专题02 告知信+道歉信+慰问信（讲义）原卷版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 告知信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 7
【命题预测】 8
题型二 道歉信 10
【真题研析】 10
【核心精讲】 12
【命题预测】 13
题型三 慰问信 15
【真题研析】 15
【核心精讲】 16
【命题预测】 17
重难点突破 “一……就” 多样化表达 19
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
告知信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写告知信。 2024·新课标I卷，给英国朋友写邮件分享上周五你们班在公园上的一堂美术课； 2019·全国II卷，排球队长写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛； 2018·全国I卷，发邮件告诉朋友去中国朋友家聚会的有关习俗以及注意事项； 2018·全国III卷，回信英国朋友Peter 告知你校秋运会和学生体育运动的情况； 2017·全国I卷，写封邮件告知你的英国朋友Leslie下次汉语上课计划和变。 一、告知对象为师生好友； 二、内容紧贴生活，贴近学生； 三、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主。 四、最近五年频繁考查，应重点备考。
道歉信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写道歉信。 2020·全国III卷，给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧 2016·全国I卷，给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔几年会考查一次，注意训练全面性； 二、注意求助别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
慰问信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写慰问信。 一、高考目前尚未考查慰问信； 二、注意三段式结构，体现慰问真情实感。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 “一……就” 多样化表达 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，举一反三。
题型一 告知信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2024·新课标I卷 给英国朋友写邮件分享上周五你们班在公园上的一堂美术课
2019·全国II卷 排球队长写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛
2018·全国I卷 发邮件告诉朋友去中国朋友家聚会的有关习俗以及注意事项
2018·全国III卷 回信英国朋友Peter 告知你校秋运会和学生体育运动的情况
2017·全国I卷 写封邮件告知你的英国朋友Leslie下次汉语上课计划和变化
二、高考考向
告知信是历年高考书面表达的热门话题，就是告知对方想要了解的事情和情况。告知的内容比较广泛：如安排计划类，课外活动类，广告信息类，个人情况类，旅游介绍类等。写告知信时，应该注意语言的简洁、准确，准确无误地表达重点信息，把告知信所涉及的事由、时间、地点以及事项交代清楚。
三、高考真题
1. ( 2024·新课标I卷) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. ( 2019·全国II卷) 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Cheers,
Li Hua
3. ( 2018·全国I卷)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家参加生日聚会，发邮件向你询问有关习俗和要注意的事项。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4. ( 2018·全国III卷)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 对于你们学校才结束的秋季运动会很感兴趣，来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括介绍：
1.学校的体育场地；
2.主要的运动项目；
3.你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1.词数 80 字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
5.（2017·全国I卷）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高考英语告知信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍或问候对方，再开门见山表达“告知或分享”这一写作意图。告知的内容比较广泛：如安排计划类，课外活动类，广告信息类，个人情况类，旅游介绍类等。
次段清楚地表达活动具体的时间、地点和活动安排等，让对方明白或知晓。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，表达希望再次联系或提供进一步帮助的愿望。
二、表达热情真诚
告知信的语言应该热情、友好、真诚，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、告知信首段金句：①问候语/自我介绍②写信意图
1. How is everything going I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 一切都好吧？我是新华中学学生会主席李华。
2. I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details about the International Short Video Contest. 我写信是通知您有关国际短视频大赛的一些相关细节。
3. I'd like to share some related information of the speech that will be delivered next Monday with you. 我想与你分享下周一讲进行的演讲相关信息。
4. Learning that you are about to attend a birthday party of your Chinese friend, I am writing this letter to inform you of relevant customs and traditions. 得知您即将参加中国朋友的生日聚会，我写这封信是为了告诉您相关的习俗和传统。
5. Hearing that you want to participate in our school sports meeting, I am writing to introduce the meeting which will be held on the playground this Saturday and Sunday. 听说你想参加我们学校的运动会，我想写信介绍一下本周六和周日将在操场上举行的运动会。
二、告知信中段金句：①活动内容+②告知原因+③注意事项
1. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in Classroom 502. 本课将于下周二下午3点至5点在502教室上课。
2. Contestants are supposed to tell their own stories related to our city in no more than three minutes. 参赛者应在三分钟内讲述自己与我们城市有关的故事。
3. Apart from taking regular training, we also often take part in football matches. 除了定期进行训练外，我们还经常参加足球比赛。
4. There are various sports at the sports meeting, including some track and field events and some ball games. 在运动会上有各种各样的运动项目，包括一些田径项目和一些球类比赛。
5. Please wear your sports suit and shoes and take care of yourself.I'm sure you will enjoy yourself at the meeting. 请穿上你的运动服和鞋子，照顾好自己。我相信你会在运动会上玩得很开心的。
三、告知信尾段金句：①照应主题表示感谢+②期待回复
1. I sincerely hope that you can benefit from the information. 我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
2. If you want to know detailed information, please don't hesitate to drop me a line. 如果你还想知道细节信息，请尽快联系我。
3. Hopefully, you can spare some time to join us if it’s convenient for you. 希望如果你方便的话，你能抽出一些时间加入我们。
4. This exhibition, I believe, will bring you an impressive cultural feast never to be missed. 我相信，这次展览将为您带来一场不容错过的文化盛宴。
5. Opportunity never knocks twice. Looking forward to your sharing of "China in My Eyes" story! 机会从不敲两次门。期待您分享“我眼中的中国”的故事！
考向1 分享你参加校心理社举行的“认识你自己”活动
（24-25高三上·广东深圳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你参加了校心理社(Psychology Club)举行的“认识你自己”(Know Yourself)活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向2 告知英国笔友周日举办了成人礼活动
（24-25高三上·贵州黔西·期中）假定你是李华，你校于上周日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Mike很想了解该活动。请你给Mike写一封邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括：
1. 成人礼活动内容；
2. 你对活动的感受。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 告知住家Smith夫妇旅行计划
