2025年中考英语书面表达押题25篇（含解析）

中考英语书面表达押题25篇
解题技巧
中考英语作文构思技巧
（一）审：审就是仔细审题。看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。
（二）列：列就是抓要点。根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。
（三）扩：扩就是扩展成句。将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。”和“主+系+表。”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中国式英语出现。
（四）连：连就是连句成篇。使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。
（五）改：改主要从以下几个方面进行自我修改：
1.内容是否完整。 2.时态是否正确。 3.拼写和标点是否正确。
4.主谓是否一致。 5.格式和字数是否符合要求。 6.层次是否清楚。
中考英语作文常见错误分析
1.审题不清：依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被严重减分。
2.拼写错误：拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：名词单复数会造成主谓不一致错误，名词前面缺少限定词造成泛指现象。
4.缺少动词：在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成。
5.中国式英语的排列：按照汉语表述顺寻罗列单词组句。
6.代词的误用：英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中要体现人与物的关系必须用物主代词。
7.句子不完整：因为对句子结构认识模糊，出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。尤其体现在（及物动词 / 不及物动词运用）
8.时态、人称和数的搭配错误：汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。
9.综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。
中考英语作文常用句型
1. It's important (necessary) for sb. +to do sth.做某事对某人来说……
2. It's no use/no good doing sth .做某事没有用处/没有好处。
3. There is no need to do sth.没必要做某事。
4. There is no point in doing sth.做某事毫无意义
5. What about + doing sth？How about + doing sth？……怎么样？
6. The reason why +(表示结果句子) is that + (表示原因句子)。……的原因是……
7. That is why + (表示结果句子)。那就是……的原因。
8. That is because + (表示原因句子)。那是因为……
9. It is said/reported that +(事件陈述句子)。据说/据报道……
10. There is no doubt that +(事件陈述句子)。毫无疑问……
11. It goes without saying that + (事件陈述句子)。不言而喻，/毫无疑问……
12. As is known to all，+(事件陈述句子)。众所周知，……
13. It is generally/publicly known/considered that…众所周知……
14. As we all know, +(事件陈述句子)。据我们所知，……
15. It's time to do sth./It's time for sth.是该做某事的时候了。
16. It's better/best to do sth.最好做某事。
17. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人话多少时间做某事。
18. sth. costs. some mony.某物花了某人多少钱。
19. sb. spends some time/mony(in)doing sth.某人花多少时间/金钱。
20. sb. pays some money for sth.某人为某物付了多少钱。
21. Among various kinds of …， +(陈述句子)。 /= Of all the …， +(陈述句子)。
在各种……之中，……
22. In my opinion, +(观点陈述句子)。= As far as I am concerned, +(观点陈述句子)。
就我的看法……；我认为……
In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.
就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
23.With the increase/growth of the population, +(问题陈述句子)。
随着人口的增加……
With the development of science and technology, +(问题陈述句子)。
随着科技的进步……
考前押题抢分练
（2024·湖南怀化·二模）
友谊总是弥足珍贵。假定你是李华，你因为未能遵守约定帮助你的好朋友Sandy进行英语学习从而使得你们之间产生隔阂，你通过留字条的方式和她沟通和好。现你校英文报正在开展以“An Unforgettable Thing about Communication”为题的征文活动，请你用英文投稿，讲述你的经历。
要求：词数80~100，且不得出现真实姓名与校名。
提示词：English learning, be angry with, give a hope for forgiveness (希望得到原谅), communicate, sincerely, get on well with
An Unforgettable Thing about Communication
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【答案】例文：
An Unforgettable Thing about Communication
A misunderstanding between my friend and I left a deep impression on me.
One Sunday evening, I promised to help my best friend, Sandy, with her English learning. But I didn’t show up because of something important. What’s worse, I forgot to tell her so that she waited for me for a long time and she was angry with me. Next morning, I walked up to her and gave her a note hoping for forgiveness. After reading my note, Sandy finally smiled at me. Then I told her that I felt really sorry.
