专题03建议信+咨询信+申请信（讲义）解析版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 建议信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 12
【命题预测】 13
题型二 咨询信 19
【真题研析】 19
【核心精讲】 24
【命题预测】 25
题型三 申请信 31
【真题研析】 31
【核心精讲】 35
【命题预测】 37
重难点突破 “建议你业余多参加体育锻炼”多样化表达 41
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
建议信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写告知信。 2024·北京卷，给外国好友建议投稿内容，打算重点介绍中国的发展成就； 2023·北京卷，邮件给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议； 2023·新课标卷，给外教写邮件告诉他将学生随机分组存在问题并给出建议； 2019·天津卷，给英国教师写信就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出建议； 2017·北京卷，给英国朋友回信建议来中国旅游的路线、理由并表达祝愿。 一、内容紧贴生活，贴近学生； 二、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主； 三、最近五年频繁考查，应重点关注。
咨询信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写道歉信。 2021·全国甲卷，给外国朋友写封信咨询哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友； 2020·浙江卷，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和祝愿； 2014·全国I卷，暑期去英国学习给培训学校写信询问为期六周广告的内容。 一、每隔几年会考查一次，注意训练全面性； 二、注意咨询别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
申请信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写慰问信。 2023·天津卷，申请参加交换生项目“中国工坊”活动并谈及自己理解和特长； 2019·全国I卷，给当地的美术馆写信申请做即将要举办的中国画展览志愿者； 2018·浙江卷，给学校英语协会写信申请担任志愿者接待来访的国外中学生。 一、高考和模拟试题热门题型； 二、注意三段式结构，体现真情实感。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 “建议你业余多参加体育锻炼” 一句多译 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，举一反三。
题型一 建议信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2024·北京卷 给外国好友建议投稿内容，打算重点介绍中国的发展成就
2023·北京卷 邮件给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议
2023·新课标卷 给外教写邮件告诉他将学生随机分组存在问题并给出建议
2019·天津卷 给英国教师写信就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出建议
2017·北京卷 给英国朋友回信建议来中国旅游的路线、理由并表达祝愿
二、高考考向
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信，因此观点要合情合理，注意礼貌客气委婉。
三、高考真题
1. (2024·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
2. (2023·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3. (2023·新课标I卷) 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with→first of all
提高：improve→progress
建议：suggestion→advice
选择：choose→select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
4. (2019·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music, which is served as a bridge, provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
5. (2017·北京卷) 你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re going on a trip to China organized by your school. I'd like to offer you some advice on the two tour routes you've been given, which may help you a little.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along theYangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim回信，为他推荐来中国旅游的路线，说明推荐的理由，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
旅游：tour→trip
提供：offer→provide
建议：advice→suggestion
而且：moreover→what's more
观光景点、旅游景点：sightseeing spot →tourist attraction
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句： I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re going on a trip to China organized by your school.
拓展句：I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re going on a trip to China that is organized by your school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I'd like to offer you some advice on the two tour routes you've been given, which may help you a little.（运用了省略关系代词that/which的限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.（运用了以why引导的表语从句及省略连接词that的宾语从句。）
高考英语建议信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍，再开门见山表达“理解并建议”这一写作意图。建议的内容比较广泛：如学习技能，旅游行程，课程安排等。次段清楚地表达活动具体的时间、地点和活动安排等，让对方明白或知晓。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，表达希望再次联系或提供进一步帮助的愿望。
二、表达热情真诚
建议信的语言应该热情、友好、真诚，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。同时，提供建议应当注意条理性，用好“一二三”原则。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式来表达建议：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。常见高频建议句式：
1. You’d better do sth…
2. I suggest that…
3. It is advised that…
4. It is advisable that…
5. It is a good idea to do…
6. Why not do…
7. If I were you, I would….
8. Ny suggestion is that….
一、建议信首段金句：①自我介绍②写信意图—提出建议
1. Here are my suggestions for your reference, which I hope can be of great benefit to you.
以下是我的建议供您参考，希望对您大有裨益。
2. I'm Li Hua, a student in our school. I'm writing to give you some constructive tips on how to create a green school.
我叫李华，是我们学校的一名学生。我写信给你一些关于如何创建绿色学校的建设性建议。
3. I'm Li Hua from Class 1. I am writing to express my concerns about your way of grouping us at random for our oral English practice.
我是一班的李华。我写信是想表达我对你随机分组进行英语口语练习的方式的担忧。
4. Having learned that you are having trouble fitting in with your new class as an exchange student, here I’m writing to offer some practical advice.
得知你作为交换生很难适应新班级，我写信给你提供一些实用的建议。
5. Of the two routes given by your school, I strongly recommend the trip to the Yangtze River. The reasons are as follows.
在贵校提供的两条路线中，我强烈推荐去长江旅行。原因如下。
二、建议信中段金句：①分条建议+②注意“建议”句式多样化
1. I strongly suggest that you (should) join a volunteer club so that you can improve your ability.
我强烈建议你加入志愿者俱乐部，这样你才能提高自己的能力。
2. You'd better take exercise regularly so that you can build up your body.
你最好经常锻炼，这样你才能强身健体。
3. Of course, it's a good idea to share standard pronunciation of each word and give plenty of examples.
当然，分享每个单词的标准发音并给出大量例子是个好主意。
4. What's more, if I were you, I would correct my pronunciation by listening to Chinese radio programs.
更重要的是，如果我是你，我会通过听中文广播节目来纠正我的发音。
5. Firstly, it's a good idea to arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection. Secondly, we may as well to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Last but not least, we must have good habits to keep every corner tidy in our school.
