中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
第一部分 应用文写作
第一讲写好8个句式 奠定语言基础
英语中最基本的句型有八种,其他各种句型都是由这八种基本句型演化而成。
1.主语+谓语 (SV)
Accidents will happen.天有不测风云。
2.主语+谓语+状语(SVA)
Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
3.主语+系动词+表语(SVP)
A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。
4.主语+谓语+宾语(SVO)
A heavy snow promises a good harvest.
瑞雪兆丰年。
5.主语+谓语+宾语+状语(SVOA)
A man may dig his grave with his teeth.
祸从口出。
6.主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语 (SVIODO)
A fool may give a wise man counsel.
愚者千虑,必有一得。
7.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语(SVOC)
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
8.存现句(There be...)
Where there is a will,there is a way.
有志者,事竟成。
雕词琢句 完成句子
1.(2024新课标Ⅰ卷) I (选择了画一幅美丽的风景画)with blooming flowers,a calm lake,and a clear blue sky.
2.(2024新课标Ⅰ卷) Creating artwork in the park was (摆脱平常课堂环境的一次令人耳目一新的休息).
3.(2023全国甲卷) Xu .(经常徒步旅行,探索大自然).
4.(2023全国乙卷)During the learning process,I (遇到困难)like understanding manual settings and capturing the perfect shot.
5.(2023全国乙卷)Their advice and encouragement (帮助我克服了挑战).
6.(2022新高考Ⅰ卷) (他犹豫了一下)and then said he had decided not to run.
7.(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” (他不安地解释道).
8.(2022全国乙卷) (有18%的学生) choosing to read books.
9.(2022全国甲卷)As we all know, (有一些海洋) that have been polluted.
10.(2021天津6月卷改编)I was trying to place an order on your website,but (我失败了).
第二讲用好3种技法 提升写作技能
技法一巧用4类更亮眼的高频词汇—— 打造吸引阅卷老师的靓点
大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写作时恰当得体地使用学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉,从而提高文章的得分档次。
策略1 具体化词汇优先(多用具体生动的表达代替模糊宽泛的表达)
very extremely极其;especially尤其;particularly特别,尤其;awfully非常;greatly非常,大大地;highly非常;badly非常;terribly非常;more than非常
①(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)I’d greatly appreciate it if you could take my proposals into account.
如果您能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。
happy delighted快乐的;cheerful快乐的;joyful快乐的;pleased高兴的;enjoyable令人愉悦的
②He was delighted in sharing his love of birds with children.
他喜欢与孩子们分享他对鸟类的热爱。
important vital至关重要的;significant意义重大的;essential必不可少的;key关键的;fundamental根本的;primary首要的;crucial至关重要的;be of great importance/significance至关重要
③(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)Undoubtedly,I believe your arrival will be of great significance to our show.
毋庸置疑,我相信你的到来将对我们的演出有重大意义。
beautiful attractive有吸引力的;appealing有吸引力的;elegant优美的;charming迷人的
④(2025辽宁抚顺模拟)Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment,the Student Union organized the activity,which took place last Saturday afternoon.
为了让我们的学校更有吸引力,创造一个更好的环境,学生会组织了这次活动,活动于上周六下午举行。
difficult/ hard tough艰难的,棘手的;challenging具有挑战性的;complex复杂的,难以理解的;puzzling/confusing令人困惑的;complicated复杂的;tricky难对付的
⑤(2022全国甲卷)Though challenging/tough the task seems,we can do our part to protect the ocean against further pollution.
尽管任务看起来很艰巨,但我们可以尽自己的一份力量来保护海洋免受进一步的污染。
like/enjoy/love cherish/treasure珍视,珍爱;be keen on对……着迷;be crazy about热衷于;be fond of/have a taste for/have a passion/go in for喜爱;show great interest in对……很感兴趣
⑥(2021全国甲卷)Knowing you are keen on traditional Chinese culture,I hold the firm belief that you can help me out.
知道你热爱中国传统文化,我深信你能帮到我的。
策略2 高级词和短语优先(多用高年级学到的准确生动的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇,以吸引阅卷老师)
1.book→reserve 预订
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
尽快回复,我们可以为我们的项目预留一个房间。
2.should→be supposed to 应该,理应;try to do→make efforts to do 努力做
We are supposed to exercise our self-discipline and make efforts to learn English well with various methods.
我们应锻炼自律,努力用各种方法学好英语。
3.finally→eventually/in the end 最后;get→gain/acquire 得到;many→various 许多;know→have a good knowledge of 知道
Eventually,all of us not only gained various fresh and tasty fruits,but also had a good knowledge of green food.
最后,我们不仅收获了各种新鲜可口的水果,还对绿色食品有了很好的了解。
4.understand→have a better understanding of 理解
It was through the exhibition that I had a better understanding of traditional Chinese painting.
通过这次展览,我更加了解了传统中国画。
5.a lot of→a number of/a wide range of 许多;about→ concerning/related to 关于
There is a wide range of free resources concerning/related to English on the Internet.
网上有许多与英语相关的免费资源。
雕词琢句 用高级词汇替换加黑词汇
1.(2024全国甲卷)Firstly,shared bicycles have appeared as a symbol of urban mobility,offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
→ ,shared bicycles have as a symbol of urban mobility,offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
2.(2023全国甲卷)Deeply encouraged,our young generation firmly believe that we should carry forward the essence of Confucianism and contribute to building a shared future for all human beings.
→Deeply ,our young generation that we should carry forward the essence of Confucianism and contribute to building a shared future for all human beings.
3.(2022全国甲卷)Not only does the ocean offer us enough food,but it also keeps the balance of nature.Thus,it is very important to protect the ocean.
→Not only does the ocean offer us food,but it also the balance of nature.Thus,it is to protect the ocean.
4.(2022全国乙卷)As is shown by the figures of the chart,thanks to modern technology,many ways are available for students to polish their English.
