专题01读后续写进阶必备20个句型仿写（讲义）原卷版
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句型仿写精讲
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句型一: A sense(wave/flush/ripple) of +情绪n flooded over(swept over/surged through/seized) sb
例句：(2024新课标I&II卷)听到冈特的话，我心中涌起一股感激之情。
A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard Gunter’s words.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的判断是否过于草率。
_______________________________ Kevin, wondering if his judgment had been too hasty.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。
_______________________________ as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
句型二：with+宾语+宾语补足语
例句：他冲出了房间，心怦怦直跳，满脸通红。
He rushed out of the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷) 凯文紧张得心都提到了嗓子眼，他抓起希尔太太家的电话，拨打了警察的电话。
_______________________________, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷) 他手里拿着那块旧表，被那人焦虑的声音弄糊涂了，无助地看着格林先生。
_______________________________, he was confused by the man's anxious voice, helplessly looking at Mr. Green.
句型三：Done by sth, sb did sth
例句：Encouraged by my uncle’s words, I refitted my bait, and put the pole again into the water.在叔叔的话的鼓励下，我重新装上了鱼饵，又把鱼竿放进了水里。
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)被他们的热情和善良所感动，我走近他们，表达了我的钦佩和尊重。
_______________________________, I approached them and expressed my admiration and respect.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。
_______________________________, I waited for the film to start.
句型四：情绪名词1 gave way to 情绪名词2
例句：埃勒斯最终成功地将这只动物哄骗到他身边。紧张和恐惧让位于喜悦。
Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him. _______________________________.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷) 看到这些感人的场景，我之前的恐慌变成了尊重。
At the sight of the touching scenes, _______________________________.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷) 我早些时候感到的恐惧让位于对他们的奉献精神和善良深表敬意。
_______________________________a deep respect for their dedication and kindness.
句型五：So 情绪adj. was sb that +从句
例句：汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。
So sad was Tom that tears welled up in his eyes.
仿写1：我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。
_______________________________ that she lowered her head and murmured, “Sorry.”
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)凯文感到非常羞愧，他能感觉到鲜血涌上他的脸。
_______________________________ that he could feel the blood rush to his face.
句型六：What 情绪v. sb was that +从句
例句：让我生气的是，他竟然背叛了我们的友谊。
What angered me was that he betrayed our friendship.
仿写1：让他紧张的是，他即将面对一个大型的公众演讲。
_______________________________that he was about to face a large public speech.
仿写2：使他们担忧的是，天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。
_______________________________ that the weather forecast said there would be a heavy rainstorm tomorrow.
句型七：Much/Greatly to one’s 情绪n., sb did sth
例句：令家人惊讶的是，丹尼斯信守诺言！
Much to the family’s surprise, Dennis stuck to his promise!
仿写1：看到我的女儿在比赛中获得金牌，我深感骄傲。
_______________________________, I saw my daughter win a gold medal in the competition.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)令所有人惊讶的是，它就在那里——一块旧表，正如那人所描述的那样。
_______________________________, there it was—an old watch, just as the man had described.
句型八：情绪adj. and 情绪adj., sb did sth
例句：疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family.
仿写1：感到沮丧，挫败，汤姆在考试失败后独自坐在教室里。
_______________________________, Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)我惊讶地发现，那些骑自行车的人都很井然有序。
_______________________________, I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
句型九：Adj. as 主+谓, sb did sth
例句：虽然简很虚弱，但她加快了沿着溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。
Weak as Jane was, she picked up speed along the stream to find the way back.
仿写1：尽管他很害羞，但他还是鼓起勇气向女孩表白了。
_______________________________, he summoned up the courage to confess his feelings to the girl.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)尽管我仍然很紧张，但我试图让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。
_______________________________, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
句型十：Having done sth, sb did sth
例句：写完报告后，他关掉了电脑准备休息。
Having finished writing the report, he turned off the computer and prepared to rest.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷)格林先生叹了一口气，拿起木质地板条陪凯文去警察局。
_______________________________, Mr. Green picked the floorboard up and accompanied Kevin to the police.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷)留下电话号码后，我匆匆赶去赶公共汽车。当我回头看时，我看见他向我挥手告别。
_______________________________, I hurried to catch the bus. When I looked back, I saw him waving me goodbye.
句型十一：Sb did A, did B and did C
例句：拉里靠边停车，踩下刹车，拿起灭火器。
Larry pulled over, set the brake and got hold of the fire extinguisher.