首先，安排一系列与环境保护有关的讲座是个好主意。其次，我们不妨高度重视节水、节纸、节电和植树造林，并付诸实践。最后但同样重要的是，我们必须养成良好的习惯，保持学校每个角落的整洁。
三、建议信尾段金句：①希望建议有所帮助+②期待佳音
1. I sincerely hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
我真诚地希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
2. I would be more than delighted if my proposal could meet with your consideration.
如果我的建议能得到您的考虑，我将非常高兴。
3. I believe you will take my advice seriously. I'm looking forward to getting your good news soon.
我相信你会认真对待我的建议。我期待着很快收到你的好消息。
4. I hope these suggestions will be of benefit to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
5. Hopefully, my advice will be helpful for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
考向1 给负责“戏剧工坊”活动的老师写建议信
(24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，为迎接即将来访的新西兰姐妹学校的师生代表，学校将举办“戏剧工坊”(drama workshop) 活动。现向全校学生征集活动的建议，请你给负责活动的老师写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议及具体安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to share some suggestions for the upcoming drama workshop to welcome the students and teachers from our sister school in New Zealand.
To begin with, we could initiate the workshop with interactive ice-breaker activities, allowing students to familiarize themselves with one another. Following this, a session dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial. Moreover, organizing students into small groups to prepare and perform short skits could foster teamwork and creativity. To conclude, a feedback session where students can share their thoughts and learning outcomes would be valuable.
I am confident that these activities will create an engaging and educational environment for all participants.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给负责“戏剧工坊”活动的老师写信，内容需要包括写信目的、建议内容和具体安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
即将来临的：upcoming→forthcoming
首先：to begin with→first of all
此外：moreover→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Following this, a session dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial.
拓展句：Following this, a session that is dedicated to basic acting techniques, such as voice projection, body language, and improvisation, would be highly beneficial.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, we could initiate the workshop with interactive ice-breaker activities, allowing students to familiarize themselves with one another.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】To conclude, a feedback session where students can share their thoughts and learning outcomes would be valuable.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
考向2 回复英国笔友Peter邮件就他的海南之行给出建议
(24-25高一上·辽宁朝阳·阶段练习) 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算寒假期间来你的家乡中国海南旅游，发邮件向你征询建议，请你回复邮件，建议内容包括：
1. 预订宾馆；
2. 租用车辆；
3. 导游陪同。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about my hometown. My advice is as follows:
Firstly, you had better book your hotel ahead of time. Secondly, you may rent a local car in order to save time and visit more places of interest. Last but not least, it’s wise of you to have a guide to show you around Hainan and introduce more details, which will make your trip more interesting and benefit you a lot.
If you have any more questions, please call me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Peter回复邮件，给他的海南之行给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
提前：ahead of time→in advance
为了：in order to→so as to
预定：book→reserve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you may rent a local car in order to save time and visit more places of interest.
拓展句：Secondly, you may rent a local car so that you can save time and visit more places of interest.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last but not least, it’s wise of you to have a guide to show you around Hainan and introduce more details, which will make your trip more interesting and benefit you a lot. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any more questions, please call me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
考向3 给好朋友Jim写信就如何处理好同学关系提出具体建议
(24-25高一上·贵州·阶段练习) 假设你是李华，进入高中生活以后，你的好朋友Jim和同学之间遇到了冲突，请你就此情况给他写一封建议信，就如何处理好同学关系提出你的建议。内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可增加细节使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I know you’ve been having some conflicts with your friends in high school lately. But don’t worry. It happens to everyone. Following are some tips.
Above all, communication is key. Try to have a frank conversation with your friend. Talk about what you feel and think, and listen to his opinion. Many times, misunderstandings and conflicts are caused by poor communication. Besides, always remember, it is very important to remain calm in times of conflict. Don’t let your emotions control your behavior. At last, if you can’t work things out on your own, find a trusted person to help you and resolve the conflict.
I hope these suggestions can be helpful and you can solve your troubles soon.
Your sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友Jim写一封信，对于他和同学之间遇到了冲突的情况，就如何处理好同学关系提出具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
冲突：conflict → disagreement/clash
最近：lately → recently
建议：suggestion → advice/proposal
解决：resolve → settle/solve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Above all, communication is key.
拓展句：Above all, communication is key, which is essential in resolving any kind of misunderstanding or conflict.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Talk about what you feel and think, and listen to his opinion. (运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】At last, if you can’t work things out on your own, find a trusted person to help you and resolve the conflict. (运用了从属连词if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型3】I hope these suggestions can be h elpful and you can solve your troubles soon. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
考向4给校长写一封关于学校图书馆改造的建议信
(24-25高二上·四川眉山·期中) 假如你是李华，你校正准备改造图书馆，现向全校师生征求改造建议。请给李校长写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.丰富藏书种类，提供多种服务；
2.改造硬件设施，提升阅读体验；
3.其他建议。
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：改造 upgrade
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【满分范文】
Dear Mr. Li,
I am Li Hua, a student in our school. I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for upgrading our library.
Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. Secondly, more spacious rooms along with comfortable seats should be designed to provide a better reading experience. Lastly, it' ll also be excellent to donate second-hand books to the children in need, which can greatly reduce the waste of resources.
Hopefully, my suggestions can be taken into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给李校长写一封关于学校图书馆改造的建议信，内容涵盖丰富藏书种类与服务、改造硬件设施以提升阅读体验以及其他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer → provide
丰富：diversify → enrich
选择：choice→option
各种各样的：various → a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am rather willing to offer you my suggestions for upgrading our library.
拓展句：If I am given the chance to offer you my suggestions for upgrading our library, I'll be very willing to do it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, it benefits a lot to diversify the categories of books and organize more reading-related lectures, thus enabling students to make proper choices and stimulate our reading interest. （运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Lastly, it'll also be excellent to donate second-hand books to the children in need, which can greatly reduce the waste of resources.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
题型二 咨询信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2021·全国甲卷 给外国朋友写封信咨询哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友
2020·浙江卷 向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和祝愿
2014·全国I卷 暑期去英国学习给培训学校写信询问为期六周广告的内容
二、高考考向
咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况，希望了解详细信息的信件，表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。询问/咨询信，问句较多，写时要避免句式单调。咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。
三、高考真题
1. (2021·全国甲卷)假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Peter写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
To introduce Chinese traditional culture, my school is planning to hold a themed class meeting and display it on the English website. I’m writing to ask for your opinion.
