江苏省南京市2025年中考英语二轮专题突破训练:10写作题(含写作范文+写作详解)

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江苏省南京市中考英语二轮专题突破训练:10写作题
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.随着科技的快速发展,电子产品越来越多。“指尖游走屏幕,键盘敲击淹没墨香。”当智能输入替代了纸笔耕耘,学生的汉字书写能力就会大大降低。假如你是你们学校书法协会的会长,为了让同学们重视书写,请你用英语写一封倡议书。
提示内容:减少对电子产品的依赖,多动手记笔记;
养成练书法和写日记的习惯。
参考词汇:electric products(电子产品); handwriting(书写); calligraphy(书法;书法艺术)
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear students,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.中华美食文化不仅仅是一种生活需求,更是一种文化传承和表达方式。假如你是李华,上周五你校举办了美食文化节,请你给校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动目的及意义;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解你的周末生活。请给Mike写一封邮件, 告诉他你是如何度过上个周末的,并说出你的感受。
参考词汇: feed animals, pick fruit and vegetables, play games, have dinner, get close to nature…
要求:
1. 先补全邮件格式中所缺少的部分,再写邮件内容;
2. 选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺, 意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
5. 词数:不少于70词。(部分内容已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Thanks for your last e-mail. How was your weekend I want to share my trip last weekend with you.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.饺子导演的动画电影《哪吒2:魔童闹海》跻身全球票房前十,向世界展现了中国文化的独特魅力。文化输出不仅能增强国家软实力,更能促进国际理解与交流。作为新时代初中生,我们应如何通过一些具体做法,为文化强国建设贡献力量?请结合以下要点写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1.实践传统美德;
2.设计创作文创产品:
3.培养课余艺术爱好;
4.利用新媒体平台传播中国传统文化活动;
参考词汇:virtue (n.)美德, social media platform (社交媒体平台)
写作要求:
1.短文必须包括所给提示内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于80词。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Ne Zha 2 shows traditional Chinese stories to the world in the form of movie. As middle school students, we can also spread Chinese culture in the following ways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.学校的英语校刊正在开展“热爱运动”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的关键词,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I often do sports in my free time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.学校英语社正在以“Healthy Lifestyle”健康的生活方式为题开展征文活动,希望同学们分享更多健康的生活方式。请你综合下面的思维导图并适当拓展,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Healthy lifestyle good eating habits scientific exercise enough sleep ...
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Healthy Lifestyle
As we all know, health is of great importance for us. When we are healthy, we can study well and enjoy life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.劳动是学生全面发展的必备条件之一,做家务是劳动很好的体现。假如你叫李华,你的学校正在开展以“做家务,助成长”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你按要求写一篇题目为“Let’s Do Housework”的短文来参赛。
提示:
(1)Who taught you to do housework
(2)What housework can you do now
(3)What can you learn from doing housework
注意:
(1)短文中须包括提示信息,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s Do Housework
Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.4月22日世界地球日即将到来,学校计划举办“保护环境,从我做起”主题周活动。作为学校英语报刊“绿色之声”栏目的负责人,请你写一篇倡议书,呼吁全校同学加入环境保护行动中来,从小事做起,从我做起,为环境保护尽一份力。
内容提示:1.随手关灯,节约用水; 2.减少污染,不乱扔垃圾;
3.绿出色行(乘公交车、骑自行车或步行); 4.多种树
写作要求:1.内容必须包含所给的全部信息,可适当发挥。
2.词数:80-100词(开头已给词不计入总词数),条理清楚,语意连贯,书写工整。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
提示词:electricity, reduce, pollution, rubbish, plant, take action
Dear friends,
As we all know, the environmental problems are getting more and more serious. As students, we should do something to protect the environment. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.深圳市政府大力推进“AI进校园”计划,为学校引入人工智能辅助学习系统。假设你是李华,你校将开展“智慧学习,善用AI”主题活动,引导学生正确使用AI工具。作为学校科技社成员,请你写一篇英文演讲稿,简述中学生使用AI工具的利弊,并呼吁同学们合理使用AI技术。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:AI进校园 AI in Schools
Hello, everyone!
As a member of the school’s Science and Technology Club,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
10.节约资源,保护环境,人人有责。假如你是李华,针对你身边出现的环境污染问题,给当地报社写一封倡议信。分析造成环境污染的原因,提出保护措施,并号召人们采取行动来保护环境。
要求:
1.倡议书的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.词数90左右(倡议书的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Problems factories burn coal
throw away ... everywhere
more cars
Advice close down
throw ... into...
take the bus, ride the bike...
Hope …
Dear editor,
Thanks for reading this letter. I’m a student. There are some environmental problems in our city. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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1.例文:
Dear students,
With the development of science and technology, more and more students prefer to use electronic products for taking notes and sending messages instead of writing on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows.
