学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit5 单元话题（难忘的事件）
写作满分范文18篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1．某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Experience (一次难忘的经历)”为题的征文活动。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，向该报社投稿。
2019年3月28日夜晚8:30 左右，一场突如其来的暴风雨发生在张家界。假如你是Liu Li，正和爸爸妈妈在张家界旅游。请根据下面表格描述一下暴风雨发生时的情况。
Person Doing Place
mother shopping in a store near the square
father watching news on TV in the Green Hotel
I taking a shower in the Green Hotel
提示：
①短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
②词数不少于70，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Experience
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2．在过去的日子里有哪些事情是令你记忆犹新，难以忘怀的呢？请你从中选取一件最令你难忘的事情，根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。
写作要求：
1）描述这件事情发生的经过；
2）阐述这件事情令你难忘的原因或你的感受等；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：unforgettable令人难忘的
There are a lot of things happen to me every year. But I will never forget one thing.
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3．每个人都有自己难忘的经历，请根据以下所给要点提示写一篇英语短文，把自己的这次难忘经历介绍给大家。
要点提示：
（1）时间：去年暑假；（2）地点：乡下；（3）事件：摘蔬菜和水果；放风筝。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，可适当增加细节；（2）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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4．生活中总有一些事情令人难忘，点点滴滴，历久弥新。不管是开心，还是忧伤，都会给我们启示，伴我们成长。假如你校将组织以“一次难忘的经历”为话题的英语演讲比赛。请根据内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
提示：
1. 你的经历；
2. 你的感受；
3. 你从中学到了什么。
参考词汇：unforgettable 难忘的
要求：
①短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
②词数80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中不能出现真实姓名、地名等信息。
An Unforgettable Experience
I had an unforgettable experience. I’m sure you’ve had some unforgettable experiences like me.
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5．在我们的生活中，一定有很多令人难忘的事情。假如你是Alice，请给你的朋友John写一封信，谈一谈你在生活中最难忘的一件事。
内容包括：1．事情发生的时间、地点、经过；
2．阐述事情难忘的原因或你的感受等。
写作要求：1．不要在作文中出现真实姓名与校名；
2．条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清楚、规范；
3.70词左右。信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
How time flies! During my life, I remember many things well. And the important one that I
will never forget is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Alice
6．每个人都拥有属于自己的独特美好回忆, 或是一次令人难忘的旅行，或是一段动人心弦的音乐，亦或是一个承载着特殊意义的物品。学校英文报社正在开展主题为“An Unforgettable Memory”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一个你难忘的回忆。
参考词汇：
难忘的 unforgettable
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得抄袭试卷中的原文、原句；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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进阶拓展训练6篇
7．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something ________ happened to me”
生活中总有一些事曾发生在你身上。或令人激动、或令人难忘、或不寻常……请以“发生在我身上的……的事”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，叙述事情发生的经过，并谈谈你从中学到了什么？标点符号不占格。
注意文中不能出现自己的姓名、校名及有关信息。
Questions for reference (以下问题供参考)
1. What happened to you
2. What can you learn from it
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8．每个人都有自己难忘的经历，这些经历或者带给我们快乐，或者带给我们成长，请谈谈一段你自己难忘的经历，内容包含：这个经历是什么？你有何收获和体会？
提示：unforgettable, experience, practice, understand
●What is your unforgettable experience
●What can you learn from this experience
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9．在我们的日常生活中会有很多难忘的经历，让我们觉得这一天是十分特别的。请你以“A Special Day” 为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，参加学校的英语征文活动。
提示问题：●哪一天对于你来说是特别的
●在这一天你做了什么以及你的感受
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数100左右。
A Special Day
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10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助，共同进步；也能相互陪伴，令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下你最好的朋友是谁，他/她性格如何，谈谈你们之间一件令你难忘的事以及你通过这次经历学到了什么。
提示词语：friendly, encourage, share, help
提示问题：·Who is your best friend And what is he/she like
·What’s the most unforgettable experience between you and your friend
·What have you learned from the experience
Friendship is important to everyone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．写一篇80词左右的作文，讲述一个令你难忘的记忆。
要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语言流畅，书写整洁。
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12．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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能力综合实践6篇
13．假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