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)中间休息时，其中一人甚至对我微笑，走近我，递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。
During the break, one of them even _______________________________ a booklet about their rescue work.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷)冈特慷慨地微笑着把我的道歉抛在一边，把手伸进夹克口袋，递给我一堆钱。
Gunter waved my apology aside with a generous smile, _______________________________ me a stack of money.
句型十二：Upon doing sth, sb did sth
on/upon后面的动名词多为：go, arrive, leave, reach, return, step, enter等。
例句：一听到这个好消息，学生们在教室里大声欢呼起来。
Upon hearing the good news, the students cheered loudly in the classroom.
仿写1：到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。
_______________________________, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.
仿写2：走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。
_______________________________, Jack heard the telephone ringing.
句型十三：Doing sth, sb did sth
例句：我和其中一位教官挽着手，帮助把这个年轻人从水里抬了出来
Linking arms with one of the instructors, I helped carry the young man out of the water.
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神，我深受感动，但也为之前的恐惧感到有点羞愧。
_______________________________, I was deeply touched but felt a bit ashamed of my earlier fear.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷) 深吸一口气，我设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。
_______________________________, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible.
句型十四：Sb said (replied/answered ...) in a +情绪形容词+voice, “…”
例句：苏珊用愧疚的声音向祖母道歉，“对不起。这是我的错。
Susan apologized to her grandmother in a guilty voice, “I’m sorry. It’s my fault.”
仿写1：她用兴奋的声音说：“我赢了比赛！”
She said in an excited voice, "_______________________________"
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) “别担心，”冈特用安抚的语气说，“我会想出办法的。”
"_______________________________," he said in a reassuring tone, "_______________________________."
句型十五：It was+被强调部分+that….
例句：It was on that day that he realized that what his son needed was nothing but company.
就是在那天，他才意识到他儿子需要的仅仅是陪伴。
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。
_______________________________ I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
仿写2：(2024浙江1月卷) 直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。
_______________________________ I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”.
句型十六：With growing +情绪n, Sb did sth
例句：随着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命！”
With growing anxiety, I shouted at the top of my lungs, “Help!”
仿写1：随着恐惧的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的营地。
_______________________________, Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible.
仿写2：随着对友情的珍视不断增长，她更加珍惜与朋友的时光。
_______________________________, she cherished her time with friends even more.
句型十七：简洁对话或独白
例句：我不是故意的，”她低声说。
“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)格林先生微笑着拍了拍他的肩膀，说：“凯文，你做得很好，你很勇敢。”
Mr. Green patted him on the shoulder with a smile, saying, “_______________________________”
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) 临别前，冈特掏出手机，拍拍我的肩膀，笑着说：“我们一起拍张照吧！”
Before parting, Gunter fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled “_______________________”
句型十八：No sooner…than…(部分倒装)
例句：直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。
No sooner had the rabbit got completely out of sight than we stopped chasing after it.
仿写1：(2024新课标I&II卷) 直到我们分手我才意识到冈特不仅是我的救命恩人，也是我的好朋友。
_______________________________ I realized that Gunter had not only been a lifesaver but also a wonderful friend.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)我刚安顿下来，就注意到一个骑自行车的人正在调整投影仪，另一个则抚摸着他身边的小狗。
_______________________________ I noticed a biker adjusting the projector and another petting a small dog by his side.
句型十九：表示时间、地点、天气等无生命词作主语
例句：我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)这段独特的经历教会了凯文如何正确处理道德困境。
_______________________________ taught Kevin how to properly deal with moral dilemmas.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) 这张照片至今仍放在我的桌子上，提醒我要相信他人，并给予善意。
_______________________________, which serves as a reminder of trusting others and offering kindness.
句型二十：It occurred to/dawned on sb that…（感悟内容）
例句：约翰突然想到，他可以用旧家具来做他的艺术项目。
It dawned on John that he could use the old furniture for his art project.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷)从那时起，伊娃不再被这座建筑的大小所压倒，而是将其视为一项需要克服的挑战。
One lap at a time did work! So did one floor a week! _______________________________ goals are easier to achieve in small steps.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)凯文突然意识到，生活不仅仅是激动人心的；它还涉及勇气、责任和理解。
_______________________________ life held more than just excitement; it also involved courage, responsibility and understanding.
