2025年高考英语二轮复习(新高考通用)专题06读后续写校园生活类话题(测试)(学生版+解析)

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专题06 读后续写校园生活类话题(测试)原卷版
目 录
【校园生活情节构建】 P1
【校园生活语料精编】七类 P2
一、神态描写类
二、心理描写类
三、环境描写类
四、主题升华类(师生情谊)
五、主题升华类(同学互助)
六、主题升华类(克服困难)
七、主题升华类(校园记忆)
【校园生活话题精彩片段】四段 P5
【片段01】《从冷眼到援手:我因偏见而羞愧的转变》
【片段02】《破茧成蝶:曾经被数学 “绊倒” 的我,如今获此殊荣》
【片段03】《因师之鼓励,绘就英语学习的多彩画卷》
【片段04】《从隔阂到默契:舞台上绽放的友谊重生之光》
【校园生活话题好题调研】 P7
【调研01】《环保小先锋:从创意构思到全校推广的回收箱传奇》
【调研02】《校园寒风中的转机:陌生人的善意打破孤独坚冰》
【调研03】《冲线瞬间:旧友归来,化力量为荣耀,友谊重燃》
【调研04】《友谊的波折与升华:从矛盾冷战到携手共进》
【调研05】《从质疑天赋到笔耕不辍:与名家对话开启写作之路》
【调研06】《从活动挑战到友谊升华:新自行车见证的成长旅程》
【调研07】《废墟中寻回的友谊:地震逃生后折返救同窗》
【调研08】《破茧课堂:当冷眼化作春风,我与"边缘少年"的双向救赎》
【调研09】《从一个黑点到无限可能:老师的意外启示》
【调研10】《从 “问题学生” 到西语竞赛冠军:破茧成蝶的逆袭之路》
【调研11】《从 “社恐” 到 “社交达人”:迈出第一步,拥抱新友谊》
【调研12】《从食堂困境到成长蜕变:师恩助力破茧成蝶 》
【校园生活情节构建】
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 友情、表演、比赛等出现危机 负面情绪塑造
第二阶段 友情、误会弥补(解释、认错、弥补) 努力+反思+蜕变
第三阶段 友情、关系升华(换位思考、懂得珍惜) 感悟+感激+升华
【校园生活语料分类精编】
一、神态描写类
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1.学生们脸上洋溢着兴奋和期待。
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2. 她咬着嘴唇,专心致志地备考。
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3. 当他看到自己名字在获胜者名单上时,眼睛睁得大大的,充满了惊喜。
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4.她脸红得厉害,对意外的赞美感到尴尬。
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5.他轻轻地笑了,被朋友的笑话逗乐了。
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6.她眉头紧锁,全神贯注地解决复杂的数学问题。
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7.他屏住呼吸,等待比赛的结果。
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8.她打开朋友送的礼物时,眼中闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
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9.他显得很紧张,在等待面试结果时,不断在脚之间转移重量。
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10.她微笑着,温暖地向走进教室的朋友们打招呼。
二、心理描写类
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1.学生们充满了对新经历的热切期待。
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2.他们心中的蝴蝶因激动而翩翩起舞。
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3.他们不禁感到一种怀旧与激动交织的情感。
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4.想到能见到老朋友,他们脸上露出了微笑。
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5.学生们眼中闪烁着好奇和渴望。
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6.他们对成功和成长的期待充满了脑海。
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7.他们迫不及待地想探索校园所提供的新可能性。
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8.学生们感到一种属于和连接校园的感觉。
三、环境描写类
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1.校园里充满了秋天的鲜艳色彩,树叶在脚下沙沙作响,秋天的凉爽微风不燥。
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2.新鲜割草的香味弥漫在空气中,预示着新的一天开始了。
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3.钟楼的钟声响起,回荡在整个校园,标志着学校的开始。
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4.笑声和谈话声充满了方形广场,学生们聚在一起聊天,增进感情。
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5.图书馆里充满了成千上万本书籍、知识和研究的声音。
四、主题升华类(师生情谊)
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1. 教师的一句鼓励让我重新找回了对学习的信心。
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2. 每次班会后,老师的总结总能给我们新的启发和力量。
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3. 那节课生动有趣,老师的幽默讲解让我印象深刻。
五、主题升华类(同学互助)
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1. 那次考试失利后,同桌用一张小纸条鼓励了我,令我十分感动。
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2. 当我遇到困难时,热心的同学总是伸出援手,给予我帮助。
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3. 我和朋友一起完成了一项实验,我们的默契合作让我感到自豪。
六、主题升华类(克服困难)
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1. 在与老师的一次交流中,我找到了应对学习压力的新方法。
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2. 在运动会的接力赛中,我们团结一心,取得了第一名。
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3.学生们正面迎接学术挑战,结果学会了坚持并在过程中变得更强大。
七、主题升华类(校园记忆)
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1. 校园时光充满了欢笑和成长,是我人生中最珍贵的记忆。
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2. 虽然学习压力很大,但同学们的陪伴让我感到轻松许多。
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3. 校园生活中,那些看似平凡的小事成就了我最难忘的记忆。
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4. 每当放学后,我们总会在操场上欢声笑语,享受简单的快乐。
【读后续写校园生活话题优秀片段欣赏】
【片段01】《从冷眼到援手:我因偏见而羞愧的转变》
I stood there, not knowing what to do next. Suddenly, I felt so embarrassed and frustrated. I had expected a warm welcome and friendly interaction, but instead, I was met with coldness and indifference. My heart sank(无灵主语), and I felt a sense of isolation and confusion. Just as I was at a complete loss, desperately trying to figure out my next move, I heard a familiar voice. It was Shirley. She came up to me with a gentle smile and kind eyes, saying, “I saw what happened. Let me help you with the student card.” (简洁对话)
What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed. I had judged her based on her appearance and ignored her kindness earlier(动作链). Now, she was the one who came to my rescue without any hesitation or complaint. I realized how shallow and wrong I had been. My face flushed with embarrassment(无灵主语) as I reflected on my behavior. From that moment on(介词短语), I decided to change my attitude and not judge people by their appearance. I thanked Shirley sincerely from the bottom of my heart and promised to be a better person. (动作链)
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者刚进入高中,在高中新环境中因选择结交朋友而经历的教训,展现了作者对于人际关系和判断他人的态度转变过程。
【片段02】《破茧成蝶:曾经被数学 “绊倒” 的我,如今获此殊荣》
Several months later, everyone could see the significant progress I had made, not just in my grades, but in my entire approach to learning mathematics. I was actively participating in class, solving complex equations(分词作状语) that I had seen unable to understand before. The fear that had clouded my perception of math was replaced (无灵主语)by a genuine excitement for every new topic we covered. I even began to stay after our regular sessions to discuss advanced problems with Mrs Johnson, seeking out challenges that would have been too much for me to handle before.
At the end of the school year, during the last meeting of the math club, Mrs Johnson made a special announcement. As she called me to the front of the room, she handed me a certificate for “Most Outstanding Contribution”. The room erupted in applause(无灵主语). She praised me for sticking with my dream and for changing into not only a great math student but also someone who encourages others. Her acknowledgment confirmed my newfound passion and dedication to a subject (无灵主语) that once seemed unconquerable, underscoring an incredible year of academic and personal growth(分词作状语).
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,本文主要讲述了作者在高中时期,原本对数学感到困难重重,但在数学老师Johnson夫人的鼓励和建议下,加入了学校的数学俱乐部。通过参与俱乐部的活动和与其他数学爱好者的交流,作者逐渐克服了对数学的恐惧,对数学产生了兴趣,数学成绩也有了显著提升。最终,在学年结束时,作者因在数学俱乐部的突出贡献而获得表彰。
【片段03】《因师之鼓励,绘就英语学习的多彩画卷》
Encouraged by his words, I began to change my attitude towards English learning. I started to focus more attentively on English classes, following Mr. Frank’s instructions with great care(分词作状语). I discovered the charm of how individual letters could form meaningful words. Although the progress was slow, that slight improvement still brought me some hope(无灵主语). Mr. Frank was always ready to offer me guidance whenever necessary. Gradually(分词位于句首), I developed a deep admiration for English. I became more active in speaking up and communicating with my classmates. This new-found enthusiasm made me more outgoing and open-minded(无灵主语), and I even made some new friends.
“Why don’t you draw a poster for the English drama show ” Mr. Frank said to me. Excited and nervous(形容词作状语), I accepted. It was a good chance to contribute with my artistic skills. Over the next few days, I drew colorful posters combining text and pictures. The process helped me remember vocabulary and grammar points better. To my delight(介词短语前置), Mr. Frank praised my work and selected one poster for the show. Seeing my artwork displayed in the school gave me a strong sense of belonging(动名词作主语). Thanks to Mr. Frank’s encouragement and trust(介词短语前置), I discovered the beauty of English and found the confidence to express myself.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,短文叙述了作者天生个子矮小,经常不自信。高二那年,作者和家人搬到了另外一个城市。在新的学校里,作者没有朋友,英语学习跟不上,甚至被同学嘲笑个子小,只能通过画画来打发时间。MrFrank 发现了上课注意力不集中的作者,给予鼓励。
【片段04】《从隔阂到默契:舞台上绽放的友谊重生之光》
Seeing the girls were still awkward with each other, Freya realized that she could do something. She suggested they prepare a short performance for the campfire night on the last day of the trip. The girls exchanged uncertain looks(超短句). But they agreed when they saw the glimmer of hope in Freya’ s eyes, realizing that this might be the chance they had been waiting for to rebuild the bridge they had lost. Over the next few days, they worked together, choosing a piece that held deep meaning for both of them. As they practiced, old memories resurfaced(无灵主语), and they began to open their hearts, laughing and supporting each other just as they used to(分词作状语).
On the last day of the trip, Judith and Melanie took the stage for a shared performance. Melanie, though still nervous(省略句), drew strength from Judith’ s unwavering support and the lessons learned from Freya. The lines flowed naturally and their movements were in perfect harmony, as if they were dancing to the rhythm of their shared dream. Together, they delivered a heartfelt and moving performance, receiving thunderous applause(分词作状语). They not only overcame their individual fears and setbacks, but also rediscovered the power of their bond. From that day forward(介词短语前置), they stood side by side, supporting and encouraging each other, not just onstage but in every aspect of their lives.