（24-25高一上·福建福州·期中）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家 Smith夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来福建游玩，请给他们制定一个旅行计划并写信告知他们，要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 行程安排；
3. 希望告知航班信息以便接机。
注意：1. 字数100词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lu Hua
考向4 和笔友分享上周五校园音乐节活动
（24-25高三上·广西南宁·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周五你们学校举办了校园音乐节活动。请你给英国朋友写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a music festival held in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
题型二 道歉信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2021年北京卷 和好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约而道歉
2016年全国I卷 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约而道歉
二、高考考向
道歉信是一种用于因个人过失或疏忽而向他人表达歉意的信件。在高中英语应用文写作中，当你需要为诸如迟到、失约、损坏物品、给对方造成不便等情况向他人诚恳地道歉时，就会用到道歉信。例如，你和朋友约好一起看电影，但是你因为突发情况没能赴约，这时候就可以写一封道歉信来表达你的歉意。
三、高考真题
1.（2021·北京卷）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
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2．（2016·全国I卷）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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高考英语道歉信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达求助这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达求助的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被求助以及活动的具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达真诚友好
求助信的语言应该真诚、友好，体现出对对方的信任和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、道歉信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图—道歉。
1. I’m writing to convey my hearltfelt apology to you for failing to accept the invitation.
我写信向您表达我深切的歉意，因为您没有接受邀请。
2. I’m terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday.
2.我非常抱歉地通知你，星期五我不能和你一起去书店。
3. I’m writing this letter to apologize for having lost the book borrowed from you last Saturday.
我写这封信是为了对上周六从你那里借的书丢了表示歉意。
4. I lost your book Journey to the West by accident, so I’m writing to apologize wholeheartedly.
我不小心把你的书《西游记》弄丢了，所以我写信向你表示诚挚的歉意。
5. I'm writing to make an apology to you because I cannot see you off at the airport this Saturday as scheduled.
我写这封信的目的是向您道歉，因为我本周六不能如期到机场给您送行。
二、道歉信次段金句：详述道歉的原因及合理解释。
1. The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我不能离开的原因是我要帮助准备本周末即将举行的英语演讲比赛。
2. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变动不会给您带来太多麻烦。
3. Yesterday I happened to leave the book in the classroom after school, but to my regret, when I hurried back to search for it, it was nowhere to be found.
昨天放学后我碰巧把书忘在教室里了，但遗憾的是，当我匆匆赶回去找的时候，却找不到。
4. My grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family were taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I had to stay with him that day.
我那时候没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了，我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不和他待在一起。
5. I was busy preparing for the coming exam. What’s more, my mother had her ankle injured while walking, so I had to take good care of her at home. That was why I failed to water your favorite plant.
我正忙着准备即将到来的考试。而且，我妈妈走路时脚踝受伤了，所以我不得不在家好好照顾她。这就是为什么我没给你最喜欢的植物浇水。
三、道歉信尾段金句：再次道歉、恳求原谅或提出补偿办法。
1. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my fault.
再次对因我的过错造成的不便表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
我真诚地希望你能接受我的道歉，理解我的处境
3. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best.
如果你方便的话，我们八点半在学校门口见面。如果没有，请告诉我什么时间最适合你。
4. To compensate for your loss, I’ve decided to buy a new one for you. Would you be so kind as to tell me where I can buy the same copy
为了弥补你的损失，我决定给你买一个新的。你能告诉我在哪里可以买到同样的版本？
5. I have found a video about using chopsticks online, which you can watch in advance. Then if it's convenient for you, I will teach you in person next weekend.
我在网上找到了一段关于使用筷子的视频，你可以提前观看。如果你方便的话，我下周末会亲自教你。
考向1 未能参加留学生朋友生日派对而道歉
（24-25高三上·河南·期中）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友William邀请你参加他本周六的生日派对，但你因故无法前往，特提前给他邮寄了一份礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提醒他查收礼物。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向2 未能和英国朋友去北京旅游而道歉
（24-25高二上·广东汕头·期中）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 无法按时提交名著读书报告而道歉
（24-25高三上·重庆·期中）假设你是李华，因为个人原因，无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告，特给他发送一封电子邮件道歉，要点如下：
1. 表达歉意并解释原因。
2. 提出补救措施。
3. 希望得到谅解。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Black,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题型三 慰问信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
空缺
二、高考考向
慰问信是指在同学考试失利、亲友生病，受伤或遇到火灾，水灾，被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时明确，感情要真挚，措辞要妥帖，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对生活，学习，工作充满信心。
三、高考真题/模拟
（24-25高一上·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Ann作为交换生来到你校国际班留学，她写信告诉你对新的学校生活感到不适应，觉得很焦虑很孤独。请你用英语给她写一封回信。要点如下：
1.表示安慰；
2.给予适当的建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
生词：adapt to 适应
高考英语慰问信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段引出事实，表达惋惜和同情。次段向对方的遭遇表示同情并安慰或鼓励对方。向对方提出解决问题的可能办法借以缓解对方的焦虑、压力或痛苦。尾段表达美好愿望和真诚祝福。
二、用真情表达慰问和同情
慰问信要明确慰问对象和目的,从而确定慰问信的侧重点。慰问有功者,侧重赞扬、激励;慰问有难者,侧重同情、安慰;节日慰问,侧重积极、鼓励。同时,感情要染梁长真挚、亲切,用语要朴实、简练。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、慰问信首段金句：知悉困境，表示同情。
