读后续写 “五四三”法则&动作面 课件（共17张）-2025届高三英语二轮复习
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“五四三”法则--动作面
“五四三”法则
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out of the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
"Congratulations, son," his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldn’t admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn’t take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn’t sure what to expect. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool.
注意：1. 续写的词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
As he dove into the water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. ____________________________
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too. ____________________________
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out of the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
"Congratulations, son," his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldn’t admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn’t take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn’t sure what to expect. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool.
“五四三”法则
（一）五 R 解读故事
1. Read for characters
3. Read for conflicts
2. Read for plots
4. Read for emotional changes
5. Read for the theme
True success comes from hard work and determination, not from relying on so-called "lucky charms".
Confidence and Joy
Dependence and Overconfidence
Disappointment and Frustration
Hesitation and Uncertainty
Mike's reliance on a "lucky charm" and reality, and how he overcomes this dependency.
“五四三”法则
（二）四句定框架
1. 先写最后一句，即主题句
2. 再写衔接句，即第一段的最后一句
Mike was aware that ice cream was never his lucky charm. His strong will to win was, instead!
The last 5 minutes saw him dash to the finish line first, followed by the end of the race.
As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. __________________________________
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. ____________________________________
4. 补充完整每段的中间部分
3. 根据每段的段首句写衔接句
He swam forward with all his might, feeling energized and full of confidence.
Getting out of the swimming pool, he felt the flowers in his heart already in bloom.
他的心情
如何游
（三）三大原则
1. Action—Response 原则
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段可以有 1 至 2句对话，但是不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种反应。
2. Conflict—Solution 原则
一般而言第二段会有问题的解决方法，但本文和其他高考的读后续写文章出题不一样，因为解决方法在所给文章中就已经有了。同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。
3. Negative—Positive 原则
写作中一定要体现情感的变化，但无论前面是怎样的变化，最终都应该是积极的。
“五四三”法则
Predict the ending and compose the plot (预测故事走向）
04
Logical Plotting with the given key words情节推理和关键词协同
P1: As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could..
P2: His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too.
Q1: Did the swim meet go smoothly (other competitors)
Q2: What did Mike do
Q3: What did Mike feel
Q4: Did Mike win the swim meet
Q1: How did Mike feel
Q2: What did his parents do and say
Q3: What did Mike think and say
Q4: What did the story intend to tell readers
主（次）要人物所思所想所感所说所做
the race finish
能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。
III.Action Scene
（动作面）
人物+动作
镜头1: 语言描写
(Language description)
局部
整体
镜头2: 心理描写
(Psychological description)
镜头3: 神态描写
(情绪描写)
(Manner description)
Action Scene — Language description(语言描写)
主语+谓语(动作A)，说的内容(使用非谓语)
He rushed away immediately.
他大声地喊(shout)：“谁能来救救我啊？”
He rushed away immediately, shouting loudly, “Who could help me ”
His father pat him on the shoulder, saying jokingly, “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate ”
他的父亲拍了拍他的肩膀，开玩笑地说：“嘿，为什么不尝尝你最喜欢的冰淇淋庆祝一下呢？”
He rushed away immediately and couldn’t help thinking, “I didn’t want to die.”
Action Scene — Psychological description(心理描写)
“I can win the race,” he made up his mind/he said to himself , with his eyes fixed on the finish line forward.
“我能赢得这场比赛。”他下定决心/他对自己说，眼睛紧盯着前方的终点线。
He fixed his eyes on the finish line forward, and made up his mind/said to himself , “I can win the race.”
主语+谓语(动作A)，神态描写
(使用独立主格结构或者With 复合结构)
He cried scaredly and loudly with tears rolling down.
Action Scene -- Manner description(神态描写 )
“Thanks, Dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” Mike replied with his eyes shining like a diamond.
“谢谢，爸爸，但我已经放弃冰淇淋了。它根本不是什么幸运符。”迈克回答道，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。
Vivid
Action
description
1.Individual Verb
2.Action Chain
Adv(副词/表示心情类的副词)/
PP(介词短语)
3.Action Scene
2.1Coordinate conjunction(并列连词)
2.2Non-infinitive form(非谓语)
3.1Language description(语言描写)
+(非谓语)
3.2Psychological(心理) description
3.3Manner(神态) description
+(With 的复合结构)
As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. He swam forward with all his might, feeling energized and full of confidence. “I can win the race,” he made up his mind, with his eyes fixed on the finish line forward. Suddenly, another swimmer swam past, so he felt his heart beating fast and his mind blank. Just then, he thought of all the effort he had made, his mother’s hug and father’s encouragement. Gradually, he calmed down and his worry gave way to his confidence.The last 5 minutes saw him dash to the finish line first, followed by the end of the race.
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. Getting out of the swimming pool, he felt the flowers in his heart already in bloom. However, he knew all his efforts had paid off and he deserved the honor of championship. His father came up to say “congratulations” and his mother gave him a hug like before . His father pat him on the shoulder, saying jokingly, “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate ” “Thanks, Dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” Mike replied with his eyes shining like a diamond. Mike was well aware that ice cream was never his lucky charm. His strong will to win was, instead!
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“五四三”法则--动作面
“五四三”法则
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out of the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
"Congratulations, son," his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldn’t admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn’t take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn’t sure what to expect. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool.
