专题01 邀请信+求助信+投诉信（讲义）原卷版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 邀请信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 7
【命题预测】 8
题型二 求助信 11
【真题研析】 11
【核心精讲】 13
【命题预测】 14
题型三 投诉信 17
【真题研析】 17
【核心精讲】 18
【命题预测】 19
重难点突破 “盼望你的回复”一句多译 22
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
邀请信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写邀请信。 2022年新课标卷，给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次校广播站英语节目访谈 2022年北京卷，邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次英语写作的线上经验交流 2022年6月天津卷，校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”邀请留学生同学Michael体验 2020年1月浙江卷，发一封邮件邀请英国朋友参加George外国学生中文演讲比赛 2019年全国III卷，写一封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加你校将举办音乐节 一、邀请对象为英语外籍教师，英美国家好友或者学校外籍交换生； 二、内容紧贴生活，贴近时代，贴近学生； 三、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主。 四、最近五年频繁考查，应重点备考。
求助信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写求助信。 2020年全国III卷，给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧 2016年全国I卷，给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔几年会考查一次，应该引起重视； 二、注意求助别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
投诉信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写投诉信。 2008年湖北卷，购买一部外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换 一、高考考查频率不高，属于了解类型； 二、注意三段式结构，体现投诉者意愿诉求。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 盼望你的回复。 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，深入浅出，举一反三，好学易用。
题型一 邀请信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2022年新课标卷 给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次校广播站英语节目访谈
2022年北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次英语写作的线上经验交流
2022年6月天津卷 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”邀请留学生同学Michael体验
2020年1月浙江卷 发一封邮件邀请英国朋友参加George外国学生中文演讲比赛
2019年全国III卷 写一封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加你校将举办音乐节
2017年全国I卷 发邮件邀请外教Henry参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展
2015年全国II卷 邀请外教和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节
二、高考考向
邀请信分为两种：一种是个人信函，如邀请某人参加观看展览、电影、出席典礼等。另一种属于事务信函，如邀请参加会议、学术活动等。写作时语气应真挚热情，在信件的结尾都应表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。
三、高考真题
1. ( 2022·新课标卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. (2022·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. (2022·浙江6月卷)假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4. (2022·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
1.向同学们发出入社邀请；
2.介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
3.分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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5. (2019·全国III卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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高考英语邀请信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达邀请这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达邀请的目的和原因，让对方明白为何被邀请以及参加活动的具体安排。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到邀请，应尽快回复，表明是否出席。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达热情真诚
邀请信的语言应该热情、友好，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、邀请信首段金句：①问候语/②自我介绍+③写信意图
1. Hi, Jack, how is everything going 嗨，杰克，一切都好吗？
2. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 我是新华中学学生会主席李华。
3. I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student, who is in charge of the paper-cutting club in our school. 我是李华，一名高三学生，是我们学校剪纸俱乐部的负责人。
4. Knowing with delight that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in a paper-cutting art exhibition. 得知你对中国传统文化感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加一个剪纸艺术展。
5. There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall, so I'm sincerely writing to invite you to go with me on behalf of our whole family. 本周六晚上新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会，所以我代表全家真诚地写信邀请你一起去。
二、邀请信中段金句：①活动内容+②邀请原因+③注意事项
1. The details concerning the English Speech Cometition are as follows. 关于英语演讲比赛的详细信息如下。
2. The following is the detailed information with regard to this activity. 以下是关于这项活动的详细信息。
3. I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture in the lecture hall at 3:00 pm. 我想知道你下午3点在演讲厅演讲是否方便。
4. The lecture is due to start at 9:00 am on the playground and last for two hours, from 3 pm to 5 pm. 讲座将于上午9:00在操场开始，持续两个小时，从下午3点到5点。
5. If you are interested in table tennis, please sign up for our school team by July 20th.如果你对乒乓球感兴趣，请在7 月 20 日前报名参加我们的校队。
三、邀请信尾段金句：①照应主题表示感谢+②期待回复
1. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by September 25. 如果您能在9月25日前告诉我是否参加，我们将不胜感激。
2. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience. 如果你能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。
3. I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果方便的话，我衷心希望您能接受我们的邀请。
4. Our whole family and I would feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们全家都将感到不胜荣幸。
5. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance! 你的尽早回复不胜感激。提前谢谢您！
考向1 邀请参加自然文化研学活动
（24-25高三上·甘肃酒泉·期中）假定你是李华，你班下周末将组织一次以“来北京看中国”(See China in Beijing)为主题的自然文化研学活动，为期一天。请你用英文写一封信邀请你校国际部交换生Jim来参加活动。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.活动时间、地点、活动安排；
3.期盼得到回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：natural cultural study tour(n.)：自然文化研学活动
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
考向2 邀请参加肢体语言重要性讲座
（24-25高三上·吉林长春·期中）假定你是李华，你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间和地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 邀请参加机器人设计比赛
（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校机器人俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比赛。请你给笔友Peter写封邮件，邀请他参加竞赛。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 活动时间、地点、内容、意义等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
考向4 邀请参加文化历史展
（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）假定你是李华，下个月国庆节市博物馆将举办一场文化历史展，请给你校的英国留学生 Alex 写一封邮件邀请他一起观展，内容包括：
1. 活动内容、时间；
2. 活动意义；
3. 邀请一同观展。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 邀请参加我心目中的中国征文大赛
（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校正在筹备“China in My Eyes”征文大赛，请你邀请英国交换生Wiliam参加此活动，要点如下：
