Unit 1 What's the matter? 作文学案（含答案）-2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级下册

Unit 1 What’s the matter 作文学案
一、写作思路
本单元的写作项目是“健康与急救”, 属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“身心健康、抗挫能力, 珍爱生命的意识”这一主题群。常见的写作任务是谈论健康和意外事故以及如何合理地提出建议。
二、常用句型
开头句
1. It is necessary for us to keep healthy.
2. It is true that health is the first step to success.
中间句
1. We should have a healthy diet.
2. Remember to have meals on time and eat more vegetables and fruit.
3. And you should also say “No” to junk food.
4. It is necessary to take some exercise every day.
5. Give up bad habits like staying up too late.
结尾句
1. Keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.
2. It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to keep a healthy diet.
句子升格
1. We must know the ways to keep healthy. (用It is...to do... 句式表达)
→ It is necessary for us to know the ways to keep healthy.
2. So we should exercise a lot every day. (增加目的, 扩写句子)
→ So we should exercise a lot every day to keep healthy and strong.
【典例1】
李老师是你们学校的健康顾问, 针对几名学生的健康问题, 他给出了一些建议。请根据以下表格内容, 写一篇短文。
Students Health problems Advice
Mario often has a cold drink a lot of water; exercise every day
Jimmy sometimes has a sore throat drink some hot tea with honey
Judy often has a sore back shouldn’t sit for too long
要求: 1. 包含表格中的所有要点, 语言表达准确, 语句通顺, 可适当发挥;
2. 80 词左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
谋篇布局
1. 审题立意
①题材: 图表作文
②人称: 第三人称
③时态: 一般现在时
写作提纲
健康 问题 的 建议 引出 话题 ...Here is his advice for three students who have health problems.
具体 建议 Mario often has a cold. Mr. Li thinks he should... Jimmy sometimes has a sore throat. Mr. Li advises him... As for Judy, she often has a sore back. Mr. Li’s suggestion is that...
总结 观点 Mr. Li really hopes that...
【范文1】
In our school, Mr. Li’s job is to help with our health problems. Here is his advice for three students who have health problems.
Mario often has a cold. Mr. Li thinks he should drink a lot of water and exercise every day . ① Jimmy sometimes has a sore throat. Mr. Li advises him not to talk too much ③ .
He should drink some hot tea with honey. As for Judy ③ , she often has a sore back. Mr. Li’s suggestion is that she shouldn’t sit for too long. ② She needs to lie down ③ and rest.
Mr. Li really hopes that all the students can look after themselves well and grow healthily ③ .
【译文1】
在我们学校，李先生的工作是帮助我们解决健康问题。以下是他给三个有健康问题的学生的建议。
马里奥经常会患上感冒。李先生认为他应该每天多喝水，每天锻炼身体。Jimmy有时会有喉咙痛。李先生建议他不要说太多的。
他应该喝一些加蜂蜜的热茶。至于Judy，她经常背部酸痛。李先生的建议是，她不应该坐得太久。她需要躺下和休息。
李先生真的希望所有的学生都能照顾好自己，健康地成长。
【典例2】
众所周知, 健康的身体是中学生有效学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间, 垃圾食品危害着我们的健康……请根据下面的思维导图, 以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 短文须包含思维导图中至少四条信息, 可适当表达自己的观点;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
3. 词数不少于80。
【范文2】
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice.
First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running and walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food.
Third, we shouldn’t spend too much time going online. It is bad for our eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as often as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.
If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.
【译文2】
如何保持健康
保持健康对我们来说很重要的。作为中学生，我们应该有一个健康的生活方式。这里有一些建议。
首先，我们应该每天至少锻炼一个小时，比如跑步和散步。第二，有一个健康的饮食。多吃点水果和蔬菜。尽量不要吃垃圾食品。
第三，我们不应该花太多时间上网。这对我们的眼睛有害。第四，早点睡觉，不要熬夜太晚，因为足够的睡眠对我们的健康有好处。最后，尽可能多地保持快乐。学会在任何时候都要对自己微笑。
如果我们这样做了，我相信我们就能保持健康。
【典例3】
假如你是Peter 的好朋友Li Lei, 你听说Peter 近来因为考试而忙碌, 并且得了重感冒, 头疼得厉害。请你给他写封信, 建议他去看医生, 并告诉他要注意身体。要求70 词左右。
【范文3】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a bad cold and a headache. I think you should go to a doctor and take some medicine. I know these days you are very busy studying for the exams, but you should look after yourself. It is important for everyone to be healthy. If you want to study better, you must keep in good health. I hope you’ll feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
【译文3】
亲爱的彼得，
听说你重感冒和头痛，我很难过。我想你应该去看医生，吃点药。我知道这些天你都在忙着准备考试，但你应该照顾好自己。健康对每个人都很重要。如果你想学习得更好，你必须保持健康。我希望你能很快感觉好起来。
你的，
李磊