1．上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒……
2．王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝……
3．树干太沉，她搬不动，然后……
4．你认为……
参考词汇：
被吹倒：be blown down；
挡住：block；
树枝：branch；
树干：trunk。
要求：
1．词数80—100。
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday,
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Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
14．生活中总会有一些令人难忘的事件，让你记忆犹新。或许它是幸福快乐的，或许它是悲伤难过的，亦或它是意料之外的… … 请以“An Unforgettable Event”为题，结合自身经历描述一件这样的事情，以及难忘的原因和你的感受。
提示：
1. What was the event
2. When and where did it happen
3. Why was it unforgettable
4. How do you feel about it
要求：
1. 所给提示必须都用上。
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰；
3. 字数：不少于80词。标题不计入总词数
An Unforgettable Event
15．初中生活已经过去近两年，你在这期间一定发生了很多难忘的事情，请你选择一件最难忘的事，结合以下要求写一篇英语作文。
参考要点：
1. 事件发生的时间及地点：
2. 事情发生时，你和你的朋友或家人正在做什么；
3. 这件事对你来说为什么难忘。
4. ……
要求：
1. 词数80-120词。
2. 文中不得出现自己所在的学校、班级、姓名等真实信息。
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16．假如你是李明，希望学校八年级的学生。下面所提供的题目请任选一个。
1.目前你校正在组织一次难忘的助人经历主题活动，你对此感兴趣。请结合自己或班内其他同学的亲身经历，以“An Experience of helping ...”为题，用英语写一篇短文，为此次活动做准备。
2.请你给老师或家长写一封信，表达你对课后辅导班(after-school classes for children)的意见或看法。
提示词语：
agree with...., because, although, in my opinion, children/parents should
书写要求：
1．书写工整，语言规范，不少于80个单词。
2．文中不得出现本人及学校的真实名字。
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17．假如你是一名警察，昨晚11点住在Blue Sky旅馆208房间的李先生外出时，他的一些财物被偷了。你询问了入住其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面提示写一则调查报告。
注意：
（1）以警察的身份来写；
（2）可以适当发挥，时态以过去进行时为主；
（3）不少于80词。
Room 102 Miss Liu chat online with friends
Room 205 Mr. Huang take a shower
Room 227 Ms. Li read newspapers
Room 308 Mr. Luo watch TV
Room 115 old Tommy sleep
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18．在我们成长的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要求：
1. 故事必须原创；
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
1. 分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)；
2. 表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……)；
3. ……A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit5 单元话题（难忘的事件）
写作满分范文18篇
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练6篇
1．某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Experience (一次难忘的经历)”为题的征文活动。请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，向该报社投稿。
2019年3月28日夜晚8:30 左右，一场突如其来的暴风雨发生在张家界。假如你是Liu Li，正和爸爸妈妈在张家界旅游。请根据下面表格描述一下暴风雨发生时的情况。
Person Doing Place
mother shopping in a store near the square
father watching news on TV in the Green Hotel
I taking a shower in the Green Hotel
提示：
①短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
②词数不少于70，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Experience
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience
At about 8:30 p.m. on March 28, 2019, a sudden storm occurred in Zhangjiajie. I was traveling with my parents in Zhangjiajie. My mother was shopping in a shop near the square. My father was watching the news on TV at the Green Hotel. I was taking a shower in the Green Hotel. It was terrible. And I’m a little scared. Luckily, dad was with me. What an unforgettable experience!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示，描述一下你和爸爸、妈妈在张家界旅游时发生的暴风雨的情况。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时需包含表格要点，详细描述暴风雨发生时你们当时正在做的事情，不要遗漏，可以适当地描述自己的感受。针对细节部分围绕主题可自由发挥。文章语句要通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。
2．在过去的日子里有哪些事情是令你记忆犹新，难以忘怀的呢？请你从中选取一件最令你难忘的事情，根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。
写作要求：
1）描述这件事情发生的经过；
2）阐述这件事情令你难忘的原因或你的感受等；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：unforgettable令人难忘的
There are a lot of things happen to me every year. But I will never forget one thing.
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【答案】例文：
There are a lot of things happen to me every year. But I will never forget one thing.
One day, after we learned about making western food in English class, our English teacher asked us to make fruit salad by ourselves in groups in the classroom. Everyone was very excited. We couldn’t wait to put our fruit on the table. But the teacher told us that we could only use body language or English, not Chinese, during the activity. Since we were not used to speaking English, we spoke Chinese now and then. That was funny. At last, we made a big bowl of salad. It tasted really really good.