As is known to all, China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history, such as tea culture, Peking opera, the Chinese calligraphy and so on. As a foreigner, which kind of Chinese cultural experience do you think will make a lasting impression on you Also, if you have any other ideas or suggestions, please let me know.
Your advice will be greatly appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Peter写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
展示：display→exhibit
持久的：lasting→enduring
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To introduce Chinese traditional culture, my school is planning to hold a themed class meeting and display it on the English website.
拓展句：My school is planning to hold a themed class meeting and display it on the English website, the purpose of which is to introduce Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history, such as tea culture, Peking opera, the Chinese calligraphy and so on. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Also, if you have any other ideas or suggestions, please let me know. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2. (2020·浙江卷) 假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1. 询问近况；
2. 分享班级最新消息；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你校的外教Peter因病回国休假。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疾病：disease→illness
完成：finish→complete
康复：recovery→rehabilitation
一……就：As soon as=The instant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, a student from your class in China.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is a student from your class in China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(运用了which引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. (运用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
3. (2014·全国I卷) 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词汇：住宿 — accommodation
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.
First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：plan→map out
此外：besides→what’s more
为……付款：pay…for→spend…on
回复：reply→response
2.句式拓展
并列句变主从复合句
原句：I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
拓展句：I am a student in China, who plans to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.（运用了虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.（运用了how much和whether引导的宾语从句）
高考英语咨询信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人），再开门见山表达“咨询”这一写作意图。次段清楚地表达咨询的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被咨询以及具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。
二、表达真诚友好
咨询信的语言应该真诚、客套，友好，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、学会提问好处多
咨询信的内容意味着需要询问个人或机构一些困惑或疑问。咨询信常见句式：一般疑问句式；特殊疑问句式或者主从复合句式。高频句式有：
1. I’d like to know if….
2. I am wondering if…
3. It is unclear to me whether…
4. Therefore I have some puzzles that need to be clarified.
5. Here are some questions that I hope you can help make clear.
一、咨询信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图—咨询。
1. I’m writing to seek for more specific information about the service at your inn.
我写信是想了解贵酒店服务的更多具体信息。
2. I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with further information concerning the activity.
我写信是想知道您是否可以向我提供有关活动的更多信息。
3. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to seek for more detailed information with regard to the day tour to London.
我是李华，来自中国的交换生。我写信是想了解更多关于伦敦一日游的详细信息。
4. I'm writing to see if it is convenient for you to provide me with some specific information concerning your six-week English course.
我写信是想知道你是否方便向我提供一些关于你为期六周的英语课程的具体信息。
5. I'm writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. Here are a few things that I’d like to clarify.
我写信是想了解如何成为亚洲冬季运动会的志愿者。以下是我想澄清的几件事。
二、咨询信次段金句：详述咨询的内容及具体原因。
1. I wonder whether there is any extra charge for accommodation.
我想知道住宿是否需要额外收费。
2. What about booking tickets in groups Can we have a reduced price
团体订票怎么样？我们能享受折价吗？
3. It is unclear to me whether there is a reduced membership fee for students.
我不清楚是否降低了学生的会费。
4. As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed.
至于你收取的费用，我想知道它是否包括参观所列地点的入场费。
5. I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
我想知道这门课程我要付多少钱，住宿是否包括在内。
三、咨询信尾段金句：再次照应主题，盼望尽早回复。
1. Your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢您及时关注这封信。
2. Any words fail to convey how grateful I’m to you for your concern.
任何言语都无法表达我对你的关心的感激之情。
3. Thank you for your kindness and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意，如能及时收到此信，我们将不胜感激。
4. If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有什么需要特别注意的，请在方便的时候通知我。
5. Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects
您能否寄给我一些有关上述方面的小册子？
考向1 给英国朋友Peter写信咨询冬令营的相关事宜
(24-25高三上·宁夏银川·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter邀请你参加他们学校寒假组织的“科技冬令营”。你想参加，现在就此事写一封信向他咨询冬令营的相关事宜，要点包括：
1.具体日程安排及活动内容；
2.住宿和费用等
注意：
1. 要求内容顺畅，连贯；
2. 词数80词左右
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
With keen interest in the upcoming Technology Winter Camp, I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with relevant information.
May I bother to inquire about the specific schedule of the program and the activities we will engage in I want to plan accordingly and get it ready ahead of time. Furthermore, is it convenient to get me informed of the accommodation options and related costs Since it’s my first time to the winter camp , any suggestion you offer counts.
I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写信咨询冬令营的相关事宜。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
相关的：relevant→related
询问：inquire→ask
此外：furthermore→moreover
提前：ahead of time→in advance
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句：May I bother to inquire about the specific schedule of the program and the activities we will engage in I want to plan accordingly and get it ready ahead of time.
拓展句：May I bother to inquire about the specific schedule of the program and the activities we will engage in so that I can plan accordingly and get it ready ahead of time
【点睛】【高分句型 1】With keen interest in the upcoming Technology Winter Camp, I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with relevant information. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】May I bother to inquire about the specific schedule of the program and the activities we will engage in (运用了省略关系词的定语从句）
考向2 给博物馆馆长写信询问博物馆展览的相关信息
(24-25高三上·广东惠州·阶段练习) 假设你是光明中学高三1班班长李华，准备组织班级同学去博物馆参观历史展览 (historical exhibition)。请向博物馆馆长写一封咨询信，询问如下信息：
1. 展览相关内容 （规模、主题、展出物品等）；
2. 展览起止时间；
3. 是否有团体折扣。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Director,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Director,
I am Li Hua, the class monitor of Grade 3, Class 1, at Guangming High School. Our class is planning to organize a visit to your museum for a historical exhibition, and I would like to inquire about some details regarding the event.
