专题09 图表类和图画类
图表类
【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【思路点拨】
对于图表作文,写作内容主要包括三个方面:描述图表信息+从中总结出变化规律+提出建议或解决 之道(这一部分可以根据实际要求进行取舍)。
准备过程中,应着重从以下几个方面入手。
1. 读出图表所传达的信息,并对信息进行分类
将图表所传达的信息进行全面的转换,并根据不同的项目对信息进行分类,这是进行数据整合的基础, 这一过程中要尽量确保信息全面。
2. 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因
信息经过分类之后,以某一个标准为参照(比如时间、地域等),总结出同一对象在不同时间/地域/…… 下的变化规律,或通过对同类信息的对比分析出问题出现的原因。找出规律/原因是解决问题/提出建议的基础。
3. 数据处理
对数据进行处理时,要根据题干的要求,着重处理差异比较大或变化比较明显的信息。这样呈现数据时才能有所侧重,写的时候才能有详略之分。
4. 段落构建
一般而言,图表作文可分为三个段落来写。第一个段落点明调查/统计对象并进行图表信息的转换,转 换过程中需要注意的是信息的取舍和详略程度。第二段主要是根据信息总结出规律或找出问题出现的原因。 第三段则主要是建议的提出或解决方法的提出。其中第一段和第二段是重点段落,第三段可根据题干要求 进行取舍。
【写作模板】
模板一
①The bar chart_______(给出图表的出处)reflects______(解释图表所反映的现象). From these statistics, it can be seen that______(具体说明这一现象).
②Generally speaking, _______(分析这一现象产生的几点原因)factors have contributed to this phenomenon.For one thing, _______(第一点原因). For another, ______(第二点原因).
③As far as I am concerned,______(发表个人看法). First,_______(其中一条解决办法). Second, _______(另外一条解决办法).
模板二
①The two charts reveal the striking changes in______(引出图表揭示的现象). From the charts we can see that the percentage of _____(其中一项变化)is growing steadily, and the percentage of______(另外一项变化)rises from _____ to ______(通过具体数据加以说明), while the percentage of______(第三项变化)decreases dramatically from_____ to _____(通过具体数据加以说明).
②The changes are chiefly due to the following reasons. To start with,_______(第一点原因). Besides,______(第二点原因).Furthermore,_______(第三点原因).
③With the above analysis, we can conclude that_______(对以上分析加以总结). What’s more, _______(进一步提出解决方法)
【必备词块】
1. 点明图表所反映的主题时常用的词汇:
table 表格,chart 图表,diagram 图解/示意图,figure图形/数字,describe 描述,tell 告诉,show 表明, represent 描绘/展示,indicate 显示
2. 分析数据差异及变化趋势时常用的词汇:
(1)表示上升或增加的:rise, increase, go up
(2)表示下降或减少的:decrease, fall, reduce, decline, drop, go down
(3)表示变化特点的:sharply 急剧地,quickly 迅速地,rapidly 快速地,dramatically 戏剧性地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地。
(4)表示比较的:compared different from, difference between, while, contrary, however, more than, less than。
【万能句式】
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 1
● 表示“说明”的常用句式
在说明图表的时候,要使用下列表示“说明”的常用句式,它们可以帮助读者弄清楚所引信息的出处,有效地将你要说的话带出来。
1.As we can see from the chart/graph / table/diagram,…从图表中可以看出……(eg: 模板(一)How People Spent Their Holidays)
2.The chart/graph / table/diagram shows/displays that,…如图所示……
3.As can be shown in/According to the chart/graph / table/diagram,…如图所示……
4.The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal that…
图表中的数据表明……
5.The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…图表描述了……
6.It is clear/apparent from the chart/graph / table/diagram that…
从图表我们可以清楚地看到……
图表类满分作文必备词汇
● 表示“数据”的常用句式
1.…had the largest percentage/proportion of… ……在……方面具有很大的百分比。
2.…account (s) for/take (s) up 10%.……占有10%。
3.Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.
与A相比,B有更高的比例。
4.On the top of the list is…, which accounts for 60%.占比重最高的是……,占60%。
5.At the bottom is…, which takes up 20%.占最低比重的是……,占20%。
6.A is second to B. A仅次于B。
7.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重,紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
● 表示“数据变化”的常用句式
在描述图表的过程中,考生有必要对图表的数据进行描述,因此,掌握相应地表示变化的句式也是相当重要的。
a.表示增加、减少和波动的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
2.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
3.There was a boom in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
4.The number of (private cars) climbed/jumped/rose suddenly/went sharply up/soared to…in…在……(时间),(私家车)的数量猛增到……(辆)。
5.There was an evident/ apparent/ obvious increase in…from…to….