1. I am terribly sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
听说你请病假回家了，我非常难过。
2. Knowing that a terrible earthquake has struck your hometown, I feel more than sad about it.
得知你的家乡发生了可怕的地震，我感到非常难过。
3. I just can't tell you how sorry I was to learn of your severe injury in the traffic accident.
得知你在交通事故中受了重伤，我真的很难过。
4. We are awfully sorry to hear the news about your failure in the entrance examination.
听说你高考不及格的消息，我们非常难过。
5. Shocked to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital, I’m writing to extend my deepest sympathy.
听说你得了严重流感，现在住院了，我很震惊，我写信向你表示最深切的同情。
二、慰问信次段金句：表示理解与同情，给予安慰和劝导。
1. Having had the same experience, I quite understand how you feel now.
因为有过同样的经历，我很理解你现在的感受。
2. But don’t let these rejections bring you down, because every great writer has encountered them.
但不要让这些拒绝让你失望，因为每个伟大的作家都会遇到它们。
3. Only when you build up your confidence and courage will you achieve whatever you are chasing after.
只有当你建立了信心和勇气，你才能实现你所追求的一切。
4. You should focus on the places where you have made mistakes before. Don't fall down twice in the same place.
你应该把注意力集中在你以前犯过错误的地方。不要在同一个地方跌倒两次。
5. So I hope that you will not take this to heart, and that it is your willingness to try bravely again that matters a lot.
所以我希望你不要把这放在心上，重要的是你愿意再次勇敢地尝试。
三、慰问信尾段金句：表达期望、祝愿。
1.We are hoping and praying for your speedy and full recovery.
我们希望并祈祷你早日完全康复。
2. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
我们都很想念你，祝你早日康复。
3. I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.
我衷心希望你能早日康复，恢复正常。
4. Believing in your ability, I am convinced that you will easily succeed next time.
相信你的能力，我相信你下次会很容易成功的。
5. Instead, you should draw beneficial lessons from the failure, avoiding the same fault in the future.
相反，你应该从失败中吸取有益的教训，避免将来再犯同样的错误。
考向1 好友家乡发生了严重的台风灾害表示慰问
（24-25高二上 广西 期中）假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害，请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容包括：
1.询问Eric及家人的情况；
2.台风造成的严重后果；
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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考向2 笔友因容貌而焦虑回信慰问
（24-25高三上·河南·期中）假定你是李华。最近你的新西兰笔友Anna来信告诉你她正在经历容貌焦虑，很是苦恼。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1.你对容貌焦虑的看法；
2.表达安慰。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 笔友两次投稿校报失败表示慰问
（24-25高二上 山西太原 期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信，向你倾诉他近期两次向校报投稿失败的经历和沮丧的心情，请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达理解；
（2）给予鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi, David!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
重难点突破 “一……就” 多样化表达
一、标准型---as soon as…
As soon as she saw him, she ran towards him and hugged him tightly.
一看到他，她跑向他，紧紧拥抱他。
I recognized that it was my nephew as soon as I saw his back.
一看到背影，我就认出是我的侄子。
二、介词型---on/upon doing…/at the sight/thought of…
On/Upon hearing the shout, he turned around instantly.
一听到喊叫， 他立刻转过身去。
At the sight of the dark figure in the corner, Mike let out a cry of terror.
看到角落里那个黑影，麦克惊叫了一声。
At the sound of the approaching footsteps, he was so delighted that he could hardly contain his excitement.
一听到接近的脚步声，他如此高兴以至于他几乎不能抑制兴奋。
三、名词型---the moment/instant/minute…
I will go there the moment I have finished my work.
我一完成工作，就去那儿。
The instant I saw, I knew you were angry with me.
我一看到你，就知道你在对我生气。
四、副词型--- Instantly/Immediately/Directly
He ran to help immediately/ instantly/ directly he saw the accident.
他一看到事故，就跑过去帮忙。
Instantly I go there I telephoned him.我一到那儿便立即给他打电话了。
五、倒装型---no sooner…than…/hardly…when….
No sooner had he finished his speech than the audience erupted into applause.
他一完成演讲，观众们就爆发了掌声。
Hardly had she stepped into the classroom when everyone shouted "surprise".