Could you please provide information on the exhibition’s size, theme, and the objects that will be displayed Additionally, we would like to know the starting and ending dates of the exhibition. Lastly, we are also interested in knowing if your museum offers any discounts for student groups.
I truly appreciate your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给博物馆馆长写一封咨询信，询问博物馆展览的相关信息。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关于：regarding→about/concerning
展出：display→exhibit
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have (an) interest in
另外：additionally→besides
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, the class monitor of Grade 3, Class 1, at Guangming High School.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is the class monitor of Grade 3, Class 1, at Guangming High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Could you please provide information on the exhibition’s size, theme, and the objects that will be displayed (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Lastly, we are also interested in knowing if your museum offers any discounts for student groups.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
考向3 给英国笔友回信解答对中国的高铁技术的咨询
(24-25高三上·重庆·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国高铁的发展和特点；
2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m delighted to share with you the wonders of China’s high-speed rail (HSR) system. Over the past decade, China’s HSR has developed rapidly, boasting the largest network in the world and continuously breaking speed records. The cradle of China’s HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008. Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.
One of the defining features of China’s HSR is its high operational speed, which can reach up to 350 kilometers per hour, making it one of the fastest in the world. Additionally, the trains are known for their comfort, punctuality, and safety. The development of HSR has revolutionized travel in China, reducing travel times significantly and providing a reliable alternative to air travel for medium to long distances.
In daily life, HSR has brought cities closer together, fostering economic development and cultural exchange. It has become an integral part of people’s lives, facilitating business trips, tourism, and family visits. Moreover, the HSR has had a profound impact on the environment by reducing carbon emissions compared to other modes of transportation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况，用英文给他回一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ happy
显著的：defining→ remarkable
此外：Additionally→ What’s more
提供：providing→ offering
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.
拓展句：Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, which covers a network of over 35,000 kilometers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The cradle of China’s HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In daily life, HSR has brought cities closer together, fostering economic development and cultural exchange.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
考向4 给英语老师写邮件咨询演讲比赛的相关细节
(24-25高二上·山东临沂·期中) 假定你是李华，近期学校计划举行一次演讲比赛，主题为“Hero in my eyes”，你对比赛要求有些疑问，想咨询一下英语老师Tina。请你用英语给老师写一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1. 询问比赛要求、活动时间和地点等;
2. 同时表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tina,
I’m more than happy to write to you. I’m Li Hua, a high school student in our school.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention. I’m looking forward to the contest.
Yours，
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Tina,
I’m more than happy to write to you. I’m Li Hua, a high school student in our school.
I’ve heard about the upcoming speech contest themed “Hero in my eyes” and I’m quite interested in participating. However, I have some questions regarding the contest requirements, such as the length of the speech and whether we need to submit a draft beforehand. Additionally, could you please inform me of the exact time and venue of the contest
Thank you for your attention. I’m looking forward to the contest.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语老师Tina写封电子邮件，向她咨询主题为“Hero in my eyes”的演讲比赛的相关细节，如：比赛要求、活动时间和地点等，同时表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临的：upcoming→forthcoming
然而：however→nevertheless
关于：regarding→concerning
另外：additionally→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ve heard about the upcoming speech contest themed “Hero in my eyes” and I’m quite interested in participating.
拓展句：I’ve heard about the upcoming speech contest which is themed “Hero in my eyes” and I’m quite interested in participating.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve heard about the upcoming speech contest themed “Hero in my eyes” and I’m quite interested in participating. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] However, I have some questions regarding the contest requirements, such as the length of the speech and whether we need to submit a draft beforehand. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
题型三 申请信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2023·天津卷 申请参加交换生项目“中国工坊”活动并谈及自己理解和特长
2019·全国I卷 给当地的美术馆写信申请做即将要举办的中国画展览志愿者
2018·浙江卷 给学校英语协会写信申请担任志愿者接待来访的国外中学生
二、高考考向
申请信有求职申请、加入某组织或参加某活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以对个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能地向对方说明自己的长处，以便留下好印象，获得机会。
三、高考真题
1. (2023·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Workshop 中华美食 Chinese cuisine手工艺 handicraft 书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
参加：take part in→participate in
有助于：be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动：promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句：I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
2. (2019·全国I卷) 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.
I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese paintings since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Moreover, I am outgoing and I like talking to others. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese paintings.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给当地的美术馆写一封申请信，对于即将要举办的中国画展览，申请做志愿者。内容包括：写信目的、个人优势以及能做的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
我认为：I think→ as far as I am concerned
此外：besides → what’s more
喜欢：like→ prefer
提供：offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Moreover, I am outgoing and I like talking to others.
拓展句：Moreover, I am outgoing and I like talking to others, which are greatly necessary for the job.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. (运用了if引导的状语从句)
3. (2018·浙江卷)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1. 口语能力；
2. 相关经验；
3. 应聘目的。
注意：
词数80左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. Hearing that some volunteers of our school English association are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
I do believe that I am qualified for this voluntary work.The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good command of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people, so I can easily get along with foreign students.
