专题18 读后续写全文模板·背诵50句
基础篇 30句
第一段: 万能10句
1. Fixing my eyes on it, I was overwhelmed by mixed feelings.
紧盯着它，我被复杂的感觉淹没。
2. Hearing that, sb failed to utter a single word, totally amazed.
听到这，某人说不出话，全是惊讶
3. Thinking about the situation, I was fully aware that immediate action should be taken.
考虑到当时的情况，我完全意识到应该立即采取行动，
Reflecting on what had happened, I had a moment of enlightenment. 回想发生的一切，我顿时恍然大悟5.Thinking for a while, she came to realize what happened and what to do.思考了一会儿，她意识到发生了什么以及该怎么做。
6. Inspired, he collected himself and made a quick decision.
到鼓舞，他振作起来，迅速做出了决定。
7. Plucking up courage, he made up his mind to address the challenge.
鼓起勇气，他下定决心迎接挑战。
8.Without delay,she began to take action.毫不拖延，她开始采取行动。
9. Raising her head, she rose to her feet.抬起头，她站了起来。(积极)
10. Dropping her head, she bit her lips hard.低下头,她狠狠地咬了咬嘴唇。(消极)
中间·连接10句(可有可无)
1. It occurred all of a sudden, catching him unprepared
事情发生得很突然，让他措手不及。
Time slipped away like flowing water.时间如流水般溜走。
3.Things began to turn around. 事情开始好转
4. An idea hit him like lightning.一个想法像闪电一样击中了他。
5. It was then that an idea came into my mind.
就在那时，一个想法出现在我的脑海中。
It was not long before I came up with an idea.没多久，我就想出了一个主意。
My heart beat with determination.我的心因决心而跳动。(情绪)
Bitter tears streamed down her cheeks.(情绪)苦涩泪水顺着脸颊流下来。
9. Her mother's words melted the softest place in her heart.(情绪)
她妈妈的话融化了她心中最柔软之处。
10.Gradually, his astonishment gave way to understanding.(情绪)
他的惊讶让路于理解。
第二段.万能10句
1. After what seemed like ages, he struggled and managed to make it.
仿佛过了几世纪，他奋力并成功。
2. It was not long before things began to turn around.没过多久,事情就开始出现转机。
3. Approaching her son, she bent down and gathered him into her arms.
走近儿子，她弯下腰，把他抱在怀里
4. Making her way to her parents, she threw herself into their arms.
她走到父母身边，扑进他们的怀抱
5. Moved to tears, she couldn't contain her emotions.
感动到流泪，她无法控制自己的情绪。
Catching sight of the scene, I was deeply touched, warmth welling up inside me.看到这一幕，我深受感动，温暖涌上心头。
Suddenly, I felt a wave of warmth melting the softest place in my heart.我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔软的地方。
8. Gratitude surrounded him like a beam of sunlight, throwing him into a sea of kindness and warmth.
感激之情像一柬阳光包围着他，把他扔进了善意和温暖的海洋。
Sparing no effort, he struggled and endeavored, instead of giving way to obstacles.不遗余力地，他奋斗和努力，而不是向困难障碍让步。
10. With sunlight falling on her, she closed her eyes to feel the warmth, embrace the moment and enjoy a sense of achievement and pride.
阳光洒在身上，她闭眼感受温暖，拥抱当下，享受成就感和自豪感。
进阶篇 20句
动作描写，六个复杂句
1, Hearing what she said, I was shocked but also greatly encouraged, my previous nervousness and uncertainty giving way to increasing confidence and determination(句式:非谓语，主句，独立主格.)
听到她的话，我震惊但也受到极大鼓舞之前的紧张和不确定让路于越来越多的信心和决心。
2. Catching sight of the scene, I felt a wave of warmth melting the softest place in my heart.
(句式:非谓语，主句+非谓语)看到这幕，我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔软之处。
3、 Fixing my eyes on sth, I realized what I should do, my heart beating withdeterminatio1.
(句式:非谓语，主句，独立主格)紧盯某物，我意识到该做什么，心坚定地跳动。
4、 Thinking about the situation, I was fully aware that immediate action should betaken.