1. 投稿时间；
2. 内容要求；
3. 诚邀参加。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题型二 求助信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2020年全国III卷 给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧
2016年全国I卷 给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式
2013年全国II卷 给开网店的美国朋友Tom写一封信请他代卖自制的中国结
2011年全国卷 在英国学习暑期课程遇到困难向学校辅导中心求助书面预约
二、高考考向
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时请求别人帮助所写的信件。高考的求助信包括请求帮忙修改作品、解决学习问题等。写信人希望收信人能提供帮助或者解决方案，所以语言要简明扼要，符合说话人的身份；语气要真诚委婉，不能强人所难。
三、高考真题
1.（2020年全国III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Evans,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
2.（2016年全国I卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教 Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附两份材料的语言和格式(format)。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.求助内容；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
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3.（2013年全国II卷）假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要包括：
1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；
2.象征意义；
3.价格
注意：1.100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，3.开头为你写好
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4．（2011年全国卷）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介；
2.求助内容；
3.约定时间；
4.你的联系方式 (Email: lihua@1236 com; Phone: 12345678)。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语求助信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达求助这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达求助的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被求助以及活动的具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达真诚友好
求助信的语言应该真诚、友好，体现出对对方的信任和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、求助信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图，提出请求。
1. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a summer course in your university. 我叫李华，是一名在贵校修暑期课程的中国学生。
2. I’m sorry to trouble you but I do have some problems and I badly need your guidance. 很抱歉打扰你，但我确实有一些问题，我非常需要你的指导。
3. I would feel obliged if you could do me the favor of finding my camera left in your hotel. 如果您能帮我找到我留在酒店的相机，我将不胜感激。
4. I was wondering if you could spare some time for removing the following doubts from me. 我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间来消除我的以下疑虑。
5. I’m writing to you in the hope that you could do me a special favor and polish the application letter up for me. 我写信给你，希望你能帮我一个特别的忙，帮我把申请信润色一下。
二、求助信次段金句：详述提出请求的原因及内容。
1. On arriving home, it struck me that I had left my English dictionary at your house. 到家时，我突然想到我把英语词典忘在你家了。
2. But I have some trouble with note-taking and I have no idea how to use the library. 但我记笔记有点困难，我不知道如何使用图书馆。
3.The dictionary means a lot to me as it is a precious gift from my American teacher on my 18th birthday. 这本词典对我来说意义重大，因为它是我18岁生日时美国老师送给我的珍贵礼物。
4. Will you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to learn English words by heart more efficiently 你能给我一些关于如何更有效地背英语单词的建议吗？
5. It won’t be better if you can look through my resume for some possible mistakes and polish them up for me. 如果你能浏览我的简历，找出一些可能的错误，并为我润色一下，那就更好。
三、求助信尾段金句：表示感谢、期盼对方早日回复。
1. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能帮我一把，我将不胜感激。
2. If you need further information, please feel free to inform me. 如果您需要更多信息，请随时通知我。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your earliest reply. 感谢您的善意考虑，我期待着您的尽早回复。
4. I would be highly grateful if you could find back my csuitcase and mail it to me. 如果您能找到我的简历并邮寄给我，我将不胜感激。
5. Your early response and warm-hearted assistance would be highly appreciated. 非常感谢您的及时回应和热心协助。
考向1 求助航空公司寻找遗失行李
（2024·重庆·二模）假设你是李华，去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(Holiday Inn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。
内容包括：
1.行李遗失的过程；
2.行李箱的概况；
3.联系电话: 1-703-3543269。
注意：1. 字数80左右。2.文章中不能出现个人真实信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向2 求助外籍心理教师解决压力和睡眠问题
（2024高三下·全国·专题练习）假定你是高三学生李华，最近你遇到了一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Bob写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1.存在的问题；
2.希望得到帮助；
3.表示感谢。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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考向3 求助大学解决学费和生活费
（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假如你是李华，是新加坡国立大学（NUS）的一名国际交换生，因最近家庭经济状况出现变故，现无法承担全部的学费（tuition）和生活费用，因此你决定给辅导员Paul Black写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.个人情况；
2.求助内容。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向4 求助外籍教师润色修改稿件
（24-25高三上·云南大理·阶段练习）假设你是李华，是你校英文报“中国传统文化”栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍中国功夫（Chinese kung fu）的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师Mr. Roger写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 求助交换生指导英文歌曲大赛
（23-24高三下·内蒙古赤峰·期中）假定你是李华,你准备参加学校举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件,请她给予指导。内容包括:
1. 说明比赛要求；
2.请她推荐歌曲；
3.请求陪同练习。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行行文连贯。
Dear Anna ,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题型三 投诉信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2008年湖北卷 购买一部外国公司生产的手机，因质量问题要求该公司更换
二、高考考向
投诉信是向有关部门反映所购买的某种商品或某项服务/环境不能达到要求，以期望对方退换或向对方索赔。投诉信一般包括以下要点：写信目的、反映问题、提出解决方案、期待解决。其措辞要客气，但语气要坚定，这样才能达到投诉效果。
三、高考真题
（2008湖北卷）假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。
2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1. 词数为100左右；
2. 参考词汇：配件-- spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）
或
高考英语投诉信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍，再开门见山表达投诉某一产品、糟糕服务等写作意图。
次段清楚地表达投诉产品、服务等发生的时间、地点以及所存在的诸多问题。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，希望重视投诉尽快给予回复。同时，给对方提出完善整改建议或要求退款等。
二、表达热情真诚
投诉信的语言应该礼貌、客气，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，同时有礼有节，不夸大不虚假，实事求是陈述事情的经过、存在的问题或受到的不公正待遇等。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、投诉信首段金句：首段开门见山表明投诉意图
1. My name is Li Hua, a regular customer of your website. 我叫李华，是贵公司网站的常客。
