Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents?单元作文专项训练（学案） 2025人教版英语八年级下册

Unit 4单元作文专项训练2025人教版英语八年级下册
简介：
这份文档围绕人教版英语八年级下册Unit 4 “Why don't you talk to your parents”展开作文专项训练，旨在提升学生的写作能力，强化对单元话题相关表达的运用。Unit 4聚焦于青少年在成长过程中与父母、朋友等相处时出现的沟通问题，以及如何解决这些问题。本专项训练紧扣单元话题，提供了8个不同情境和要求的写作任务，涵盖演讲稿、电子邮件、征文等多种体裁 。从如何成为阳光的人、帮助他人交朋友，到如何做积极的学生、更好的青少年，以及分享健康生活方式等内容，引导学生结合单元所学知识，围绕青少年成长中的自我提升、人际交往等方面进行写作。每个写作任务都给出了详细的要求，如包含要点、适当发挥、语句通顺、运用特定句型等，还提供了例文和写作步骤分析，帮助学生明确写作思路，积累亮点词汇和高分句型，逐步提升写作水平，使学生能够熟练运用英语表达对单元话题的理解和思考。
一、书面表达
1．现在很多青少年沉溺 (indulge in) 网络，不爱学习，不爱运动，不与人交际 (communicate)，爱吃垃圾食品等等，这些严重影响了他们的身心健康。为此，学校决定本周五下午举办一场主题为“我阳光，我健康”的演讲比赛。你也想参加这场演讲比赛，请根据下图提示以“How to Be a Sunny Person”为题写一篇演讲稿。
How to Be a Sunny Person Good hobbies: listening to music, drawing Less internet: fewer computer games, study
More sports: run, swim
Healthy habits: fruit, vegetables, wash hands…
Dream: …
要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。
4.词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. I am glad to be here to give you a report about how to be a sunny person.
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In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny person.
【答案】例文：
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. l am glad to be here to give you a speech about how to be a sunny person.
First of all, using the lnternet properly is important for us to be a sunny person. If we use less internet, we will play fewer computer games.We can use the lnternet to study instead of playing games. What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. In addition, it is good to develop good hobbies like drawing and listening to music. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Finally, we should also develop healthy eating habits. We can have more vegetables and fruits and wash our hands frequently.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，打招呼，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何成为一个阳光的人；
第三步，收尾并表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of代替
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. (it固定句式)
②If we use less internet, we will play fewer computer games. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．假如你是李华，你在校报上看到你们学校新来的Lisa说她很孤独，性格内向，不擅长交朋友，希望能得到帮助。请根据以下提示，给她写一封邮件，介绍一下你的好朋友Han Mei，希望她们能成为朋友，并对如何交朋友提出你的看法和建议。
要求：
1. 简单介绍韩梅的情况以及你们是好朋友的原因。
2. 你对如何交朋友的看法和建议。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 使用至少一个if 从句。
4. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息
Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, welcome to our school. I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, welcome to our school. I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely. Don’t worry, let me help you. I have a good friend and her name is Han Mei. She is more outgoing and friendly. She is always ready to help others and she often helps to bring out the best in me, so she is a good friend. If you can make friends with her, you’ll have fun together.
How to make friends Here is some advice. First, if you are shy, you can ask the teachers for help. What’s more, you must be friendly to your classmates, try to help them if they have problems. Last but not least, you can also join the school clubs. If you are in the clubs, you will make some friends because you have the same interest.
What do you think of my advice Hope you can make good friends and feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，简单介绍韩梅的情况以及成为好朋友的原因；
第二步，介绍如何交朋友的看法和建议；
第三步，书写结尾，提出希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do准备做……
②bring out 激发，使显现
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①She is always ready to help others and she often helps to bring out the best in me, so she is a good friend.（so连接的因果并列句）
②If you are in the clubs, you will make some friends because you have the same interest.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．学校英语报正在开展以“To be an active student”为主题的英语征文活动，请你根据以下图表，写一篇英文短文，向校刊投稿。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
To be an active student
As a junior high student, it is very important to be active. But how to be an active student
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【答案】例文：
To be an active student
As a junior high student, it is very important to be active. But how to be an active student
Firstly, we need to eat different kinds of fruits and vegetables and play sports to keep healthy. Secondly, it is necessary to be kind to others. We will make lots of friends and it can also help us live happily. Thirdly, having hobbies like painting, reading or playing an instrument can make our life more wonderful. Fourthly, you should have a nice dream and work hard for it. Lastly, we can help others often. Stay active and enjoy your time. It must be nice and unforgettable.
In a word, let’s work harder and try to be an active student from today on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段介绍做一个积极的学生的方法；
第二步，详细介绍如何能成为一名积极的学生，从生活、社交、爱好等方面介绍；
第三步，写出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②be kind to others对其他人友好
③help us live happily帮助我们幸福地生活
④from today on从今天开始
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, having hobbies like painting, reading or playing an instrument can make our life more wonderful. (动名词作主语)
②Stay active and enjoy your time. (祈使句)
4．作为新时代青少年，我们应当以“爱国爱家，向上向善”为目标不断提升自己。近期，学校英语报以“How to Be a Better Teenager”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据下图提示，写一篇英文短文投稿。词数80词左右。
要求：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥一至两点，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
How to Be a Better Teenager
As a middle school student, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Be a Better Teenager
As a middle school student, being a better teenager means a lot to us. First of all, it’s important for us to love our country. We should be quiet when we watch the national flag go up and be proud of Chinese culture. Then, we should love our family. Helping with housework is a good way to show our love for our parents. Also, we need to study hard and read more books to improve ourselves so that we can help to make our country better in the future. We should always be kind to others. For example, we can help old people cross the road. Last but not least, we must do more exercise to keep healthy. It’s the most important thing if we want to make the world better.