考虑到当时的情况，我完全意识到应该立即采取行动。
5、Reflecting on what had happened, I had a moment of enlightenment /epiphany.
回想发生的一切，我顿时恍然大悟。
6、 Considering what had happened, he cleared his mind and instantly figured out what should be done next.
考虑到发生了什么，他理清了思路，立即想出了下一步该怎么做。
3)情绪描写·六个复杂句
1、Uncontrollably, he felt a wave of delight racing in his heart.
(非谓语/取代“他开心”)不可控地，他感到一股开心在他内心奔腾。
2. Instantly, an intense wave of relief and gratitude surrounded him like a beam of sunlight, throwing him into a sea of kindness and warmth.
(无灵主语+非谓语)瞬间，强烈的释然和感激像一東阳光包围着他把他扔进了善良和温暖的海洋，
3、 Guilty and ashamed, she made hearty apologies and conveyed deep regrets, with bitter tears streaming down her cheeks.
(句首形容词做状语+独立主格)愧疚和羞愧，她衷心道歉表达深深的遗憾，苦涩的泪水顺着脸颊流下。
4、 Inspired and highly motivated, she collected herself and struggled to address the challenge, her eyes shining with mounting determination and confidence.
(形容词做状语+独立主格)受到鼓舞和推动，她振作起来，努力应对挑战，眼里闪着递增的决心和信心。
Moved to tears, David dashed to them and threw himself into their arms, with golden sunlight falling on them warmly and celebrating his accomplishment.
(非谓语+独立主格/写景)大卫感动得热泪盈眶，冲到他们身边，扑进他们的怀里，全色的阳光温暖地落在他们身上，庆视他的成就。
6、What made him pride was that he struggled and endeavored, instead of giving way to obstacles.
(非谓语+独立主格)让他感到自豪的是，他奋斗和努力，而不是向困难障碍让步。
4) 连接六句
1、A few moments slipped away like flowing water before he knew it.
在他不知不觉中，片刻时间如流水般溜走了。
Time passing by, things began to turn around.
时间流逝,事情开始好转。
3、It was then that an idea hit him like lightning.
正是那时，一个想法像闪电般击中了他。
4、 After what seemed like ages, he struggled and managed to make it.
似乎过了几个世纪，他奋力拼搏并成功了。
It was not long before his astonishment gave way to understanding.
很快，他的惊讶就被理解所取代。
6、Hardly had he recalled what happened when he came to realize the truth.
(倒装句Hardly had sb done sth when sb did sth.)他一回想发生的事，就意识到真相。
5)结尾升华2句
It was via the unique experience that I realized what mattered most was sth without which I couldn't have overcome the issue and made such achievement.(只需改sth)
【强调句+宾从长句】正是通过这次独特的经历，某人意识到某事最重要，没有它某人就不可能克服困难，取得如此成就。
Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was engraved in my mind and had a profound influence on me in the rest of my life.(无需改动)
【倒装+定从】我从未有过如此独特的经历它铭刻在我的脑海，对我的余生产生了深远的影响。
全文句式10个(速成版)
动作+情绪+连接+升华
【动作描写: 看着某事1,某人做某事2】非谓语: Fixing one's eyes on sth1, sb did sth2.
【连接句: 正是那时，某人做某事】强调句:It was then that sb did sth.
【动作描写: 2个动作】倒装句“一.就,”:Hardly had sb done sth1 when sb did sth2.
【情绪+做某事+五官】形容词句首+独立主格:Delighted, sb did sth,tears rolling down.
5.【动作描写: 做某事1后,做某事2】非谓语: Having done sth,sb did sth.(衔接句)
6.【动作描写: 3个动作】排比: Without delay, sb did sth1, did sth2, and did sth3.(衔接句)
7.【连接句: 过了很久,做某事】名从: After what seemed like ages, sb did sth.
8.【情绪+做某事】无灵主语: Uncontrollably, a sense of情绪名词 seized sb when sb did sth.
9.【升华/悟道理: 直到那时才】强调句+盛拟语气:It was then that sb realized what mattered most was sth, without which sb couldn't have done sth.
10.【升华/结尾:经历刻脑海】倒装句+被动句:Never before had sb got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved in sb's mind and had a profound influence on sb in the rest of sb's life.