2. I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight NYZ369 from Beijing to London on August 8. 我是一名中国乘客，于8月8日乘坐贵公司NYZ369航班从北京飞往伦敦。
3. Here I am writing to complain about the shoes I bought last week. 我写信来投诉我上周买的鞋子。
4. This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. 这封信是投诉你们一位销售人员的行为。
5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the cellphone. 很抱歉打扰你，但恐怕我得投诉一下手机。
二、投诉信次段金句：分条陈述投诉内容和事实
1. In the first place, the cellphone powers off at least twice a week. 首先，手机每周至少关机两次。
2. When I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front coverwas damaged. 当我打开包裹时，我失望地发现封面损坏了。
3. Surprisingly, it was not until two weeks later that the book was delivered to me. 令人惊讶的是，直到两周后，这本书才投递给我。
4. He said since it was an old model, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 他说由于这是一款旧车型，没有合适的备件是不可能修好的。
5. The last straw was that several pages of the newly published book were missing. 最让我受不了的是这本新出版的书缺少了几页。
三、投诉信尾段金句：表明自己的诉求或要求（退款、赔偿、道歉等）
1. Unless you give back my money within three days, I intend to take further action. 除非你在三天内把钱还给我，否则我打算采取进一步行动。
2. So I demand that you should apologize to me, for your mistake, preferably compensating for my loss. 所以我要求你为你的错误向我道歉，最好是赔偿我的损失。
3. This incident indicates there is still room for improvement concerning your customer service. 这一事件表明，您的客户服务仍有改进的空间。
4. I believe you will take my case seriously and I am looking forward to your positive reply. 我相信你会认真对待我的案件，我期待着你的积极答复。
5. Thank you for your consideration and your early reply would be highly appreciated. 感谢您的考虑，如能早日回复，我们将不胜感激。
考向1 投诉网购电子词典笔
（24-25高三上·河南南阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你发现上周网购的电子词典笔(electronic dictionary pen)有问题，请给客户服务中心写一封电子邮件进行投诉，要点如下：
1.进行投诉；
2.说明问题；
3.说明解决方案
注意：1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向2 投诉航空公司行李问题
（24-25高三下·四川德阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，乘飞机从北京到伦敦旅行，到达目的地取行李时发现行李箱破损，部分物品丢失。你与相关人员交涉无果，于是给该航空公司写一封投诉信。内容主要包括：
1.说明个人相关信息(航线/航班：MMYZ577/时间：August 28)：
2.反映情况；
3.希望尽快解决。
注意：
1. 词数约为 80 字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear sir or madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 投诉博物馆收藏书籍英文介绍错误
（24-25高三上·河北石家庄·阶段练习）假定你是李华，在美国某博物馆参观时，购买了一本介绍该馆所收藏文物的书籍，阅读后发现书中对一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信，内容包括：
1. 投诉问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向4 投诉网购图书问题
（2025·广东江门·模拟预测）假设你是李华，两周前你网购了一套丛书，昨天才到货，还存在其他问题，请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：
1. 陈述写信目的；
2. 投诉内容；
3. 提出你的要求。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 投诉网购图书问题
（24-25高三上·安徽合肥·期中）假定你是李华，在某海外购物网站上订购了一款智能手表作为新年礼物送给母亲，但是收货之后出现了一些问题，请你给该网站客服写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 投诉内容；
2. 你的诉求。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
重难点突破 “盼望你的回复”一句多译
1.期待您的回复。
2.热切期待您的及时回复。
3.期待尽快与您进一步讨论。
4.我真诚地期待着你出席演讲比赛。
5.如果您能及时回复我的信，我们将不胜感激。
6.如果你能尽快回复我，我将不胜感激。
7.如果您能及时关注这封信，我们将不胜感激。
8.如果你能早点给我一个积极的反馈，我将不胜感激。
9.如果您能考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。
10.如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复我，我们将不胜感激。
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题01 邀请信+求助信+投诉信（讲义）解析版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 邀请信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 10
【命题预测】 11
题型二 求助信 19
【真题研析】 19
【核心精讲】 25
【命题预测】 26
题型三 投诉信 33
【真题研析】 33
【核心精讲】 34
【命题预测】 36
重难点突破 “盼望你的回复”一句多译 43
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
邀请信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写邀请信。 2022年新课标卷，给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次校广播站英语节目访谈 2022年北京卷，邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次英语写作的线上经验交流 2022年6月天津卷，校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”邀请留学生同学Michael体验 2020年1月浙江卷，发一封邮件邀请英国朋友参加George外国学生中文演讲比赛 2019年全国III卷，写一封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加你校将举办音乐节 一、邀请对象为英语外籍教师，英美国家好友或者学校外籍交换生； 二、内容紧贴生活，贴近时代，贴近学生； 三、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主。 四、最近五年频繁考查，应重点备考。
求助信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写求助信。 2020年全国III卷，给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧 2016年全国I卷，给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔几年会考查一次，应该引起重视； 二、注意求助别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
投诉信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写投诉信。 2008年湖北卷，购买一部外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换 一、高考考查频率不高，属于了解类型； 二、注意三段式结构，体现投诉者意愿诉求。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 盼望你的回复。 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，深入浅出，举一反三，好学易用。
题型一 邀请信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2022年新课标卷 给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次校广播站英语节目访谈
2022年北京卷 邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次英语写作的线上经验交流
2022年6月天津卷 校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”邀请留学生同学Michael体验
2020年1月浙江卷 发一封邮件邀请英国朋友参加George外国学生中文演讲比赛
2019年全国III卷 写一封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加你校将举办音乐节
2017年全国I卷 发邮件邀请外教Henry参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展
2015年全国II卷 邀请外教和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节
二、高考考向
邀请信分为两种：一种是个人信函，如邀请某人参加观看展览、电影、出席典礼等。另一种属于事务信函，如邀请参加会议、学术活动等。写作时语气应真挚热情，在信件的结尾都应表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。
三、高考真题
1. ( 2022·新课标卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【思路详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
2. (2022·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
How’s everything I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近好吗：How’s everything → How’s it going
提供、给予：give → offer / provide
不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in
建议：suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
拓展句：I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3. (2022·浙江6月卷)假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dear Michael,
Good news! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to
预定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）
4. (2022·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