→As is shown by the figures of the chart,thanks to modern technology, ways are available for students to polish their English.
5.(2022全国甲卷)It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans,which play an important part in global ecosystem.
→It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans,which play a part in global ecosystem.
6.Besides,essays contributed should be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
→Besides,essays contributed be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
技法二必背20个应用文满分好句——让写作高人一筹
第1组 非谓语动词短语开篇“写信背景+写信目的”
句式1 Learning/Knowing/Delighted to learn/know that...,I’m writing to+(invite,recommend...等书信体功能词汇) 得知/很高兴得知……我写信……
[微解] 该句式中,I’m writing to 可根据实际情况替换为I’d like to 或I can hardly wait to...
佳句 Learning that you have a passion for table tennis,I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. 得知你喜欢乒乓球,我写信诚挚地邀请你参加我们学校乒乓球队。 运用 Learning that you are interested in the Chinese Culture Study Tour,I’m more than delighted to introduce some relevant information. 得知你对中国文化游学感兴趣,我很高兴向你介绍一些相关信息。
第2组 用同位语、非限制性定语从句解释重点内容
句式2 名词,who/which/where...引导的定语从句或同位语
[微解] 同位语可以是名词短语或同位语从句
佳句 ①I recommend that you learn Tang Poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by the Chinese. 我建议你学唐诗,唐诗反映了中国的传统文化,并深受中国人的喜爱。 ②I am Li Hua,a member of the school team,eager for your help. 我是李华,是校队的一员,渴望得到你的帮助。 运用 ①(2024山东名校大联盟三模)He expressed his sincere appreciation to all the people who had helped him and his family. 他对所有帮助过他和他的家人的人表示真诚的感谢。 ②I’m Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest. 我是李华,学生会主席。我写信是想邀请你做我们英语演讲比赛的评委。
第3组 带主题、带特色的活动的表达
句式3 名词+themed/with the theme of...+谓语(take place/be held/be scheduled等)
[微解] 在该组句式中,谓语通常是表“举行”的动词(短语)
佳句 Aware of your enthusiasm for the class event themed “Healthy eyes,Healthy life”,I’m writing to inform you of some relevant information. 意识到你对以“健康眼睛,健康生活”为主题的课堂活动的热情,我写信告诉你一些相关信息。 运用 I feel privileged to give you a brief introduction to the activity themed“showing respect for our parents” held in our school. 我很荣幸地向大家简短地介绍一下我们学校举办的“尊重父母”的主题活动。
句式4 名词,featuring/focusing on...,will take place/be held/organized/launched等
佳句 An art exhibition,featuring Chinese paper-cutting,will take place in the gallery hall. 一场以中国剪纸为特色的艺术展览将在画廊大厅举行。 运用 An online interview program mainly focusing on the lives of middle school students will be held in our school next week. 下周,我们学校将举办一场以关注中学生生活为主要内容的在线访谈节目。
第4组 介词短语/非谓语动词/非限制性定语从句介绍目的
句式5 With the aim/intention/purpose of doing...,SVO...
[微解] 介词短语表达目的最直接简要
佳句 With the aim of making people live a greener life,a voluntary activity called “Building a Green World”was organized by our school. 为了让人们过上更绿色的生活,我们学校组织了一个名为“建设绿色世界”的志愿活动。 运用 (2024山东日照三模)Last week,our school organized a handcraft making activity,with the aim/purpose of promoting recycling and environmental protection. 上周,我们学校组织了一次手工制作活动,目的是促进循环利用和环境保护。
句式6 Aimed at doing/Intended to do.../Aiming to do...,SVO或SVO+aimed at doing/intended to do.../aiming to do...
[微解] 该句式中,非谓语动词分别作状语和定语
佳句 Aiming to enrich us students’ after-class activities and arouse our affection for our school,we will hold the contest with the theme of“Life on Campus”in the school lecture hall at 2 p.m.next Saturday. 为了丰富我们学生的课外活动,唤起我们对学校的情感,以“校园生活”为主题的比赛将于下周六下午两点在校报告厅举行。 运用 Aimed at promoting parent-child relationship and encouraging independence in students,an activity with the theme of “sharing housework in the family” was held by the Student Union. 为促进亲子关系、鼓励学生独立,学生会举办了一个主题为“分担家务”的活动。
句式7 SVO,the purpose/aim/goal of which+be to do 或 SVO,which is intended to do.../is aimed at doing...
[微解] 该句式也可用whose purpose/aim/goal+be+to do
佳句 The aim of the project is to donate books to a primary school in a small village.Meanwhile,it’s also intended to protect the environment by recycling old books. 这个项目的目的是向一个小村庄的小学捐赠书籍。同时,它还旨在通过回收旧书来保护环境。 运用 I participated in a volunteer activity organized by the school,the aim of which is to/which is intended to beautify our city and promote people’s awareness of environmental protection. 我参加了学校组织的志愿者活动,活动目的是美化我们的城市,提高人们的环保意识。
第5组 用于举例/列举内容的非谓语动词结构
句式8 SVO,ranging from...to.../consisting of...and/as well as...
[微解] 用于介绍内容时,也可用介词短语such as
佳句 Problems have arisen in our campus,ranging from huge amounts of food waste to excessive use of water. 我们的校园出现很多问题,从大量的食物浪费到过度用水都有。 运用 (2024山东枣庄二模)In addition,all kinds of English activities will be held regularly,such as English Speech Competition,English Debate Contest and so on. 此外,还会定期举办各种英语活动,如英语演讲比赛、英语辩论赛等。
第6组 用非谓语动词或复合句说明行为的原因或结果
句式9 SVO,making it easy/possible/convenient to do...
[微解] 该句式中,it为形式宾语,making为动词-ing形式作结果状语
佳句 You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of the Tang Dynasty,making it easy for you to go through the class. 上课之前,你最好准备充分并且对唐朝历史有一个简单的了解,这会让你上起课来更容易。 运用 The Internet has extended to the small village,making it convenient for people to do online shopping now. 小村庄已连上互联网,现在人们在网上购物很方便。
句式10 SVO,enabling/allowing/causing等动词-ing形式/only to do...