全文模板10句(急救版)
Fixing her's eyes on the scene, she tried to figure out what to do.(看着/听到/想到..)
It was then that an idea hit her like lightning.(正是那时有想法)
Hardly had she recalled what happened when she came to realize what should be done.
Encouraged and determined, she collected herself and struggled to address the challenge,her eyes shining with mounting confidence.(一回想就知道/鼓起勇气，应对挑战，眼里有信心)
5.Having calmed oneself down,sb did sth.(街接句/冷静,做某事)
6. Without delay, sb did sth1, did sth2,and did sth3.(街接句/写情节，3个动作)
7. After what seemed like ages, she struggled and managed to make it.(成功做到)
8. Uncontrollably, an intense wave of delight and relief surrounded her like a beam of sunlight,throwing her into a sea of sweet victory.(加点情绪)
9. It was via the unique experience that sb realized what mattered most was sth, without which sb couldn't have overcome the issue and made such achievement.(意识到xx重要)
10. Never before had sb got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved in sb's mind and had a profound influence on sb in the rest of sb's life,(经历深刻脑海,影响余生)
Writing 01
【河南省新未来联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题】In August 2014, Ian Sandler’s 9-year-old daughter, Riley Sandler, went to a sleepaway camp for the summer. Early one morning, at around 1:30 a.m., the family got a call from the camp.
“The voice on the other end was saying that Riley had suddenly got very sick, and they were telling me that they were taking her to a hospital and I needed to get there right away,” Sandler remembered.
Sandler and his family lived in New York City. The hospital where Riley was being transported was in upstate New York, hours away. He was too shaken up to drive, so Sandler booked a taxi. He put in an address that was in the general direction of where he needed to go. When the driver arrived, Sandler explained the situation.
“I just tried to calm down and explain, ‘My daughter is going to the hospital. Its going to be a long drive. Would you help me ’ And I still remember how kind this man was. He said, ‘I have three children of my own — get in. We’ll arrive there safe and sound’ And we drove.”
It was comforting that the driver could empathize with (感同身受) Sandler’s situation. He felt a calmness wash over him — a feeling that was soon interrupted by another phone call about Riley. She was going to be moved to a different hospital, even further away.
“I turned to the driver and I said, ‘We’re gonna be going further north.’ And he didn’t miss a beat. We drove for another three and a half hours.” When they arrived at the hospital, Sandler tried to give the driver money. But the man refused to take it. “I remember trying to tip him, and do something. He wouldn’t sake a coin. He just knew this was the worst thing that could ever happen to a parent.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As soon as Sandler arrived, he heard the doctor announce that Riley was out of danger.
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Sandler obtained the driver’s contact information through the taxi booking app.
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【答案】
As soon as Sandler arrived, he heard the doctor announce that Riley was out of danger. Riley suffered from a rare condition that blocked her airway, almost preventing oxygen from getting into her lungs. After several hours of rescue, the doctor finally took her back from the hands of death. That night was one of the most difficult experiences Sandler has ever gone through. Fortunately, it turned out to be good. Yet he still thought about the taxi driver who got him to the hospital.
Sandler obtained the driver’s contact information through the taxi booking app. He told the driver the good news that his daughter was out of danger, and tried to give him the taxi fare again, but the driver insisted on not taking the money. So Sandler sent him a message. “You had no reason to take care of me in the way you did. But I am sure that 10 years afterwards, I will still be so incredibly grateful for your kindness and for bringing me to my daughter that night. That was one of the kindest, sweetest things anyone’s ever done for me.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了2014年8月，伊恩·桑德勒9岁的女儿莱利·桑德勒参加了一个不睡觉的夏令营。一天清晨，大约凌晨1点半，这家人接到了营地打来的电话。电话那头的声音说莱利昏倒了，于是伊恩叫了车赶往营地，最后在司机送伊恩赶到了医院，伊恩见到了女儿。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“桑德勒一到医院，就听到医生宣布莱利已经脱离危险。”可知，第一段可描写莱利被抢救的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“桑德勒通过出租车预订应用程序获得了司机的联系信息。”可知，第二段可描写伊恩联系上司机后表示感谢的方式和感悟。
2.续写线索：到医院——得知到医院——告诉司机——再次给他出租车费——伊恩感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
堵塞：block/ clog
阻止：prevent/ stop
走进：get into/ enter
情绪类
幸运地：fortunately/ luckily
感激的：grateful/ thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] Yet he still thought about the taxi driver who got him to the hospital. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He told the driver the good news that his daughter was out of danger, and tried to give him the taxi fare again, but the driver insisted on not taking the money. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
Writing 02
【安徽省皖豫名校联盟2024-2025学年高三十月联考】Wayne Boone is a 53-year-old truck driver for a paper- recycling company in Suffolk, Virginia. Every day, he drives the empty 18- heel truck up Interstate 64 in Chesapeake toward Virginia Beach, about 50 kilometers away, where he will pick up his first load of the day. One morning in April, the strong winds gave Wayne Boone’s truck a good whipping (鞭打).