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【仿写精炼1】（24-25高三上·湖北·期末）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Forty or so years ago, Andreas was born in a little village in Northern Greece, Macedonia, a village where old stone buildings could tell stories of a thousand years past and where tradition stayed strong and religious festivities are upheld with the highest honor. Andreas’ parents gave it all to support his brother to go to a medical college, which made life difficult for this family. When other children in the village played with toys, the only “toys” Andreas had access to were his brother’s medical textbooks. His mother often sat by the flickering candlelight, telling stories of bravery and hope. His father worked tirelessly to support the family.
When I first met Andreas, it was Christmas day this year. For Andreas, a dedicated doctor, it was simply another day spent in a white-walled hospital. In the corner of Andreas’ office sat an evergreen tree decorated with ribbons and fairy lights. But for Andreas, just like last Christmas, he would rather not enjoy the Christmas lights. Instead, he was surrounded by flashes of red from arriving ambulances and beeping bedside monitors.
He shared with me his childhood hatred towards Santa Claus. “But, why did you hate Santa Was it because you knew he wasn’t real ” I asked Andreas. “No!” Andreas laughed out loud. “It was because Santa never brought me Christmas gifts! Santa brought the other children gifts, but nothing for me. Never. Nothing!” He threw his head back, and I couldn’t help but join the broken heart of the boy who hated Santa Claus.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With a hint of sadness, Andreas continued to explain, “During my childhood, my parents couldn’t afford to buy me gifts.”
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His appetite for reading and the example his brother set inspired him to study hard and become a doctor.
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【仿写精炼2】（24-25高三上·山东临沂·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The minute we got into the taxi, I had a bad feeling. The driver asked me to fasten the kid’s safety belt after I already had. His half-violent attitude made me uncomfortable.
Lev was almost 4 then. Unlike me, he cared less about the driver and focused mainly on the scenery along the way. He sang quietly to himself with his short legs waving in the air. At one point, his right sandal (凉鞋) hit the taxi’s plastic ashtray, knocking it over onto the floor. It was empty; nothing spilled. I had already bent to pick it up when the driver stopped the car suddenly, turned around to us and, with his face really close to my son’s face, began screaming. “You stupid kid. You broke my car!”
“Hey, are you crazy or something ” I shouted at the driver. “Yelling (大喊) at a 3-year-old because of a piece of plastic Turn around and start driving, or I swear, next week you will not be driving any public vehicle, you hear me ” When I saw that he was about to say something, I added, “Shut your mouth now and drive!”
The driver gave me a hateful look. I could sense he was weighing the choice between hitting me in the face and losing his job. After a long moment’s silence, he took a deep breath, turned around, and drove on.
On the taxi’s radio, somebody was singing “Don’t Worry, Be Happy,” but I felt very far from happy. I looked at Lev and tried to find another ray of light in that unpleasant ride, but I couldn’t. I smiled at Lev and held his hand. He looked at me hard, but didn’t smile back. “Daddy,” he asked, “what did the man say ”
“The man said,” I answered quickly, as if it were nothing, “that when you’re riding in a car, you have to watch how you move your legs so you don’t break anything.” Lev nodded, looked out the window and a second later asked, “And what did you say to the man ”
“Me ” I said to Lev, trying to gain a little time. “I told the man that he was right, but that he should say quietly and politely, and not yell.”
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“But you yelled at him,” Lev said, confused.
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The driver the car and turned around.
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21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题01读后续写进阶必备20个句型仿写（讲义）解析版
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句型仿写精讲
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句型一: A sense(wave/flush/ripple) of +情绪n flooded over(swept over/surged through/seized) sb
例句：(2024新课标I&II卷)听到冈特的话，我心中涌起一股感激之情。
A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard Gunter’s words.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的判断是否过于草率。
A complex sense of guilt flooded over Kevin, wondering if his judgment had been too hasty.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。
A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
句型二：with+宾语+宾语补足语
例句：他冲出了房间，心怦怦直跳，满脸通红。
He rushed out of the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷) 凯文紧张得心都提到了嗓子眼，他抓起希尔太太家的电话，拨打了警察的电话。
With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷) 他手里拿着那块旧表，被那人焦虑的声音弄糊涂了，无助地看着格林先生。
With the old watch clutched in his hand, he was confused by the man's anxious voice, helplessly looking at Mr. Green.
