专题02 读后续写精彩句子开头仿写10组50例（讲义） 解析版
目录
仿写技能单句精讲篇
仿写句式一：无灵主语开头 P1
仿写句式二：部分/完全倒装句开头 P2
仿写句式三：简洁对话或独白开头 P2
仿写句式四：介词短语开头 P3
仿写句式五：独立主格/with复合宾语结构开头 P4
仿写句式六：形容词定语开头 P4
仿写句式七：副词短语开头 P5
仿写句式八：现在分词定语开头 P6
仿写句式九：过去分词短语开头 P6
仿写句式十：IT高频句型开头 P7
仿写技能语篇精炼篇
读后续写实战应用两篇 P8
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仿写技能
单句
精讲篇
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仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语）
【示例】She couldn’t say a word, with tears streaming down her face.
翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face.
仿写1：I was very afraid as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
翻译：当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人他们都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
仿写2：Kevin felt relieved, grateful for what he had learned about courage and reflection on one's own actions.
翻译：凯文感到一种解脱，感激他学到的关于勇气的教训，以及对自己行为的反思。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)A sense of relief seized him, grateful for the lessons he had learned about courage, and reflection on one's own actions.
仿写3：Despite everything, I was very grateful for Gunter's kindness.
翻译：尽管如此，对冈特的善意的深深感激之情充满了我的心。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)Despite everything, a profound sense of gratitude for Gunter's kindness filled my heart.
仿写4：I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. I noticed a flash of movement.
翻译：我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写) I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention.
仿写5：(2023新高考读后续写)When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。
改写：(2023新高考读后续写) My heart was pounding with excitement the instant the host announced that I won the first prize.
仿写句式二：部分/完全倒装句开头
【示例】A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand.
翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。
改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand.
仿写1：I was still nervous, but I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
翻译：尽管我仍然很紧张，但我努力让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
仿写2：I called up Gunter as soon as I arrived at the railway station.
翻译：我刚一到达火车站就给冈特打电话。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)No sooner had I arrived at the railway station than I called up Gunter.
仿写3：I didn’t realize that I had won the contest until I heard the news.
翻译：直到我听到这个消息，我才意识到我赢得了比赛。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) Not until I heard the news did I realize that I had won the contest.
仿写4：Their mother never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天会以这样的暖心礼物开始的。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
仿写5：Jenna was so ashamed that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
翻译：杰娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) So ashamed was Jenna that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
仿写句式三：简洁对话或独白开头
【示例】Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。
改写：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
仿写1：Kevin added that he said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch.
翻译：“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) “He said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch,” Kevin added.
仿写2：Gunter said he didn't expect me to keep my word and smiled with a hint of joy in his voice.
翻译：“我没想到你会遵守诺言，”冈特咯咯地笑着说，声音里带着一丝喜悦。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)"I didn't expect you to keep your word," Gunter chuckled, with a hint of joy in his voice.
仿写3：They shouted enthusiastically and cheered for him.
翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你真棒！为你自豪！”
改写：(2022新课标I&II卷读后续写) “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically.
仿写4：Their father told them not to panic and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
翻译：“别慌！”爸爸递给每人一个湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) “Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
仿写5：The happiest mother in the world kept thanking her twins.
翻译：这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) “Thank you, my honey.” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
仿写句式四：介词短语开头
【示例】The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。
改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
仿写1：The moment I saw the scenes, my previous panic was replaced by respect.
翻译：一看到这些场景，我之前的恐慌就让位于尊重。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)At the sight of the scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect.
仿写2：They were surprised that there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch.
翻译：令他们惊讶的是，木板下面有一个隐藏的小隔间，里面放着一块旧金表。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)To their surprise, there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch.
仿写3：It is your recognition and guidance that I won the first prize.
翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会获得一等奖。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have won the first prize.
仿写4：We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。
改写：(2022年6月浙江读后续写) To our relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
仿写5：Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
仿写句式五：独立主格/with复合宾语结构开头
【示例】As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。
改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home.