1.向同学们发出入社邀请；
2.介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
3.分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends. Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
参加：participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的：enjoyable →joyful
激发：stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!（运用了动名词作宾语）
【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
（运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构）
5. (2019·全国III卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。
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高考英语邀请信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达邀请这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达邀请的目的和原因，让对方明白为何被邀请以及参加活动的具体安排。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到邀请，应尽快回复，表明是否出席。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达热情真诚
邀请信的语言应该热情、友好，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、邀请信首段金句：①问候语/②自我介绍+③写信意图
1. Hi, Jack, how is everything going 嗨，杰克，一切都好吗？
2. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 我是新华中学学生会主席李华。
3. I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student, who is in charge of the paper-cutting club in our school. 我是李华，一名高三学生，是我们学校剪纸俱乐部的负责人。
4. Knowing with delight that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in a paper-cutting art exhibition. 得知你对中国传统文化感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加一个剪纸艺术展。
5. There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall, so I'm sincerely writing to invite you to go with me on behalf of our whole family. 本周六晚上新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会，所以我代表全家真诚地写信邀请你一起去。
二、邀请信中段金句：①活动内容+②邀请原因+③注意事项
1. The details concerning the English Speech Cometition are as follows. 关于英语演讲比赛的详细信息如下。
2. The following is the detailed information with regard to this activity. 以下是关于这项活动的详细信息。
3. I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture in the lecture hall at 3:00 pm. 我想知道你下午3点在演讲厅演讲是否方便。
4. The lecture is due to start at 9:00 am on the playground and last for two hours, from 3 pm to 5 pm. 讲座将于上午9:00在操场开始，持续两个小时，从下午3点到5点。
5. If you are interested in table tennis, please sign up for our school team by July 20th.如果你对乒乓球感兴趣，请在7 月 20 日前报名参加我们的校队。
三、邀请信尾段金句：①照应主题表示感谢+②期待回复
1. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by September 25. 如果您能在9月25日前告诉我是否参加，我们将不胜感激。
2. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience. 如果你能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。
3. I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果方便的话，我衷心希望您能接受我们的邀请。
4. Our whole family and I would feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们全家都将感到不胜荣幸。
5. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance! 你的尽早回复不胜感激。提前谢谢您！
考向1 邀请参加自然文化研学活动
（24-25高三上·甘肃酒泉·期中）假定你是李华，你班下周末将组织一次以“来北京看中国”(See China in Beijing)为主题的自然文化研学活动，为期一天。请你用英文写一封信邀请你校国际部交换生Jim来参加活动。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.活动时间、地点、活动安排；
3.期盼得到回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：natural cultural study tour(n.)：自然文化研学活动
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour with the theme of “See China in Beijing” next weekend.
We’ll start at 8:00 am next Saturday and gather at our school playground. First, we’ll pay a visit to the Forbidden City to admire the magnificent ancient architecture and rich cultural heritage. Then, we plan to have a delicious lunch in a local restaurant. In the afternoon, we will be led to Beihai Park, where we can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery.
I really hope you can come. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一封信邀请你校国际部交换生Jim来参加“来北京看中国”(See China in Beijing)为主题的自然&文化研学活动。其内容包括：写信目的、活动时间、地点、活动安排以及期盼得到回复。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：start→begin
首先：first→to begin with
欣赏：admire →appreciate
美味的：delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour with the theme of “See China in Beijing” next weekend.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour next weekend, whose theme is about “See China in Beijing” .
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the afternoon, we will be led to Beihai Park, where we can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I really hope you can come.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
考向2 邀请参加肢体语言重要性讲座
（24-25高三上·吉林长春·期中）假定你是李华，你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间和地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday. It will be held in the school hall at 2 p.m.
The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life. We will learn how to interpret different body language and use it effectively in various situations, such as in interviews, business meetings and social gatherings.
I sincerely invite you to attend it. I believe you will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely broaden your knowledge and help you better understand people’s true intentions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举办的一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→ well-known
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
影响：affect→ influence
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
2.句式转换
原句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
拓展句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor, which will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
考向3 邀请参加机器人设计比赛
（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校机器人俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比赛。请你给笔友Peter写封邮件，邀请他参加竞赛。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 活动时间、地点、内容、意义等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club. It will take place in the school hall at 2 p.m. on January 25 and last about 2 hours. The competition aims to spark student creativity and innovation, providing a platform to showcase your robotic skills. Participation would be a great opportunity for you to engage with like-minded peers and expand your horizons.