句型三：Done by sth, sb did sth
例句：Encouraged by my uncle’s words, I refitted my bait, and put the pole again into the water.在叔叔的话的鼓励下，我重新装上了鱼饵，又把鱼竿放进了水里。
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)被他们的热情和善良所感动，我走近他们，表达了我的钦佩和尊重。
Touched by their passion and kindness, I approached them and expressed my admiration and respect.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。
Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start.
句型四：情绪名词1 gave way to 情绪名词2
例句：埃勒斯最终成功地将这只动物哄骗到他身边。紧张和恐惧让位于喜悦。
Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him. Nervousness and fear gave way to joy.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷) 看到这些感人的场景，我之前的恐慌变成了尊重。
At the sight of the touching scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷) 我早些时候感到的恐惧让位于对他们的奉献精神和善良深表敬意。
The fear I had felt earlier gave away to a deep respect for their dedication and kindness.
句型五：So 情绪adj. was sb that +从句
例句：汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。
So sad was Tom that tears welled up in his eyes.
仿写1：我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。
So guilty was my mom that she lowered her head and murmured, “Sorry.”
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)凯文感到非常羞愧，他能感觉到鲜血涌上他的脸。
So ashamed was Kevin that he could feel the blood rush to his face.
句型六：What 情绪v. sb was that +从句
例句：让我生气的是，他竟然背叛了我们的友谊。
What angered me was that he betrayed our friendship.
仿写1：让他紧张的是，他即将面对一个大型的公众演讲。
What made him nervous was that he was about to face a large public speech.
仿写2：使他们担忧的是，天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。
What worried them was that the weather forecast said there would be a heavy rainstorm tomorrow.
句型七：Much/Greatly to one’s 情绪n., sb did sth
例句：令家人惊讶的是，丹尼斯信守诺言！
Much to the family’s surprise, Dennis stuck to his promise!
仿写1：看到我的女儿在比赛中获得金牌，我深感骄傲。
Greatly to my pride, I saw my daughter win a gold medal in the competition.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)令所有人惊讶的是，它就在那里——一块旧表，正如那人所描述的那样。
To everyone’s astonishment, there it was—an old watch, just as the man had described.
句型八：情绪adj. and 情绪adj., sb did sth
例句：疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family.
仿写1：感到沮丧，挫败，汤姆在考试失败后独自坐在教室里。
Frustrated and defeated, Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)我惊讶地发现，那些骑自行车的人都很井然有序。
Surprised and amazed, I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
句型九：Adj. as 主+谓, sb did sth
例句：虽然简很虚弱，但她加快了沿着溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。
Weak as Jane was, she picked up speed along the stream to find the way back.
仿写1：尽管他很害羞，但他还是鼓起勇气向女孩表白了。
Shy as he was, he summoned up the courage to confess his feelings to the girl.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)尽管我仍然很紧张，但我试图让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。
Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
句型十：Having done sth, sb did sth
例句：写完报告后，他关掉了电脑准备休息。
Having finished writing the report, he turned off the computer and prepared to rest.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷)格林先生叹了一口气，拿起木质地板条陪凯文去警察局。
Having let out a heavy sigh, Mr. Green picked the floorboard up and accompanied Kevin to the police.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷)留下电话号码后，我匆匆赶去赶公共汽车。当我回头看时，我看见他向我挥手告别。
Having left my phone number, I hurried to catch the bus. When I looked back, I saw him waving me goodbye.
句型十一：Sb did A, did B and did C
例句：拉里靠边停车，踩下刹车，拿起灭火器。
Larry pulled over, set the brake and got hold of the fire extinguisher.
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)中间休息时，其中一人甚至对我微笑，走近我，递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。
During the break, one of them even smiled at me, approached me and handed me a booklet about their rescue work.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷)冈特慷慨地微笑着把我的道歉抛在一边，把手伸进夹克口袋，递给我一堆钱。
Gunter waved my apology aside with a generous smile, reached into his jacket pocket and handed me a stack of money.