[微解] 动词-ing形式表示自然而然的结果,only to do...表示出乎意料的结果
佳句 Your instruction and encouragement brought out the enormous potential in me,enabling me to make remarkable progress. 您的教导和鼓励激发了我巨大的潜能,使我取得了显著的进步。 运用 I have developed a positive attitude,allowing me to look at things positively no matter what happens. 我培养了一种积极的态度,无论发生什么,我都能积极地看待一切。
句式11 SVO+so that/in order that...结果状语从句
佳句 We’d be grateful if you could give us some comments and guidance after the game so that we can sharpen our skills further. 如果赛后你能给我们一些点评和指导,以便我们进一步提高我们的技能,我们将不胜感激。 运用 (2024辽宁普通高中二模)You need to be physically active so that you can keep fit and healthy and,more importantly,more energetic. 你需要积极锻炼身体,这样你才能保持健康,更重要的是,更有活力。
句式12 主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that...
[微解] 该句式倒装形式为 so+adj./adv.+系动词/助动词/情态动词+that...
佳句 All the cultures are so fascinating that I wonder which is the most attractive to foreign friends. 所有这些文化都很吸引人,我想知道哪一个对外国朋友最有吸引力。 运用 So breathtaking was the scenery that we all stopped to admire for a long time. 景色非常引人入胜,我们都驻足欣赏了很久。(倒装)
第7组 not only...but also...等并列结构最简单好用
句式13 SVO and/but SVO
[微解] 该结构中,and/but连接的可以是词与词或句与句
佳句 I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. 我也想知道这门课我要付多少钱,是否包括住宿费。 运用 (2024河北石家庄部分名校一调)At first,it was challenging to do so,but I started by setting small goals and gradually increased my reading time. 起初,这样做很有挑战性,但我从设定小目标开始,逐渐增加了阅读时间。
句式14 主语+not only+谓语,but also...或Not only+系动词/助动词/情态动词+主语+剩下的谓语部分+but (also)...
[微解] 应用文中用not only...but also 说明事件或活动等的评价
佳句 (2024新课标Ⅰ卷) It was a unique experience to create art under the open sky,because I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity. 在露天环境下创作艺术是一种独特的体验,因为我不仅可以与大自然亲密接触,还可以充分表达我的创造力。 运用 The contest turns out to be a big hit.Not only does it provide a platform for students to showcase their talent but it also further stimulates their eagerness to get involved in the coming competition. 这次比赛大受欢迎。它不仅为学生提供了一个展示才华的平台,而且进一步激发了他们参与即将到来的比赛的热情。
第8组 by或through说明行为方式
句式15 SVO+by doing sth/through sth
[微解] by doing sth 或through+n.,表方式
佳句 We may encounter other like-minded people through running,making us more sociable. 通过跑步,我们可能会遇到其他志同道合的人,使我们更善于交际。 运用 (2024福建4月联合测评)Firstly,everyone will have the chance to show their understanding of the book by participating in the free discussions. 首先,每个人都有机会通过参加自由讨论来展示他们对这本书的理解。
句式16 Only by doing.../through+n./状语从句+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+剩下的谓语部分
佳句 Only by making use of recyclable garbage will we be able to save resources. 只有利用可回收垃圾,我们才能节约资源。 运用 (2022全国甲卷)It is my firm belief that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow. 我坚信,只有大家共同努力,我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
第9组 感谢信或祝贺信中必用的虚拟语气和强调句
句式17 But for/Without/Had it not been for+名词,主语+would/could not have done...没有……,……就不会……
[微解] 该句式可升级为 SVO,without which sb/sth could/would not have done...
佳句 I’d like to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your selfless assistance during the past years.But for/Without you,I would not have been admitted to my university. 对您多年来的无私帮助,我表示衷心的感谢。如果不是您,我不会被我的大学录取。 运用 You taught me with great patience and practical methods,without which my English would not have improved so much. 您用极大的耐心和实用的方法教我,没有这些,我的英语不可能有这么大的进步。
句式18 It is/was...that/who...
[微解] 强调人可以用who/that,强调其他都用that
佳句 It was her perseverance and selfless devotion that strengthened my resolve. 是她的坚韧不拔和无私奉献坚定了我的决心。 运用 It is the language and culture courses that make the university famous. 是语言和文化课程使这所大学出名。
第10组 灵活好用的引入观点的从句
句式19 There is no doubt that.../There is no denying that.../No wonder that...毫无疑问……/不可否认……/难怪……
[微解] There is no doubt that句式可以转换为Undoubtedly,SVO
佳句 There is no doubt that being a qualified doctor is far from easy./Undoubtedly,being a qualified doctor is far from easy. 毫无疑问,成为一名合格的医生远非易事。 运用 (2022全国甲卷)There is no denying that we will make a difference to the marine environment with joint efforts. 不可否认,我们将共同努力,对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。
句式20 As is known/As sb put(s) it,SVO众所周知/正如某人所说,……
佳句 Just as an old saying goes,“He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.” 正如一句老话所说:“不到长城非好汉。” 运用 (2024黑龙江大庆二模)As is known to us,trees are very important not only to the environment but also to human beings. 众所周知,树木不仅对环境很重要,而且对人类也很重要。
雕词琢句 完成句子
1.(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)此外,一些学生可能有不同的熟练程度,这使得他们很难与他们的伙伴有效地练习。
Additionally,some students may have different levels of proficiency, .(非谓语动词)
2.为了提高对传统文化的意识,我们举办了冬至包饺子活动。
,we held an activity of making dumplings on Chinese winter solstice.(介词短语)
3.通过这项活动,我们不仅学会了如何植树,而且还更接近了自然。
Through this activity,not only ,but also we got much closer to nature.(倒装)
4.只有当你自己来中国体验春节时,你才能更好地了解春节。
Only when you come to China to experience the Spring Festival by yourself .(倒装)
5.(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)虽然大卫是最后一个完成比赛的,但正是他的毅力和决心深深打动了所有观众。
Although David was the last to finish, deeply moved all the audience.