First, we should use electronic products less often when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practicing calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off!
Calligraphy Association
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封倡议书;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给要点及要求完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,陈述学生的汉字书写能力大大降低的现状;
第二步,根据所给要点,陈述自己的倡议;
第三步,书写结语,鼓励大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to更喜欢
②instead of而不是
③opportunity机会
④form the habit of…养成……的习惯
⑤take action采取行动
⑥pay off取得成功
[高分句型]
I’m sure our efforts will pay off! (省略that的宾语从句)
2.例文
Last Friday, our school held a Food Festival to celebrate Chinese food culture.
The event aimed to help students learn about traditional dishes and their cultural meanings. There were many activities, like cooking shows, food tasting, and a dumpling-making contest. Students also shared stories about different foods. A highlight was the “Global Food Corner,” where international students shared dishes from their home countries.
Everyone enjoyed the festival. It was fun and educational, helping us appreciate Chinese food culture more. This event not only satisfied our taste buds but also strengthened our understanding of cultural diversity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动目的、意义以及内容;
第二步,介绍活动反响。
[亮点词汇]
①celebrate庆祝
②aimed to旨在
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①A highlight was the “Global Food Corner,” where international students shared dishes from their home countries. (定语从句)
3.例文
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your last e-mail. How was your weekend I want to share my trip last weekend with you.
Last Saturday, my family and I visited a farm in the countryside. It was so much fun! We fed animals like cows and sheep, and I even got to milk a goat! In the afternoon, we picked fruit and vegetables—fresh strawberries and carrots. They tasted amazing! Later, we played games with other visitors and had dinner together under the stars.
The best part was getting close to nature. The air was fresh, and everything felt peaceful. I hope you can join me next time!
Looking forward to hearing about your weekend too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明要和Mike分享上周末的活动;
第二步,具体阐述上周末是如何度过的及作者的感受;
第三步,书写结语,期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②get close to接近
③look forward to doing sth期待做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope you can join me next time! (省略that的宾语从句)
4.例文
Ne Zha 2 shows traditional Chinese stories to the world in the form of movie. As middle school students, we can also spread Chinese culture in the following ways.
First, we should practice traditional virtues like respect and kindness in daily life. Second, we can design creative cultural products, such as bookmarks with Chinese paintings. Third, developing art hobbies like calligraphy or paper-cutting helps us understand culture deeper. Most importantly, we can use social media platforms to share Chinese festivals or folk stories with foreigners.
By doing these small things, we can all contribute to building a culturally strong China. Let’s work together to spread our wonderful culture!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明文化输出的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述四个方面的做法;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional virtue传统美德
②creative cultural products创意文化产品
③social media platform社交媒体平台
[高分句型]
Third, developing art hobbies like calligraphy or paper-cutting helps us understand culture deeper.(动名词短语作主语)
5.例文
I often do sports in my free time. I enjoy doing sports because I would like to keep healthy and positive every day.
I like playing basketball with my classmates on the playground when I finish all my tasks. It can make me feel much more relaxed and I will become more energetic in other classes. At weekends, I like cycling with my good friends. We all like the fresh air and beautiful scenery along the way. Cycling with my good friends can also make us love our life more.
Love sports, love life. I will try my best to make my life rich and colourful by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,主要讲述个人在业余时间进行体育运动的情况;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:阐述自己在空闲时间做运动的喜好、原因以及不同运动带来的感受等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明自己经常在空闲时间做运动,并说明喜欢运动的原因是为了保持健康和积极的状态。
第二步,中间分别介绍了和同学打篮球以及和好朋友骑自行车这两项运动,阐述了做这些运动的时间、地点以及运动带来的好处。
第三步,结尾总结表达热爱运动、热爱生活的观点,并且表示会通过运动让生活丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②positive积极的
③relaxed放松的
④energetic精力充沛的
⑤scenery风景
[高分句型]
①I enjoy doing sports because I would like to keep healthy and positive every day.(运用了“because”引导的原因状语从句,清晰地说明了喜欢运动的原因。)
②It can make me feel much more relaxed and I will become more energetic in other classes.(使用“make sb. do sth.”的结构,准确表达出运动带来的影响,且用 “more+形容词”构成比较级,突出运动效果。)
6.例文
Healthy Lifestyle
As we all know, health is of great importance for us. When we are healthy, we can study well and enjoy life. To keep healthy, we should develop good habits.
First, having good eating habits is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and whole grains instead of junk food. Second, scientific exercise helps us stay strong. Activities like running, swimming, or playing basketball are great choices. Third, enough sleep is necessary for our body and mind. Teenagers need 8—9 hours of sleep every night.