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的增长。
6.The number of (private cars) increased/rose steadily/gradually from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
7.There was a steady/gradual increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
8.There was a slight/slow increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,’ (私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
9.The number of (private cars)increased/rose slightly/slowly from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
10.The number of (private cars) decreased/fell/dropped suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/sharply/steeply from…to… 从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
11.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/steep decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of (private cars)from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
12.There was a (n) evident/apparent/obvious reduction/decline in...from....to...
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的下降。
13.The number of (private cars) dropped sharply/went sharply down to…in…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量急剧下降到……(辆)。
14.The number of (private cars) increased/rose by …% from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量增加了百分之……
15.The number of (private cars) fell/dropped/declined by …%from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量下降了百分之……
16.There was a slight fluctuation in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有轻微的波动。
b.表示变化不大或没有变化的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) remained steady/stable/constant between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量保持稳定。
2.The number of (private cars) stayed the same between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
3.There was little/hardly any change in the number of (private cars ) between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
4.The number of (private cars) remained level between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量趋于稳定。
5.The number of (private cars) remained steady at approximately…between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量稳定在……(辆)左右。
6.The number of (private cars) appeared to level off.(私家车)的数量开始稳定下来了。
c.表示最高点或最低点的常用结构
1.The situation/figures reached a peak/a high at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
2.The situation/figures bottomed out at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
3.The situation/figures peaked at …% in.....情况(数据)在…(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
4.The situation/figures hit a trough at ...% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
5.The number soared to a record high of…数量剧增至历史新高,为……(数目)。
d.表示倍数的常用结构
1.A is twice/three times/four times what it was in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
2.A is twice/three times/four times the amount in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
3.A is twice/three times/four times as much/many as...in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍):
4.A is twice/three times/four times more than...in...与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)还要多。
5.From…to…, A increased/dropped more than six fold.从……到……期间,A增加(减少)了六倍。
6.The output of steel in 1990 was 400% up compared with in 1980. 与1980年相比,1990年钢铁产量增加了四倍。
7.The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between…and…从……到……期间,数字大概是原来的两倍(三倍、五倍)
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 2
1. 描述图表变化趋势的词汇
上升 (v.):
increase; go up; rise; improve; grow;
jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增)
上升 (n.):
increase; rise; growth; jump; surge
下降 (v.):
fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip
plummet; plunge(暴跌)
下降 (n.):
decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动 (v.):fluctuate
波动 (n.):fluctuation
持平(v.):
stabilize; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; level off
多条曲线趋势一致:
A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B
2. 描述图表变化程度的词汇
程度很大significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically; enormously;substantially;markedly
程度较轻 slightly;gradually;slowly; steadily;moderately
3. 极值类词汇
最高点:reach the peak/top/highest point;
increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点:reach/hit the bottom/lowest point;
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占比最多:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for/ the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占比最少:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
4. "大约"的表达方式
about/around + 数字
数字 + or so
approximately + 数字
图表类满分作文必备词汇 万能句型
① The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
② Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
③ Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
④ The percentage of students taking part-time jobs remains a continuous increase all through the four years in university, starting from 67.77% in freshmen, reaching 71.13% and 71.93% respectively in sophomores and juniors, and ending at 88.24% in seniors at length.
④ 饼状图描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%./ We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
⑤ 饼状图分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
解释原因的功能句型
● 第一句:
① Three major factors / reasons give rise to (引起)the situation(情况)/ phenomenon (现象)mentioned above.
② What gives rise to the situation / phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
③ It is of no difficulty to come up with(提出,想出) some possible factors for these changes.
④ The contributing factors(成因)responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
⑤ What accounts for this situation At least, for my part, three factors contribute to it.
⑥ This situation can be traced to(追溯到)a multitude of(众多的)factors; the fundamental ones, however, can be sought as follows.
●分条描述原因:
First and foremost, these changes are closely related to...
In the first place, this trend is bound up with(与...有密切关系)...
In addition, we must admit that this tendency/situation also has a lot to do with ...
Moreover, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from….
... is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Finally, we may notice that ... also plays a positive roles in leading to this phenomenon.
评论预测的功能句型
评论类
① It is of great importance for (the government and authorities concerned) to (place a higher value on) (the practical education and integrated development of college students).
② For one thing, relevant laws and regulations have to be established and implemented (to protect the rights of college students when they take part in part-time jobs). For another, it is high time that a nationwide campaign was launched to educate (college students to strike a balance between their social work and study). In these ways, a brighter future will surely await the young generation when they step into real society.
③ In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that ....
