书面表达15篇
(长沙中考真题+中考模拟)
长沙中考真题练
1.(2024·湖南长沙·中考真题)学校英文校刊主编读了第一节(回答问题)中David Smith的故事后,深受触动,发起主题为“What does Music Bring to Me ”的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
What does Music Bring to Me
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
例文
What does Music Bring to Me
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding.
Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free.
Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:综合使用“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“What does Music Bring to Me ”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己的经历;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take up 开始从事
②deal with 处理
③broaden my horizons 开阔眼界
④deepen my understanding 加深我的理解
[高分句型]
①Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges.(定语从句)
②I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.(2023·湖南长沙·中考真题)学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: transport 交通;convenient 方便的
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lovable and livable place.
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【答案】例文:
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Hunan.
First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie. Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature. Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Hunan by high-speed train. Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway. If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan. What’s more, the people in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here.
Welcome to Hunan.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:要求以“Amazing Hunan”为题,结合所给要点进行写作,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,突出写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍湖南,引出下文重点;
第二步,介绍湖南的名胜古迹、交通工具、美食和人等;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of 许多
② such as 比如
③ consist of 由……组成
④ what’s more 此外
⑤ feel at home 感到自在
[高分句型]
① Let me tell you something about Hunan.(祈使句)
② Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
③ Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway.(that引导定语从句)
④ If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan.(if引导条件状语从句)
长沙中考模拟真题练
1.(2025·湖南长沙·二模)本周,我们迎来了学校的“安全宣传周”。在我们的日常生活中,安全扮演着至关重要的角色,它涵盖了诸多领域,包括但不限于交通安全、消防安全、食品安全以及网络安全。你被邀请在周一的全校会议上,以“Safety in the Daily Life”为主题进行演讲,旨在唤起全体师生对安全问题的关注,并提出切实可行的自我保护措施。
要求:
(1)字迹工整,书写规范,至少写两个方面的安全;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称;
(3)80—100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety in the Daily Life
Good morning, everyone,
I’m standing here to talk about safety in the daily life.
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【答案】范文:
Safety in the Daily Life
Good morning, everyone,
I’m standing here to talk about safety in the daily life. Safety is very important to us. We should always keep it in our minds.
Firstly, we should follow the traffic rules. When we cross the road, we must wait for the green light. We shouldn’t ride side by side or listen to music while riding. Secondly, we should eat healthily and safely. We shouldn’t eat the food that goes bad. We had better not eat food with too much oil or sugar.
Thirdly, we should remember some fire safety tips. We mustn’t play with fire. When there is a fire, we should call 119 for help as soon as possible and leave the place quickly.
Finally, we should be careful when we are online. We shouldn’t give our personal information to strangers. We mustn’t meet strangers alone.
In a word, safety comes first. We should learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. That’s all. Thank you!
【总体分析】①题材:演讲稿,关于日常安全的演讲
②时态:一般现在时(陈述事实、提出建议)、情态动词(should/must 表示建议或规则)
③提示:需结构清晰,语言简洁有力,多用祈使句和建议句型,适当使用连接词使逻辑流畅。
【写作步骤】第一步,确定主题与结构 1. 开场问候; 2. 引入话题(强调安全的重要性) 3. 分点论述(交通安全、饮食安全、消防安全、网络安全) 4. 总结与呼吁(重申安全第一,呼吁听众注意防护)
第二步,展开论述 ,每段围绕一个安全主题展开,使用 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally使结构清晰。每段用We should... / We mustn’t...提出具体建议。
第三步,优化语言,替换简单词汇为更正式的表达。加入复杂句型(如定语从句、条件句)提升语言层次。
【亮点词汇】① ride side by side并排骑行
②personal information个人信息
【高分句型】① Safety, which affects everyone’s daily life, should never be ignored.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句,强调安全的重要性)
② Not only should we follow traffic rules, but we must also avoid distractions while riding.(运用了 not only...but also... 倒装结构,增强语气)
③ If we fail to protect our personal information online, we may face serious risks.(运用了 if 引导的条件状语从句,增强逻辑性)
2.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)初中三年,在老师的辛勤教诲、家长的悉心照料、同学朋友的关心下,我们收获很多。如今即将毕业,你很想感谢他们。假如你是李华,你校英语报 Share Your Voice 正在征集以感恩为主题的文章,请以“The Person I’d Like to Thank Most”为题,写一篇英语作文。
1. Who do you want to thank most
2. Why do you want to thank him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意事项:
1. 词数:100词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
The Person I’d Like to Thank Most
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【答案】例文
The Person I’d Like to Thank Most
I’m Li Hua. Among all the people who have supported me during my three years in junior high school, the person I’d like to thank most is my mother.