她一走进教室，每个人就大喊“惊喜”。
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题02 告知信+道歉信+慰问信（讲义）解析版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 告知信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 11
【命题预测】 12
题型二 道歉信 17
【真题研析】 17
【核心精讲】 20
【命题预测】 22
题型三 慰问信 26
【真题研析】 26
【核心精讲】 27
【命题预测】 28
重难点突破 “一……就” 多样化表达 32
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
告知信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写告知信。 2024·新课标I卷，给英国朋友写邮件分享上周五你们班在公园上的一堂美术课； 2019·全国II卷，排球队长写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛； 2018·全国I卷，发邮件告诉朋友去中国朋友家聚会的有关习俗以及注意事项； 2018·全国III卷，回信英国朋友Peter 告知你校秋运会和学生体育运动的情况； 2017·全国I卷，写封邮件告知你的英国朋友Leslie下次汉语上课计划和变。 一、告知对象为师生好友； 二、内容紧贴生活，贴近学生； 三、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主。 四、最近五年频繁考查，应重点备考。
道歉信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写道歉信。 2020·全国III卷，给外教Miss Evans写邮件请她帮忙指导根据课文改编的短剧 2016·全国I卷，给外教Ms Jenkins 写信请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔几年会考查一次，注意训练全面性； 二、注意求助别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
慰问信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写慰问信。 一、高考目前尚未考查慰问信； 二、注意三段式结构，体现慰问真情实感。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 “一……就” 多样化表达 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，举一反三。
题型一 告知信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2024·新课标I卷 给英国朋友写邮件分享上周五你们班在公园上的一堂美术课
2019·全国II卷 排球队长写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛
2018·全国I卷 发邮件告诉朋友去中国朋友家聚会的有关习俗以及注意事项
2018·全国III卷 回信英国朋友Peter 告知你校秋运会和学生体育运动的情况
2017·全国I卷 写封邮件告知你的英国朋友Leslie下次汉语上课计划和变化
二、高考考向
告知信是历年高考书面表达的热门话题，就是告知对方想要了解的事情和情况。告知的内容比较广泛：如安排计划类，课外活动类，广告信息类，个人情况类，旅游介绍类等。写告知信时，应该注意语言的简洁、准确，准确无误地表达重点信息，把告知信所涉及的事由、时间、地点以及事项交代清楚。
三、高考真题
1. ( 2024·新课标I卷) 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
2. ( 2019·全国II卷) 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Cheers,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School.
To win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写封邮件告知队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
应该：should→be supposed to
准备好的：prepared→ready
优秀的：excellent→outstanding
努力地：hard→diligently
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard.
拓展句：We should get fully prepared and practice hard so that we can win the match.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to inform you that we will have a volleyball match next month.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]To win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
3. ( 2018·全国I卷)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家参加生日聚会，发邮件向你询问有关习俗和要注意的事项。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Terry,
Learning that you are about to attend a birthday party of your Chinese friend, I am writing this letter to inform you of relevant customs and traditions we Chinese take seriously concerning this matter.
First and foremost, always make sure that you arrive a little earlier than the time you and your friend agreed on. Besides, it can be wise to pick an appropriate gift. It’s highly recommended that you bring one that represents your close friendship and in the meantime it is not too costly for the occasion. As for table manners, what comes into my mind is that never make noises when chewing or stick your chopsticks into the food.
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给将去中国朋友家参加生日聚会的新西兰朋友Terry回复邮件，介绍有关习俗和要注意的事项。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
此外：besides→what’s more
昂贵的：costly→expensive
建议：recommend→suggest
有帮助的：be of great help→be helpful/beneficial
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help for you.
拓展句：I hope that these suggestions will be of great help for you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are about to attend a birthday party of your Chinese friend, I am writing this letter to inform you of relevant customs and traditions we Chinese take seriously concerning this matter. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句以及省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As for table manners, what comes into my mind is that never make noises when chewing or stick your chopsticks into the food. (运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句)
4. ( 2018·全国III卷)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 对于你们学校才结束的秋季运动会很感兴趣，来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括介绍：
1.学校的体育场地；
2.主要的运动项目；
3.你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1.词数 80 字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous newly-built stadium has gone up，which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held，of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to embrace the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封回信，介绍你校学生体育运动情况。其内容包括：学校的体育场地、主要的运动项目和你喜欢的项目。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
给：give→ offer
而且：moreover→what’s more
真诚地：sincerely→earnestly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
拓展句：All in all, I sincerely hope that you can come to our school and see for yourself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, a fabulous newly-built stadium has gone up，which has become the new landmark in our school. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to embrace the challenges in my life.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）
5.（2017·全国I卷）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】
Dear Leslie,
How are you Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.
The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in Classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.
If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意：
1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；
3. 人称：第二人称为主；
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
高考英语告知信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍或问候对方，再开门见山表达“告知或分享”这一写作意图。告知的内容比较广泛：如安排计划类，课外活动类，广告信息类，个人情况类，旅游介绍类等。
次段清楚地表达活动具体的时间、地点和活动安排等，让对方明白或知晓。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，表达希望再次联系或提供进一步帮助的愿望。
二、表达热情真诚
告知信的语言应该热情、友好、真诚，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、告知信首段金句：①问候语/自我介绍②写信意图
1. How is everything going I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 一切都好吧？我是新华中学学生会主席李华。
2. I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details about the International Short Video Contest. 我写信是通知您有关国际短视频大赛的一些相关细节。
3. I'd like to share some related information of the speech that will be delivered next Monday with you. 我想与你分享下周一讲进行的演讲相关信息。
4. Learning that you are about to attend a birthday party of your Chinese friend, I am writing this letter to inform you of relevant customs and traditions. 得知您即将参加中国朋友的生日聚会，我写这封信是为了告诉您相关的习俗和传统。
5. Hearing that you want to participate in our school sports meeting, I am writing to introduce the meeting which will be held on the playground this Saturday and Sunday. 听说你想参加我们学校的运动会，我想写信介绍一下本周六和周日将在操场上举行的运动会。
二、告知信中段金句：①活动内容+②告知原因+③注意事项
1. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in Classroom 502. 本课将于下周二下午3点至5点在502教室上课。
2. Contestants are supposed to tell their own stories related to our city in no more than three minutes. 参赛者应在三分钟内讲述自己与我们城市有关的故事。
3. Apart from taking regular training, we also often take part in football matches. 除了定期进行训练外，我们还经常参加足球比赛。
4. There are various sports at the sports meeting, including some track and field events and some ball games. 在运动会上有各种各样的运动项目，包括一些田径项目和一些球类比赛。
5. Please wear your sports suit and shoes and take care of yourself.I'm sure you will enjoy yourself at the meeting. 请穿上你的运动服和鞋子，照顾好自己。我相信你会在运动会上玩得很开心的。
三、告知信尾段金句：①照应主题表示感谢+②期待回复
1. I sincerely hope that you can benefit from the information. 我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
2. If you want to know detailed information, please don't hesitate to drop me a line. 如果你还想知道细节信息，请尽快联系我。
3. Hopefully, you can spare some time to join us if it’s convenient for you. 希望如果你方便的话，你能抽出一些时间加入我们。
4. This exhibition, I believe, will bring you an impressive cultural feast never to be missed. 我相信，这次展览将为您带来一场不容错过的文化盛宴。
5. Opportunity never knocks twice. Looking forward to your sharing of "China in My Eyes" story! 机会从不敲两次门。期待您分享“我眼中的中国”的故事！
考向1 分享你参加校心理社举行的“认识你自己”活动
（24-25高三上·广东深圳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你参加了校心理社(Psychology Club)举行的“认识你自己”(Know Yourself)活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to share with you an enlightening experience I had at our school’s Psychology Club event called “Know Yourself” last week.