He planned to change into the left lane of the G. A．Treakle Memorial Bridge when the storm let loose its full force. Rain hammered Boone’s windshield. Winds grew fierce. As he was turning, Boone’s front wheels met the wet surface just as a powerful wind blew the driver’s side of his truck. It felt like the wind lifted the truck clear off the surface. His truck crashed into the guardrail (护栏) on the far right edge.
He struggled to regain control, but another wind, blowing more violently, pushed it upward from below, lifting the truck cab (驾驶舱), with Boone inside, over the edge of the bridge before dropping it again. If he felt any hope of survival before, it disappeared. The truck aimed straight down toward the grey-black water. In the end, Boone’s truck was hanging over the bridge, under 21 meters of which was a deep river.
Boone was badly injured, half blinded by the blood pouring into his eyes and suffering from shock. He forced himself to focus. If he had any chance of escaping the cab and surviving, he had to get out of his seatbelt. Gathering all his strength, he pulled himself between the seats and put himself back as far as he could behind the driver’s seat. He struggled to grab his mobile phone, but it was out of his reach. After he was hung in the wind for an hour, waiting to die, Boone was almost exhausted. Was he going to get out of here alive He had never panicked. He had accepted his fate (命运). He was ready to go if that’s what was meant to be when he heard a noise was drawing nearer.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few minutes later, Boone heard the approaching sirens(汽笛).
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When the rescuer and Boone appeared on the bridge, people shouted with joy.
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【答案】One possible version:
A few minutes later, Boone heard the approaching sirens(汽笛). To him, the noisy sound could have been angels singing. Hope finally flooded through him as a rescuer came down with a rope. He sighed in relief when the rescuer gave him step - by - step instructions for getting out of the window while attempting to stay as stable as possible in the storm. After getting a rope around Boone, the rescuer pulled him out through the window and fully into the wild weather, and then signaled to be pulled up to a safe place.
When the rescuer and Boone appeared on the bridge, people shouted with joy. Back on the bridge, Boone was delivered to safety and then rushed to the nearest hospital. People on the bridge all spoke highly of the rescuer’s bravery and selflessness. Exhausted as he was on his way to the hospital, Boone was full of gratitude. Without the rescuer’s timely help, he could have been dead! He whispered in his heart for many times, “Thank you!” And only then did he realize that accident is merciless while humans aren’t!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了53岁的韦恩·布恩是维吉尼亚州萨福克市一家废纸回收公司的卡车司机。某天在工作时他遇到了风暴，他的卡车撞上了最右边边缘的护栏，布恩的卡车悬在桥上，桥下21米是一条很深的河。布恩受了重伤，最后被救援人员救起送到了医院。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，布恩听到了越来越近的警笛声”可知，第一段可描写布恩被救助的过程以及最终得救。
②由第二段首句内容“当救助者和布恩出现在桥上时，人们欢呼起来”可知，第二段可描写布恩被送往医院，布恩充满感激。
2.续写线索：听到警笛声——施救——得救——送往医院——充满感激——布恩感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到：realize/be aware of
②回到：back on/return
③急忙：rush to/hurry to
情绪类
①疲惫：exhausted /tired
②残忍：merciless/cruel
【点睛】[高分句型1] After getting a rope around Boone, the rescuer pulled him out through the window and fully into the wild weather, and then signaled to be pulled up to a safe place. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Exhausted as he was on his way to the hospital, Boone was full of gratitude. (运用了as引导让步状语从句的部分倒装)
Writing 03
【浙江省强基联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee-deep in flowers that covered the meadow (草地) like a quilt.