技法三10类衔接过渡,铸就璀璨华章——让阅卷老师赞叹
高考阅卷老师表示,缺乏衔接过渡的文章,就好比一串断了线的珍珠,每个词句虽光彩夺目,拿出来却七零八落,不堪受用。成就美文不仅需要高级词汇,还需穿珠之线,这个线就是衔接过渡。
1.吸引眼球的段落起始过渡
过渡词 first of all,in the first place,to begin/start with,firstly,generally (speaking)
从句 as we know,as is known to us,as is shown in...,as is often the case,as a saying goes
①To begin with,sound effects,an important factor of a film,are actually often added after a scene has been shot.
首先,声音特效是一部电影的重要影响因素,它实际上是在拍完戏之后添加的。
②Everyone can play an active part in the campaign.First of all,we can try to use public transportation or travel on foot or by bike.
每个人都可以积极参加这次运动。首先,我们可以尝试使用公共交通工具或步行或骑自行车旅行。
2.条理分明的时序用语
表“现在;最近” nowadays,now,at present,currently,recently
表“首先,第一” first,firstly,to begin/start with,in the first place,first of all
表“后来,不久,然后” after,afterwards,later on,after that,after a while,before long,shortly after,soon
表“在此期间,同时” meanwhile,meantime,in the meantime,at the same time,while
表“最后” finally,lastly,in the end,eventually,at last
①In the end,I sincerely hope that you can have a 10-minute question-and-answer session.
最后,我真诚地希望你能有10分钟的问答环节。
②At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.
就在这时,我的父母回来了,他们非常惊讶地看到所有房间都很整洁,地板闪闪发亮。
3.层次分明的空间顺序
on the opposite side,in front of,in the center of,in the distance,in the middle of,at the back of,on/to the left/right,close to,next to,nearby,beyond等
Down the middle of the valley runs a clear,fast stream in which one may fish.In the lowland along the stream are the farmlands;beyond them is the grassland.Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains.
一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着,人们可以在溪水中钓鱼。沿溪而下,低地处是农田;越过农田是草原。第一层丘陵后是一座座大山。
4.第二、三个要点前的递进
besides,moreover,furthermore,what’s more,in addition,additionally,also,plus
apart from,as well as...,more importantly,last but not least,worse still,what’s worse,to make matters worse
① More importantly,I am willing to help others,so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.
更重要的是,我愿意帮助他人,所以我想在业余时间当一名志愿者。
②The car broke down when I was driving home from work,and what was worse,it was pouring with rain.
下班回家的路上我的汽车坏了,并且更糟糕的是,天还下着大雨。
5.峰回路转的转折表达法
连词/副词 however,but,yet,otherwise,instead,unfortunately
介词(短语) despite,in spite of,regardless of,rather than,instead of,on the other hand
让步状语从句 although,though,as,while,even if/though,no matter wh-/how...
①Do your work every day;otherwise,it will pile up.
今日事今日毕,否则事情会堆积如山。
②(2021新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写)Although/Though they were tired,the breakfast did taste delicious.
虽然他们很累,但是早餐确实美味极了。
6.过渡自然的比较和对比
比较 for one thing...for another,just as,similarly
对比 on the other hand,on the contrary,compared with/to,in comparison with,in contrast (to),instead,while,unlike,however,yet
For one thing,the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.For another,China enjoys a long history and rich culture.
其一,过去几十年的整体发展是如此惊人,以至于他们渴望了解中国正在发生的事情。其二,中国历史悠久而且文化丰富。
7.不人云亦云的因果过渡词
(1)让“因为”变得不简单
介词短语 as a result of,as a consequence of,due to,because of,owing to,on account of,thanks to
连词 since,for,as,now that,in that
借助从句 介词短语+名词性从句:owing/due to the fact that...;that is because...;定语从句(+动词短语):which results from/accounts for/makes for;the reason why...
Due to the fact that some students lack self-discipline,they’re more likely to play online games.
由于某些学生缺乏自律能力,他们更可能玩网络游戏。
(2)让“结果”不落俗套
衔接词 thus,therefore,consequently,as a result,as a consequence
非谓语 thus/therefore doing,end up doing,only/never to do
定语从句+短语/介词短语+定语从句 which results in/leads to/contributes to或as a result/consequence of which等
I eagerly unpacked the package,only to find a broken book in it.
我急切地打开包裹,结果只在里面发现一本破书。
8.多样表达解释和举例
解释说明 in fact,in this case,as a matter of fact,actually,to put it differently
举例 for example,for instance,such as
To put it differently,I will try my best to achieve my goal.
换言之,我会尽最大的努力实现我的目标。
9.用于表观点的过渡词
personally,in one’s opinion,in one’s view,from one’s point of view,as far as sb be concerned等
Personally,middle school students should not be allowed to take part-time jobs.
在我看来,不应该允许中学生做兼职工作。
10.锦上添花的总结用语
常用插入语 all in all,altogether,on the whole,in short/brief/general/conclusion,in a/one word,generally/briefly speaking,to conclude,to sum up,to put it simply等
三大从句和非谓语 利用三大从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)、非谓语动词等各种语法结构巧妙结尾
①As is stated above,online learning has both advantages and disadvantages.
综上所述,网络学习优缺点都有。
②Given your busy schedule,I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
在您百忙之中,如果您能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
雕词琢句 用恰当的过渡性词语完成或翻译句子
1.(2022全国甲卷) (在我看来),protecting the ocean is protecting ourselves.