She has taken good care of me every day. When I met difficulties in study or life, she always encouraged me and gave me useful advice. She spent a lot of time helping me with my homework and taught me how to be a kind and strong person.
From her, I’ve learned the value of love and responsibility. I will do my best to be a person like her and make her proud. I want to do something for her at home and help her clean up. I want to cook her a meal personally on her birthday. I am grateful for my mother.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己想要感谢谁;
第二步,描述自己想要感谢的原因;
第三步,最后介绍自己从这个人身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① take good care of好好照顾
② spend time doing花时间做某事
③ be grateful for感激
[高分句型]
①Among all the people who have supported me during my three years in junior high school, the person I’d like to thank most is my mother.(定语从句)
②When I met difficulties in study or life, she always encouraged me and gave me useful advice.(时间状语从句)
3.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·阶段练习)在前面的回答问题当中,我们了解了黄旭华先生。为了核潜艇事业,他隐姓埋名,将自己的青春和热血都奉献给了国家的核潜艇研发事业。作为初中生,我们也要做德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。在你的周围,一定也有符合新时代要求的榜样。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
Who do you appreciate (欣赏)
What is he/she like
Why do you appreciate him or her
What have you learned from him/ her
要求:
(1)文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息:
(2)80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
In our lively society, there’s a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me.
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【答案】例文
In our lively society, there’s a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me. He is my neighbor, a hard-working and kind person. He always helps others and never gives up, even when facing challenges. I appreciate him because he shows me how to stay positive and work hard. He is someone who always encourages me to do my best. Because of his dedication, I have learned the importance of perseverance. He is a true role model, and I hope to be like him in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你所欣赏的人;
第二步,描述他/她的特点;
第三步,解释你为什么欣赏他/她;
第四步,说明你从他/她身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① inspire 激励
② hard-working 勤奋的
③ role model 榜样
[高分句型]
He is someone who always encourages me to do my best. (who引导的定语从句)
4.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·阶段练习)学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“How can We Build a Better School ”的征文。请你结合下图所示的笔记内容,简单描述我校存在的一些环境问题,并提出可行的建议或解决办法,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1.80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数):
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名:
3.要点齐全,语句通顺,做适当拓展。
Problems ●throw rubbish everywhere;
●waste lots of books and paper,
●…
How can We Build a Better School
Our school is just like our warm home. Everyone should play a part in protecting the school environment and making it a better place.
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【答案】例文
How can We Build a Better School
Our school is just like our warm home. Everyone should play a part in protecting the school environment and making it a better place. However, some students are still throwing rubbish and spit here and there, which makes our school dirty. Some students always fight with our classmates, and they don’t get along well with each other. Besides, some students always waste food. In my opinion, a better school should be tidy and peaceful.
So how can we build it First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. And we should throw them into the dustbin. Second, we should save food. Third, we should be friendly to our classmates.
I hope our school will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,必须包括所有内容,可以适当增加细节,以使内容连贯;
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示内容,指出学校存在的一些问题,如学生乱扔垃圾、打架、浪费食物等。
第二步,说明建设更好学校的标准是整洁和平和,并具体提出相应的解决措施,如不乱扔垃圾、节约粮食、对同学友好等。
第三步,最后表达对学校越来越好的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①play a part in 参与,在……中起作用
②throw...into... 把……扔进……
③get along well with 与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
However, some students are still throwing rubbish and spit here and there, which makes our school dirty.(which引导的定语从句)
5.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)你校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中英国人的空余生活后,发起了主题为 “How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful” 的征文,号召中学生合理利用空闲时间。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇作文投稿。提示:
◆帮助父母做家务;
◆可以培养兴趣爱好;
◆参与志愿活动,帮助他人。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右 (标题已给出,不计入总词数) ;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word bank: suggestion n. 建议;not only...but also...不但……而且……
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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【答案】
例文:
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
As students, we often have spare time after school or on weekends. To make this time more meaningful, I have some suggestions.
