模板11 求助信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
求助信 【2020 全国III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。
考点关键词： 求助
考点揭秘 求助信是应用文的一种，用于当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种 书信。通常包括三部分内容: 首段：点明目的，自我介绍，提出要求。 主体段落：列举自己所遇到的困难、请求对方帮助。 尾段：表达感激，请求尽快答复。 时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第一段 写给机构，需自我介绍。 写给友人或师长，需寒暄问候，再写出求助目的。
第二段 详述问题，提出要求。
第三段 表达感谢并期望得到回复。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助
3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助
4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题
5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事
7.make preparations for.…为某事做准备
9.put...in use 学以致用
10.let sb. down 让某人失望
11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧
12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事
13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事
14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导
15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing to turn to you for help.
我信心向你寻求帮助
I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我别无选择只能向你求助
I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/ come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙,因为我正在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。
I am eager to get your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
5. The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.
我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
What bothers me is that I am a at loss / have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
让我困扰的是，我不知道如何回顾我自己在家里学到的东西。
2. Faced with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
面对这个难题，我只得向你求助.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
如果你能给我一些建议，我将不胜感激。
4. I would be more than happy if you could...
如果你能...我将非常高兴......
5. First and foremost, I have great difficulty in doing sth.
首先最重要的是，我做...有着很大的困难
6. Additionally, I find it's too challenging for me to do sth.
此外，我发现做...对我来说挑战太大
Last but certainly not least, doing sth is a big headache for me.
最后但同样重要的是，做...让我很头疼一、夺人眼球开头句(开篇表意)
8. I have much trouble in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.
我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼，
I am stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have
organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似的活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
I feel greatly stressed, so would you be so kind enough to give me some advice on how to
relieve stress.
我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗
Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could...
得知你在组织歌剧表演方面有丰富的经验，我想知道你是否可以。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Thanks for your kind consideration.
谢谢你的友好考虑。
I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
我期待着最早收到你的来信。
3. I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.
如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题,我将不胜感激.
4. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢你及时的帮助。
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance instructions.
如果你能给我一些指导,我将不胜感激。
Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me.
我希望，你可以提供给我及时善良的帮助。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
My name is _____________. I’m writing ______________________.(表明写信目的)
Faced with _____________（点明困难）, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ______________（恳请帮助一） In the meanwhile, I beg you to ________________ in order that____________________（求助理由）. In addition, I would like to _____________________（求助二）. I’m sure that I can ______________ with your help. （表明信心和期盼）It will be appreciated if you can help me to ______________________（表达感谢）.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
【2020 全国III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答题思路】
第一段：开头：礼貌称呼外教，表明写信目的是请求指导短剧，点明与同学改编自英语课文 。
第二段：剧情简介：简洁概括短剧核心情节，包括故事背景、主要人物及关键冲突或发展。
指导内容：从英语表达准确性、表演技巧、剧情连贯性等方面提出需要指导的点 。
商定时间地点：给出几个自己方便的时间选项，询问外教何时何地指导合适 。
第三段：结尾：表达感谢与期待回复。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.
Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【2016·新课标卷I】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
开头：称呼后，表明写信目的，即请外教帮忙修改申请材料。
正文：说明材料是用于外贸公司兼职申请，强调其重要性。提及申请材料包括申请书和简历，重点请外教从文字表达、语法准确性及格式规范方面修改。
结尾：表达感激之情，询问大概完成修改的时间，并期待回复。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan （写信告诉你我的计划）for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor（给以帮助）.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job（做兼职） in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to（是否要注意什么）. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help（希望你能帮助我）. I will be very grateful（非常感激） if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply（期望得到你的回复）. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【福建省福州市连江一中等四校2024-2025学年高三12月联考】假定你是学校科学社团负责人李华，下月社团将举行“科技融入梦想” (Integration of Technology into Dreams) 科学节活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，请他就活动方案提出意见，内容包括：
介绍方案；
(2)征询意见。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：点明写信目的，表明希望 Chris 对社团科学节活动方案提意见。
body：
介绍方案：简述活动主题 “科技融入梦想”，阐述活动形式，如科技展览、科普讲座、创意竞赛等，并介绍各环节内容，如展览展示的科技成果、讲座主题、竞赛规则等。
征询意见：诚恳请求 Chris 从活动吸引力、内容合理性、形式创新性等方面提出看法，期待他指出不足与改进方向。
结尾：表达对他帮助的期待与感谢。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. Aiming to spark students’ interest in science and foster their creativity, our school’s Science Club is organizing a science festival themed “Integration of Technology into Dreams” next month. I’m writing to seek your advice on the plan for the festival.
