专题01 邀请信+求助信+投诉信（测试）原卷版
目 录
邀请信6篇 P1
求助信8篇 P4
投诉信3篇 P8
【邀请信·01】（24-25高三上·吉林长春·期中）假定你是李华，你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间和地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【邀请信·02】（24-25高三上·天津·期中）假设你是晨光中学高二一班的学生李津，你的外教Chris即将要回国， 你班同学们将要为他举办一个欢送会，请你代表全班同学写信邀请他来参加，内容要点如下：
1. 感谢Chris为你们的英语学习所做的努力；
2. 发出邀请；
3. 简介欢送会的内容；
要求：1.不少于100词；
2.注意适当增加衔接与过渡，使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【邀请信·03】（24-25高三上·浙江·期中）假如你是李华，你计划本周日下午去参观中国传统手工艺品体验中心，请你给喜欢中国文化的留学生朋友David写一封邮件，邀请他一同前往，内容包括：
1. 写邮件目的；
2. 体验中心活动内容；
3. 期待回复。
参考词汇：手工艺品 handicraft
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【邀请信·04】（24-25高三上·江苏无锡·期中）假定你是李华，本学期你校要求所有同学完成一项研究性学习报告。你打算邀请你班来自英国的交流生 Thomas 共同完成。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.选题及理由；
2.实施方案。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
I hope this email finds you well.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【邀请信·05】（24-25高三上·江西·期中）假设你是李华，你校志愿者团队将在本周日上午举办一次器乐演奏活动，请你给英国交换生朋友Robert写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动时间、地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【邀请信·06】（24-25高二上·四川成都·期中）假定你是李华。元旦将至，请写一封英文邮件邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jimmy到你家共度佳节。要点包括：
1. 发出邀请；
2. 节日安排。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jimmy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·01】（24-25高二上·广东珠海·阶段练习）假定你是高二学生李华，最近在学习生活中遇到一些困难，请你给Teens英文报的心理专栏编辑John写一封信。内容如下：
1.寻求帮助；
2.求助内容；
3.期望回复。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·02】（24-25高三上·广东佛山·阶段练习）假定你是高三学生李华，你上一次考试的读后续写题完成得不理想。请你根据以下要点，给你的外教Mike写一封信求助。内容包括：
1. 题型简介; 2. 你的困难。
参考词汇: 读后续写 ( continuation writing)
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【求助信·03】（23-24高一上·山东淄博·期中）假如你是李华，打算参加由 China Daily 举办的主题为My Chinese Dream的英文征文比赛，你写了一篇文章，想要请外教Henry帮忙修改、润色。请你给他发一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出请求；
2. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 提示词汇：润色 polish
Dear Henry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·04】（24-25高三下·云南昭通·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近你很苦恼，因为你经常和父母发生争执。请你给英国笔友 Tom写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。内容包括：
1.父母的过度关心带给你的困惑和烦恼;
2.向 Tom 寻求解决方案。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·05】（24-25高三上·贵州遵义·阶段练习）假定你是李华，升入高三后，你发现自己各科学习都有困难。请你给你的外国朋友 Peter写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.讲述自己的困难；
2.希望他给出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·06】（23-24高二上·黑龙江大庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华。下个月马上就要参加英语听力考试，你想在听力上有所提高，便准备向已回国的Tom发电子邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 听力困扰;
2. 请求帮助;
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【求助信·07】（23-24高二下·安徽六安·期末）假定你是李华，正在美国洛杉矶No. 28 High School求学。你乘坐的车牌为2X5CD69的公交车从某商场到达你校附近下车时发现钱包丢失了。你打算给公交公司发一封电子邮件请求帮助。内容包括：
1．乘车情况；
2．钱包情况；
3．联系信息。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【求助信·08】（23-24高一下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，最近正在阅读英文小说《愤怒的葡萄》，但在阅读过程中遇到了一些困难，所以你决定写信给英国朋友David，寻求他的帮助。内容包括：
1. 告知困难：
2. 寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：《愤怒的葡萄》The Grapes of Wrath
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【投诉信·01】（23-24高三下·湖南·期末）假定你是李华，你发现上周你从某外国网站上购买的英文原版图书Brave New World有问题，请给该网站客服写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 描述问题；
2. 你的诉求。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【投诉信·02】（23-24高二下·福建宁德·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你去英国旅游时在某餐厅就餐，对该餐厅的服务不满意，请根据以下内容给餐厅的经理写一封投诉信，内容包括：
1.投诉内容（食物不新鲜，服务态度不好等）。
2.希望得到妥善的处理。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours.