The event started with self-assessment questionnaires. I then engaged in emotion management training, which equipped me with the skills to recognize, express, and regulate my emotions effectively. I found the experience incredibly inspiring, as not only did it facilitate my deeper understanding of myself but it also contributed to better emotional resilience.
Overall, this is a rewarding activity that motivates me to embrace my uniqueness. Have you attended any similar activities recently Looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，向英国朋友Chris分享自己参加校心理社“认识你自己”活动的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……开始：start with → begin with
自我评估：self-assessment → self-evaluation
管理，控制：regulate → manage
难以置信地：incredibly → unbelievably
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event started with self-assessment questionnaires.
拓展句：The event started with self-assessment questionnaires, which helped me to delve into my strengths, weaknesses, and preferences.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share with you an enlightening experience I had at our school’s Psychology Club event called “Know Yourself” last week. (运用了省略关系代词that或者which的限制性定语从句和过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] I then engaged in emotion management training, which equipped me with the skills to recognize, express, and regulate my emotions effectively. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Overall, this is a rewarding activity that motivates me to embrace my uniqueness. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句)
考向2 告知英国笔友周日举办了成人礼活动
（24-25高三上·贵州黔西·期中）假定你是李华，你校于上周日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Mike很想了解该活动。请你给Mike写一封邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括：
1. 成人礼活动内容；
2. 你对活动的感受。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are interested in the coming-of-age ceremony held in our school last Sunday, I’m writing to share details with you.
The event took place from 8 to 11 am, which was to raise our awareness of entering adulthood and becoming responsible members of society. We first briefly looked back on our past, reflecting on what we had gained. Then we watched a documentary about great people who contributed to our mother land. Their deeds and spirits impressed me.
I have determined to work hard to become a person like them and realize my social value.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给Mike写邮件介绍有关成人礼的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
举行：hold→host
获得：gain→obtain
决定做：determine to do→make up one’s mind to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have determined to work hard to become a person like them and realize my social value.
拓展句：I have determined to work hard so that I will become a person like them and realize my social value.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The event took place from 8 to 11 am, which was to raise our awareness of entering adulthood and becoming responsible members of society. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] We first briefly looked back on our past, reflecting on what we had gained. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
考向3 告知住家Smith夫妇旅行计划
（24-25高一上·福建福州·期中）假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营时的住家 Smith夫妇写信告诉你他们下周将来福建游玩，请给他们制定一个旅行计划并写信告知他们，要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 行程安排；
3. 希望告知航班信息以便接机。
注意：1. 字数100词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lu Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
Knowing that you are coming to Fujian next week, I’m writing to express my heartfelt welcome and inform you of some arrangements.
As scheduled, we will reach Fuzhou by high-speed train. Our first destination will be Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, the cultural card of Fuzhou, which I believe can both satisfy your eyes and appetite. The second day will be spent at Fujian Provincial Museum, where you can appreciate a huge collection of cultural relics and learn about the development of Fujian’s economy, politics, and culture over thousands of years. I bet it will be an enjoyable week. Would you please tell me your flight number so that I can pick you up at the airport
Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Smith夫妇制定一个福建游玩计划并写信告知他们。内容包括：表示欢迎、行程安排和希望告知航班信息以便接机。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的：heartfelt→earnest
按计划：as scheduled→as planned
欣赏：appreciate→ admire
愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：I bet it will be an enjoyable week. （宾语从句）
拓展句：There is no doubt that it will be an enjoyable week. （同位语从句）
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Knowing that you are coming to Fujian next week, I’m writing to express my heartfelt welcome and inform you of some arrangements.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 Our first destination will be Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, the cultural card of Fuzhou, which I believe can both satisfy your eyes and appetite. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
考向4 和笔友分享上周五校园音乐节活动
（24-25高三上·广西南宁·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周五你们学校举办了校园音乐节活动。请你给英国朋友写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a music festival held in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a music festival held in our school.
It was a fantastic event, featuring various performances like band shows, singing contests, and dance routines. The atmosphere was electric, with everyone clapping and cheering. I participated in a group song, and it was thrilling to sing on stage in front of so many people. The whole experience was unforgettable, fostering a sense of unity and creativity among us.