From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“一段难忘的交流经历”来引出下文中对该经历的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“为何产生隔阂、怎么沟通、事件结果”三方面入手，重点介绍此次难忘的交流经历；
③第三步，书写结语。表达真诚交流的重要。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth 承诺做某事
②help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
③show up 出现
④because of 因为
⑤what’s worse 更糟糕的是
⑥wait for 等待
⑦from then on 从那时起
⑧get on well with sb 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
①Then I told her that I felt really sorry.（that引导的宾语从句）
②From then on, I believed that communicating sincerely is one of the best ways to get on well with others.（that引导的宾语从句）
（2024·河南洛阳·一模）
“人心齐，泰山移”。在学习和生活中，学会与他人团结协作是非常重要的。请用英语写一篇短文，描述你与他人合作的一次经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右。
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【答案】例文：
In my junior high school life, I experienced the profound truth behind the saying, “Unity is strength.”
Once, my classmates and I were assigned a group project on environmental conservation. We divided the tasks, with each member specializing in their area of expertise. Through regular discussions and mutual assistance, we overcame challenges and completed the project with flying colors.
This experience taught me the value of teamwork. Collaborating with others not only enriches our knowledge but also fosters a sense of belonging and accomplishment. It reminds me that when we unite, even the mightiest obstacles can be overcome.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生应根据题干要求，描述与他人合作的一次经历，并谈谈感受。可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题“团结就是力量”；
第二步，具体阐述，描述与他人合作的一次经历；
第三步，书写结语，谈谈感受。
[亮点词汇]
①Unity is strength团结就是力量
②assign分配
③area of expertise专业领域
④value of teamwork团队合作的价值
[高分句型]
①Collaborating with others not only enriches our knowledge but also fosters a sense of belonging and accomplishment. (not only…but also…句型)
②It reminds me that when we unite, even the mightiest obstacles can be overcome. (when引导的时间状语从句)
（2024·山东济宁·一模）
某报社英文专栏组织初三学子开展“我想对你说”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢您”或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say ______ to ______ ” 补充完整，并以此为题写一篇不少于100 词的短文。
要点：
1. 阐述你说这句话的原因或描述背后发生的故事；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
I want to say ________ to ________
How time flies! My junior school life will come to an end. When I look back at those days, I want to say _____________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
I want to to say sorry to my friend
How time flies! My junior school life will come to an end. When I look back at those days, I want to say sorry to my friend for what I did on that April Fool’s Day.
I remember I’d spent days planning those jokes. As soon as I saw my friend in the classroom, I went all out to surprise him. However, as the day went on, I noticed his smile disappearing. All of a sudden, I realized I went too far. I felt so regretful as I saw sadness in his eyes. Unfortunately, I didn’t chose to face my mistake. Since then, our relationship has gone from bad to worse.
Now I’ve come to understand the importance of respect in any kind of humor between friends. I hope he can forgive me for what I did.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己想说的话以及原因”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己想表达的是抱歉；
第二步，描述事件的经过，自己想道歉的原因；
第三步，表达自己的感受，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①say sorry to对……说抱歉
②all of a sudden突然地
[高分句型]
①As soon as I saw my friend in the classroom, I went all out to surprise him.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope he can forgive me for what I did.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
（2024·重庆九龙坡·一模）
在2024年“两会”上，教育部提出要着力解决“小眼镜”、“小胖墩”和学生心理健康问题。为响应号召，某英文网站开设了“树洞倾述”专栏，并在近期收到了一些求助邮件。请你结合“两会”精神，就收集到的一至两个典型问题提出相关建议，帮助他们解决烦恼，快乐成长。
要求：
1.80-120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：It’s common for us to have trouble.