First, we can help our parents with housework. Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. For example, doing the dishes or cleaning the room can be a good start. Second, developing hobbies is a great way to spend our free time. Whether it’s painting, playing a musical instrument, or reading, hobbies can enrich our lives and help us relax. Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. Helping others, such as tutoring younger students or assisting in community events, can bring us a sense of fulfillment and make a positive impact on society.
In conclusion, by helping at home, pursuing hobbies, and volunteering, we can make our spare time both enjoyable and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要说明空闲时间的重要性,并提出使其更有意义的建议。
第二步,分别详细描述如何通过帮助父母做家务、培养兴趣爱好和参与志愿活动来充实空闲时间。
第三步,总结并鼓励大家积极行动。
[亮点词汇]
①lighten one’s burden减轻某人的负担
②responsibility责任
③enrich使丰富
[高分句型]
①Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. (动名词作主语)
②Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. (就近原则)
6.(2025·湖南长沙·模拟预测)无论是 “一日游四季,十里不同天” 的独库公路,还是异乡街头的诱人美食,都是这个世界上美丽的风景。学校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中独库公路的介绍后,发起了一场主题为 “Love Travel, Love Life” 的征文活动。请结合以下思维导图内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求: (1) 80词左右 (标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Love Travel, Love Life
A travel experience●Time ●Place ●Journey ●… Benefits of travel●See wonderful places ●Enjoy delicious food ●…
Love Travel, Love Life
Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders.
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【答案】
Love Travel, Love Life Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders.
When we travel, we can not only see the most beautiful scenery and breathe the freshest air, but also enjoy the delicious local food.
I once went to Hainan with my parents. It was my first time to see the sea. The weather was pleasant. The sea was as blue as the sky. I picked up many colourful shells and bought many interesting souvenirs. I was very excited.
Travel makes us happy and relaxed. Life is a journey and should be colorful. Let’s enjoy travel and enjoy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇关于旅行感悟的记叙文;
②时态:主要为一般现在时描述旅行的普遍意义,过去时讲述个人旅行经历;
③提示:围绕旅行展开,从旅行的好处及个人旅行体验出发,自主构建内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明旅行的意义,即旅行能让我们见识世界奇观,阐述了旅行对开阔视野的作用;
第二步,通过描述个人去海南旅行的经历,包括看到大海、捡贝壳、买纪念品等,详细呈现了旅行中的具体体验;
第三步,总结旅行让我们快乐放松,强调生活如旅行应丰富多彩,呼吁享受旅行和生活,升华了主题,再次强调旅行对生活的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①opens one’s eyes to使某人见识到;
②pleasant令人愉快的;
③colourful丰富多彩的
[高分句型]
①When we travel, we can not only see the most beautiful scenery and breathe the freshest air, but also enjoy the delicious local food. (not only...but also...并列谓语)
②It was my first time to see the sea. (It is/was one’s first time to do sth.某人第一次做某事句式 )
7.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)在电影《小小的我》中,刘春和在成长路上经历的难忘故事让他学会了坚持与勇气。初中三年即将结束,你的青春时光里也一定有许多珍贵的回忆与成长感悟。请以“An Unforgettable Experience in Junior High School”为题,写一篇短文来描述一个让你难以忘怀的经历,包含以下要点:
(1) What is the most unforgettable experience (overcoming the difficulties; warmth between friends; the excitement of the school sports day; preparing for the art festival or…)
(2) What do you learn from the experience
(3) What is your hope for the future
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
An Unforgettable Experience in Junior High School
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience in Junior High School
One of my most unforgettable experiences in junior high school was participating in the school sports day. I was nervous about running the 100-meter race, but with the encouragement of my friends, I decided to give it my best shot. Although I didn’t win, I felt proud of myself for overcoming my fear and trying my hardest.