I am particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English and interpersonal communication skills. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
高考英语申请信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段自我介绍，再开门见山指出写信意图—申请。次段结合题干要求点明自己申请优势（语言、经验、经历方面）。尾段表达盼望被接纳和早日回复。
二、真情表达申请
申请信要明确被申请对象和目的, 从而确定申请信的侧重点。语气应客气委婉，表示尊重和支持。同时，客观真实突出自己申请优势。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、申请信首段金句：介绍自己，说明信息来源，并提出申请。
1. Learning with delight that you are hunting for a guide, I'd be more than pleased to apply for this position.
愉快得知你在找导游，我很高兴能申请这个职位。
2. I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English.
我是高二一班的李华。我写信是为了申请帮助辰溪希望学校的学生学习英语的机会。
得知贵公司正在招聘导游，我将非常乐意申请这个职位。
3. I'm Li Hua, an oversea student from China. Having learned that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in this city, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
我是李华，来自中国的留学生。得知这个城市将举办中国画展，我写信申请成为一名志愿者。
4. With reference to your message on the Internet, I wish to apply for serving as your guide during your stay in Tianjin.
看到您在网上的留言，我想申请担任您在天津逗留期间的导游。
5. Learning from the newspaper that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery, I'm writing to apply for the position.
从报纸上得知，当地美术馆正在举办中国画展，需要志愿者学生，我写信申请这个职位。
二、申请信次段金句：突出自己优势，具体说明胜任理由。
1. I have such a good command of English that l am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
我的英语很好，被选为英语老师的助手。
2. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age I can communicate with foreigners smoothly in English.
首先，我从小就接触过外教，可以用英语顺利地与外国人交流。
3. I have worked as a volunteer before, which has equipped me with the capability to deal with various situations.
我以前做过志愿者，这使我具备了处理各种情况的能力。
4. The experience of being a host family before provides us with great confidence in making the foreign friends feel at home.
以前作为寄宿家庭的经历让我们有信心让外国朋友宾至如归。
5. First of all, as a Chinese, I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, I can get the visitors to know about them. With all these advantages, I hold the firm belief that I will be very qualified to be a volunteer.
首先，作为一名中国人，我英语很好，这让我很容易与外国客人自由交流。此外，我对中国画有很好的了解，可以让游客了解它们。有了这些优势，我坚信我将非常有资格成为一名志愿者。
三、申请信尾段金句：请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。
1. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
2. Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be more than grateful.
如果你能给我一次面试机会，我将不胜感激。
3. I would very much appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further in a personal interview.
如果有机会在个人面试中进一步讨论我的资历，我将非常感激。
4. The reason why I intend to apply is that I want to strengthen my communication skills more physically and mentally.
我之所以想申请是因为我想在身体上和精神上加强我的沟通能力。
5. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer, which will guarantee the exhibition a success.
总的来说，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者，这将保证展览的成功。
考向1申请成为用英语讲中国故事的志愿者
(24-25高二上·福建福州·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，你从网上看到某国际少年夏令营招募会用英语讲中国故事的志愿者。请你给负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．写邮件的目的；
2．个人优势；
3．表达感谢并期待回复。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply as a volunteer for your summer camp.
As a Chinese, I have a deep passion for Chinese culture and a profound understanding of Chinese stories and traditions. I have many years of experience studying English, which enables me to fluently tell Chinese stories in English and effectively communicate with international students. I am confident that I can help them better comprehend the culture and history of China.
Thank you for considering my application. I eagerly await your response and would be happy to provide any further information if needed.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于申请信。要求考生以李华的身份，给某国际少年夏令营的负责人写一封邮件，申请成为会用英语讲中国故事的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激情：passion → enthusiasm
考虑：consider → think about
回复：response → reply
提供：provide → offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a Chinese, I have a deep passion for Chinese culture and a profound understanding of Chinese stories and traditions.
拓展句：As a Chinese, I have a deep passion for Chinese culture and a profound understanding of Chinese stories and traditions, which has been cultivated through years of studying and experiencing them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have many years of experience studying English, which enables me to fluently tell Chinese stories in English and effectively communicate with international students.(运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am confident that I can help them better comprehend the culture and history of China. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句)
考向2 申请担任英文诗歌比赛主持人
(24-25高二上·陕西咸阳·期中) 假定你是李华，你校英语角要为下个月的英文诗歌比赛招聘一位主持人。你对此非常感兴趣，请你给该招聘的负责人Mr. Charles写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.申请意愿；
2.个人优势；
3.希望得到批准。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mr. Charles,
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest scheduled for next month.
In terms of my personal advantages, I have excellent communication skills and a fluent command of English, which will help me engage the audience with warmth, clarity and enthusiasm. My previous experiences as a host at various school events will enable me to handle all kinds of situations, ensuring a smooth and engaging process throughout the competition.
I sincerely hope that my application will be favorably considered, and I eagerly wait for your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语角招聘的负责人Mr. Charles写一封申请信，应聘下个月的英文诗歌比赛的主持人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
申请：apply for → put in for
根据：in terms of → on the basis of
处理：handle → deal with
希望：hope → wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest scheduled for next month.
拓展句：I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest which is scheduled for next month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In terms of my personal advantages, I have excellent communication skills and a fluent command of English, which will help me engage the audience with warmth, clarity and enthusiasm.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that my application will be favorably considered, and I eagerly wait for your reply. （运用了that连接的宾语从句）
考向3 申请参加学校组织的为期三天的研学活动
(2025届上海市浦东新区高三上学期一模考试) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校” “走进大学” “深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括：
1. 你选择的主题；
2. 你希望学到的内容；
3. 你学这些内容的理由。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour organized by our school. I am particularly interested in this theme because I hope to gain a better understanding of campus culture, advanced teaching methods, and university learning environments. Visiting universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience, allowing me to reflect on my future academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education.
The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my preparation for college life. By exploring universities, I can develop clearer academic aspirations, improve my self-discipline, and plan my studies more effectively. Also, being exposed to a university setting will motivate me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your approval.
Your truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，报名参加一个学校组织的为期三天的研学活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热情：passion→enthusiasm
至关重要的：crucial→vital
志向：aspiration→ambition
实现：achieve→realize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour organized by our school.