Li Hua
【投诉信·03】（24-25高二下·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）假定你是李华，在美国某高中做交换生，对你所租住的小区物业管理有些不满，请你用英语给物业经理写一封投诉信，内容包括：
1. 车辆停放较乱；
2. 垃圾没有及时清理；
3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题01 邀请信+求助信+投诉信（测试）解析版
目 录
邀请信6篇 P1
求助信8篇 P9
投诉信3篇 P21
【邀请信·01】（24-25高三上·吉林长春·期中）假定你是李华，你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：
1.讲座的时间和地点；
2.讲座的内容；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday. It will be held in the school hall at 2 p.m.
The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life. We will learn how to interpret different body language and use it effectively in various situations, such as in interviews, business meetings and social gatherings.
I sincerely invite you to attend it. I believe you will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely broaden your knowledge and help you better understand people’s true intentions. Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举办的一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→ well-known
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
影响：affect→ influence
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
2.句式转换
原句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
拓展句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor, which will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【邀请信·02】（24-25高三上·天津·期中）假设你是晨光中学高二一班的学生李津，你的外教Chris即将要回国， 你班同学们将要为他举办一个欢送会，请你代表全班同学写信邀请他来参加，内容要点如下：
1. 感谢Chris为你们的英语学习所做的努力；
2. 发出邀请；
3. 简介欢送会的内容；
要求：1.不少于100词；
2.注意适当增加衔接与过渡，使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits. On behalf of all the students in Class 1, Grade 2 of Chenguang High School, I am writing to express our heartfelt gratitude and extend a warm invitation to you.
First and foremost, we want to take this opportunity to thank you profoundly for the immense efforts and dedication you have put into enhancing our English learning journey. The evening will commence with a slideshow showcasing our favorite moments together, followed by speeches from a few of us, sharing personal stories and expressions of appreciation. Additionally, there will be a time for you to share your thoughts and experiences with us, which we are all eagerly anticipating. Lastly, we’ll enjoy a light refreshment, creating a cozy atmosphere for us to relish these final moments together.
We hope this evening will be a cherished memory for you, just as your teaching has been for us. With deepest respect and gratitude,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Chris即将要回国，要求考生按照要求代表全班同学写信邀请他来参加将要为他举办的一个欢送会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude → appreciation
机会：opportunity → chance
提高：enhance → improve
展现：showcase→ show
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The evening will commence with a slideshow showcasing our favorite moments together, followed by speeches from a few of us, sharing personal stories and expressions of appreciation.
拓展句：The evening will commence with a slideshow, which showcases our favorite moments together, followed by speeches from a few of us, sharing personal stories and expressions of appreciation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of all the students in Class 1, Grade 2 of Chenguang High School, I am writing to express our heartfelt gratitude and extend a warm invitation to you. (运用了不定式to express作目的状语)
【高分句型2】First and foremost, we want to take this opportunity to thank you profoundly for the immense efforts and dedication you have put into enhancing our English learning journey. (dedication后运用了省略引导词that或which的定语从句)
【邀请信·03】（24-25高三上·浙江·期中）假如你是李华，你计划本周日下午去参观中国传统手工艺品体验中心，请你给喜欢中国文化的留学生朋友David写一封邮件，邀请他一同前往，内容包括：
1. 写邮件目的；
2. 体验中心活动内容；
3. 期待回复。
参考词汇：手工艺品 handicraft
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am writing to invite you to join me in a cultural adventure this Sunday afternoon. We are going to visit the Traditional Chinese Handicraft Experience Center. There we can immerse ourselves in the beauty and skill of Chinese handicrafts.
At the center, we will have the opportunity to observe and even participate in various handicraft making activities, such as pottery, paper-cutting, and embroidery. This is a fantastic chance to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture and craftsmanship.
Please let me know if you are available and interested in joining me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生以李华的身份，邀请喜欢中国文化的留学生朋友David一同前往中国传统手工艺品体验中心，并告知邮件目的、体验中心活动内容及期待他的回复。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
参与：participate in → take part in/be involved in
各种各样的：various → diverse/different kinds of
期待：look forward to → expect/anticipate
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：We are going to visit the Traditional Chinese Handicraft Experience Center. There we can immerse ourselves in the beauty and skill of Chinese handicrafts.