【导语】本文以友谊为线索,讲述了Judith和Melanie在高中戏剧比赛中因Melanie失误而遭遇失败,两人友谊出现裂痕。在学校的团建旅行中,在导师Freya的帮助下,两人开始面对并尝试修复关系。
【校园生活话题名校好题调研】
[调研01](24-25高三下·云南昆明·阶段练习)《环保小先锋:从创意构思到全校推广的回收箱传奇》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Our class recycling project will start next week. You can choose to do it alone or in pairs,” Mr. Lee, the science teacher, announced. “Your goal is to design a recycling corner that will increase recycling rates in our classroom. The best idea will be adopted in the school.” The classroom erupted into enthusiastic chatter as students paired up and began their discussions.
Being a nature and animal lover, Lucy’s dream was big. She imagined birds and fish thriving (茁壮成长) in a plastic-free environment, inspired by her hours spent observing wildlife at her favorite lake. “The first step towards a plastic-free habitat is fostering a recycling habit,” she thought. “I’m sure I can come up with a brilliant idea for the project!” Her daydreaming was interrupted by a light tap from her best friend, Max.
“Do you still have that book on recycling I’m sure there are many helpful tips that we could use for this project. Shall we work on this together ” Max inquired expectantly.
Lucy recalled having read the library book the previous night and placing it on her bedside table. “Um...” she hesitated, “I returned it this morning... and I’m thinking of working on this project alone.”
“Oh, I see,” Max walked away, disappointed.
The next day, Lucy started working on her project, a smart dustbin. Yes, she had a unique concept for the recycling bin but she struggled to construct it. The design required a standard of workmanship that was simply beyond her capability. Frustrated, she went for a walk downstairs.
“Lucy ” she heard a familiar voice and looked up, surprised to find Max standing there. He had never witnessed her looking so disheartened before; she was walking heavily along with a discouraged expression, sighing deeply. Concerned, he called out to her. “What happened ” he asked gently. Guilt-ridden, she admitted lying about the book and apologized sincerely. Max forgave her readily.
“Well, if you need a partner, all you have to do is ask!” Max replied, smiling.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She did so, and then excitedly described her design concept of the recycling bin.
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Lucy and Max’s hard work paid off.
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[调研02](24-25高一上·河南开封·期末)《校园寒风中的转机:陌生人的善意打破孤独坚冰》
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段; 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was my first day at a new school in England because my family had moved here from Wales a week before. The moment I stepped through the big iron gates, a feeling of worry came over me. The large campus, with its old buildings covered in ivy and very neatly cut lawns, was really beautiful, but it just made me more nervous. I held my books tightly, and my hands started to sweat as the unfamiliar faces and the strange accents surrounded me like a thick fog that I couldn’t get through. I felt like a lonely traveler in a strange place, really wanting to see something familiar.
Along the way, I accidentally knocked into a boy. “Sorry, ”I said quietly, my eyes quickly looking down at the ground because I was too shy to look at him. “No problem,” he answered with a warm and real smile that cut through my uneasiness like a bright light. In that short talk, a little hope started to shine inside me; maybe this new place wouldn’t be the scary maze (迷宫) I was afraid of.
When I entered the classroom, the teacher introduced me to the class. I could feel everyone looking at me, and my cheeks turned bright red, as if they were on fire. I quickly sat down, and my heart was beating so hard that it seemed like the whole room could hear it. Would I be able to make friends Could I do well in the classes These questions kept bothering me all the time. The bell rang for the first break, and I walked slowly and nervously to the schoolyard, my steps as careful as a baby deer’s first steps in the woods. I looked around, partly hoping to see a friendly face, but also afraid of being refused.
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1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Standing alone in the corner of the schoolyard, I watched the other students chatting and laughing.
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Just as I was about to give up, the boy I bumped into earlier came towards me.
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[调研03](23-24高一下·辽宁沈阳·期末)《冲线瞬间:旧友归来,化力量为荣耀,友谊重燃》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Anmol and Rohan were grade six students. They had been the best friends since childhood. They would sit on the same bench, eat together and play together at school.
One day, a new student named Sumit joined their class. During the break Anmol and Sumit got talking and Anmol gladly found Sumit had a passion for chess. Anmol was crazy about chess but he rarely got a good opponent.
Anmol and Sumit started spending more and more time together. Earlier, Rohan and Anmol used to play table tennis during lunch break. But now Anmol never seemed interested. Gradually Rohan started feeling left out. He felt worried and upset at the thought of losing his best friend, but he was at a loss what to do.
One day, Rohan urged Anmol to join him in a table tennis game.“Not today, Rohan, I have to complete yesterday’s chess game. Sumit has cornered me quite badly but I am not going to give in, ”Anmol said, not noticing the hurt expression on Rohan’s face.
“Sumit, Sumit! Now you have nobody but Sumit in your heart! You have completely forgotten our friendship!” yelled Rohan. Then he turned around and walked straight away.
After that Rohan stopped talking to Anmol and even changed his place in the class. Though he was heartbroken to lose his best friend, he believed that it was Anmol who was to blame. A couple of times Anmol tried talking to Rohan, but Rohan simply looked through him.
About a month later, Rohan participated in the campus cross-country race. It was in its last phase. All that remained was the final lap inside the stadium.Rohan was in third place, with Peter and Iqbal, the former champions, ahead of him.
The stadium was packed, and the students, were all cheering their favorites wildly.“Come on, Iqbal, you are always the best!”.
“Peter, move.You can beat Iqbal!”
“Hold on, Rohan, just another 200 meters to go!” The cries were deafening.
When they reached the last hundred meters, Rohan was almost out of breath.He dragged himself along, with his face red and his mouth dry.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then Rohan heard a familiar voice from his left side.
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As Rohan was the first to cross the finishing line, he collapsed on the ground.
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[调研04](24-25高二上·甘肃临夏·期末)《友谊的波折与升华:从矛盾冷战到携手共进》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the lively campus of Greenfield Middle School, a unique friendship took root between two contrasting individuals, Lily and Kate.
Lily, a shy and diligent girl, was often found in the library’s quiet corners, her nose buried deep in textbooks. Kate, on the other hand, was a student of energy, the class’s joker, whose laughter resounded through the hallways. During a school sports event, the sun beat down mercilessly on the field. Lily, who had signed up for the long jump, stood frozen at the starting line. Her face paled as she stared at the sea of students watching. Her legs trembled, seemingly rooted to the ground.
Kate noticed Lily’s unease and came up to her, her steps light and quick. “Hey, Lily,” Kate said, giving Lily a hearty thumbs-up. “Don’t let this get to you. It’s just a leap (跳跃). You’ve got this!” Lily glanced at Kate, her eyes filled with doubt, but Kate’s words managed to motive her courage. Kate then launched into a detailed account of her own silly experiences, her hands gesturing vividly. “Remember that race when I fell over face-first It was a total disaster, but I just laughed it off. You can do the same.”
With Kate’s continuous stream of encouragement, Lily finally found the strength to take her jump. She flew through the air, not far but with a newfound sense of achievement shining in her eyes. From that moment, their friendship began.
They started spending more time together. When the school organized a group project on environmental protection, they teamed up. In the library, Lily buried herself into research materials, her head bent down in deep concentration. Kate, meanwhile, in their classroom, brainstormed creative presentation ideas, her eyes sparkling with enthusiasm. Their combined efforts resulted in a presentation that surprised their classmates and earned praise from the teacher.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, like all friendships, they also faced challenges.
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At the end of the school year, they met on the schoolyard.
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[调研05](2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模)《从质疑天赋到笔耕不辍:与名家对话开启写作之路》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was July 1971. I was taking a summer class in Black-American literature on the campus of SUNY. Professor James walked into the classroom and announced that he had invited a special guest to class and he needed a volunteer to meet his guest in the hall of the administration building and ac company him here.
To my amazement, my right hand shot up as though it had a mind of its own. I never volunteered for anything. I was shy and uncomfortable meeting new people. Realizing I was absolutely the wrong person for this job, I pulled my hand down quickly, but it was too late. “Thank you, David,” Professor James said. “You’d better leave now. He’ll be arriving any minute.” I reluctantly got out of my seat and headed for the classroom door. When I reached it, I stopped. I said, “If I don’t know who this person is, how will I recognize him I’d hate to bring back the wrong guy.” Professor James laughed. He pulled me aside and whispered a name in my ear. “Alex Haley,” he said. “Really ” I said. I gave a thumbs-up to the class and left the room.
The hall was empty and Alex Haley was nowhere to be seen. My anxiety grew because I feared that I was about to embarrass myself in front of this famous gentleman by asking stupid questions, or worse, by falling unnaturally silent. As I paced back and forth across the polished floor, I realized why I instinctively (本能地) raised my hand to volunteer for this job. This man was what I wanted to be: a writer. He was living my dream. I could learn from him. But deep in my heart, I was worried about whether I had a gift.
It was then that Mr. Haley with a briefcase entered the building. He was a man in his forties, medium height, wearing a sports jacket over an open-collared dress shirt. After we introduced each other, I accompanied him to the classroom building. Across campus, I was struck by how approachable this man was.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My fear was replaced by curiosity and purpose.
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That was an unexpected answer.
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[调研06](24-25高三上·河南驻马店·阶段练习)《从活动挑战到友谊升华:新自行车见证的成长旅程》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Martin is a high school student who enjoys the friendship with his classmates, but sometimes he wonders what true friendship really is. One day, he expressed his confusion to his mom, who suggested that he organize a team-building activity to explore the real meaning of friendship.
Martin’s mom suggested that he organize an activity at school that would require teamwork and joint support. His mom told him he would get a new bike he always wanted as a prize after understanding the meaning of friendship. Martin thought this was a great idea and decided to talk to his teacher about it. His teacher was very supportive and gave him some valuable advice. With the teacher’s guidance, Martin began planning the event. He chose a weekend and invited his classmates to participate. He carefully designed the activity, preparing various challenges to ensure everyone could get involved. He explained the rules, including how to divide tasks, communicate effectively, and support each other when facing challenges. He emphasized the importance of teamwork and how to build trust and cooperation during the activity.
On the day of the event, Martin and his classmates moved around the campus, searching for hidden markers. They were divided into several groups, each assigned different tasks. Some had to solve puzzles, while others had to complete physical challenges. Some tasks required close cooperation among team members. Martin noticed that some classmates encouraged each other when facing difficulties, while others shared their findings to benefit the whole team. Together, they overcame one obstacle after another, and each success strengthened the team’s cohesion (凝聚力).
