专题08 读后续写遇困脱险类话题（测试）原卷版
目 录
【遇困脱险话题情节构建】 P1
【遇困脱险主题语境满分语料】 P2
【遇困脱险话题精彩片段欣赏】 P4
【片段01】《丛林求生：与猴结盟，从绝境迈向生机》
【片段02】《洞穴惊魂：五小时生死营救，收获成长教训》
【遇困脱险话题名校好题调研】 P5
[调研01]绝境坚守：无畏寒冬，盼来沙克尔顿的救援曙光
[调研02]登山遇险：队友不离不弃，共抗风雪迎救援
[调研03]雪山惊魂：从坠落绝望到获救重生
[调研04]暴风雨中的攀登：从被困绝望到爱的救援降临
[调研05]雪崩惊魂：争分夺秒，寻找被埋同伴
[调研06]月光下的狩猎：少年见证狼与鼠的生存较量
[调研07]山林迷途：呼救无门，幸得援手回归
[调研08]烟雾弥漫：从迷失火场到直升机上的重生
[调研09]绝境携手：从山林困窘到村庄的温暖救赎
[调研10]荒野遇险：机智应对，友谊照亮求生之路
[调研11]火海逃生：从绝望挣扎到祖孙的生命奇迹
【遇困脱险故事情节构建】
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 困难处境描写— 困难处境+消极情绪 ---困难处境：冰雪覆盖、道路泥泞、气温降低…… --情感表现：焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过……
第二阶段 救人过程呈现— 想到办法+如释重负 --救他型：发现困境—克服困难—提供帮助 --他救型：遇到困境—寻求帮助—给与施救
第三阶段 皆大欢喜结局— 感激+感动+升华 --问题解决：欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢…… --主旨升华：难忘记忆、传递快乐、团结坚持……
【遇困脱险主题语境满分语料】
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一、雪山脱险类
1. Exhausted as we were, we didn’t stop. , we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2. , we dug the snow out. , we made it.
我们一点一点的把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后（夸张手法），我们终于成功了。
二、冰上救援类
1. .
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀刺痛了我的脸。
2. He pushed the branch toward me. I the icy water by Harry.
他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，最终被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生。
三、困洞营救类
1. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he , pulling him out without reserve.(动作链）
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始观察周国的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，仲手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。
2. , moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated.
慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。
四、动物描写类
1. .
他露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。
2. It seemed that .
他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张大了。
五、自救他救类
1. .
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。
2. I picked my courage and with the pepper spray.
我不得不采取行动，所以我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。
3. I took out a metal bar from the car at once and .
我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。
4. Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot, the bear was toward the forest like a shot.
这只熊被直升机的噪音和枪声吓了一跳，跳进灌木丛，像枪声一样冲向森林。
六、情感描写类
1. Seeing this, she .
当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。
2. When she saw the beast, .
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以致于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
3. Extremely frightened, I found .
非常害怕，我发现我身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
4. I , throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
我如释重负的松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地保住了他。
5. .
我如释重负的笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩。
6. .
理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情
七、主题升华句
1. ! It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.
1.真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
2. ctions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
2.直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
3. whatever setbacks we are faced with.
3.我们绝不该放弃希望无论遇到什么挫折。
4. even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day .
4.这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
5. “Be patient ! The rescue team is on the way." these words
5. “救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
【读后续写遇困脱险话题优秀片段欣赏】
【片段01】《丛林求生：与猴结盟，从绝境迈向生机》
To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. They seemed intrigued by his attempts to communicate and even brought him some fruits, apparently as a gesture of goodwill. Tom gratefully accepted the offering, realizing that these monkeys could potentially be his lifeline. Over the next few days, he followed the monkeys, learning from their behavior and survival skills in the jungle. They led him to water sources and edible fruits, helping him sustain his strength. The experience was surreal, but it gave Tom hope and renewed energy to continue his struggle for survival.
令他惊讶的是，猴子们对他很友好。他们似乎对他试图沟通很感兴趣，甚至给他带了一些水果，显然是出于善意。汤姆感激地接受了这个提议，意识到这些猴子可能是他的生命线。在接下来的几天里，他跟随猴子，学习它们在丛林中的行为和生存技能。他们带领他找到水源和可食用的水果，帮助他保持体力。这段经历是超现实的，但它给了汤姆希望和新的能量，让他继续为生存而战。
As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. Relief flooded through his body as he realized he had finally found civilization. Weak and exhausted, he stumbled towards the nearest hut. Villagers gathered around him, their faces filled with curiosity. Tom explained his situation, and they offered him food, shelter, and clothing. As he rested and recovered, he reflected on his journey. Despite the hardships and near-death experiences, Tom felt a sense of accomplishment. He had survived the jungle, thanks to his resilience, courage, and an unlikely alliance with a group of monkeys.
当汤姆走出丛林时，他看到了一个小村庄。当他意识到自己终于找到了文明时，如释重负的心情涌上心头。他虚弱而疲惫，跌跌撞撞地朝最近的小屋走去。村民们聚集在他周围，脸上充满了好奇。汤姆解释了他的情况，他们给了他食物、住所和衣服。当他休息和恢复时，他反思了自己的旅程。尽管经历了种种磨难和濒死体验，汤姆还是感到了一种成就感。他在丛林中幸存下来，这要归功于他的韧性、勇气，以及与一群猴子不太可能的联盟。
【片段02】《洞穴惊魂：五小时生死营救，收获成长教训》
The next several hours were long and arduous. Even with the stranger’s help, we weren’t able to move Emma a little. No matter what we did or how Emma moved, the rock squeezed tighter. Eventually a park ranger came down. The fire department was on its way, but a rescue would take time. Emma was exhausted, cold, hungry and terrified. I gave Emma my shirt to cover her cold legs and tried to keep her calm.
接下来的几个小时漫长而艰难。即使有陌生人的帮助，我们也无法移动艾玛一点。不管我们做什么，也不管艾玛怎么动，石头都挤得更紧了。最终，一名公园护林员走了下来。消防部门正在赶来，但救援需要时间。艾玛筋疲力尽，又冷又饿，吓坏了。我把衬衫递给艾玛，盖住她冰冷的腿，试图让她保持冷静。
Almost five hours after we had entered the cave, the rescue team arrived. Our rescuer slowly chiseled away the ancient cave wall, and then worked very hard to move Emma. “Let’s get you out of here,” the firefighter told her as he gave a sign of relief. They wriggled their way out of the cave with me following behind. Fortunately, Emma eventually escaped from the cave and cried tears of joy. That day, I learned a big lesson about being more careful during exploration.
我们进入洞穴将近五个小时后，救援队到达了。我们的救援人员慢慢地凿掉了古老的洞穴墙壁，然后非常努力地移动了艾玛。“我们带你离开这里吧，”消防员告诉她，同时做了个宽慰的手势。他们扭动着身子走出山洞，我跟在后面。幸运的是，艾玛最终逃离了洞穴，喜极而泣。那天，我学到了一个重要的教训，那就是在探索过程中要更加小心。
【遇困脱险话题名校好题调研】
[调研01] （23-24高二下·福建三明·期中）《绝境坚守：无畏寒冬，盼来沙克尔顿的救援曙光》
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It so happened that one morning I bought a newspaper and read the advertisement about an expedition to the South Pole with the great Sir Ernest Shackleton—this was the adventure that I had been dreaming of. Overjoyed, I applied to join the expedition, only to be turned down by Shackleton. But I was so enthusiastic that I secretly went aboard his ship and hid in a small cupboard. Unfortunately, three days later I was discovered. Since Shackleton did not want to turn back, he offered me a job and assigned me to be a steward serving meals for twenty-eight men.
The journey had not been easy. Approaching Antarctica, we got stuck in the ice and saw the ship get crushed by the ice. When the ship sank, our hearts sank with it. Before we abandoned the ship, Shackleton calmly called us together and told us to rescue our most essential supplies. We were not allowed to take most of our personal belongings, and Shackleton himself threw away all his gold. We had to camp on the ice of Elephant Island and managed to survive. But spring was coming, and the ice would soon begin to melt.
We had been struggling for days, but things on Elephant Island were going from bad to worse. We had to be crowded together under one of our boats on the rocky shore of this miserable place. It was cold and windy, and the island had no plants. Sometimes we were only able to catch a seal or a penguin to eat. Otherwise, there was no food. Soon after we arrived, Shackleton left us to find help on South Georgia Island, 1,320 kilometres away—the voyage was too dangerous and difficult for all of us to make it in our small boats. If Shackleton failed, we wouldn’t have any hope of rescue as no one else knew that we were here. We watched worried and hopefully as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now we had to face the adversity without Shackleton.
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It was four months later that rescuers finally arrived.
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[调研02]（2025·山东日照·一模）登山遇险：队友不离不弃，共抗风雪迎救援
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It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement.
The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand.
As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak.
Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand.
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1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully.
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The rescue team arrived finally.