2.(2022全国新高考Ⅰ卷)然而,他没有放弃,而是继续跑步。
3.(2022全国乙卷)总之,加强父母的指导很重要。
4.(2021全国乙卷)多亏互联网的普及,在线学习成为可能。
5.(2021全国乙卷) (此外),online learning needs more attention and self-discipline.
第三讲研习14种文体 高分不再是梦
一、 告知信、建议信、道歉信、感谢信
酷语背一背
(一)告知信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)It’s a pleasure for me to inform you of...
我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.
我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(4)I am quite willing to inform you of some relevant details.
我很愿意告诉你一些相关的细节。
(5)I’m so happy to know that...from your letter,so I’m writing to tell you some relevant details.
我很高兴从你的信中得知……,所以我写信告诉你一些相关的细节。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows.一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)...will take place between...and...,so we’d better...……将在……和……之间进行,所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...,including...,which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.包括……在内的多种多样有意义的活动将在……举办,这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)...is arranged to start from...,which will last...安排……从……开始,为期……
结尾锦上添花
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else,please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.
如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情,请尽管联系我/给我写信。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you./I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information.
我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don’t hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions.
如果你还有其他的问题,请尽管向我求助,不要犹豫。
(4)If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than delighted to offer my help/come to your assistance.
如果有什么我能为你做的,我将非常乐意提供帮助/来帮助你。
(二)建议信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I’m happy to receive your letter and know...
我很高兴收到你的信并了解到……
(2)I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于……的建议。下面是(我的)一些建议。
(3)I know you have trouble in...I am writing to give you some suggestions.
我知道你在……方面有困难。我写信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
(2)Another suggestion is that you should...
另一个建议是你应该……
(3)I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that you should...我强烈建议你……
(4)Personally,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动会是明智的。
(5)If you want...,...would be the best choice.
如果你想……,……将是最好的选择。
结尾锦上添花
(1)I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
(2)I hope you’ll soon feel better and carry on as normal.
我希望很快你能感觉好一些,像往常一样继续干。
(三)道歉信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I’m sorry to say that I cannot...我很抱歉地说我不能……
(2)I’d like to apologize to you for.../I would like to give you my apology for...我想向你道歉,因为……
(3)I am writing to apologize for...我写信是为……道歉。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)I hope that this does not...我希望这不会……
(2)I should have been able to...,but due to...,I have no choice but to...
我本应该能……,但由于……,我别无选择只好……
(3)The reason why I won’t be available at that time as planned is that I have to...
我不能按计划届时到场,因为我不得不……
(4)It would be very considerate of you to give me another chance to do sth.
你再给我一次机会做某事的话就太体贴了。
(5)I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time.If not,please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.
如果您能允许我另确定时间,我将不胜感激。如果不能,请提前告诉我最适合您的时间。
结尾锦上添花
(1)Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
我对所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
(2)I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。
(四)感谢信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对……的真诚感谢。
(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在这封信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
(3)Thank you so much for...you sent me.It’s one of the most wonderful...I have ever got.
非常感谢你给我寄来的……。这是我收到过的最好的……之一。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)Without your help,I would not have been...
没有你的帮助,我就不会成为……
(2)It is thanks to your help that I have made rapid progress in...
正是多亏了你的帮助,我在……方面有了飞速的进步。
(3)But for your help,I would not have made so much progress in...
要是没有你的帮助,我在……方面不会取得如此大的进步。
(4)Whenever I have difficulties in...,you are the one who I will turn to first.
每当我在……(方面)遇到困难时,你就是我首先要求助的人。
结尾锦上添花
(1)Your kindness and help will always be remembered by me.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
(2)Thanks again for your help and I’m sincerely looking forward to your coming.
再次感谢你的帮助,我真诚地期待你的到来。
美文赏一赏
——告知信
(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.Our art teacher took the class to a nearby park and moved the class into the embrace of nature. Our task was to create a work of our own inspired by the natural scenery.I painted the tranquility of the lake,the dancing shadow of the trees,and the small bridge and pedestrians in the distance.I seem to be integrated with nature and feel its vitality and rhythm. Through this art class,I not only have a deeper understanding of painting,but also cherish the opportunity to get in close contact with nature.I hope I can have the opportunity to participate in such activities again and continue to capture the beautiful moments in life with my brush. Yours, Li Hua
【赏析】第一段:开门见山,说明写信目的。使用连词and并列两个谓语动词,简洁明了。 第二段:主体部分,介绍作品。使用并列结构和短语be integrated with介绍作品内容。 第三段:邮件的结尾段落。使用not only...but also句式表达感想。
典题练一练
1.建议信
(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.道歉信
(2021北京改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
3.感谢信
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
二、 求助信、邀请信、申请信、推荐信
(一)求助信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I’m writing to ask for your help/seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor.
我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。
(2)Hearing you have much experience in...,I am writing to ask you for help.
听说你在……方面很有经验,所以我写信向你求助。
(3)I have some trouble with sth/in doing...,which bothers me a lot.So I’m writing to turn to you for help.
我在某事/做……方面有些困难,这很困扰我。所以我写信向你求助。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)I find it hard/tough/challenging to do...我发现做……很难/很棘手/具有挑战性。
(2)When faced with...,I have no idea how to...面对……时,我不知道如何……
(3)What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea...困扰我的是我不知道……
(4)With...drawing near,I feel greatly stressed and can’t sleep well.
随着……的临近,我感到压力很大,睡不好觉。
(5)I have encountered three problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with...What’s more...What troubles me most is...我遇到了三个很困扰我的问题。首先……另外……最困扰我的是……
结尾锦上添花
(1)I would appreciate it/be grateful if you could do me a favor.
如果您能帮我的忙,我将不胜感激。
(2)I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.Looking forward to your reply.
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。期待你的答复。
(二)邀请信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I’m more than pleased/delighted to invite you to...我非常高兴地邀请你……
(2)To broaden our horizons,our school will hold...I’m delighted to invite you to participate in it.
