模板13 祝贺信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
祝贺信
考点关键词： 祝贺
考点揭秘 祝贺/祝福信是指在日常生活中，你得知同学或朋友考试取得好成绩、竞赛获奖、考上大学等或过新年、重大及特殊节日时，给对方祝贺/祝福的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然和亲切。通常包括以下内容：说明事由并表明自己的衷心祝贺→展开评论事件，赞扬被祝贺人过去的努力及优点等→表达自己的祝愿。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.congratulate sb. on.… 祝贺某人……
2. express/send my sincere congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人送上我诚挚的祝贺
3. give/offer my congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人表示祝贺
4. Congratulations on your success. 祝贺你的成功。
5. wish you success in… 祝你成功
6.Have the opportunity to do sth. 有机会做某事
7. succeed in doing sth./be successful in doing sth. 在……中获得成功
8. be proud of. ./take pride in… 自豪，以……为骄傲
9. Practice doing sth. every day 每天练习做某事
10. Win the first place 赢得第一名
11. come true 实现，成真
12. achieve one’s dreams 实现某人的梦想
13. be of great help/benefit 有很大的帮助／好处
14.witness your success 见证你的成功
15. Everything comes to him who waits. 功夫不负有心人。
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
1.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.
我写信祝贺你的英语演讲比赛获得第一名。
2. Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.
祝贺你高考成功。
3. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future.
请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。
4. We are all proud of the great achievements you have made.
我们为你已取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。
5.1 feel very happy for your dream has come true.
我很高兴你终于梦想成真了。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1.In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person.
在我看来，你努力工作，除此之外，你是个很聪明的人。
2.1 know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.
我知道当初你不擅长中文。然而你每天都练习说中文。
3.I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you.
我相信你的父母为你感到非常自豪。
4. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.
你赢得了比赛，对我不足为奇。
5.1 just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success.
我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。
6. You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.
你不知道当我听到这个好消息是多么兴奋。
7. As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded.
俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1.Sincere congratulations to you again!
再次真诚地祝贺你！
2.1 hope your future will be glorious.
我希望你的未来是是辉煌的。
3. Wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future.
祝你在大学取得更大的成功，为未来的家乡服务。
4. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
你能与我分享你是如何提高英语口语的吗？你的经验将有助于我的学习。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely
Lihua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that .
May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely
Lihua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear_____________,
Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________ in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【广东省六校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】假定你是李华、新西兰交换生Tim的画作入选了你校学生会举办的“我眼中的大美中国” (Beautiful China in My Eyes)主题画展。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括:
(1)表达祝贺;
(2)简评其作品。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答题思路】
开头：表明身份并迅速切入主题，对 Tim 画作入选主题画展表示热烈祝贺。
主体：从作品内容、色彩运用、情感表达等方面简评其作品。比如可能通过独特视角展现中国美景，色彩鲜明体现中国特色等。
结尾：再次肯定作品，表达对 Tim 后续创作的期待。
Dear Tim,
We have just chosen twelve paintings as part of the exhibition on the theme of “The Beauty of China.” I’m writing to inform you that your painting is among the selected ones.
Your painting mainly focuses on the big changes that have taken place in China in the past decades. Not only do you show your love for China, but you also show your talent and skills in your painting. There’s no doubt that it has been highly thought of by all the judges.
Congratulations to you again. I anticipate that you’ll create more wonderful paintings about China in your spare time.
Yours.
Li Hua
【2024届重庆市荣昌仁义中学校高三下学期5月模拟预测】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 请教学习方法；
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：开篇点明身份，迅速切入主题，向 Peter 表达诚挚的祝贺，强调他取得到中国留学资格这一成就的不易与出色。
中间：表明自己对他优异成绩的钦佩，进而诚恳地请教学习方法，比如询问应对考试的复习技巧、日常学习的时间管理等。
结尾：表达对 Peter 即将来到中国的期待，憧憬在中国与他见面交流，畅想见面后的场景等。
Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【重庆市部分中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假如你是李华，你正在主持学校英文配音大赛(English Dubbing Contest)的颁奖活动，请为获得第一名的Gary 团队的配音表演写一则颁奖词，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.获奖原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear all,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
【福建省名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试】假定你是李华，英国交换生Chris参加你校举办的“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛，获得了一等奖。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺；
(2)你对作品的看法。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
【山西大学附属中学校2024~2025学年高三上学期8月开学考试】假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.适当添加细节。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
【2024届山西省运城中学普通高等学校招生全国统一考试模拟试题（四）】假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1.向他表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的付出。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 5
【云南师范大学附属中学2023-2024学年高三第七次月考（含听力）】假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Christ最近被北京大学录取了。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 你的感想；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Christ,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 6
【山东省百师联盟2023-2024学年高一下学期6月月考】假定你是某国际学校高一学生李华，你的新西兰同学 Brenda在主题为“Diverse Culture”的演讲比赛中获得了第一名。请你给她写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1.祝贺演讲成功；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Brenda,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)模板13 祝贺信
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
祝贺信
考点关键词： 祝贺
考点揭秘 祝贺/祝福信是指在日常生活中，你得知同学或朋友考试取得好成绩、竞赛获奖、考上大学等或过新年、重大及特殊节日时，给对方祝贺/祝福的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然和亲切。通常包括以下内容：说明事由并表明自己的衷心祝贺→展开评论事件，赞扬被祝贺人过去的努力及优点等→表达自己的祝愿。
模板01 满分必备词块
1.congratulate sb. on.… 祝贺某人……
2. express/send my sincere congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人送上我诚挚的祝贺
3. give/offer my congratulations to sb. on sth. 为某事向某人表示祝贺
4. Congratulations on your success. 祝贺你的成功。
5. wish you success in… 祝你成功
6.Have the opportunity to do sth. 有机会做某事
7. succeed in doing sth./be successful in doing sth. 在……中获得成功
8. be proud of. ./take pride in… 自豪，以……为骄傲
9. Practice doing sth. every day 每天练习做某事
10. Win the first place 赢得第一名
11. come true 实现，成真
12. achieve one’s dreams 实现某人的梦想
13. be of great help/benefit 有很大的帮助／好处
14.witness your success 见证你的成功
15. Everything comes to him who waits. 功夫不负有心人。
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
1.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.
