2025中考英语热门写作话题(学校生活)写作指导+词汇、句子积累+实战演练2篇

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2025中考英语热门写作话题(学校生活)写作指导+词汇、句子积累+实战演练2篇
【课标说明】
该话题属于《义务教育英语课程标准》中“人与自我”主题范畴里“生活与学习”这一主题群,主要涉及“丰富多彩、安全且有意义的学校生活” 。这一话题的目的在于引导学生热爱学校,积极投身于校园活动,以此丰富自身的校园生活,提升各项能力,进而更高效地投入到校园学习当中。
【命题探索】
综合全国近年来的中考真题来看,此话题属于高频考点。其常见的命题角度包含以下几个方面:
1. 介绍学校基本情况:涵盖学校的地理位置、校园环境、各类建筑设施等内容。比如描述学校周边的交通状况、校园内的绿化情况、教学楼的布局和特色设施等。
2. 介绍学生学校生活:涉及日常的学习安排、课程体验、课余活动等。像每天的课程表、对不同学科的学习感受、课间休息时的活动等都在此范畴。
3. 介绍校园活动:包含运动会、艺术节、科技节等各种活动。具体介绍活动的组织形式、参与过程、活动中令人印象深刻的瞬间等。
4. 对学习的看法:探讨学习的意义、学习方法、学习过程中的困难与挑战等。例如分享自己对学习新知识的理解,讲述有效的学习技巧,以及如何克服学习中遇到的难题。
【作文题目】
假定你是学校英语报小记者李华,上周学校开展了“English Day”活动,请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道,介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。
注意事项
1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
【写作指导】
第一步 细审题 定要点(五审法:审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点)
1. 审人称:以第一人称为主。在描述活动和同学们的感受时,使用 “I”“we” 等第一人称代词,让读者更有代入感。
2. 审时态:以一般过去时为主。因为活动是上周已经开展的,所以描述活动过程和同学们的感受都要用一般过去时。
3. 审主题:介绍“English Day”活动的情况及同学们的感受。重点要突出活动的内容、参与情况以及同学们对活动的看法和收获。
4. 审文体:应用文。本次写作是为学校英语报写报道,属于应用文范畴,要注意语言简洁明了,格式规范。
5. 定要点:时间、地点、活动内容、参加人数比、同学们的感受。这些要点是写作的关键,要在文章中清晰地呈现出来。
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段(Beginning):引出活动的主题,英语日的时间、地点 (take place, from...to...)。通过简洁的语言介绍活动的基本信息,引起读者的兴趣。
中间段 (Body):介绍活动的具体内容及参加人数比:
活动内容:唱歌比赛 (singing competition)、烹饪表演 (cooking show) 和讲故事 (storytelling)。详细描述每个活动的特点和亮点。
参加人数比 (...percent of )。准确说明每个活动的参与人数比例,体现活动的受欢迎程度。
结尾 (Ending):呼应首句,对活动的感受和期待 (learn, hope)。总结活动的意义,表达同学们对未来类似活动的期待。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段:英语日的时间、地点
[一般句] It was held in the school hall on June 18th. It lasted from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. 简单陈述活动的举办地点和时间。
[高分句] Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on June 18th. (take place, from... to...) 使用 “a great success” 强调活动的成功,“take place” 使表达更生动,突出活动的顺利举行。
中间段:活动的具体内容及参加人数比例
(活动一) Singing Competition 50%
[一般句] 50% of the students took part in the singing competition. 直接说明参加唱歌比赛的学生比例。
[高分句] Half of the students took part in the singing competition. It was the most popular because we could share and enjoy the beautiful songs.(形容词最高级和活动内容的具体化) 使用 “half of” 替换 “50%”,使表达更灵活;“the most popular” 突出唱歌比赛的受欢迎程度,并解释了原因是可以分享和欣赏美妙的歌曲,让内容更丰富。
(活动二) Cooking Show 30%
[一般句] 30% of us went to the cooking show and tasted dishes. 简单描述参加烹饪表演的情况。
[高分句] 30% of us went to the cooking show to taste various dishes there. (to do句式表示活动意义) 使用 “to do” 句式,表明去烹饪表演的目的是品尝各种菜肴,突出活动的意义。
(活动三) Storytelling 20%
[一般句] 20% of the students had a good time in the storytelling part. 说明参加讲故事活动的学生玩得很开心。
[高分句] 20% of the students enjoyed themselves in the storytelling part because there were so many interesting stories.(because增加活动原因) 使用 “enjoyed themselves” 替换 “had a good time”,使表达更丰富;用 “because” 引导原因状语从句,解释学生在讲故事活动中开心的原因是有很多有趣的故事。