仿写1：When the lights dimmed down, I had to watch the film with a frightened heart.
翻译：灯光变暗了，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)The lights dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart.
仿写2：“We need to help the man!” Kevin urged and his voice trembled with obvious anxiety.
翻译：“我们需要帮助那个人！”凯文催促道，他的声音因明显的焦虑而颤抖。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) His voice trembling with obvious anxiety, Kevin urged, “We need to help the man!”.
仿写3：Gunter smiled gently, shook his head and refused the extra money.
翻译：冈特脸上带着温和的微笑摇了摇头，拒绝了额外的钱。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) With a gentle smile on his face, Gunter shook his head, and refused the extra money.
仿写4：I cried and gave my teacher a big hug.
翻译：泪水几乎模糊了我的视线，我给了老师一个大大的拥抱。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave my teacher a big hug.
仿写5：When everything was settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
翻译：一切安排妥当，爸爸离开厨房，答应保密。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
仿写句式六：形容词短语开头
【示例】Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。
改写：Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room.
仿写1：As I was unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears..
翻译：我无法控制自己的情绪，感动得流下了眼泪。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears.
仿写2：Gunter was surprised and thrilled. He fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled, “Let's take a picture together, my friend!”
翻译：冈特既惊讶又激动，掏出手机，拍了拍我的肩膀，笑着说：“朋友，我们一起拍张照吧！”
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) Surprised and thrilled, Gunter fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled, “Let's take a picture together, my friend!”
仿写3：I was relieved and grateful to notice that the broken window had been completely fixed.
翻译：尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写) Relieved and grateful, I noticed the broken window had been completely fixed.
仿写4：As she was speechless and overjoyed, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
改写：(2021新高考读后续写) Speechless and overjoyed, she held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
仿写5：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
翻译：我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。
改写：(2018年浙江读后续写) Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
仿写句式七：副词开头
【示例】Arthur skipped up the street joyfully.
翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。
改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street.
仿写1：My previous fear was quickly replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for.
翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Instantly, my previous fear was replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for.
仿写2：To Kevin’s surprise, he found the watch hidden underneath the floorboard.
翻译：令人惊讶的是，凯文发现手表藏在地板下面。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)Surprisingly, Kevin found the watch hidden underneath the floorboard.
仿写3：It was lucky that a kind traveler agreed to withdraw money for me in exchange for the euros.
翻译：奇迹般地，一位好心的旅行者同意为我取钱，以换取欧元。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)Miraculously, a kind traveler agreed to withdraw money for me in exchange for the euros.
仿写4：To her amazement, Coach Pitts' positive response infused an enormous sense of achievement into her heart.
翻译：令人惊讶的是，Pitts教练的积极肯定给她的内心注入了巨大的成就感。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) Amazingly, Coach Pitts' positive response infused an enormous sense of achievement into her heart.
仿写5：At once, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
翻译：爸爸立马加入双胞胎和他们一起开始张罗着。
改写：(2021新高考读后续写)Immediately, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
仿写句式八：现在分词短语开头
【示例】As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
翻译：她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。
改写：Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
仿写1：I held my wallet tightly, quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed.
翻译：我紧紧地握着钱包，迅速地坐在剧院后面，试图不被人注意。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Holding my wallet tightly, I quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed.
仿写2：Mrs. Green nodded in agreement and added that she was proud of his performance in such a challenging situation.
翻译：格林夫人点头表示同意，并补充说，她为他在如此具有挑战性的情况下的表现感到自豪。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)Mrs. Green nodded in agreement, adding that she was proud of his performance in such a challenging situation.
仿写3：I flashed Gunter another apologetic smile and begged him for a delayed payment.
翻译：我再次向冈特露出歉意的微笑，恳求他延迟付款。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)Flashing Gunter another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment.
仿写4：Eva stared at the teaching building and came up with a good idea, with a smile blooming across her face.