我写信祝贺你的英语演讲比赛获得第一名。
2. Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.
祝贺你高考成功。
3. Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future.
请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。
4. We are all proud of the great achievements you have made.
我们为你已取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。
5.1 feel very happy for your dream has come true.
我很高兴你终于梦想成真了。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1.In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person.
在我看来，你努力工作，除此之外，你是个很聪明的人。
2.1 know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.
我知道当初你不擅长中文。然而你每天都练习说中文。
3.I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you.
我相信你的父母为你感到非常自豪。
4. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.
你赢得了比赛，对我不足为奇。
5.1 just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success.
我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。
6. You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.
你不知道当我听到这个好消息是多么兴奋。
7. As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded.
俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1.Sincere congratulations to you again!
再次真诚地祝贺你！
2.1 hope your future will be glorious.
我希望你的未来是是辉煌的。
3. Wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future.
祝你在大学取得更大的成功，为未来的家乡服务。
4. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
你能与我分享你是如何提高英语口语的吗？你的经验将有助于我的学习。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. You must be ______. And I feel very happy for you. ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）. Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）.
My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely
Lihua
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear_____________,
Congratulations on your _______ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to ________ . What’s more, I also believe that .
May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely
Lihua
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear_____________,
Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________ in every respect. Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【广东省六校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】假定你是李华、新西兰交换生Tim的画作入选了你校学生会举办的“我眼中的大美中国” (Beautiful China in My Eyes)主题画展。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括:
(1)表达祝贺;
(2)简评其作品。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答题思路】
开头：表明身份并迅速切入主题，对 Tim 画作入选主题画展表示热烈祝贺。
主体：从作品内容、色彩运用、情感表达等方面简评其作品。比如可能通过独特视角展现中国美景，色彩鲜明体现中国特色等。
结尾：再次肯定作品，表达对 Tim 后续创作的期待。
Dear Tim,
We have just chosen twelve paintings as part of the exhibition on the theme of “The Beauty of China.” I’m writing to inform you that your painting is among the selected ones.
Your painting mainly focuses on the big changes that have taken place in China in the past decades. Not only do you show your love for China, but you also show your talent and skills in your painting. There’s no doubt that it has been highly thought of by all the judges.
Congratulations to you again. I anticipate that you’ll create more wonderful paintings about China in your spare time.
Yours.
Li Hua
【2024届重庆市荣昌仁义中学校高三下学期5月模拟预测】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 请教学习方法；
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头：开篇点明身份，迅速切入主题，向 Peter 表达诚挚的祝贺，强调他取得到中国留学资格这一成就的不易与出色。
中间：表明自己对他优异成绩的钦佩，进而诚恳地请教学习方法，比如询问应对考试的复习技巧、日常学习的时间管理等。
结尾：表达对 Peter 即将来到中国的期待，憧憬在中国与他见面交流，畅想见面后的场景等。
Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【重庆市部分中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假如你是李华，你正在主持学校英文配音大赛(English Dubbing Contest)的颁奖活动，请为获得第一名的Gary 团队的配音表演写一则颁奖词，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.获奖原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear all,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear all,
I feel honored to announce that the first prize of the English Dubbing Contest goes to Gary and his outstanding team. Congratulations!
Gary’s team has truly fascinated us with their exceptional dubbing skills. Their voices were not only expressive but also perfectly matched the emotions of the original actors. From start to finish, the performance was powerful enough to transport the audience to the scene, reminding us of their excellence in the dubbing.
Congratulations to their team again! Let’s now welcome them to the stage and show our sincere applause for them!