What an unforgettable experience! I think all of us will remember that lesson forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给写作要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍自己有一件事情永远不会忘记；
第二步，具体阐述内容。描述制作水果沙拉的经过。
第三步，表达自己的感受。这次经历让自己很难忘。
[亮点词汇]
①by oneself独自
②in groups分组
③couldn’t wait to do sth.迫不及待地想做某事
④body language肢体语言
⑤now and then时而
⑥unforgettable难忘的
⑦forever永远
[高分句型]
Since we were not used to speaking English, we spoke Chinese now and then. (since引导原因状语从句)
3．每个人都有自己难忘的经历，请根据以下所给要点提示写一篇英语短文，把自己的这次难忘经历介绍给大家。
要点提示：
（1）时间：去年暑假；（2）地点：乡下；（3）事件：摘蔬菜和水果；放风筝。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，可适当增加细节；（2）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文：
I’ve had a wonderful experience. I went to the countryside with my parents last summer holiday. My uncle’s family live there. We stayed there for three days.
There were a lot of things to do. We picked some vegetables and fruit. They were delicious. And I flew a kite with my cousins. They were good at it. And then we climbed the hill behind their house. When we got to the top of the hill, I was very tired. My cousins thought that I needed more exercise. I enjoyed myself in the countryside. I will never forget it.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据要点提示介绍自己难忘的经历，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般过去时。可分为两段式写作：第一段引出这次经历并交代时间和地点；第二段讲发生的事情并表达自己的感想。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．生活中总有一些事情令人难忘，点点滴滴，历久弥新。不管是开心，还是忧伤，都会给我们启示，伴我们成长。假如你校将组织以“一次难忘的经历”为话题的英语演讲比赛。请根据内容提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
提示：
1. 你的经历；
2. 你的感受；
3. 你从中学到了什么。
参考词汇：unforgettable 难忘的
要求：
①短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
②词数80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中不能出现真实姓名、地名等信息。
An Unforgettable Experience
I had an unforgettable experience. I’m sure you’ve had some unforgettable experiences like me.
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience
I had an unforgettable experience. I’m sure you’ve had some unforgettable experiences like me.
Last summer, I went hiking with my friends in the mountains. It was a sunny day, and we were all excited. However, halfway through our hike, it started to rain heavily. We were unprepared and got soaked. We had to find shelter and wait for the rain to stop. Despite the discomfort, we sang songs and shared stories to keep our spirits up. When the rain finally stopped, we continued our hike and reached the top of the mountain. The view was breathtaking, and we felt a great sense of achievement.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared and staying positive in difficult situations. It also taught me the value of teamwork and perseverance. This experience will always remind me that challenges can be overcome with a positive attitude and the support of friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己有一次难忘的经历；
第二步，具体阐述自己所经历的事情和感受；
第三步，最后表达自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①go hiking with sb和某人一起去远足
②a great sense of achievement巨大的成就感
③start to do sth开始做某事
[高分句型]
①When the rain finally stopped, we continued our hike and reached the top of the mountain.（时间状语从句）
②This experience will always remind me that challenges can be overcome with a positive attitude and the support of friends.（宾语从句）
5．在我们的生活中，一定有很多令人难忘的事情。假如你是Alice，请给你的朋友John写一封信，谈一谈你在生活中最难忘的一件事。
内容包括：1．事情发生的时间、地点、经过；
2．阐述事情难忘的原因或你的感受等。
写作要求：1．不要在作文中出现真实姓名与校名；
2．条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清楚、规范；
3.70词左右。信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
How time flies! During my life, I remember many things well. And the important one that I
will never forget is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Alice
【答案】例文
Dear John,
How time flies! During my life, I remember many things well. And the important one that I will never forget is one of my birthdays. It happened on my tenth birthday. I was still dreaming when my alarm clock went off. I had to get up quickly. While I was brushing my teeth, my parents were having breakfast. They didn’t say anything to me but asked me to have breakfast and go to school quickly. “They forget my birthday and they don’t love me.” I was sad and went to school alone. When it began to rain, I was having lunch at school. While it was raining heavily, I saw my parents making their way to the dining hall with a big cake. Although they were all wet, they were very happy to see me. I was so moved that I couldn’t stop my tears and ran to them. I’ll never forget my tenth birthday because I know my parents love me and I love them as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍生活中最难忘的一件事”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍难忘的事件以及时间背景；
第二步，根据题干要求，详细描述事件过程；
第三步，介绍自己对这件难忘的经历的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①go off停止运转
②go to school去上学
[高分句型]
①Although they were all wet, they were very happy to see me.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②I’ll never forget my tenth birthday because I know my parents love me and I love them as well.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．每个人都拥有属于自己的独特美好回忆, 或是一次令人难忘的旅行，或是一段动人心弦的音乐，亦或是一个承载着特殊意义的物品。学校英文报社正在开展主题为“An Unforgettable Memory”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一个你难忘的回忆。
参考词汇：
难忘的 unforgettable
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得抄袭试卷中的原文、原句；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文：
An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences.
Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.
From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中一个难忘的回忆的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一个你难忘的回忆。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我的困难、我的经历、我的感受等”几个方面重点介绍一个难忘的回忆的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我真正明白患难见真情”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担心；
②catch up with赶上；
③from then on从那时起；
④in need在困境中。
[高分句型]
①He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. (what引导的宾语从句)
②I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. (because引导的原因状语从句)
进阶拓展训练6篇
7．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something ________ happened to me”
生活中总有一些事曾发生在你身上。或令人激动、或令人难忘、或不寻常……请以“发生在我身上的……的事”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，叙述事情发生的经过，并谈谈你从中学到了什么？标点符号不占格。
注意文中不能出现自己的姓名、校名及有关信息。
Questions for reference (以下问题供参考)
1. What happened to you
2. What can you learn from it
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【答案】例文
Something Exciting happened to Me
Last summer vacation, I took part in a speech contest. I was really nervous at first. But when I stood on the stage, I saw the encouraging smiles of my parents and teachers. I calmed down and delivered my speech smoothly. In the end, I won the second prize.
From this experience, I learned that confidence is very important. When we face difficulties, we should believe in ourselves and try our best. Also, the support from others can give us great strength.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇话题作文。
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明时间是去年暑假，事件是参加演讲比赛。
第二步，具体阐述。描述比赛时的心理变化，从紧张到看到父母和老师鼓励后冷静发挥，最终获得二等奖。
第三步，书写结语。总结从这次经历中学到的东西，包括自信的重要性和他人支持的力量。
［亮点词汇］
①speech contest演讲比赛
②calm down冷静下来
③deliver a speech发表演讲
④win the second prize获得二等奖
⑤face difficulties面对困难
⑥believe in oneself相信自己
［高分句型］
But when I stood on the stage, I saw the encouraging smiles of my parents and teachers.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．每个人都有自己难忘的经历，这些经历或者带给我们快乐，或者带给我们成长，请谈谈一段你自己难忘的经历，内容包含：这个经历是什么？你有何收获和体会？
提示：unforgettable, experience, practice, understand
●What is your unforgettable experience
●What can you learn from this experience
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【答案】例如
We all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. I will never forget my experience as a volunteer. I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste Sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste-sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste and put them into different dustbins. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. I have learnt a lot from the experience. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，谈谈一段你自己难忘的经历。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我的这个经历是什么，我有何收获和体会；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
9．在我们的日常生活中会有很多难忘的经历，让我们觉得这一天是十分特别的。请你以“A Special Day” 为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，参加学校的英语征文活动。
提示问题：●哪一天对于你来说是特别的
●在这一天你做了什么以及你的感受
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数100左右。
A Special Day
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【答案】例文：
A Special Day
We have a lot of unforgettable memories in our daily life. They are special to us. I will never forget my birthday last year. On that day, I invited some of my good friends to our home. I had a big birthday party with them. My parents cooked lots of delicious food and a big cake for us. My friends gave me many presents. We ate the food, sang some songs, danced and talked together.
I was very happy on that day and I will never forget it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，要求介绍日常生活中难忘的一个特别的日子，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文主要用一般过去时态，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助，共同进步；也能相互陪伴，令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下你最好的朋友是谁，他/她性格如何，谈谈你们之间一件令你难忘的事以及你通过这次经历学到了什么。
提示词语：friendly, encourage, share, help
提示问题：·Who is your best friend And what is he/she like
·What’s the most unforgettable experience between you and your friend
·What have you learned from the experience
Friendship is important to everyone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Friendship is important to everyone. Tony is my best friend. He is very kind and helpful. One day I wanted to copy his math homework, but to my surprise, he didn’t agree. He said, “It’s wrong to copy others’ homework. If you have difficulty, I can help you.” His words made me feel warm. From then on he helped me with my math every day. With his help, I made great progress in math.