翻译：凝视着教学楼，伊娃想出了一个好主意，脸上绽放着笑容。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) Staring at the teaching building, Eva came up with a good idea, with a smile blooming across her face.
仿写5：After looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) Looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
仿写句式九：过去分词短语开头
【示例】As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。
改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
仿写1：I was overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry and waited for the film to start.
翻译：困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start.
仿写2：When he was informed that the man had been released without charge, Kevin felt a ripple of guilt sweeping over him.
翻译：得知该男子已被无罪释放，凯文感到一阵内疚感席卷了他。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)Informed that the man had been released without charge, Kevin felt a ripple of guilt sweeping over him.
仿写3：I was stunned by the news and choked with emotion while my classmates were raising their hands in triumph.
翻译：我被这个消息惊呆了，当同学们胜利地举起手时，我激动得哽咽了。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) Stunned by the news, I was choked with emotion while my classmates were raising their hands in triumph.
仿写4：After he was encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
翻译：受我的鼓励，戴维闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。
改写：(2022新课标I&II卷读后续写) Encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
仿写5：Father was astonished and was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
翻译：爸爸很吃惊，愣在地上，皱着眉头注视着现场。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
仿写句式十：IT高频句型开头
【示例】At that moment I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.
翻译：就在那一刻，我对老师感激不尽。
改写：It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.
仿写1：Through this adventure I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
翻译：正是通过这次冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)It was through this adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
仿写2：The "burglar" turned out to be the owner of the watch, so the man was released by the police soon.
翻译：原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子很快就被警方释放了。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) It turned out that the "burglar" was the owner of the watch, so the man was released by the police soon.
仿写3：Thanks to the experience, Eva understood what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
翻译：正是由于这次经历，伊娃才明白了老子所说的：千里之行始于足下。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) It was thanks to the experience that Eva understood what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
仿写4：I realized the hummingbird's return was a reminder that all living creature deserve to be treated with kindness and compassion.
翻译：我突然想到，蜂鸟的回归提醒我们，所有生物都应该得到善意和同情的对待。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写)It occurred to me that the hummingbird's return was a reminder that all living creature deserve to be treated with kindness and compassion.
仿写5：Winning a contest meant a lot; it was about discovering my own potential and the power of perseverance.
翻译：这不仅仅是赢得一场比赛；这是关于发现自己的潜力和毅力的力量。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) It was more than just winning a contest; it was about discovering my own potential and the power of perseverance.
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语篇
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【典例1】（24-25高三上·山西吕梁·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons. Lucy began playing two instruments, the piano and the violin, but she enjoyed singing more. She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day. Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well. He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day, their music teacher, Mr. Brown, said to the class, “We’re going to have a music competition here at school next Friday. If you want to enter, you must sing or play a song on the school stage. Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium, so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance. He’ s going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert.”
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team. They chose a song called I’ll help you! They practiced on the playground in their spare time. Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably, “How sweet your voice is!” While they pracitced, the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying（摇摆） in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition, all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive. When he walked in with Mr. Brown, everyone clapped. Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr. Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started. Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy. An older girl named Mary sang very well. Some students shouted “More! More!” when she finished. “She’s going to win,” thought Lucy. Soon Mr. Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.
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The big moment came.
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【满分范文点评】
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage. She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank (with复合结构) when Jack played the guitar smoothly. Noticing Lucy’s abnormal silence(非谓语作状语), Jack gave her an encouraging smile but it didn’t work. Jack replayed the music, hoping to help Lucy calm down and get started (非谓语作状语). To Jack’s relief(介词短语前置), Lucy followed him this time though her singing was not as good as usual. They finished their performance regretfully, waiting for the result anxiously(非谓语作状语).