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生为获得第一名的Gary团队的配音表演写一则颁奖词。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
真诚的：sincere→genuine
荣幸的：honored→privileged
优秀的：outstanding→excellent/brilliant
宣布：announce→make an announcement
2.句式拓展：
改为倒装句
原句：Their voices were not only expressive but also perfectly matched the emotions of the original actors.
拓展句：Not only were their voices expressive but also they perfectly matched the emotions of the original actors.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
From start to finish, the performance was powerful enough to transport the audience to the scene, reminding us of their excellence in the dubbing.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
I feel honored to announce that the first prize of the English Dubbing Contest goes to Gary and his outstanding team.(运用了that引导宾语从句。)
Passage 2
【福建省名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试】假定你是李华，英国交换生Chris参加你校举办的“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛，获得了一等奖。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺；
(2)你对作品的看法。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to congratulate you on winning first prize in the “Beautiful China in My Eyes” short video competition!
Your video really stood out. It not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here. Besides, your impressive use of camera angles, lighting, and composition creates a visually stunning experience that transports viewers to the heart of China.
Once again, congratulations on this well-deserved win! I am looking forward to seeing more of your creative works in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Chris写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛中获得一等奖。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
突出：stand out→stick out/be outstanding
本质：essence→nature
融合：blend→combine
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为复合句
原句：Your video really stood out. It not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here.
拓展句：Your video really stood out, which not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to congratulate you on winning first prize in the “Beautiful China in My Eyes” short video competition!(使用了不定式作目的状语、动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Besides, your impressive use of camera angles, lighting, and composition creates a visually stunning experience that transports viewers to the heart of China. (使用了that引导定语从句)
Passage 3
【山西大学附属中学校2024~2025学年高三上学期8月开学考试】假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.适当添加细节。
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【答案】Dear Li Lei,
Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise that you stood out in the big exam. Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. Additionally, your selfless help wins you recognition and trust from both your teachers and classmates. You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school.
Congratulations again! Wait for you to share your experience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。要求考生用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出色的：excellent→outstanding
表达：convey→extend
因为：due to→because of
此外：additionally→besides
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school.
拓展句：Since you set me a good example, could you offer me some advice on time management in school
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. (运用了倒装句)
Passage 4
【2024届山西省运城中学普通高等学校招生全国统一考试模拟试题（四）】假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1.向他表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的付出。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖，内容包括：向他表示祝贺，肯定他的付出。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
全身心投入：dedication→commitment
证明：testament→proof
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
拓展句：Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引导宾语从句)
Passage 5
【云南师范大学附属中学2023-2024学年高三第七次月考（含听力）】假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Christ最近被北京大学录取了。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 你的感想；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Christ,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Christ,
Learning the good news that you have been admitted to Beijing University, I am offering my sincerest congratulations on your success.
The past few years has witnessed your great enthusiasm for Chinese learning and the tireless efforts you have put in achieving your goal. From my perspective, this admission is a reward that you richly deserve and a testament to the saying “no pains, no gains”. Beijing University is the dream university for countless students, where not only can you learn from distinguished professors, but you will also be accompanied by the most brilliant peers.
I wish you greater achievements in the future and I am looking forward to seeing you in China.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Christ写一封信，关于对方被北京大学录取表示祝贺，说明自己的感想，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
热情：enthusiasm→zest
观点：perspective→point of view
聪明的：brilliant→intelligent
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I wish you greater achievements in the future and I am looking forward to seeing you in China.
拓展句：I wish you greater achievements in the future and what I am looking forward to is to see you in China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning the good news that you have been admitted to Beijing University, I am offering my sincerest congratulations on your success. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Beijing University is the dream university for countless students, where not only can you learn from distinguished professors, but you will also be accompanied by the most brilliant peers. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 6
【山东省百师联盟2023-2024学年高一下学期6月月考】假定你是某国际学校高一学生李华，你的新西兰同学 Brenda在主题为“Diverse Culture”的演讲比赛中获得了第一名。请你给她写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1.祝贺演讲成功；
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Brenda,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brenda,
Congratulations on winning the first prize in the “Diverse Culture” speech contest! I am so proud of you and your amazing achievement. Your speech was both powerful and educational, and it truly thought highly of the beauty of different cultures coming together.
Listening to your speech made me realize the importance of welcoming diversity and understanding each other's cultures. It was truly inspiring to see you speak with such confidence on such an important topic.
Keep up the perfect work, Brenda! I am confident that you will continue to stand out in everything you do.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Brenda写一封邮件，祝贺她在主题为“Diverse Culture”的演讲比赛中获得了第一名。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲：speech→lecture
比赛：contest→competition
有教育意义的：educational→instructional
以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Your speech was both powerful and educational, and it truly thought highly of the beauty of different cultures coming together.
拓展句：Your speech was both powerful and educational, which truly thought highly of the beauty of different cultures coming together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am confident that you will continue to stand out in everything you do. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Listening to your speech made me realize the importance of welcoming diversity and understanding each other's cultures. (运用了动名词短语Listening to作主语)
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