2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板:记叙文写人课件（共14张PPT)
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| 名称 | 2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板:记叙文写人课件（共14张PPT) |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2025-04-03 22:10:46 | ||
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(共14张PPT)
应用文写作万能模板记叙文写人
命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求：
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is …
… was born in …, … At the age of …，she graduated from … University. She is a good-looking …- year-old girl, who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As our …, … sets a good example. She is an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative inventions. What impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. … is so good a person that she is highly thought of by all the people around her.
Her dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future.
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is Confucius.
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. What impresses me most is that he is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. Confucius is so good a person that he is highly thought of by all the people.
His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
（2023年全国甲卷）
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
模板套用
通用模板
I have made many good friends. （引出人物）is one of them. She is （总体给人的感觉）.She is tall and （身材）.Her hair is （头发）.She always wears （表情） and gives us the impression that （给人的印象）.
is always willing to （性格）.She is good at （特长）. Whenever I have problems I . Once （引出事例）. To my surprise, .
We will but I hope （表达愿望）.
The person I respect
I have made many good friends. my mother is one of them. She is such a model that I respect most. She always wears a smile and gives us the impression that she is quite popular in our neighborhood.
My mother is always willing to help those in need no matter how difficult her own condition is. She is good at doing a variety of chores at home, and at the meantime, having an excellent performance at school. Once my mother shouldered her household responsibility at a very early age. It was her efforts that helped my grandparents ease the burden and survive the bitter days.
Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent and industrious person.
(2020年全国一卷)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
模板套用
第一部分：介绍基本情况(外貌、年龄...)
1. Once there was a 从前，有一个……
2. was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. ……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. As a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held byin.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. In the past ……years ……has impressed me deeply.在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father.在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
7. There are many respectable people around us. Among them, ... is regarded as my favorite one.
8. When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say ... without hesitation.
9. Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ... is my favorite.
10. ..., aged 18, was born in..., graduating from...
11. In the depths of my memory, ...
第二部分：具体事迹，性格
1. gives us the impression that ……给我们……印象。
2. spend his childhood in……在……度过了他的童年。
3. I was about to when 我正要……，突然，……
4. Hardly had I done when sooner had I done than 我刚……，就……/我一……，就……
5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family. 他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt. 他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive. 她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. One day, I 有一天，我……
9.have a good sense of humor and positive attitude to life
10.be awarded sth./ be honored as
11.get a master’s degree in/ be admitted to
12.His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.
13.make remarkable progress in
14.became famous in one’s thirties
第三部分：人物评价
1. It turns out to be 结果是……
2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.
我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
5.That is...,my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life.
这是……。我最尊敬的人。她是闪耀着高中岁月光芒的星辰，是芬芳的玫瑰，点缀了我的人生。
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment Self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
1
2
3
4
5
6
重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
愉
Thank you for your listening !
应用文写作万能模板记叙文写人
命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求：
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is …
… was born in …, … At the age of …，she graduated from … University. She is a good-looking …- year-old girl, who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As our …, … sets a good example. She is an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative inventions. What impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. … is so good a person that she is highly thought of by all the people around her.
Her dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future.
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that impresses me most is Confucius.
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. What impresses me most is that he is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. Confucius is so good a person that he is highly thought of by all the people.
His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
（2023年全国甲卷）
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
模板套用
通用模板
I have made many good friends. （引出人物）is one of them. She is （总体给人的感觉）.She is tall and （身材）.Her hair is （头发）.She always wears （表情） and gives us the impression that （给人的印象）.
is always willing to （性格）.She is good at （特长）. Whenever I have problems I . Once （引出事例）. To my surprise, .
We will but I hope （表达愿望）.
The person I respect
I have made many good friends. my mother is one of them. She is such a model that I respect most. She always wears a smile and gives us the impression that she is quite popular in our neighborhood.
My mother is always willing to help those in need no matter how difficult her own condition is. She is good at doing a variety of chores at home, and at the meantime, having an excellent performance at school. Once my mother shouldered her household responsibility at a very early age. It was her efforts that helped my grandparents ease the burden and survive the bitter days.
Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent and industrious person.
(2020年全国一卷)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
模板套用
第一部分：介绍基本情况(外貌、年龄...)
1. Once there was a 从前，有一个……
2. was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. ……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. As a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held byin.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. In the past ……years ……has impressed me deeply.在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father.在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
7. There are many respectable people around us. Among them, ... is regarded as my favorite one.
8. When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say ... without hesitation.
9. Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ... is my favorite.
10. ..., aged 18, was born in..., graduating from...
11. In the depths of my memory, ...
第二部分：具体事迹，性格
1. gives us the impression that ……给我们……印象。
2. spend his childhood in……在……度过了他的童年。
3. I was about to when 我正要……，突然，……
4. Hardly had I done when sooner had I done than 我刚……，就……/我一……，就……
5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family. 他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt. 他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive. 她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. One day, I 有一天，我……
9.have a good sense of humor and positive attitude to life
10.be awarded sth./ be honored as
11.get a master’s degree in/ be admitted to
12.His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.
13.make remarkable progress in
14.became famous in one’s thirties
第三部分：人物评价
1. It turns out to be 结果是……
2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.
我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
5.That is...,my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life.
这是……。我最尊敬的人。她是闪耀着高中岁月光芒的星辰，是芬芳的玫瑰，点缀了我的人生。
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment Self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
1
2
3
4
5
6
重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
愉
Thank you for your listening !