专题06 建议信
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
① 首段：
a.介绍自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
希望采纳、盼望回复
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【必备词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
【万能句式】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
（2024·河南郑州·模拟预测）假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 1
（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·开学考试）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jack所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆旅行，请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）推荐景点（至少两个）；
（3）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
（2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
（24-25高三上·湖南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack正在中国旅行。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，为他提供一些相关的建议，内容包括：
1. 品尝中国美食；
2. 体验中国传统文化；
3. 祝他旅途愉快。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
（24-25高三上·江苏南京·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近收到好友Ben来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成翻译作业而受到老师批评，请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.你的宽慰；2.对使用人工智能完成作业的看法；3.你的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
（2024·广西·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的笔友 Jack 来邮件说，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示回复一封英文邮件，要点包括：
1.表示同情；
2.建议锻炼身体。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 1
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2023 新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 3
【2021年全国甲卷】
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________专题06 建议信
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
① 首段：
a.介绍自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
希望采纳、盼望回复
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【必备词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
【万能句式】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
（2024·河南郑州·模拟预测）假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Congratulations on becoming a part of our wonderful school community. At the request of our English teacher, I’m reaching out to offer you some advice on navigating your time here.
First, treasure every moment spent with your teachers and classmates. Your time here will pass quickly, so seize the opportunity to forge meaningful and lasting connections. Secondly, let go of your past achievements or failures. Instead, focus on the tasks at hand. It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future. Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion. Take English learning for instance. Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you.
Wishing you all a fulfilling and rewarding journey ahead filled with joy, growth, and success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 1
（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·开学考试）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jack所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆旅行，请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）推荐景点（至少两个）；
（3）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m thrilled to hear that your school is planning a trip to Chongqing! I wholeheartedly welcome you to my hometown, which is known for its unique culture, delicious food, and breathtaking landscapes.
I suggested visiting two must-see spots: Hongya Cave and Ciqikou Ancient Town. Hongya Cave offers stunning views of the city’s skyline and river, especially at night when it’s beautifully li t up. Ciqikou Ancient Town provides a glimpse into Chongqing’s rich history and traditional culture, with its charming old streets and local crafts. What’s more, please note that Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid. Make sure to stay hydrated, wear sunscreen, and carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
Wish you an amazing journey filled with wonderful memories. Enjoy your trip and feel free to reach out if you need any more advice or assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封建议信，因为他所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆旅行。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
建议：suggest→recommend
充满：be filled with→be full of
极好的：amazing→marvelous
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What’s more, please note that Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid. Make sure to stay hydrated, wear sunscreen, and carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
拓展句：Since Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid, make sure to stay hydrated, wear sunscreen, and carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear that your school is planning a trip to Chongqing! (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I wholeheartedly welcome you to my hometown, which is known for its unique culture, delicious food, and breathtaking landscapes. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 2
（2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank,
As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it.
First of all, it’s crucial to decide on priorities. This way, you can make your schedule well- organized. You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. Don’t forget to engage in extracurricular activities to refresh yourself and relieve your pressure.
All in all, academic pressure is a common challenge, but with proper organization, support and self- care, you can deal with it effectively and stay on track.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：pressure → stress
首先：first of all → to begin with
重要的：crucial → vital
处理：deal with → cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other.
拓展句：It is also advisable that you should join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. (运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
Writing 3
（24-25高三上·湖南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack正在中国旅行。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，为他提供一些相关的建议，内容包括：
1. 品尝中国美食；
2. 体验中国传统文化；
3. 祝他旅途愉快。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I hope you’re having a fantastic time exploring China and I’m excited to give you some suggestions.
First of all, you should dive into the world of Chinese cuisine, which is a highlight of any visit. From Beijing’s Peking duck to Sichuan’s spicy hotpot, the diverse traditional cuisines of different regions in China show unique flavors. Don’t miss out on sampling street snacks like dumplings and jianbing for a true local experience.
In addition, immerse yourself in China’s rich traditional culture. Visit iconic landmarks such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City in Beijing, where you can learn about China’s history. Traditional Chinese opera performances or martial arts demonstrations also offer insights into Chinese arts and entertainment.
I wish you an amazing journey filled with delightful culinary adventures and memorable experiences. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给正在中国旅行的外国朋友Jack写一封建议信，建议他品尝中国美食并体验中国传统文化，祝他旅途愉快。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
极好的：fantastic→wonderful
建议：suggestion→advice
各种各样的：diverse→varied/various
味道：flavor→taste
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I wish you an amazing journey filled with delightful culinary adventures and memorable experiences.
拓展句：I wish you an amazing journey, which is filled with delightful culinary adventures and memorable experiences.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope you’re having a fantastic time exploring China and I’m excited to give you some suggestions.(使用了省略连接词that的宾语从句作hope的宾语)
【高分句型2】Visit iconic landmarks such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City in Beijing, where you can learn about China’s history. (使用了祈使句、where引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 4
（24-25高三上·江苏南京·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近收到好友Ben来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成翻译作业而受到老师批评，请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.你的宽慰；2.对使用人工智能完成作业的看法；3.你的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ben,
I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble regarding the use of AI tools for your assignment. I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. However, AI should never replace our own intellectual efforts.
As a scientist once said, “Our intelligence is what makes us human, and AI is an extension of that quality.” While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromise academic integrity. Therefore, I suggest you improve your work without solely depending on AI tools and have an open conversation with your teacher, clarifying your intentions and demonstrating your commitment to genuine learning.
Learning is not just about completing tasks but also about the process of acquiring knowledge. Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写一封回信，表达你的宽慰、阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
理解：relate to→ understand
代替；取代：replace→take the place of
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggest→advise
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：However, AI should never replace our own intellectual efforts.
拓展句：However, it is our own intellectual efforts that AI should never replace.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromise academic integrity. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
Writing 5
（2024·广西·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的笔友 Jack 来邮件说，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示回复一封英文邮件，要点包括：
1.表示同情；
2.建议锻炼身体。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack.
I feel very sorry for your unlucky situation. I’ve been in a situation similar to yours. At one point I even thought about dropping out. Thankfully, exercise has changed everything for me.
I suggest you also take exercise, which will keep you healthy and happy. Do not do hard activities at first. You can do some light exercise such as walking, jogging, playing badminton and so on. You’ll like sports gradually. Don’t lose heart, and I think things will get better.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇建议信。要求考生就好友经常生病，耽误学习的事情给出一些建议。考生应该补充合理细节使文章更加真实自然。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
① 不幸的：unlucky →unfortunate
② 锻炼：exercise→workout, physical activity
③ 健康的：healthy→fit
④ 灰心：lose heart→get discouraged
2. 句式积累
合并句子
原句：Don’t lose heart, and I think things will get better.
拓展句：I think things will get better if you don’t lose heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I suggest you also take exercise, which will keep you healthy and happy.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 Don’t lose heart, and I think things will get better.（祈使句+and+句子、think后运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句）
Writing 1
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2023 新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
Writing 3
【2021年全国甲卷】
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