句型十二：Upon doing sth, sb did sth
on/upon后面的动名词多为：go, arrive, leave, reach, return, step, enter等。
例句：一听到这个好消息，学生们在教室里大声欢呼起来。
Upon hearing the good news, the students cheered loudly in the classroom.
仿写1：到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。
Upon arriving at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.
仿写2：走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。
Upon going out of the room, Jack heard the telephone ringing.
句型十三：Doing sth, sb did sth
例句：我和其中一位教官挽着手，帮助把这个年轻人从水里抬了出来
Linking arms with one of the instructors, I helped carry the young man out of the water.
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神，我深受感动，但也为之前的恐惧感到有点羞愧。
Seeing their hard work and dedication, I was deeply touched but felt a bit ashamed of my earlier fear.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷) 深吸一口气，我设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。
Taking a deep breath, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible.
句型十四：Sb said (replied/answered ...) in a +情绪形容词+voice, “…”
例句：苏珊用愧疚的声音向祖母道歉，“对不起。这是我的错。
Susan apologized to her grandmother in a guilty voice, “I’m sorry. It’s my fault.”
仿写1：她用兴奋的声音说：“我赢了比赛！”
She said in an excited voice, "I won the competition!"
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) “别担心，”冈特用安抚的语气说，“我会想出办法的。”
"Don't worry," he said in a reassuring tone, "I'll figure something out."
句型十五：It was+被强调部分+that….
例句：It was on that day that he realized that what his son needed was nothing but company.
就是在那天，他才意识到他儿子需要的仅仅是陪伴。
仿写1：(2025八省联考卷)正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。
It was through this brave adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
仿写2：(2024浙江1月卷) 直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。
It was not until then that I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”.
句型十六：With growing +情绪n, Sb did sth
例句：随着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命！”
With growing anxiety, I shouted at the top of my lungs, “Help!”
仿写1：随着恐惧的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的营地。
With growing fear, Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible.
仿写2：随着对友情的珍视不断增长，她更加珍惜与朋友的时光。
With growing appreciation for friendship, she cherished her time with friends even more.
句型十七：简洁对话或独白
例句：我不是故意的，”她低声说。
“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)格林先生微笑着拍了拍他的肩膀，说：“凯文，你做得很好，你很勇敢。”
Mr. Green patted him on the shoulder with a smile, saying, “You did more than just right, Kevin. You were brave.”
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) 临别前，冈特掏出手机，拍拍我的肩膀，笑着说：“我们一起拍张照吧！”
Before parting, Gunter fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled “Let's take a picture together!”
句型十八：No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…(部分倒装)
例句：直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。
No sooner had the rabbit got completely out of sight than we stopped chasing after it.
仿写1：(2024新课标I&II卷) 直到我们分手我才意识到冈特不仅是我的救命恩人，也是我的好朋友。
Hardly had we parted when I realized that Gunter had not only been a lifesaver but also a wonderful friend.
仿写2：(2025八省联考卷)我刚安顿下来，就注意到一个骑自行车的人正在调整投影仪，另一个则抚摸着他身边的小狗。
No sooner had I settled in than I noticed a biker adjusting the projector and another petting a small dog by his side.
句型十九：表示时间、地点、天气等无生命词作主语
例句：我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present.
仿写1：(2025浙江1月卷)这段独特的经历教会了凯文如何正确处理道德困境。
This unique experience taught Kevin how to properly deal with moral dilemmas.
仿写2：(2024新课标I&II卷) 这张照片至今仍放在我的桌子上，提醒我要相信他人，并给予善意。
This photo is still on my desk today, which serves as a reminder of trusting others and offering kindness.
句型二十：It occurred to/dawned on sb that…（感悟内容）
例句：约翰突然想到，他可以用旧家具来做他的艺术项目。
It dawned on John that he could use the old furniture for his art project.
仿写1：(2024浙江1月卷)从那时起，伊娃不再被这座建筑的大小所压倒，而是将其视为一项需要克服的挑战。
One lap at a time did work! So did one floor a week! It occurred to her that goals are easier to achieve in small steps.
仿写2：(2025浙江1月卷)凯文突然意识到，生活不仅仅是激动人心的；它还涉及勇气、责任和理解。
It dawned on Kevin that life held more than just excitement; it also involved courage, responsibility and understanding.