结尾:感受和期待
[一般句] We learned a lot on the school English Day. We realized the importance of learning English. 简单阐述活动的收获和对英语学习的认识。
[高分句] We not only learned a lot, but also came to realize the importance of teamwork through practice. We hope there will be more colorful activities like these in our school. (not only…but also…,期待) 使用 “not only…but also…” 结构,强调活动不仅让我们学到知识,还让我们意识到团队合作的重要性;表达对未来更多类似活动的期待,使文章更有感染力。
第四步 连句子 成短文
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on June 18th.
There were three activities on the day. Half of the students took part in the singing competition. It was the most popular because we could share and enjoy the beautiful songs. 30% of us went to the cooking show to taste various dishes there. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling part because there were so many great stories.
We spoke highly of the English Day. We not only learned a lot, but also came to realize the importance of teamwork through practice. We hope there will be more colorful activities like these in our school.
我们的学校英语日
我们的学校英语日取得了巨大成功。它于6月18日下午2:00至4:30在学校礼堂举行。
当天有三项活动。一半的学生参加了歌唱比赛。这是最受欢迎的,因为我们能够分享并享受美妙的歌曲。我们中有30%的人去观看了烹饪表演,品尝了各种美食。其余的人则在讲故事环节中自得其乐,因为那里有许多精彩的故事。
我们对英语日给予了高度评价。我们不仅学到了很多东西,而且通过实践认识到了团队合作的重要性。我们希望学校能有更多这样丰富多彩的活动。
【词汇积累】
1.学校设施
classroom:教室,
library:图书馆,
playground:操场,
laboratory:实验室
dormitory:宿舍,
auditorium:礼堂,
teaching building:教学楼,
administrative building:行政楼,
cafeteria /canteen:食堂,
gymnasium /gym:体育馆,
multimedia classroom:多媒体教室,
computer room:计算机室,
2.学习相关
study:学习,
learn:学会,
review:复习
preview:预习,
take notes:做笔记,
assignment:作业,
project:课题;
exam/examination:考试,
test:测验,
quiz:小测验,
grade / mark / score:成绩,
textbook:课本,
notebook:笔记本,
reference book:参考书
develop good habits:养成好习惯,
academic performance:学业成绩,
extracurricular reading:课外阅读,
group discussion:小组讨论,
learning method:学习方法,
make progress:取得进步,
3.校园活动
sports meet / sports meeting:运动会,
art festival:艺术节,
science and technology festival:科技节,
speech contest:演讲比赛,
debate competition:辩论赛
singing competition:歌唱比赛,
club activities:社团活动,
volunteer activities:志愿者活动,
field trip:实地考察;校外活动,
attend activities / join clubs:参加活动 / 社团,
take part in competitions:参加比赛,
talent show:才艺表演,
charity sale:义卖活动,
speech club:演讲社团,
4.人物关系
teacher:老师,
classmate:同学,
roommate:室友,
head teacher:班主任,
monitor:班长,
schoolmate:校友,
get along well with classmates:和同学和谐相处,
make friends:结交朋友,
exchange student:交换生,
alumni association:校友会,
class representative:课代表,
【句子积累】
1.描述校园环境
Our school is surrounded by beautiful scenery, making it a perfect place for study and growth.:我们学校被美丽的景色环绕,是学习和成长的理想之地。
The campus is equipped with modern facilities, which provide us with great convenience.:校园配备了现代化设施,给我们提供了极大的便利。
