专题08 求助信和感谢信
求助信
求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。通常，求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:
1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。
2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3.希望得到帮助。
注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
【必备词块】
1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助
3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助
4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题
5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事
7.make preparations for.…为某事做准备
9.put...in use 学以致用
10.let sb. down 让某人失望
11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧
12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事
13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事
14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导
15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人
【万能句式】
首段：请求帮助
1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.Iam writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wonder if you could do me a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.Iwonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and otherbmaterials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
中间段：描述具体困难
1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.Thave trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Domg sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段：希望得到帮助：
1.Iwonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
（2024·江西吉安·模拟预测）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。
【思路点拨】
【写作模板】
模板一
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【万能句式】
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
常用句式
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
常用句式
It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was your kind help that … (强调句型)
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
常用句式
Thanks again for your generous help.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
（24-25高三上·江西·开学考试）假定你是李华，在教师节来临之际你自制了一份有中国特色的礼物赠送给外教Chris，同时你想写一封信表达对外教的感谢，内容包括：
1．赠礼原因;
2．礼物简介;
3．表达期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 1
（24-25高三上·河南开封·开学考试）假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
（24-25高三上·重庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，你准备参加所在国际学校组织的图书推荐(book talk)活动，做一个2分钟的演讲(presentation)，请你给英国朋友Chris 写一封邮件，寻求他的建议，内容包括:
1.你的推荐书籍与理由；
2.请他分享经验和建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
（24-25高二上·辽宁·开学考试）假定你是李华，下个月你将参加你校举办的以“Environmental Protection”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请给你的外教Mr Smith写一封邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达谢意。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：演讲稿 speech script Dear
Mr Smith,
How are you doing these days
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
（2024·江西吉安·模拟预测）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
（24-25高三上·河南开封·开学考试）假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 6
（2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括：
1. 感谢邀请；
2. 作品简介。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 7
（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 介绍赛前准备。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 8
（2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享获奖的喜悦；
2. 感谢他的帮助；
3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 1
【2021年全国甲卷】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 2
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________专题08 求助信和感谢信
求助信
求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。通常，求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【思路点拨】
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:
1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。
2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3.希望得到帮助。
注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
【必备词块】
1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助
3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助
4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题
5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事
7.make preparations for.…为某事做准备
9.put...in use 学以致用
10.let sb. down 让某人失望
11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧
12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事
13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事
14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导
15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人
【万能句式】
首段：请求帮助
1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.Iam writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wonder if you could do me a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.Iwonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and otherbmaterials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
中间段：描述具体困难
1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.Thave trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Domg sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段：希望得到帮助：
1.Iwonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
（2024·江西吉安·模拟预测）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”. Knowing that you are a movie fan, I’m writing to ask for your recommendation.
It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. As a movie fan, you must have seen a lot of English movies that are both interesting and thought-provoking. Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it I’m sure students will like it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，要求考生给外教Johnson 写封邮件，请他推荐一部英文电影并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
普遍地：widely→universally
提高：improve→boost
肯定的：sure→certain
打算做某事：intend to do→plan to do
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”.
拓展句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column, whose name is “English Movie Appreciation”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。
【思路点拨】
【写作模板】
模板一
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【万能句式】
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
常用句式
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
常用句式
It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was your kind help that … (强调句型)
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
常用句式
Thanks again for your generous help.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
（24-25高三上·江西·开学考试）假定你是李华，在教师节来临之际你自制了一份有中国特色的礼物赠送给外教Chris，同时你想写一封信表达对外教的感谢，内容包括：
1．赠礼原因;
2．礼物简介;
3．表达期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you. I present you a handcrafted gift with Chinese characteristics because you have taught me so much and inspired me greatly. The gift is a beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes. It symbolizes the elegance and charm of our culture.
I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Chris一份有中国特色的礼物并写一封信表达对他的感谢。其内容包括：赠礼原因、礼物简介和表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
鼓励：inspire→motivate
代表：symbolize→stand for
快乐：joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
拓展句：As the Teachers’ Day is approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The gift is a beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.(hope后运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Writing 1
（24-25高三上·河南开封·开学考试）假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London. Your kindness and support made my trip truly memorable and enjoyable. From guiding me through the bustling streets of London to recommending the best local eateries, your assistance was invaluable.
I am now back in China and would love to return the favor. I would be delighted if you could visit China. There is so much to see and experience in this beautiful country, and I would be honored to be your guide.
Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给好友Peter写封邮件，感谢他在伦敦旅游时提供的帮助，并邀请他来中国旅游。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→convey
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
宝贵的：invaluable→precious/ treasurable
参观：visit→pay a visit to/ make a visit to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London.
拓展句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all the help that you provided during my stay in London.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I would be delighted if you could visit China. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. (运用了whether和when分别引导宾语从句)
Writing 2
（24-25高三上·重庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，你准备参加所在国际学校组织的图书推荐(book talk)活动，做一个2分钟的演讲(presentation)，请你给英国朋友Chris 写一封邮件，寻求他的建议，内容包括:
1.你的推荐书籍与理由；
2.请他分享经验和建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your assistance with a 2-minute book talk presentation. I’ll be delivering at school.