The big moment came. Mr. Brown declared that the winner was Mary. The school hall erupted in cheer and applause. Lucy whispered to Jack guiltily, “I’m really sorry.” (简洁对话) Jack responded with a smile, “ Never mind! I know you did your best.” (非谓语作状语) Tears welling up in her eyes(独立主格结构), Lucy felt a gentle pat on the head. Looking up(非谓语作状语), she was surprised to see Alex Pepper. “Nothing can beat a strong heart,” he noted. Hearing these words(非谓语作状语), Lucy expressed her heartfelt gratitude to Alex and renewed her determination and hope.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lucy和Jack参加学校音乐比赛的经历展开叙述，详细描写了比赛的准备过程、比赛当天的情景以及比赛结果。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Lucy站在舞台中央时，不知不觉地开始发抖。”以及第二段首句内容“关键时刻到了。”可知，第一段可描写Lucy非常紧张，但是Jack的鼓励让她完成了表演。
②由第二段首句内容“关键时刻到了。”可知，第二段可描写两人遗憾没有获胜，但是这次经历使他们重新坚定了决心和希望。
2.续写线索：Lucy站在舞台上，非常紧张——Jack流畅地弹着吉他，却突然发觉了Lucy的异样——于是，Jack重新弹奏音乐——幸运的是，这次Lucy跟上了节奏，完成了比赛，只是没有那么好——当宣布获胜者的时候，Lucy感到很愧疚。两人未能赢得比赛——但是Jack却认为她已经尽力了——Lucy很感激Jack的鼓励——两人坚定了决心和希望
3.词汇激活
行为类
①注意到：notice/spot
②希望：hope/wish
③完成 finish/complete
情绪类
①焦虑地：anxiously/with anxiety
②惊讶的：surprised/astonished
【点睛】【高分句型1】She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank when Jack played the guitar smoothly.（运用了when引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Mr. Brown declared that the winner was Mary.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【典例2】（24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin. With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son, Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery.
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked, the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears. The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car.
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver’s seat did not seem to have been severely injured - apparently because of the open airbag - she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense. He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time.
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible. He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands, and the flames were getting bigger.
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Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.
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The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news.
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【满分范文点评】
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. In a moment of clarity (介词短语前置), Tom remembered the worn-out hammer in his hand. It had been a reliable companion through countless days of labor, and now it was his only hope. With a determined swing (介词短语前置), he smashed the hammer against the window, shattering the glass with a loud crash. Carefully (副词前置), he reached into the vehicle, avoided the jagged edges, and unbuckled the unconscious young lady (动作链). With all his strength (介词短语前置), he pulled her out, dragging her a safe distance from the car (非谓语作状语) just as the flames roared fiercely, engulfing the vehicle in a fiery blaze (非谓语作状语). Soon, Tom’s heroic deed went viral.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She learned about his struggle to find money for his son’s heart surgery and felt a deep sense of empathy for his situation. Remembering how he had risked his life to save her (非谓语作状语), she decided to take action. With her family’s connections and resources (介词短语前置), she organized a fundraising campaign to help cover the medical expenses for Andrew’s surgery. As word spread about Tom’s story, the community rallied together, contributing whatever they could (非谓语作状语). Grateful for the support (形容词短语前置), Tom felt a renewed sense of hope. The girl, now a friend, visited him in the hospital, bringing not just financial help but also encouragement (非谓语作状语). Their bond grew stronger (无灵主语), united by the challenges they faced and the lives they had touched (非谓语作状语).