预测趋势类
①From what has been discussed above, the trend can be predicated(预测) to continue in the following years with the rapid development of economy and society.
② I firmly believe that this tendency will continue in the forthcoming years.
③ And there is every possible reason to believe that this condition will go on in the near future.
④ And we can predict with assurance that the situation will continue maintaining an upward trend in the following years.
⑤ Thus, how to tackle this problem properly should be placed on a high value by the public and relevant departments.
⑥ And accordingly, immediate measures must be taken to reverse(逆转)or at least ease this worsening situation.
(24-25高三上·湖北武汉·开学考试)你是英语课代表,以词汇记忆难度为主题,对全班进行了调查(如下图所示)。请你在英语课堂上进行一次口头汇报,内容包括:
1. 调查结果;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
图画类
图画类作文要求将画面所包含的信息转换成文字,旨在避免汉语思维,要求直接用英语思维。它要求根据图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文,包括叙述一个故事,或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画类作文就内容而言,可以写观察到的内容,也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容;就表达方式而言,可以单纯地理解、说明,也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述,因此该类文体不仅具有一定的观察分析能力,还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。写好图画类作文的关键是:一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容,并直接用英语表达,千万不要先想好一句句的中文,然后逐句译成英文,那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平,作文中就会出现"生造"的英语句子,难免会出错。另外,对于与图画无关的事要少写,还要注意人称、时态的呼应,整个作文要通篇考虑。
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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句)
【思路点拨】
一、写作要领
1.准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。
2.把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画,合理想象,围绕特定的主题,把握情景,(利用图中人物
间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。
3.发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象,发表自己的联想或感想。
二、具体步骤
1.根据提示,全面审题
(1)确定体裁。针对此类题型,考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先确定文章体裁。目前图画作文的体
裁主要涉及记叙文、议论文和夹叙夹议文。对多幅图来说,体裁主要是记叙文,有时也会是夹叙夹议 文。多幅图有时反映了事件背后的某种现象,这样就需要加上适当的议论,进而变为夹叙夹议文。对 于单幅图来说,体裁主要为议论文。
(2)确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以将故事的形式来写,则一 般采用第三人称。但不管用哪种人称,全文一般都必须一致。
(3)确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
(4)确定主题。在审题时,考生要认真分析图画所反映的内容以及出题者的意图,分析图画的表层含义和 深层含义,通过表层含义分析图画真正想要说明的问题是什么,从而挖掘出其深层含义以确定文章的 主题。
2. 认真读图,进行图文转换
图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其是要注意图画中人或物的特点和背景,确定人物之间、人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式(即多幅)出现,考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外,还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所了解,从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来,并对转换后的信息重新整合,确定主要内容。
3. 确定段落,草拟提纲
根据图画内容及体裁的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。一般情况下,图画作文可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写:第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括),第二段分析原因,最后一段发表评论或提出建议。其中第二、三段是写作的重点。叙事型图画作文(通常会涉及多幅画,要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行描述)可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。
斟词酌句,组句成文
【写作模板】
As is shown in the picture above,_________(图画的内容). The first thing we notice is that_________(图画的最大特点).This means that _________(进一步说明). The implied meaning of the picture should be considered/taken into account seriously/paid more attention to. First, _________(分析、说明原因或结果①). Second/What’s more,________(分析、说明原因或结果②). Last but not least/Finally, ________(分析、说明原因或结果③) And the problem has aroused the great concern/care of the whole society/world/all the people around. In my view/As for me,we should take measures to deal with the problem shown in the picture. First, we should_________(措施、建议、办法①). And then we have to_________(措施、建议、办法②). Only in these ways can we solve/settle the problem of_________(图画主要问题).
【万能句式】
1. 描述图画部分
From the picture we can see that…
As is shown in the picture…
As we can see in the picture…
The picture shows us that…
This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
Look at the picture. It is a picture about…
2. 论述图画寓意及所反映现象部分
The picture reflects/implies that…
The picture illustrates a common phenomenon in today’s society.
Apparently, the picture reflects a major social problem.
This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
What the picture reflects sets me thinking a lot.
3. 发表评论与观点部分
In my view/As for me/As far as I’m concerned, we should take measures to avoid this phenomenon happening again.