“Cassie! You scared me to death! ” Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. “I am sorry, ” Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn’t notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. “ Not again! ” Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. “We gotta go! ”
Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, “Let’s go back to the campsite. ” The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down.
“It's dangerous! We need shelter now! ” Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain.
“Cassie, over here! ” Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind.
Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing.
“Smart thinking, Laura, ” Cassie said, her teeth chattering (打颤) with cold as she pressed her backpa ck close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof (防水的) model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
“Check your backpack, ” Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful.
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As night fell, the storm finally began to die down.
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【答案】One possible version:
“Check your backpack, ” Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful. “ We might have something that can help us start a fire. ” Cassie nodded, her fingers trembling as she unzipped the side pocket of her backpack. She was relieved to find a flashlight, a compact emergency blanket and a small, waterproof pouch containing waterproof matches. “Bingo! ” she exclaimed, her voice filled with a mix of surprise and relief. They quickly set to work, using the waterproof matches to ignite a small fire with the dry leaves and twigs Laura had collected. The survival blanket was spread out, providing a thin layer of insulation against the cold, damp ground.
As night fell, the storm finally began to die down. The girls, exhausted but determined, decided to make a move. They knew the trail would be risky in the dark, but staying in the shelter wasn't an option either. Using the flashlight, they carefully navigated the slippery path, following the markers they had set earlier. The fog had lifted, and the moon provided just enough light to see by. Hours later, they finally reached the edge of the forest. The lights of the campsite were a welcome sight. Cassie grinned, her teeth no longer chattering, “We made it back. ” Laura nodded, her eyes meeting Cassie’s. Their adventure had been terrifying, but it had also been a test ament to their bond and their survival skills. And as they sat by the fire, sipping hot chocolate, they knew they would never forget the day they had faced the storm together.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，故事讲述了Laura和Cassie遇到恶劣天气，在返回营地的途中找到躲雨的洞穴，利用Cassie父亲给她的背包中的物资躲过危险。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““检查你的背包，”劳拉指示道，她的声音充满希望。”可知，第一段可描写Laura和Cassie利用背包里的物资自救的过程
②由第二段首句内容“夜幕降临，暴风雨终于开始平息。”可知，第二段可描写Laura和Cassie脱离了危险。
2.续写线索：利用背包里的物资进行自救——采取行动——沿着先前设置的标记——成功到达营地——难忘的一次冒险
3.词汇激活
行为类
①点燃：ignite /light
②提供：provide/offer
③到达：reach /arrive at
④决定：decide/determine
情绪类
①疲惫的：exhausted/tired
②害怕的：terrifying/ fearful
【点睛】[高分句型1] And as they sat by the fire, sipping hot chocolate, they knew they would never forget the day they had faced the storm together. (运用了as引导时间状语从句和限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] They knew the trail would be risky in the dark, but staying in the shelter wasn't an option either. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和动名词作主语)专题18 读后续写全文模板·背诵50句
基础篇 30句
第一段: 万能10句
1. Fixing my eyes on it, I was overwhelmed by mixed feelings.
紧盯着它，我被复杂的感觉淹没。
2. Hearing that, sb failed to utter a single word, totally amazed.
听到这，某人说不出话，全是惊讶
3. Thinking about the situation, I was fully aware that immediate action should be taken.
考虑到当时的情况，我完全意识到应该立即采取行动，
Reflecting on what had happened, I had a moment of enlightenment. 回想发生的一切，我顿时恍然大悟5.Thinking for a while, she came to realize what happened and what to do.思考了一会儿，她意识到发生了什么以及该怎么做。
