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人教新目标版 八年级(下册)
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Learning Objectives
1.能够通过所学2b课文正确地完成句子填空；通过观看视频，能够正确地回答问题，完成句子填空；通过阅读所给例文，能够划分文章层次，说出写作要素和写作内容，能够说出写作记叙文的5个问句。
2.通过观看视频，能够正确地回答问题，完成3a写作笔记，能够把学过的语言用回答问题的形式进行梳理，再按照3b的写作框架提示完整地描写件难忘且重要的事，说明时间、地点、事件过程以及为什么自己记得这么清楚。
3.能够根据3a笔记和写作指导，能就本单元的话题进行写作，能够写一篇关于北京冬奥会事件的记叙文。通过写过去的故事激励自己关心生活、关注社会，能够在别人困难之计施予援手，珍惜过，活在当下。
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Activity 1
Lead to objective 1 test it
Look and fill
评价标准：根据所学课文完成句子填空，正确填出每个问题得1分，共6分。加上下1页，此活动共14分。 我得（ ）分。
Fill in the blanks according to 2b.
Martin Luther King was______ in_________on April 4, 1968.
Event
Robert was_______________
with his parents_______he
heard the news on the radio.
People’s
activities
His parents were_________________
and finished the dinner___________.
People’s
feeling
killed
America
eating dinner
when
completely shocked
in silence
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Activity 1
Lead to objective 1 test it
Look and fill
评价标准：根据所学课文完成句子填空，正确填出每个问题得1分，共8分。加上上1页，此活动共14分。 我得（ ）分。
Fill in the blanks according to 2b.
___ September 11, 2001, the World Trade Center in _________was
_____________by terrorists.
Event
People’s
activities
Kate was_________in her office. Her friend shouted a plane just____the two towers.
People’s
feeling
She didn’t_________at first.She was so______that she could hardly
______________after that.
On
New York
taken down
working
hit
believe
scared
think clearly
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Activity 2
Lead to objective 1 test it
Watch and say
评价标准：观看视频回答问题，正确回答出每个问题得1分，共4分。此活动共4分。 我得（ ）分。
1. What event is the video talking about
2. When did the event start
3.Do you remember what you
were doing when this event
happened
4. Do you remember how you
felt at that time
Opening ceremony of Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games.
February 4th, 2022 at 8 PM.
I was watching TV/….
I felt excited/happy/proud/….
Let’s watch a video and answer the questions.
.
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Activity 3
Lead to objective 1 test it
Look and fill
评价标准：根据视频内容和自己实际情况完成句子填空，正确填出每个问题得1分，共6分。此活动共6分。 我得（ ）分。
Fill in the blanks according to the video.
___ February 4, _____, Opening ceremony of Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games ___________ in Harbin.
Event
On
2022
was held
People’s
activities
I was__________________
_________________ when I saw the news on TV.
playing the
computer games
People’s
feeling
I felt really ______ to see
this news. My parents were ___________________by the opening ceremony performance.
excited
completely shocked
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Activity 4
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Read and say
评价标准：读范文划分层次，正确划分出3个层次得3分，说出每个层次的内容再得3分，共6分。此活动共6分。 我得（ ）分。
Learn the structure （学习结构）
How many parts are included in the passage
An Important Event in 2022
An important event in 2022 that I remember well was Opening ceremony of Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games . It was held on the night of February 4th,2022 in Harbin.
When the opening began, I was playing computer games when I saw the news on TV, my parents were watching TV about it. The performances were wonderful with many elements of technology.The white five rings rised from the ice.
I felt really excited to see this news. My parents were completely shocked by the opening ceremony performance.The opening ceremony showed the development and progress of China's technology.I am proud of our motherland.
Beginning
Body
Ending
write about the event
write about people’s activities
write about the importance
Example writing.
three
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Activity 5
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Look and say
评价标准：根据例文和所学，用问句来说出文章应该包含的内容，正确说出1个问句得1分，共5分。此活动共5分。 我得（ ）分。
Example writing.
Analyze the content（分析内容）
What should be included in the passage
5W：what, when, where, what, why
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Activity 6
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Look and say
评价标准：再读例文找出5个问题表达的内容，正确找出1个问题表达的内容得1分，共5分。此活动共5分。 我得（ ）分。
Example writing.