From this experience, I learned the importance of courage and perseverance. Even if the outcome isn’t perfect, the effort itself is valuable. It taught me to face challenges with confidence and to never give up.
In the future, I hope to continue embracing new challenges and growing stronger with each experience. I believe that every step forward, no matter how small, brings me closer to my goals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍让你难以忘怀的经历以及你的收获;
第二步,介绍你对于未来的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①participating in参加
②encouragement鼓励
③decided to决定去
[高分句型]
①Although I didn’t win, I felt proud of myself for overcoming my fear and trying my hardest.(让步状语从句)
②I believe that every step forward, no matter how small, brings me closer to my goals.(宾语从句)
8.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)在繁忙的生活中,爱好如同一盏明灯,照亮我们的前路,给我们带来无尽的快乐和满足感。你们班同学在读了女孩古金灵的故事后,决定开展主题为“My Hobby Makes Me Better.”的个人爱好分享会。那你的爱好是什么呢?你认为人为什么要有爱好?请你根据以下提示,和大家分享一下吧,具体内容可以根据实际情况适当补充。
提示:
要求:
(1)语句通顺,语意连贯;
(2)80词左右;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】
例文
My Hobby Makes Me Better
My hobby is reading. It’s a wonderful journey that takes me to different worlds.
There are several reasons why hobbies are essential. Firstly, they’re beneficial to our health. Reading, for example, helps me relax and reduces stress. Secondly, hobbies contribute to self-improvement. Reading broadens my horizons, showing me different cultures and thoughts. Moreover, hobbies can build connections. I can communicate with other book lovers, share ideas and make new friends.
In a word, hobbies light up our lives and make us better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先通过介绍自己的爱好,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述“人为什么要有爱好”;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be beneficial to对……有益
②contribute to有助于
③In a word总之
④communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①There are several reasons why hobbies are essential. (定语从句)
②Reading broadens my horizons, showing me different cultures and thoughts. (现在分词短语作状语)
9.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom最近得知中国春节被联合国教科文组织列为人类非物质文化遗产,他对此十分感兴趣,想要寒假来中国过春节。请你写一封信向他介绍春节的相关信息,以及一些与人交往的注意事项。
要求:1.包含思维导图中给出的关键信息;
2.语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰
3.80词左右(格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are coming to China for Chinese Spring Festival this year. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I can’t wait to see you soon in China.
Your,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are coming to China for Chinese Spring Festival this year. The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, symbolizing family reunion and new beginnings. During this time, we put up spring couplets, set off fireworks, and have a big reunion dinner with family. When we meet others, remember to shake hands politely and use public chopsticks during meals to show respect. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the festive atmosphere and cultural experience.
I can’t wait to see you soon in China.
Your,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章的写作要点已在信件中给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达对Tom来中国过春节的欢迎,并简要提及春节的重要性。。
第二步,介绍春节的重要性,详细介绍春节的传统习俗,如贴春联、放鞭炮、吃团圆饭等。提醒Tom在与人交往时的注意事项,如握手、使用公筷等。
第三步,期待与Tom见面的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①symbolize象征
②politely礼貌地
③respect尊敬,尊重
[高分句型]
①When we meet others, remember to shake hands politely and use public chopsticks during meals to show respect. (when引导的时间状语从句)
10.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试) 心理健康是青少年全面健康成长的基石。假如你是李华,你校英文报专栏Voices of Youth就是否在校内成立心理健康俱乐部征询学生们的意见。上周班会上,同学们就此展开了讨论。请你结合以下讨论内容,给该栏目编辑部写一封邮件,简述同学们的意见,并谈谈你的看法。
Q: Should we start a Mental (心理的) Health Club
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear editor,
We had a discussion on whether to start a Mental Health Club in our class last week.
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【答案】Dear editor,
We had a discussion on whether to start a Mental Health Club in our class last week. Some of my classmates believed it would provide a safe space to share feelings and learn coping strategies. Others, however, worried that mental health concerns were private and might make them feel uncomfortable.