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[调研03]（2024·安徽安庆·三模）雪山惊魂：从坠落绝望到获救重生
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On my first summer vacation as a junior high school student, I climbed my first mountain — a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in Surrey, British Columbia. I was overweight at the time and out of breath when I reached the summit. But I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. Soon I climbed nearly 100 peaks. My parents were happy I’d finally found a hobby. I often went climbing with my friend Mel Olsen, whom I’d met in a Facebook group.
Last December, I, together with Mel, came to Oregon to tackle 11,240-foot Mount Hood. It’s safer to start winter climbs at night when there’s less risk of the sun melting the snowpack. That day we started at 3 am, following the paths alongside the ski runs. The temperature was about 14°F, and we wore layers we could easily remove, knowing the sports would make us warm. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together.
After about five hours, we reached Devil’s Kitchen, a plateau (高原) at about 10,000 feet. By this point, the wind was howling. My exposed skin felt as though it were burning. The other climbers decided to turn back, but Mel and I went ahead. We had ice axes, helmets, and crampons (攀登钉鞋). We were in high spirits and prepared for the climb.
The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. At around 9 am, we reached a flight of ice step. It was about three or four feet tall and sloped at a 75-degree angle. I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on the ice step. Confident I was safe, I put my full weight on it. Suddenly, I heard a crack, and a whole slab of ice broke off the step, right under my foot.
In an instant, I fell backward before I made any response. I could hear Mel calling my name in a trembling voice as I tumbled down, bouncing off the rock face, and rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. I remember thinking: This is it. You’re done.
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I stuck out my arms and legs hopelessly, grabbing at anything.
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As Mel made her way down, I yelled for help, and other climbers came to my rescue.
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[调研04]（23-24高三上·安徽·开学考试）暴风雨中的攀登：从被困绝望到爱的救援降临
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The four mountain climbers were still breathing heavily as they looked out into the distance. The views from the top of the mountain were breathtaking. In all directions, valleys, forests and other mountains were laid out before them. They could even see the small wooden houses of the village where they had spent the night and the route they had taken to reach the top of this small but dangerous mountain. Laughing loudly, they were surprised at their courage in climbing such a steep and rocky mountain slope. Filled with an enormous sense of achievement, the four young climbers patted each other on the back.
As the other three continued to enjoy the views, Jason, the leader of the group, stared at the horizon with a troubled look on his face.
“What is it, Jason ” Sofia, the youngest of the group, asked.
“Those dark clouds in the distance mean a heavy storm is fast on the way,” Jason replied. He remembered the villagers had warned him of the unpredictable weather conditions on top of the mountain and that a terrible storm could appear from nowhere.
“But it's so warm and sunny here. I don't think the storm is coming this way,” Sofia said, more in hope than expectation.
However, Jason feared the worst and knew only too well what would happen if the storm caught them in the open. He addressed the group in a calm but serious tone, “If the storm hits us, the temperature will fall dramatically. The rain and mist will make it difficult for us to see where we are going and we could easily get lost or fall off a cliff. The wind will take our strength, so we need to get moving fast.”
The four mountain climbers packed up their facilities and immediately started back down the mountain. Unfortunately, despite their best efforts, the storm was upon them sooner than expected. The wind screamed in their ears, the driving rain stung (刺痛) their eyes and the mist made it impossible for them to see clearly.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue.
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Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain.
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[调研05]（2023·湖南郴州·三模）雪崩惊魂：争分夺秒，寻找被埋同伴
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Ken Scott kicked of the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Rocky Mountain town of Mullan,Idaho.It was 6 a.m.on January 7, 2020, and he was on a mission: He’d just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blessed with nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As a ski addict who’d worked in the industry for the past 30 years as a ski patroller (滑雪巡逻员)and equipment salesperson, he didn’t want to miss this perfect skiing chance. These conditions are what skiers live for-even experienced and skilled as Scott, who, at 55, still skied 100 days a year.
When Scott reached Silver Mountain’s locker room, he ran into his friend Warren, 58, a former ski instructor who had also been a regular on these slopes for more than two decades.
“Can you believe it ” he said as they changed into their boots. “Sixteen inches! Are you ready ”
For the next hour, the pair skied on various runs under a lightly gloomy sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood. Finally, they reached 16-to-1, an expert-level trail, which was now open. It had been closed all season over concerns that skiers might cause an avalanche (雪崩). But that morning, patrollers had cleared loose snow on the peak, reducing the chance of a snowslide.
“What do you think ” asked Warren.
“Let’s go for it!” Scott replied.
When they reached the top of 16-to-1, Warren excitedly looked back at Scott. The huge, toothy grin on his bearded face was what he needed. He pointed his skis downhill and took off. So thrilled were they that they isolated everything around them. Flying on the trail, despite the biting wind, their hearts burnt with passion for this great skiing. Whoomph! A sudden roar from behind nearly deafened them.
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2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In a second, they realized what was happening.
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“Bring help! Ken was missing,” Warren said anxiously on the phone.
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[调研06]（24-25高二上·安徽·开学考试）月光下的狩猎：少年见证狼与鼠的生存较量
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Wolf! Hank thought. The boy stared out of the cabin (小木屋) window at the animal. It was sitting a stone’s throw away in the moonlight. The wolf howling (嚎叫), Hank shook slightly. For the first time, he felt truly alone in the mountains.
It had felt good to be allowed to come along with Dad. Dad was a scientist who studied wild animals. Two days ago, they had moved into an empty cabin. Here, Dad would write a report about what he had found. But they discovered that dozens and dozens of mice had taken over the cabin. The little creatures had gotten into the supplies of dried food and ruined almost everything.
Now, because most of the food was gone, Dad had left to get new supplies from town and would be staying overnight. Hank had insisted on staying behind.
The wolf howl sounding again, Hank opened the logbook to write about it, but his hand shook. Dad had never mentioned having any trouble with wolves. Hank closed the logbook and put it on the table. Quickly he looked around for something he could use as a weapon just in case. He grabbed a stick from the fireplace, went to the door, and took a deep breath.
Then he opened the door, waved the stick, and shouted with all his might (强大力量): “Co away, wolf. Go away!” Shocked, the wolf sprang (跳跃) and started running away. Hank closed the door, his heart pounding hard. When he’d caught his breath, he turned back to the window. Oh, no! There was the wolf sitting right where it had sat before.
Hank stared at the wolf. The wolf stared right back at him. Hank was staring into the eyes of a hunter. He knew, like all creatures, the wolf needed to eat. Hank’s dad had said wolves play their part in the environment by eating deer, rabbits, and other animals. But maybe, like the hungry mice that were running about Hank’s feet, wolves go for any food they can find. Suddenly, Hank heard a squeaky (吱吱叫的) noise!
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Holding his breath, Hank raised his head to see.
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As the wolf sprang up and tried to catch another mouse, Hank opened the logbook again.
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[调研07]（23-24高二上·重庆万州·阶段练习）山林迷途：呼救无门，幸得援手回归
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One sunny Saturday morning, I got ready for a hike with my classmates. I was so excited about it since it was my first time to go hiking. I ate a light breakfast just a few slices of bread and an egg. After that I grabbed my backpack and hurriedly ran out of my house and then met my classmates at the school gate. At that time I didn’t think that there would be a terrible disaster ahead.
The jungle (丛林) that we are going to was far from our area. Its name was Salymbia Jungle. The drive was 3 hours long but it was not a dull ride as we were all eager about the hike and we bad each other’s company. We appointed a guide and his name was Thomas. He said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times, and he was familiar with the pathways. When we arrived, Thomas allowed us to begin. There were a wide variety of plants which I had never seen before. The smell of the jungle was so earthy. All of us were amazed by the beauty of the scenery and the sound of the creatures.
After a while we were walking and then I looked at my wrist (手腕) to check the time but then I realized my watch had fallen off. Then I walked back without telling anyone. I did not worry about getting lost since there were other persons behind and I thought I would have been able to catch up with my classmates. I went back searching the pathway and I lost track of time and lost sight of my classmates. I immediately realized that I was alone.
After I realized I was lost, the first thing I did was to check my phone to see how far away I was from my companions. However, I was having no luck because there was no network in my phone, which made my phone practically useless.
Paragraph 1: The sky started to become darker.
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[调研08]（22-23高二下·湖南郴州·期末）烟雾弥漫：从迷失火场到直升机上的重生
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On the plains of northwest Oklahoma, you can see for miles: nothing but grass, masses of evergreen trees and steep red-rock canyons(峡谷). But with my telescope, I could see the helicopters, one after another clearly, dumping water on a wildfire in the far distance. I wasn’t concerned by the small cloud of smoke snaking skyward. It had to be at least 50 miles away, even across the South Canadian River.
That afternoon, my uncle Larry, my cousin Tony and I had driven to this 4, 000-acre farm for a three-day hunt. I took a few pictures of bushy trees and grand canyons. Then I sent some of them with my cellphone to my wife, Ande, who was 60 miles away. “There’s nothing to worry about. Just have a nice day.” I typed. She had seen the fire on the news and called a few minutes earlier to warn me. Anyway, I didn’t want her to be worried.