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句型仿写
语篇
精炼
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【仿写精炼1】（24-25高三上·湖北·期末）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Forty or so years ago, Andreas was born in a little village in Northern Greece, Macedonia, a village where old stone buildings could tell stories of a thousand years past and where tradition stayed strong and religious festivities are upheld with the highest honor. Andreas’ parents gave it all to support his brother to go to a medical college, which made life difficult for this family. When other children in the village played with toys, the only “toys” Andreas had access to were his brother’s medical textbooks. His mother often sat by the flickering candlelight, telling stories of bravery and hope. His father worked tirelessly to support the family.
When I first met Andreas, it was Christmas day this year. For Andreas, a dedicated doctor, it was simply another day spent in a white-walled hospital. In the corner of Andreas’ office sat an evergreen tree decorated with ribbons and fairy lights. But for Andreas, just like last Christmas, he would rather not enjoy the Christmas lights. Instead, he was surrounded by flashes of red from arriving ambulances and beeping bedside monitors.
He shared with me his childhood hatred towards Santa Claus. “But, why did you hate Santa Was it because you knew he wasn’t real ” I asked Andreas. “No!” Andreas laughed out loud. “It was because Santa never brought me Christmas gifts! Santa brought the other children gifts, but nothing for me. Never. Nothing!” He threw his head back, and I couldn’t help but join the broken heart of the boy who hated Santa Claus.
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With a hint of sadness, Andreas continued to explain, “During my childhood, my parents couldn’t afford to buy me gifts.”
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His appetite for reading and the example his brother set inspired him to study hard and become a doctor.
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【满分范文】
With a hint of sadness, Andreas continued to explain, “During my childhood, my parents couldn’t afford to buy me gifts.” I felt deep sympathy for Andreas as I imagined what it was like for him to watch all the other kids open their Christmas gifts. But his eyes softened as he recounted the memories of his childhood（无灵主语）, “My parents gave me the greatest gift of all — love and perseverance.” A gentle smile played on his lips（无灵主语）, reflecting a deep sense of gratitude and contentment（非谓语）. In the years without Christmas gifts, he passed the time reading his brother’s medical textbooks.
His appetite for reading and the example his brother set inspired him to study hard and become a doctor. Andreas excelled in his studies, fueled by the desire to change his fate（非谓语）. He pored over his brother’s medical textbooks, dreaming of one day wearing the white coat of a doctor（非谓语）. Now, Andreas is a senior surgeon, working tirelessly in the hospital. His busy figure embodies a firm belief that the greatest joy doesn’t come from receiving but from giving — saving lives, easing pain and bringing hope to those in despair（无灵主语）.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了四十年前，Andreas出生在希腊北部小村庄，家庭因供他哥哥上医学院而生活艰难。他儿时只能把哥哥的医学教科书作为“玩具”，而母亲常讲励志故事，父亲辛苦养家。今年圣诞节，身为医生的Andreas在医院值班。他向作者回忆起小时候讨厌圣诞老人，因为从未收到过圣诞礼物，当时父母买不起。但Andreas表示，父母给了他爱与毅力。儿时阅读医学教科书的经历，加上哥哥的榜样作用，促使他努力学习。如今，他成为资深外科医生，深信最大的快乐源自给予。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“带着一丝悲伤，Andreas继续解释道：‘在我小时候，我的父母没钱给我买礼物。’”可知，第一段可描写作者对Andreas的不幸遭遇感到同情，Andreas继而讲到家庭赋予自己的美好品质，充满感激。
②由第二段首句内容“他对阅读的渴望和他哥哥树立的榜样激励他努力学习，成为一名医生”可知，第二段可描写Andreas发奋学习，希望成为医生，改变自己的命运，现在他成了成功的医生，帮助病患。
2. 续写线索：Andreas解释圣诞礼物的事——作者感到同情——Andreas谈到自己的收获——Andreas渴望成为医生——Andreas努力学习——Andreas现在的成就
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①叙述：recount/narrate
②反映：reflect/indicate/reveal
③改变：change/alter/convert
④缓解：ease/alleviate/relieve
情绪类
①同情：sympathy/compassion
②感激：gratitude/gratefulness
③满意：contentment/satisfaction/gratification
【点睛】[高分句型1] I felt deep sympathy for Andreas as I imagined what it was like for him to watch all the other kids open their Christmas gifts. (as引导时间状语从句、what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] His busy figure embodies a firm belief that the greatest joy doesn’t come from receiving but from giving — saving lives, easing pain and bringing hope to those in despair. (that引导同位语从句)
【仿写精炼2】（24-25高三上·山东临沂·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The minute we got into the taxi, I had a bad feeling. The driver asked me to fasten the kid’s safety belt after I already had. His half-violent attitude made me uncomfortable.
