Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks. 作文学案-2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级下册

Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks. 作文学案
一、写作思路
本单元的写作情境是“志愿服务和慈善”, 属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“志愿服务与公共服务”这一主题群。常见的写作任务是谈论志愿者活动、介绍志愿者经历以及呼吁人们参加志愿活动等。
二、常用句型
开头句
1. It is necessary to help those in need.
2. I think I am warm-hearted and helpful enough to work as a volunteer.
中间句
1. Volunteering there is a dream for me.
2. I’m good at drawing, so I’ll teach children to draw pictures.
3. I have so much volunteer experience that I can do volunteer work more skillfully than others.
结尾句
1. If people help each other, our world will be a big family full of love.
2. If I’m a volunteer, I’ll make it easier for you to take care of the children.
3. Doing some volunteer work is really meaningful.
句子升格
1. I usually help the old carry heavy things.(升格为用when/ while 引导的时间状语从句)
→I usually help the old carry heavy things when walking together with them.
2. If people help each other, our world will be full of love. (用be like 提升句子的美感)
→If people help each other, our world will be like a big family full of love.
【典例1】
乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日, 你校为了宣传慈善, 打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华, 打算参加此项活动, 谈谈你的慈善认知和规划, 请根据以下要点提示, 写一篇80 词左右的英文演讲稿。
要点如下:
1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce
2. What can you do for this charity
3. Why do we need to help people in need
(参考慈善机构: Project Hope, ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF)
谋篇布局
1. 审题立意
①题材: 材料作文
②人称: 第一人称和第三人称
③时态: 一般现在时
写作提纲
引出话题 ... I want to talk about UNICEF. It helps...
自己能做的事 I’m ready to... I would like to... I can also... I want to...
帮助他人的意义 Little help can... Helping others can...
【范文1】
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There’re many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about UNICEF. It helps build a better world for everyone, especially children all over the world ①. For example, it provides basic education for children ① in poor areas.
I’m ready to ① help the children in need. I would like to① send warm clothes and new books to them. I can also donate my pocket money. What’s more, I want to teach in mountain areas when I grow up.
Little help can make a big difference. Helping others can make me feel better about my life ② .
亮点提升
①高分短语: all over the world、provide sth. for sb.; be ready to 和would like to 代替want to 的使用, 使语言表达更丰富。
②动名词短语作主语, 使句子结构更高级。
【译文1】
愿意的手，愿意的心
善良是春风,感染人。世界上有许多慈善机构。其中，我想谈谈联合国儿童基金会。它有助于为每个人建立一个更好的世界，特别是世界各地的儿童。例如，它为贫困地区的儿童提供基础教育。
我愿意帮助需要帮助的孩子。我想给他们送些暖和的衣服和新书。我也可以捐出我的零花钱。更重要的是，我长大后想在山区教书。
小小的帮助能产生很大的影响。帮助别人可以让我对生活感觉更好。
【典例2】
假如你是李华, 国际学校的学生下周末将要来访。你校正在招募接待国际学生的志愿者, 陪他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者, 请用英语给活动负责人李老师写一封申请信, 在信中说明你的申请理由以及你打算为他们安排哪些周末活动。
提示词: friendly, climb the Great Wall, museum, Chinese culture, traditional food
提示问题: 1.Why would you like to be a volunteer
2.What do you plan to do during the weekend
【范文2】
Dear Mr. Li,
I’d like to be the volunteer. Here are two reasons. I’m friendly and outgoing and I can get on well with the foreign students. Also, I’m good at English, so it’ll be easy for me to communicate with them. In order to help them enjoy the weekend, I’d like to take them to climb the Great Wall because it’s famous all over the world.
I also plan to invite them to enjoy Chinese culture at the Palace Museum. Besides, I will take them to try some traditional food, such as Peking Roast Duck. I think they will have a good time.
I’m sure to be a right person and I’d be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文2】
亲爱的李先生，
我想成为一名志愿者。以下是两个原因。我很友好，也很外向，我可以和外国学生相处得很好。而且，我擅长英语，所以我很容易和他们交流。为了帮助他们享受这个周末，我想带他们去爬长城，因为长城在全世界都很有名。
我还计划邀请他们到故宫博物院欣赏中国文化。另外，我会带他们去试试一些传统的食物，比如北京烤鸭。我想他们会玩得很开心的。
我肯定是一个合适的人，如果我能得到这个机会，我会很感激的。
你的，
李华
【典例3】
志愿者活动是社会和个人成长的需要。你有做志愿者的经历吗？什么时间在哪里做的？感受如何？请以“My Volunteer Experience” 为题写一篇短文, 词数80 左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
【范文3】
My Volunteer Experience
I am a middle school student. Last Saturday I visited a school as a volunteer with my friends. It was a great way to know some other children’s life. We had a party with the students there. We also helped them clean up their classrooms. The head teacher told us some stories about some hard-working students. They were from very poor families. And in order to raise money for them, we held a big sale on the playground the next day. We raised lots of money. I think being a volunteer is really great and I’d like to help more people.
【译文3】
我的志愿者经验
我是一名中学生。上周六，我作为志愿者和朋友们一起参观了一所学校。这是一种了解其他孩子们生活的好方法。我们和那里的学生们举行了一个聚会。我们还帮助他们清理了教室。校长给我们讲了一些关于一些努力学习的学生的故事。他们来自非常贫穷的家庭。为了给他们筹集资金，第二天我们在操场上举行了一场大拍卖会。我们筹集了很多钱。我认为做一名志愿者真的很棒，我想帮助更多的人。