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tom Young在下班回家的路上，偶遇一辆豪华轿车撞上大树并起火。他毫不犹豫地前往救援，发现车内的女司机虽然因安全气囊打开而未受重伤，但已失去意识。面对车门变形无法打开和火焰逐渐蔓延的紧急情况，Tom决定砸碎车窗玻璃救出女司机，但发现仅凭双手无法打破厚实的玻璃。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“时间紧迫，Tom的思绪疯狂地转动。”可知，第一段可描写Tom冒着生命危险救出女孩的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“那位女孩从当地新闻中得知了Tom的困境，感到十分难过。”可知，第二段可描写那位女孩借助家族的关系和资源筹集资金帮助Tom，社区也提供了相应的帮助以及Tom救人这件事带来的积极影响。
2.续写线索：用锤子敲碎玻璃——救出女孩——感到同情——帮助Tom——成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①记得：remember/recall
②决定做某事：decide to do sth/determine to do sth
③帮助：help/assist
④拜访：visit/pay a visit to
情绪类
①同情：empathy/sympathy
②感激的：grateful/appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Carefully, he reached into the vehicle, avoiding the jagged edges, and unbuckled the unconscious young lady.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Their bond grew stronger, united by the challenges they faced and the lives they had touched.（运用了省略了关系词代词的定语从句）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题02 读后续写精彩句子开头仿写10组50例（讲义）原卷版
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仿写技能单句精讲篇
仿写句式一：无灵主语开头 P1
仿写句式二：部分/完全倒装句开头 P2
仿写句式三：简洁对话或独白开头 P2
仿写句式四：介词短语开头 P3
仿写句式五：独立主格/with复合宾语结构开头 P4
仿写句式六：形容词定语开头 P4
仿写句式七：副词短语开头 P5
仿写句式八：现在分词定语开头 P6
仿写句式九：过去分词短语开头 P6
仿写句式十：IT高频句型开头 P7
仿写技能语篇精炼篇
读后续写实战应用两篇 P8
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仿写技能
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仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语）
【示例】She couldn’t say a word, with tears streaming down her face.
翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face.
仿写1：I was very afraid as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
翻译：当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人他们都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
仿写2：Kevin felt relieved, grateful for what he had learned about courage and reflection on one's own actions.
翻译：凯文感到一种解脱，感激他学到的关于勇气的教训，以及对自己行为的反思。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) , grateful for the lessons he had learned about courage, and reflection on one's own actions.
仿写3：Despite everything, I was very grateful for Gunter's kindness.
翻译：尽管如此，对冈特的善意的深深感激之情充满了我的心。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) Despite everything, .
仿写4：I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. I noticed a flash of movement.
翻译：我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写) I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. .
仿写5：(2023新高考读后续写)When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。
改写：(2023新高考读后续写) the instant the host announced that I won the first prize.
仿写句式二：部分/完全倒装句开头
【示例】A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand.
翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。
改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand.
仿写1：I was still nervous, but I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
翻译：尽管我仍然很紧张，但我努力让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
仿写2：I called up Gunter as soon as I arrived at the railway sattion.
翻译：我刚一到达火车站就给冈特打电话。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) than I called up Gunter.
仿写3：I didn’t realize that I had won the contest until I heard the news.
翻译：直到我听到这个消息，我才意识到我赢得了比赛。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) that I had won the contest.
仿写4：Their mother never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天会以这样的暖心礼物开始的。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) her day to start with such a warm gift.
仿写5：Jenna was so ashamed that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
翻译：杰娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) that she shed guilty tears with her head drooping.
仿写句式三：简洁对话或独白开头
【示例】Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。
改写：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
仿写1：Kevin added that he said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch.
翻译：“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) “ ,” Kevin added.
仿写2：Gunter said he didn't expect me to keep my word and smiled with a hint of joy in his voice.
翻译：“我没想到你会遵守诺言，”冈特咯咯地笑着说，声音里带着一丝喜悦。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写)" ," Gunter chuckled, with a hint of joy in his voice.
仿写3：They shouted enthusiastically and cheered for him.
翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你真棒！为你自豪！”
改写：(2022新课标I&II卷读后续写) “ ” they shouted enthusiastically.
仿写4：Their father told them not to panic and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
翻译：“别慌！”爸爸递给每人一个湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) “ !” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
仿写5：The happiest mother in the world kept thanking her twins.
翻译：这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) “ ” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
仿写句式四：介词短语开头
【示例】The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。
改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
仿写1：The moment I saw the scenes, my previous panic was replaced by respect.
翻译：一看到这些场景，我之前的恐慌就让位于尊重。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , my previous panic gave way to respect.