Among the challenges, one was impressive. In the challenge, they had to cross a rope bridge over a simulated river. Team members had to support each other to ensure everyone crossed safely. Martin saw classmates who usually didn’t interact much tightly holding each other’s hands, giving courage and support. This scene deeply moved him, making him realize the powerful bond of friendship when facing challenges together.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the activity, Martin shared the day’s events with his mom.
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Martin deeply understood his mom’s words.
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[调研07](24-25高三上·福建福州·期末)《废墟中寻回的友谊:地震逃生后折返救同窗》
阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the serene morning, our school campus lay bathed in a gentle glow of sunlight. The air was still, with only the occasional chatter of students and the rustle of books breaking the silence. The classrooms were abuzz with activity as students diligently worked on their assignments, their faces lit by the soft light filtering through the windows.
But suddenly, the tranquility was shattered by a violent earthquake. The ground began to shake, sending a shudder through the entire school. The seismic waves were so powerful that they sent a shiver down the spines of every student. Amidst the chaos, a girl named Alice, a fellow member of our class, panicked and fled the classroom in a flash. Her flight was a stark contrast to the complacency of the rest of us who remained seated, unmoved by the rumbling beneath our feet. Yet, as we sat unperturbed, students from other classes streamed out of their classrooms in a panic, their faces etched with fear. The corridor outside our classroom soon filled with the hustle and bustle of fleeing students, their footsteps echoing loudly in the otherwise silent morning.
Suddenly, the school’s broadcast system came to life, its voice echoing through the hallways, instructing everyone to evacuate and gather in the designated area. However, it was soon revealed that this was a mistake, a miscue from the broadcast station that had sent our hearts racing even further. With the all-clear signal, we returned to our seats, trying to regain our composure. The teacher, a pillar of calm in the midst of the commotion, resumed the lesson as if nothing had happened, her voice a soothing balm to our frayed nerves.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1: Meanwhile, the ground shook violently once again, this aftershock stronger than the first.
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Para2: Yet, as we began to regain our composure, we realized that Bob had not made it out.
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[调研08](24-25高三上·广东·期末)《破茧课堂:当冷眼化作春风,我与"边缘少年"的双向救赎》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Growing up, the first day of school was always exciting — new clothes, supplies, and classes. But at twenty-three, the first day of school had me in a panic. I was the new teacher.
I had just celebrated my birthday, the new year, and my divorce. Unloved and unneeded, the rejection of a failed marriage still hurt. I had graduated in December, and a school more than sixty miles from my apartment had hired me to teach a class of twenty-two fifth graders.
As the principal Mrs. Bright walked me to my classroom, I asked, “What happened to the last teacher ” She answered, “She left just a week after the school year started. There have been thirteen replacement teachers since then. You are the fourteenth one, Sylvia.”
As I entered the classroom, I said with a sweet smile, “I’m your teacher for the rest of the year.” The kids were excited to meet me, but they quickly became restless. Some sat wherever they wanted, while others talked or passed notes. One girl called Tracy crawled under her desk, and a boy named Kyle began crying for no reason. The rest of the day was chaotic-fights broke out, and some kids refused to talk to me. As the final bell rang, I collapsed into my chair, exhausted.
Later, during my conference period, Mrs. Bright told me, “Tracy can’t read and doesn’t pay attention. Just leave her alone, and make up a grade.” I was shocked. “What about Kyle ” I asked. “He’ll be fine. He is just lonely. His mom is a single mother working around the clock.”
Through our exchange, I came to understand that most of these kids had been kicked out of other schools. No one came to their rescue. They were the ones no one else wanted. These kids, like me, were used to rejection. The pain of my own divorce made me realize how much they deserved better.
注意 :
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I decided to do something for these rejected kids.
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Gradually, the students realized that I cared for them.
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[调研09](24-25高三上·江苏常州·期末)《从一个黑点到无限可能:老师的意外启示》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I feel hopeless about my school life! I’m not a popular student in our class. I can’t play basketball as well as other boys. And I failed Math exam again yesterday, which made me…”, Tom, a 16-year-old boy of Mr. Brown’s class, lowered his head, sobbing (啜泣) uncontrollably in the Teacher’s Office.
“I’m sorry to hear that”, Mr. Brown patted Tom’s shoulder gently and asked the young boy to sit down in front of the desk so that they could sit opposite each other. This was the first time that Tom had turned to Mr. Brown for help because he was so shy and quiet in school. But Mr. Brown had noticed him many times in school’s volunteer work. Looking at the sad young boy, Mr. Brown was silent for a moment. Then, he took a piece of paper and a pen out of his drawer.
“I’d like to invite you to take a surprise test, my boy”, said Mr. Brown, passing the pen to Tom. “A new Math exam ”, Tom raised his eyes which were still filled with tears, got the pen and replied in confusion, worrying about the coming challenge. “Just take it easy because it’s not about numbers or formulas (方程) ”, Mr. Brown comforted him with a big smile. Not knowing what would come in the exam paper, Tom nodded his head and wiped his tears with his sleeves.
Mr. Brown handed Tom the question paper and encouraged him softly, “Now, you can begin and please finish the test within ten minutes.” To Tom’s surprise, there were no questions in the paper, but just a black dot in the center of the page. Mr. Brown thoroughly read through Tom’s puzzled expressions and said, “I want you to write what you see there.” Confused as he was, Tom began to do what he had been asked to do. Meanwhile, Mr. Brown picked up a novel and started reading it, waiting patiently.
Tom scratched (挠) his head anxiously, having no idea what to write.
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“What your writing focused on was just the black dot, but you have a whole white paper,” said Mr. Brown.
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[调研10](24-25高三上·甘肃·阶段练习)《从 “问题学生” 到西语竞赛冠军:破茧成蝶的逆袭之路》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have taught Spanish to thousands of students over my thirty-six years at Walpole High School in Walpole, Massachusetts. My students have ranged from the most academically gifted to the academically at-risk. There is one young man, however, who in the course of his high school career surpassed (超过) expectations of everyone in his life: his parents, his former teachers, his peers and himself. His name is Vincent Lee.
Vincent entered my classroom as a nervous freshman on his first day of high school in September,2005. He was involved in our Spanish IA course, a transition (过渡) course between Spanish I and Spanish Ⅲ for students who under-performed in Spanish Ⅰ. In fact, Vincent had not had a lot of success in Spanish in the middle school. His eighth grade teacher had described him as that “sad, shy boy in the last row who always kept his head down.” Vincent often went to class unprepared and could not see the point of learning another language.
From the very start of my course I sensed an attitude that separated Vincent from his peers. He entered class each day, took his seat quietly and took out what he needed for the lesson. At first he was somewhat shy about answering questions in Spanish, but as the course progressed, I was able to engage him in conversations about his family, his interests and his passions. These included football, baseball and track.
With time Vincent became more willing to volunteer and even ask me questions. He seemed fascinated by the fact that my parents were from Costa Rica and that I was fluent in both English and Spanish. When he once asked how long it takes to become fluent in another language, I explained that it takes many years and that the first sign that a person has adopted the language as his own is when one dreams in that language.
Contrary to what we had seen in middle school, Vincent rarely missed a homework assignment because this meant the terrible “red snake” stamp on his homework calendar. On those rare occasions that this happened, Vincent would become very frustrated with himself and I had to comfort him that he still had a very good chance at getting an A on homework for that month.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Clearly, Vincent was beginning to view himself as a student.
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Vincent went to another teacher’s class after the contest and it was not until just before his graduation that I had an opportunity to chat with him.
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[调研11](24-25高二上·四川·阶段练习)《从 “社恐” 到 “社交达人”:迈出第一步,拥抱新友谊》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
John was a shy child and often found himself alone at school. He used to suffer a lot. He rarely discussed anything in and after class or interacted with his teachers. It seemed that he preferred to stay in his own world. However, his classmates didn’t understand his quietness or interests and often didn’t invite him to take part in activities on purpose. In reality, however, John felt very lonely and was eager to connect with others, but didn’t know how to break down the barriers. He was dying to turn to someone for help.
Sadly, John’s parents were too busy with daily chores (家务) to notice the change in him as he became quieter and more distant. Even when John gathered his courage to share his feelings, he was simply comforted by words like, “Go and get it. We know you can do it.”
However, John was totally confused about how to pull himself out of this current situation. Sometimes, at home, he had no choice but to play his favorite jigsaw (拼图) in silence and avoid interacting with his parents. Gradually, he began to wonder if he was doing something wrong or if he really wasn’t good at making friends. He felt sad and started not to communicate with others.
Luckily, John’s English teacher noticed his trouble and decided to step in to help. The teacher organized a class project after a math test, which seemed quite challenging for most students, but not for John. The teacher required the students to work together in groups to solve the problems and then he would invite someone to present their critical ideas on behalf of (代表) the group. The teacher then intentionally placed John in a group that was likely to give him confidence and encouraged him to show his strengths.
注意:
1. 续写总词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At first, John hesitated, unsure of how to help.
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At the end of the project, John formed new connections with his classmates.
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[调研12](24-25高二上·江苏南通·期末)《从食堂困境到成长蜕变:师恩助力破茧成蝶 》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Clara Temple was in first grade, about six years ago, her daily routine involved carrying a homemade meal, packed with love by her mother, to school in her beloved lunchbox. It filled her with a sense of comfort and belonging. Her teacher, Mrs. Thompson, often admired Clara’s lunchbox and praised her mother’s cooking skills, making Clara feel loved and special But one day, a mix-up occurred. Clara had to get a hot lunch from the cafeteria instead. So, with a mixture of curiosity and anxiety, Clara stood in front of the school cafeteria’s bustling line, ready to order a hot lunch for the first time in her life.
Mrs. Thompson had noticed Clara’s absence from the classroom during lunchtime and, concerned, decided to check on her. She walked down the hallway until she reached the cafeteria. As she entered, she saw the cafeteria buzz with activity as students eagerly lined up, each one tapping their student ID numbers into a keypad quickly. Clara, on the other hand, felt like a fish out of water. Because it was her first time to order the school lunch, she didn’t know her student ID.Her heart raced as she inched closer to the front of the line, the weight of unfamiliarity pressing down on her.
“When it came time to type in my number,” Clara, now 12, recalled with a hint of embarrassment in her voice, “I completely froze. I felt like everyone was watching me. The kids behind me started to get impatient, whispering things like, ‘Come on, keep moving, what are you doing ’ Their words cut me through like knives, and before I knew it, I couldn’t hold back the tears anymore.”