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【答案】例文
We have received some help emails recently. Shortsightedness is one of the typical problems. For students who are short-sighted, they shouldn’t read books or magazines for too long. They can stop for a while to let their eyes have a rest. Then, they shouldn’t read books under strong lights or weak lights. Obesity is another typical problem. Some students are too fat. Obesity can lead to a number of serious health problems, including heart disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. It’s important to make healthy food choices. This means eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, and avoiding processed and high-fat foods. In addition to making healthy food choices, it’s important to take more exercise.
It’s common for us to have trouble. I hope the above suggestions can be helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，就收集到的一至两个典型问题提出相关建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①shortsightedness近视
②typical典型的
③short-sighted近视的
④have a rest休息一下
⑤obesity肥胖
⑥a number of许多的
⑦in addition to除了
[高分句型]
It’s important to make healthy food choices.(it作形式主语)
（2024·四川广元·二模）
如今外出旅游备受欢迎，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点：
1.列举常见的不文明行为 (不少于两个)；
2.根据不文明行为提出个人观点及建议 (不少于两点建议)；
3.倡导文明旅游。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含以上要点；
2.文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；
3.词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: tourist attractions (景区)
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays, traveling is getting more and more popular.
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【答案】例文
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling. For example, some of the travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.
Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，列举两个不文明的行为进行介绍；
第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议；
第三步，号召大家文明旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①behave themselves文明举止
②put rubbish into dustbins把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
[高分句型]
①However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.（祈使句）
（2024·河南周口·一模）
良好的身心健康能为我们的未来打下坚实的基础，为此，学校校报特发起关于青少年的心理健康的征文活动。
请以“How to Keep Mentally Healthy”为题，结合下列要点，联系实际写一篇英语文稿，谈谈我们作为青少年学生，可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展。
要求：1. 内容应包含图中要点，并且对每个要点再进行补充说明；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Healthy in Mind
As is known to all, psychological health is as important as physical health. As middle school students, how can we develop our mental health I think the following suggestions might be helpful.
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I hope these suggestions will help you.
【答案】例文
How to Keep Mentally Healthy
As is known to all, psychological health is as important as physical health. As middle school students, how can we develop our mental health I think the following suggestions might be helpful.
Firstly, we should communicate with not only our parents and friends but also our teachers and munication is a bridge to connect people. Secondly, don’t be afraid of all kinds of problems. We should be brave to face them. Thirdly, we should be confident in ourselves. Believe that it’s you who shape your own future. What’s more, we should love both ourselves and others, which makes us become a warm person. Last but not least, be independent. We should learn to look after ourselves so that we can live on our own when we grow up.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍可以从哪些方面来帮助自己心理健康地发展；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②be afraid of害怕
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Believe that it’s you who shape your own future.(强调句)
②What’s more, we should love both ourselves and others, which makes us become a warm person. (which引导的定语从句)
③We should learn to look after ourselves so that we can live on our own when we grow up. (so that引导的目的状语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
（2024·山西·一模）
某班开展主题为“同学，放轻松！”的书信漂流活动，号召大家在考试冲刺阶段中学会劳逸结合，适度放松。活动要求每位同学写一封信，介绍自己在忙碌生活之余如何放松自己。假如你是该班同学李君，请你结合自己的经验，写一封信。
内容包括：
● Describe your busy life these days.
● Tell a story about how you relaxed yourself from the busy life.
● Give your classmate more suggestions.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】One possible version:
The exam is coming. In order to work well in it, I spend more time doing exercises. On weekends, I have many classes. How busy my life is!
Last weekend, I couldn’t focus myself on my study and I couldn’t follow my teachers in class, because I was too tired and sleepy. Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. Then I went to my friend Mark’s house, we talked about the life in our primary school. As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. The sweet memory was like a gust of wind which blew away all my worries and tiredness.