拓展句：I am writing to apply for the “Visit Universities” program of the three-day study tour which is organized by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Visiting universities will provide me with valuable firsthand experience, allowing me to reflect on my future academic goals and inspire my passion for higher education. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】The reason why I want to learn these aspects is that they are crucial for my preparation for college life. (运用了why引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
重难点专题03建议信+咨询信+申请信（讲义）原卷版
目录
01考情透视·目标导航 2
02知识导图·思维引航 3
03核心精讲·题型突破 4
题型一 建议信 4
【真题研析】 4
【核心精讲】 7
【命题预测】 9
题型二 咨询信 11
【真题研析】 11
【核心精讲】 13
【命题预测】 14
题型三 申请信 17
【真题研析】 17
【核心精讲】 19
【命题预测】 20
重难点突破 “建议你业余多参加体育锻炼”多样化表达 22
考点要求 目标要求 考题统计 考情分析
建议信 能够使用适当的语言和表达方式来写告知信。 2024·北京卷，给外国好友建议投稿内容，打算重点介绍中国的发展成就； 2023·北京卷，邮件给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议； 2023·新课标卷，给外教写邮件告诉他将学生随机分组存在问题并给出建议； 2019·天津卷，给英国教师写信就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出建议； 2017·北京卷，给英国朋友回信建议来中国旅游的路线、理由并表达祝愿。 一、内容紧贴生活，贴近学生； 二、命题形式上更加开放，以提纲式为主； 三、最近五年频繁考查，应重点关注。
咨询信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写道歉信。 2021·全国甲卷，给外国朋友写封信咨询哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友 2020·浙江卷，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和祝愿 2014·全国I卷，暑期去英国学习给培训学校写信询问为期六周广告的内容 一、每隔几年会考查一次，注意训练全面性； 二、注意咨询别人语气要客气委婉真诚。
申请信 能够使用适当语言和表达方式写慰问信。 2023·天津卷，申请参加交换生项目“中国工坊”活动并谈及自己理解和特长； 2019·全国I卷，给当地的美术馆写信申请做即将要举办的中国画展览志愿者 2018·浙江卷，给学校英语协会写信申请担任志愿者接待来访的国外中学生 一、高考和模拟试题热门题型； 二、注意三段式结构，体现真情实感。
一句 多译 多元选择提升单句表达效果。 “建议你业余多参加体育锻炼” 一句多译 从简单到复杂，从基础到高级，举一反三。
题型一 建议信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2024·北京卷 给外国好友建议投稿内容，打算重点介绍中国的发展成就
2023·北京卷 邮件给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议
2023·新课标卷 给外教写邮件告诉他将学生随机分组存在问题并给出建议
2019·天津卷 给英国教师写信就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出建议
2017·北京卷 给英国朋友回信建议来中国旅游的路线、理由并表达祝愿
二、高考考向
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信，因此观点要合情合理，注意礼貌客气委婉。
三、高考真题
1. (2024·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2. (2023·北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
3. (2023·新课标I卷) 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4. (2019·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
5. (2017·北京卷) 你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语建议信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍，再开门见山表达“理解并建议”这一写作意图。建议的内容比较广泛：如学习技能，旅游行程，课程安排等。次段清楚地表达活动具体的时间、地点和活动安排等，让对方明白或知晓。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，表达希望再次联系或提供进一步帮助的愿望。
二、表达热情真诚
建议信的语言应该热情、友好、真诚，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。同时，提供建议应当注意条理性，用好“一二三”原则。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式来表达建议：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。常见高频建议句式：
1. You’d better do sth…
2. I suggest that…
3. It is advised that…
4. It is advisable that…
5. It is a good idea to do…
6. Why not do…
7. If I were you, I would….
8. Ny suggestion is that….
一、建议信首段金句：①自我介绍②写信意图—提出建议
1. Here are my suggestions for your reference, which I hope can be of great benefit to you.
以下是我的建议供您参考，希望对您大有裨益。
2. I'm Li Hua, a student in our school. I'm writing to give you some constructive tips on how to create a green school.
我叫李华，是我们学校的一名学生。我写信给你一些关于如何创建绿色学校的建设性建议。
3. I'm Li Hua from Class 1. I am writing to express my concerns about your way of grouping us at random for our oral English practice.
我是一班的李华。我写信是想表达我对你随机分组进行英语口语练习的方式的担忧。
4. Having learned that you are having trouble fitting in with your new class as an exchange student, here I’m writing to offer some practical advice.
得知你作为交换生很难适应新班级，我写信给你提供一些实用的建议。
5. Of the two routes given by your school, I strongly recommend the trip to the Yangtze River. The reasons are as follows.
在贵校提供的两条路线中，我强烈推荐去长江旅行。原因如下。
二、建议信中段金句：①分条建议+②注意“建议”句式多样化
1. I strongly suggest that you (should) join a volunteer club so that you can improve your ability.
我强烈建议你加入志愿者俱乐部，这样你才能提高自己的能力。
2. You'd better take exercise regularly so that you can build up your body.
你最好经常锻炼，这样你才能强身健体。
3. Of course, it's a good idea to share standard pronunciation of each word and give plenty of examples.
当然，分享每个单词的标准发音并给出大量例子是个好主意。
4. What's more, if I were you, I would correct my pronunciation by listening to Chinese radio programs.
更重要的是，如果我是你，我会通过听中文广播节目来纠正我的发音。
5. Firstly, it's a good idea to arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection. Secondly, we may as well to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Last but not least, we must have good habits to keep every corner tidy in our school.