(2024·山西·一模)你校英文报正在开展以“The Understanding of Going to School”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简要描述图片;
2.你的看法。
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Understanding of Going to School
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Writing 1
(2024·江苏镇江·三模)最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
1. 简要描述图表;
2. 你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;
3. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing 2
(24-25高三上·黑龙江哈尔滨·阶段练习)学校英文报就高三学生体育锻炼情况开展调查。请你根据图表内容,以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.调查结果;
2.概述原因;
3.你的看法。
每日体育运动时长调查结果
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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Writing 3
(24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你所在的兴趣小组对中学生使用“搜题软件”的情况进行了调查研究。请为校英文报写一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 调查结果 (如图所示)
2. 分析原因;使用者
3. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Writing 4
(24-25高三上·湖北武汉·开学考试)你是英语课代表,以词汇记忆难度为主题,对全班进行了调查(如下图所示)。请你在英语课堂上进行一次口头汇报,内容包括:
1. 调查结果;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 5
(2025·浙江·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,请你选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 问题产生的原因;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Writing 1
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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Writing 2
【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。专题09 图表类和图画类
图表类
【2022年全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【思路点拨】
对于图表作文,写作内容主要包括三个方面:描述图表信息+从中总结出变化规律+提出建议或解决 之道(这一部分可以根据实际要求进行取舍)。
准备过程中,应着重从以下几个方面入手。
1. 读出图表所传达的信息,并对信息进行分类
将图表所传达的信息进行全面的转换,并根据不同的项目对信息进行分类,这是进行数据整合的基础, 这一过程中要尽量确保信息全面。
2. 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因
信息经过分类之后,以某一个标准为参照(比如时间、地域等),总结出同一对象在不同时间/地域/…… 下的变化规律,或通过对同类信息的对比分析出问题出现的原因。找出规律/原因是解决问题/提出建议的基础。
3. 数据处理
对数据进行处理时,要根据题干的要求,着重处理差异比较大或变化比较明显的信息。这样呈现数据时才能有所侧重,写的时候才能有详略之分。
4. 段落构建
一般而言,图表作文可分为三个段落来写。第一个段落点明调查/统计对象并进行图表信息的转换,转 换过程中需要注意的是信息的取舍和详略程度。第二段主要是根据信息总结出规律或找出问题出现的原因。 第三段则主要是建议的提出或解决方法的提出。其中第一段和第二段是重点段落,第三段可根据题干要求 进行取舍。
【写作模板】
模板一
①The bar chart_______(给出图表的出处)reflects______(解释图表所反映的现象). From these statistics, it can be seen that______(具体说明这一现象).
②Generally speaking, _______(分析这一现象产生的几点原因)factors have contributed to this phenomenon.For one thing, _______(第一点原因). For another, ______(第二点原因).
③As far as I am concerned,______(发表个人看法). First,_______(其中一条解决办法). Second, _______(另外一条解决办法).
模板二
①The two charts reveal the striking changes in______(引出图表揭示的现象). From the charts we can see that the percentage of _____(其中一项变化)is growing steadily, and the percentage of______(另外一项变化)rises from _____ to ______(通过具体数据加以说明), while the percentage of______(第三项变化)decreases dramatically from_____ to _____(通过具体数据加以说明).
②The changes are chiefly due to the following reasons. To start with,_______(第一点原因). Besides,______(第二点原因).Furthermore,_______(第三点原因).
③With the above analysis, we can conclude that_______(对以上分析加以总结). What’s more, _______(进一步提出解决方法)
【必备词块】
1. 点明图表所反映的主题时常用的词汇:
table 表格,chart 图表,diagram 图解/示意图,figure图形/数字,describe 描述,tell 告诉,show 表明, represent 描绘/展示,indicate 显示
2. 分析数据差异及变化趋势时常用的词汇:
(1)表示上升或增加的:rise, increase, go up
(2)表示下降或减少的:decrease, fall, reduce, decline, drop, go down
(3)表示变化特点的:sharply 急剧地,quickly 迅速地,rapidly 快速地,dramatically 戏剧性地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地。
(4)表示比较的:compared different from, difference between, while, contrary, however, more than, less than。
【万能句式】
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 1
● 表示“说明”的常用句式
在说明图表的时候,要使用下列表示“说明”的常用句式,它们可以帮助读者弄清楚所引信息的出处,有效地将你要说的话带出来。
1.As we can see from the chart/graph / table/diagram,…从图表中可以看出……(eg: 模板(一)How People Spent Their Holidays)
2.The chart/graph / table/diagram shows/displays that,…如图所示……
3.As can be shown in/According to the chart/graph / table/diagram,…如图所示……
4.The figures/statistics in the chart reflect/show/reveal that…
图表中的数据表明……
5.The chart/graph/table/diagram illustrates/describes…图表描述了……
6.It is clear/apparent from the chart/graph / table/diagram that…
从图表我们可以清楚地看到……
图表类满分作文必备词汇
● 表示“数据”的常用句式
1.…had the largest percentage/proportion of… ……在……方面具有很大的百分比。
2.…account (s) for/take (s) up 10%.……占有10%。
3.Compared with A, B has a higher percentage.