I believe this competition will be an enriching experience for you. Hope you can join us! .
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校机器人俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比赛。请你给笔友Peter写封邮件，邀请他参加竞赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：pleased→delighted
参加：participate in→take part in
举办：host→hold
机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club.
拓展句：I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition that will be hosted by our school’s robot club.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to spark student creativity and innovation, providing a platform to showcase your robotic skills. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club. (运用了过去分词作定语)
考向4 邀请参加文化历史展
（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）假定你是李华，下个月国庆节市博物馆将举办一场文化历史展，请给你校的英国留学生 Alex 写一封邮件邀请他一起观展，内容包括：
1. 活动内容、时间；
2. 活动意义；
3. 邀请一同观展。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Alex,
I hope this letter finds you well. As the National Day holiday approaches, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join me in visiting an exhibition.
The exhibition, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China. Scheduled from October 1st to October 7th at the National Museum of History, it will provide a fantastic experience for both of us, not only to appreciate the beauty and depth of Chinese culture but also to immerse oneself in our country’s rich heritage. I am planning to visit on the morning of October 3rd, and I would be thrilled if you could accompany me.
Please let me know if you are available on that day. I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生以李华的身份给英国留学生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观市博物馆即将举办的文化历史展，并说明活动的内容、时间以及活动意义。
【详解】词汇积累
临近：approach → draw near
展示：showcase → display/exhibit
沉浸：immerse → plunge/indulge
激动的：thrilled → excited
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The exhibition, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China.
拓展句：The exhibition, which is titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the National Day holiday approaches, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join me in visiting a splendid cultural and historical exhibition. (运用了从属连词as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Scheduled from October 1st to October 7th at the National Museum of History, it will provide a fantastic experience for both of us, not only to appreciate the beauty and depth of Chinese culture but also to immerse oneself in our country’s rich heritage. (运用了过去分词作状语和复合连词not only...but also...连接的并列结构)
[高分句型3] Please let me know if you are available on that day. (运用了从属连词if引导的条件状语从句)
考向5 邀请参加我心目中的中国征文大赛
（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校正在筹备“China in My Eyes”征文大赛，请你邀请英国交换生Wiliam参加此活动，要点如下：
1. 投稿时间；
2. 内容要求；
3. 诚邀参加。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear William,
How are you doing lately I’m writing to inform you of a writing contest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite you to participate in it.
Since you’re keen on Chinese culture and economic development, I’m sure it will be a piece of cake for you to write about this topic. You are required to write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture. The deadline for the submission is by October 28th. You can email your entry to IloveChina@.
I’m eagerly expecting your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Wiliam写信，邀请他参加“China in My Eyes”征文大赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
最近：lately → recently
通知：inform you of → tell you
参加：participate in → take in
喜爱：be keen on → be fond of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You are required to write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture.
拓展句：It is required that you should write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you’re keen on Chinese culture and economic development, I’m sure it will be a piece of cake for you to write about this topic. (使用了since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m writing to inform you of a writing contest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite you to participate in it. (使用了过去分词充当后置定语)
题型二 求助信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2020年全国III卷 给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧
2016年全国I卷 给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式
2013年全国II卷 给开网店的美国朋友Tom写一封信请他代卖自制的中国结
2011年全国卷 在英国学习暑期课程遇到困难向学校辅导中心求助书面预约
二、高考考向
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时请求别人帮助所写的信件。高考的求助信包括请求帮忙修改作品、解决学习问题等。写信人希望收信人能提供帮助或者解决方案，所以语言要简明扼要，符合说话人的身份；语气要真诚委婉，不能强人所难。
三、高考真题
1.（2020年全国III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Evans,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【满分作文】
Dear Miss Evans,
I am Li Hua from your English class. I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month. We’re interested in one story from our English textbook, The Million Pound Bank Note by Mark Twain. It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story
Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 p. m. this Friday Thank you for your kindness!
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导自己和和同学根据英语课文改编的一个短剧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in
给某人某物：give sb sth→offer sb sth
建议：advice→suggestion
可能的：possible→probable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month.
拓展句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play which is prepared for the English Festival next month.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. （运用了who引导定语从句）
[高分句型2]Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story （运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语）
2.（2016年全国I卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教 Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附两份材料的语言和格式(format)。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.求助内容；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m writing to seek your help. I’m applying for a part-time job in an overseas-funded corporation. I think it’ll be both an opportunity and a new challenge to me. By doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to my future career.
I’ve already written the application and resume. But I’m afraid that there may be some mistakes about the words and format. So could you please correct any mistakes in the material I attach to the letter
I’d appreciate it if you could do me the favor.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Ms. Jenkins写封信，请她帮你修改所附两份材料的语言和格式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求帮助：seek one’s help→ask for help
宝贵的：precious→valuable
纠正：correct→rectify
适应：adapt to→fit in with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m applying for a part-time job in an overseas-funded corporation.
拓展句：I’m applying for a part-time job in a corporation which is overseas-funded.
【点睛】[高分句型1] By doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to my future career. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型2] So could you please correct any mistakes in the material I attach to the letter (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that/which)
3.（2013年全国II卷）假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要包括：
1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；
2.象征意义；
3.价格
注意：1.100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，3.开头为你写好
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.