I wish you could’ve been there to enjoy it too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，向英国朋友Chris分享上周五学校举办的校园音乐节活动，内容包括活动内容和个人感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
精彩的：fantastic → wonderful/excellent
表演：performance → show/act
热烈的：electric → lively/enthusiastic
难忘的：unforgettable → memorable/unforgetting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I participated in a group song, and it was thrilling to sing on stage.
拓展句：When I participated in a group song, I found it thrilling to sing on stage in front of so many people.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to share with you a music festival held in our school. (运用了过去分词短语作定语)
[高分句型2] The atmosphere was electric, with everyone clapping and cheering. (运用了with复合结构作伴随状语)
[高分句型3] I wish you could’ve been there to enjoy it too!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
题型二 道歉信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2021年北京卷 和好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约而道歉
2016年全国I卷 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约而道歉
二、高考考向
道歉信是一种用于因个人过失或疏忽而向他人表达歉意的信件。在高中英语应用文写作中，当你需要为诸如迟到、失约、损坏物品、给对方造成不便等情况向他人诚恳地道歉时，就会用到道歉信。例如，你和朋友约好一起看电影，但是你因为突发情况没能赴约，这时候就可以写一封道歉信来表达你的歉意。
三、高考真题
1.（2021·北京卷）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
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【满分范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend.
I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go out next Sunday afternoon We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封信，对不能如约一起外出表示歉意，并说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常地：terribly→extremely
出发：set out→set off
会面：meet→get together
不变：trouble→inconvenience
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting.
同义句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon, when I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
2．（2016·全国I卷）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Bob写封邮件，因不能如约去书店而道歉，说明原因，并另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致：cause→result in
选择：select→choose/elect
大门：gate→portal/main entrance
出发：set out→start off
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.
拓展句：In order to have more time to read and select books, we can set out early .
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. (运用了If 引导的条件句)
高考英语道歉信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达求助这一写作意图。
次段清楚地表达求助的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被求助以及活动的具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。
二、表达真诚友好
求助信的语言应该真诚、友好，体现出对对方的信任和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、道歉信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图—道歉。
1. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt apology to you for failing to accept the invitation.
我写信向您表达我深切的歉意，因为您没有接受邀请。
2. I’m terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday.
2.我非常抱歉地通知你，星期五我不能和你一起去书店。
3. I’m writing this letter to apologize for having lost the book borrowed from you last Saturday.
我写这封信是为了对上周六从你那里借的书丢了表示歉意。
4. I lost your book Journey to the West by accident, so I’m writing to apologize wholeheartedly.
我不小心把你的书《西游记》弄丢了，所以我写信向你表示诚挚的歉意。
5. I'm writing to make an apology to you because I cannot see you off at the airport this Saturday as scheduled.
我写这封信的目的是向您道歉，因为我本周六不能如期到机场给您送行。
二、道歉信次段金句：详述道歉的原因及合理解释。
1. The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我不能离开的原因是我要帮助准备本周末即将举行的英语演讲比赛。
2. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变动不会给您带来太多麻烦。
3. Yesterday I happened to leave the book in the classroom after school, but to my regret, when I hurried back to search for it, it was nowhere to be found.
昨天放学后我碰巧把书忘在教室里了，但遗憾的是，当我匆匆赶回去找的时候，却找不到。
4. My grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family were taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I had to stay with him that day.
我那时候没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了，我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不和他待在一起。
5. I was busy preparing for the coming exam. What’s more, my mother had her ankle injured while walking, so I had to take good care of her at home. That was why I failed to water your favorite plant.
我正忙着准备即将到来的考试。而且，我妈妈走路时脚踝受伤了，所以我不得不在家好好照顾她。这就是为什么我没给你最喜欢的植物浇水。
三、道歉信尾段金句：再次道歉、恳求原谅或提出补偿办法。
1. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my fault.
再次对因我的过错造成的不便表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
我真诚地希望你能接受我的道歉，理解我的处境
3. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best.
如果你方便的话，我们八点半在学校门口见面。如果没有，请告诉我什么时间最适合你。
4. To compensate for your loss, I’ve decided to buy a new one for you. Would you be so kind as to tell me where I can buy the same copy
为了弥补你的损失，我决定给你买一个新的。你能告诉我在哪里可以买到同样的版本？
5. I have found a video about using chopsticks online, which you can watch in advance. Then if it's convenient for you, I will teach you in person next weekend.
我在网上找到了一段关于使用筷子的视频，你可以提前观看。如果你方便的话，我下周末会亲自教你。
考向1 未能参加留学生朋友生日派对而道歉
（24-25高三上·河南·期中）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友William邀请你参加他本周六的生日派对，但你因故无法前往，特提前给他邮寄了一份礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提醒他查收礼物。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear William,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to attend your birthday party this Saturday. Unfortunately, I have a prior commitment that I am unable to change at the moment.
However, I don’t want to miss the opportunity to celebrate with you, so I have sent a gift to your address. Please be on the lookout for it so that you can have a little piece of me with you on your special day.
I hope you’ll have a fantastic birthday filled with love, laughter, and joy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。留学生朋友William邀请考生参加他本周六的生日派对，但考生因故无法前往，特提前给他邮寄了一份礼物。要求考生就此给他写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出席：attend→be present at
机会：opportunity→chance
不幸地：unfortunately→unluckily
充满：fill→be full of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to attend your birthday party this Saturday.