As scheduled, the festival will offer a rich blend of activities, ranging from expert lectures, interactive seminars, robotic showcase to collaboration on creative designs. The festival will kick off with a lecture delivered by a renowned scientist, whose remarkable insights are sure to encourage the participants to contribute innovative ideas. Following that, AI enthusiasts from the club will also share their original designs to make the festival more enjoyable and inspiring.
Given your experience and keen eye for innovation, we are eager to receive your feedback on the plan. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【广西部分市2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，你班上周进行了英语单词检测，你的成绩不理想。请就此给你的外国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，向他请教记单词的方法，内容包括：
1. 情况介绍；
2. 提出请求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I want to share something with you. We had an English vocabulary test last week, and unfortunately, my results were not very good. I find it quite challenging to remember all the new words.
Could you please share some effective methods for memorizing vocabulary I know you are very good at English and might have some useful tips. For example, how do you use flashcards, apps, or any other techniques to remember words better
I look forward to your reply and any advice you can offer.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你班上周进行了英语单词检测，你的成绩不理想。请就此给你的外国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，向他请教记单词的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不幸地：unfortunately → unluckily
非常：quite → extremely
方法：method → way
擅长：be good at → be skilled in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I find it quite challenging to remember all the new words.
拓展句：I find that remembering all the new words is quite challenging.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I find it quite challenging to remember all the new words.（运用了it作形式主语和不定式短语to remember all the new words作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】 I know you are very good at English and might have some useful tips.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
Passage 2
【湖北省腾云联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，校英语广播站新开了“My Ideal Major”的栏目，为听众提供相关建议。请给栏目组写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你选择专业的困惑；
2.你期望得到的帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to share my puzzles about my ideal major.
Like many of my peers, I’m unsure about which major really suits me and how to make a practical career plan. I would appreciate it if you can introduce major options, like new majors or the ones to disappear. Moreover, it would be great for us to have experts in various fields who are willing to give us specific lectures. Face-to-face talks with them would be better.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给栏目组写一封邮件，表达对选择专业的困惑，期待得到帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不确定：unsure → uncertain
此外：moreover → besides
演讲：lecture → speech
各种各样：various → a variety of
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：Face-to-face talks with them would be better.
拓展句：It would be better for us to have face-to-face talks with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Like many of my peers, I’m unsure about which major really suits me and how to make a practical career plan. (运用了which引导的宾语从句以及“疑问词+不定式结构”结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, it would be great for us to have experts in various fields who are willing to give us specific lectures. (运用了“it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语”结构以及who引导的定语从句)
Passage 3
【广东广雅中学花都校区2024-2025学年高三上学期9月测试】假定你是高二学生李华，开学已经一个多月，对于高三生活有一些困惑，请你写一封邮件给 21 世纪报 Teens’ World 栏目主编 Max，向他求助。内容包括：
1. 你的困惑；
2. 请求帮助。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Max,
I am Li Hua, a student who is about to enter the third year of senior high school. I’m writing to you to ask for some help.
First of all, I am very confused and don’t know how to adjust my mentality. As a consequence, it is very difficult for me to stay calm. Besides, I don’t know how to arrange time reasonably to cope with the college entrance examination.
Faced with the difficulties, I have to turn to you for some help. Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to deal with these problems
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给 21 世纪报 Teens’ World 栏目主编 Max，向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理：deal with→handle
首先：first of all→to begin with
困惑：confused→puzzled
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First of all, I am very confused and don’t know how to adjust my mentality.