The worker at the register noticed Clara and tried to help. She leaned over the counter, and her voice soft as she asked Clara for her student ID number. But Clara’s tears were too overwhelming; she couldn’t utter a single word. She collapsed to the floor, her tears streaming down her face.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At this critical moment, her teacher stepped in.
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Then the worker handed her a delicious hot lunch.
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21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题06 读后续写校园生活类话题(测试)解析版
目 录
【校园生活情节构建】 P1
【校园生活语料精编】七类 P2
一、神态描写类
二、心理描写类
三、环境描写类
四、主题升华类(师生情谊)
五、主题升华类(同学互助)
六、主题升华类(克服困难)
七、主题升华类(校园记忆)
【校园生活话题精彩片段】四段 P5
【片段01】《从冷眼到援手:我因偏见而羞愧的转变》
【片段02】《破茧成蝶:曾经被数学 “绊倒” 的我,如今获此殊荣》
【片段03】《因师之鼓励,绘就英语学习的多彩画卷》
【片段04】《从隔阂到默契:舞台上绽放的友谊重生之光》
【校园生活话题好题调研】 P7
【调研01】《环保小先锋:从创意构思到全校推广的回收箱传奇》
【调研02】《校园寒风中的转机:陌生人的善意打破孤独坚冰》
【调研03】《冲线瞬间:旧友归来,化力量为荣耀,友谊重燃》
【调研04】《友谊的波折与升华:从矛盾冷战到携手共进》
【调研05】《从质疑天赋到笔耕不辍:与名家对话开启写作之路》
【调研06】《从活动挑战到友谊升华:新自行车见证的成长旅程》
【调研07】《废墟中寻回的友谊:地震逃生后折返救同窗》
【调研08】《破茧课堂:当冷眼化作春风,我与"边缘少年"的双向救赎》
【调研09】《从一个黑点到无限可能:老师的意外启示》
【调研10】《从 “问题学生” 到西语竞赛冠军:破茧成蝶的逆袭之路》
【调研11】《从 “社恐” 到 “社交达人”:迈出第一步,拥抱新友谊》
【调研12】《从食堂困境到成长蜕变:师恩助力破茧成蝶 》
【校园生活情节构建】
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 友情、表演、比赛等出现危机 负面情绪塑造
第二阶段 友情、误会弥补(解释、认错、弥补) 努力+反思+蜕变
第三阶段 友情、关系升华(换位思考、懂得珍惜) 感悟+感激+升华
【校园生活语料分类精编】
一、神态描写类
1. The students' faces beamed with excitement and anticipation.
1.学生们脸上洋溢着兴奋和期待。
2. She bit her lip, a sign of concentration as she studied for the exam.
2. 她咬着嘴唇,专心致志地备考。
3. His eyes widened with surprise as he saw his name on the list of winners.
3. 当他看到自己名字在获胜者名单上时,眼睛睁得大大的,充满了惊喜。
4. She blushed brightly, feeling embarrassed by the unexpected compliment.
4.她脸红得厉害,对意外的赞美感到尴尬。
5. He chuckled softly, amused by the joke told by his friend.
5.他轻轻地笑了,被朋友的笑话逗乐了。
6. Her brow furrowed in deep concentration as she solved the complex math problem.
6.她眉头紧锁,全神贯注地解决复杂的数学问题。
7. He held his breath, waiting for the results of the competition.
7.他屏住呼吸,等待比赛的结果。
8. Her eyes sparkled with joy as she opened the gift from her friend.
8.她打开朋友送的礼物时,眼中闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
9. He appeared nervous, shifting his weight from one foot to another as he awaited the interview results.
9.他显得很紧张,在等待面试结果时,不断在脚之间转移重量。
10. She smiled warmly, greeting her friends as they entered the classroom.
10.她微笑着,温暖地向走进教室的朋友们打招呼。
二、心理描写类
1. The eager anticipation of new experiences filled the students' minds.
1.学生们充满了对新经历的热切期待。
2. The butterflies in their stomachs fluttered with excitement.
2.他们心中的蝴蝶因激动而翩翩起舞。
3. They couldn't help but feel a sense of nostalgia mixed with excitement.
3.他们不禁感到一种怀旧与激动交织的情感。
4. The thought of seeing old friends brought a smile to their faces.
4.想到能见到老朋友,他们脸上露出了微笑。
5. The students' eyes sparkled with curiosity and eagerness.
5.学生们眼中闪烁着好奇和渴望。
6. The anticipation of success and growth filled their minds.
6.他们对成功和成长的期待充满了脑海。
7. They couldn't wait to explore the new possibilities that the campus had to offer.
7.他们迫不及待地想探索校园所提供的新可能性。
8. The students felt a sense of belonging and connection to the campus.
8.学生们感到一种属于和连接校园的感觉。
三、环境描写类
1. The vibrant colors of fall filled the campus, with leaves rustling underfoot and a crisp autumn breeze.
1.校园里充满了秋天的鲜艳色彩,树叶在脚下沙沙作响,秋天的凉爽微风不燥。
2. The scent of freshly mowed grass wafted through the air, signaling the start of a new day.
2.新鲜割草的香味弥漫在空气中,预示着新的一天开始了。
3. The bell tower tolled, its peals echoing across the campus, marking the beginning of the school day.
3.钟楼的钟声响起,回荡在整个校园,标志着学校的开始。
4. The sound of laughter and conversations filled the quad, as students gathered to chat and catch up.
4.笑声和谈话声充满了方形广场,学生们聚在一起聊天,增进感情。
5. The library buzzed with the hum of thousands of books, knowledge, and research.
5.图书馆里充满了成千上万本书籍、知识和研究的声音。
6. The cafeteria bustled with activity, filled with the aroma of hot meals and the chatter of hungry students.
6.食堂里热闹非凡,充满了热饭菜的香气和饥肠辘辘的学生们的嘈杂声。
7. The campus green spaces were dotted with students reading, relaxing, and enjoying the sunshine.
7.校园的绿地散布着阅读、放松和享受阳光的学生。
8. The auditorium filled with the sound of applause and excitement, as a performance got underway.
8.礼堂里充满了掌声和激动的声音,一场演出即将开始。
9. The sports fields vibrated with the energy of athletes, as they trained and compete for victory.
9.运动场上充满了运动员的能量,他们训练和竞争胜利。
10. At night, the campus was illuminated by the soft glow of street lamps, casting long shadows and a sense of serenity.
10.夜晚,校园被街灯的柔和光芒照亮,投下长长的影子,营造出宁静的氛围。
四、主题升华类(师生情谊)
1. A word of encouragement from the teacher helped me regain my confidence in studying.
1. 教师的一句鼓励让我重新找回了对学习的信心。
2. After every class meeting, the teacher’s summary always inspired and motivated us.
2. 每次班会后,老师的总结总能给我们新的启发和力量。
3. That class was lively and interesting; the teacher’s humorous explanation left a deep impression on me.
3. 那节课生动有趣,老师的幽默讲解让我印象深刻。
五、主题升华类(同学互助)
1. After failing the test, my deskmate encouraged me with a little note, which deeply touched me.
1. 那次考试失利后,同桌用一张小纸条鼓励了我,令我十分感动。
2. When I encountered difficulties, helpful classmates always reached out to support me.
2. 当我遇到困难时,热心的同学总是伸出援手,给予我帮助。
3. My friend and I completed an experiment together, and our teamwork made me proud.
3. 我和朋友一起完成了一项实验,我们的默契合作让我感到自豪。
六、主题升华类(克服困难)
1. During a conversation with my teacher, I found new ways to cope with academic pressure.
1. 在与老师的一次交流中,我找到了应对学习压力的新方法。
2. In the relay race during the sports meet, we worked together and won first place.
2. 在运动会的接力赛中,我们团结一心,取得了第一名。
3. Facing academic challenges head-on, students learned to persevere and grow stronger as a result.
3.学生们正面迎接学术挑战,结果学会了坚持并在过程中变得更强大。
七、主题升华类(校园记忆)
1. Campus life is full of laughter and growth, and it’s the most precious memory of my life.
1. 校园时光充满了欢笑和成长,是我人生中最珍贵的记忆。
2. Although academic pressure was intense, my classmates’ company made it much easier to handle.
2. 虽然学习压力很大,但同学们的陪伴让我感到轻松许多。
3. In campus life, those seemingly ordinary moments became my most unforgettable memories.
3. 校园生活中,那些看似平凡的小事成就了我最难忘的记忆。
4. After school, we would always laugh and play on the playground, enjoying simple happiness.
4. 每当放学后,我们总会在操场上欢声笑语,享受简单的快乐。
【读后续写校园生活话题优秀片段欣赏】
【片段01】《从冷眼到援手:我因偏见而羞愧的转变》
I stood there, not knowing what to do next. Suddenly, I felt so embarrassed and frustrated. I had expected a warm welcome and friendly interaction, but instead, I was met with coldness and indifference. My heart sank(无灵主语), and I felt a sense of isolation and confusion. Just as I was at a complete loss, desperately trying to figure out my next move, I heard a familiar voice. It was Shirley. She came up to me with a gentle smile and kind eyes, saying, “I saw what happened. Let me help you with the student card.” (简洁对话)
What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed. I had judged her based on her appearance and ignored her kindness earlier(动作链). Now, she was the one who came to my rescue without any hesitation or complaint. I realized how shallow and wrong I had been. My face flushed with embarrassment(无灵主语) as I reflected on my behavior. From that moment on(介词短语), I decided to change my attitude and not judge people by their appearance. I thanked Shirley sincerely from the bottom of my heart and promised to be a better person. (动作链)
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者刚进入高中,在高中新环境中因选择结交朋友而经历的教训,展现了作者对于人际关系和判断他人的态度转变过程。
【片段02】《破茧成蝶:曾经被数学 “绊倒” 的我,如今获此殊荣》
Several months later, everyone could see the significant progress I had made, not just in my grades, but in my entire approach to learning mathematics. I was actively participating in class, solving complex equations(分词作状语) that I had seen unable to understand before. The fear that had clouded my perception of math was replaced (无灵主语)by a genuine excitement for every new topic we covered. I even began to stay after our regular sessions to discuss advanced problems with Mrs Johnson, seeking out challenges that would have been too much for me to handle before.