拓展句：We are going to visit the Traditional Chinese Handicraft Experience Center, where we can immerse ourselves in the beauty and skill of Chinese handicrafts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to invite you to join me in a cultural adventure this Sunday afternoon. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Please let me know if you are available and interested in joining me. (运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句)
【邀请信·04】（24-25高三上·江苏无锡·期中）假定你是李华，本学期你校要求所有同学完成一项研究性学习报告。你打算邀请你班来自英国的交流生 Thomas 共同完成。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.选题及理由；
2.实施方案。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
I hope this email finds you well.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Thomas,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to join me in this term’s research project on reading classic literary works among us students.
This topic was chosen as it’ll enhance our understanding of cross-cultural differences in literary appreciation.As is planned, we’ll design a survey, collect data from peers, analyze the results and compile a report with recommendations. Your perspective as a British student would be invaluable.
Would this be something you’re interested in Please share your thoughts at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你班级来自英国的交流生 Thomas写封邮件，邀请他共同完成本学期学校要求所有同学完成的一项研究性学习报告。
【详解】1.词汇积累
邀请某人：invite sb→extend an invitation to sb
增强：enhance→promote
选择：choose→select
计划：plan→schedule
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to join me in this term’s research project on reading classic literary works among us students.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to join me in this term’s research project whose topic is reading classic literary works among us students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This topic was chosen as it’ll enhance our understanding of cross-cultural differences in literary appreciation.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Would this be something you’re interested in （运用了省略关系词的定语从句）
【邀请信·05】（24-25高三上·江西·期中）假设你是李华，你校志愿者团队将在本周日上午举办一次器乐演奏活动，请你给英国交换生朋友Robert写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动时间、地点；
3. 活动内容。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Robert,
To enrich our life on campus and get us refreshed from our routine studies, our school has scheduled a music performance this coming Sunday morning. Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese musical instrument and Chinese music, I sincerely extend my invitation for you to come along and enjoy it.
The performance will be held at the school concert hall. Present at the show will be our talented students. Watching their wonderful performances will prove a feast to the eye, providing us a brilliant chance to dip into classic and modern Chinese music. Some experts will also be there to show their talent. Therefore, it’s my sincere hope that you can attend the performance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英国交换生朋友Robert写封邮件，邀请他参加本校志愿者团队举办的器乐演奏活动，需向对方说明活动目的，点明活动具体的时间和地点，并介绍活动的主要内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
安排：schedule→arrange, organize
即将到来的：coming→approaching, forthcoming
对……感兴趣：have an interest in→be interested in
机会：chance→opportunity
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To enrich our life on campus and get us refreshed from our routine studies, our school has scheduled a music performance this coming Sunday morning.
拓展句：In order that our life on campus can be enriched and we can get refreshed from our routine studies, our school has scheduled a music performance this coming Sunday morning.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese musical instrument and Chinese music, I sincerely extend my invitation for you to come along and enjoy it. (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Therefore, it’s my sincere hope that you can attend the performance. (运用了that引导主语从句)
【邀请信·06】（24-25高二上·四川成都·期中）假定你是李华。元旦将至，请写一封英文邮件邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jimmy到你家共度佳节。要点包括：
1. 发出邀请；
2. 节日安排。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jimmy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Jimmy,
I hope this email finds you well. With the New Year approaching, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join my family and me in celebrating the occasion at my home.
We have planned a cozy evening filled with traditional Chinese dishes, lively conversations, and perhaps even a game or two, which I think you’ll surely like. It would be delightful to have you share in this festive atmosphere and create more memorable moments together.
Please let me know if you can make it. We are looking forward to ringing in the new year with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生英国交换生朋友Jimmy写一封邮件，邀请他到自己家共度元旦，并介绍节日安排。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
舒适的：cozy → comfortable
交谈：conversation → talk/chat
令人愉快的：delightful → enjoyable
难忘的：memorable → unforgettable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the New Year approaching, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join my family and me in celebrating the occasion at my home.
拓展句：As the New Year is approaching, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join my family and me in celebrating the occasion at my home.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We have planned a cozy evening filled with traditional Chinese dishes, lively conversations, and perhaps even a game or two, which I think you’ll surely like. (运用了过去分词作后置定语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It would be delightful to have you share in this festive atmosphere and create more memorable moments together. (运用了不定式作真正的主语)
【求助信·01】（24-25高二上·广东珠海·阶段练习）假定你是高二学生李华，最近在学习生活中遇到一些困难，请你给Teens英文报的心理专栏编辑John写一封信。内容如下：
1.寻求帮助；
2.求助内容；
3.期望回复。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m Li Hua. Entering the second year of studying in the high school, I find it much more difficult to manage my life well, so I’m exceedingly anticipating your advice about the difficulties I encountered.