为了开阔我们的视野,我们学校将举行……,我很高兴邀请你参加。
(3)We are having/planning...on...and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.
我们将于……举行……,我们认为如果你能加入我们就太好了。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows.关于这次……的细节如下。
(2)The activity is scheduled to begin at...on...and last about....
此次活动计划在……(日)……(点)开始,持续大约……
(3)This is such a golden opportunity to experience...at first hand that it can’t be missed.
这是亲身体验……的绝佳机会,不容错过。
(4)I’m convinced that you will enjoy yourself there.我保证你会在那里过得很愉快。
(5)If interested in...,register for/sign up for...by...如果你对……感兴趣,请在……前报名参加……
结尾锦上添花
(1)We will feel much honored if you could...
如果你能……,我们会感到非常荣幸。
(2)I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.
如果你能尽早确认参加,我将不胜感激。
(三)申请信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I’m writing to apply for the job/post/position as...我写信申请……的工作/职位。
(2)I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for...我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
(3)I am more than delighted to read your...and I’m writing to apply for being/to become a...
我很高兴看到您的……,我写信申请成为一名……
中间丰实亮眼
(1)As an outgoing...I can get along well with...
作为一名外向的……,我能和……相处得很好。
(2)So experienced in...that I am up to the job.
我在……方面很有经验,所以能胜任这份工作。
(3)Not only am I outgoing and energetic,but I’m also optimistic and enthusiastic.
我不仅外向积极,而且乐观热情。
(4)For one thing,I have a good grasp of...For another,I can...
一方面,我精通……;另一方面,我能……。
(5)I am confident that I’m suitable for.../I’m qualified to do.../I’m equal to (doing)...
我确信我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任(做)……。
结尾锦上添花
(1)I would be most grateful if you could offer me an interview.
如果您能给我提供一次面试(机会),我将非常感激。
(2)If you took my application into account,I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您考虑我的申请,我将不遗余力地提供我最佳的服务。
(四)推荐信
1.文章结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I am both honoured and pleased to recommend...我很荣幸也很高兴推荐……
(2)I am writing to you to recommend...我给你写信是要推荐……
(3)It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a recommendation.我很高兴借此机会推荐……
(4)Hearing/Learning that...,I would like to recommend...了解到……,我想推荐……
(5)Delighted to know that you are going to...,I would like to offer my recommendation.很高兴得知你将……,我很愿意向你推荐。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)The reason why I recommend...is that...我推荐……的原因是……
(2)It makes me delighted that you show great interest in...and that you want to know something about...我很高兴你对……很感兴趣,并且想知道有关……的一些情况。
(3)I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
(4)I recommend that you...so that you can...我建议你……以便你能够……
结尾锦上添花
(1)If you need further information,don’t hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
如果你需要进一步的信息,请不要犹豫与我联系。期待你的早日/及时回复。
(2)Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
我很感激/期待你能考虑我的建议。
(3)I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial.Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
(4)Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,I would be more than grateful.
如果你能考虑此推荐,我将不胜感激。
(5)Whenever you need help,please don’t hesitate to let me know.
无论你何时需要帮助,请及时让我知道。
美文赏一赏
——求助信
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Evans,
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Miss Evans, I’m writing to ask for your guidance on a short play,which is adapted from one of our texts. The text is titled “Wildlife Protection”,which tells a story about a girl named Daisy.She talks with some wild animals and decides to help protect the environment.We expect you to give us some expert guidance on dialogues between characters,body action,the plot and the setting.If possible,could we meet in our school’s art hall at 8:00 am this Sunday How we wish you could do us this favor and help improve our performances! Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【赏析】考生通过使用定语从句、省略句和感叹句丰富了句式,长短句的结合有效提升了语言层次,给人一种“漂漂亮亮、一气呵成”的美感。
典题练一练
1.邀请信
(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.申请信
(2019全国Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.推荐信
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jim所在学校的图书馆想要收藏关于中国文化的书籍,他发来邮件请你帮忙推荐相关书籍。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1.书籍类型;
2.推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
三、通知、发言(演讲)稿、倡议书
(一)通知
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)Attention,please,everybody!
请大家注意!
(2)I have an announcement to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
(3)In order to...,our school is to hold...
为了……,我们学校将举办……
中间丰实亮眼
(1)The students’ union has decided that...
学生会已决定……
(2)As scheduled,...is supposed to take place+时间+地点.
按计划,……将于……在……举行。
(3)...is expected to last...,from...to...
……预计将从……(时间)举行到……(时间),持续……
(4)...is aimed at promoting deeper appreciation of...
……旨在促进对……的更深刻的了解。
(5)Those interested in the activity are supposed to sign up by the deadline.
那些对活动感兴趣的人应在截止日期前报名。
结尾锦上添花
(1)Please attend it on time and don’t be late.请按时到场,不要迟到。
(2)Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
(二)发言(演讲)稿
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)Good morning,everyone!It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...
大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享一下我关于……的看法。
(2)It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to say something about...
很荣幸能有机会谈论一下关于……的事情。
(3)My name is...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this speech.I shall be speaking about...
我是……。今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
中间丰实亮眼
(1)I would like to concentrate on the problem of...我想把注意力集中在……问题上。
(2)So critical is...that no one can ignore it.
……如此关键,以至于没有人能忽视它。
(3)No one can deny the fact that...
毋庸置疑,……
(4)When it comes to...,the first that comes to my mind is...谈到……时,我首先想到的是……
(5)From my point of view,important as...is for students,...is of equal significance.
依我看,虽然……对学生们而言很重要,但……也同样重要。
结尾锦上添花
(1)By way of the conclusion,I’d like to quote what...once said.
我想借用……曾经说过的话来作为结束。
(2)I hope everyone will find your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.