In order to relax, I have more suggestions. We can take up some of our hobbies such as painting, dancing and so on. We can also go hiking or flying kites to enjoy the beautiful spring. It is a good choice for us to have a good sleep so that we can refresh our bodies.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍自己的生活很忙碌；
第二步，介绍自己上周的活动情况；
第三步，最后给一些放松的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了
② try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事
③ take up开始从事
[高分句型]
① Although I tried my best to listen carefully in class, nothing changed. (although引导的让步状语从句)
② As we recalled our childhood, we all laughed. (as引导的时间状语从句)
8．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）
（B）图示作文：根据所给图片，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
（2）词数在80~100之间。
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
One day, Tom and Mike were playing on the street with a stick in each other’s hands when a grandma with a basket of vegetables came near. The two boys didn’t notice her and continued their game. All of a sudden, Tom’s stick hit the basket and it dropped on the ground. The vegetables in it were here and there. They said sorry to the grandma at once and helped put the vegetables back in the basket. Then Mike had an idea. They made a decision to send her home. Then they carried the basket with one stick and followed the grandma to her home. The grandma was very thankful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：一般过去时；
③ 提示：考生应根据所给图片梳理出写作要点，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述故事起因。描述因没注意而不小心打翻了老奶奶的篮子；
第二步，描述故事经过。从“篮子被打翻、孩子们的处理方式等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，描述故事结尾。表达老奶奶的感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
① playing with a stick 玩棍子
② a basket of 一篮子……
③ came near 靠近
④ All of a sudden 突然
⑤ dropped on the ground 掉在地上
⑥ here and there 到处
⑦ said sorry to 向……道歉
⑧ put ... back 把……放回原处
⑨ made a decision to 决定……
[高分句型]
① One day, Tom and Mike were playing on the street with a stick in each other’s hands when a grandma with a basket of vegetables came near.（when引导时间状语从句）
② All of a sudden, Tom’s stick hit the basket and it dropped on the ground.（and引导并列句）
9．（2024·江苏扬州·一模）
中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周你校开展了以“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示，用英语给你的英国笔友 Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。
要求：
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 100左右(电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇： campus 校园；process 过程
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. ______________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. Our school held a food festival in the dining hall last Friday.
During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like salad, bread, cakes, Yangzhou fried rice, Gong Bao Chicken and etc. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All of them spoke highly of this activity. Meanwhile, they had a better understanding of China’s rich and special food culture.
In a word, I am interested in learning to cook delicious food. I can depend on myself when I am at home alone. What’s more, cooking helps develop a life skill. It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中对于本次美食节的时间、地点、活动及你的感受的描述，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，通过描述美食节的举办意义来引出此次活动；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。详细描述美食节的活动过程；
第三步，谈论一下自己对于此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①speak highly of赞扬；
②in a word总之；
③be interested in对……感兴趣；
④depend on依靠
[高分句型]
It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools. (it作形式主语)
（2024·河北承德·一模）
李平的英国朋友Jack要来中国当交换生，恰好可以一起过中秋节。下面是Jack给他发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以李平的名义回复。
注意：
（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
I plan to be at your school for the exchange visit next term. And I can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now I really want to know something about this festival. So, could you introduce it to me
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you.
Everything is fine. I’m excited to know that you’ll come to China and we can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival together.
It falls on August 15th in Chinese lunar calendar every year. And it’s a time for the whole family to get together. We usually have a big dinner, admire the moon and share mooncakes. As for the Chinese traditional art forms, paper cutting is one of them. It has been around for over 1500 years. The red paper is cut with scissors and the pictures are usually flowers, animals and things about Chinese history.
Enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据邮件的问题提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己很高兴知道对方会来中国；
第二步，具体描述有关中秋节的事情；
第三步，最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① get together聚在一起
② as for至于
[高分句型]
I’m excited to know that you’ll come to China and we can spend the Mid-Autumn Festival together.（宾语从句）
（2024·浙江湖州·一模）
假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一：
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因；
第三步，书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句)；
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语；定语从句)
（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）
假如你是第一中学毕业班的学生李平，你的笔友美国学生Mike想了解你的近况，请你给他写一封电子邮件介绍一下你的备考生活，并和他说说你在有限的时间内如何积极备考。
写作要点：
1. 告诉他你的备考生活充实而又忙碌；
2. 介绍你的备考生活。
(1)每天课后学习2—3个小时；
(2)坚持体育锻炼；
3. 谈谈你是如何在有限的时间内积极备考的。(有限的时间： limited time)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. As a graduating student, my days are filled with excitement and busyness, because I must prepare for the coming exams.