First and foremost, an increasing amount of homework has led to a lack of time. I sought but failed to find a proper way to arrange my schedule. I’ve been struggling with maintaining a balance between my studies and extracurricular activities. The pressure to perform well academically is mounting, and I find myself often sacrificing my personal interests and hobbies. Secondly, as Mathematics and Physics are getting more difficult, I sometimes find myself unable to keep pace with my teachers’ teaching in class. It makes me feel very anxious. Last but not least, the high expectation my parents have on me is making me feel more stressed.
Would you like to give me some suggestions about how I could tackle these problems I’m eagerly looking forward to your reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英文报心理专栏编辑John写一封求助信，请求帮助解决学习生活中遇到的些困难。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
遇到：encounter → meet/face
焦虑的：anxious → worried
课外活动：extracurricular activities → after-school activities
赶上节奏：keep pace with → catch up with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Entering the second year of studying in high school, I find it much more difficult to manage my life well.
拓展句：As I enter my second year of studying in high school, I find that managing my life well has become significantly more challenging.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Entering the second year of studying in the high school, I find it much more difficult to manage my life well, so I’m exceedingly anticipating your advice about the difficulties I encountered. （运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】Secondly, as Mathematics and Physics are getting more difficult, I sometimes find myself unable to keep pace with my teachers’ teaching in class. （运用as引导的原因状语从句）
【求助信·02】（24-25高三上·广东佛山·阶段练习）假定你是高三学生李华，你上一次考试的读后续写题完成得不理想。请你根据以下要点，给你的外教Mike写一封信求助。内容包括：
1. 题型简介; 2. 你的困难。
参考词汇: 读后续写 ( continuation writing)
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I hope this message finds you well. As I prepare to enter my final year of high school, I’ve encountered challenges with the continuation writing task in English. Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions.
Could you please provide me with advice on how to develop coherent and engaging story-lines Additionally, I have no idea how to ensure that my continuation writing remains in line with the original text. Your guidance on these aspects would be greatly appreciated.
I eagerly anticipate your insights and appreciate any assistance you can offer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就对读后续写这一题型感到困惑一事，给外教Mr. Mike写一封邮件求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
准备：prepare to → get ready to
令人困惑的：puzzling → confusing
合理的：reasonable → rational
指导：guidance → instruction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions.
拓展句：Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions, which makes me anxious.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As I prepare to enter my final year of high school, I’ve encountered challenges with the continuation writing task in English.（运用了as引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]
Could you please provide me with advice on how to develop coherent and engaging story-lines （运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语）
【求助信·03】（23-24高一上·山东淄博·期中）假如你是李华，打算参加由 China Daily 举办的主题为My Chinese Dream的英文征文比赛，你写了一篇文章，想要请外教Henry帮忙修改、润色。请你给他发一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出请求；
2. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 提示词汇：润色 polish
Dear Henry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily. The theme of the contest is My Chinese Dream, which inspires us to give our own definition and interpretation of the concept based on our own experiences. I have written an article and I need your help. Will it be convenient for you to point out some possible grammatical mistakes and polish the article for me
I would appreciate it if you could help me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Henry写一封求助信，请他帮忙修改、润色文章，并表示感谢。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮忙：do sb. a favor→give sb. a hand
鼓励：encourage→inspire
参加：take part in→participate in
可能的：possible→potential
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily.
拓展句：As I’m encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Encouraged by my parents and head teacher, I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily.(使用了过去分词短语作状语及后置定语)
【高分句型2】The theme of the contest is My Chinese Dream, which inspires us to give our own definition and interpretation of the concept based on our own experiences. (使用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【求助信·04】（24-25高三下·云南昭通·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近你很苦恼，因为你经常和父母发生争执。请你给英国笔友 Tom写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。内容包括：
1.父母的过度关心带给你的困惑和烦恼;
2.向 Tom 寻求解决方案。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
These days, I feel upset because I quarrel with my parents about everything.
At school I am good at maths and English, while I find physics difficult to learn. But my parents think I should always do my best in every subject. Whenever I come back home late, they will get very angry with me. You know I like playing basketball, but when weekends come, they don’t allow me to do anything except focusing on my lessons.