6. Inspired, he collected himself and made a quick decision.
到鼓舞，他振作起来，迅速做出了决定。
7. Plucking up courage, he made up his mind to address the challenge.
鼓起勇气，他下定决心迎接挑战。
8.Without delay,she began to take action.毫不拖延，她开始采取行动。
9. Raising her head, she rose to her feet.抬起头，她站了起来。(积极)
10. Dropping her head, she bit her lips hard.低下头,她狠狠地咬了咬嘴唇。(消极)
中间·连接10句(可有可无)
1. It occurred all of a sudden, catching him unprepared
事情发生得很突然，让他措手不及。
Time slipped away like flowing water.时间如流水般溜走。
3.Things began to turn around. 事情开始好转
4. An idea hit him like lightning.一个想法像闪电一样击中了他。
5. It was then that an idea came into my mind.
就在那时，一个想法出现在我的脑海中。
It was not long before I came up with an idea.没多久，我就想出了一个主意。
My heart beat with determination.我的心因决心而跳动。(情绪)
Bitter tears streamed down her cheeks.(情绪)苦涩泪水顺着脸颊流下来。
9. Her mother's words melted the softest place in her heart.(情绪)
她妈妈的话融化了她心中最柔软之处。
10.Gradually, his astonishment gave way to understanding.(情绪)
他的惊讶让路于理解。
第二段.万能10句
1. After what seemed like ages, he struggled and managed to make it.
仿佛过了几世纪，他奋力并成功。
2. It was not long before things began to turn around.没过多久,事情就开始出现转机。
3. Approaching her son, she bent down and gathered him into her arms.
走近儿子，她弯下腰，把他抱在怀里
4. Making her way to her parents, she threw herself into their arms.
她走到父母身边，扑进他们的怀抱
5. Moved to tears, she couldn't contain her emotions.
感动到流泪，她无法控制自己的情绪。
Catching sight of the scene, I was deeply touched, warmth welling up inside me.看到这一幕，我深受感动，温暖涌上心头。
Suddenly, I felt a wave of warmth melting the softest place in my heart.我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔软的地方。
8. Gratitude surrounded him like a beam of sunlight, throwing him into a sea of kindness and warmth.
感激之情像一柬阳光包围着他，把他扔进了善意和温暖的海洋。
Sparing no effort, he struggled and endeavored, instead of giving way to obstacles.不遗余力地，他奋斗和努力，而不是向困难障碍让步。
10. With sunlight falling on her, she closed her eyes to feel the warmth, embrace the moment and enjoy a sense of achievement and pride.
阳光洒在身上，她闭眼感受温暖，拥抱当下，享受成就感和自豪感。
进阶篇 20句
动作描写，六个复杂句
1, Hearing what she said, I was shocked but also greatly encouraged, my previous nervousness and uncertainty giving way to increasing confidence and determination(句式:非谓语，主句，独立主格.)
听到她的话，我震惊但也受到极大鼓舞之前的紧张和不确定让路于越来越多的信心和决心。
2. Catching sight of the scene, I felt a wave of warmth melting the softest place in my heart.
(句式:非谓语，主句+非谓语)看到这幕，我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔软之处。
3、 Fixing my eyes on sth, I realized what I should do, my heart beating withdeterminatio1.
(句式:非谓语，主句，独立主格)紧盯某物，我意识到该做什么，心坚定地跳动。
4、 Thinking about the situation, I was fully aware that immediate action should betaken.
考虑到当时的情况，我完全意识到应该立即采取行动。
5、Reflecting on what had happened, I had a moment of enlightenment /epiphany.
回想发生的一切，我顿时恍然大悟。
6、 Considering what had happened, he cleared his mind and instantly figured out what should be done next.
考虑到发生了什么，他理清了思路，立即想出了下一步该怎么做。
3)情绪描写·六个复杂句
1、Uncontrollably, he felt a wave of delight racing in his heart.
(非谓语/取代“他开心”)不可控地，他感到一股开心在他内心奔腾。
2. Instantly, an intense wave of relief and gratitude surrounded him like a beam of sunlight, throwing him into a sea of kindness and warmth.
(无灵主语+非谓语)瞬间，强烈的释然和感激像一東阳光包围着他把他扔进了善良和温暖的海洋，
3、 Guilty and ashamed, she made hearty apologies and conveyed deep regrets, with bitter tears streaming down her cheeks.
(句首形容词做状语+独立主格)愧疚和羞愧，她衷心道歉表达深深的遗憾，苦涩的泪水顺着脸颊流下。
4、 Inspired and highly motivated, she collected herself and struggled to address the challenge, her eyes shining with mounting determination and confidence.