The school garden is filled with colorful flowers and fragrant herbs, creating a peaceful and relaxing atmosphere for students to take a break and enjoy nature during their free time. 学校花园里种满了五颜六色的花朵和芬芳的香草,为学生们在课余时间休息和亲近自然营造了宁静而放松的氛围。
Our school's architecture combines modern and traditional styles, which not only gives the campus a unique aesthetic but also reflects the school's respect for history and innovation. 我们学校的建筑融合了现代与传统风格,这不仅赋予校园独特的美感,还体现了学校对历史和创新的尊重。
2.介绍学习生活
We have a wide range of courses at school, such as mathematics, English, and art, which can meet different interests and needs.:我们学校有丰富多样的课程,如数学、英语和艺术,能满足不同的兴趣和需求。
I find it challenging but rewarding to study science subjects, as they can broaden my horizons.:我觉得学习理科课程很有挑战性但也很有收获,因为它们能拓宽我的视野。
In addition to regular courses, our school offers a variety of elective courses, such as calligraphy, photography, and programming, allowing students to explore their interests and develop their unique skills. 除了常规课程外,我们学校还提供书法、摄影、编程等多种选修课程,让学生能够探索自己的兴趣爱好并培养独特的技能。
Through group projects, we learn how to divide tasks effectively, communicate with team members, and work together towards a common goal, which is an essential skill in both study and future careers. 通过小组项目,我们学会了如何有效分配任务、与团队成员沟通协作并朝着共同目标努力,这在学习和未来的职业生涯中都是一项至关重要的技能。
3.讲述校园活动
Participating in the sports meet not only improves my physical fitness but also cultivates my sense of teamwork.:参加运动会不仅能提高我的身体素质,还能培养我的团队合作意识。
The art festival is a wonderful opportunity for us to show our creativity and talents.:艺术节是我们展示创造力和才华的绝佳机会。在艺术节上,学生可以展示自己的绘画作品、表演音乐节目、参与舞蹈表演等。
The cultural festival was a huge success, with students from different classes actively participating in various activities, like traditional dance performances and handicraft exhibitions, which greatly enhanced our understanding of different cultures. 文化节取得了巨大的成功,不同班级的学生积极参与各种活动,如传统舞蹈表演和手工艺品展览,这极大地增进了我们对不同文化的理解。
Participating in the charity sale not only let us contribute to those in need but also improved our communication and marketing skills as we promoted the items to our teachers and classmates. 参加义卖活动不仅让我们为有需要的人贡献力量,还在向老师和同学推销物品的过程中提高了我们的沟通和营销技能。
4.表达师生关系
My head teacher is always patient with us and gives us valuable advice on both study and life.:我的班主任对我们总是很有耐心,在学习和生活上都给我们提供了宝贵的建议。
I get along well with my classmates, and we often have discussions and share ideas in class.:我和同学们相处得很好,我们经常在课堂上讨论并分享想法。
My English teacher always encourages us to express our opinions bravely in class, no matter how strange they may seem, which has greatly boosted my confidence in speaking English. 我的英语老师总是鼓励我们在课堂上勇敢地表达自己的观点,无论这些观点看起来多么奇怪,这极大地增强了我讲英语的自信心。
Thanks to the patient guidance of our tutors, we have made significant progress in our weak subjects, and we are more motivated to keep learning and improving ourselves. 多亏了家教老师的耐心指导,我们在薄弱学科上取得了显著进步,也更有动力继续学习并提升自己。