Now I am no longer interested in my study. Can you give me some advice on how to get along with my parents
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于经常和父母发生争执这一情况，给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，向他倾诉你成长中的烦恼。其内容包括：父母的过度关心带给你的困惑和烦恼和向 Tom 寻求解决方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
心烦意乱的：upset→ distracted
专注于：focuse on → concentrate on
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be keen on
建议：advice→ suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I am no longer interested in my study.
拓展句：Now I am no longer interested in my study, which makes me confused.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But my parents think I should always do my best in every subject.（运用了省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句。）
【高分句型2】Whenever I come back home late, they will get very angry with me.（运用了连词Whenever引导的时间状语从句。）
【求助信·05】（24-25高三上·贵州遵义·阶段练习）假定你是李华，升入高三后，你发现自己各科学习都有困难。请你给你的外国朋友 Peter写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.讲述自己的困难；
2.希望他给出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How are you I hope everything is going well with you. I’m writing to share some difficulties I’ve encountered since entering the third year of high school. I find it challenging to keep up with the pace of all subjects, and the workload is overwhelming. Could you please give me some advice on how to manage my time and improve my study efficiency
Your suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Peter写一封邮件，讲述自己升入高三后在学习上遇到的困难，并希望对方给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
遇到：encounter→come across
跟上：keep up with → catch up with
建议：advice → suggestion
感谢：appreciate → be grateful for
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I find it challenging to keep up with the pace of all subjects.
拓展句：I find it challenging to keep up with the pace of all subjects, which makes me feel stressed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share some difficulties I’ve encountered since entering the third year of high school.(difficulties后运用了省略that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please give me some advice on how to manage my time and improve my study efficiency (运用了“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语)
【求助信·06】（23-24高二上·黑龙江大庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华。下个月马上就要参加英语听力考试，你想在听力上有所提高，便准备向已回国的Tom发电子邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 听力困扰;
2. 请求帮助;
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How are you doing It feels like ages since you returned home. I hope that everything is going well with you there.
Recently, I’ve encountered a bit of a challenge that I believe you could offer some valuable advice on. With the upcoming English listening exam next month, I find myself struggling to keep up with the conversations and lectures played during practice sessions. It is difficult for me to catch every important detail and I’m eager to improve before the test.
I would be incredibly grateful if you could share some effective strategies or recommend resources that helped you enhance your listening comprehension. I truly appreciate your time and effort in advance. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义向友人Tom发邮件，阐述即将面临的英语听力考试困境，请求提供提升听力的建议，并预先表达感激之情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
即将到来的：upcoming→forthcoming
讲座：lecture→speech
感激的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the upcoming English listening exam next month, I find myself struggling to keep up with the conversations and lectures played during practice sessions.
拓展句：With the upcoming English listening exam next month, I find that I am struggling to keep up with the conversations and lectures played during practice sessions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that everything is going well with you there.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Recently, I’ve encountered a bit of a challenge that I believe you could offer some valuable advice on. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【求助信·07】（23-24高二下·安徽六安·期末）假定你是李华，正在美国洛杉矶No. 28 High School求学。你乘坐的车牌为2X5CD69的公交车从某商场到达你校附近下车时发现钱包丢失了。你打算给公交公司发一封电子邮件请求帮助。内容包括：
1．乘车情况；
2．钱包情况；
3．联系信息。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a passenger who took a bus with a license plate 2X5CD69 from Howard Shopping Mall to No. 28 High School on May 10. I hope you can help me find my wallet.
I clearly remember it was still with me when I boarded the bus. However, upon arrival at my school zone, it was gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the bus ride. My wallet is black and pocket-sized. There should be some cash and my ID card inside. It is important to me.
Please call me at 1888234567 if you find it. You generous help will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在美国洛杉矶No. 28 High School求学，要求考生就“乘坐车牌为2X5CD69的公交车从某商场到达学校附近下车时发现钱包丢失了”一事，给公交公司发一封电子邮件请求帮助，寻回钱包。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
找到：find→seek out
应该：should→be supposed to
给某人打电话：call sb.→give sb. a call
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：There should be some cash and my ID card inside. It is important to me.
