专题02 投稿征文
征文投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。
文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。
【2023 全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
段落要点 首段 总体阐述所述问题或现象。
正文 具体论述或描写相关情况；或者介绍主题人或事物细节。
尾段 得出结论、体会或呼吁
【写作模板】
when it comes to ___________________(当谈到...时） , it is widely acknowledged that________________________（众所周知）.
For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only_________________________but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther, there is no doubt that________________________________(主题特色二)
I do hope that________________________.(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ... .(sb did sth)
【必背词语】
同意，赞同subscribe to
忠实的读者faithful readers
表达自己的观点voice their opinions
不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ...
共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do...
对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to...
谈到、提到 When it comes to...
不可否认...... There is no denying that...
随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching
面临考试 be faced with challenge exams
人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that...
很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously
极为重要；强调...…的重要性...of great/crucial/vital significance/importance;
强调…的重要性emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......…
【必背开头段】
An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意
When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
There are many people who I respect . As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as follows.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。
The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most.
中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。
【必背主题段】
As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
【必背结尾段】
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
We hope that with all these measures taken, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future.
我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics.
就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。
（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 1
（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的方案;
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
（24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习）假设你是李华，上周六你班参观了当地的传统手工作坊（handicraft workshop），请你写一则短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1. 你的经历；
2. 你的收获。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Memorable Visit to a Handicraft Workshop
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Writing 3
（24-25高三上·山东潍坊·开学考试）假如你是李华，你校英文报举办了主题为“终身学习(Lifelong Learning)”的读书分享会活动。请你写一篇投稿记录这次活动，内容包括：
1．活动的内容；2．你的心得。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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Writing 4
（24-25高三上·江西鹰潭·阶段练习）你校英语论坛的专题讨论板块本周讨论的话题为“The Chinese athlete who inspires me most”。请你写一篇短文发布在该板块上，内容包括：
1.运动员简介；
2.激励你的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 5
（24-25高三上·江西南昌·开学考试）假设你是李华，今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动，请你以A Hiking Experience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程;
2. 采取的防护措施;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Hiking Experience
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Writing 1
（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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Writing 2
（2022年全国乙卷）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Writing 3
（2022年全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________专题02 投稿征文
征文投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。
文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。
【2023 全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【思路点拨】
段落要点 首段 总体阐述所述问题或现象。
正文 具体论述或描写相关情况；或者介绍主题人或事物细节。
尾段 得出结论、体会或呼吁
【写作模板】
when it comes to ___________________(当谈到...时） , it is widely acknowledged that________________________（众所周知）.
For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only_________________________but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther, there is no doubt that________________________________(主题特色二)
I do hope that________________________.(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ... .(sb did sth)
【必背词语】
同意，赞同subscribe to
忠实的读者faithful readers
表达自己的观点voice their opinions
不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ...
共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do...
对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to...
谈到、提到 When it comes to...
不可否认...... There is no denying that...
随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching
面临考试 be faced with challenge exams
人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that...
很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously
极为重要；强调...…的重要性...of great/crucial/vital significance/importance;
强调…的重要性emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......…
【必背开头段】
An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意
When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
There are many people who I respect . As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as follows.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。
The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most.
中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。
【必背主题段】
As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
【必背结尾段】
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
We hope that with all these measures taken, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future.
我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled with more love, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics.
就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。
（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
Writing 1
（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的方案;
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails.
In this eco-friendly hike, students are encouraged to bring recycled bags to pick up trash along the hiking trails, which can not only promote their physical health but also foster their sense of social responsibility. By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
It is through these hands-on experiences that we students can be inspired to make a difference in nature and beyond.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于暑期社会实践活动的方案投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人满意：fulfilling→satisfying
加强：strengthen→enhance
参加：participate in→take part in
重要的：essential→crucial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
拓展句：If students can actively participate in the cleanup process, they will recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails.(运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. (运用了动名词作宾语)
Writing 2
（24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习）假设你是李华，上周六你班参观了当地的传统手工作坊（handicraft workshop），请你写一则短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1. 你的经历；
2. 你的收获。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Memorable Visit to a Handicraft Workshop
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【答案】One possible version:
A Memorable Visit to a Handicraft Workshop
Last Saturday, our class went on a journey through time to a local handicraft workshop, where the art of making is not just an exceptional skill, but a living, breathing tradition.
As we stepped into the workshop, the air was filled with the scent of clay and the soft hum of tools at work. Stunned by a wide array of delicate ceramics, I embarked on my first attempt at a vase under the guidance of a seasoned craftsman. With the wheel spinning and clay taking form under my hands, I was overwhelmed with thrill and satisfaction.
This experience has left me with a newfound respect for the art of making and deeper insights into the cultural heritage that the craft represents.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则短文向校英文报投稿，说明参观当地的传统手工作坊的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满：be filled with→be full of
杰出的：exceptional→outstanding
传统：tradition→custom
满意：satisfaction→content
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the wheel spinning and clay taking form under my hands, I was overwhelmed with thrill and satisfaction.