The wind had picked up, blowing hard from the southwest. We climbed into the vehicle, with Larry driving, to look for places to hunt the turkeys the next day. We headed north along a small road and stopped here and there to look for signs of turkeys.
We drove for about a mile before Larry turned to head back south, toward the farmhouse. As we did, my eyes went wide. A wall of flames was racing toward us, maybe three quarters of a mile away. “Get us out of here!” I screamed. Larry speeded up the vehicle, bouncing hard along the small road. How had the fire jumped over the river The flames would be on us in no time. With a fence blocking the way, we jumped out of the vehicle. Then I made a phone call to Ande. “We’re surrounded by fire,” I shouted over the howling wind. “Call 911! We need a helicopter to get us out of here.” The connection went dead.
I looked around, but I couldn’t see Larry and Tony.
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When I woke up, I found myself in a helicopter.
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[调研09]（24-25高三下·山东济南·开学考试）绝境携手：从山林困窘到村庄的温暖救赎
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On a sunny weekend, Lily, an adventurous high-school senior, and her close friends, Jack and Emma, decided to go hiking in the nearby mountains. Equipped with backpacks filled with water, snacks, and a map, they were excited to explore the great outdoors.
As they walked along the well-marked track, chatting and laughing, the weather took an unexpected turn. Dark clouds rolled in quickly, swallowing the sun. The wind started to roar, and soon, rain poured down heavily. The path became slippery, and visibility dropped significantly.
Lily, trying to keep up everyone’s spirits, suggested they find a place to take shelter. They spotted a small cave on the side of the hill and made their way towards it. Inside the cave, the air was damp and cold. As they gathered closely together, waiting for the storm to pass, they realized they had left their emergency flashlight in Jack’s backpack, which he had accidentally dropped on the trail during their rush to the cave.
After what seemed like hours, the rain finally stopped, but the sky remained cloudy. When they stepped out of the cave, they were shocked to find that the track was no longer recognizable. Mudslides had occurred, and large stones blocked their way back. To make matters worse, Jack checked his phone and found that there was no signal.
With a sense of unease coming in, they knew they had to find a way out of the mountains before nightfall. They decided to follow a small stream they saw, hoping it would lead them to a more familiar path or a nearby village. As they walked along the stream, the path became increasingly difficult, with steep slopes (陡坡) and thick underbrush.
Suddenly, Emma let out a scream. She had stepped on a loose rock and twisted her ankle badly. Lily and Jack rushed to her side, their faces filled with worry. Now, not only did they have to find their way out, but they also had to help their injured friend.
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Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions.
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Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance.
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[调研10]（24-25高三上·河北沧州·阶段练习）荒野遇险：机智应对，友谊照亮求生之路
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In the golden mist of late summer, Frank and John, two inseparable friends, set off on an adventure they had particularly planned for weeks: a camping trip by the river. The air was filled with excitement as they packed their backpacks with essentials—tents, cookers, and a map, though they were confident in their knowledge of the area, having explored its boundaries since childhood.
As the sun began its fall, casting long shadows across the green landscape, they arrived at their chosen spot—a quiet bend in the river, far from civilization’s noisiness. They set up camp, and the crackling of the campfire and the gentle lapping of water against the shore were their only companions. Under a starry sky, they shared stories and dreams, unaware that their comfortable escape was about to take a dangerous turn.
The following morning, as they ventured deeper into the woods to gather firewood, the sky, which had been clear and blue, turned frightening, with heavy clouds gathering. In the distance, a low, powerful, rolling thunder echoed (回响) through the valley, a warning they should have noticed. Not frightened, they continued, their laughter now was drowned out by the growing roar(咆哮) of the river.
It happened swiftly. A wall of water, caused by the storm, rushed down the river, catching them off guard. In a heartbeat, their return path was cut off, the once familiar place was transformed into a maze (迷宫) of rushing currents and mudslides. Panic rose within them, but Frank, always the calmer of the two, remembered a survival tip from his father: “When lost or in danger, stay put if possible, assess your resources, and think reasonably.”
With the river too dangerous to cross, they came back to higher ground, seeking shelter beneath a rocky overhang. As the rain pounded down, they gathered together, their spirits dampened but not defeated. John remembered another crucial lesson: using natural resources for survival. He suggested they start a fire using dry leaves and branches they had collected before the storm and they managed to light a small flame, providing warmth and a light of hope.
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The new sunrise brought new challenges and opportunities for Frank and John to prove their courage.
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The next day, as hope was beginning to fade, a rescue helicopter appeared.
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[调研11]（2023秋·河南南阳·高二阶段练习）火海逃生：从绝望挣扎到祖孙的生命奇迹
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Every fall, my family and I would mark dead trees, cut them down, haul (拉拽)the wood and store it in the basement. On Christmas eve, the basement was half full of dry wood. As usual, my sister Shelly and I were home from school, and she did as either of us had done a thousand times before: checked the stove in the hall, tossed a few more logs and slammed the stove door shut.
At the time, I was upstairs having a sink full of dishes to wash, homework to tackle and my grandfather, who was mentally disordered and hated by our family, to care for. Stomping(跺脚)around the kitchen, I thought about how I couldn’t wait to finish washing. The house seemed a little smoky, but that wasn’t unusual since it often went that way after the stove had new logs to chew up. I simply waved the smoke away and continued my business, meanwhile daydreaming of getting away from my grandfather. Suddenly, my sister Shelly hurried in and said, “Don’t you think it’s a little too smoky in here ” I shrugged, uttering nothing, and kept washing. But after another minute, I knew something went wrong.
Without a word to each other, we shot through the kitchen and stared in disbelief as smoke and flames boiled out from the hall. A flush of panic sweeping over me, I hurried Shelly to lead our grandfather out before I was ready to call 911. Unfortunately, my phone was dead. I glanced out the window and saw Shelly, in a sweeter, jeans and slippers and my grandfather, in pants, a T-shirt and socks, shivering in the bone-biting snow, with no place to await help. With the only neighbor living far away, we were likely to die in the freezing cold outside. But if we stayed inside, smoke would surely choke us. However, if I could get my grandfathers phone in his room and probably, if the flames didn’t spread far, there would be a slim chance of survival.
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Though overwhelmed by extreme panic, I decided to take a chance.
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Fire sent me into despair before the familiar figure of my grandfather came into my sight.
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21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题08 读后续写遇困脱险类话题（测试）解析版
目 录
【遇困脱险话题情节构建】 P1
【遇困脱险主题语境满分语料】 P2
【遇困脱险话题精彩片段欣赏】 P4
【片段01】《丛林求生：与猴结盟，从绝境迈向生机》
【片段02】《洞穴惊魂：五小时生死营救，收获成长教训》
【遇困脱险话题名校好题调研】 P5
[调研01]绝境坚守：无畏寒冬，盼来沙克尔顿的救援曙光
[调研02]登山遇险：队友不离不弃，共抗风雪迎救援
[调研03]雪山惊魂：从坠落绝望到获救重生
[调研04]暴风雨中的攀登：从被困绝望到爱的救援降临
[调研05]雪崩惊魂：争分夺秒，寻找被埋同伴
[调研06]月光下的狩猎：少年见证狼与鼠的生存较量
[调研07]山林迷途：呼救无门，幸得援手回归
[调研08]烟雾弥漫：从迷失火场到直升机上的重生
[调研09]绝境携手：从山林困窘到村庄的温暖救赎
[调研10]荒野遇险：机智应对，友谊照亮求生之路
[调研11]火海逃生：从绝望挣扎到祖孙的生命奇迹
【遇困脱险故事情节构建】
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 困难处境描写— 困难处境+消极情绪 ---困难处境：冰雪覆盖、道路泥泞、气温降低…… --情感表现：焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过……
第二阶段 救人过程呈现— 想到办法+如释重负 --救他型：发现困境—克服困难—提供帮助 --他救型：遇到困境—寻求帮助—给与施救
第三阶段 皆大欢喜结局— 感激+感动+升华 --问题解决：欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢…… --主旨升华：难忘记忆、传递快乐、团结坚持……
【遇困脱险主题语境满分语料】
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一、雪山脱险类
1. Exhausted as we were, we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2. Inch by inch, we dug the snow out. After what seemed a century, we made it.
我们一点一点的把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后（夸张手法），我们终于成功了。
二、冰上救援类
1. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀刺痛了我的脸。
2. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed immediately and was dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a narrow escape!
他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，最终被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生。
三、困洞营救类
1. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child's hands, pulling him out without reserve.(动作链）
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始观察周国的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，仲手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。
2. Slowly and cautiously, moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated.
慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。
四、动物描写类
1. It exposed his sharp teeth, glaring at us as it ran forward.
他露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。
2. It seemed that his mouth was full of blood, his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.
他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张大了。
五、自救他救类
1. I shouted for help at the top of my voice but in vain.
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。
2. I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray.
我不得不采取行动，所以我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。
3. I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf.
我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。
4. Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot, the bear was startled to leap into the bush and galloped toward the forest like a shot.