仿写2：They were surprised that there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch.
翻译：令他们惊讶的是，木板下面有一个隐藏的小隔间，里面放着一块旧金表。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) , there was a small hidden compartment under the board, and inside it lay an old, gold watch.
仿写3：It is your recognition and guidance that I won the first prize.
翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会获得一等奖。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) , I couldn’t have won the first prize.
仿写4：We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。
改写：(2022年6月浙江读后续写) , they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
仿写5：Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) , sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
仿写句式五：独立主格/with复合宾语结构开头
【示例】As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。
改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home.
仿写1：When the lights dimmed down, I had to watch the film with a frightened heart.
翻译：灯光变暗了，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart.
仿写2：“We need to help the man!” Kevin urged and his voice trembled with obvious anxiety.
翻译：“我们需要帮助那个人！”凯文催促道，他的声音因明显的焦虑而颤抖。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) , Kevin urged, “We need to help the man!”.
仿写3：Gunter smiled gently, shook his head and refused the extra money.
翻译：冈特脸上带着温和的微笑摇了摇头，拒绝了额外的钱。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) , Gunter shook his head, and refused the extra money.
仿写4：I cried and gave my teacher a big hug.
翻译：泪水几乎模糊了我的视线，我给了老师一个大大的拥抱。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) , I gave my teacher a big hug.
仿写5： When everything was settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
翻译：一切安排妥当，爸爸离开厨房，答应保密。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) , Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
仿写句式六：形容词短语开头
【示例】Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。
改写：Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room.
仿写1：As I was unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears..
翻译：我无法控制自己的情绪，感动得流下了眼泪。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , I was touched to tears.
仿写2：Gunter was surprised and thrilled. He fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled, “Let's take a picture together, my friend!”
翻译：冈特既惊讶又激动，掏出手机，拍了拍我的肩膀，笑着说：“朋友，我们一起拍张照吧！”
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) , Gunter fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled, “Let's take a picture together, my friend!”
仿写3：I was relieved and grateful to notice that the broken window had been completely fixed.
翻译：尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写) , I noticed the broken window had been completely fixed.
仿写4：As she was speechless and overjoyed, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
改写：(2021新高考读后续写) , she held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
仿写5：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
翻译：我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。
改写：(2018年浙江读后续写) , I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
仿写句式七：副词开头
【示例】Arthur skipped up the street joyfully.
翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。
改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street.
仿写1：My previous fear was quickly replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for.
翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , my previous fear was replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for.
仿写2：To Kevin’s surprise, he found the watch hidden underneath the floorboard.
翻译：令人惊讶的是，凯文发现手表藏在地板下面。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) , Kevin found the watch hidden underneath the floorboard.
仿写3：It was lucky that a kind traveler agreed to withdraw money for me in exchange for the euros.
翻译：奇迹般地，一位好心的旅行者同意为我取钱，以换取欧元。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) , a kind traveler agreed to withdraw money for me in exchange for the euros.
仿写4：To her amazement, Coach Pitts' positive response infused an enormous sense of achievement into her heart.
翻译：令人惊讶的是，Pitts教练的积极肯定给她的内心注入了巨大的成就感。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) , Coach Pitts' positive response infused an enormous sense of achievement into her heart.
仿写5：At once, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
翻译：爸爸立马加入双胞胎和他们一起开始张罗着。
改写：(2021新高考读后续写) , the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
仿写句式八：现在分词短语开头
【示例】As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
翻译：她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。
改写：Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
仿写1：I held my wallet tightly, quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed.
翻译：我紧紧地握着钱包，迅速地坐在剧院后面，试图不被人注意。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , I quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed.
仿写2：Mrs. Green nodded in agreement and added that she was proud of his performance in such a challenging situation.
翻译：格林夫人点头表示同意，并补充说，她为他在如此具有挑战性的情况下的表现感到自豪。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写)Mrs. Green nodded in agreement, .