拓展句：There should be some cash and my ID card inside, which is important to me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, a passenger who took a bus with a license plate 2X5CD69 from Howard Shopping Mall to No. 28 High School on May 10. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Please call me at 1888234567 if you find it. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【求助信·08】（23-24高一下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，最近正在阅读英文小说《愤怒的葡萄》，但在阅读过程中遇到了一些困难，所以你决定写信给英国朋友David，寻求他的帮助。内容包括：
1. 告知困难：
2. 寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：《愤怒的葡萄》The Grapes of Wrath
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I hope you’re doing well. I am currently reading the English novel The Grapes of Wrath, but I have encountered some difficulties and uncertainties in the process. The language and themes are challenging for me to fully grasp.
Given your wide knowledge of literature and English, I am reaching out to seek your help. Could you please provide some guidance on how to better appreciate the novel Any tips or explanations from you would be extremely helpful.
Thank you in advance for your assistance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就最近在阅读英文小说《愤怒的葡萄》中遇到的困难，向英国朋友David写一封信，寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：encounter→meet
理解：grasp→understand
提供：provide→offer
有帮助的：helpful→of help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The language and themes are challenging for me to fully grasp.
拓展句：It is challenging for me to fully grasp the language and themes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope you’re doing well. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please provide some guidance on how to better appreciate the novel (运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)
【投诉信·01】（23-24高三下·湖南·期末）假定你是李华，你发现上周你从某外国网站上购买的英文原版图书Brave New World有问题，请给该网站客服写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 描述问题；
2. 你的诉求。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to bring to your notice that the book Brace New World, which I bought at your shop online, was of poor quality.
Because of improper packaging, the cover of the book, as well as some of its pages inside, was seriously damaged by water. What’s worse, the colors of the pictures also faded beyond recognition.
Therefore, I am returning the book and request you to kindly send a brand-new copy to the same address as soon as possible. Also, I hope you will see through this matter and take some action against it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你发现上周你从某外国网站上购买的英文原版图书Brave New World有问题，要求考生给该网站客服写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买：buy→purchase
因为：because of→due to
破坏：damage→ruin
要求：request→ask
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Because of improper packaging, the cover of the book, as well as some of its pages inside, was seriously damaged by water.
拓展句：The cover of the book, as well as some of its pages inside, was seriously damaged by water because it was improperly packaged.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to bring to your notice that the book Brace New World, which I bought at your shop online, was of poor quality. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Also, I hope you will see through this matter and take some action against it. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【投诉信·02】（23-24高二下·福建宁德·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你去英国旅游时在某餐厅就餐，对该餐厅的服务不满意，请根据以下内容给餐厅的经理写一封投诉信，内容包括：
1.投诉内容（食物不新鲜，服务态度不好等）。
2.希望得到妥善的处理。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, one of your customers, writing to make a complaint about the poor service of your restaurant.
Last Friday, when dining in your restaurant, we found the food not fresh, which was so upsetting. What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.
Therefore, I’d like you to investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me. I’d appreciate it if you could give due attention to the matter.
Yours.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于书信表达。假如你是李华，在某餐厅就餐时不满意餐厅的服务，请向餐厅经理写一封投诉信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
劣质的：poor →low-grade
帮助：help→ assist
因此：therefore →thus
大叫：shout →yell
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.
拓展句：When we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely, which annoyed us most.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Friday, when dining in your restaurant, we found the food not fresh, which was so upsetting.（运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.（运用了what引导的主语从句，that引导表语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句）
【投诉信·03】（24-25高二下·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）假定你是李华，在美国某高中做交换生，对你所租住的小区物业管理有些不满，请你用英语给物业经理写一封投诉信，内容包括：
1. 车辆停放较乱；
2. 垃圾没有及时清理；
3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
As a resident of the neighborhood, I’m writing to complain about some problems.
Firstly, there’s limited parking space for cars. Therefore, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing inconvenience to us. Secondly, the dustbins aren’t cleared in time. As temperature goes up, not only does the rubbish give off a terrible smell, but also pollutes our environment. Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable.
I’d appreciate it if you could help us have a nice living environment.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给物业经理写一封投诉信，表达你对所租借的小区物业管理的不满，并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：firstly→ above all/ first of all
因此：therefore→ consequently
建议：suggest→ advise
糟糕的；可怕的：terrible→ horrible
2. 句式拓展
简单句拓展复合句
原句：As a resident of the neighborhood, I’m writing to complain about some problems.
扩展句：As a resident of the neighborhood, I’m writing to complain about some problems which trouble us a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Therefore, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing inconvenience to us.（现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】As temperature goes up, not only does the rubbish give off a terrible smell, but also pollutes our environment.（not only引导的倒装句）
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