Read and mark the content （内容）
An Important Event in 2022
An important event in 2022 that I remember well was Opening ceremony of Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games . It was held on the night of February 4th,2022 in Harbin.
When the opening began, I was playing computer games when I saw the news on TV, my parents were watching TV about it. The performances were wonderful with many elements of technology.The white five rings rised from the ice.
I felt really excited to see this news. My parents were completely shocked by the opening ceremony performance.The opening ceremony showed the development and progress of China's technology.I am proud of our motherland.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
Why is this event important
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Lead to objective 1
Look and say
Example writing.
Review the whole structure.
write about an important event
Beginning:
write about the event
Body:
write about people’s activities
Ending:
write about the importance
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
Why is this event
important
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Activity 7
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Pre-writing
评价标准：观看视频回答问题，正确回答出每个问题得1分，共3分。此活动共3分。 我得（ ）分。
Enjoy the video,then answer the questions.
1.What was the event
2.Where did it happen
3.When did it happen
1000-meter race.
Last November.
In the school.
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Activity 8
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Pre-writing
评价标准：根据3a给出的问题说出这些问题属于文章的哪一部分(Beginning, Body, Ending)，正确说出1个问题得1分，共7分。此活动共7分。 我得（ ）分。
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
Beginning (Event)
event
time
place
Facts (事实情况）
Body(People's activities)
Details
(细节信息）
activities
Ending(People's
feeling &reason)
reasons
Meaning
(意义影响）
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Activity 9
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Pre-writing
评价标准：根据表格提供的问题回答问题做笔记，正确回答出每个问题得1分，共7分。此活动共7分。 我得（ ）分。
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
1000-meter race
Last November
In the school
I was running
They were shouring …
Because it tells me not to give up
Because I can't get the good prize without friends‘ encourgement
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Activity 10
Lead to objective 2 test it
While writing
评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记结合3b结构写一篇文章介绍我(Jack)的一个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
3b
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
Paragraph 1
what event it was
the time
the place
①
Facts (事实情况）
Paragraph 2
use the past progressive tense
be the same as the above
②
Details (细节信息）
Paragraph 3
the reason
③
Meaning (意义影响）
Beginning (Event)
Body(People's activities)
Ending(People's feeling &reason)
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记结合3b结构写一篇文章介绍我(Jack)的一个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 10
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While writing
Do you know how to write the kind of passage
What were you and your friends doing at that time
I was running.
My friends were shouting loudly to cheer me on.
Why is it very important to you
While I was running, my friends were shouting to cheer me on.
I was so tired that I wanted to give up.
My friends kept encouraging me.
I tried my best to run and at last I got the first prize.
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记结合3b结构写一篇文章介绍我(Jack)的一个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 10
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While writing
Do you know how to write the kind of passage
写作句式和模式
what,when and where it happened
you and your friends’ activities
why it was important
I remember well /I will never
forget was ______.It happened
in/ on________at\in ________.
I was _______________ My friends were _____________.\I was doing ______________while my friends were doing _________________.
This event is very important to me because ____.\I remember this event well because______\I really learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _________.
第一段：
Introduction
(引入)
第二段：
details of
the event
(事件的详
细过程)
第三段：
reasons
(原因)
事件
时间
地点
事件发生时我在的地方
我朋友在的地方
事件发生时我在做的事
事件发生时朋友在做的事
原因
原因
原因
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记结合3b结构写一篇文章介绍我(Jack)的一个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 10
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Do you know how to write the kind of passage
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记再写一篇文章介绍北京冬奥会这个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 11
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Write an article according to the notes.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
on February 4, 2022.
at Bird Nest(鸟巢) in Beijing
I was having dinner.
My friengs are watching TV.
It was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games
We won the most gold medals.
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记再写一篇文章介绍北京冬奥会这个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 12
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Do you know how to write the kind of passage
话题分析
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
人称时态
第一人称
一般过去时和过去进行时为主
人称
时态
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记再写一篇文章介绍北京冬奥会这个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 12
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谋篇布局
an event
开篇点题
具体描述
总结全文
开门见山陈述这件最令你难忘的事件(What, Where, When)
An important event that I remember well was ___________
__________________________________. It happened in/on __________________ at/in ___________________.
描述当事件发生时你和你的一些朋友正在做什么和感受。(Where, When, What, feelings)
When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened, I was____________________________. My friends were______________.