My preparation routine is quite structured. After school, I dedicate 2—3 hours to studying, focusing on revising key concepts and solving practice problems. However, I also make it a point to balance my studies with physical activities. Regular exercise helps me stay refreshed and focused, ready to tackle the challenges ahead. I create a detailed study plan, setting clear goals for each day. This helps me stay organized and on track. Additionally, I make use of every available resource, to maximize my learning.
Overall, while the days are busy, I am enjoying this phase of my life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的备考生活”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍备考生活是忙碌的；
第二步，根据题干给处的要点，详细描述备考生活；
第三步，介绍自己是如何在有限的时间内积极备考，点评备考生活并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with被……充满
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①As a graduating student, my days are filled with excitement and busyness, because I must prepare for the coming exams.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Additionally, I make use of every available resource, to maximize my learning.（不定式表目的）
（2024·湖南怀化·一模）
假如你叫李华，是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生，你校学生会(Student Union)正在招募学生干部，你很想加入，请根据下面提供的信息用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
Abilities 1. be good at communicating 2. ...
Hobbies 1. doing sports 2. ...
Reasons 1. ...
提示：
1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School. I’d like to be a member of Student Union.
I like doing sports, so I am quite healthy and fit. I like studying very much and often help my classmates with their lessons. I get on well with others, so I have many municating with others is one of my abilities. I think it’s very important as a member of Student Union. And I’d like to help others, too.
If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends. And I can do more for others.
I hope I can be received. Look forward to your answer.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示介绍自己爱好和能力；
第二步，介绍自己想加入的原因；
第三步，最后表达希望和期待。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
② get on well with sb和某人相处很好
③ be able to do sth能够做某事
[高分句型]
If I can be a member of Student Union, I’ll be able to make more friends.（条件状语从句）
（2024·福建莆田·一模）
假定你是李华，你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验，快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合如图所示，分享此次活动的过程和感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
The festival took place on January 20th in the school hall. There were many kinds of activities on that day. First, the science teacher gave an interesting speech. He encouraged us to be more active and creative. Then, we had a design competition. And we shared inventions with others after the competition. Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. Also I truly believe that such activities are crucial for our growth and development. These activities not only made our school life more colorful but helped us realize the importance of science and technology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍科技节活动的过程和感受，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍科技节活动的时间、地点和具体的活动；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. (that引导的定语从句)
（2023·甘肃平凉·三模）
根据下列提示，请你写一篇日记，记述五月一日（星期五）你和李明一起参观科技博物馆的事情。
1. 天气：晴。
2. 距离：离家约一公里。
3. 交通工具：自行车。
4. 时间：早八点半出发，十一点回家。
5. 内容：见到了很多照片、实物等，学到了很多东西。
6. 游人：见到很多父母和孩子、学生、老师等。
7. 参考词汇：科技博物馆the Science and Technology Museum ，公里kilometer，实物things
注意：1. 词数：60—80左右。日记的格式已给出；
2. 可根据内容适当发挥。
Friday May 1, 2009Fine
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【答案】例文：
Friday May 1, 2009Fine
It was a sunny day today. Li Ming and I went to visit the Science and Technology Museum. It is about one kilometer away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8:30 in the morning. At the museum, we saw many photos and other interesting things. We learned a lot. We also saw a lot of students, teachers and many children with their parents. We got home at eleven o’clock and we had a great time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍自己去科技博物馆的一天，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去了哪里；
第二步，具体介绍做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①away from距离
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③set off 出发
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
We got home at eleven o’clock and we had a great time.（and连接并列句）
（2024·广西钦州·一模）
你校英语俱乐部将要举行“My Progress in English Study” 为题的演讲比赛，你将要参加这个演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容要点：
1. 你的英语学习取得了哪些进步；
2. 你做了什么事情从而取得进步；
3. 你对未来英语学习的期望。
注意：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:improve(提高), become(变成), better(更好地), hope(希望), writing(写作)
My Progress in English Study
Hello, everyone. The topic of my speech is my progress in English study.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文：
My Progress in English Study
Hello, everyone. The topic of my speech is my progress in English study. Over the past year, I have significantly improved my language skills. My vocabulary has expanded, and my speaking and listening abilities have become better. To achieve this progress, I have regularly participated in English speaking clubs and practiced with native speakers. Additionally, I have been reading English books and newspapers regularly, which has not only enhanced my reading comprehension but also improved my writing skills.
