. It sounds like a great plan and I appreciate your kindness. But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates. I feel sorry for letting you down and hope you can understand my situation.
However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.
Thank you again for your kind invitation, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的道歉信。要求考生给外籍好友 Jenny写封道歉信,表示自己因故不能接受她的邀请——周末一起去参观博物馆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的:great→ wonderful
不幸地:unfortunately→ unluckily
使……失望:let down → disappoint
机会:opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
拓展句:However, I’d love it if I can have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)模板10 道歉信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
道歉信 【2021年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.表达歉意并说明原因; 2.提出建议并给出理由。
考点关键词: 道歉
考点揭秘 道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽,给别人造成了损失或带来了麻烦,或因为自己不能履行约定需要向对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。 道歉信的语言应当简练、诚恳,并且希望收件人能够原谅自己。 时态通常以一般过去时为主,一般将来时为辅。通常以第一人称为主。
第一段 表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意。
第二段 说明道歉的具体事由,希望对方谅解或再次约定。
第三段 再次表明歉意,请求谅解 并提出补救措施。
模板01 满分必备词块
单词 apologize道歉; forgive原谅; pardon原谅; inconvenience不便; appointment约定; negligence疏忽大意; engagement约定; indeed确实; sincerely真诚地;
短语 much to one’s regret令某人非常遗憾的是; make up 和解; make a choice选择; apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 ; say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉; be absent/present from 缺席/出席; beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅; cause inconvenience 造成不便; miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会; make up for.…弥补; express my regret表达我的道歉; be considerate of 体谅; accept my apology接受我的道歉; conflict with... 与……冲突; make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 make up for.…弥补 beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅 cause inconvenience 造成不便 miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会be considerate of 体谅 express my regret表达我的道歉 have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...
很抱歉告诉你……,我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...
对于我做的事,我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……
4. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
5. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.
请原谅我没能通知你。
6. I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.
我没能帮助你,应该向你道歉。
7. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要......。
Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
I feel awfully sorry about it and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another time.
为此我感到非常抱歉,我想知道你是否方便另约时间。
Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am feeling.
恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦,同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。
I just do not know what to say about the matter.
关于这件事我不知该说些什么。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。
I did not mean to hurt your feelings.
我不想伤害你的感情。
I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴,但是希望你能原谅我。
It would be very kind( considerate)of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again.
你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .
对于造成的不便,我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allow me to say sorry again
请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.
我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
5. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
对于任何带来的不便,请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ________,
I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①______________ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). ②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret__________ (表达歉意). ③Please accept my sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). ⑧I had no way out because ___________ (总结自己道歉的原因). ⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to ___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)
We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.
Sincerely Yours, Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二】
Dear ________(对象),
I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for _____________________ (未能去书店with you at our appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.
______________________________(我会缺席的原因是因为)my grandfather ________________________________(突然生病) yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. _____________________________(我真诚地希望) you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile, __________________________________(我将感激不尽) if you could allow me to fix another date.______________________________________(如果你方便的话), shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday If not, please ________________________________(让我提前知道)what time suits you best.
Sorry again for the inconvenience ______________________________所引起的.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2021年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头:简要问候并说明写信的目的。
表达歉意:明确表示因故不能赴约,并说明具体原因。
提出建议:提出一个替代的建议,并解释为什么提出这个建议。
结尾:表达对未能赴约的遗憾,并感谢Jim的理解。
Dear Jim,
I am writing to make a sincere apology to you that I will not be able to attend the photographic exhibition which is scheduled to take place this Saturday. I do feel bad about informing you on such a short notice,but I need to have a physical checkup this Saturday afternoon and I almost forgot.
To visit the exhibition, first you need to take the bus and then change subway lines twice. It is kind of complicated. Considering that you have only been in Beijing for a week and are likely to have a problem getting around, I could ask my cousin, who was born and bred in Beijing, to go with you to the exhibition venue. Not only is he familiar with Beijing, he is fluent in English as well. In other words, he could be your perfect tour guide.
If my cousin is not available on Saturday, as a last resort, we might go to the photographic exhibition some other time. I hear that it will be held again next month.
Anyway, I am sorry again for not being able to go with you this time, but do not hesitate to1contact me if I can be of any further help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2016年全国卷1】假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意:
2. 说明原因:
3. 另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
开头:简要问候并说明写信的目的。
表达歉意:明确表示因故不能赴约,并表达歉意。
说明原因:具体说明不能赴约的原因。
补救措施另约时间:提出一个新的时间建议,并表达希望对方能接受。
结尾:再次表达歉意,并感谢对方的理解。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2024-2025高三上学期月考卷(一)】假定你是李华,你班同学决定本周日下午为外教 Daniel举办生日聚会,你因故无法参加,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
We’ re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头:直接点明写信目的,为不能参加生日聚会向 Daniel 表达诚挚歉意。
说明原因:清晰、诚恳地阐述无法参加的具体原因,如家庭突发状况需陪同家人就医,或已提前安排重要考试的准备事项等。
表达祝愿:衷心祝福 Daniel 生日快乐,希望他度过一个愉快、难忘的生日,未来工作顺利、生活幸福。
结尾:再次致歉,期待后续有机会弥补。
Dear Daniel,
We’re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon. But I am here to express my sincerest apologies for not being able to attend it.
As scheduled, there is going to be a science competition on Sunday afternoon. This competition is so important to me that I do not want to miss out on it. You are an amazing teacher, from whom I feel fortunate to have the opportunity to learn.
Once again, I apologize for not being able to join in the celebrations. May your birthday be filled with love, laughter, and wonderful memories. Wish you a fantastic birthday!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【福建省福州名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末联考】假定你是李华,今天上课时不小心弄坏了你同桌的笔。请你给你的同桌Chris写一封邮件,表达你的歉意,内容包括:
(1)道歉并说明情况;
(2)给出补救方案。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右,可以有适当细节的增添;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 2
【重庆市第一中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假设你是李华,因为个人原因,无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告,特给他发送一封电子邮件道歉,要点如下:
1. 表达歉意并解释原因。
2. 提出补救措施。
3. 希望得到谅解。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Black,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【2025届河北省邢台市名校联盟高三上学期9月开学调研检测(一)】假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1. 写作词数应在80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
【黑龙江省龙东十校2024-2025学年高三上学期开学考试】假定你是李华,你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说。请你给她写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
【2024届江西省景德镇市高三下学期第三次质量检测】假定你是李华,与外教Peter约好周六下午一起去爬南山,但因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件表示歉意,内容包括:
1.表达不能赴约的歉意;2说明原因;3.另约时间;
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
Dear Peter,
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Passage 6
【2023届浙江省金华十校高三上学期11月模拟考试英语试题(一模】假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,请你给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由;
3. 后续调整。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Katherine,
I’m Li Hua, leader of the English drama club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 7
【2024届山东省实验中学高三下学期一模】假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Michael,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
【江苏省扬州中学2023-2024学年高一下学期第一次月考】假定你是李华,你的外教Wilson明天下午要做一个关于“互联网+”(Internet Plus)的讲座,你因故不能参加,请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
1. 表示歉意;2. 解释原因;3. 询问是否有讲座的相关资料。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
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Passage 9
【2023届黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三中学校高三第三次高考模拟考试】假定你是李华,你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆,但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;
2.表达歉意并解释原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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