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Unit5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came？
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.学会用一般过去时和过去进行时描述过去发生的对自己意义重大的件事。
2.能够熟悉记叙文的结构特点，用英语写记叙文记录一件最重要的事，明白记叙文的基本要素，即事件，时间，地点，事件的经过和结果。
3.能够懂得生活中重要的经历都可以促进我们学习，帮助我们明白很多道理。
Warming-up
Some big events in 2024
文章中心句
例子来支撑
背景来介绍
细节来填充
Revision
Let’s review.
Martin Luther King was______ in_________on April 4, ______.
Event
Robert was_______ ________
with his parents_______he
heard the news ____the radio.
People’s
activities
His parents were__________ _______
and finished the dinner___ ________.
People’s
feeling
killed
America
1968
eating dinner
when
on
completely shocked
in silence
Revision
Martin Luther King’s death and Robert's recollection
___ September 11, 2001, the World Trade Center in ____ _____was _____ ______by terrorists.
Event
People’s
activities
Kate was______
in her office. Her friend shouted a plane just____the two towers.
People’s
feeling
She didn’t______at first.She was so______that she could hardly_____ _____after that.
On
New
York
taken down
working
hit
believe
scared
think clearly
The attack of World Trade Center and Kate's recollection
What might be your important events
…
a camping trip
a home cleaning
a birthday party
a sports meeting
Brainstorm
What were you doing when this event happened
When the camping happened, I was/He was/She was/They were/We were______________.
take photos
have a barbecue
play games
set up a tent
When the home cleaning happened, I was/He was/She was/They were/We were______________.
What were you doing when this event happened
wash the dishes
clean up the table
sweep the floor
clean the windows
When the sports meeting happened, I was/He was/She was/They were/We were______________.
What were you doing when this event happened
cheer for sb.
take photos
write cheering notes（写加油稿）
take part in the race
When the birthday party happened, I was/He was/She was/They were/We were______________.
What were you doing when this event happened
make a wish
sing songs
play the guitar
dance to the music
An Important Event in the past
5W：what, when, where, what, why
What
was the event
When
did it happen
Where
did it happen
What
were people doing
Why
is this event important
When we talk about an event that happened in the past, what questions do we usually ask
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
An important event that I remember well was the lockdown of Wuhan due to epidemic. It happened on January 23, 2020. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When I heard the news of this event, I was playing computer games with my friends.We stopped playing the games, then we searched the Internet for more information about this event.
An example:
Is this article complete
Event
People’s activities
People’s
feeling
Outline
Event
People’s
activities
People’s
feeling
An important event that I remember well was the lockdown of Wuhan due to epidemic. It happened on January 23, 2020. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When I heard the news of this event, I was playing computer games with my friends. We stopped playing the games, then we searched the Internet for more information about this event.
I was.... This event is very important to me because......
Complete the article.
An important event that I remember well was the lockdown of Wuhan due to epidemic. It happened on January 23, 2020. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When I heard the news of this event, I was playing computer games with my friends.We stopped playing the games, then we searched the Internet for more information about this event.
I was nervous and scared. This event is very important to me because it has changed my life a lot. We still haven't gotten rid of the epidemic in 2022. Hope things get better soon.
First, write about the event (when and where it happened).
Next, write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Then, write about why this event was important.
At the end of this class, we will be able to:
get the main idea of each paragraph by reading
the first sentence;
learn more about two important events in American history.
First, write about the event (when and where it happened).
Next, write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Then, write about why this event was important.
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
3b
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
在你成长的过程中，有些事情会让你记忆犹新，经久难忘。请以 “An Unforgettable Thing” 为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。
要求：参考所学句型，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
【It’s time to write】
定时态
定人称
定体裁
An Unforgettable Thing
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去式时和过去进行时为主
An Unforgettable Thing
Event
People’s
activities
People’s
feeling
Try to write an outline of your article.
An unforgettable thing that I remember well was......It happened on/in....at/in.....
When I was... My friends were ...
This thing is unforgettable to me because......
A possible version
An important event in 2024 that I remember well was the camping trip with my classmates. It happened on the Saturday after the mid-term examination last year at the city park.
When the camping began, we had different tasks to do. I was preparing the food with my group members while my teachers and the monitor were setting up the tent. There were also some classmates spreading the picnic cloth. When all was prepared, we began enjoy ourselves. Some of us were playing musical instruments when some were dancing to the music and singing songs. My teachers were having the barbecue while some were making salads. There were also some students playing games.
This event is very important to me because we all had great fun that day. In addition, the camping trip helped us relax a lot and get close to nature.
【Let’s evaluate.】
Self Check
1 Fill in the blanks with when or while.
______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
when
While
3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
When
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I _________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they ______ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and ______ (start) to play.
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
While I ___________ (play), everyone _____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______(hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ______ (win)! It _____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
waited
heard
was beating
won
was
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
1.Polish your article.
2.Review Unit5 and do the exercises.
3.Preview Unit6 A (1a-2c).
Homework
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