Looking ahead, I hope to continue this upward trend. I aspire to become more fluent in English and to use it confidently in all settings.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：描述过去的进步时用一般过去时，描述持续到现在的学习活动时用现在完成时，而在表达未来的期望时则使用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时要包含所有要点，为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节，但文中不得透漏个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，在英语中取得的进步；
第二步， 做了什么事情从而取得了进步；
第三步，表达对未来英语学习的期望；
[亮点词汇]
① participate in参加
② have been doing sth一直做某事
③ hope to do sth希望做某事
[高分句型]
①Over the past year, I have significantly improved my language skills. (现在完成时态)
②To achieve this progress, I have regularly participated in English speaking clubs and practiced with native speakers. (动词不定式表目的)
③Looking ahead, I hope to continue this upward trend. (现在分词短语作状语)
（2024·安徽宣城·一模）
假如你班要就“如何为中考做准备”开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你认为在中考准备过程中要注意的事项以及理由：
1.保持良好情绪。2.制定合适的目标。3.合理作息。
4.遇到困难多沟通。5.谈谈你自己的一至两个观点。
注意：1.词数80~100，开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文通顺连贯。
参考词汇：信心 confidence n.
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams Here are some suggestions.
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【答案】例文
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. Don’t be nervous or stressed. Otherwise, we will not have the courage to face difficulties. Secondly, we should have proper aims. If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. Thirdly, don’t stay up late so that we can make ourselves energetic in class and pay attention to our study. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. They can help us get out of trouble. Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料中已给出的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接第一段，在第二段开始给出相应的建议；
第二步，具体阐述在中考准备过程中要注意的事项以及理由。
第三步，最后一段总结。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 集中注意于……
②get out of 摆脱
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. (“It is+adj.+for sb+to do sth”句型)
②Don’t be nervous or stressed. (祈使句)
③If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. (if引导的条件状语从句)
（2024·吉林长春·一模）
为了帮助学生强身健体，热爱运动，你校将在下周三（4月17日）9:00组织篮球比赛，请你写张便条邀请你的朋友Frank参加。不少于40词。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，表述通顺，简洁得体；
2. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 开头结尾已给出。
Frank,
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Your friend,
Peter
【答案】例文：
Frank,
To help students strengthen their bodies and love sports, there will be a basketball game in our school next Wednesday. The basketball game will take place at 9:00 am on April 17th in the gym. I know you like playing basketball. Would you like to take part in it together with me I’m sure it will be exciting and you will have a good time.
Your friend,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一张便条；
②时态：主要采用“一般将来时”；
③提示：需写明活动的时间、地点、邀请意图。注意条理清晰，表达正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍篮球赛目的、时间和地点；
第二步，表达邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①strengthen their bodies 强身健体
②take place 发生、举行
③together with sb. 和某人一起
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
I’m sure it will be exciting and you will have a good time.（宾语从句）
（2024·吉林长春·一模）
假如你是李华，本周班会上，你将代表表主任老师，用英语通知并呼吁同学们参加一次敬老院的公益活动。要点：
1. 星期日早晨8:30在学校门口集合，乘坐公交车前往；
2. 打扫卫生，整理房间， 跟老人聊天；3. 给老人带一些小礼物。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；语言简洁；不少于40词。
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【答案】
例文
Fellow students,
We are going to the old people’s home this Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8: 30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. When we get there, we’ll do some cleaning and tidy their rooms first. After that, we will chat with the old to cheer them up. Before we leave, we’ll give some gifts to them.