与A相比,B有更高的比例。
4.On the top of the list is…, which accounts for 60%.占比重最高的是……,占60%。
5.At the bottom is…, which takes up 20%.占最低比重的是……,占20%。
6.A is second to B. A仅次于B。
7.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%.
A占最高比重,紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。
● 表示“数据变化”的常用句式
在描述图表的过程中,考生有必要对图表的数据进行描述,因此,掌握相应地表示变化的句式也是相当重要的。
a.表示增加、减少和波动的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) increased/rose suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
2.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
3.There was a boom in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的增长。
4.The number of (private cars) climbed/jumped/rose suddenly/went sharply up/soared to…in…在……(时间),(私家车)的数量猛增到……(辆)。
5.There was an evident/ apparent/ obvious increase in…from…to….
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的增长。
6.The number of (private cars) increased/rose steadily/gradually from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
7.There was a steady/gradual increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间, (私家车)的数量有了稳定持续的增长。
8.There was a slight/slow increase/rise in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,’ (私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
9.The number of (private cars)increased/rose slightly/slowly from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了稍微/缓慢的增长。
10.The number of (private cars) decreased/fell/dropped suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/sharply/steeply from…to… 从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
11.There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/steep decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of (private cars)from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有了急剧的下降。
12.There was a (n) evident/apparent/obvious reduction/decline in...from....to...
从……到……期间,在……方面有明显的下降。
13.The number of (private cars) dropped sharply/went sharply down to…in…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量急剧下降到……(辆)。
14.The number of (private cars) increased/rose by …% from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量增加了百分之……
15.The number of (private cars) fell/dropped/declined by …%from…to…
在……(时间),(私家车)的数量下降了百分之……
16.There was a slight fluctuation in the number of (private cars) from…to…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量有轻微的波动。
b.表示变化不大或没有变化的常用结构
1.The number of (private cars) remained steady/stable/constant between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量保持稳定。
2.The number of (private cars) stayed the same between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
3.There was little/hardly any change in the number of (private cars ) between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量并没有发生变化。
4.The number of (private cars) remained level between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量趋于稳定。
5.The number of (private cars) remained steady at approximately…between…and…
从……到……期间,(私家车)的数量稳定在……(辆)左右。
6.The number of (private cars) appeared to level off.(私家车)的数量开始稳定下来了。
c.表示最高点或最低点的常用结构
1.The situation/figures reached a peak/a high at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
2.The situation/figures bottomed out at …% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
3.The situation/figures peaked at …% in.....情况(数据)在…(时间)达到顶点,为……(数目)。
4.The situation/figures hit a trough at ...% in…情况(数据)在……(时间)达到最低点,为……(数目)。
5.The number soared to a record high of…数量剧增至历史新高,为……(数目)。
d.表示倍数的常用结构
1.A is twice/three times/four times what it was in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
2.A is twice/three times/four times the amount in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)。
3.A is twice/three times/four times as much/many as...in…与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍):
4.A is twice/three times/four times more than...in...与……(时间)相比,A是原来的两倍(三倍、四倍)还要多。
5.From…to…, A increased/dropped more than six fold.从……到……期间,A增加(减少)了六倍。
6.The output of steel in 1990 was 400% up compared with in 1980. 与1980年相比,1990年钢铁产量增加了四倍。
7.The figure was roughly doubled/tripled/quintupled between…and…从……到……期间,数字大概是原来的两倍(三倍、五倍)
图表类满分作文必备词汇 示例 2
1. 描述图表变化趋势的词汇
上升 (v.):
increase; go up; rise; improve; grow;
jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增)
上升 (n.):
increase; rise; growth; jump; surge
下降 (v.):
fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip
plummet; plunge(暴跌)
下降 (n.):
decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop
波动 (v.):fluctuate
波动 (n.):fluctuation
持平(v.):
stabilize; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; level off
多条曲线趋势一致:
A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B
2. 描述图表变化程度的词汇
程度很大significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically; enormously;substantially;markedly
程度较轻 slightly;gradually;slowly; steadily;moderately
3. 极值类词汇
最高点:reach the peak/top/highest point;
increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)
最低点:reach/hit the bottom/lowest point;
drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)
占比最多:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for/ the largest proportion/number/percentage of …
占比最少:occupy/ make up/ take up/ account for the smallest proportion/number/percentage of…
4. "大约"的表达方式
about/around + 数字
数字 + or so
approximately + 数字
图表类满分作文必备词汇 万能句型
① The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
② Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
③ Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
④ The percentage of students taking part-time jobs remains a continuous increase all through the four years in university, starting from 67.77% in freshmen, reaching 71.13% and 71.93% respectively in sophomores and juniors, and ending at 88.24% in seniors at length.