At the end of the school year, during the last meeting of the math club, Mrs Johnson made a special announcement. As she called me to the front of the room, she handed me a certificate for “Most Outstanding Contribution”. The room erupted in applause(无灵主语). She praised me for sticking with my dream and for changing into not only a great math student but also someone who encourages others. Her acknowledgment confirmed my newfound passion and dedication to a subject (无灵主语) that once seemed unconquerable, underscoring an incredible year of academic and personal growth(分词作状语).
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,本文主要讲述了作者在高中时期,原本对数学感到困难重重,但在数学老师Johnson夫人的鼓励和建议下,加入了学校的数学俱乐部。通过参与俱乐部的活动和与其他数学爱好者的交流,作者逐渐克服了对数学的恐惧,对数学产生了兴趣,数学成绩也有了显著提升。最终,在学年结束时,作者因在数学俱乐部的突出贡献而获得表彰。
【片段03】《因师之鼓励,绘就英语学习的多彩画卷》
Encouraged by his words, I began to change my attitude towards English learning. I started to focus more attentively on English classes, following Mr. Frank’s instructions with great care(分词作状语). I discovered the charm of how individual letters could form meaningful words. Although the progress was slow, that slight improvement still brought me some hope(无灵主语). Mr. Frank was always ready to offer me guidance whenever necessary. Gradually(分词位于句首), I developed a deep admiration for English. I became more active in speaking up and communicating with my classmates. This new-found enthusiasm made me more outgoing and open-minded(无灵主语), and I even made some new friends.
“Why don’t you draw a poster for the English drama show ” Mr. Frank said to me. Excited and nervous(形容词作状语), I accepted. It was a good chance to contribute with my artistic skills. Over the next few days, I drew colorful posters combining text and pictures. The process helped me remember vocabulary and grammar points better. To my delight(介词短语前置), Mr. Frank praised my work and selected one poster for the show. Seeing my artwork displayed in the school gave me a strong sense of belonging(动名词作主语). Thanks to Mr. Frank’s encouragement and trust(介词短语前置), I discovered the beauty of English and found the confidence to express myself.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,短文叙述了作者天生个子矮小,经常不自信。高二那年,作者和家人搬到了另外一个城市。在新的学校里,作者没有朋友,英语学习跟不上,甚至被同学嘲笑个子小,只能通过画画来打发时间。MrFrank 发现了上课注意力不集中的作者,给予鼓励。
【片段04】《从隔阂到默契:舞台上绽放的友谊重生之光》
Seeing the girls were still awkward with each other, Freya realized that she could do something. She suggested they prepare a short performance for the campfire night on the last day of the trip. The girls exchanged uncertain looks(超短句). But they agreed when they saw the glimmer of hope in Freya’ s eyes, realizing that this might be the chance they had been waiting for to rebuild the bridge they had lost. Over the next few days, they worked together, choosing a piece that held deep meaning for both of them. As they practiced, old memories resurfaced(无灵主语), and they began to open their hearts, laughing and supporting each other just as they used to(分词作状语).
On the last day of the trip, Judith and Melanie took the stage for a shared performance. Melanie, though still nervous(省略句), drew strength from Judith’ s unwavering support and the lessons learned from Freya. The lines flowed naturally and their movements were in perfect harmony, as if they were dancing to the rhythm of their shared dream. Together, they delivered a heartfelt and moving performance, receiving thunderous applause(分词作状语). They not only overcame their individual fears and setbacks, but also rediscovered the power of their bond. From that day forward(介词短语前置), they stood side by side, supporting and encouraging each other, not just onstage but in every aspect of their lives.
【导语】本文以友谊为线索,讲述了Judith和Melanie在高中戏剧比赛中因Melanie失误而遭遇失败,两人友谊出现裂痕。在学校的团建旅行中,在导师Freya的帮助下,两人开始面对并尝试修复关系。
【校园生活话题名校好题调研】
[调研01](24-25高三下·云南昆明·阶段练习)《环保小先锋:从创意构思到全校推广的回收箱传奇》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Our class recycling project will start next week. You can choose to do it alone or in pairs,” Mr. Lee, the science teacher, announced. “Your goal is to design a recycling corner that will increase recycling rates in our classroom. The best idea will be adopted in the school.” The classroom erupted into enthusiastic chatter as students paired up and began their discussions.
Being a nature and animal lover, Lucy’s dream was big. She imagined birds and fish thriving (茁壮成长) in a plastic-free environment, inspired by her hours spent observing wildlife at her favorite lake. “The first step towards a plastic-free habitat is fostering a recycling habit,” she thought. “I’m sure I can come up with a brilliant idea for the project!” Her daydreaming was interrupted by a light tap from her best friend, Max.
“Do you still have that book on recycling I’m sure there are many helpful tips that we could use for this project. Shall we work on this together ” Max inquired expectantly.
Lucy recalled having read the library book the previous night and placing it on her bedside table. “Um...” she hesitated, “I returned it this morning... and I’m thinking of working on this project alone.”
“Oh, I see,” Max walked away, disappointed.
The next day, Lucy started working on her project, a smart dustbin. Yes, she had a unique concept for the recycling bin but she struggled to construct it. The design required a standard of workmanship that was simply beyond her capability. Frustrated, she went for a walk downstairs.
“Lucy ” she heard a familiar voice and looked up, surprised to find Max standing there. He had never witnessed her looking so disheartened before; she was walking heavily along with a discouraged expression, sighing deeply. Concerned, he called out to her. “What happened ” he asked gently. Guilt-ridden, she admitted lying about the book and apologized sincerely. Max forgave her readily.
“Well, if you need a partner, all you have to do is ask!” Max replied, smiling.
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She did so, and then excitedly described her design concept of the recycling bin.
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Lucy and Max’s hard work paid off.
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【满分范文】
I was completely lost at these questions, struggling with how to face Mr. Smith.The room seemed to close in around me, and my breaths came in short, sharp gasps, struggling to find enough oxygen. A wave of goosebumps flooding across my skin, as each individual hair stood on end. “Did we specify which tire ” My mind raced sharply, but I couldn't find the answer. I swallowed hard, my throat suddenly dry. I scribbled down an answer, knowing full well it was a shot in the dark. When handing in my test, barely could I look Mr. Smith in the eyes, knowing that the truth was now dramatically obvious.
When receiving the report card, we four flushed with shame. It was not just because of the striking red zero next to the second question, but because of the disappointment we saw in Mr. Smith's eyes. He didn't just teach us about the subject matter, but about integrity. In the end, we all admitted and apologized for our dishonesty. It was a tough lesson learned, but one that we would carry with us, shaping our character far more than any test ever could.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和朋友雅各布、詹姆斯和本杰明一天晚上聚会到很晚,尽管他们心里清楚第二天我们有一个重要的考试。当雅各布提出一个逃避考试的计划时,作者感到不安,但是还是接受了。他们向史密斯先生谎称,前一天晚上他们的车胎爆胎了,整晚都在把车推回校园,筋疲力尽,不能参加考试。史密斯答应了,提出三天后重新测试,他们欣然接受。考试那天,他们去了史密斯先生的办公室。出乎意料的是,他把他们四个人安排在不同的房间里进行测试。作者打开试卷就看到了两个问题。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我完全被这些问题搞糊涂了,不知该如何面对史密斯先生。”可知,第一段可描写作者答卷子时的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“收到成绩单时,我们四个人羞愧得满脸通红”可知,第二段可描写作者和朋友们认识到了错误和感悟。
2.续写线索:不知道如何作答——交卷时知道谎言已经被揭穿——承认错误——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
上交:hand in /turn in
看到:see/witness
塑造:shape /form
涌入:flood/ swarm into
情绪类
紧张:my breaths came in short/I was tension
失望:disappointment /frustration
【点睛】[高分句型1] When handing in my test, barely could I look Mr. Smith in the eyes, knowing that the truth was now dramatically obvious. (运用了状语从句的省略,倒装句,现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a tough lesson learned, but one that we would carry with us, shaping our character far more than any test ever could.. (运用了过去分词作定语,that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语)
[调研02](24-25高一上·河南开封·期末)《校园寒风中的转机:陌生人的善意打破孤独坚冰》
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段; 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was my first day at a new school in England because my family had moved here from Wales a week before. The moment I stepped through the big iron gates, a feeling of worry came over me. The large campus, with its old buildings covered in ivy and very neatly cut lawns, was really beautiful, but it just made me more nervous. I held my books tightly, and my hands started to sweat as the unfamiliar faces and the strange accents surrounded me like a thick fog that I couldn’t get through. I felt like a lonely traveler in a strange place, really wanting to see something familiar.
Along the way, I accidentally knocked into a boy. “Sorry, ”I said quietly, my eyes quickly looking down at the ground because I was too shy to look at him. “No problem,” he answered with a warm and real smile that cut through my uneasiness like a bright light. In that short talk, a little hope started to shine inside me; maybe this new place wouldn’t be the scary maze (迷宫) I was afraid of.
When I entered the classroom, the teacher introduced me to the class. I could feel everyone looking at me, and my cheeks turned bright red, as if they were on fire. I quickly sat down, and my heart was beating so hard that it seemed like the whole room could hear it. Would I be able to make friends Could I do well in the classes These questions kept bothering me all the time. The bell rang for the first break, and I walked slowly and nervously to the schoolyard, my steps as careful as a baby deer’s first steps in the woods. I looked around, partly hoping to see a friendly face, but also afraid of being refused.
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Standing alone in the corner of the schoolyard, I watched the other students chatting and laughing.
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Just as I was about to give up, the boy I bumped into earlier came towards me.