Lev was almost 4 then. Unlike me, he cared less about the driver and focused mainly on the scenery along the way. He sang quietly to himself with his short legs waving in the air. At one point, his right sandal (凉鞋) hit the taxi’s plastic ashtray, knocking it over onto the floor. It was empty; nothing spilled. I had already bent to pick it up when the driver stopped the car suddenly, turned around to us and, with his face really close to my son’s face, began screaming. “You stupid kid. You broke my car!”
“Hey, are you crazy or something ” I shouted at the driver. “Yelling (大喊) at a 3-year-old because of a piece of plastic Turn around and start driving, or I swear, next week you will not be driving any public vehicle, you hear me ” When I saw that he was about to say something, I added, “Shut your mouth now and drive!”
The driver gave me a hateful look. I could sense he was weighing the choice between hitting me in the face and losing his job. After a long moment’s silence, he took a deep breath, turned around, and drove on.
On the taxi’s radio, somebody was singing “Don’t Worry, Be Happy,” but I felt very far from happy. I looked at Lev and tried to find another ray of light in that unpleasant ride, but I couldn’t. I smiled at Lev and held his hand. He looked at me hard, but didn’t smile back. “Daddy,” he asked, “what did the man say ”
“The man said,” I answered quickly, as if it were nothing, “that when you’re riding in a car, you have to watch how you move your legs so you don’t break anything.” Lev nodded, looked out the window and a second later asked, “And what did you say to the man ”
“Me ” I said to Lev, trying to gain a little time. “I told the man that he was right, but that he should say quietly and politely, and not yell.”
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“But you yelled at him,” Lev said, confused.
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The driver the car and turned around.
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【满分范文】
“But you yelled at him,” Lev said, confused. I was at a loss for words, realizing my son was correct. Taking a deep breath（非谓语）, I said, “You’re right, Lev. I did exactly what I told him not to do. I should not have raised my voice, no matter how upset I was.” （复合句） Lev looked at me thoughtfully and asked, “So why didn’t you talk quietly and politely like you told him to ” （对话） I hesitated for a moment and replied softly（动作链）, “Because sometimes adults don’t handle anger well, and I will try to do better next time.”Lev gave a small nod, still unsure, but he seemed to accept my explanation.
The driver stopped the car and turned around. He glanced at me briefly and then turned his head to Lev（动作链）, clearly still annoyed. “I overreacted earlier,” he muttered. “Sorry, kid.” Lev looked at him, his face serious（独立主格结构）, and said, “It’s okay, but next time, talk nicely. My dad says that’s better.” The driver blinked in surprise (介词短语) and then nodded, starting the car again without another word. I felt a sense of relief mixed with pride. Lev had reminded both the driver and me of a gentler approach to handling conflict.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，本文描述了父亲和儿子Lev在乘坐出租车时，与司机之间的冲突。父亲因司机对Lev不当的喊叫感到愤怒，但后来意识到了自己也在冲动中以不适当的方式回应了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但你对他大吼大叫，”列夫困惑地说。”可知，第一段侧重于描写儿子对父亲大喊行为的疑问，以及父亲对自身行为的反思。
②由第二段首句内容“我全速奔跑，人群冲着我大喊大叫”可知，第二段则通过司机的反应和孩子的回应展现了双方态度的转变。
2.续写线索：儿子说的话使得父亲反思——司机道歉，态度转变——父亲感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告诉：tell /inform
②处理：handle/deal with
③犹豫：hesitate/ waver
④启动：start/turn on
情绪类
①愤怒的：annoyed/angry
②不确定的：unsure/uncertain
【点睛】[高分句型1] I did exactly what I told him not to do. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The driver blinked in surprise and then nodded, starting the car again without another word. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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