拓展句：When I had the wheel spinning and clay under my hands, I was overwhelmed with thrill and satisfaction.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Saturday, our class went on a journey through time to a local handicraft workshop, where the art of making is not just an exceptional skill, but a living, breathing tradition. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] With the wheel spinning and clay taking form under my hands, I was overwhelmed with thrill and satisfaction. (运用了with的复合结构)
Writing 3
（24-25高三上·山东潍坊·开学考试）假如你是李华，你校英文报举办了主题为“终身学习(Lifelong Learning)”的读书分享会活动。请你写一篇投稿记录这次活动，内容包括：
1．活动的内容；2．你的心得。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
To inspire students to explore the endless world of knowledge through literature, our school’s English newspaper recently held a remarkable reading and sharing event themed “Lifelong Learning”.
The event kicked off with a series of presentations by students who shared books that had profoundly influenced their perspectives on learning. In addition, teachers were invited to provide guidance on learning effectively and continuously. The highlight of the event was a guest lecture by a famous author who shared her personal journey of continuous learning and how it had shaped her career and life.
This event not only broadens my understanding of the importance of lifelong learning but also arouses a passion within me to seek knowledge in every aspect of life. Therefore, I am determined to keep reading to become a better version of myself.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报举办了主题为“终身学习(Lifelong Learning)”的读书分享会活动。要求考生写一篇投稿记录这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→launch
极好的：remarkable → wonderful
此外：in addition→what’s more
拓宽：broaden→ widen
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：This event not only broadens my understanding of the importance of lifelong learning but also arouses a passion within me to seek knowledge in every aspect of life.
拓展句：Not only does this event broaden my understanding of the importance of lifelong learning, but also it arouses a passion within me to seek knowledge in every aspect of life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To inspire students to explore the endless world of knowledge through literature, our school’s English newspaper recently held a remarkable reading and sharing event themed “Lifelong Learning”.（运用了to do不定式结构作状语以及过去分词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】The event kicked off with a series of presentations by students who shared books that had profoundly influenced their perspectives on learning. （运用了who引导的定语从句）
Writing 4
（24-25高三上·江西鹰潭·阶段练习）你校英语论坛的专题讨论板块本周讨论的话题为“The Chinese athlete who inspires me most”。请你写一篇短文发布在该板块上，内容包括：
1.运动员简介；
2.激励你的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 There are numerous remarkable Chinese athletes, of whom diver Quan Hongchan inspires me most.
As a young girl, Quan Hongchan needed to work extremely hard on her training, with the initial intention of improving her family’s living standard and helping her mom cure illness. Growing up in such hard conditions, the girl was brave and hardworking. At the Asian Games, this strong girl displayed her confidence and calmness during each dive. I am inspired by her outstanding talents, extraordinary courage and firm willpower.
In short, Quan Hongchan is a great athlete who goes after perfection in my mind.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于话题为“The Chinese athlete who inspires me most”的短文发布在学校英语论坛的专题讨论板块上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的：numerous→countless
鼓励；鼓舞：inspire→encourage
总之：in short→in a nutshell
出色的：outstanding→prominent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Growing up in such hard conditions, the girl was brave and hardworking.
拓展句：Though Quan Hongchan grew up in such hard conditions, the girl was brave and hardworking.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are numerous remarkable Chinese athletes, of whom diver Quan Hongchan inspires me most.(运用了介词of+whom引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Growing up in such hard conditions, the girl was brave and hardworking.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
Writing 5
（24-25高三上·江西南昌·开学考试）假设你是李华，今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动，请你以A Hiking Experience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程;
2. 采取的防护措施;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Hiking Experience
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【答案】 A Hiking Experience
Last summer, I hiked with friends in Nanchang’s Meiling Scenic Area.
We started early, packing water, snacks, and masks for safety. The air was fresh, and the scenery breathtaking. To ensure a secure journey, we took several protective measures. Firstly, we carefully planned our route, avoiding treacherous or unfamiliar terrain that could pose risks. We also informed family members of our itinerary and estimated return time.
Reaching the summit, we felt a sense of pride and unity. The breathtaking panorama reminded us of nature’s beauty and the importance of perseverance. This hike taught me valuable lessons about friendship, teamwork, and respecting nature. It was a memorable day that I’ll always cherish.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以A Hiking Experience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确保：ensure→guarantee
首先：firstly→first and foremost
到达：reach→arrive at
重要性：importance→significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To ensure a secure journey, we took several protective measures.
拓展句：We took several protective measures, the purpose of which was to ensure a secure journey.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, we carefully planned our route, avoiding treacherous or unfamiliar terrain that could pose risks. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was a memorable day that I’ll always cherish. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
Writing 1
（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 2
（2022年全国乙卷）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺乏：lack→shortage
加强：strengthen→enhance
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
Writing 3
（2022年全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