It’s a good chance to learn to care for the old. We should take an active part in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给信息通知同学们参加一次敬老院的公益活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍活动的具体内容；
第三步，表达自己对活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①at the school gate在校门口
②chat with sb和某人聊天
③take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
When we get there, we’ll do some cleaning and tidy their rooms first. (when引导的时间状语从句)
（2024·河南南阳·一模）
最近，“English World”杂志在举行题为“My Life in the Future”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示信息，以“My Life in the Future”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 你认为你未来的生活是怎样的？
2. 你的职业会是什么？
3. 你将会拥有……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2. 字数不少于80词。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Life in the Future
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【答案】例文
My Life in the Future
Life in the future will be quite different from now. I think my life in the future will be very wonderful.
In the future, the weather will get hotter in summer and colder in winter, so people must be healthier and stronger to live in such bad weather. And I will be a doctor in the future, because I want to help people and cure their illness. What’s more, I will have my own plane in the future, so it will be quite easy for me to travel all over the world.
All in all, life will change in the future, but we can try our best to make it become better and better from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题目给出的要点提示，注意文章需全篇围绕自己在未来的生活，可以适当增添细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题，用“我的生活很精彩”来引出下文；
第二步，分别从未来的变化、“我”的职业以及拥有什么三个方面来介绍自己未来的生活；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁我们要尽自己最大的努力让未来变得越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more另外
②All in all总的来说
③better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①So it will be quite easy for me to travel all over the world.（形式主语句型）
②All in all, life will change in the future, but we can try our best to make it become better and better from now on.（but连接的并列句）
（2024·陕西西安·三模）
随着2024年春晚西安分会场大唐不夜城的精彩绽放，西安又一次展现了我们的大唐盛景和诗歌文化，给全国人民留下了深刻的印象。西安是我家，文明靠大家。作为市民，我们如何才能成为文明的市民(civilized citizens)，为西安发展贡献自己的一份力量，请以“How to Be Civilized Citizens”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示词：throw rubbishfollow the traffic rules volunteer
要求：1. 内容必须包含题目中所给的要点。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
3. 字数不少于80字。
How to Be Civilized Citizens
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【答案】
例文
How to Be Civilized Citizens
Our city is making its efforts to become a civilized city. As citizens of Green City, we should not only protect our environment but also follow the traffic rules.
First, we mustn’t step on the grass or climb trees. Rubbish mustn’t be thrown everywhere. We should also plant more trees. Second, we must follow the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. Besides, we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others, and do volunteer work to help those who are in need. In short, we should get on well with others.
All in all, we should have good manners. Green City is our hometown. We should protect it.
We all love our hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍如何成为文明市民；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make efforts to努力
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则
④respect尊敬
⑤get on well with…与……相处得好
⑥ all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
What’s more, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others, and do volunteer work to help those who are in need.(who引导定语从句)
（2024·江苏淮安·一模）
“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母相处时遇到困难，以“How to Get Along Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你的做法。
词数：100左右 (标题和第一段已给出，不计入总词数)。
要求：
(1) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(2) 至少写出两点你与父母亲相处时遇到的问题，说说你的做法；
(3) 请勿在文中使用真实的地名、姓名和校名。
How to Get Along Well with Our Parents
Parents are the people who love us most. However, as we grow up, we find it difficult to communicate with them.
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【答案】例文：
How to Get Along Well with Our Parents
Parents are the people who love us most. However, as we grow up, we find it difficult to communicate with them.
First of all, I often talk with my parents about my feelings and worries so that they can know me better. Sharing ideas can make us closer. What’s more, I am never rude to them even if we don’t agree with each other. Being polite is the key to a better relationship. Besides, I’ll find out the reasons why we have different ideas, only in this way can we accept each other little by little.