仿写3：I flashed Gunter another apologetic smile and begged him for a delayed payment.
翻译：我再次向甘特露出歉意的微笑，恳求他延迟付款。
改写：(2024新课标I&II卷读后续写) , I begged him for a delayed payment.
仿写4：Eva stared at the teaching building and came up with a good idea, with a smile blooming across her face.
翻译：凝视着教学楼，伊娃想出了一个好主意，脸上绽放着笑容。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) , Eva came up with a good idea, with a smile blooming across her face.
仿写5：After looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) , the three exchanged an understanding smile.
仿写句式九：过去分词短语开头
【示例】As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。
改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
仿写1：I was overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry and waited for the film to start.
翻译：困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) , I waited for the film to start.
仿写2：When he was informed that the man had been released without charge, Kevin felt a ripple of guilt sweeping over him.
翻译：得知该男子已被无罪释放，凯文感到一阵内疚感席卷了他。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) , Kevin felt a ripple of guilt sweeping over him.
仿写3：I was stunned by the news and choked with emotion while my classmates were raising their hands in triumph.
翻译：我被这个消息惊呆了，当同学们胜利地举起手时，我激动得哽咽了。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) , I was choked with emotion while my classmates were raising their hands in triumph.
仿写4：After he was encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
翻译：受我的鼓励，戴维闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。
改写：(2022新课标I&II卷读后续写) s, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
仿写5：Father was astonished and was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
翻译：爸爸很吃惊，愣在地上，皱着眉头注视着现场。
改写：(2021新课标I&II卷读后续写) , Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
仿写句式十：IT高频句型开头
【示例】At that moment I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.
翻译：就在那一刻，我对老师感激不尽。
改写：It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.
仿写1：Through this adventure I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
翻译：正是通过这次冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。
改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) t I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
仿写2：The "burglar" turned out to be the owner of the watch, so the man was released by the police soon.
翻译：原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子很快就被警方释放了。
改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) the "burglar" was the owner of the watch, so the man was released by the police soon.
仿写3：Thanks to the experience, Eva understood what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
翻译：正是由于这次经历，伊娃才明白了老子所说的：千里之行始于足下。
改写：(2024浙江1月卷读后续写) Eva understood what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
仿写4：I realized the hummingbird's return was a reminder that all living creature deserve to be treated with kindness and compassion.
翻译：我突然想到，蜂鸟的回归提醒我们，所有生物都应该得到善意和同情的对待。
改写：(2023浙江1月卷读后续写) the hummingbird's return was a reminder that all living creature deserve to be treated with kindness and compassion.
仿写5：Winning a contest meant a lot; it was about discovering my own potential and the power of perseverance.
翻译：这不仅仅是赢得一场比赛；这是关于发现自己的潜力和毅力的力量。
改写：(2023新课标I&II卷读后续写) ; it was about discovering my own potential and the power of perseverance.
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【典例1】（24-25高三上·山西吕梁·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons. Lucy began playing two instruments, the piano and the violin, but she enjoyed singing more. She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day. Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well. He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day, their music teacher, Mr. Brown, said to the class, “We’re going to have a music competition here at school next Friday. If you want to enter, you must sing or play a song on the school stage. Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium, so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance. He’ s going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert.”
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team. They chose a song called I’ll help you! They practiced on the playground in their spare time. Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably, “How sweet your voice is!” While they pracitced, the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying（摇摆） in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition, all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive. When he walked in with Mr. Brown, everyone clapped. Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr. Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started. Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy. An older girl named Mary sang very well. Some students shouted “More! More!” when she finished. “She’s going to win,” thought Lucy. Soon Mr. Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.
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The big moment came.
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【典例2】（24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin. With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son, Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery.
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked, the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears. The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car.
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver’s seat did not seem to have been severely injured - apparently because of the open airbag - she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense. He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time.
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible. He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands, and the flames were getting bigger.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.
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The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news.
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