(形容词做状语+独立主格)受到鼓舞和推动，她振作起来，努力应对挑战，眼里闪着递增的决心和信心。
Moved to tears, David dashed to them and threw himself into their arms, with golden sunlight falling on them warmly and celebrating his accomplishment.
(非谓语+独立主格/写景)大卫感动得热泪盈眶，冲到他们身边，扑进他们的怀里，全色的阳光温暖地落在他们身上，庆视他的成就。
6、What made him pride was that he struggled and endeavored, instead of giving way to obstacles.
(非谓语+独立主格)让他感到自豪的是，他奋斗和努力，而不是向困难障碍让步。
4) 连接六句
1、A few moments slipped away like flowing water before he knew it.
在他不知不觉中，片刻时间如流水般溜走了。
Time passing by, things began to turn around.
时间流逝,事情开始好转。
3、It was then that an idea hit him like lightning.
正是那时，一个想法像闪电般击中了他。
4、 After what seemed like ages, he struggled and managed to make it.
似乎过了几个世纪，他奋力拼搏并成功了。
It was not long before his astonishment gave way to understanding.
很快，他的惊讶就被理解所取代。
6、Hardly had he recalled what happened when he came to realize the truth.
(倒装句Hardly had sb done sth when sb did sth.)他一回想发生的事，就意识到真相。
5)结尾升华2句
It was via the unique experience that I realized what mattered most was sth without which I couldn't have overcome the issue and made such achievement.(只需改sth)
【强调句+宾从长句】正是通过这次独特的经历，某人意识到某事最重要，没有它某人就不可能克服困难，取得如此成就。
Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was engraved in my mind and had a profound influence on me in the rest of my life.(无需改动)
【倒装+定从】我从未有过如此独特的经历它铭刻在我的脑海，对我的余生产生了深远的影响。
全文句式10个(速成版)
动作+情绪+连接+升华
【动作描写: 看着某事1,某人做某事2】非谓语: Fixing one's eyes on sth1, sb did sth2.
【连接句: 正是那时，某人做某事】强调句:It was then that sb did sth.
【动作描写: 2个动作】倒装句“一.就,”:Hardly had sb done sth1 when sb did sth2.
【情绪+做某事+五官】形容词句首+独立主格:Delighted, sb did sth,tears rolling down.
5.【动作描写: 做某事1后,做某事2】非谓语: Having done sth,sb did sth.(衔接句)
6.【动作描写: 3个动作】排比: Without delay, sb did sth1, did sth2, and did sth3.(衔接句)
7.【连接句: 过了很久,做某事】名从: After what seemed like ages, sb did sth.
8.【情绪+做某事】无灵主语: Uncontrollably, a sense of情绪名词 seized sb when sb did sth.
9.【升华/悟道理: 直到那时才】强调句+盛拟语气:It was then that sb realized what mattered most was sth, without which sb couldn't have done sth.
10.【升华/结尾:经历刻脑海】倒装句+被动句:Never before had sb got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved in sb's mind and had a profound influence on sb in the rest of sb's life.
全文模板10句(急救版)
Fixing her's eyes on the scene, she tried to figure out what to do.(看着/听到/想到..)
It was then that an idea hit her like lightning.(正是那时有想法)
Hardly had she recalled what happened when she came to realize what should be done.
Encouraged and determined, she collected herself and struggled to address the challenge,her eyes shining with mounting confidence.(一回想就知道/鼓起勇气，应对挑战，眼里有信心)
5.Having calmed oneself down,sb did sth.(街接句/冷静,做某事)
6. Without delay, sb did sth1, did sth2,and did sth3.(街接句/写情节，3个动作)
7. After what seemed like ages, she struggled and managed to make it.(成功做到)
8. Uncontrollably, an intense wave of delight and relief surrounded her like a beam of sunlight,throwing her into a sea of sweet victory.(加点情绪)
9. It was via the unique experience that sb realized what mattered most was sth, without which sb couldn't have overcome the issue and made such achievement.(意识到xx重要)
10. Never before had sb got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved in sb's mind and had a profound influence on sb in the rest of sb's life,(经历深刻脑海,影响余生)
Writing 01
【河南省新未来联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题】In August 2014, Ian Sandler’s 9-year-old daughter, Riley Sandler, went to a sleepaway camp for the summer. Early one morning, at around 1:30 a.m., the family got a call from the camp.