In my opinion, establishing such a club would support students’ well-being. It would offer professional advice and organize activities to help us stay positive and healthy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态以一般现在时和一般过去时主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,提出主题;
第二步,阐述正反两方面观点,简单叙述支持方的理由(提供分享与学习机会)以及反对方的顾虑(隐私问题);
第三步,最后表达“我”的观点,并给出具体好处,如提供专业建议、开展有益活动等,呼应“心理健康俱乐部”的主题。
[亮点词汇]
①Some of 其中一些
②In my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
Some of my classmates believe it would provide a safe space to share feelings and learn coping strategies.(宾语从句)
11.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)从书法篆刻、绘画、戏剧,再到服装、建筑、烹饪和刺绣等都吸引着大批年轻人。越来越多的年轻人不仅热衷于购买国货,还热衷于传承中国传统文化。请你根据以下要点提示,以“How to Pass Down Chinese Culture”为题,写一篇英语短文。
1. 介绍2个你最感兴趣的含中国元素的文化形式;martial arts (武术); Chinese painting; the Great Wall …
2. 为什么要传承中国文化;(the pride of Chinese people; the precious wealth of world culture …)
3. 如何传承中国文化。(protect; introduce Chinese culture in a modern way …)
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3. 要求条理清楚,语意连贯,字迹工整,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文:
How to Pass Down Chinese Culture
Nowadays, more and more Chinese young people are interested in Chinese culture. Of all the forms of Chinese culture, I like Chinese paper cutting and the Great Wall best.
Chinese paper cutting has a history of over 1, 000 years. Using a pair of scissors, people cut red paper into different kinds of Chinese characters and animals. People regard them as a symbol of good luck, health and wealth.
The Great Wall is one of the most famous landmarks in the world. Made of stone, brick, and other materials, it took many years to construct. Today, it is a symbol of China’s history and attracts millions of visitors every year.
Through passing down Chinese culture, we can not only deepen our understanding of Chinese culture, but also gain a practical skill and a sense of beauty.
In order to pass down Chinese culture, we should be strict with oneself both in study and behavior. And in our spare time, we should learn about Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以 “一般现在时” 为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍2个最感兴趣的含中国元素的文化形式;
第二步,阐述为什么要传承中国文化;
第三步,如何传承中国文化。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②regard … as …把……当作……
③not only … but also …不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
Using a pair of scissors, people cut red paper into different kinds of Chinese characters and animals.(现在分词作状语)
12.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)中考在即,九年级的同学们面临各科复习压力,骤然压力倍增,从而造成很多的负面情绪,你校校刊英文专栏“Teenagers’ life”的主编因此发起关于“如何处理负面情绪”的征文。请你根据以下提示并适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 80词左右。
Negative Emotions
when I…
How to deal with them
calm down take time to reflect turn to others
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【答案】例文
Negative Emotions
As the senior high school entrance examination is around the corner, we Grade Nine students are under great pressure. Negative emotions like worry and sadness often affect us.
When I feel down, I take a deep breath to calm myself down. Then, I set aside some time to think about what makes me feel this way. Through reflection, I gain a deeper understanding of my problems and their sources. If I can’t solve them alone, I will turn to my parents or friends. They always listen patiently and offer me useful advice.
By doing these, I can manage my negative emotions and stay positive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括中英文提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代写作背景,引出负面情绪这一主题;
第二步,详细阐述自己应对负面情绪的方法;
第三步,书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
①around the corner 即将来临
②set aside time to do sth. 留出时间做某事
[高分句型]
①When I feel down, I take a deep breath to calm myself down. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If I can’t solve them alone, I will turn to my parents or friends. (if引导的条件状语从句)
13.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)春节是中国最重要的节日。在春节期间,人们会用各种方式去庆祝。请你根据下面的思维导图用英文简单介绍一下你是如何庆祝春节的,并谈谈春节期间走亲访友要注意到的礼仪,最后说一说你的新年愿望。
How did you celebrate the Spring Festival *visit relatives and friends
*…
What manners should you pay attention to when visiting relatives and friends *bring some gifts
*…
*…
What is your New Year’s resolution
Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
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【答案】例文
Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. During the Spring Festival, I celebrate it in many ways. First of all, I always help my parents clean the house thoroughly. It is a traditional custom to sweep away bad luck. Then, we make dumplings together. It is not only a cooking process but also a symbol of family reunion. We put coins in some dumplings, and the one who eats the dumpling with a coin is said to be lucky in the new year.