Tony made me realize that good friends should help each other in the right way.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍自己最好的朋友。要点包括：最好的朋友是谁；他/她的性格是什么样的；你们之间发生的难忘的事情；通过这件事情你学到了什么。
2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按要点分段叙述，保证文章要点齐全，语句通顺。
11．写一篇80词左右的作文，讲述一个令你难忘的记忆。
要求：条理清晰，意思连贯，语言流畅，书写整洁。
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【答案】例文
Last summer holiday, I worked as a volunteer in the city library. Every day, I got up early and got there on time. My job is to help organize the books on the shelves. It was not an interesting task for many people. But to me, it’s so exciting, because I could find many new books and know their categories. The only problem was that many people didn’t return the book to the right shelves, and sometimes I had to walk a long way to put the book in the right place. I hope every reader could not only take knowledge from the books but also be a civilized reader.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求描述一段令你难忘的回忆，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点；
第二步，叙述事情的经过；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期许。
[亮点词汇]
①work as a volunteer做志愿者
②get up early起得早
③not only...but also不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①The only problem was that many people didn’t return the book to the right shelves（that引导的表语从句）
②I hope every reader could not only take knowledge from the books but also be a civilized reader.（宾语从句）
12．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
October 6th, Saturday Fine
There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.
The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要求”中的具体信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、大致情况等。可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容要求，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和大致情况；
第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认知以及自己的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be sent to被送到
②be careful小心；当心
③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
④wait for等候
[高分句型]
①When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. （there be句型）
②The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. （that引导的宾语从句）
能力综合实践6篇
13．假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
1．上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒……
2．王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝……
3．树干太沉，她搬不动，然后……
4．你认为……
参考词汇：
被吹倒：be blown down；
挡住：block；
树枝：branch；
树干：trunk。
要求：
1．词数80—100。
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday,
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Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a tree was blown down by the strong wind and blocked the road. She picked up the branches immediately and then put them on the side of the road. Then she tried to move the trunk, but it was so heavy that she couldn’t move it even though she tried her best. Many people came to help, and finally they moved it away. How happy and proud they were!
I think Wang Hong is really kind and her story also tells us that many hands make light work.
Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，作者分享一件好人好事给笔友；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述王红做好事的过程；
第三步，书写结语。作者希望收到笔友的来信，也希望笔友能分享他周围的故事给作者。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up 拿起，捡起；
②try to do sth. 努力做某事，尝试做某事；
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事；
④Many hands make light work 众人拾柴火焰高。
[高分句型]
①Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a tree was blown down by the strong wind and blocked the road. (省略that的宾语从句；be blown down被动语态)；
②Then she tried to move the trunk, but it was so heavy that she couldn’t move it even though she tried her best. (so…that…引导结果状语从句)
14．生活中总会有一些令人难忘的事件，让你记忆犹新。或许它是幸福快乐的，或许它是悲伤难过的，亦或它是意料之外的… … 请以“An Unforgettable Event”为题，结合自身经历描述一件这样的事情，以及难忘的原因和你的感受。
提示：
1. What was the event
2. When and where did it happen
3. Why was it unforgettable
4. How do you feel about it
要求：
1. 所给提示必须都用上。
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰；
3. 字数：不少于80词。标题不计入总词数
An Unforgettable Event
【答案】An Unforgettable Event
Last Sunday I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends. We went there by bus. It was hot and windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of foreigners. We went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the Great Wall and the Chinese culture. They were very surprised when they saw our English was excellent. They were also very interested in the Chinese culture. They thanked us a lot and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese. I will remember this experience forever.
【详解】这篇短文要求我们以“An Unforgettable Event”为题写一篇短文。人称为第一人称，时态为一般过去时。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括：这件事情是什么？发生在何时何地？为什么它令人难忘？你觉得怎么样？写作提纲虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据写作提纲，讲述了自己难忘的经历。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如There were thousands of people. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如They were also very interested in the Chinese culture.等。
15．初中生活已经过去近两年，你在这期间一定发生了很多难忘的事情，请你选择一件最难忘的事，结合以下要求写一篇英语作文。
参考要点：
1. 事件发生的时间及地点：
2. 事情发生时，你和你的朋友或家人正在做什么；
3. 这件事对你来说为什么难忘。
4. ……
要求：
1. 词数80-120词。
2. 文中不得出现自己所在的学校、班级、姓名等真实信息。
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【答案】例文：
How time flies! It’s almost two years since I came to the junior high school. Many things happened to me during the two years. But I never forget one of them.
It was a Saturday morning. The weather was fine. My classmate Li Lei and I went to the countryside to have a picnic by bus. The bus was full of people. When we were on the bus, we were talking happily. Then an old woman got on the bus. I wanted to give my seat to the old woman, but I was afraid others thought I wanted to get thanks. I looked around. Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping. Suddenly a little boy stood up and made room for the woman when I was thinking. I felt very ashamed and regretted. I was not as good as a little boy.