In a word, we should try our best to be a better teenager.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 表明做更好的青少年的意义；
第二步， 详细列举如何成为更好的青少年；
第三步， 适当增加细节，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of...对……感到骄傲
②so that以便，为了
③Last but not least最后但同样重要的一点
[高分句型]
①First of all, it’s important for us to love our country.(it作形式主语)
②We should be quiet when we watch the national flag go up and be proud of Chinese culture.(when引导时间状语)
③Also, we need to study hard and read more books to improve ourselves so that we can help to make our country better in the future.(so that引导目的状语)
5．假设你是李华，你学校英语俱乐部正在开展“我是健康达人”主题活动。请根据以下图示提示，写一篇题为“Healthy life, Better future.”的演讲稿，参加俱乐部举行的演讲比赛。词数80。
注意事项：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地点。
Healthy Life, Better Future.
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to share my healthy life with all of you.
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That’s all about my healthy life! Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Healthy Life, Better Future. Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to share my healthy life with all of you.
I always go to bed early and get up early to make sure I have enough sleep. And before going to bed, I usually read for a while. It helps me with my studies. I usually exercise three times a week. I love playing basketball and swimming. On weekends, I often take part in community service. I volunteer at a nursing home near my house. I chat with old people. We sing songs and play games together.
Let’s develop good habits and enjoy a healthy life together!
That’s all about my healthy life! Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示，介绍自己的健康生活方式；
第三步，号召大家一起养成良好的习惯，享受健康的生活并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go to bed去睡觉
②make sure确保
③on weekends在周末
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
I always go to bed early and get up early to make sure I have enough sleep. (宾语从句)
6．亲爱的同学们，进入新的一年，我们都期许成为更好的自己。学校英语专栏以“Making myself better”为题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1）介绍你将怎样变得更好（可以从生活习惯、性格爱好、知识学习、保护自然、恰当使用网络几方面说明）；
注意：至少2至3方面
2）阐述你的理由；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数100左右。
Making myself better
Every day is valuable and should be made good use of to make myself better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Making myself better
Every day is valuable and should be made good use of to make myself better.
Firstly, good living habits are important to me. Therefore, I’ll sleep and get up early. Secondly, I’m going to eat more vegetables and less meat, because eating healthily matters a lot. What’s more, I also plan to develop a habit of reading different kinds of books because reading can make me know what’s going on around the world. It helps open my mind, too. The more books I read, the more knowledge I will get. Last but not least, I will avoid playing games online because it is a waste of time and does harm to my eyes.
I’m sure that I’ll meet a better me in the new year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己新的一年会变更好；
第二步，从不同的方面具体阐述怎样成为更好的自己，并说明理由；
第三步，展望未来，给自己树立信心。
[亮点词汇]
①are important to 对……很重要
②develop a habit of... 养成……的习惯
③avoid playing games 避免玩游戏
④a waste of time 浪费时间
[高分句型]
①I’m going to eat more vegetables and less meat. (一般将来时)
②The more books I read, the more knowledge I will get. (the 比较级...，the 比较级...)
②I’m sure that I’ll meet a better me in the new year. (that引导宾语从句)
7．青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设社会主义现代化的未来栋梁。拥有一个快乐、有价值的人生，对青少年和整个民族都具有重要意义。请根据以下要点和要求，从中学生的角度，以“How to live a happy life”为题写一篇短文。
1. 要点：
(1) Have healthy living habits;
(2) Have a good hobby;
(3) Have a wonderful dream.
2. 要求：
（1）文章须包含以上所有要点，可作适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数100左右。
How to live a happy life
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【答案】例文
How to live a happy life
To live a happy life, having healthy living habits is important.
We should get enough sleep, eat balanced meals, and exercise regularly. These habits keep our bodies strong and minds sharp. What’s more, having a good hobby can bring joy and relaxation into our lives. Whether it’s playing a musical instrument, painting, or playing sports, hobbies offer an escape from daily stress and improve our mood. Finally, having a wonderful dream gives us purpose. Dreams inspire us to work hard and achieve great things.
In a word, combine healthy habits, enjoyable hobbies, and meaningful dreams to live a truly happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to live a happy life”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍过上快乐生活的重要性，明确三个要点：健康的生活习惯、良好的爱好和美好的梦想；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more 此外
②inspire sb to do sth 鼓舞某人做某事
③work hard 努力工作
④In a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①To live a happy life, having healthy living habits is important.（不定式表目的）
②In a word, combine healthy habits, enjoyable hobbies, and meaningful dreams to live a truly happy life.（并列结构）
8．在综合阅读中，我们了解到八段锦及其好处。练习八段锦能帮助我们保持健康，健康的体魄是人们从事日常活动的基础。为了进一步增强中学生的健康意识，学校组织了一场以”健康”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“How to keep healthy”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）应包括所有提示要点， 可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
（3）写作词数为80左右。
How to keep healthy
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【答案】例文
How to keep healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy. But how can we keep healthy Here are my ideas.
First, we should have healthy eating habits, such as eating more fresh fruit and vegetables and having breakfast every morning. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food. Second, we should do more exercise. It is good for the mind and the body. We can run for half an hour every day. Besides, enough rest is important.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，还需适当补充信息，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出“我们应该如何保持健康”的问题；
第二步，介绍为了保持健康应该做的事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be good for对……有好处
③mind and the body身心
[高分句型]
First, we should have healthy eating habits, such as eating more fresh fruit and vegetables and having breakfast every morning.（动名词作宾语）
第1页，共3页
第1页，共3页