首先，安排一系列与环境保护有关的讲座是个好主意。其次，我们不妨高度重视节水、节纸、节电和植树造林，并付诸实践。最后但同样重要的是，我们必须养成良好的习惯，保持学校每个角落的整洁。
三、建议信尾段金句：①希望建议有所帮助+②期待佳音
1. I sincerely hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
我真诚地希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
2. I would be more than delighted if my proposal could meet with your consideration.
如果我的建议能得到您的考虑，我将非常高兴。
3. I believe you will take my advice seriously. I'm looking forward to getting your good news soon.
我相信你会认真对待我的建议。我期待着很快收到你的好消息。
4. I hope these suggestions will be of benfit to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
5. Hoepfully, my advice will be helpful for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
考向1 给负责“戏剧工坊”活动的老师写建议信
(24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，为迎接即将来访的新西兰姐妹学校的师生代表，学校将举办“戏剧工坊”(drama workshop) 活动。现向全校学生征集活动的建议，请你给负责活动的老师写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议及具体安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
考向2 回复英国笔友Peter邮件就他的海南之行给出建议
(24-25高一上·辽宁朝阳·阶段练习) 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算寒假期间来你的家乡中国海南旅游，发邮件向你征询建议，请你回复邮件，建议内容包括：
1. 预订宾馆；
2. 租用车辆；
3. 导游陪同。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 给好朋友Jim写信就如何处理好同学关系提出具体建议
(24-25高一上·贵州·阶段练习) 假设你是李华，进入高中生活以后，你的好朋友Jim和同学之间遇到了冲突，请你就此情况给他写一封建议信，就如何处理好同学关系提出你的建议。内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可增加细节使行文连贯。
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考向4给校长写一封关于学校图书馆改造的建议信
(24-25高二上·四川眉山·期中) 假如你是李华，你校正准备改造图书馆，现向全校师生征求改造建议。请给李校长写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.丰富藏书种类，提供多种服务；
2.改造硬件设施，提升阅读体验；
3.其他建议。
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：改造 upgrade
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题型二 咨询信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2021·全国甲卷 给外国朋友写封信咨询哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友
2020·浙江卷 向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和祝愿
2014·全国I卷 暑期去英国学习给培训学校写信询问为期六周广告的内容
二、高考考向
咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况，希望了解详细信息的信件，表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。询问/咨询信，问句较多，写时要避免句式单调。咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。
三、高考真题
1. (2021·全国甲卷)假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Peter写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,
Li Hua
2. (2020·浙江卷) 假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1. 询问近况；
2. 分享班级最新消息；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3. (2014·全国I卷) 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词汇：住宿 — accommodation
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高考英语咨询信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人），再开门见山表达“咨询”这一写作意图。次段清楚地表达咨询的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被咨询以及具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。
二、表达真诚友好
咨询信的语言应该真诚、客套，友好，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。
三、学会提问好处多
咨询信的内容意味着需要询问个人或机构一些困惑或疑问。咨询信常见句式：一般疑问句式；特殊疑问句式或者主从复合句式。高频句式有：
1. I’d like to know if….
2. I am wondering if…
3. It is unclear to me whether…
4. Therefore I have some puzzles that need to be clarified.
5. Here are some questions that I hope you can help make clear.
一、咨询信首段金句：介绍自己，表明写作意图—咨询。
1. I’m writing to seek for more specific information about the service at your inn.
我写信是想了解贵酒店服务的更多具体信息。
2. I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with further information concerning the activity.
我写信是想知道您是否可以向我提供有关活动的更多信息。
3. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to seek for more detailed information with regard to the day tour to London.
我是李华，来自中国的交换生。我写信是想了解更多关于伦敦一日游的详细信息。
4. I'm writing to see if it is convenient for you to provide me with some specific information concerning your six-week English course.
我写信是想知道你是否方便向我提供一些关于你为期六周的英语课程的具体信息。
5. I'm writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. Here are a few things that I’d like to clarify.
我写信是想了解如何成为亚洲冬季运动会的志愿者。以下是我想澄清的几件事。
二、咨询信次段金句：详述咨询的内容及具体原因。
1. I wonder whether there is any extra charge for accommodation.
我想知道住宿是否需要额外收费。
2. What about booking tickets in groups Can we have a reduced price
团体订票怎么样？我们能享受折价吗？
3. It is unclear to me whether there is a reduced membership fee for students.
我不清楚是否降低了学生的会费。
4. As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed.
至于你收取的费用，我想知道它是否包括参观所列地点的入场费。
5. I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
我想知道这门课程我要付多少钱，住宿是否包括在内。
三、咨询信尾段金句：再次照应主题，盼望尽早回复。
1. Your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢您及时关注这封信。
2. Any words fail to convey how grateful I’m to you for your concern.
任何言语都无法表达我对你的关心的感激之情。
3. Thank you for your kindness and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意，如能及时收到此信，我们将不胜感激。
4. If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有什么需要特别注意的，请在方便的时候通知我。
5. Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects
您能否寄给我一些有关上述方面的小册子？
考向1 给英国朋友Peter写信咨询冬令营的相关事宜
(24-25高三上·宁夏银川·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter邀请你参加他们学校寒假组织的“科技冬令营”。你想参加，现在就此事写一封信向他咨询冬令营的相关事宜，要点包括：
1.具体日程安排及活动内容；
2.住宿和费用等
注意：
1. 要求内容顺畅，连贯；
2. 词数80词左右
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
考向2 给博物馆馆长写信询问博物馆展览的相关信息
(24-25高三上·广东惠州·阶段练习) 假设你是光明中学高三1班班长李华，准备组织班级同学去博物馆参观历史展览 (historical exhibition)。请向博物馆馆长写一封咨询信，询问如下信息：
1. 展览相关内容 （规模、主题、展出物品等）；
2. 展览起止时间；
3. 是否有团体折扣。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Director,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向3 给英国笔友回信解答对中国的高铁技术的咨询
(24-25高三上·重庆·期中)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国高铁的发展和特点；
2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
考向4 给英语老师写邮件咨询演讲比赛的相关细节
(24-25高二上·山东临沂·期中) 假定你是李华，近期学校计划举行一次演讲比赛，主题为“Hero in my eyes”，你对比赛要求有些疑问，想咨询一下英语老师Tina。请你用英语给老师写一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1. 询问比赛要求、活动时间和地点等
2. 同时表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tina,
I’m more than happy to write to you. I’m Li Hua, a high school student in our school.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention. I’m looking forward to the contest.