这只熊被直升机的噪音和枪声吓了一跳，跳进灌木丛，像枪声一样冲向森林。
六、情感描写类
1. Seeing this, she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。
2. When she saw the beast, so terrified was she that the throat tightened and the knees weakened.
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以致于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
3. Extremely frightened, I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.
非常害怕，我发现我身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
4. I breathed a sigh of relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
我如释重负的松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地保住了他。
5. Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart.
我如释重负的笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩。
6. With tears filling his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情
七、主题升华句
1. What a narrow escape! It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.
1.真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
2. Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
2.直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
3. Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with.
3.我们绝不该放弃希望无论遇到什么挫折。
4. This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day .
4.这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
5. “Be patient ! The rescue team is on the way." these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation.
5. “救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
【读后续写遇困脱险话题优秀片段欣赏】
【片段01】《丛林求生：与猴结盟，从绝境迈向生机》
To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. They seemed intrigued by his attempts to communicate and even brought him some fruits, apparently as a gesture of goodwill. Tom gratefully accepted the offering, realizing that these monkeys could potentially be his lifeline. Over the next few days, he followed the monkeys, learning from their behavior and survival skills in the jungle. They led him to water sources and edible fruits, helping him sustain his strength. The experience was surreal, but it gave Tom hope and renewed energy to continue his struggle for survival.
令他惊讶的是，猴子们对他很友好。他们似乎对他试图沟通很感兴趣，甚至给他带了一些水果，显然是出于善意。汤姆感激地接受了这个提议，意识到这些猴子可能是他的生命线。在接下来的几天里，他跟随猴子，学习它们在丛林中的行为和生存技能。他们带领他找到水源和可食用的水果，帮助他保持体力。这段经历是超现实的，但它给了汤姆希望和新的能量，让他继续为生存而战。
As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. Relief flooded through his body as he realized he had finally found civilization. Weak and exhausted, he stumbled towards the nearest hut. Villagers gathered around him, their faces filled with curiosity. Tom explained his situation, and they offered him food, shelter, and clothing. As he rested and recovered, he reflected on his journey. Despite the hardships and near-death experiences, Tom felt a sense of accomplishment. He had survived the jungle, thanks to his resilience, courage, and an unlikely alliance with a group of monkeys.
当汤姆走出丛林时，他看到了一个小村庄。当他意识到自己终于找到了文明时，如释重负的心情涌上心头。他虚弱而疲惫，跌跌撞撞地朝最近的小屋走去。村民们聚集在他周围，脸上充满了好奇。汤姆解释了他的情况，他们给了他食物、住所和衣服。当他休息和恢复时，他反思了自己的旅程。尽管经历了种种磨难和濒死体验，汤姆还是感到了一种成就感。他在丛林中幸存下来，这要归功于他的韧性、勇气，以及与一群猴子不太可能的联盟。
【片段02】《洞穴惊魂：五小时生死营救，收获成长教训》
The next several hours were long and arduous. Even with the stranger’s help, we weren’t able to move Emma a little. No matter what we did or how Emma moved, the rock squeezed tighter. Eventually a park ranger came down. The fire department was on its way, but a rescue would take time. Emma was exhausted, cold, hungry and terrified. I gave Emma my shirt to cover her cold legs and tried to keep her calm.
接下来的几个小时漫长而艰难。即使有陌生人的帮助，我们也无法移动艾玛一点。不管我们做什么，也不管艾玛怎么动，石头都挤得更紧了。最终，一名公园护林员走了下来。消防部门正在赶来，但救援需要时间。艾玛筋疲力尽，又冷又饿，吓坏了。我把衬衫递给艾玛，盖住她冰冷的腿，试图让她保持冷静。
Almost five hours after we had entered the cave, the rescue team arrived. Our rescuer slowly chiseled away the ancient cave wall, and then worked very hard to move Emma. “Let’s get you out of here,” the firefighter told her as he gave a sign of relief. They wriggled their way out of the cave with me following behind. Fortunately, Emma eventually escaped from the cave and cried tears of joy. That day, I learned a big lesson about being more careful during exploration.
我们进入洞穴将近五个小时后，救援队到达了。我们的救援人员慢慢地凿掉了古老的洞穴墙壁，然后非常努力地移动了艾玛。“我们带你离开这里吧，”消防员告诉她，同时做了个宽慰的手势。他们扭动着身子走出山洞，我跟在后面。幸运的是，艾玛最终逃离了洞穴，喜极而泣。那天，我学到了一个重要的教训，那就是在探索过程中要更加小心。
【遇困脱险话题名校好题调研】
[调研01] （23-24高二下·福建三明·期中）《绝境坚守：无畏寒冬，盼来沙克尔顿的救援曙光》
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It so happened that one morning I bought a newspaper and read the advertisement about an expedition to the South Pole with the great Sir Ernest Shackleton—this was the adventure that I had been dreaming of. Overjoyed, I applied to join the expedition, only to be turned down by Shackleton. But I was so enthusiastic that I secretly went aboard his ship and hid in a small cupboard. Unfortunately, three days later I was discovered. Since Shackleton did not want to turn back, he offered me a job and assigned me to be a steward serving meals for twenty-eight men.
The journey had not been easy. Approaching Antarctica, we got stuck in the ice and saw the ship get crushed by the ice. When the ship sank, our hearts sank with it. Before we abandoned the ship, Shackleton calmly called us together and told us to rescue our most essential supplies. We were not allowed to take most of our personal belongings, and Shackleton himself threw away all his gold. We had to camp on the ice of Elephant Island and managed to survive. But spring was coming, and the ice would soon begin to melt.
We had been struggling for days, but things on Elephant Island were going from bad to worse. We had to be crowded together under one of our boats on the rocky shore of this miserable place. It was cold and windy, and the island had no plants. Sometimes we were only able to catch a seal or a penguin to eat. Otherwise, there was no food. Soon after we arrived, Shackleton left us to find help on South Georgia Island, 1,320 kilometres away—the voyage was too dangerous and difficult for all of us to make it in our small boats. If Shackleton failed, we wouldn’t have any hope of rescue as no one else knew that we were here. We watched worried and hopefully as Shackleton and the boat sailed away from Elephant Island.
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Now we had to face the adversity without Shackleton.
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It was four months later that rescuers finally arrived.
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Now we had to face the adversity without Shackleton. Staying alive took all our time and energy. We melted ice from the ocean to get drinking water and we used animal fat to make fire. Food was also a problem—you can imagine how bored we were with all meat of sea creatures. Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the cold could easily made us ill. To our credit, our discipline and team spirit kept us optimistic and helped us deal with our fears and hold on until we were rescued.
It was four months later that rescuers finally arrived. Seeing Shackleton back, we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears. We were at last free to go home to warm beds, good food, and the care of our family and friends. Our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive. And he paid us back by his commitment to save us from a slow but painful death. This was an episode in my life that I would never forget.
【导语】本文以人物为线索。讲述了作者偶然机会下得知并无比向往由著名探险家欧内斯特 沙克尔顿爵士领导的南极探险之旅，虽遭拒绝但凭借极大热情秘密登上探险船，最终被发现并被沙克尔顿收留成为一名服务船员。旅程充满艰难险阻，船只在接近南极时被浮冰困住并摧毁，全体成员被迫在象岛上露营求生，面临极端恶劣的环境和食物短缺。随着春季到来，冰层融化，情况愈发危急。为寻求救援，沙克尔顿带领一小队人马冒险前往1320公里外的南乔治亚岛，留下其他人等待希望渺茫的援救。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句“现在我们不得不在没有沙克尔顿的情况下面对逆境。”可知，本段可描写在沙克尔顿离开后，作者和其他的探险队成员们如何在极端恶劣的环境中自力求生并保持团队士气。
②由第二段首句“四个月后，救援人员终于到达。”可知，本段可描写在被困四个月后，救援队伍的到来成功的让队员们获救。队员们非常高兴，沙克尔顿信守了自己的承诺。
2.续写线索：重新面对困境——想办法生存——保持积极乐观的态度——救援队到来——成功获救——信守承诺
3.词汇积累
行为类
①处理：deal with/do with
②拯救：rescue/save
③坚持：persevere /persist
情绪类
①快乐：joy/delight
②积极乐观的：optimism/positive
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, we had to be careful not to go outside too often, as the cold could easily made us ill.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】 This was an episode in my life that I would never forget.（运用了that引导的限定性定语从句）
[调研02]（2025·山东日照·一模）登山遇险：队友不离不弃，共抗风雪迎救援
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It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement.
The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand.
As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak.
Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand.
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“I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully.
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“I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. The team members gathered around me, their faces filled with worry. Our team leader, Mark, quickly assessed the situation. He gently examined my leg, trying to determine the extent of the injury. Sarah, who felt guilty for causing the fall, was on the verge of tears. “I’m so sorry, this is all my fault,” she sobbed. Everyone comforted her, emphasizing that accidents happen. Mark radioed for help, but due to the poor weather conditions, the rescue team couldn’t reach us immediately. In the freezing cold, the team huddled around me, sharing their body heat to keep me warm.