I will remember the thing. From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help. If everyone try to help others, the world will become much more beautiful.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求按汉语提示写一件最难忘的事，要补充要点，适当发挥，仔细观看写作要求。
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描述故事时，场景描写要细致；故事发生的时间、地点、人们在做什么、为什么难忘却等要叙述完整，保证条理清楚。
16．假如你是李明，希望学校八年级的学生。下面所提供的题目请任选一个。
1.目前你校正在组织一次难忘的助人经历主题活动，你对此感兴趣。请结合自己或班内其他同学的亲身经历，以“An Experience of helping ...”为题，用英语写一篇短文，为此次活动做准备。
2.请你给老师或家长写一封信，表达你对课后辅导班(after-school classes for children)的意见或看法。
提示词语：
agree with...., because, although, in my opinion, children/parents should
书写要求：
1．书写工整，语言规范，不少于80个单词。
2．文中不得出现本人及学校的真实名字。
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【答案】范文
An Experience of helping others
Two years ago, I helped a 9-year-old boy to learn English. He came from a poor family. His parents had no money to pay for after-school English classes. I told him not to worry about the money and that I would help him for free. I practiced speaking English with him twice a week, gave him lots of free English books and taught him how to make good use of them.
After a year of practicing, he told me that he got an A in an English test and he loved English. What touched me wasn’t that good result, but that he understood why he should learn hard—nothing comes easily. Because of his hard work and my kindness, his English improved a lot.
From that experience of helping him, I also learned: Never stop doing little things for others. Sometimes those little things will have a big place in their hearts.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是给出了两个话题，第一个是半命题作文，以“An Experience of helping ...”为题，谈谈自己或其他同学帮助他人的亲生经历和感受；第二个话题是一个书信作文，要求谈谈你对课后辅导班的看法。
2.写作指导：如果选择第一个话题，写作时应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述细节时，细节应符合文章要求，可以有适当的补充；如果选择第二个话题，应用第一、三人称和一般现在时来行文，描述时应注意逻辑，保证思路清晰。完成之后，注意检查文中是否有单词、标点和语法的错误。
17．假如你是一名警察，昨晚11点住在Blue Sky旅馆208房间的李先生外出时，他的一些财物被偷了。你询问了入住其他房间的几个邻居当时在干什么。请根据下面提示写一则调查报告。
注意：
（1）以警察的身份来写；
（2）可以适当发挥，时态以过去进行时为主；
（3）不少于80词。
Room 102 Miss Liu chat online with friends
Room 205 Mr. Huang take a shower
Room 227 Ms. Li read newspapers
Room 308 Mr. Luo watch TV
Room 115 old Tommy sleep
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【答案】例文
Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out. We asked a few of his neighbors what they were doing at that time. Here are the results.
Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends. Mr. Huang in Room 205 was taking a shower. Ms. Li in Room 227 was reading newspapers. Mr. Luo in Room 308 said he was watching TV. Old Tommy in Room 115 said he was sleeping.
We will keep on doing some other surveys and try to find the thief.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为调查报告；
②时态：时态为“过去进行时”；
③提示：注意以警察的身份来写；不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据所给的材料，以警察的身份写一则调查报告；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先交代调查的背景；其次具体介绍调查的内容；
第三步：书写结语。表示“我们将继续做一些其他调查，试图找到小偷。”
[亮点词汇]
①be out不在家
②take a shower洗个淋浴
③at that time在那时
[高分句型]
①Mr. Li in Room 208 of Blue Sky Hotel called to say he was stolen at 11 o’clock last night when he was out.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Miss Liu in Room 102 said she was chatting online with friends.（省略that的宾语从句）
18．在我们成长的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要求：
1. 故事必须原创；
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
1. 分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)；
2. 表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……)；
3. ……A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
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【答案】There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.
【详解】试题分析：本书面表达以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题，根据题目要求知道应该写一篇记叙文，同时必须完成相应的要点内容，作文的关键是回忆，因此它的基准时态应该以过去时态为主，即一、二要点，而第三点发表自己对朋友的看法或观点，应该用一般现在时来叙述。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had a deep influence on, fell down, worried about, help me with my study，fall behind，in my opinion，no matter, and, so等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：宾语从句、时间状语从句、No matter引导的让步状语从句等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