我希望大家都能在这里过得愉快,你们的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。
(三)倡议书
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)I am writing to call on everyone to...and take an active part in...我写信是为了呼吁大家……并积极参加……
(2)On behalf of the Students’ Council,I am writing to call on everyone to take part in...我代表学生会写信呼吁大家参加……。
(3)In order to...,we arrange to organize a(n)...activity with the theme of “...”,which is designed to...为了……,我们安排组织一个主题为“……”的活动,其目的是……
(4)With the approach of...,our school is planning to organize a(n)...activity whose theme is...随着……的临近,我们学校正计划组织一次主题为……的活动。
(5)With the development/wide spread of...,more and more people...随着……的发展/广泛传播,越来越多的人……
(6)Currently,there is an unpleasant phenomenon of...in society.目前,社会上有一种令人不愉快的……现象。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)As we know,...is of great importance for us.
正如我们所知,……对我们来说非常重要。
(2)Besides,doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...此外,做……对……来说也是有益/害的。
(3)To meet the challenge of...,it’s high time that we took action to...为迎接……的挑战,是我们采取行动……的时候了。
(4)As a citizen,we are supposed to...作为一个公民,我们应该……
(5)It’s everyone’s responsibility to...If we can...,we can make a big difference to...……是每个人的责任。如果我们能……,我们可以对……产生很大的影响。
结尾锦上添花
(1)Only if we do... can we...只有我们做……,我们才能……
(2)It is high time that we did...Let’s take action right now!
是时候该我们做……了。 让我们立即采取行动吧!
(3)Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
(4)I am convinced that,with our joint efforts,the phenomenon of...will disappear.
我相信,在我们的共同努力下,……的现象将会消失。
(5)Let’s take action right now!I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在就行动起来吧!我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
美文赏一赏
——通知
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;
2.放映时间、地点;
3.欢迎大家对短片提出意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Notice Boys and girls, May I have your attention,please Recently,an outstanding movie will be shown in our school.Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Together,which is about the development of our beloved school.It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,please note that it will be shown in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.What’s more,every one of you will be welcome to get involved,enjoying the movie,having a heated discussion and giving your own comments. Students’ Union
【赏析】考生通过使用定语从句、主语从句和动词-ing形式丰富了句式。同时,outstanding和note的使用令人眼前一亮,为文章增色不少。
典题练一练
1.发言稿
(2024全国甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
shared bicycle high-speed train
new energy vehicle
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport,Chinese transport has an enormous development.
2.倡议书
假定你是学生会主席李华,你所在的城市刚发布了《电动自行车安全管理条例》。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书,呼吁同学们在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。内容包括:
1.骑行者缺乏安全意识;
2.说明佩戴头盔的好处;
3.呼吁同学们在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
Thank you!
四、 活动报道、人物介绍、征文投稿
(一)活动报道
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)Last Saturday witnessed an unforgettable activity organized by the students’ union.
上周六进行了由学生会组织的一项令人难忘的活动。
(2)This afternoon,we had our chemistry class in the new science lab and the lesson was great.
今天下午,我们在新科学实验室上了化学课,这节课很精彩。
(3)Last Sunday,I went to Guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt where we had a good time.
上个星期天,我去广州看望了我的叔叔和婶婶,在那里我们玩得很开心。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)At 3:42 am,everything began to shake.It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!
凌晨3:42,万物开始摇晃,仿佛世界末日即将来临!
(2)On arriving there,we set out to clean their houses,play games and teach them how to use apps on smartphones.
一到那里,我们就开始打扫他们的房子,玩游戏,并教他们如何使用智能手机上的应用程序。
(3)Seeing sparkles of excitement in their eyes,we were more than delighted.
看到他们的眼睛闪烁着兴奋的光芒,我们非常高兴。
(4)While walking on the country road,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and beautiful views.
走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。
(5)During the May Day holiday,my parents and I climbed Mount Tai.We were lucky that the weather was fine that day and we were able to see the sunrise.
五一劳动节假期期间,我和父母去爬泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。
结尾锦上添花
(1)What a magnificent sight it was!I will never forget the moment.
这是多么壮观的景象呀!我将永远不会忘记这一刻。
(2)Through the memorable activity,not only did we experience the joy of caring for the elderly,but we also enhanced awareness of voluntary work.
通过这次难忘的活动,我们不仅体验到了照顾老人的乐趣,而且提高了志愿工作的意识。
(二)人物介绍
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
There are many famous athletes in China,among whom I like him best.
中国有很多有名的运动员,这其中我最喜欢他。
中间丰实亮眼
(1)He does well in physics,and once won first prize in a physics competition for middle school students.
他物理好,曾经获得过中学生物理竞赛一等奖。
(2) He has had a strong passion for swimming since he took it up at the age of five.
自从5岁开始学游泳,他就对游泳有着强烈的热爱。
(3) He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to the country.
他致力于科研工作,为国家做出了巨大贡献。
(4)Considered to be one of the greatest writers in the world,he was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature.
他被认为是世界上最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。
结尾锦上添花
He made such great contributions to the development of science and technology that we should learn from him.
他为科学技术的发展做出了如此巨大的贡献,我们应该向他学习。
(三)征文投稿
1.文体结构
2.常用表达
开篇地道自然
(1)Recently we did a survey about whether...or not.
最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
(2)An article in the newspaper caught my attention.
报纸上的一篇文章引起了我的注意。
(3)I want to talk about...in your column.
我想在你的专栏里谈谈有关……
中间丰实亮眼
(1)Nowadays,with the improvement of the standard of living,an increasing number of...
如今,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的……
(2)It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood.
自从……成立以来已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
(3)In my spare time,I often...在业余时间,我经常……
结尾锦上添花
(1)I do expect...can have a promising future.我真的希望……能有一个光明的未来。
(2)As far as I am concerned,students should do more...so that they can develop their...skills.