Yours，
Li Hua
题型三 申请信
一、高考考情
目录 内容提要
2023·天津卷 申请参加交换生项目“中国工坊”活动并谈及自己理解和特长
2019·全国I卷 给当地的美术馆写信申请做即将要举办的中国画展览志愿者
2018·浙江卷 给学校英语协会写信申请担任志愿者接待来访的国外中学生
二、高考考向
申请信有求职申请、加入某组织或参加某活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以对个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能地向对方说明自己的长处，以便留下好印象，获得机会。
三、高考真题
1. (2023·天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Workshop 中华美食 Chinese cuisine手工艺 handicraft 书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
2. (2019·全国I卷) 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. (2018·浙江卷)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1. 口语能力；
2. 相关经验；
3. 应聘目的。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
高考英语申请信满分技巧
一、用三段式结构
首段自我介绍，再开门见山指出写信意图—申请。次段结合题干要求点明自己申请优势（语言、经验、经历方面）。尾段表达盼望被接纳和早日回复。
二、真情表达申请
申请信要明确被申请对象和目的, 从而确定申请信的侧重点。语气应客气委婉，表示尊重和支持。同时，客观真实突出自己申请优势。
三、提升表达效果
使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、申请信首段金句：介绍自己，说明信息来源，并提出申请。
1. Learning with delight that you are hunting for a guide, I'd be more than pleased to apply for this position.
愉快得知你在找导游，我很高兴能申请这个职位。
2. I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English.
我是高二一班的李华。我写信是为了申请帮助辰溪希望学校的学生学习英语的机会。
得知贵公司正在招聘导游，我将非常乐意申请这个职位。
3. I'm Li Hua , an oversea student from China. Having learned that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in this city, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
我是李华，来自中国的留学生。得知这个城市将举办中国画展，我写信申请成为一名志愿者。
4. With reference to your message on the Internet, I wish to apply for serving as your guide during your stay in Tianjin.
看到您在网上的留言，我想申请担任您在天津逗留期间的导游。
5. Learning from the newspaper that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery, I'm writing to apply for the position.
从报纸上得知，当地美术馆正在举办中国画展，需要志愿者学生，我写信申请这个职位。
二、申请信次段金句：突出自己优势，具体说明胜任理由。
1. I have such a good command of English that l am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
我的英语很好，被选为英语老师的助手。
2. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age I can communicate with foreigners smoothly in English.
首先，我从小就接触过外教，可以用英语顺利地与外国人交流。
3. I have worked as a volunteer before, which has equipped me with the capability to deal with various situations.
我以前做过志愿者，这使我具备了处理各种情况的能力。
4. The experience of being a host family before provides us with great confidence in making the foreign friends feel at home.
以前作为寄宿家庭的经历让我们有信心让外国朋友宾至如归。
5. First of all, as a Chinese, I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, I can get the visitors to know about them. With all these advantages, I hold the firm belief that I will be very qualified to be a volunteer.
首先，作为一名中国人，我英语很好，这让我很容易与外国客人自由交流。此外，我对中国画有很好的了解，可以让游客了解它们。有了这些优势，我坚信我将非常有资格成为一名志愿者。
三、申请信尾段金句：请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。
1. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
2. Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be more than grateful.
如果你能给我一次面试机会，我将不胜感激。
3. I would very much appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further in a personal interview.
如果有机会在个人面试中进一步讨论我的资历，我将非常感激。
4. The reason why I intend to apply is that I want to strengthen my communication skills more physically and mentally.
我之所以想申请是因为我想在身体上和精神上加强我的沟通能力。
5. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer, which will guarantee the exhibition a success.
总的来说，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者，这将保证展览的成功。
考向1申请成为用英语讲中国故事的志愿者
(24-25高二上·福建福州·阶段练习) 假定你是李华，你从网上看到某国际少年夏令营招募会用英语讲中国故事的志愿者。请你给负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．写邮件的目的；
2．个人优势；
3．表达感谢并期待回复。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
考向2 申请担任英文诗歌比赛主持人
(24-25高二上·陕西咸阳·期中) 假定你是李华，你校英语角要为下个月的英文诗歌比赛招聘一位主持人。你对此非常感兴趣，请你给该招聘的负责人Mr. Charles写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.申请意愿；
2.个人优势；
3.希望得到批准。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 申请参加学校组织的为期三天的研学活动
(2025届上海市浦东新区高三上学期一模考试) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
明启中学将组织学生开展为期三天的研学活动，现有三个主题，分别为：“访问友校” “走进大学” “深入企业”。假如你是该校学生李华，请写一封申请信给负责人，报名参加其中一项活动，内容须包括：
1. 你选择的主题；
2. 你希望学到的内容；
3. 你学这些内容的理由。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
重难点突破 “建议你业余多参加体育锻炼”一句多译
1. I suggest/advise/recommend/propose that….
I suggest that you should take part in more physical activities in your free time.
2. It is suggested/advised/recommended/proposed that….
It is advised that you should join in more physical activities in your spare time.
3. It is advisable that….
It is advisable that you should be involved in more physical activities when you are available.
4. It would be better if you…
It would be better if you could join in more physical activities whenever you are free.
5. If I were you, I would…
If I were you, I would join them in more physical activities whenever convenient.
6. It’s a good idea to do…
It is definitely a good idea to have a role in more physical activities whenever possible.
7. You’d better do/not do…
You’d better take an active part in more physical activities whenever available.
8. Why not do…
Why not participate in more physical activities when it is convenient to you
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