拓展句：First of all, I am very confused because I don’t know how to adjust my mentality.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am Li Hua, a student who is about to enter the third year of senior high school. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, I am very confused and don’t know how to adjust my mentality. (运用了疑问词+不定式结构作宾语)
Passage 4
【湖北省随州市曾都区某校2024-2025学年高三上学期7月月考】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Evans,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Evans,
I am Li Hua from your English class. I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month. We’re interested in one story from our English textbook, The Million Pound Bank Note by Mark Twain. It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story
Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 p. m. this Friday Thank you for your kindness!
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导自己和和同学根据英语课文改编的一个短剧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in
给某人某物：give sb sth→offer sb sth
建议：advice→suggestion
可能的：possible→probable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month.
拓展句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play which is prepared for the English Festival next month.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. （运用了who引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story （运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语）
Passage 5
【广东省江门市第一中学2023-2024学年高三上学期10月月考】假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评。请你用英语给外教Sam写一封信，请求他帮你当面批改书评，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍阅读活动
2. 提出请求并提议见面时间。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam，
I’m writing to ask for a favor from you. As a bookworm and English lover, I signed up for a reading activity on a WeChat official account this winter, where I was expected to read some English books and submit a book review.
I have written one on Wonder Boy. However, I am not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I really hope you can help me polish up my review. If possible, can I come to meet you on Sunday afternoon
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给外教Sam写一封信批改暑假参加的某微信公众号举行的英语原版书阅读活动写的一篇书评，希望他能帮你当面修改书评。
【详解】1.词汇积累
请某人帮忙：ask for a favor→turn to sb. for help
报名参加：sign up for→enter for
然而：however→though
答复：reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：If possible, can I come to meet you on Sunday afternoon
复合句：I would appreciate it if I come to meet you on Sunday afternoon.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a bookworm and English lover, I signed up for a reading activity on a WeChat official account this winter, where I was expected to read some English books and submit a book review (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】However, I am not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I really hope you can help me polish up my review.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
Passage 6
【福建省福州市2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次质量检测】假设你是李华，刚进人高三，在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.说明困难；
2.寻求帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely;
LiHua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance.
My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble in remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them, they seem to disappear from my mind sometime later.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
LI Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr.Brown写封邮件，说明自己在英语学习上遇到的困难并向对方寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：come across→meet with
因此：therefore→thus
做某事有困难：have trouble in doing→have difficulty in doing
感激的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning.（运用了分词Entering作状语）
【高分句型2】Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea.（运用了so...that...引导结果状语从句）
Passage 7
【河北省保定市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末】假定你是李华，你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. However, I have no idea if my entry is well-structured. Given your rich experience, could you kindly review my draft in the attachment and provide your insights into how I can polish it I am eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动。请考生给外教 Henry写封邮件请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like→be fond of
提供：provide→offer
各种各样的：various→varieties of
此外：additionally→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
拓展句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry whose theme is “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. (运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 8
【福建省福州市长乐第一中学2023-3024学年高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，高三学习任务繁重，但你却沉溺于智能手机。你尝试了一些不看手机的方法但都不奏效。请给你的美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；2. 你的困境；3. 征求建议。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m facing an annoying problem and writing to ask for your help.
During my senior year of high school, I have to deal with mountains of assignments. However, I kind of get addicted to my smartphone. I know it’s wrong to spend too much time on the phone and I have tried some ways of staying away from it. But every time I pick up the phone, I just can’t put it down.
Could you give me some advice on how to solve my problem Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就自己沉溺于智能手机的问题给美国笔友写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决：deal with→handle
任务：assignment→task
沉迷于：get addicted to→indulge in
建议：advice→suggestion/tip
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m facing an annoying problem and writing to ask for your help.
拓展句：Facing an annoying problem, I’m writing to ask for your help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I know it’s wrong to spend too much time on the phone and I have tried some ways of staying away from it.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】But every time I pick up the phone, I just can’t put it down.(运用了every time引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 9
【重庆市第八中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假如你是李华，你将于近期前往悉尼大学（the University of Sydney）进行为期一年的学习，计划在当地租房。请用英文给笔友Martin写一封邮件，向他咨询相关情况。邮件内容包括：
1. 写明事由；
2. 询问情况；
3. 期待见面。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Martin,
Exhilarated to tell you that I’m going to the University of Sydney for further study, I’m reaching out for a brief inquiry with regard to apartment rental.