They are only 12.99 US each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also,do let me know if you need further information. Thank you！
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要包括：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2.象征意义；3.价格。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
漂亮的：beautiful→pretty
运气：luck→fortune
礼物：gift→present
了解：know→learn
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
拓展句：In China, these knots, which look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, stand for friendship, love and good luck.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．（2011年全国卷）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介；
2.求助内容；
3.约定时间；
4.你的联系方式 (Email: lihua@1236 com; Phone: 12345678)。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam:
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I’d like to know how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Could you tell me which day is OK with you It would be great if you email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number, lihua@ 1236, and 12345678.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封申请信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助，但根据学校规定，你需书面预约一事，写一封申请信对你的预约进行申请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求帮助：ask for help→ seek assistance
有趣的：interesting → fascinating
知道：know→ be acquainted with
使用：use→ employ
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：I came here last month and found my courses interesting.
拓展句：Last month, upon my arrival here, I discovered that my courses were indeed captivating and engaging.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.（使用了现在分词短语作定语）
【高分句型2】It would be great if you email or phone me.（使用了连接词if连接的条件状语从句）
高考英语求助信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达求助这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达求助的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被求助以及活动的具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达真诚友好
求助信的语言应该真诚、友好，体现出对对方的信任和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、求助信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图，提出请求。
1. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a summer course in your university. 我叫李华，是一名在贵校修暑期课程的中国学生。
2. I’m sorry to trouble you but I do have some problems and I badly need your guidance. 很抱歉打扰你，但我确实有一些问题，我非常需要你的指导。
3. I would feel obliged if you could do me the favor of finding my camera left in your hotel. 如果您能帮我找到我留在酒店的相机，我将不胜感激。
4. I was wondering if you could spare some time for removing the following doubts from me. 我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间来消除我的以下疑虑。
5. I’m writing to you in the hope that you could do me a special favor and polish the application letter up for me. 我写信给你，希望你能帮我一个特别的忙，帮我把申请信润色一下。
二、求助信次段金句：详述提出请求的原因及内容。
1. On arriving home, it struck me that I had left my English dictionary at your house. 到家时，我突然想到我把英语词典忘在你家了。
2. But I have some trouble with note-taking and I have no idea how to use the library. 但我记笔记有点困难，我不知道如何使用图书馆。
3.The dictionary means a lot to me as it is a precious gift from my American teacher on my 18th birthday. 这本词典对我来说意义重大，因为它是我18岁生日时美国老师送给我的珍贵礼物。
4. Will you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to learn English words by heart more efficiently 你能给我一些关于如何更有效地背英语单词的建议吗？
5. It won’t be better if you can look through my resume for some possible mistakes and polish them up for me. 如果你能浏览我的简历，找出一些可能的错误，并为我润色一下，那就更好。
三、求助信尾段金句：表示感谢、期盼对方早日回复。
1. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能帮我一把，我将不胜感激。
2. If you need further information, please feel free to inform me. 如果您需要更多信息，请随时通知我。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your earliest reply. 感谢您的善意考虑，我期待着您的尽早回复。
4. I would be highly grateful if you could find back my csuitcase and mail it to me. 如果您能找到我的简历并邮寄给我，我将不胜感激。
5. Your early response and warm-hearted assistance would be highly appreciated. 非常感谢您的及时回应和热心协助。
考向1 求助航空公司寻找遗失行李
（2024·重庆·二模）假设你是李华，去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(Holiday Inn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。
内容包括：
1.行李遗失的过程；
2.行李箱的概况；
3.联系电话: 1-703-3543269。
注意：1. 字数80左右。2.文章中不能出现个人真实信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a tourist from China. This morning, I arrived at New York airport and took a yellow taxi to Holiday Inn. Unfortunately, on reaching the hotel, I discovered one of my suitcases lost in the taxi. What was worse, I took no notice of the plate number.
The suitcase is a black plastic one, about 60cm by 40cm by 16cm. There is a video camera, two pairs of pants and some books for children in it. The camera has recorded all my experience in this country, which means a lot to me.
When you have got ANY information of my suitcase, please contact me at 1-703-3543269.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封求助信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(Holiday Inn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱，在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料一事，写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
到达：arrive at → attain the destination of
注意：take notice of → be mindful of
大约：about→ approximately
得到：get→ obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：This morning, I arrived at New York airport and took a yellow taxi to Holiday Inn.
拓展句：This morning, upon my arrival at New York airport, I embarked on a journey in a yellow taxi, which conveyed me to Holiday Inn.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Unfortunately, on reaching the hotel, I discovered one of my suitcases lost in the taxi.（使用了介词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】The camera has recorded all my experience in this country, which means a lot to me.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为前面一整句话表示的内容）
考向2 求助外籍心理教师解决压力和睡眠问题
（2024高三下·全国·专题练习）假定你是高三学生李华，最近你遇到了一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Bob写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1.存在的问题；
2.希望得到帮助；
3.表示感谢。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Bob,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot.
I’ve met some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, I have to spend so much time on my tons of homework that I hardly have time to do exercise. Additionally, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me feel stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the problems above, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems
I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some constructive proposals.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍心理老师 Bob写一封求助信，就最近遇到的一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：intention→aim
除此之外：additionally→besides
困难的：difficult→tough
建议：suggestion→tip
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems
拓展句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how I should solve these problems
【点睛】【高分 句型1】I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot. （运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. （运用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
考向3 求助大学解决学费和生活费
（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假如你是李华，是新加坡国立大学（NUS）的一名国际交换生，因最近家庭经济状况出现变故，现无法承担全部的学费（tuition）和生活费用，因此你决定给辅导员Paul Black写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.个人情况；
2.求助内容。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Black,
I trust this message finds you well. As an international exchange student from NUS, I am writing to humbly request the school’s support due to a sudden shift in my family’s financial situation, which has left me unable to fully cover my tuition and living expenses.