“The voice on the other end was saying that Riley had suddenly got very sick, and they were telling me that they were taking her to a hospital and I needed to get there right away,” Sandler remembered.
Sandler and his family lived in New York City. The hospital where Riley was being transported was in upstate New York, hours away. He was too shaken up to drive, so Sandler booked a taxi. He put in an address that was in the general direction of where he needed to go. When the driver arrived, Sandler explained the situation.
“I just tried to calm down and explain, ‘My daughter is going to the hospital. Its going to be a long drive. Would you help me ’ And I still remember how kind this man was. He said, ‘I have three children of my own — get in. We’ll arrive there safe and sound’ And we drove.”
It was comforting that the driver could empathize with (感同身受) Sandler’s situation. He felt a calmness wash over him — a feeling that was soon interrupted by another phone call about Riley. She was going to be moved to a different hospital, even further away.
“I turned to the driver and I said, ‘We’re gonna be going further north.’ And he didn’t miss a beat. We drove for another three and a half hours.” When they arrived at the hospital, Sandler tried to give the driver money. But the man refused to take it. “I remember trying to tip him, and do something. He wouldn’t sake a coin. He just knew this was the worst thing that could ever happen to a parent.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As soon as Sandler arrived, he heard the doctor announce that Riley was out of danger.
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Sandler obtained the driver’s contact information through the taxi booking app.
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Writing 02
【安徽省皖豫名校联盟2024-2025学年高三十月联考】Wayne Boone is a 53-year-old truck driver for a paper- recycling company in Suffolk, Virginia. Every day, he drives the empty 18- heel truck up Interstate 64 in Chesapeake toward Virginia Beach, about 50 kilometers away, where he will pick up his first load of the day. One morning in April, the strong winds gave Wayne Boone’s truck a good whipping (鞭打).
He planned to change into the left lane of the G. A．Treakle Memorial Bridge when the storm let loose its full force. Rain hammered Boone’s windshield. Winds grew fierce. As he was turning, Boone’s front wheels met the wet surface just as a powerful wind blew the driver’s side of his truck. It felt like the wind lifted the truck clear off the surface. His truck crashed into the guardrail (护栏) on the far right edge.
He struggled to regain control, but another wind, blowing more violently, pushed it upward from below, lifting the truck cab (驾驶舱), with Boone inside, over the edge of the bridge before dropping it again. If he felt any hope of survival before, it disappeared. The truck aimed straight down toward the grey-black water. In the end, Boone’s truck was hanging over the bridge, under 21 meters of which was a deep river.
Boone was badly injured, half blinded by the blood pouring into his eyes and suffering from shock. He forced himself to focus. If he had any chance of escaping the cab and surviving, he had to get out of his seatbelt. Gathering all his strength, he pulled himself between the seats and put himself back as far as he could behind the driver’s seat. He struggled to grab his mobile phone, but it was out of his reach. After he was hung in the wind for an hour, waiting to die, Boone was almost exhausted. Was he going to get out of here alive He had never panicked. He had accepted his fate (命运). He was ready to go if that’s what was meant to be when he heard a noise was drawing nearer.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few minutes later, Boone heard the approaching sirens(汽笛).
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When the rescuer and Boone appeared on the bridge, people shouted with joy.
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Writing 03
【浙江省强基联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考】A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee-deep in flowers that covered the meadow (草地) like a quilt.
“Cassie! You scared me to death! ” Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. “I am sorry, ” Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn’t notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. “ Not again! ” Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. “We gotta go! ”
Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, “Let’s go back to the campsite. ” The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down.
“It's dangerous! We need shelter now! ” Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain.
“Cassie, over here! ” Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind.
Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing.
“Smart thinking, Laura, ” Cassie said, her teeth chattering (打颤) with cold as she pressed her backpa ck close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof (防水的) model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
“Check your backpack, ” Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful.
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As night fell, the storm finally began to die down.
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