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【满分范文】
One afternoon, as I was walking home from school, Jack caught up with me. His face was flushed and he seemed out of breath. “Hey, wait up!” he called. I stopped, looking at him cautiously. He then pulled out a wrinkled piece of paper from his pocket and handed it to me. “This is for you. It’s from Tom.” I unfolded the paper and read, “I know you’ve been feeling left out, but it’s all a misunderstanding. Meet me at the old oak tree by the river after school tomorrow.” My curiosity was aroused, and some of my anger disappeared. What could Tom possibly have to say
The next day, I made my way to the old oak tree, my heart pounding. When I arrived, Tom was already there, pacing back and forth. He looked up as I approached and gave me a shy smile. “I’m really sorry,” he said. “Jack and I have been planning a surprise birthday party for you. We didn’t want you to find out, so we were being secretive.” I was stunned. All this time, I had misjudged them. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized how foolish I had been. Tom stepped forward and hugged me. “Forgive me ” he asked. I nodded, laughing through my tears. From that day on, our friendship was stronger than ever, and I learned the importance of communication and trust.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和Tom原本约好在学校门口见面去滑滑板,作者按时到达但Tom未出现。后来作者看到Tom和Jack开心聊天,心生误会,此后二人关系变得糟糕。一天作者放学回家时Jack追上他,给了他Tom的纸条约在老橡树见面。见面后Tom解释是在为作者准备惊喜生日派对才保密,作者意识到误会了他们,最终两人和好,作者也明白了沟通和信任对友谊的重要性。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一个下午,当我放学回家时,杰克追上了我。”和第二段首句“第二天,我走向了旧橡树,心脏跳动。”可知,第一段可描写Jack追上作者,拿出Tom给的纸条,告知作者去老橡树见面。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天,我走向了旧橡树,心脏跳动。”可知,第二段可描写作者来到老橡树,Tom解释是在为作者准备惊喜生日派对所以保密,解开误会,作者意识到自己的错误,两人和好。
2.续写线索:追上作者——拿住纸条——告知去老橡树见面——来到老橡树——Tom解释——误会解开——和好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拿出:pull out/take out
②递给:hand/deliver/give
③到达:arrive/reach
情绪类
①生气:anger/rage
②惊讶的:stunned/astonished
【点睛】[高分句型1] I know you’ve been feeling left out, but it’s all a misunderstanding.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] When I arrived, Tom was already there, pacing back and forth.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] He looked up as I approached and gave me a shy smile.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[调研03](23-24高一下·辽宁沈阳·期末)《冲线瞬间:旧友归来,化力量为荣耀,友谊重燃》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Anmol and Rohan were grade six students. They had been the best friends since childhood. They would sit on the same bench, eat together and play together at school.
One day, a new student named Sumit joined their class. During the break Anmol and Sumit got talking and Anmol gladly found Sumit had a passion for chess. Anmol was crazy about chess but he rarely got a good opponent.
Anmol and Sumit started spending more and more time together. Earlier, Rohan and Anmol used to play table tennis during lunch break. But now Anmol never seemed interested. Gradually Rohan started feeling left out. He felt worried and upset at the thought of losing his best friend, but he was at a loss what to do.
One day, Rohan urged Anmol to join him in a table tennis game.“Not today, Rohan, I have to complete yesterday’s chess game. Sumit has cornered me quite badly but I am not going to give in, ”Anmol said, not noticing the hurt expression on Rohan’s face.
“Sumit, Sumit! Now you have nobody but Sumit in your heart! You have completely forgotten our friendship!” yelled Rohan. Then he turned around and walked straight away.
After that Rohan stopped talking to Anmol and even changed his place in the class. Though he was heartbroken to lose his best friend, he believed that it was Anmol who was to blame. A couple of times Anmol tried talking to Rohan, but Rohan simply looked through him.
About a month later, Rohan participated in the campus cross-country race. It was in its last phase. All that remained was the final lap inside the stadium.Rohan was in third place, with Peter and Iqbal, the former champions, ahead of him.
The stadium was packed, and the students, were all cheering their favorites wildly.“Come on, Iqbal, you are always the best!”.
“Peter, move.You can beat Iqbal!”
“Hold on, Rohan, just another 200 meters to go!” The cries were deafening.
When they reached the last hundred meters, Rohan was almost out of breath.He dragged himself along, with his face red and his mouth dry.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then Rohan heard a familiar voice from his left side.
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As Rohan was the first to cross the finishing line, he collapsed on the ground.
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【满分范文】
Just then Rohan heard a familiar voice from his left side. It was Anmol, his long-lost best friend, cheering him on with unmatched enthusiasm. “Come on, Rohan! You can do it! Keep pushing!” Anmol’s voice cut through the chaotic cheering of the crowd, and Rohan felt a surge of energy within him. Inspired by his friend’s unwavering support, Rohan summoned the last remnants of his strength and sprinted towards the finishing line, determined to give it his all.
As Rohan was the first to cross the finishing line, he collapsed on the ground. The deafening cheers from the spectators filled the air as they celebrated his victory. Anmol rushed to Rohan’s side, his eyes filled with pride and joy. He helped Rohan up, patting him on the back excitedly. In that moment, all the hurt and distance that had come between them seemed to fade away, replaced by a renewed bond of friendship and shared accomplishment.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,文章主要讲述了Anmol和Rohan原来是好朋友,但是一位新生Sumit加入了他们班级。 Anmol得知Sumit喜欢国际象棋,就经常和Sumit下象棋。Anmol冷落了Rohan,这让Rohan很生气。这天,Rohan参加越野赛,最后几百米,他处于第三名,最后一百米的时候,Rohan已经上气不接下气了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“就在这时,Rohan听到一个熟悉的声音从他的左边传来。”可以预测续写这段主要内容:Anmol前来加油,Rohan备受鼓舞,奋力用最后的力量冲向终点。
②由第二段首句内容“当Rohan第一个冲过终点线时,他倒在了地上。”可以预测续写这段主要内容:Rohan获得第一名,观众和Anmol为他欢呼,Rohan和Anmol和好如初。
2.续写线索: Anmol前来加油——Rohan备受鼓舞——Anmol获得第一名—— 观众欢呼——Rohan和Anmol和好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.鼓励: inspire/motivate/encourage
②.冲向: rush to/dash to/run to
③.充满:be filled with/be full of
情绪类
①.高兴: joy/delight/happiness
②.兴奋地:excitedly/feverishly
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Inspired by his friend’s unwavering support, Rohan summoned the last remnants of his strength and sprinted towards the finishing line, determined to give it his all.(运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. Anmol rushed to Rohan’s side, his eyes filled with pride and joy. (运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型3]. In that moment, all the hurt and distance that had come between them seemed to fade away, replaced by a renewed bond of friendship and shared accomplishment. (运用that引导的定语从句和过去分词作状语)
[调研04](24-25高二上·甘肃临夏·期末)《友谊的波折与升华:从矛盾冷战到携手共进》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the lively campus of Greenfield Middle School, a unique friendship took root between two contrasting individuals, Lily and Kate.
Lily, a shy and diligent girl, was often found in the library’s quiet corners, her nose buried deep in textbooks. Kate, on the other hand, was a student of energy, the class’s joker, whose laughter resounded through the hallways. During a school sports event, the sun beat down mercilessly on the field. Lily, who had signed up for the long jump, stood frozen at the starting line. Her face paled as she stared at the sea of students watching. Her legs trembled, seemingly rooted to the ground.
Kate noticed Lily’s unease and came up to her, her steps light and quick. “Hey, Lily,” Kate said, giving Lily a hearty thumbs-up. “Don’t let this get to you. It’s just a leap (跳跃). You’ve got this!” Lily glanced at Kate, her eyes filled with doubt, but Kate’s words managed to motive her courage. Kate then launched into a detailed account of her own silly experiences, her hands gesturing vividly. “Remember that race when I fell over face-first It was a total disaster, but I just laughed it off. You can do the same.”
With Kate’s continuous stream of encouragement, Lily finally found the strength to take her jump. She flew through the air, not far but with a newfound sense of achievement shining in her eyes. From that moment, their friendship began.
They started spending more time together. When the school organized a group project on environmental protection, they teamed up. In the library, Lily buried herself into research materials, her head bent down in deep concentration. Kate, meanwhile, in their classroom, brainstormed creative presentation ideas, her eyes sparkling with enthusiasm. Their combined efforts resulted in a presentation that surprised their classmates and earned praise from the teacher.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, like all friendships, they also faced challenges.
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At the end of the school year, they met on the schoolyard.
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However, like all friendships, they also faced challenges. One day, Kate arranged a lively game in the schoolyard. But Lily, buried in her studies, declined to take part in it. “I thought you cared about us having fun together,” Kate said, her voice filled with annoyance. For a few days, an awkward silence hung between them. But deep in their hearts, they knew their bond was too strong to be broken. Later, they realized that they needed to accept each other’s weaknesses and find a balance. So, they sat down and had an honest conversation, better understanding how to respect each other’s differences.
At the end of the school year, they met on the schoolyard. The sun was setting, casting a warm glow over them. Lily took a deep, steady breath and said, “Kate, this year we’ve had our rough times, but I’m truly grateful we’re still friends.” A bright smile spread across Kate’s face. “You bet, Lily. We’re like two odd pieces that somehow fit perfectly.” With bright and true smiles on their faces, they walked out of the schoolyard, confident that their friendship would be a source of strength to help them face whatever the future held.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了莉莉和凯特是好朋友,两人性格不同。莉莉十分害羞,于是凯特总鼓励莉莉,帮助她建立自信。她们一起做项目,共同进步。虽然友谊也面临挑战,但是他们意识到他们需要接受彼此的弱点,并找到一个平衡。因此,他们坐下来进行了坦诚的交谈,更好地理解了如何尊重彼此的差异。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然而,就像所有的友谊一样,她们也面临着挑战”可知,第一段可描写她们面临的挑战是什么以及她们是如何克服挑战的。
②由第二段首句内容“学年结束时,她们在校园里见面”可知,第二段可描写两人见面后对话以及感悟。
2.续写线索:面临挑战——出现分歧——保持沉默——认识到需要接纳彼此——坦诚交谈——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①安排:arrange/schedule
②拒绝:decline/turn down/refuse
③参加:take part in/participate in
情绪类
①烦恼:annoyance/worry
②感激的:grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] So, they sat down and had an honest conversation, better understanding how to respect each other’s differences. (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2] Later, they realized that they needed to accept each other’s weaknesses and find a balance. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[调研05](2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模)《从质疑天赋到笔耕不辍:与名家对话开启写作之路》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was July 1971. I was taking a summer class in Black-American literature on the campus of SUNY. Professor James walked into the classroom and announced that he had invited a special guest to class and he needed a volunteer to meet his guest in the hall of the administration building and ac company him here.
To my amazement, my right hand shot up as though it had a mind of its own. I never volunteered for anything. I was shy and uncomfortable meeting new people. Realizing I was absolutely the wrong person for this job, I pulled my hand down quickly, but it was too late. “Thank you, David,” Professor James said. “You’d better leave now. He’ll be arriving any minute.” I reluctantly got out of my seat and headed for the classroom door. When I reached it, I stopped. I said, “If I don’t know who this person is, how will I recognize him I’d hate to bring back the wrong guy.” Professor James laughed. He pulled me aside and whispered a name in my ear. “Alex Haley,” he said. “Really ” I said. I gave a thumbs-up to the class and left the room.