The rescue team arrived finally. They carefully strapped me onto a stretcher and carried me down the mountain. The rest of the team followed closely behind, relieved that I was in professional hands. Back at the base camp, I received medical treatment. Although my leg was broken, I was filled with gratitude for my teammates. They had not only supported me during the accident but also made the decision to stay with me instead of continuing their journey to the peak. The experience taught me the true meaning of teamwork and friendship.
【知识点】意外事故、登山探险
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了2019年夏，作者参与八人团队攀登华盛顿州雷尼尔山，团队训练超一年且成员彼此支持。前两日攀登顺利，第三天接近 “失望之角” 时天气恶化，队员莎拉滑倒致众人摔倒，作者腿部受伤无法站立。队友围拢，队长查伤情，莎拉自责，因天气差救援未及时到，众人保暖。最终救援队至，作者下山接受治疗。虽骨折，但作者感激队友支持及放弃登顶的陪伴，体会到团队合作与友谊的真谛。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我想我的腿断了。我痛苦地说。”可知，第一段可描写队长马克检查了作者的伤情以及用无线电求救。
②由第二段首句内容“救援队终于到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者接受了治疗以及对这次登山经历的感受。
2.续写线索：我想我的腿断了——队长马克检查了我的腿——用无线电求救——救援队终于到了——得到了治疗——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①评估：assessed / evaluated
②检查：examined /checked
③强调：emphasizing /stressing
情绪类
①感激：gratitude / appreciation
②内疚的：guilty / compunctious
【点睛】[高分句型1]Sarah, who felt guilty for causing the fall, was on the verge of tears.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Although my leg was broken, I was filled with gratitude for my teammates.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句）
[调研03]（2024·安徽安庆·三模）雪山惊魂：从坠落绝望到获救重生
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On my first summer vacation as a junior high school student, I climbed my first mountain — a fairly gentle 3,900-foot peak near where I live in Surrey, British Columbia. I was overweight at the time and out of breath when I reached the summit. But I loved the challenge of conquering something bigger than myself. Soon I climbed nearly 100 peaks. My parents were happy I’d finally found a hobby. I often went climbing with my friend Mel Olsen, whom I’d met in a Facebook group.
Last December, I, together with Mel, came to Oregon to tackle 11,240-foot Mount Hood. It’s safer to start winter climbs at night when there’s less risk of the sun melting the snowpack. That day we started at 3 am, following the paths alongside the ski runs. The temperature was about 14°F, and we wore layers we could easily remove, knowing the sports would make us warm. Along the way, we met two other climbers, and the four of us continued on together.
After about five hours, we reached Devil’s Kitchen, a plateau (高原) at about 10,000 feet. By this point, the wind was howling. My exposed skin felt as though it were burning. The other climbers decided to turn back, but Mel and I went ahead. We had ice axes, helmets, and crampons (攀登钉鞋). We were in high spirits and prepared for the climb.
The trail we followed grew narrower and steeper. At around 9 am, we reached a flight of ice step. It was about three or four feet tall and sloped at a 75-degree angle. I volunteered to go first. I placed my left foot on the ice step. Confident I was safe, I put my full weight on it. Suddenly, I heard a crack, and a whole slab of ice broke off the step, right under my foot.
In an instant, I fell backward before I made any response. I could hear Mel calling my name in a trembling voice as I tumbled down, bouncing off the rock face, and rolling down the mountain as if I were a character in a video game. I remember thinking: This is it. You’re done.
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I stuck out my arms and legs hopelessly, grabbing at anything.
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I stuck out my arms and legs hopelessly, grabbing at anything. I was overwhelmed with fear and regret. If only I had been more careful! I forced myself to calm down, pressing myself against the slope to slow down. Fortunately, a few minutes later, I came to a stop on a shallow incline. My clothes were shredded, my helmet was broken, and my face was bloodied from cuts and scratches. I made an attempt to stand up but in vain. Unable to move an inch further, I lay on the ice shivering and in pain, waiting for rescue.
As Mel made her way down, I yelled for help, and other climbers came to my rescue. With them rushing toward me, I sighed with relief and tears of excitement blurred my eyes. They made great efforts to relieve me of the suffering. Some offered to splint my leg and some called Portland Mountain Rescue while Mel stayed by my side, hugging me tightly to keep me warmer and less painful. So experienced and comforting were they that I was no longer as frightened as before. Eventually, I was sent to the hospital. I stayed for a long time. However, on my recovery, with greater caution and better preparations I returned on the trails. One slip on a mountain can change everything but never stops me from doing my favorite thing in the world.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在攀登俄勒冈州的胡德山时不慎滑倒并摔下山坡的经历。尽管受了重伤，但在朋友和其他登山者的帮助下，作者最终得到了救援，并在医院康复。这次事故虽然改变了作者的生活，但并未阻止他继续从事他最喜爱的登山运动。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我绝望地伸出胳膊和腿，抓住任何东西。”可知，第一段可描写作者极力挣扎的自救过程和恐惧内心。
②由第二段首句内容“梅尔下山时，我大声呼救，其他登山者来救我。”可知，第二段可描写梅尔和其他登山者救助作者的场景以及作者的内心感受以及最终感悟。
2.续写线索：
作者登山遇险——苦苦挣扎自救——梅尔和其他登山队员前来救助——梅尔安慰并鼓舞作者——作者被送至医院并成功恢复——作者最终感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①停住：come to a stop/pause/make a halt
②努力：make an attempt/make every effort
③起身：stand up/get up/pick up
情绪类
①充满恐惧：be overwhelmed with fear/be full of horror
②兴奋：excitement/exhilaration
【点睛】[高分句型1] I forced myself to calm down, pressing myself against the slope to slow down. （运用了现在分词作状语的结构）
[高分句型2] With them rushing toward me, I sighed with relief and tears of excitement blurred my eyes.（运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型3] So experienced and comforting were they that I was no longer as frightened as before. （运用了倒装结构）
[调研04]（23-24高三上·安徽·开学考试）暴风雨中的攀登：从被困绝望到爱的救援降临
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The four mountain climbers were still breathing heavily as they looked out into the distance. The views from the top of the mountain were breathtaking. In all directions, valleys, forests and other mountains were laid out before them. They could even see the small wooden houses of the village where they had spent the night and the route they had taken to reach the top of this small but dangerous mountain. Laughing loudly, they were surprised at their courage in climbing such a steep and rocky mountain slope. Filled with an enormous sense of achievement, the four young climbers patted each other on the back.
As the other three continued to enjoy the views, Jason, the leader of the group, stared at the horizon with a troubled look on his face.
“What is it, Jason ” Sofia, the youngest of the group, asked.
“Those dark clouds in the distance mean a heavy storm is fast on the way,” Jason replied. He remembered the villagers had warned him of the unpredictable weather conditions on top of the mountain and that a terrible storm could appear from nowhere.
“But it's so warm and sunny here. I don't think the storm is coming this way,” Sofia said, more in hope than expectation.
However, Jason feared the worst and knew only too well what would happen if the storm caught them in the open. He addressed the group in a calm but serious tone, “If the storm hits us, the temperature will fall dramatically. The rain and mist will make it difficult for us to see where we are going and we could easily get lost or fall off a cliff. The wind will take our strength, so we need to get moving fast.”
The four mountain climbers packed up their facilities and immediately started back down the mountain. Unfortunately, despite their best efforts, the storm was upon them sooner than expected. The wind screamed in their ears, the driving rain stung (刺痛) their eyes and the mist made it impossible for them to see clearly.
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With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue.
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Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain.
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With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue. He gathered the group in the shelter of a large rock, where he noticed that the other three were frightened and looking to him for a way out. Pushed by responsibility and pressure of leadership, Jason, shouting against the wind, explained that the safest thing for the moment was taking shelter from the pouring rain. They had expected that the storm would pass very soon. However, as darkness settled over them, the shower swept in. How time dragged!
Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain. Unbearably cold and hungry, they felt their way downward with great difficulty, eager for a miracle. Suddenly, something caught Jason's eye. Was it a flash of light There it was again…and another! In response, Jason immediately flashed his torch, exclaiming, “Over here! We are here!” His companions joined in. Rescue eventually arrived. Seeing the climbers, all the searching villagers breathed a sigh of relief and lovingly helped them return to the village. You see, weather changes but love remains
【知识点】登山探险
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了四名登山者在登山的时候遭遇了暴风雨，被困在了户外。多亏了领队Jason冷静应对，带领大家躲雨，最终坚持到了救援人员到来。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“随着天色渐黑，Jason觉得继续下去太危险了”可知，第一段可描写Jason在责任和领导压力的推动下为大家寻找避雨处。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，暴风雨出现了停止的迹象，登山者决定继续下山”可知，第二段可描写登山者下山时遇到了赶来的救援人员。
2.续写线索：登山者害怕——寻找避雨处——躲雨等雨停——雨停——开始下山——遇到救援人员——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
注意到：notice/ observe
预期：expect/anticipate
继续：continue /go on
情绪类
害怕：frightened /scared
渴望：eager for /long for
【点睛】[高分句型1] He gathered the group in the shelter of a large rock, where he noticed that the other three were frightened and looking to him for a way out. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Pushed by responsibility and pressure of leadership, Jason, shouting against the wind, explained that the safest thing for the moment was taking shelter from the pouring rain. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[调研05]（2023·湖南郴州·三模）雪崩惊魂：争分夺秒，寻找被埋同伴
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Ken Scott kicked of the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Rocky Mountain town of Mullan,Idaho.It was 6 a.m.on January 7, 2020, and he was on a mission: He’d just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blessed with nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As a ski addict who’d worked in the industry for the past 30 years as a ski patroller (滑雪巡逻员)and equipment salesperson, he didn’t want to miss this perfect skiing chance. These conditions are what skiers live for-even experienced and skilled as Scott, who, at 55, still skied 100 days a year.