拓展句：I’m writing to you to express my sincere apologies for the fact that I won’t be able to attend your birthday party this Saturday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Unfortunately, I have a prior commitment that I am unable to change at the moment.（使用that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you’ll have a fantastic birthday filled with love, laughter, and joy.（运用了过去分词作后置定语，修饰birthday和that的宾语从句）
考向2 未能和英国朋友去北京旅游而道歉
（24-25高二上·广东汕头·期中）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Tom,
I am really sorry that I can’t make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned.
Unfortunately, an unexpected family obligation has come up — my cousin Li Qiong, who has been studying in Australia for the past year, is returning this Saturday, and my family needs me to pick him up at the airport. I hope you understand the situation. Let’s reschedule our trip to Beijing for a later date.
Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但考生因故不能赴约，要求考生按照要求用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：plan → intend
不幸地：unfortunately→ sadly
出乎意料的：unexpected → surprisingly
返回：return → go back
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am really sorry that I can’t make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned.
拓展句：I can’t make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned, for which I feel sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am really sorry that I can’t make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、as引导的方式状语从句）
【高分句型2】Unfortunately, an unexpected family obligation has come up — my cousin Li Qiong, who has been studying in Australia for the past year, is returning this Saturday, and my family needs me to pick him up at the airport.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
考向3 无法按时提交名著读书报告而道歉
（24-25高三上·重庆·期中）假设你是李华，因为个人原因，无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告，特给他发送一封电子邮件道歉，要点如下：
1. 表达歉意并解释原因。
2. 提出补救措施。
3. 希望得到谅解。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Black,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mr Black,
I am writing to convey my heartfelt apologies for the delay in submitting my reading report on the English literature masterpieces on time. A sudden illness that struck me last week led to this delay.
Feeling a lot better now, I am eager to make it right. I will devote myself to working on it in the following couple of days, and I assure you that a thorough analysis and detailed reflection of the classics will be included in my assignment. I plan to finish it by next Friday morning and email it to you immediately.
I deeply regret any inconvenience this may have caused and hope you can understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告，给他发送一封电子邮件表示道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→ express
计划：plan → schedule
立刻：immediately→ right now
导致：lead to→ cause
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Feeling a lot better now, I am eager to make it right.
拓展句：Because I feel a lot better now, I am eager to make it right.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A sudden illness that struck me last week led to this delay.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I will devote myself to working on it in the following couple of days, and I assure you that a thorough analysis and detailed reflection of the classics will be included in my assignment.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
题型三 慰问信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
空缺
二、高考考向
慰问信是指在同学考试失利、亲友生病，受伤或遇到火灾，水灾，被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时明确，感情要真挚，措辞要妥帖，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对生活，学习，工作充满信心。
三、高考真题/模拟
（24-25高一上·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Ann作为交换生来到你校国际班留学，她写信告诉你对新的学校生活感到不适应，觉得很焦虑很孤独。请你用英语给她写一封回信。要点如下：
1.表示安慰；
2.给予适当的建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
生词：adapt to 适应
【满分范文】
Dear Ann,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to your new school life in our school. It is not unusual for foreign students to feel lonely and anxious in a new school. But this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.
First of all, you are supposed to study hard at Chinese, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with your teachers and classmates. In addition, why not make some friends They can help you know more about China, and you can express your thoughts and feelings to them so that you may forget your loneliness. Last but not least, it would be good if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make your life more interesting.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Ann用英语写一封回信，就她对新的学校生活感到不适应，觉得很焦虑很孤独的情况给与安慰和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适应：adapt to→adjust to
参加：take part in→join in
表达：express→convey
首先：first of all→to begin with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is not unusual for foreign students to feel lonely and anxious in a new school.
拓展句：That foreign students feel lonely and anxious in a new school is not unusual.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble adapting to your new school life in our school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, it would be good if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make your life more interesting. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
高考英语慰问信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段引出事实，表达惋惜和同情。次段向对方的遭遇表示同情并安慰或鼓励对方。向对方提出解决问题的可能办法借以缓解对方的焦虑、压力或痛苦。尾段表达美好愿望和真诚祝福。
二、用真情表达慰问和同情
慰问信要明确慰问对象和目的,从而确定慰问信的侧重点。慰问有功者,侧重赞扬、激励;慰问有难者,侧重同情、安慰;节日慰问,侧重积极、鼓励。同时,感情要染梁长真挚、亲切,用语要朴实、简练。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、慰问信首段金句：知悉困境，表示同情。
1. I am terribly sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
听说你请病假回家了，我非常难过。
2. Knowing that a terrible earthquake has struck your hometown, I feel more than sad about it.
得知你的家乡发生了可怕的地震，我感到非常难过。
3. I just can't tell you how sorry I was to learn of your severe injury in the traffic accident.
得知你在交通事故中受了重伤，我真的很难过。
4. We are awfully sorry to hear the news about your failure in the entrance examination.
听说你高考不及格的消息，我们非常难过。
5. Shocked to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital, I’m writing to extend my deepest sympathy.
听说你得了严重流感，现在住院了，我很震惊，我写信向你表示最深切的同情。
二、慰问信次段金句：表示理解与同情，给予安慰和劝导。
1. Having had the same experience, I quite understand how you feel now.
因为有过同样的经历，我很理解你现在的感受。
2. But don’t let these rejections bring you down, because every great writer has encountered them.
但不要让这些拒绝让你失望，因为每个伟大的作家都会遇到它们。
3. Only when you build up your confidence and courage will you achieve whatever you are chasing after.
只有当你建立了信心和勇气，你才能实现你所追求的一切。
4. You should focus on the places where you have made mistakes before. Don't fall down twice in the same place.
你应该把注意力集中在你以前犯过错误的地方。不要在同一个地方跌倒两次。
5. So I hope that you will not take this to heart, and that it is your willingness to try bravely again that matters a lot.