注意：1. 续写的词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
As he dove into the water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. ____________________________
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too. ____________________________
Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike climbed out of the pool, smiling. He had just won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
"Congratulations, son," his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream flavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe he'd win again.
He’s taken first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets. He began to think of it as his lucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldn’t admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn’t take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost its magic.
On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Maybe it's time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.
Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didn’t perform well. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soon disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.
It was the last meet of the season, and Mike wasn’t sure what to expect. He felt healthy again, but he didn’t know if he still had any speed in the pool.
“五四三”法则
（一）五 R 解读故事
1. Read for characters
3. Read for conflicts
2. Read for plots
4. Read for emotional changes
5. Read for the theme
True success comes from hard work and determination, not from relying on so-called "lucky charms".
Confidence and Joy
Dependence and Overconfidence
Disappointment and Frustration
Hesitation and Uncertainty
Mike's reliance on a "lucky charm" and reality, and how he overcomes this dependency.
“五四三”法则
（二）四句定框架
1. 先写最后一句，即主题句
2. 再写衔接句，即第一段的最后一句
Mike was aware that ice cream was never his lucky charm. His strong will to win was, instead!
The last 5 minutes saw him dash to the finish line first, followed by the end of the race.
As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. __________________________________
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. ____________________________________
4. 补充完整每段的中间部分
3. 根据每段的段首句写衔接句
He swam forward with all his might, feeling energized and full of confidence.
Getting out of the swimming pool, he felt the flowers in his heart already in bloom.
他的心情
如何游
（三）三大原则
1. Action—Response 原则
一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段可以有 1 至 2句对话，但是不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种反应。
2. Conflict—Solution 原则
一般而言第二段会有问题的解决方法，但本文和其他高考的读后续写文章出题不一样，因为解决方法在所给文章中就已经有了。同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。
3. Negative—Positive 原则
写作中一定要体现情感的变化，但无论前面是怎样的变化，最终都应该是积极的。
“五四三”法则
Predict the ending and compose the plot (预测故事走向）
04
Logical Plotting with the given key words情节推理和关键词协同
P1: As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could..
P2: His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too.
Q1: Did the swim meet go smoothly (other competitors)
Q2: What did Mike do
Q3: What did Mike feel
Q4: Did Mike win the swim meet
Q1: How did Mike feel
Q2: What did his parents do and say
Q3: What did Mike think and say
Q4: What did the story intend to tell readers
主（次）要人物所思所想所感所说所做
the race finish
能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。
III.Action Scene
（动作面）
人物+动作
镜头1: 语言描写
(Language description)
局部
整体
镜头2: 心理描写
(Psychological description)
镜头3: 神态描写
(情绪描写)
(Manner description)
Action Scene — Language description(语言描写)
主语+谓语(动作A)，说的内容(使用非谓语)
He rushed away immediately.
他大声地喊(shout)：“谁能来救救我啊？”
He rushed away immediately, shouting loudly, “Who could help me ”
His father pat him on the shoulder, saying jokingly, “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate ”
他的父亲拍了拍他的肩膀，开玩笑地说：“嘿，为什么不尝尝你最喜欢的冰淇淋庆祝一下呢？”
He rushed away immediately and couldn’t help thinking, “I didn’t want to die.”
Action Scene — Psychological description(心理描写)
“I can win the race,” he made up his mind/he said to himself , with his eyes fixed on the finish line forward.
“我能赢得这场比赛。”他下定决心/他对自己说，眼睛紧盯着前方的终点线。
He fixed his eyes on the finish line forward, and made up his mind/said to himself , “I can win the race.”
主语+谓语(动作A)，神态描写
(使用独立主格结构或者With 复合结构)
He cried scaredly and loudly with tears rolling down.
Action Scene -- Manner description(神态描写 )
“Thanks, Dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” Mike replied with his eyes shining like a diamond.
“谢谢，爸爸，但我已经放弃冰淇淋了。它根本不是什么幸运符。”迈克回答道，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。
Vivid
Action
description
1.Individual Verb
2.Action Chain
Adv(副词/表示心情类的副词)/
PP(介词短语)
3.Action Scene
2.1Coordinate conjunction(并列连词)
2.2Non-infinitive form(非谓语)
3.1Language description(语言描写)
+(非谓语)
3.2Psychological(心理) description
3.3Manner(神态) description
+(With 的复合结构)
As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. He swam forward with all his might, feeling energized and full of confidence. “I can win the race,” he made up his mind, with his eyes fixed on the finish line forward. Suddenly, another swimmer swam past, so he felt his heart beating fast and his mind blank. Just then, he thought of all the effort he had made, his mother’s hug and father’s encouragement. Gradually, he calmed down and his worry gave way to his confidence.The last 5 minutes saw him dash to the finish line first, followed by the end of the race.
His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. Getting out of the swimming pool, he felt the flowers in his heart already in bloom. However, he knew all his efforts had paid off and he deserved the honor of championship. His father came up to say “congratulations” and his mother gave him a hug like before . His father pat him on the shoulder, saying jokingly, “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate ” “Thanks, Dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” Mike replied with his eyes shining like a diamond. Mike was well aware that ice cream was never his lucky charm. His strong will to win was, instead!