写出这件事为什么重要的原因。(Why)
This event is very important to me because _____________
__________________________________________________. I remember this event well because ___________________________.
of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games
the opening
on February 4, 2022
Bird Nest in Beijing
having dinner with my parents
watching TV
the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games
it was
we won the most gold medals
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评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记再写一篇文章介绍北京冬奥会这个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 11
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范文欣赏
The important event that I can remember well was the opening of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. It happened at Bird Nest-The National Stadium(鸟巢-国家体育场) in Beijing on February 4, 2022. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When the opening began, my parents and I were having dinner. My friends were watching TV.We finished it quickly, then we sat in front of the TV to watch it. It was great.
The 2008 Olympic Games was very important for the Chinese. Because it was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games. It has also made Beijing the world's first city of double Olympics. We won the most gold medals. It showed that our country was becoming stronger and stronger.
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Activity 11
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While writing
评价标准：根据视频内容3a笔记再写一篇文章介绍北京冬奥会这个重要事件，注意时态分段，书写没有错误最高得15分，共15分。此活动共15分。 我得（ ）分。
Let’s evaluate.
评分原则
本题总分15分，按各档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容、质量初步确定档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；
评分时应考虑：内容要点是否完整；时态，语态及人称是否正确；词汇和句式的多样性以及语言的准确性；上下文的连贯性；
如书写较差，影响表达，应视其影响程度，降低一到两个档次；英美两种拼法及词汇用法都可接受；
内容要点可用不同方式表达，应紧扣主题，可适当发挥。
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评价标准：根据语境和上下文选择词汇完成短文，正确选择出1个空格得1分，共10分。此活动共10分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 12
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Choose and fill.
Coco's Composition
an
was
worried
forgot
When
was sitting
decided
sorry
learn
to prepare
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评价标准：根据语境和上下文选择when和while完成句子，正确填出1个空格得1分，共5分。此活动共5分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 13
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Self Check
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw
a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed
it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
消失
也 too
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评价标准：根据上下文用所给单词的适当形式填空，正确填出1个空格得1分，共17分。此活动共17分。 我得（ ）分。
Activity 14
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2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I _______________ (play), everyone ____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ____ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ____ (win)! It ____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
was playing
sat
waited
heard
beat
won
was
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Watch and say
Lead to objective 3
After writing
How can we help each other in times of difficulty
cheer them up
give away clothes and food
raise money
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Look and say
Lead to objective 3
After writing
Remember the following words.
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Language points
After writing
But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
point out 指出
point out是“动词+副词”型短语。代词作宾语时，只能放在point与out 之间。
This is a photo of my family. Can you point me out
The teacher pointed out many mistakes in my homework.
【拓展延伸】point to意为“指向”，所指的物体较远，point at意为“指着”，所指的物体较近。
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Self-evaluation
本节课共119 分 ，我共得（ ）分。
我的评价等级（在等级括号内打钩）：
获得至少100分 ，优秀（ ）；
获得至少90分 ，良好（ ）；
获得至少80分 ，合格（ ）。
【学后反思】
一、完成自我评价表：
1.本节课我写了作文有___________篇，能完全写完的作文有：___________________________________________________篇; 还不能写完的有：___________________________________________________________________________篇
2.对我有帮助的学习方法有（请在括号里打钩）：
( )(1)能通过老师的写作指导，学会了写作文
( )(2)通过自己评价修改作文和同伴批改作文，学会了和同学合作
( )(3)通过本节课得作文练习，知道了如何写一篇重大事件的文章
( )(4)通过本节课学习，知道了想写好作文，要积累一些重要句型等。
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Homework
基础性作业：复习Unit 5，整理笔记本，清理错题本，和同桌抽一抽词汇积累本。
实践性作业: 用英语写一篇文章记录另一件2023中让你难忘的事。
拓展性作业：上网搜索2023年世界发生的重要的事，挑选其中的三件并用英语记录这件事情和你的感受。