所以我希望你不要把这放在心上，重要的是你愿意再次勇敢地尝试。
三、慰问信尾段金句：表达期望、祝愿。
1.We are hoping and praying for your speedy and full recovery.
我们希望并祈祷你早日完全康复。
2. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
我们都很想念你，祝你早日康复。
3. I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.
我衷心希望你能早日康复，恢复正常。
4. Believing in your ability, I am convinced that you will easily succeed next time.
相信你的能力，我相信你下次会很容易成功的。
5. Instead, you should draw beneficial lessons from the failure, avoiding the same fault in the future.
相反，你应该从失败中吸取有益的教训，避免将来再犯同样的错误。
考向1 好友家乡发生了严重的台风灾害表示慰问
（24-25高二上 广西 期中）假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害，请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容包括：
1.询问Eric及家人的情况；
2.台风造成的严重后果；
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dear Eric,
How are you doing Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family.
As reported, the disaster caused significant damage to your hometown with more than twenty people losing their lives and many others injured. Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
I am deeply saddened by this disaster. But please don’t be worried, everything will gradually return to normal. If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给家乡发生了严重台风灾害的好友Eric写一封邮件，向他表示慰问。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可怕的：terrible→horrible
侵袭：hit→strike
无数的：numerous→countless
此外：additionally→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
拓展句：Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, which left thousands of people homeless.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和省略that的定语从句)
考向2 笔友因容貌而焦虑回信慰问
（24-25高三上·河南·期中）假定你是李华。最近你的新西兰笔友Anna来信告诉你她正在经历容貌焦虑，很是苦恼。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1.你对容貌焦虑的看法；
2.表达安慰。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Anna,
I’ve heard about your struggle with appearance anxiety, and I want you to know that you’re not alone.
Remember, beauty is subjective, and it’s what’s inside that truly shines. Don’t let society standards define your worth. Your kindness and intelligence are what can make you unique. Please don’t be too hard on yourself. Embrace your individuality and focus on the qualities that make you unique. You are loved and appreciated for who you are, not how you look. Let’s support each other in overcoming these challenges.
Stay strong, and remember, you are beautiful in your own way.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给正在经历容貌焦虑，很是苦恼的新西兰笔友Anna写一封进行安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真正的：truly→really
集中精力于：focus on→concentrate on
克服；战胜：overcome→beat
对……严格：be hard on→be strict with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please don’t be too hard on yourself.
拓展句：What is important is that you’d better not be too hard on yourself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Your kindness and intelligence are what can make you unique.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Remember, beauty is subjective, and it’s what’s inside that truly shines.(运用了强调句型)
考向3 笔友两次投稿校报失败表示慰问
（24-25高二上 山西太原 期中）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信，向你倾诉他近期两次向校报投稿失败的经历和沮丧的心情，请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达理解；
（2）给予鼓励。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi, David!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Hi, David,
I was sorry to hear about your setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper. I do understand your frustration, for it’s natural to feel that way when things don’t go as planned.
But don’t let these rejections bring you down, because every great writer has encountered them. J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter was rejected numerous times before it became a worldwide success. You have excellent writing talent, so just see these failures as opportunities to learn and grow. Keep writing, and believe yourself!
I’m confident that with your determination and hard work, you’ll soon see your name in print.
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英国笔友David回复一封邮件，安慰因两次向校报投稿失败而沮丧的他，应首先对他的情况表示理解，然后给予他具体的鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
沮丧：frustration→disappointment, letdown
遭遇：encounter→experience, face
拒绝：reject→turn down, dismiss
无数的：numerous→countless, numberless
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I was sorry to hear about your setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper.
拓展句：I was sorry to hear that you experienced setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I do understand your frustration, for it’s natural to feel that way when things don’t go as planned. (运用了do强调谓语动词understand、for引导原因状语从句、when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m confident that with your determination and hard work, you’ll soon see your name in print. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
重难点突破 “一……就” 多样化表达
一、标准型---as soon as…
As soon as she saw him, she ran towards him and hugged him tightly.
一看到他，她跑向他，紧紧拥抱他。
I recognized that it was my nephew as soon as I saw his back.
一看到背影，我就认出是我的侄子。
二、介词型---on/upon doing…/at the sight/thought of…
On/Upon hearing the shout, he turned around instantly.
一听到喊叫， 他立刻转过身去。
At the sight of the dark figure in the corner, Mike let out a cry of terror.
看到角落里那个黑影，麦克惊叫了一声。
At the sound of the approaching footsteps, he was so delighted that he could hardly contain his excitement.
一听到接近的脚步声，他如此高兴以至于他几乎不能抑制兴奋。
三、名词型---the moment/instant/minute…
I will go there the moment I have finished my work.
我一完成工作，就去那儿。
The instant I saw, I knew you were angry with me.
我一看到你，就知道你在对我生气。
四、副词型--- Instantly/Immediately/Directly
He ran to help immediately/ instantly/ directly he saw the accident.
他一看到事故，就跑过去帮忙。
Instantly I go there I telephoned him.我一到那儿便立即给他打电话了。
五、倒装型---no sooner…than…/hardly…when….
No sooner had he finished his speech than the audience erupted into applause.
他一完成演讲，观众们就爆发了掌声。
Hardly had she stepped into the classroom when everyone shouted "surprise".
她一走进教室，每个人就大喊“惊喜”。
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