【俗语谚语】
1.Knowledge is power.:知识就是力量。
2. Reading makes a full man.:阅读使人充实
3. Books are the source of knowledge.:书籍是知识的源泉
4. Books are the ladders of human progress.:书籍是人类进步的阶梯。
5. There is a golden house in the book.:书中自有黄金屋。
6. A good book is a good friend.:好书如挚友。
7. Time flies! / How time flies!:时光飞逝!
8. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.:世上无难事,只要肯攀登。
9. All good things come to an end.:天下没有不散的筵席。
【实战演练】
1.假定你是李华,你校与某乡镇希望中学 (Hope Middle School) 是友好学校,上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你为校英文报写一则新闻稿,
内容包括:
1. 时间、地点、参与人员;
2. 活动过程简介;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:
英文课本剧 English textbook drama
友好学校 sister school
参考范文:
An English Textbook Drama Show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success. At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance.
We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
一场英文教科书戏剧表演
上周五,一场精彩的英语教科书戏剧表演在我们的姐妹学校——希望中学的操场上举行,两所学校英语俱乐部的多达300名教师和学生参与其中。
这场戏剧表演持续了两个小时。两个俱乐部的成员们表演了三部我们教科书中传统中国故事的短剧,这些短剧反映了中国人民的良好品质和我们优秀的传统文化。感谢所有表演者和教师的巨大努力,两个小时的表演取得了巨大成功。表演结束时,在场的所有人都起立为他们精彩的表演鼓掌欢呼。
我们都相信这项活动为我们提供了一个欣赏英语戏剧的好机会,提高了我们的英语语言技能,同时也拉近了两所学校之间的距离。
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时为主;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍学校举行的英文课本剧活动,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍时间、地点、参与人员;
第二步,介绍活动的过程;
第三步,介绍活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks to 幸亏
②stand up 站起来
③as well as 和
[高分句型]
①The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. (定语从句)两个俱乐部的成员表演了我们教科书中的三个关于中国传统故事的短剧,这些短剧反映了中国人民的良好品质和我们优秀的传统文化。
②We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer. (宾语从句)我们都相信这项活动为我们提供了一个很好的机会,让我们享受英语戏剧,提高我们的英语语言技能,同时也让两所学校更加亲近。
2.读万卷书,行万里路。近年来,参观博物馆、看工厂、访农村等形式多样的研学活动,极大地丰富了中学生的课余生活。请你根据以下要点及要求,描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
要点:
1)研学地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程;
2)研学旅行的收获和感受;
3)研学旅行的重要性。
要求:
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考范文:
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
A school tour is a good way to put what you have learn into practice. We went to Zhengzhou Science and Technology Museum last Sunday first. We got there by bus. We saw many fantastic inventions and did some scientific experiments. Then we went to the Wildlife Park. We got close contact with different kinds of wild animals and birds and learned a lot about their living habits. It took us a day to take part in this activities.
We were tired but happy. This activity not only made us relaxed, but also made us learn something new and meaningful.
研学旅行在当今越来越受欢迎。现在,让我告诉你我参加的一次研学旅行。
学校旅行是将你所学的知识付诸实践的好方法。上周日我们首先去了郑州科技馆。我们乘坐公共汽车到达那里。我们看到了许多奇妙的发明,并进行了一些科学实验。然后我们去了野生动物园。我们与不同种类的野生动物和鸟类近距离接触,并且学到了很多关于它们生活习性的知识。我们花了一整天的时间参与这些活动。
我们虽然感到很疲惫但也很快乐。这次活动不仅让我们放松,还让我们学到了一些新东西和有意义的知识。
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历;
第二步,具体阐述研学的地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程以及收获和感受;
第三步,书写结语,总结研学的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①fantastic 极好的
②take part in 参加
③meaningful 有意义的
[高分句型]
①A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice.(what引导的宾语从句)学校参观是将你所学知识付诸实践的好方法。
②It took us a day to take part in this activities.(it固定句式)我们花了一天时间参加这些活动。