When Scott reached Silver Mountain’s locker room, he ran into his friend Warren, 58, a former ski instructor who had also been a regular on these slopes for more than two decades.
“Can you believe it ” he said as they changed into their boots. “Sixteen inches! Are you ready ”
For the next hour, the pair skied on various runs under a lightly gloomy sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood. Finally, they reached 16-to-1, an expert-level trail, which was now open. It had been closed all season over concerns that skiers might cause an avalanche (雪崩). But that morning, patrollers had cleared loose snow on the peak, reducing the chance of a snowslide.
“What do you think ” asked Warren.
“Let’s go for it!” Scott replied.
When they reached the top of 16-to-1, Warren excitedly looked back at Scott. The huge, toothy grin on his bearded face was what he needed. He pointed his skis downhill and took off. So thrilled were they that they isolated everything around them. Flying on the trail, despite the biting wind, their hearts burnt with passion for this great skiing. Whoomph! A sudden roar from behind nearly deafened them.
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In a second, they realized what was happening.
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“Bring help! Ken was missing,” Warren said anxiously on the phone.
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In a second, they realized what was happening. “Avalanche!” crying out, they saw terror in each other’s eyes. Instantly, both were hit by heavy slabs of snow. Warren felt it enclosing him, moving quickly up his back and over his shoulders, then heavy against his neck. Snow filled the space in front of him and piled up around his body. He was almost buried. Struggling out of the snowbank, he looked around, trying to find Ken. “KEN!” Warren shouted anxiously, but no reply. Warren knew he had to reach Scott quickly because of the 30-minute survival window. He pulled out his phone and called for help.
“Bring help! Ken was missing,” Warren said anxiously on the phone. Word spread quickly, and soon Silver Mountain’s patrols and skiers arrived at the avalanche site with shovels and ten-foot poles with which they could probe for Scott. Rescuers formed a horizontal line along the slope, each standing just two feet apart, and inserted their probes down into the deep, chunky snow, hoping to hit and locate the buried skier. Twenty minutes into the search, a rescuer shouted, “A strike!” Tears streaming down his face, Warren knew they opened the life window for Scott.
【导语】文章以滑雪的进展为线索展开，讲述滑雪爱好者Ken Scott去Silver Mountain Resort滑雪时遇到了好友Warren，两人在天气不好的情况下尽情地滑雪。当达到16-to-1这个专家级线路时，他们决定去尝试，因为巡逻人员早上清除了松散了雪，因此雪崩的几率不大。正当两人在赛道上飞驰时，听到身后震耳欲聋的轰鸣声。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①根据第一段首句“一秒钟后，他们意识到发生了什么。”结合上文提到雪崩可知，下文可描写雪崩发生时的场景，以及两人的遭遇——Warren幸存，Ken Scott不知去向。于是，Warren打电话求助。
②根据第二段首句“‘救命！肯不见了，’沃伦在电话里焦急地说。”可知，下文可描写滑雪基地的滑雪者和管理人员闻讯赶来救助的画面，以及Ken Scott最终得救。
2.续写线索：雪崩发生——两人的遭遇——Warren幸存并求助——打电话——众人闻讯赶来——努力寻找——找到Ken Scott
3.词类激活
行为类
①看见：see/take notice of
②大叫：shout/yell
③传开：spread/get round
情绪类
①恐惧：terror/horror/fright
②焦急地：anxiously/worriedly
【点睛】[高分句型1] Struggling out of the snowbank, he looked around, trying to find Ken.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Tears streaming down his face, Warren knew they opened the life window for Scott.（运用了独立主格结构和省略引导词that的宾语从句）
[调研06]（24-25高二上·安徽·开学考试）月光下的狩猎：少年见证狼与鼠的生存较量
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Wolf! Hank thought. The boy stared out of the cabin (小木屋) window at the animal. It was sitting a stone’s throw away in the moonlight. The wolf howling (嚎叫), Hank shook slightly. For the first time, he felt truly alone in the mountains.
It had felt good to be allowed to come along with Dad. Dad was a scientist who studied wild animals. Two days ago, they had moved into an empty cabin. Here, Dad would write a report about what he had found. But they discovered that dozens and dozens of mice had taken over the cabin. The little creatures had gotten into the supplies of dried food and ruined almost everything.
Now, because most of the food was gone, Dad had left to get new supplies from town and would be staying overnight. Hank had insisted on staying behind.
The wolf howl sounding again, Hank opened the logbook to write about it, but his hand shook. Dad had never mentioned having any trouble with wolves. Hank closed the logbook and put it on the table. Quickly he looked around for something he could use as a weapon just in case. He grabbed a stick from the fireplace, went to the door, and took a deep breath.
Then he opened the door, waved the stick, and shouted with all his might (强大力量): “Co away, wolf. Go away!” Shocked, the wolf sprang (跳跃) and started running away. Hank closed the door, his heart pounding hard. When he’d caught his breath, he turned back to the window. Oh, no! There was the wolf sitting right where it had sat before.
Hank stared at the wolf. The wolf stared right back at him. Hank was staring into the eyes of a hunter. He knew, like all creatures, the wolf needed to eat. Hank’s dad had said wolves play their part in the environment by eating deer, rabbits, and other animals. But maybe, like the hungry mice that were running about Hank’s feet, wolves go for any food they can find. Suddenly, Hank heard a squeaky (吱吱叫的) noise!
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Holding his breath, Hank raised his head to see.
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As the wolf sprang up and tried to catch another mouse, Hank opened the logbook again.
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Holding his breath, Hank raised his head to see. He found the wolf, howling wildly, was chasing some mice in the moonlight. Letting out squeaky noises, the mice ran about on the grass aimlessly. Suddenly the hungry wolf sprang up, catching a mouse. Sitting a stone’s throw away, it ate the mouse it captured. Running about its feet were dozens of noisy mice. The wolf rose, ready to catch another mouse. Shocked, Hank turned back to the table for his logbook.
As the wolf sprang up and tried to catch another mouse, Hank opened the logbook again. His heart pounded hard. Grabbing the pen, Hank quickly wrote what was happening outside the cabin. Another mouse caught, the wolf swallowed it whole. The hunting over, the wolf ran away with its stomach filled. Closing the logbook, Hank took a deep breath, feeling so good. It was the first time that he had stayed alone in the mountains to study wild animals. That night he stayed awake, eager to report what he discovered to his dad.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了男孩Hank独自留在山中小木屋的经历，特别是在面对一只狼时的紧张和勇敢表现，展示了他逐渐克服恐惧、勇敢面对自然挑战的成长过程。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“屏住呼吸，Hank抬起头来看。”可知，第一段可以描写Hank发现狼在追逐老鼠的情景，以及他的内心感受。
②由第二段首句内容“当狼再次跳起来试图抓住另一只老鼠时，Hank再次打开记录本。”可知，第二段可以描写Hank记录下狼的行为，并感受到自己在这次经历中的成长。
2.续写线索：搬入小木屋--父亲外出采购--发现狼--观察狼的行为--记录并成长
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发现：find/spot
②追逐：chase/pursue
③记录：write/record
④抓住：catch/seize
情绪类
①震惊的：shocked/astonished
②害怕的：scared/frightened
③惊讶：surprise/astonishment
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sitting a stone’s throw away, it ate the mouse it captured. (运用了现在分词Sitting作状语)
【高分句型2】It was the first time that he had stayed alone in the mountains to study wild animals. (运用了固定句型It was the first time that...)
【高分句型3】That night he stayed awake, eager to report what he discovered to his dad. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[调研07]（23-24高二上·重庆万州·阶段练习）山林迷途：呼救无门，幸得援手回归
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给的段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny Saturday morning, I got ready for a hike with my classmates. I was so excited about it since it was my first time to go hiking. I ate a light breakfast just a few slices of bread and an egg. After that I grabbed my backpack and hurriedly ran out of my house and then met my classmates at the school gate. At that time I didn’t think that there would be a terrible disaster ahead.
The jungle (丛林) that we are going to was far from our area. Its name was Salymbia Jungle. The drive was 3 hours long but it was not a dull ride as we were all eager about the hike and we bad each other’s company. We appointed a guide and his name was Thomas. He said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times, and he was familiar with the pathways. When we arrived, Thomas allowed us to begin. There were a wide variety of plants which I had never seen before. The smell of the jungle was so earthy. All of us were amazed by the beauty of the scenery and the sound of the creatures.