④ 饼状图描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%./ We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
⑤ 饼状图分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
解释原因的功能句型
● 第一句:
① Three major factors / reasons give rise to (引起)the situation(情况)/ phenomenon (现象)mentioned above.
② What gives rise to the situation / phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
③ It is of no difficulty to come up with(提出,想出) some possible factors for these changes.
④ The contributing factors(成因)responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.
⑤ What accounts for this situation At least, for my part, three factors contribute to it.
⑥ This situation can be traced to(追溯到)a multitude of(众多的)factors; the fundamental ones, however, can be sought as follows.
●分条描述原因:
First and foremost, these changes are closely related to...
In the first place, this trend is bound up with(与...有密切关系)...
In addition, we must admit that this tendency/situation also has a lot to do with ...
Moreover, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from….
... is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Finally, we may notice that ... also plays a positive roles in leading to this phenomenon.
评论预测的功能句型
评论类
① It is of great importance for (the government and authorities concerned) to (place a higher value on) (the practical education and integrated development of college students).
② For one thing, relevant laws and regulations have to be established and implemented (to protect the rights of college students when they take part in part-time jobs). For another, it is high time that a nationwide campaign was launched to educate (college students to strike a balance between their social work and study). In these ways, a brighter future will surely await the young generation when they step into real society.
③ In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that ....
预测趋势类
①From what has been discussed above, the trend can be predicated(预测) to continue in the following years with the rapid development of economy and society.
② I firmly believe that this tendency will continue in the forthcoming years.
③ And there is every possible reason to believe that this condition will go on in the near future.
④ And we can predict with assurance that the situation will continue maintaining an upward trend in the following years.
⑤ Thus, how to tackle this problem properly should be placed on a high value by the public and relevant departments.
⑥ And accordingly, immediate measures must be taken to reverse(逆转)or at least ease this worsening situation.
(24-25高三上·湖北武汉·开学考试)你是英语课代表,以词汇记忆难度为主题,对全班进行了调查(如下图所示)。请你在英语课堂上进行一次口头汇报,内容包括:
1. 调查结果;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please
I’ve conducted a survey on the difficulty of vocabulary memorization for all of you. The results show that 70% of you find it quite challenging to remember chunks. 40% of students say they have difficulty in remebering word formation, while 15% struggle with single words.
To improve this, I suggest we should make vocabulary cards and review them often. Besides, it would be helpful to read English stories and articles to encounter words in context. Let’s work together to master vocabulary better!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文,要求考生在英语课堂上进行一次以词汇记忆难度为主题调查活动的汇报。其内容包括:调查结果和你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难:difficulty→trouble
记住:remember →memorize
建议:suggest→advise
而且:besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Besides, it would be helpful to read English stories and articles to encounter words in context.
拓展句: Besides, it would be helpful if we read English stories and articles to encounter words in context.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The results show that 70% of you find it quite challenging to remember chunks. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】 To improve this, I suggest we should make vocabulary cards and review them often. (运用了不定式作目的状语和suggest引导的虚拟语气)
图画类
图画类作文要求将画面所包含的信息转换成文字,旨在避免汉语思维,要求直接用英语思维。它要求根据图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文,包括叙述一个故事,或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画类作文就内容而言,可以写观察到的内容,也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容;就表达方式而言,可以单纯地理解、说明,也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述,因此该类文体不仅具有一定的观察分析能力,还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。写好图画类作文的关键是:一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容,并直接用英语表达,千万不要先想好一句句的中文,然后逐句译成英文,那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平,作文中就会出现"生造"的英语句子,难免会出错。另外,对于与图画无关的事要少写,还要注意人称、时态的呼应,整个作文要通篇考虑。
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【思路点拨】
一、写作要领
1.准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。
2.把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画,合理想象,围绕特定的主题,把握情景,(利用图中人物
间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。
3.发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象,发表自己的联想或感想。
二、具体步骤
1.根据提示,全面审题
(1)确定体裁。针对此类题型,考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先确定文章体裁。目前图画作文的体
裁主要涉及记叙文、议论文和夹叙夹议文。对多幅图来说,体裁主要是记叙文,有时也会是夹叙夹议 文。多幅图有时反映了事件背后的某种现象,这样就需要加上适当的议论,进而变为夹叙夹议文。对 于单幅图来说,体裁主要为议论文。
(2)确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以将故事的形式来写,则一 般采用第三人称。但不管用哪种人称,全文一般都必须一致。
(3)确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。
(4)确定主题。在审题时,考生要认真分析图画所反映的内容以及出题者的意图,分析图画的表层含义和 深层含义,通过表层含义分析图画真正想要说明的问题是什么,从而挖掘出其深层含义以确定文章的 主题。
2. 认真读图,进行图文转换
图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其是要注意图画中人或物的特点和背景,确定人物之间、人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式(即多幅)出现,考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外,还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所了解,从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来,并对转换后的信息重新整合,确定主要内容。