When visiting relatives and friends, there are some manners we should pay attention to. We should bring some gifts, such as fruits, nuts or traditional pastries. It shows our respect and good wishes. Also, we should greet the elders politely. Using respectful words like “Happy New Year” and “Wish you good health” can make them feel delighted.
As for my New Year’s resolution, I hope I can make great progress in my studies. I plan to read more books, both for knowledge and for fun. I also wish my family and friends can be healthy and happy all the year round. I believe as long as we work hard, our dreams will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:介绍自己如何庆祝春节,并谈谈春节期间走亲访友要注意到的礼仪,以及自己的新年愿望,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己如何庆祝春节,注意行文流畅,用词准确;
第二步,谈谈春节期间走亲访友要注意到的礼仪,细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,描述自己的新年愿望,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②is said to… 据说……
③as for… 说到,至于……
[高分句型]
①We put coins in some dumplings, and the one who eats the dumpling with a coin is said to be lucky in the new year.(定语从句)
②As for my New Year’s resolution, I hope I can make great progress in my studies.(宾语从句)书面表达15篇
(长沙中考真题+中考模拟)
长沙中考真题练
1.(2024·湖南长沙·中考真题)学校英文校刊主编读了第一节(回答问题)中David Smith的故事后,深受触动,发起主题为“What does Music Bring to Me ”的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
What does Music Bring to Me
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
2.(2023·湖南长沙·中考真题)学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
(1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: transport 交通;convenient 方便的
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lovable and livable place.
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长沙中考模拟真题练
1.(2025·湖南长沙·二模)本周,我们迎来了学校的“安全宣传周”。在我们的日常生活中,安全扮演着至关重要的角色,它涵盖了诸多领域,包括但不限于交通安全、消防安全、食品安全以及网络安全。你被邀请在周一的全校会议上,以“Safety in the Daily Life”为主题进行演讲,旨在唤起全体师生对安全问题的关注,并提出切实可行的自我保护措施。
要求:
(1)字迹工整,书写规范,至少写两个方面的安全;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称;
(3)80—100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety in the Daily Life
Good morning, everyone,
I’m standing here to talk about safety in the daily life.
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2.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)初中三年,在老师的辛勤教诲、家长的悉心照料、同学朋友的关心下,我们收获很多。如今即将毕业,你很想感谢他们。假如你是李华,你校英语报 Share Your Voice 正在征集以感恩为主题的文章,请以“The Person I’d Like to Thank Most”为题,写一篇英语作文。
1. Who do you want to thank most
2. Why do you want to thank him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意事项:
1. 词数:100词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
The Person I’d Like to Thank Most
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3.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·阶段练习)在前面的回答问题当中,我们了解了黄旭华先生。为了核潜艇事业,他隐姓埋名,将自己的青春和热血都奉献给了国家的核潜艇研发事业。作为初中生,我们也要做德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。在你的周围,一定也有符合新时代要求的榜样。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
Who do you appreciate (欣赏)
What is he/she like
Why do you appreciate him or her
What have you learned from him/ her
要求:
(1)文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息:
(2)80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
In our lively society, there’s a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me.
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4.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·阶段练习)学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“How can We Build a Better School ”的征文。请你结合下图所示的笔记内容,简单描述我校存在的一些环境问题,并提出可行的建议或解决办法,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1.80词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数):
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名:
3.要点齐全,语句通顺,做适当拓展。
Problems ●throw rubbish everywhere;
●waste lots of books and paper,
●…
How can We Build a Better School
Our school is just like our warm home. Everyone should play a part in protecting the school environment and making it a better place.