After a while we were walking and then I looked at my wrist (手腕) to check the time but then I realized my watch had fallen off. Then I walked back without telling anyone. I did not worry about getting lost since there were other persons behind and I thought I would have been able to catch up with my classmates. I went back searching the pathway and I lost track of time and lost sight of my classmates. I immediately realized that I was alone.
After I realized I was lost, the first thing I did was to check my phone to see how far away I was from my companions. However, I was having no luck because there was no network in my phone, which made my phone practically useless.
Paragraph 1: The sky started to become darker.
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The sky started to become darker. I didn’t know what to do, so I called out to my classmates but there was no reply. I looked for a way but none of the scenes seemed familiar. I walked for a few more minutes, hoping to meet other people behind, but once again it didn’t worked. I was scared hungry and helpless. Still, I know it is no use being anxious. I needed to keep calm. I decided to stay where I was, saving my energy until the rescue team arrived.
As I was falling asleep, I heard a human voice. I doubted my ears but then I heard someone else. I screamed, “Help!” There was a note of excitement in my voice. They were rescuers who had come searching for me because my classmates reported my loss. They took me back to the bus. The moment I saw my classmates, I couldn’t control my tears in my eyes. They kept asking if I was hurt and what had happened. When they learned I was safe, they were relieved. What an unforgettable experience!
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了在一个明媚的周六清晨，作者和同学计划去远足，因为是第一次远足，所以作者很兴奋。历经3个小时到达丛林后，所有人都被美丽的风景和动物的声音所惊艳。后来作者发现自己的手表掉了，没有告知任何人决定自己回去寻找。途中作者忘记时间并迷路了，更糟糕的是，手机没有网络无法联系其他人。此时天空开始变暗。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“此时天空开始变暗。”可知，第一段可描写作者独自在丛林中的反应和表现
②由第二段首句内容“正当我入睡时，我听到了一个人的声音。”可知，本段应该写作者最终获救的情况
2.续写线索：呼喊同学无回应——尝试走出去但失败——保持体力等待救援——听到他人声音——获救和同学集合——个人感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①寻找：look for/search for/hunt for
②希望：hope/wish/desire
③忍不住哭：couldn’t control my tears/ can’t help crying
④ 受伤：be hurt/be injured
情绪类
①害怕的：scared/frightened/afraid
②饥饿的：hungry/starving
③激动：excitement/thrill
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I walked for a few more minutes, hoping to meet other people behind, but once again it didn’t worked.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. They were rescuers who had come searching for me because my classmates reported my loss.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型3]. The moment I saw my classmates, I couldn’t control my tears in my eyes.（运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句）
[调研08]（22-23高二下·湖南郴州·期末）烟雾弥漫：从迷失火场到直升机上的重生
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On the plains of northwest Oklahoma, you can see for miles: nothing but grass, masses of evergreen trees and steep red-rock canyons(峡谷). But with my telescope, I could see the helicopters, one after another clearly, dumping water on a wildfire in the far distance. I wasn’t concerned by the small cloud of smoke snaking skyward. It had to be at least 50 miles away, even across the South Canadian River.
That afternoon, my uncle Larry, my cousin Tony and I had driven to this 4, 000-acre farm for a three-day hunt. I took a few pictures of bushy trees and grand canyons. Then I sent some of them with my cellphone to my wife, Ande, who was 60 miles away. “There’s nothing to worry about. Just have a nice day.” I typed. She had seen the fire on the news and called a few minutes earlier to warn me. Anyway, I didn’t want her to be worried.
The wind had picked up, blowing hard from the southwest. We climbed into the vehicle, with Larry driving, to look for places to hunt the turkeys the next day. We headed north along a small road and stopped here and there to look for signs of turkeys.
We drove for about a mile before Larry turned to head back south, toward the farmhouse. As we did, my eyes went wide. A wall of flames was racing toward us, maybe three quarters of a mile away. “Get us out of here!” I screamed. Larry speeded up the vehicle, bouncing hard along the small road. How had the fire jumped over the river The flames would be on us in no time. With a fence blocking the way, we jumped out of the vehicle. Then I made a phone call to Ande. “We’re surrounded by fire,” I shouted over the howling wind. “Call 911! We need a helicopter to get us out of here.” The connection went dead.
I looked around, but I couldn’t see Larry and Tony.
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When I woke up, I found myself in a helicopter.
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【满分范文】
I looked around, but I couldn’t see Larry and Tony. The smoke was so thick that I couldn’t see more than a few feet around me. I yelled for the other guys. All I could hear were the trees exploding. It was terrifying. I reached in my pocket for the cellphone again. However, it was gone. I must have dropped it somewhere. That phone was my only connection with the outside world. But there was no time to look further. Smoke filled my lungs and I fell to the ground.
When I woke up, I found myself in a helicopter. “He’s alive!” somebody shouted. One rescuer held a phone to my ear. “Everything’s going to be okay,” Ande said in a gentle tone. “I love you.” The rescuers explained that Ande had called them for help. They added that Larry and Tony were safe, too. The helicopter took us to the nearest hospital. As the helicopter lifted off, I took one last look at the burnt trees. But in the blackness I saw the hope, the promise of new growth.
【导语】本文以山火为线索，讲述了作者和叔叔还有侄子去森林里打猎，妻子打电话来告知作者山火的消息，作者却不以为然，结果真遇上了山火，打电话向妻子求救，最后在救援人员的帮助下，最终获救的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我向四周看去，去找不到Larry和Tony”可知，本段可以写山火袭来的情况，作者想要求助，却找不到手机，最后昏了过去。
②由第二段首句内容“当我醒来的时候，我发现自己在直升飞机里”可知，本段可以写作者最终获救的情况。
2.续写线索：找不到Larry和Tony→山火袭来→找不打手机→晕了过去→醒来时，已获救→得知获救的原因→在烧毁的森林里看到了希望。
3.词类激活：
行为类：
喊：yell/shout loudly
看：take a look at/catch a glimpse of
解释：explain/make clear
情绪类：
令人害怕的：terrifying/frightening/scary
温柔的：gentle/soft/tender
【点睛】【高分句型1】
All I could hear were the trees exploding.(运用了省略了关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词All以及现在分词exploding作后置定语 )
【高分句型2】
As the helicopter lifted off, I took one last look at the burnt trees.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[调研09]（24-25高三下·山东济南·开学考试）绝境携手：从山林困窘到村庄的温暖救赎
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语编写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny weekend, Lily, an adventurous high-school senior, and her close friends, Jack and Emma, decided to go hiking in the nearby mountains. Equipped with backpacks filled with water, snacks, and a map, they were excited to explore the great outdoors.
As they walked along the well-marked track, chatting and laughing, the weather took an unexpected turn. Dark clouds rolled in quickly, swallowing the sun. The wind started to roar, and soon, rain poured down heavily. The path became slippery, and visibility dropped significantly.
Lily, trying to keep up everyone’s spirits, suggested they find a place to take shelter. They spotted a small cave on the side of the hill and made their way towards it. Inside the cave, the air was damp and cold. As they gathered closely together, waiting for the storm to pass, they realized they had left their emergency flashlight in Jack’s backpack, which he had accidentally dropped on the trail during their rush to the cave.
After what seemed like hours, the rain finally stopped, but the sky remained cloudy. When they stepped out of the cave, they were shocked to find that the track was no longer recognizable. Mudslides had occurred, and large stones blocked their way back. To make matters worse, Jack checked his phone and found that there was no signal.
With a sense of unease coming in, they knew they had to find a way out of the mountains before nightfall. They decided to follow a small stream they saw, hoping it would lead them to a more familiar path or a nearby village. As they walked along the stream, the path became increasingly difficult, with steep slopes (陡坡) and thick underbrush.
Suddenly, Emma let out a scream. She had stepped on a loose rock and twisted her ankle badly. Lily and Jack rushed to her side, their faces filled with worry. Now, not only did they have to find their way out, but they also had to help their injured friend.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions.
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Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance.
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【满分范文】
Lily and Jack exchanged anxious looks, their minds racing for solutions. Jack quickly took off his backpack and looked through it, finding a bandage to wrap Emma’s ankle as best as he could. “We can’t leave her here,” Lily said firmly, her voice echoing with determination. They made a makeshift stretcher using branches and their jackets, carefully placing Emma on it. The going was slow and difficult as they navigated the rough path. Every step was a struggle, but their bond as friends kept them going. As the afternoon wore on, tiredness began to set in.
Just when they felt tired and hungry, Lily spotted a village in the distance. Heart pounding with hope, they made their way towards it. To their joy, they found a well-used path that led down the village. With renewed energy, they quickened their pace. Finally, they reached the small village at the foot of the mountain. The villagers, kind-hearted and helpful, provided them with food, shelter, and called for medical help for Emma. Safe and sound, Lily, Jack, and Emma learned the true meaning of friendship and courage in the face of adversity.