Besides these, we should also drink enough water, reduce screen time, and stay positive. A healthy lifestyle leads to a happier life!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:主要使用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:需涵盖思维导图中"good eating habits/scientific exercise/enough sleep"三个要点,并适当拓展,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用已给开头引出健康生活方式的重要性;
第二步:分三段分别阐述饮食、运动和睡眠三个健康要素;
第三步:总结呼吁,形成完整结尾。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② besides除了
③ lead to引领
[高分句型]
First, having good eating habits is important.(动名词短语作主语)
7.例文:
Let’s Do Housework
Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives. My mother taught me to do housework when I was eight years old. Now I can do lots of housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and so on. I like doing housework because I want to help my parents. As for me, I think middle school students should do housework. I have learned a lot from it. Firstly, I learn many life skills and become more and more independent. Secondly, I am healthy and strong after doing housework. Finally, I can understand my parents better when sharing housework with them.
In a word, we can learn a lot from doing housework. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing it with their parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要采用一般现在时”;
③提示:题干要求以“做家务,助成长”为主题,介绍自己何时学会做家务的,谁教你做家务的,到目前为止会做什么家务以及说明为什么要做家务,能从做家务中学到什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍谁教自己做家务以及会做什么家务;
第二步,介绍从做家务中学到了什么;
第三步,号召大家学习做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②more and more independent越来越独立
③share sth with sb和某人分享
[高分句型]
I like doing housework because I want to help my parents. (because引导原因状语从句)
8.参考范文:
Dear friends,
As we all know, the environmental problems are getting more and more serious. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it is very important to save water and electricity in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, in order to reduce pollution, we should try our best not to use plastic bags and other plastic products. When we go shopping, we can use clothes bags instead of plastic bags. Third, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. What’s more, we'd better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go out. Finally, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
It is our duty to protect the environment. If we can keep doing these things, I believe the environment will become better and better.
Let’s take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为倡议书;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括随手关灯、节约用水、减少污染、不乱扔垃圾、绿色出行以及多种树等具体措施。考生应确保包含所有要点,并适当发挥,以增强文章的号召力和说服力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题。通过“As we all know, the environmental problems are getting more and more serious.”来引出环境保护的紧迫性,并表明作为学生,我们有责任采取行动;
第二步,具体阐述倡议内容。按照内容提示,逐一列出环保的具体措施,如“随手关灯,节约用水”来节约资源,“减少污染,不乱扔垃圾”来保持环境清洁,“绿出色行(乘公交车、骑自行车或步行)”来减少碳排放,“多种树”来绿化环境。每一点都可以适当发挥,说明其重要性和可行性;
第三步,书写结语。进一步强调环保的重要性,并呼吁全校同学积极响应倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental problems环境问题
②more and more serious越来越严重
③save water and electricity节约用水和电
④turn off关闭
⑤in order to为了
[高分句型]
①As we all know, the environmental problems are getting more and more serious.(more and more表比较)
②It is our duty to protect the environment.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正主语)
③If we can keep doing these things, I believe the environment will become better and better.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9.例文
Hello, everyone!
As a member of the school’s Science and Technology Club, I’d like to share my thoughts on AI tools.
AI in Schools brings both opportunities and challenges. On the one hand, AI tools can help us learn efficiently. For example, they provide personalized exercises and instant feedback. They also save time by automating tasks like checking homework. However, over-reliance on AI may weaken our critical thinking. Some students copy answers directly instead of solving problems themselves. Moreover, privacy issues could arise if AI collects too much personal date.
Let’s use AI wisely! We should treat it as a helper, not a replacement. Balance technology with independent learning, and always protect our personal information.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息要点,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,接着已给出开头,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述使用AI工具的利弊;
第三步,呼吁同学们合理使用AI技术。
[亮点词汇]
①opportunities and challenges机会和挑战
②personalized exercises个性化的练习
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Moreover, privacy issues could arise if AI collects too much personal date. (if引导条件状语从句)
10.例文
Dear editor,
Thanks for reading this letter. I’m a student. There are some environmental problems in our city. Factories burn coal, causing air pollution. People throw rubbish everywhere, making streets dirty. Also, more cars lead to traffic jams and exhaust fumes.
To solve these problems, the government should close down polluting factories. We must throw waste into bins and recycle whenever possible. Instead of driving, we can take the bus or ride bikes to reduce emissions.
Let’s take action now! A cleaner city starts with small steps. Together, we can protect our environment for future generations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封书信作文;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:需涵盖表格中所有要点(环境污染问题、建议措施、呼吁行动),适当补充细节,语言简洁有力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明写信目的,概括环境问题;
第二步,分析污染原因(工厂燃煤、乱扔垃圾、车辆增多),提出具体建议(关停污染工厂、垃圾分类、绿色出行);
第三步,呼吁公众参与,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
① lead to 导致
② instead of 而不是
③ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
To solve these problems, the government should close down polluting factories. (不定式作目的状语)
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