My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, and I have spared no effort in lightening their burden. However, despite our collective perseverance, the mounting costs now exceed what we can manage, putting my continued education at risk.
I am reaching out to seek the school’s assistance to help bridge the financial gap. I remain wholeheartedly dedicated to my studies, and with the school’s invaluable support, I am confident that I can continue to excel and achieve my goals. Your consideration is deeply appreciated. Looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因为家庭经济状况出现变故，现无法承担全部的学费和生活费用，要求考生给辅导员Paul Black写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：due to→because of
给某人提供……：provide sb. with sth.→offer sth. to sb.
机会：opportunity→chance
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, and I have spared no effort in lightening their burden.
拓展句：My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, for which I have spared no effort in lightening their burden.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As an international exchange student from NUS, I am writing to humbly request the school’s support due to a sudden shift in my family’s financial situation, which has left me unable to fully cover my tuition and living expenses.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】However, despite our collective perseverance, the mounting costs now exceed what we can manage, putting my continued education at risk.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
考向4 求助外籍教师润色修改稿件
（24-25高三上·云南大理·阶段练习）假设你是李华，是你校英文报“中国传统文化”栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍中国功夫（Chinese kung fu）的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师Mr. Roger写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Roger,
I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
When it comes to Chinese kung fu, there is no denying that it carries abundant traditional Chinese culture and enjoys a great reputation around the world. I have written an article “A Glimpse into Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep into the beauty and wisdom of this traditional sport. I eagerly ask for your assistance in reviewing my draft, polishing my language and offering insights to better present Chinese kung fu. Your feedback will not only contribute to the excellence of my writing but also deepen the readers’ understanding of this fascinating tradition.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师Mr. Roger写一封电子邮件请他帮忙修改介绍中国功夫的英文宣传稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
负责：in charge of→ be responsible for
大量的：abundant→ plentiful
名声：reputation→ fame
提供：offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, the person who is in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have written an article “A Glimpse into Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep into the beauty and wisdom of this traditional sport.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Your feedback will not only contribute to the excellence of my writing but also deepen the readers’ understanding of this fascinating tradition.（运用了固定短语not only … but also …）
考向5 求助交换生指导英文歌曲大赛
（23-24高三下·内蒙古赤峰·期中）假定你是李华,你准备参加学校举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件,请她给予指导。内容包括:
1. 说明比赛要求；
2.请她推荐歌曲；
3.请求陪同练习。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行行文连贯。
Dear Anna ,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Singing Contest next weekend. I have signed up for it. It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. So, would you please give me some recommendations on which song to choose？
Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. I’d appreciate it if you could practice it with me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Anna写信对学校举办的英文歌曲大赛给予指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求：required→demanded
选手：contestant→competitors
建议：recommendations→suggestions
此外：Besides→Additionally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So, would you please give me some recommendations on which
song to choose？
扩展句：So, would you please give me some recommendations which are about which song I should choose.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. (运用了It作形式主语)
【高分句型2】Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. (运用了what引导的主语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
题型三 投诉信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2008年湖北卷 购买一部外国公司生产的手机，因质量问题要求该公司更换
二、高考考向
投诉信是向有关部门反映所购买的某种商品或某项服务/环境不能达到要求，以期望对方退换或向对方索赔。投诉信一般包括以下要点：写信目的、反映问题、提出解决方案、期待解决。其措辞要客气，但语气要坚定，这样才能达到投诉效果。
三、高考真题
（2008湖北卷）假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。
2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1. 词数为100左右；
2. 参考词汇：配件-- spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th April at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China.
Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment, he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生向手机公司写一封电子邮件，要求更换有质量问题的手机。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
因为：since→ for/because
因此：therefore→ hence/accordingly/consequently
不能：can not→ unable
选择：choice→ option/selection
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages.