I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters. It will definitely captivate my audience. However, I’m struggling to convey its unique qualities in such a short time. Given your experience with similar presentations, I would greatly appreciate any tips you can offer on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged.
I eagerly await your invaluable insights. Thank you in advance for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，寻求他对于演讲的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
使……着迷：fascinate→enchant
肯定：definitely→certainly
宝贵的：invaluable→precious
提前：in advanced→ahead of time
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters.
拓展句：I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland” because it has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Given your experience with similar presentations, I would greatly appreciate any tips you can offer on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged. (运用了省略了引导词的定语从句和疑问词+不定式结构作宾语)
Writing 3
（24-25高二上·辽宁·开学考试）假定你是李华，下个月你将参加你校举办的以“Environmental Protection”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请给你的外教Mr Smith写一封邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达谢意。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：演讲稿 speech script Dear
Mr Smith,
How are you doing these days
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Mr Smith,
How are you doing these days My name is Li Hua, one of your students. Next month, our school will hold an English speech contest on the theme of “Environmental Protection”. I decided to take part in the competition.
I am wondering if you could tell me some insightful thoughts or opinions about environmental protection that are not well known or discussed. And would you please polish my speech for me, ensuring that it flows smoothly and effectively conveys my message.
Thank you very much for your consideration and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr Smith写一封邮件求助，请他为你将参加的学校举办的以“Environmental Protection”为主题的英文演讲比赛提供帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
比赛：contest→competition
确保：ensure→guarantee
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Next month, our school will hold an English speech contest on the theme of “Environmental Protection”.
拓展句：Next month, our school will hold an English speech contest, the theme of which is “Environmental Protection”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am wondering if you could tell me some insightful thoughts or opinions about environmental protection that are not well known or discussed. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和if引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] And would you please polish my speech for me, ensuring that it flows smoothly and effectively conveys my message. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
Writing 4
（2024·江西吉安·模拟预测）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”. Knowing that you are a movie fan, I’m writing to ask for your recommendation.
It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. As a movie fan, you must have seen a lot of English movies that are both interesting and thought-provoking. Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it I’m sure students will like it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，要求考生给外教Johnson 写封邮件，请他推荐一部英文电影并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
普遍地：widely→universally
提高：improve→boost
肯定的：sure→certain
打算做某事：intend to do→plan to do
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”.
拓展句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column, whose name is “English Movie Appreciation”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Writing 5
（24-25高三上·河南开封·开学考试）假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London. Your kindness and support made my trip truly memorable and enjoyable. From guiding me through the bustling streets of London to recommending the best local eateries, your assistance was invaluable.
I am now back in China and would love to return the favor. I would be delighted if you could visit China. There is so much to see and experience in this beautiful country, and I would be honored to be your guide.
Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给好友Peter写封邮件，感谢他在伦敦旅游时提供的帮助，并邀请他来中国旅游。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→convey
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
宝贵的：invaluable→precious/ treasurable
参观：visit→pay a visit to/ make a visit to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London.
拓展句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all the help that you provided during my stay in London.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I would be delighted if you could visit China. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. (运用了whether和when分别引导宾语从句)
Writing 6
（2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括：
1. 感谢邀请；
2. 作品简介。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version 1
Dear Peter,
Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! I’d like to attend it and here briefly introduce my work.
In line with the theme, I will create a traditional Chinese painting featuring my picturesque hometown. Trees and flowers will be highlighted with bright and vivid colors. The spectacular mountains and the crystal water are certain to impress you. When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development.
Please let me know if you need any further details. Thanks again for this opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version 2
Dear Peter,
I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. Thank you for the fantastic opportunity and I am writing to give you a brief introduction of my work.
The painting I created features the harmony of natural world. I am an enthusiast of both nature and art; therefore, my works are often full of elements of nature. You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme.
Thanks again for the opportunity to demonstrate my passion for art and nature.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→participate in
给人印象深刻：impress→make an impression on
对……感到惊奇：be amazed at→be astonished at
感激：thank→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature!
拓展句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition which is themed on Amazing Nature!
【点睛】【高分句型1】When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development.（运用了状语从句的省略，that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Please let me know if you need any further details.（运用了条件状语从句）
Writing 7
（2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 介绍赛前准备。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Thanks for your letter and for your question as well. Now I am delighted to share with you more details about the mini-marathon.
Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. Be careful to avoid injury. Besides, you should stay confident and keep a good mood. As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. I think you can enter the one next year.
Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生向英国朋友Chris写信感谢他向你在学校迷你马拉松中获奖表达的祝贺，并介绍相关情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴：delighted→pleased
重要的：important→significant
避免：avoid→prevent
自信：confident→assertive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day.
拓展句：Before the race, it is important that we should practice running and do some physical training every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. (运用了it作形式主语)
Writing 8
（2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享获奖的喜悦；
2. 感谢他的帮助；
3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance.
Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. I really appreciate your help.
To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→ excited
帮助：assistance→ help
至关重要的：crucial→ vital
感谢：appreciate→ thank
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition.
拓展句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial, which helped me prepare for the competition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。）
【高分句型2】To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式To express作目的状语。）
Writing 1
【2021年全国甲卷】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