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5.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)你校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中英国人的空余生活后,发起了主题为 “How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful” 的征文,号召中学生合理利用空闲时间。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇作文投稿。提示:
◆帮助父母做家务;
◆可以培养兴趣爱好;
◆参与志愿活动,帮助他人。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右 (标题已给出,不计入总词数) ;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word bank: suggestion n. 建议;not only...but also...不但……而且……
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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6.(2025·湖南长沙·模拟预测)无论是 “一日游四季,十里不同天” 的独库公路,还是异乡街头的诱人美食,都是这个世界上美丽的风景。学校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中独库公路的介绍后,发起了一场主题为 “Love Travel, Love Life” 的征文活动。请结合以下思维导图内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求: (1) 80词左右 (标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Love Travel, Love Life
A travel experience●Time ●Place ●Journey ●… Benefits of travel●See wonderful places ●Enjoy delicious food ●…
Love Travel, Love Life
Travel opens our eyes to the world’s wonders.
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7.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)在电影《小小的我》中,刘春和在成长路上经历的难忘故事让他学会了坚持与勇气。初中三年即将结束,你的青春时光里也一定有许多珍贵的回忆与成长感悟。请以“An Unforgettable Experience in Junior High School”为题,写一篇短文来描述一个让你难以忘怀的经历,包含以下要点:
(1) What is the most unforgettable experience (overcoming the difficulties; warmth between friends; the excitement of the school sports day; preparing for the art festival or…)
(2) What do you learn from the experience
(3) What is your hope for the future
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
An Unforgettable Experience in Junior High School
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8.(2025·湖南长沙·一模)在繁忙的生活中,爱好如同一盏明灯,照亮我们的前路,给我们带来无尽的快乐和满足感。你们班同学在读了女孩古金灵的故事后,决定开展主题为“My Hobby Makes Me Better.”的个人爱好分享会。那你的爱好是什么呢?你认为人为什么要有爱好?请你根据以下提示,和大家分享一下吧,具体内容可以根据实际情况适当补充。
提示:
要求:
(1)语句通顺,语意连贯;
(2)80词左右;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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9.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom最近得知中国春节被联合国教科文组织列为人类非物质文化遗产,他对此十分感兴趣,想要寒假来中国过春节。请你写一封信向他介绍春节的相关信息,以及一些与人交往的注意事项。
要求:1.包含思维导图中给出的关键信息;
2.语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰
3.80词左右(格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you are coming to China for Chinese Spring Festival this year. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I can’t wait to see you soon in China.
Your,
Li Hua
10.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试) 心理健康是青少年全面健康成长的基石。假如你是李华,你校英文报专栏Voices of Youth就是否在校内成立心理健康俱乐部征询学生们的意见。上周班会上,同学们就此展开了讨论。请你结合以下讨论内容,给该栏目编辑部写一封邮件,简述同学们的意见,并谈谈你的看法。
Q: Should we start a Mental (心理的) Health Club
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear editor,
We had a discussion on whether to start a Mental Health Club in our class last week.
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11.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)从书法篆刻、绘画、戏剧,再到服装、建筑、烹饪和刺绣等都吸引着大批年轻人。越来越多的年轻人不仅热衷于购买国货,还热衷于传承中国传统文化。请你根据以下要点提示,以“How to Pass Down Chinese Culture”为题,写一篇英语短文。
1. 介绍2个你最感兴趣的含中国元素的文化形式;martial arts (武术); Chinese painting; the Great Wall …
2. 为什么要传承中国文化;(the pride of Chinese people; the precious wealth of world culture …)
3. 如何传承中国文化。(protect; introduce Chinese culture in a modern way …)
要求:
1. 80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3. 要求条理清楚,语意连贯,字迹工整,可适当发挥。
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12.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)中考在即,九年级的同学们面临各科复习压力,骤然压力倍增,从而造成很多的负面情绪,你校校刊英文专栏“Teenagers’ life”的主编因此发起关于“如何处理负面情绪”的征文。请你根据以下提示并适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 80词左右。
Negative Emotions
when I…
How to deal with them
calm down take time to reflect turn to others
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13.(24-25九年级下·湖南长沙·开学考试)春节是中国最重要的节日。在春节期间,人们会用各种方式去庆祝。请你根据下面的思维导图用英文简单介绍一下你是如何庆祝春节的,并谈谈春节期间走亲访友要注意到的礼仪,最后说一说你的新年愿望。
How did you celebrate the Spring Festival *visit relatives and friends
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What manners should you pay attention to when visiting relatives and friends *bring some gifts
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What is your New Year’s resolution
Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.
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