3. 确定段落,草拟提纲
根据图画内容及体裁的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。一般情况下,图画作文可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写:第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括),第二段分析原因,最后一段发表评论或提出建议。其中第二、三段是写作的重点。叙事型图画作文(通常会涉及多幅画,要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行描述)可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。
斟词酌句,组句成文
【写作模板】
As is shown in the picture above,_________(图画的内容). The first thing we notice is that_________(图画的最大特点).This means that _________(进一步说明). The implied meaning of the picture should be considered/taken into account seriously/paid more attention to. First, _________(分析、说明原因或结果①). Second/What’s more,________(分析、说明原因或结果②). Last but not least/Finally, ________(分析、说明原因或结果③) And the problem has aroused the great concern/care of the whole society/world/all the people around. In my view/As for me,we should take measures to deal with the problem shown in the picture. First, we should_________(措施、建议、办法①). And then we have to_________(措施、建议、办法②). Only in these ways can we solve/settle the problem of_________(图画主要问题).
【万能句式】
1. 描述图画部分
From the picture we can see that…
As is shown in the picture…
As we can see in the picture…
The picture shows us that…
This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
Look at the picture. It is a picture about…
2. 论述图画寓意及所反映现象部分
The picture reflects/implies that…
The picture illustrates a common phenomenon in today’s society.
Apparently, the picture reflects a major social problem.
This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
What the picture reflects sets me thinking a lot.
3. 发表评论与观点部分
In my view/As for me/As far as I’m concerned, we should take measures to avoid this phenomenon happening again.
(2024·山西·一模)你校英文报正在开展以“The Understanding of Going to School”为题的讨论。请根据图片写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简要描述图片;
2.你的看法。
“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Understanding of Going to School
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【答案】The Understanding of Going to School
This is a funny but enlightening cartoon, in which a mother is sending her son to school. However, the youngster responds, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything ”
As a senior high student, I think it is essential to acquire not only knowledge, but also cooperation and communication skills at school. Also, it is the process rather than the outcome that counts. Therefore, we shouldn’t misunderstand the meaning of going to school.
Education does not merely mean “knowing everything”. Thus, parents and teachers should educate their kids to cultivate the awareness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述图片内容,谈一谈自己对于“上学”的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人启迪的/给人灵感的:enlightening→inspiring
重要的:essential→critical
意义:meaning→significance
上学:go to school→attend school
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As a senior high student, I think it is essential to acquire not only knowledge, but also cooperation and communication skills at school.
拓展句:As a senior high student, I think it is essential that we not only acquire knowledge, but also learn cooperation and communication skills at school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This is a funny but enlightening cartoon, in which a mother is sending her son to school. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, it is the process rather than the outcome that counts. (运用了it is…that结构的强调句型)
Writing 1
(2024·江苏镇江·三模)最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
1. 简要描述图表;
2. 你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;
3. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
Recently, our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% of respondents were unsure. 34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said no.
Personally speaking, teachers won’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生就教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题谈谈你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
取代:replace→take place of
此外:Besides→in addition
重要的:important→significant
进行:conducted→carry out
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers.
拓展句:Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, which cannot replace the role of teachers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)
Writing 2
(24-25高三上·黑龙江哈尔滨·阶段练习)学校英文报就高三学生体育锻炼情况开展调查。请你根据图表内容,以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.调查结果;
2.概述原因;
3.你的看法。
每日体育运动时长调查结果
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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【答案】Sports and Health
Our school English newspaper conducted a survey on how much time Senior 3 students spend on sports every day. The results show that only 4% of students play sports for more than 30 minutes. About 30% do it for 20 to 30 minutes, but 60% only play for less than 20 minutes. Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports. This is horrible! I think the main reason is that students are very busy with their studies and have less time for sports. But doing sports is so important for our health. Schools, I think, should encourage students to do more sports by having fun activities after school and making sure there are enough places to play.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据学校英文报对高三学生体育锻炼情况的调查结果,以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文,需涵盖调查结果、概述原因及个人看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开展调查:conduct a survey → carry out a survey
表明:show → indicate
糟糕的:horrible → awful
确保:make sure → ensure/guarantee
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports. This is horrible!