【导语】本文以人物的冒险经历为线索展开，讲述了在一个阳光明媚的周末，Lily和她的朋友Jack、Emma去附近山上远足。天气突变，大雨倾盆，他们躲进洞穴避雨，却发现应急手电筒遗落在路上。雨停后，山路被泥石流阻断，手机也没有信号。他们沿小溪前行，Emma不慎扭伤脚踝。Lily和Jack用临时担架抬着Emma艰难前进，最终发现村庄并获救。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Lily和Jack交换了一下焦虑的眼神，脑子里都在争分夺秒地想办法。”可知，第一段可描写Lily和Jack没有抛下Emma不管，而是想出办法处理了Emma的伤处，并带着Emma一同艰难前行。
②由第二段首句内容“就在他们感到又累又饿的时候，Lily看到了远处的一个村庄。”可知，第二段可描写他们找到了通往村庄的小路，赶紧走过去，村民们帮助了他们，三人对友谊和勇气有了更深的领悟。
2. 续写线索：Lily和Jack想办法——Lily和Jack救助Emma——三人艰难前行——Lily发现村庄——三人前往村庄，得到帮助——领悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①查看：look through/go over
②找到：find/discover
③到达：reach/get to
④提供：provide/give/offer
情绪类
①决心：determination/resolve/resolution
②高兴：joy/delight/happiness
【点睛】[高分句型1] Heart pounding with hope, they made their way towards it. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
[高分句型2] To their joy, they found a well-used path that led down the village. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[调研10]（24-25高三上·河北沧州·阶段练习）荒野遇险：机智应对，友谊照亮求生之路
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the golden mist of late summer, Frank and John, two inseparable friends, set off on an adventure they had particularly planned for weeks: a camping trip by the river. The air was filled with excitement as they packed their backpacks with essentials—tents, cookers, and a map, though they were confident in their knowledge of the area, having explored its boundaries since childhood.
As the sun began its fall, casting long shadows across the green landscape, they arrived at their chosen spot—a quiet bend in the river, far from civilization’s noisiness. They set up camp, and the crackling of the campfire and the gentle lapping of water against the shore were their only companions. Under a starry sky, they shared stories and dreams, unaware that their comfortable escape was about to take a dangerous turn.
The following morning, as they ventured deeper into the woods to gather firewood, the sky, which had been clear and blue, turned frightening, with heavy clouds gathering. In the distance, a low, powerful, rolling thunder echoed (回响) through the valley, a warning they should have noticed. Not frightened, they continued, their laughter now was drowned out by the growing roar(咆哮) of the river.
It happened swiftly. A wall of water, caused by the storm, rushed down the river, catching them off guard. In a heartbeat, their return path was cut off, the once familiar place was transformed into a maze (迷宫) of rushing currents and mudslides. Panic rose within them, but Frank, always the calmer of the two, remembered a survival tip from his father: “When lost or in danger, stay put if possible, assess your resources, and think reasonably.”
With the river too dangerous to cross, they came back to higher ground, seeking shelter beneath a rocky overhang. As the rain pounded down, they gathered together, their spirits dampened but not defeated. John remembered another crucial lesson: using natural resources for survival. He suggested they start a fire using dry leaves and branches they had collected before the storm and they managed to light a small flame, providing warmth and a light of hope.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The new sunrise brought new challenges and opportunities for Frank and John to prove their courage.
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The next day, as hope was beginning to fade, a rescue helicopter appeared.
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【满分范文】
The new sun rise brought new challenges and opportunities for Frank and John to prove their courage. They crafted fishing hooks from bent wires found among their scattered belongings, cleverly attaching them to flexible branches to catch fish in the running river. The day was also marked by tireless efforts to signal for help, arranging branches and rocks into massive arrows that pointed toward their location, hoping these markers would catch the eye of a passing aircraft. Frank, with his keen observation skills, noticed patterns in the helicopter search patterns, suggesting they move closer to the riverbank during flyovers, increasing their chances of being spotted.
The next day, as hope was beginning to fade, a rescue helicopter appeared. The bright clothes they had hung between trees and the persistent smoke from their controlled fire served as a signal in the wilderness. As they were airlifted to safety, Frank and John looked at each other, their eyes reflecting a newfound appreciation for life, friendship, and the power of preparation and quick thinking in the face of disaster. The adventure was also a reminder that even in the most unexpected and dangerous circumstances, there is always a way out — if one remains calm, resourceful, and never loses sight of hope.
【导语】本文以野外遇险后自救为线索展开，讲述了两个形影不离的朋友Frank和John在一次夏末的一次河边露营的冒险之旅时，遇到暴风雨，河水把他们困住后，他们采取措施向外发出求救信号并最终被一架直升机发现而得救的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“新的日出给Frank和John带来了新的挑战和机会，证明了他们的勇气。”可知，第一段可描写Frank和John为了得救都做了什么，结合第二段提示的信息，此处讲述的措施中应涉及到直升机救援的相关信息。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，当希望开始变得渺茫时，一架救援直升机出现了。”可知，第二段可描写他们是如何被直升机发现的以及他们得救之后的感悟。
2.续写线索：想法捕食——发求救信号——直升机出现——被运送到安全地方——充满感激——人生感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①制作：crafted/make
②引起注意：catch the eye of/draw the attention of
③发现：spotted/find
情绪类
①感谢：appreciation/gratitude/be grateful
②意外：unexpected/surprising
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They crafted fishing hooks from bent wires found among their scattered belongings, cleverly attaching them to flexible branches to catch fish in the running river.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]. The day was also marked by tireless efforts to signal for help, arranging branches and rocks into massive arrows that pointed toward their location, hoping these markers would catch the eye of a passing aircraft.（运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导的定语从句以及省略that的宾语从句作hoping的宾语）
[高分句型3]. As they were airlifted to safety, Frank and John looked at each other, their eyes reflecting a newfound appreciation for life, friendship, and the power of preparation and quick thinking in the face of disaster.（运用了as引导的时间状语和独立主格结构）
[调研11]（2023秋·河南南阳·高二阶段练习）火海逃生：从绝望挣扎到祖孙的生命奇迹
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
Every fall, my family and I would mark dead trees, cut them down, haul (拉拽)the wood and store it in the basement. On Christmas eve, the basement was half full of dry wood. As usual, my sister Shelly and I were home from school, and she did as either of us had done a thousand times before: checked the stove in the hall, tossed a few more logs and slammed the stove door shut.
At the time, I was upstairs having a sink full of dishes to wash, homework to tackle and my grandfather, who was mentally disordered and hated by our family, to care for. Stomping(跺脚)around the kitchen, I thought about how I couldn’t wait to finish washing. The house seemed a little smoky, but that wasn’t unusual since it often went that way after the stove had new logs to chew up. I simply waved the smoke away and continued my business, meanwhile daydreaming of getting away from my grandfather. Suddenly, my sister Shelly hurried in and said, “Don’t you think it’s a little too smoky in here ” I shrugged, uttering nothing, and kept washing. But after another minute, I knew something went wrong.
Without a word to each other, we shot through the kitchen and stared in disbelief as smoke and flames boiled out from the hall. A flush of panic sweeping over me, I hurried Shelly to lead our grandfather out before I was ready to call 911. Unfortunately, my phone was dead. I glanced out the window and saw Shelly, in a sweeter, jeans and slippers and my grandfather, in pants, a T-shirt and socks, shivering in the bone-biting snow, with no place to await help. With the only neighbor living far away, we were likely to die in the freezing cold outside. But if we stayed inside, smoke would surely choke us. However, if I could get my grandfathers phone in his room and probably, if the flames didn’t spread far, there would be a slim chance of survival.
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Though overwhelmed by extreme panic, I decided to take a chance.
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Fire sent me into despair before the familiar figure of my grandfather came into my sight.
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Though overwhelmed by extreme panic, I decided to take a chance. The house was engulfed in an immense stream of flame, with roaring fire almost swallowing me. Fully aware as I was that a long and tough journey was ahead, I wasn’t defeated. Rather, I stooped and inched forward. After what seemed like a century, I reached the destination, alive. As the smoke thickened, I felt my throat and lungs burning. Glancing around the room, I located the phone and grabbed it immediately. Before I could celebrate, raging fire prepared to chew me up.
Fire sent me into despair before the familiar figure of my grandfather came into my sight. Fearless and swift, he shot through the flames, behaving like an iron man. With unwavering determination, he seized me and rushed out. Suddenly, house beams collapsed, striking him down. I summoned all my strength to lift him to his feet and supported him out. Finally, we made it. After that, my grandfather murmured unconsciously, “Fire consumed the Christmas gift for you.” I felt a lump in my throat and whispered, “You are the best Christmas gift!” This unforgettable experience forever reminds me to cherish those who shower us with boundless love.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述作者在圣诞节前夕和妹妹Shelly以及精神错乱的祖父呆在家里，突然家里大厅着火，里面冒出烟雾和火焰。作者一家躲在严寒的户外，想打电话911求救时才发现自己的手机没有电，而祖父的手机在着火的屋里面。
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