Let’s communicate with our parents better to bridge the generation gap.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写出两点与父母相处时遇到的问题，详细写出如何和父母交流。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头；
第二步，陈述自己与父母沟通的做法和理由；
第三步，最后是呼吁：让我们更好地与父母沟通，弥合代沟。
[亮点词汇]
①so that为了
②What’s more此外
③even if即使
[高分句型]
①First of all, I often talk with my parents about my feelings and worries so that they can know me better.（so that目的状语从句）
②Being polite is the key to a better relationship.（动名词作主语）
（2024·湖南永州·一模）
近年来，越来越多的青少年热衷于刷短视频。他们认为短视频内容丰富，形式多样，能够给生活带来很多乐趣。然而，一些人沉迷于此，严重影响了学习和生活。请以“My Views on Short Videos”为题，谈谈你对短视频的看法。
参考词汇： become popular, get information, have fun, waste time, be bad for eyes...
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实人名、地名和校名；
2.词数： 80词左右。
My Views on Short Videos
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【答案】例文
My Views on Short Videos
Short videos have become a popular form of media in recent years. I think that short videos have both positive and negative impacts.
Short videos provide a simple way for us to get information and know all kinds of topics, from relaxing talk shows to serious news. We can have fun when we watch short videos. However, there are also some disadvantages. I find I spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence my study. Watching short videos wastes time, and it’s also bad for our eyes. Some of the bad short videos may lead to negative values or behaviors.
In my opinion, it is necessary to control the time of watching short videos.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作题目已给出，围绕主题并结合参考词汇进行写作，注意不要跑题。认真检查单词拼写，正确使用时态，避免语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，短视频有利也有弊；
第二步，重点分析短视频的好处和坏处；
第三步，表明自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
② spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③lead to导致
[高分句型]
①We can have fun when we watch short videos. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I think that short videos have both positive and negative impacts. (that引导宾语从句)
（2024·安徽合肥·一模）
随着中国的国际地位日益提高，越来越多的外国友人想要了解中国，为此，China Daily报社正在以“My country”为题向中学生征稿。假如你是李辉，请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1.地域广阔；
2. 历史悠久；
3. 景点众多；
4………
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不可出现真实姓名与学校名称；
3. 词数 80-100。
My country
China is a beautiful and great country.
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【答案】例文：
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. It’s a big country with a very long and colourful history. It has a vast territory with many high mountains and long rivers. There are many places of interest in China, for example, the Great Wall which draws the attention of people from all over the world. We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. There are different races. Each race has its own culture and customs. My country is becoming stronger and stronger. When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. I am so proud that I am part of this country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“My country”为题介绍中国。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，介绍中国幅员辽阔、历史悠久、景点众多等；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜
② for example 例如
③ fall in love with爱上……
[高分句型]
① We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture.（动词不定式表目的）
② When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food.（when引导时间状语从句）
25．（2024·山东菏泽·一模）
随着网络用语（Internet words）的日渐流行，“栓Q、YYDS、juejuezi、尊嘟假嘟”等网络用语成为不少学生的口头禅，甚至开始进入他们的书面作业。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。短文须包含所有要点并适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
提示：1. 学生使用网络用语的原因。
2. 学生使用网络用语的不良影响。
3. 你的观点。
（温馨提示：交卷前要仔细检查一遍哟，你一定会成功的！）
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【答案】参考范文：
With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as “YYDS, juejuezi” in their homework. Why do the students do so Because some students think the Internet expressions can make homework more interesting and more humorous. Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words.
In fact, for students, using Internet words has bad influence. On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students’ abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages.
In my opinion, students shouldn’t use Internet words. Our Chinese language is rich. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学生使用网络用语的现象，并分析原因；
第二步，谈谈学生使用网络用语的不良影响；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②humorous 幽默的
③enjoyable 令人愉快的
[高分句型]
①Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students’ abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages.（on the one hand ...on the other hand 一方面……另一方面……）