The hall was empty and Alex Haley was nowhere to be seen. My anxiety grew because I feared that I was about to embarrass myself in front of this famous gentleman by asking stupid questions, or worse, by falling unnaturally silent. As I paced back and forth across the polished floor, I realized why I instinctively (本能地) raised my hand to volunteer for this job. This man was what I wanted to be: a writer. He was living my dream. I could learn from him. But deep in my heart, I was worried about whether I had a gift.
It was then that Mr. Haley with a briefcase entered the building. He was a man in his forties, medium height, wearing a sports jacket over an open-collared dress shirt. After we introduced each other, I accompanied him to the classroom building. Across campus, I was struck by how approachable this man was.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My fear was replaced by curiosity and purpose.
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That was an unexpected answer.
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At last, the big meeting came. I stood before the school board, my heart pounding with a mix of nervousness and excitement. I shared my vision of donating the leftover food from our school cafeteria to the Harvest Organization, explaining the positive impact it could have on our community. As I spoke, I could see the board members nodding in agreement, and their encouraging smiles eased my nerves. They approved my proposal, and I left that meeting with a sense of pride and achievement, knowing that my idea was one step closer to becoming a reality.
Finally, the first donation of leftover food from my school was delivered. It was a moment of great satisfaction, as I watched the cafeteria staff carefully pack containers of untouched food and milk, ready to make their way to the Harvest Organization. The whole process of turning an idea into a real act of kindness was a remarkable journey, and it filled me with a sense of purpose and meaning. It taught me that you don’t have to be an adult to make a difference.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者看到一篇关于Stan Curtis利用剩余食物帮助饥饿人群的文章后,受到启发,决定推动自己学校食堂捐赠剩余食物。在校长表示需学校董事会批准后,作者写信并亲自向董事会提议,最终成功实现学校首次食物捐赠的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“最后,重要的会议来临了。”可知,第一段可描写作者在会议上的表现,包括演讲时的感受、董事会成员的反应以及最终的结果。
②由第二段首句内容“最终,来自我们学校的第一批剩余食物捐赠被送达。”可知,第二段可描写捐赠时的场景,作者的感受以及从这次经历中所获得的感悟。
2. 续写线索:参加会议 —— 演讲表现 —— 董事会反应 —— 获得批准 —— 完成首次捐赠 —— 捐赠场景 —— 内心感受 —— 从中感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①提出倡议:share my vision/propose an idea/put forward a suggestion
②捐赠:donate/give away
③批准:approve/agree
情绪类
①紧张:nervousness/tension
②兴奋:excitement/thrill
【点睛】 [高分句型 1] As I spoke, I could see the board members nodding in agreement, and their encouraging smiles eased my nerves. (运用了as引导状语从句)
[高分句型 2] It taught me that you don’t have to be an adult to make a difference. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[调研06](24-25高三上·河南驻马店·阶段练习)《从活动挑战到友谊升华:新自行车见证的成长旅程》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Martin is a high school student who enjoys the friendship with his classmates, but sometimes he wonders what true friendship really is. One day, he expressed his confusion to his mom, who suggested that he organize a team-building activity to explore the real meaning of friendship.
Martin’s mom suggested that he organize an activity at school that would require teamwork and joint support. His mom told him he would get a new bike he always wanted as a prize after understanding the meaning of friendship. Martin thought this was a great idea and decided to talk to his teacher about it. His teacher was very supportive and gave him some valuable advice. With the teacher’s guidance, Martin began planning the event. He chose a weekend and invited his classmates to participate. He carefully designed the activity, preparing various challenges to ensure everyone could get involved. He explained the rules, including how to divide tasks, communicate effectively, and support each other when facing challenges. He emphasized the importance of teamwork and how to build trust and cooperation during the activity.
On the day of the event, Martin and his classmates moved around the campus, searching for hidden markers. They were divided into several groups, each assigned different tasks. Some had to solve puzzles, while others had to complete physical challenges. Some tasks required close cooperation among team members. Martin noticed that some classmates encouraged each other when facing difficulties, while others shared their findings to benefit the whole team. Together, they overcame one obstacle after another, and each success strengthened the team’s cohesion (凝聚力).
Among the challenges, one was impressive. In the challenge, they had to cross a rope bridge over a simulated river. Team members had to support each other to ensure everyone crossed safely. Martin saw classmates who usually didn’t interact much tightly holding each other’s hands, giving courage and support. This scene deeply moved him, making him realize the powerful bond of friendship when facing challenges together.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After the activity, Martin shared the day’s events with his mom.
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Martin deeply understood his mom’s words.
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After the activity, Martin shared the day’s events with his mom. He told her about how classmates helped each other during the challenges, especially when crossing the rope bridge. He said he was amazed to see the changes in his friends, and how they united and became stronger as a team. He realized that was exactly true friendship. His mom happily said,“ you are right. True friendship is about being there for each other in tough times and working towards a common goal.”
Martin deeply understood his mom’s words. He understood that friendship isn’t just about having fun together, but also about mutual support and cooperation. He felt that through this activity, he had truly grasped the meaning of friendship. With this new understanding, he was looking forward to even deeper and more meaningful friendships with his classmates. And he was pleased to receive the new bike as a reward for this valuable discovery.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述Martin想知道真正的友谊是什么,他妈妈建议Martin组织一次同学之间的团队建设活动来探索友谊的真正意义,在团建活动中Martin意识到了同学们在共同面对挑战时所体现的友谊。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“活动结束后,Martin与妈妈分享了当天的活动。”可以预测续写这段主要内容: Martin分享当天活动情况和自己对友谊的体会,妈妈表示赞成并总结。
②由第二段首句内容“Martin深深地理解了妈妈的话。”可以预测续写这段主要内容:Martin真正体会到什么是真正的友谊并得到自行车作为奖励。
2.续写线索: Martin分享当天活动—— Martin的感悟——母亲的总结——Martin期待与同学建立更深友谊——Martin获得自行车奖励
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.帮助:help/aid/assist
②.意识到: realize /be aware of/recognize
③.说:say/utter
情绪类
①.惊讶的:surprised/astonished/amazed/astounded
②.高兴地: happily/gladly
【点睛】[高分句型1]He told her about how classmates helped each other during the challenges, especially when crossing the rope bridge. (运用了how引导的宾语从句和状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]True friendship is about being there for each other in tough times and working towards a common goal. (运用了动名词作介词后宾语)
[高分句型3]He felt that through this activity, he had truly grasped the meaning of friendship. (运用that引导的宾语从句)
[调研07](24-25高三上·福建福州·期末)《废墟中寻回的友谊:地震逃生后折返救同窗》
阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the serene morning, our school campus lay bathed in a gentle glow of sunlight. The air was still, with only the occasional chatter of students and the rustle of books breaking the silence. The classrooms were abuzz with activity as students diligently worked on their assignments, their faces lit by the soft light filtering through the windows.
But suddenly, the tranquility was shattered by a violent earthquake. The ground began to shake, sending a shudder through the entire school. The seismic waves were so powerful that they sent a shiver down the spines of every student. Amidst the chaos, a girl named Alice, a fellow member of our class, panicked and fled the classroom in a flash. Her flight was a stark contrast to the complacency of the rest of us who remained seated, unmoved by the rumbling beneath our feet. Yet, as we sat unperturbed, students from other classes streamed out of their classrooms in a panic, their faces etched with fear. The corridor outside our classroom soon filled with the hustle and bustle of fleeing students, their footsteps echoing loudly in the otherwise silent morning.
Suddenly, the school’s broadcast system came to life, its voice echoing through the hallways, instructing everyone to evacuate and gather in the designated area. However, it was soon revealed that this was a mistake, a miscue from the broadcast station that had sent our hearts racing even further. With the all-clear signal, we returned to our seats, trying to regain our composure. The teacher, a pillar of calm in the midst of the commotion, resumed the lesson as if nothing had happened, her voice a soothing balm to our frayed nerves.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1: Meanwhile, the ground shook violently once again, this aftershock stronger than the first.
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Para2: Yet, as we began to regain our composure, we realized that Bob had not made it out.
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Meanwhile, the ground shook violently once again, this aftershock stronger than the first. Without hesitation, everyone bolted out of the classroom, our hearts pounding as we ran through the swaying hallways. Reaching the open ground, we gasped for air, relief flooding through us as we realized we were safe. Alice, who had fled earlier, was now helping to calm those around her, her face still pale but her voice steady.
Yet, as we began to regain our composure, we realized that Bob had not made it out. Bob, a quiet classmate, was nowhere to be seen. Without hesitation, our teacher rallied us. “We need to go back!” she shouted, her eyes flashing with determination. Hearts in our mouths, we followed her back into the shaking building. The corridor was a mess, debris littering the floor, but we pressed on, calling Bob’s name. Finally, we found him trapped under a fallen bookshelf. Working quickly and carefully, we lifted the shelf and freed him. Grateful and relieved, Bob stumbled out with us, and together, we escaped the wreckage, our bonds of friendship and solidarity stronger than ever.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,文章主要讲述了在学校发生地震时,学生们从最初的镇定自若到后来的惊慌失措,经历了一次紧急疏散。在疏散过程中,一名叫爱丽丝的同学最先逃离教室。然而,当余震再次袭来时,大家才真正意识到危险,纷纷跑出教室到空旷地带避难。此时,爱丽丝帮助安抚周围的同学。随后,大家发现同学鲍勃被困在倒塌的书架下,便立刻返教室将其救出。最终,大家安全逃离废墟,彼此之间的友谊和团结也因此更加深厚。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“与此同时,地面再次剧烈震动,这次余震比第一次还要强烈。”可知,第一段可描写学生们逃离教室,跑到安全地带的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“然而,当我们开始恢复冷静时,我们意识到鲍勃没有出来。”可知,第二段可描写老师带领大家回去救鲍勃的经过。
2.续写线索:地面震动——逃离教室——发现鲍勃没出来——回去救他——成功救出——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.逃离:flee /run away/escape
②.解救:free/rescue/save
③.蹒跚:stumble out/stagger out
情绪类
①.宽慰:relief/comfort
②.感激的:grateful/thankful/appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Reaching the open ground, we gasped for air, relief flooding through us as we realized we were safe. (运用了现在分词作状语以,独立主格结构及as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. Working quickly and carefully, we lifted the shelf and freed him. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型3]. Grateful and relieved, Bob stumbled out with us, and together, we escaped the wreckage, our bonds of friendship and solidarity stronger than ever.(运用了形容词作状语和独立主格结构)
[调研08](24-25高三上·广东·期末)《破茧课堂:当冷眼化作春风,我与"边缘少年"的双向救赎》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Growing up, the first day of school was always exciting — new clothes, supplies, and classes. But at twenty-three, the first day of school had me in a panic. I was the new teacher.