拓展句:Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports, which is horrible!
【点睛】[高分句型1] The results show that only 4% of students play sports for more than 30 minutes. (运用了连接词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think the main reason is that students are very busy with their studies and have less time for sports. (运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句和连接词that引导表语从句)
Writing 3
(24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你所在的兴趣小组对中学生使用“搜题软件”的情况进行了调查研究。请为校英文报写一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 调查结果 (如图所示)
2. 分析原因;使用者
3. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Recently, our interest group conducted a survey on the use of question-solving apps among high school students. The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these apps for homework assistance.
The reasons behind this trend are diverse. Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions. These question-solving apps offer them a rapid means to tackle academic challenges. Additionally, the excessive expectations from society and family are partly to blame for this phenomenon.
Personally, using these apps moderately as a learning tool is wise, rather than allowing them to spoil our critical thinking and problem-solving skills. After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about understanding knowledge, which is essential for our long-term personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,要求考生根据图表分析调查结果、产生这种结果的原因,并发表感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
令人惊讶的:astonishing→surprising
依赖:rely on→depend on
压力:pressure→stress
处理:tackle→handle
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions.
拓展句:Because they face heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these apps for homework assistance. (使用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about understanding knowledge, which is essential for our long-term personal growth. (使用了动名词分别作主语和宾语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 4
(24-25高三上·湖北武汉·开学考试)你是英语课代表,以词汇记忆难度为主题,对全班进行了调查(如下图所示)。请你在英语课堂上进行一次口头汇报,内容包括:
1. 调查结果;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! May I have your attention please
I’ve conducted a survey on the difficulty of vocabulary memorization for all of you. The results show that 70% of you find it quite challenging to remember chunks. 40% of students say they have difficulty in remebering word formation, while 15% struggle with single words.
To improve this, I suggest we should make vocabulary cards and review them often. Besides, it would be helpful to read English stories and articles to encounter words in context. Let’s work together to master vocabulary better!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文,要求考生在英语课堂上进行一次以词汇记忆难度为主题调查活动的汇报。其内容包括:调查结果和你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难:difficulty→trouble
记住:remember →memorize
建议:suggest→advise
而且:besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Besides, it would be helpful to read English stories and articles to encounter words in context.
拓展句: Besides, it would be helpful if we read English stories and articles to encounter words in context.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The results show that 70% of you find it quite challenging to remember chunks. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】 To improve this, I suggest we should make vocabulary cards and review them often. (运用了不定式作目的状语和suggest引导的虚拟语气)
Writing 5
(2025·浙江·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,请你选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 问题产生的原因;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
Caring Too Much About Others’ Opinions
Many students grapple with the issue of caring deeply about what others think of them. Often, it leads to self-doubt and anxiety, impacting their self-esteem and daily life.
This concern can stem from a strong desire for social acceptance and fear of rejection. Another reason for this sensitivity is the formative stage of identity development during adolescence. Peer influence is also a significant factor, as teenagers often seek validation from their social circle to fit in.
To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance. Engaging in activities that build confidence, such as hobbies and sports, can also be beneficial. It’s essential to remember that everyone has unique qualities, and embracing individuality is crucial for personal growth and happiness. Let’s encourage our peers to be true to themselves and not let the opinions of others define their self-worth.
Mood swings
Mood swings are a common psychological challenge among teenagers, characterized by sudden and extreme changes in emotions. The primary reason for mood swings is the hormonal changes that occur during adolescence, which can affect emotional regulation. Additionally, the pressure to perform well academically and socially can contribute to emotional instability.
To manage mood swings, my advice is to maintain a balanced lifestyle with regular physical activity, a healthy diet, and adequate sleep. Practicing mindfulness and stress management techniques, such as yoga or meditation, can also help in achieving emotional balance. It’s also important for teenagers to seek support from friends, family, or counselors when they’re feeling overwhelmed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。你校英文报“Psychology of Teenagers”栏目正在征稿,要求考生选取图中反映的一个青少年心理问题,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】(范文1)
1.词汇积累
源自:stem from→come from
重要:crucial→vital
建议:suggestion→advice
克服:overcome→ger over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance.
拓展句:If you want to overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Often, it leads to self-doubt and anxiety, impacting their self-esteem and daily life. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] To overcome this challenge, my suggestion is to cultivate self-awareness and self-acceptance. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
Writing 1
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
Writing 2
【2022年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose → select
提高:improve → strengthen
各种各样的:various → diverse
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned → from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句:Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语,to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)