在我看来,学生们应该多……来发展他们的……技能。
——活动报道
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
My Weekend
My Weekend Organized by the student union,my classmates and I went to the Sunshine Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend.Located at the foot of a mountain,the farm is impressive where there is a variety of fruit trees,peach trees in particular. On arriving there,we were thrilled to see ripe peaches hanging on trees.Led by the workers and using baskets and ladders,we first picked the most beautiful ones in color,which were ripe and soft.I couldn’t wait to take a bite,and the sweet juice went down. Tired as I was,I felt very delighted.Not only did I get a golden opportunity to get close to nature,but I also experienced the joy of labor.
【赏析】考生通过使用非谓语动词、定语从句、倒装句丰富了文章。同时,固定句型I couldn’t wait...的使用也充分表达了作者迫不及待的心情,为文章增色不少。
1.人物介绍
(2023全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
A Historical Figure in China
2.征文投稿
(2023全国乙卷)
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
参考答案
第一部分 应用文写作
第一讲 写好8个句式 奠定语言基础
1.chose to draw a beautiful landscape scene 2.a refreshing break from the usual classroom setting 3.travelled a lot mainly on foot to explore nature 4.encountered difficulties 5.helped me overcome the challenges 6.He hesitated 7.he explained uncomfortably 8.There are 18% of the students 9.there are some oceans 10.I failed
第二讲 用好3种技法 提升写作技能
技法一 巧用4类更亮眼的高频词汇——打造吸引阅卷老师的靓点
1.To begin with/First and foremost;emerged 2.inspired;hold the firm belief 3.sufficient;maintains;vital 4.a wide range of 5.significant/crucial 6.are supposed to
技法二 必背20个应用文满分好句——让写作高人一筹
1.making it difficult for them to practice effectively with their partner 2.With the aim/purpose/intention of raising awareness of traditional culture 3.did we learn how to plant trees 4.can you have a better understanding of it 5.it was his perseverance and determination that
技法三 10类衔接过渡,铸就璀璨华章——让阅卷老师赞叹
1.In my opinion/In my view/As far as I am concerned/From my point of view
2.However,he didn’t give up and continued running.
3.All in all/In conclusion/In brief/In short,it is important/significant to strengthen parental guidance.
4.Thanks to the popularity of the Internet,online learning has become possible.
5.Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally/In addition/Besides/What’s more
第三讲 研习14种文体 高分不再是梦
一、 告知信、建议信、道歉信、感谢信
1.Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.Knowing that you are going to ask students to pair up at random for better after-class oral English practise,I’m writing to share some of my opinions.
In my view,it’s not a good choice to do so,for both of the students who are poor in English may be assigned into the same group.Besides,randomly to communicate with an unfamiliar partner will also result in a disappointing effect.Therefore,it’s suggested that students should be grouped based on their language levels,personalities and so on,which is believed to better boost their engagement.
Hopefully,you can take my advice into consideration.Looking forward to making greater progress under your guidance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.Dear Jim,
I’m sorry that I won’t be able to go hiking with you this Saturday.I began to cough yesterday morning,so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold,and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.
I’d really like to spend some time with you.Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday It’s one of the prosperous cities in Hebei Province.Please let me know what you think.
Once again,I’m sorry about the inconvenience caused by me.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.Dear Alex,
I’m sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all,thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English learning.Besides,what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、 求助信、邀请信、申请信、推荐信
1.Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk”at our school broadcasting station.I’m writing to invite you to attend our program.
“Talk and Talk” is a program which is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive,covering life,work,study and so on.The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning and you are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students’ communication skills in English.Would you tell me if you are available then If not,we can arrange another time.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is studying in London during the summer holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all,I speak English fluently,which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty.Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,helping them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.Dear Jim,
You asked me to recommend some books about Chinese culture in your letter.It’s my pleasure to share my ideas with you.
To begin with,the first type I want to recommend is Chinese classic novels,which contain rich Chinese cultural ingredients.Some examples of them are Journey to the West and The Romance of the Three Kingdoms.In addition,the second type of my recommendation is the books about traditional festivals.Only by learning about traditions can you know the essence of foreign history and social values.A specific book I would introduce is titled Traditional Chinese Festivals and Customs.
I hope my recommendations would be of help to you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、通知、发言(演讲)稿、倡议书
1.Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport,Chinese transport has an enormous development.
First,the rise of shared bikes has revolutionized urban mobility,providing an economical and environmentally friendly way to commute,reducing traffic congestion,air pollution and carbon emissions.Second,China is also a global leader in the promotion and application of new energy vehicles (NEVs),with strong government policy incentives and infrastructure building to promote the widespread use of electric and plug-in hybrid vehicles.In addition,China has the world’s largest high-speed rail network,connecting major cities and regions with high-speed,comfortable travel experiences.
Looking ahead,China will continue to promote sustainable growth and improve the well-being of its citizens.
2.Dear fellow students,
A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently,which poses a great threat to people’s safety—that of electric bicycle riders in particular.As for the possible reasons,the lack of safety awareness is a major one.Therefore,top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee the safety of our life.Helmets can undoubtedly protect our head from being struck directly when accidents happen,which can save our life.
I’m appealing to all the students of our school who use electric bicycles to obey the regulation and make every effort to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.
Thank you!
四、 活动报道、人物介绍、征文投稿
1.A Historical Figure in China
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values,respect for elders,and social harmony.Confucius traveled throughout the country,imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture,fostering respect for authority,harmonious relationships,and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today,his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons.He stressed the self-cultivation,respect for elders,and the pursuit of knowledge,which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity,compassion,and social responsibility.
2.Learning a New Skill
The new skill I acquired was skating.The process is challenging but productive.
Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.From then on,I was determined to master this fascinating sport.However,at the very beginning,when I stepped on the ice,I stumbled over myself.Hard as I strove,I still fell over again and again.The moment I thought of the athletes on the field,I was inspired by their powerful spirit.Eventually,my persistence and painstaking efforts paid off.I can skate freely all by myself.
From the learning experience,I fully understand that only by diligently practicing can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
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