Since I will be living in Sydney for the whole year, all things considered, homestay is not a proper choice. I don’t mind sharing an apartment if it is conveniently located and has a cozy bedroom. So what is the approximate cost of the whole apartment and a shared one respectively Additionally, I wonder if you could recommend any areas where the rent is affordable and meanwhile one can enjoy easy access to public transport. Apart from location and living environment, are there any other important considerations while I am looking for ideal accommodation
Your prompt reply is much appreciated. Looking forward to meeting you in Sydney.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给笔友Martin写一封邮件，向他咨询在悉尼当地租房上学的相关情况，应首先简要点明写信事由，然后询问具体情况，最后表达期待见面。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：exhilarated→excited, thrilled
关于：with regard to→as regards, with respect to
考虑：consider→give thought to, take into consideration
除……外（还）：apart from→aside from, besides
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your prompt reply is much appreciated.
拓展句：If you can reply promptly, it will be much appreciated.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Exhilarated to tell you that I’m going to the University of Sydney for further study, I’m reaching out for a brief inquiry with regard to apartment rental. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Since I will be living in Sydney for the whole year, all things considered, homestay is not a proper choice. (运用了since引导原因状语从句、独立主格结构作状语)
[高分句型3] Additionally, I wonder if you could recommend any areas where the rent is affordable and meanwhile one can enjoy easy access to public transport. (运用了if引导宾语从句、where引导限制性定语从句)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)模板11 求助信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
求助信 【2020 全国III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。
考点关键词： 求助
考点揭秘 求助信是应用文的一种，用于当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种 书信。通常包括三部分内容: 首段：点明目的，自我介绍，提出要求。 主体段落：列举自己所遇到的困难、请求对方帮助。 尾段：表达感激，请求尽快答复。 时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第一段 写给机构，需自我介绍。 写给友人或师长，需寒暄问候，再写出求助目的。
第二段 详述问题，提出要求。
第三段 表达感谢并期望得到回复。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助
3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助
4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题
5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事
7.make preparations for.…为某事做准备
9.put...in use 学以致用
10.let sb. down 让某人失望
11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧
12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事
13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事
14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导
15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing to turn to you for help.
我信心向你寻求帮助
I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我别无选择只能向你求助
I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/ come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙,因为我正在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。
I am eager to get your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
5. The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.
我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
What bothers me is that I am a at loss / have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
让我困扰的是，我不知道如何回顾我自己在家里学到的东西。
2. Faced with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
面对这个难题，我只得向你求助.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
如果你能给我一些建议，我将不胜感激。
4. I would be more than happy if you could...
如果你能...我将非常高兴......
5. First and foremost, I have great difficulty in doing sth.
首先最重要的是，我做...有着很大的困难
6. Additionally, I find it's too challenging for me to do sth.
此外，我发现做...对我来说挑战太大
Last but certainly not least, doing sth is a big headache for me.
最后但同样重要的是，做...让我很头疼一、夺人眼球开头句(开篇表意)
8. I have much trouble in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.
我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼，
I am stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have
organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似的活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
I feel greatly stressed, so would you be so kind enough to give me some advice on how to
relieve stress.
我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗
Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could...
得知你在组织歌剧表演方面有丰富的经验，我想知道你是否可以。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Thanks for your kind consideration.
谢谢你的友好考虑。
I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
我期待着最早收到你的来信。
3. I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.
如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题,我将不胜感激.
4. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢你及时的帮助。
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance instructions.
如果你能给我一些指导,我将不胜感激。
Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me.
我希望，你可以提供给我及时善良的帮助。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
My name is _____________. I’m writing ______________________.(表明写信目的)
Faced with _____________（点明困难）, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ______________（恳请帮助一） In the meanwhile, I beg you to ________________ in order that____________________（求助理由）. In addition, I would like to _____________________（求助二）. I’m sure that I can ______________ with your help. （表明信心和期盼）It will be appreciated if you can help me to ______________________（表达感谢）.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
【2020 全国III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答题思路】
第一段：开头：礼貌称呼外教，表明写信目的是请求指导短剧，点明与同学改编自英语课文 。
第二段：剧情简介：简洁概括短剧核心情节，包括故事背景、主要人物及关键冲突或发展。
指导内容：从英语表达准确性、表演技巧、剧情连贯性等方面提出需要指导的点 。
商定时间地点：给出几个自己方便的时间选项，询问外教何时何地指导合适 。
第三段：结尾：表达感谢与期待回复。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.
Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【2016·新课标卷I】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答题思路】
开头：称呼后，表明写信目的，即请外教帮忙修改申请材料。
正文：说明材料是用于外贸公司兼职申请，强调其重要性。提及申请材料包括申请书和简历，重点请外教从文字表达、语法准确性及格式规范方面修改。
结尾：表达感激之情，询问大概完成修改的时间，并期待回复。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan （写信告诉你我的计划）for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor（给以帮助）.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job（做兼职） in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to（是否要注意什么）. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help（希望你能帮助我）. I will be very grateful（非常感激） if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply（期望得到你的回复）. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【福建省福州市连江一中等四校2024-2025学年高三12月联考】假定你是学校科学社团负责人李华，下月社团将举行“科技融入梦想” (Integration of Technology into Dreams) 科学节活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，请他就活动方案提出意见，内容包括：
介绍方案；
(2)征询意见。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：点明写信目的，表明希望 Chris 对社团科学节活动方案提意见。
body：
介绍方案：简述活动主题 “科技融入梦想”，阐述活动形式，如科技展览、科普讲座、创意竞赛等，并介绍各环节内容，如展览展示的科技成果、讲座主题、竞赛规则等。
征询意见：诚恳请求 Chris 从活动吸引力、内容合理性、形式创新性等方面提出看法，期待他指出不足与改进方向。
结尾：表达对他帮助的期待与感谢。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. Aiming to spark students’ interest in science and foster their creativity, our school’s Science Club is organizing a science festival themed “Integration of Technology into Dreams” next month. I’m writing to seek your advice on the plan for the festival.
As scheduled, the festival will offer a rich blend of activities, ranging from expert lectures, interactive seminars, robotic showcase to collaboration on creative designs. The festival will kick off with a lecture delivered by a renowned scientist, whose remarkable insights are sure to encourage the participants to contribute innovative ideas. Following that, AI enthusiasts from the club will also share their original designs to make the festival more enjoyable and inspiring.
Given your experience and keen eye for innovation, we are eager to receive your feedback on the plan. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【广西部分市2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，你班上周进行了英语单词检测，你的成绩不理想。请就此给你的外国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，向他请教记单词的方法，内容包括：
1. 情况介绍；
2. 提出请求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
【湖北省腾云联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华，校英语广播站新开了“My Ideal Major”的栏目，为听众提供相关建议。请给栏目组写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你选择专业的困惑；
2.你期望得到的帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【广东广雅中学花都校区2024-2025学年高三上学期9月测试】假定你是高二学生李华，开学已经一个多月，对于高三生活有一些困惑，请你写一封邮件给 21 世纪报 Teens’ World 栏目主编 Max，向他求助。内容包括：
1. 你的困惑；
2. 请求帮助。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Passage 4
【湖北省随州市曾都区某校2024-2025学年高三上学期7月月考】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Evans,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
Passage 5
【广东省江门市第一中学2023-2024学年高三上学期10月月考】假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评。请你用英语给外教Sam写一封信，请求他帮你当面批改书评，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍阅读活动
2. 提出请求并提议见面时间。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam，
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 6
【福建省福州市2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次质量检测】假设你是李华，刚进人高三，在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.说明困难；
2.寻求帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students.
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Yours sincerely;
LiHua
Passage 7
【河北省保定市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末】假定你是李华，你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
【福建省福州市长乐第一中学2023-3024学年高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，高三学习任务繁重，但你却沉溺于智能手机。你尝试了一些不看手机的方法但都不奏效。请给你的美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；2. 你的困境；3. 征求建议。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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Passage 9
【重庆市第八中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假如你是李华，你将于近期前往悉尼大学（the University of Sydney）进行为期一年的学习，计划在当地租房。请用英文给笔友Martin写一封邮件，向他咨询相关情况。邮件内容包括：
1. 写明事由；
2. 询问情况；
3. 期待见面。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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