复合句：Ten days after that, it not only can't ring, but also can't send short messages.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. （that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.（that引导的宾语从句）
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高考英语投诉信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍，再开门见山表达投诉某一产品、糟糕服务等写作意图。
次段清楚地表达投诉产品、服务等发生的时间、地点以及所存在的诸多问题。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，希望重视投诉尽快给予回复。同时，给对方提出完善整改建议或要求退款等。
二、表达热情真诚
投诉信的语言应该礼貌、客气，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，同时有礼有节，不夸大不虚假，实事求是陈述事情的经过、存在的问题或受到的不公正待遇等。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、投诉信首段金句：首段开门见山表明投诉意图
1. My name is Li Hua, a regular customer of your website. 我叫李华，是贵公司网站的常客。
2. I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight NYZ369 from Beijing to London on August 8. 我是一名中国乘客，于8月8日乘坐贵公司NYZ369航班从北京飞往伦敦。
3. Here I am writing to complain about the shoes I bought last week. 我写信来投诉我上周买的鞋子。
4. This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. 这封信是投诉你们一位销售人员的行为。
5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the cellphone. 很抱歉打扰你，但恐怕我得投诉一下手机。
二、投诉信次段金句：分条陈述投诉内容和事实
1. In the first place, the cellphone powers off at least twice a week. 首先，手机每周至少关机两次。
2. When I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front coverwas damaged. 当我打开包裹时，我失望地发现封面损坏了。
3. Surprisingly, it was not until two weeks later that the book was delivered to me. 令人惊讶的是，直到两周后，这本书才投递给我。
4. He said since it was an old model, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 他说由于这是一款旧车型，没有合适的备件是不可能修好的。
5. The last straw was that several pages of the newly published book were missing. 最让我受不了的是这本新出版的书缺少了几页。
三、投诉信尾段金句：表明自己的诉求或要求（退款、赔偿、道歉等）
1. Unless you give back my money within three days, I intend to take further action. 除非你在三天内把钱还给我，否则我打算采取进一步行动。
2. So I demand that you should apologize to me, for your mistake, preferably compensating for my loss. 所以我要求你为你的错误向我道歉，最好是赔偿我的损失。
3. This incident indicates there is still room for improvement concerning your customer service. 这一事件表明，您的客户服务仍有改进的空间。
4. I believe you will take my case seriously and I am looking forward to your positive reply. 我相信你会认真对待我的案件，我期待着你的积极答复。
5. Thank you for your consideration and your early reply would be highly appreciated. 感谢您的考虑，如能早日回复，我们将不胜感激。
考向1 投诉网购电子词典笔
（24-25高三上·河南南阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你发现上周网购的电子词典笔(electronic dictionary pen)有问题，请给客户服务中心写一封电子邮件进行投诉，要点如下：
1.进行投诉；
2.说明问题；
3.说明解决方案
注意：1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store. I am writing to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
After one week of its purchase, I find it doesn’t work as expected. The battery doesn’t last long after being recharged, perhaps merely half a day. Worse than that, the words on the screen are not distinct enough, which I think is damaging to my eyesight. The last straw is that when I contacted the online store yesterday, I didn’t get a satisfactory answer.
I would appreciate it if you could either refund my purchase or replace it with a new one. Otherwise, I will take legal action. Look forward to your attention and early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你发现上周网购的电子词典笔(electronic dictionary pen)有问题，请给客户服务中心写一封电子邮件进行投诉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
投诉：complain→make a complaint
购买：purchase→buy
令人满意的：satisfactory→content
代替：replace→take place of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am writing to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
拓展句：The reason why I am writing to you is that I’d like to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Worse than that, the words on the screen are not distinct enough, which I think is damaging to my eyesight. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could either refund my purchase or replace it with a new one. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
考向2 投诉航空公司行李问题
（24-25高三下·四川德阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，乘飞机从北京到伦敦旅行，到达目的地取行李时发现行李箱破损，部分物品丢失。你与相关人员交涉无果，于是给该航空公司写一封投诉信。内容主要包括：
1.说明个人相关信息(航线/航班：MMYZ577/时间：August 28)：
2.反映情况；
3.希望尽快解决。
注意：
1. 词数约为 80 字左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear sir or madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight MMYZ577 from Beijing to London on August 28. I’m writing to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
I was disappointed to find my suitcase broken and some of my belongings missing when I claimed my suitcase at London airport. When I reported it to the staff on duty, they totally ignored my demand of compensation for damage. I just can’t imagine how a company with a good reputation can do such a thing!
I do hope you’ll take it seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给航空公司写一封投诉信，投诉其行李箱破损，部分物品丢失的问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
忽视：ignore→overlook
投诉：make a complaint about→complain about
提供：offer→provide
失望的：disappointed→despondent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
拓展句：The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight MMYZ577 from Beijing to London on August 28. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] When I reported it to the staff on duty, they totally ignored my demand of compensation for damage. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
考向3 投诉博物馆收藏书籍英文介绍错误
（24-25高三上·河北石家庄·阶段练习）假定你是李华，在美国某博物馆参观时，购买了一本介绍该馆所收藏文物的书籍，阅读后发现书中对一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信，内容包括：
1. 投诉问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a visitor from China. I purchased a book introducing the artifacts collected in your museum. However, to my disappointment, I discovered several errors in the English descriptions of some Chinese artifacts after reading it.
I sincerely suggest that your museum should have these errors corrected promptly. It’s crucial as accurate information helps visitors better understand and appreciate these precious cultural relics. I do hope my feedback will be taken seriously.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投诉信。要求考生给美国某博物馆写信，就该馆所收藏文物的书籍关于一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误一事进行投诉并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买：purchase→ buy
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
建议：suggest→ advise
重要的：crucial→ important/significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I purchased a book introducing the artifacts collected in your museum.
拓展句：I purchased a book, which introduces the artifacts collected in your museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I sincerely suggest that your museum should have these errors corrected promptly.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】It’s crucial as accurate information helps visitors better understand and appreciate these precious cultural relics.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
考向4 投诉网购图书问题
（2025·广东江门·模拟预测）假设你是李华，两周前你网购了一套丛书，昨天才到货，还存在其他问题，请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：
1. 陈述写信目的；
2. 投诉内容；
3. 提出你的要求。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am one of your customers. I am writing to complain about an order.
I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，就网购的一套丛书的问题表示投诉，要点如下：1. 陈述写信目的；2. 投诉内容；3. 提出你的要求。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺损的：missing→defective
另外：besides→moreover
更糟糕的是：to make matters worse→worse still
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.
拓展句：And I was disappointed that the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.
【点睛】[高分句型1] And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. (运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
考向5 投诉网购图书问题
（24-25高三上·安徽合肥·期中）假定你是李华，在某海外购物网站上订购了一款智能手表作为新年礼物送给母亲，但是收货之后出现了一些问题，请你给该网站客服写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 投诉内容；
2. 你的诉求。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
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