I had just celebrated my birthday, the new year, and my divorce. Unloved and unneeded, the rejection of a failed marriage still hurt. I had graduated in December, and a school more than sixty miles from my apartment had hired me to teach a class of twenty-two fifth graders.
As the principal Mrs. Bright walked me to my classroom, I asked, “What happened to the last teacher ” She answered, “She left just a week after the school year started. There have been thirteen replacement teachers since then. You are the fourteenth one, Sylvia.”
As I entered the classroom, I said with a sweet smile, “I’m your teacher for the rest of the year.” The kids were excited to meet me, but they quickly became restless. Some sat wherever they wanted, while others talked or passed notes. One girl called Tracy crawled under her desk, and a boy named Kyle began crying for no reason. The rest of the day was chaotic-fights broke out, and some kids refused to talk to me. As the final bell rang, I collapsed into my chair, exhausted.
Later, during my conference period, Mrs. Bright told me, “Tracy can’t read and doesn’t pay attention. Just leave her alone, and make up a grade.” I was shocked. “What about Kyle ” I asked. “He’ll be fine. He is just lonely. His mom is a single mother working around the clock.”
Through our exchange, I came to understand that most of these kids had been kicked out of other schools. No one came to their rescue. They were the ones no one else wanted. These kids, like me, were used to rejection. The pain of my own divorce made me realize how much they deserved better.
注意 :
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I decided to do something for these rejected kids.
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Gradually, the students realized that I cared for them.
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I decided to do something for these rejected kids. I started by learning about each one. For Tracy, I found books that matched her interests, hoping to spark her curiosity. For Kyle, I spoke to him softly after class, offered him a listening ear, and showed him that he mattered. Abandoned too many times already, these children deserved better. “I won’t give up on you. You all matter.” I told them, trying to make everyone in the class feel loved and needed. Slowly, I built routines, clarified my expectations, and became firm in my stance: chaos would not be tolerated, but support would always be given. Instead of a dull space to learn, my classroom could become a place that provided them with safety and a sense of belonging.
Gradually, the students realized that I cared for them. With distrust giving way to trust, they began to open up to me, and with that trust came small yet meaningful changes. Tracy began to show a growing interest in class and Kyle’s tears became less frequent. Fights lessened and the flying notes were now replaced by questions about schoolwork. They weren’t just learning academically but emotionally, understanding how to become part of a community. A wave of relief washed over me as I knew I had made a difference — not just for them, but for myself as well. With the pain of my own failed marriage slowly healing, I felt no longer rejected and I was also needed. We came to each other’s rescue.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者是一名教师,接手了一个调皮的班级。作者了解到这些孩子大多是被其他学校开除,没有人来救他们。他们是没人想要的人。于是作者决定为这些孩子做点事情,开始了解这些孩子,倾听他们,孩子们也慢慢被改变了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我决定为这些被拒绝的孩子做点什么”可知,第一段可描写作者开始致力于了解孩子,倾听孩子,为他们提供安全和归属感。
②由第二段首句内容“渐渐地,学生们意识到我关心他们”可知,第二段可描写学生对作者态度的变化以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:决定付出行动——开始了解孩子——倾听孩子——鼓励孩子——孩子信任作者——班级改变——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①引起:spark/arouse
②尝试:try/attempt
③减少:lessen/decrease
情绪类
①有意义的:meaningful/significant
②安慰:relief/comfort
【点睛】[高分句型1] For Kyle, I spoke to him softly after class, offered him a listening ear, and showed him that he mattered. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Instead of a dull space to learn, my classroom could become a place that provided them with safety and a sense of belonging. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[调研09](24-25高三上·江苏常州·期末)《从一个黑点到无限可能:老师的意外启示》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I feel hopeless about my school life! I’m not a popular student in our class. I can’t play basketball as well as other boys. And I failed Math exam again yesterday, which made me…”, Tom, a 16-year-old boy of Mr. Brown’s class, lowered his head, sobbing (啜泣) uncontrollably in the Teacher’s Office.
“I’m sorry to hear that”, Mr. Brown patted Tom’s shoulder gently and asked the young boy to sit down in front of the desk so that they could sit opposite each other. This was the first time that Tom had turned to Mr. Brown for help because he was so shy and quiet in school. But Mr. Brown had noticed him many times in school’s volunteer work. Looking at the sad young boy, Mr. Brown was silent for a moment. Then, he took a piece of paper and a pen out of his drawer.
“I’d like to invite you to take a surprise test, my boy”, said Mr. Brown, passing the pen to Tom. “A new Math exam ”, Tom raised his eyes which were still filled with tears, got the pen and replied in confusion, worrying about the coming challenge. “Just take it easy because it’s not about numbers or formulas (方程) ”, Mr. Brown comforted him with a big smile. Not knowing what would come in the exam paper, Tom nodded his head and wiped his tears with his sleeves.
Mr. Brown handed Tom the question paper and encouraged him softly, “Now, you can begin and please finish the test within ten minutes.” To Tom’s surprise, there were no questions in the paper, but just a black dot in the center of the page. Mr. Brown thoroughly read through Tom’s puzzled expressions and said, “I want you to write what you see there.” Confused as he was, Tom began to do what he had been asked to do. Meanwhile, Mr. Brown picked up a novel and started reading it, waiting patiently.
Tom scratched (挠) his head anxiously, having no idea what to write.
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“What your writing focused on was just the black dot, but you have a whole white paper,” said Mr. Brown.
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Tom scratched his head anxiously, having no idea what to write. He stared at the black dot in the center of the page, trying to decipher Mr. Brown’s intentions. He thought about writing “a black dot,” but that seemed too obvious and uninspired. His mind raced, searching for deeper meaning or hidden messages. Should he write about how the dot represented his feelings of inadequacy and failure Or perhaps how it stood out despite the surrounding emptiness Tom’s fingers hovered over the paper, hesitant to make the first mark.
“What your writing focused on was just the black dot, but you have a whole white paper,” said Mr. Brown. Tom looked up, puzzled. “Life is like this piece of paper, my boy. The black dot represents your problems and worries — they may seem big and overwhelming at times. But look at all the space around it — that’s your potential, your opportunities, and the good things in life that you often overlook. There’s a world of possibilities waiting for you beyond that tiny dot.” Tom’s eyes widened as he absorbed Mr. Brown’s words. Perhaps his school life wasn’t as hopeless as he had thought.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了16岁的男孩汤姆对老师说自己对学校生活感到绝望,于是布朗先生让他参加一个测试,纸上只有一个黑点,让汤姆把看到的写下来。布朗先生通过这种方式告诉汤姆,生活中的困难只是一个小黑点,要看到此外的美好。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“汤姆焦急地搔着头,不知道该写些什么”可知,第一段可描写汤姆内心的想法和犹豫。
②由第二段首句内容“‘你写作的重点只是一个黑点,但你有一整张白纸,’布朗先生说”可知,第二段可描写布朗先生解释背后的道理。
2.续写线索:汤姆参加测试——汤姆寻找考试意义——汤姆犹豫——布朗先生解释道理——汤姆感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看着:stare at/look at
②寻找:search for/look for
③理解:decipher/understand
情绪类
①难以承受:overwhelming/unbearable
②绝望:hopeless/desperate
【点睛】[高分句型1] His mind raced, searching for deeper meaning or hidden messages. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Perhaps his school life wasn’t as hopeless as he had thought. (运用了as引导方式状语从句)
[调研10](24-25高三上·甘肃·阶段练习)《从 “问题学生” 到西语竞赛冠军:破茧成蝶的逆袭之路》
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have taught Spanish to thousands of students over my thirty-six years at Walpole High School in Walpole, Massachusetts. My students have ranged from the most academically gifted to the academically at-risk. There is one young man, however, who in the course of his high school career surpassed (超过) expectations of everyone in his life: his parents, his former teachers, his peers and himself. His name is Vincent Lee.
Vincent entered my classroom as a nervous freshman on his first day of high school in September,2005. He was involved in our Spanish IA course, a transition (过渡) course between Spanish I and Spanish Ⅲ for students who under-performed in Spanish Ⅰ. In fact, Vincent had not had a lot of success in Spanish in the middle school. His eighth grade teacher had described him as that “sad, shy boy in the last row who always kept his head down.” Vincent often went to class unprepared and could not see the point of learning another language.
From the very start of my course I sensed an attitude that separated Vincent from his peers. He entered class each day, took his seat quietly and took out what he needed for the lesson. At first he was somewhat shy about answering questions in Spanish, but as the course progressed, I was able to engage him in conversations about his family, his interests and his passions. These included football, baseball and track.
With time Vincent became more willing to volunteer and even ask me questions. He seemed fascinated by the fact that my parents were from Costa Rica and that I was fluent in both English and Spanish. When he once asked how long it takes to become fluent in another language, I explained that it takes many years and that the first sign that a person has adopted the language as his own is when one dreams in that language.
Contrary to what we had seen in middle school, Vincent rarely missed a homework assignment because this meant the terrible “red snake” stamp on his homework calendar. On those rare occasions that this happened, Vincent would become very frustrated with himself and I had to comfort him that he still had a very good chance at getting an A on homework for that month.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Clearly, Vincent was beginning to view himself as a student.
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Vincent went to another teacher’s class after the contest and it was not until just before his graduation that I had an opportunity to chat with him.
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Clearly, Vincent was beginning to view himself as a student. Furthermore, I was beginning to view him as a positive role model for the other students. He was my “go-to guy” when no one could answer a question or when I needed to pair up a struggling student with someone who was more proficient. Later, I recommended that he participate in the National Spanish Exam contest. Much to my surprise, he decided to do so, and later we found out that he had won the first prize.
Vincent went to another teacher’s class after the contest and it was not until just before his graduation that I had an opportunity to chat with him. He said that my class was the first class in high school where he had tasted success, adding that my enthusiasm for the Spanish language and culture had motivated him to continue with Spanish for the next three years. Then he confessed to me that he had recently dreamt in Spanish. He said that when he woke up that