专题07 书面表达15篇（河北中考真题+中考模拟）-2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
文档属性
| 名称 | 专题07 书面表达15篇（河北中考真题+中考模拟）-2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递 |  | |
| 格式 | docx | ||
| 文件大小 | 72.9KB | ||
| 资源类型 | 试卷 | ||
| 版本资源 | 通用版 | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2025-04-06 10:34:04 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
专题07 书面表达15篇（河北中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·河北） 假定英语课上你们正在就"课堂表现"开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
Class Record Name: Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Did you listen to the teacher carefully √
Did you answer questions actively √
Did you ask any questions √
Did you work well in your group √
Did you take notes √
注意：(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(2) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·石家庄模拟） 曾子曰："吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？"习近平总书记演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以"How to be a better teenager"为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示：
1.养成健康的生活习惯……；
2.学习有计划、有行动；
3.友善待人；
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动，比如清扫城市公园。
写作要求
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥；
2语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；
4.不少于 90 词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies；志愿活动 volunteer activity
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·邱县模拟） 孝亲敬长是中华民族的传统美德（virtue）。你校英文网站正开展"孝敬老人，从我做起"的征文活动，请你结合生活实际，根据下面的提示写一篇短文，以号召更多人行动起来，孝敬祖辈，传承美德。
提示：
1) Ways to care for the elder people: spend time together, teach them new things...
2) Reasons to do so: make them feel young, help them keep in good health...
3) Encourage others to take action
注意：
1)短文须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3)词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
As we all know, caring for the elder people is the Chinese traditional virtue.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2024·顺平模拟） 李华的英国好友Peter最近读到汉语中的一句俗语"Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."，他对此甚是不解。下面是来信的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以李华的名义写一封回信。
Recently I have read a book about China. In the book, there is an old Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles." What does it mean Which is more important, reading or traveling Please tell me about it.
注意：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须回答以上两个问题，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·河北模拟） 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以"My English Study"为题，
谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。
1、要点包括：你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟；
2、字数要求：不少于80字。
My English Study
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2024·河北模拟）随着网络用语 (Internet words) 的日渐流行,"栓Q、YYDS、juejuezi、尊嘟假嘟"等网络用语成为不少学生的口头禅,甚至开始进入他们的书面作业。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包含所有要点并适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
提示：
1.学生使用网络用语的原因.
2.学生使用网络用语的不良影响。
With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as"YYDS, juejuezi"in their homework.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·竞秀模拟） 假定你是李华，你的生日快到了，请给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你计划如何让这次生日过得更有意义。
提示：
1. How do you usually celebrate your birthday
2. Give two special plans to make this birthday meaningful and tell the reasons.
注意：（1）文中须包含所给提示要点，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
My birthday is coming and I plan to make it meaningful.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'd love to know about your ideas to make my birthday even more special.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2024·高碑店模拟）李华的英国朋友 John的班级将要开展暑期实践活动，下面是 John 给李华发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据邮件内容，以李华的名义回复。
Our class will have summer activities. My teacher gives us two projects，cooking and planting vegetables. Can you give me some advice？Which activity should I choose？Why？
注意：（1）须回答邮件中的两个问题，可适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear John，
What good news!It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2024·衡水模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Tom发来邮件，说下周将作为交换生来你校学习一个学期，希望你帮助他选择一个社团。请从下面三个社团中选择一个并根据表格中的相关信息回复 Tom。
ping-pong club the national sport of China, healthy...
Erhu club one traditional Chinese instrument, beautiful sound...
paper-cutting club one of Chinese traditional arts, interesting...
提示：
1) Which club will you choose for Tom
2) Why do you choose it
注意：
1) 回复邮件中须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
2) 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi Tom,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2024·唐山模拟） 为了丰富学生们的校园生活，你校开设了各类课程，下面是其中很受欢迎的两门课程。请写一篇短文介绍你喜欢的一门课程以及你选择这门课程的理由。
Skills for communicating Want to communicate better with others Come here! Website making Here you will learn how to set up websites on the computer.
注意：（1）选择一门课程，并给出至少两点理由；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等；（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
In order to make our school life colorful, the school has set up different kinds of courses.
11．（2024·石家庄模拟） 善良的人们常以自己的善举温暖这个世界，把爱与希望传递给他人。这样的行为不仅帮助了他人，也使他们在付出的过程中体验到了真切的快乐。亲爱的同学，请以"Be Kind, Be Happy!"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人的经历，谈谈善良给你带来的收获。
1. What did you do to help others 2. What do you learn from this experience
注意：1. 要点齐全，语言流畅；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名；3. 书写规范、卷面整洁，词数80个左右。
Be Kind, Be Happy!
Kindness makes the world a better place.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2024·河北模拟） 假如你叫李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike给你发来了电子邮件，请根据邮件的内容回复。
Dear Li Hua, You know I like Chinese culture very much. I plan to travel to China this summer holiday. I'm learning Chinese now, but I can't do it well. Can you give me some advice Yours, Mike
注意：(1)邮件中必须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 (2)邮件中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2024·邯郸模拟） 假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以"亲近大自然"为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。
Morning climb mountains
Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories
Afternoon pick fruits
要求：
1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由；
2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we'll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
14．（2024·邯郸模拟）自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校正在对学生进行自我管理方面的调查。请你先完成下面的自我管理评价，再根据提示写一篇短文。
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
提示: (1) Do a self-assessment according to your form.(2) Make a plan to improve your self-management abilities.
注意：(1)短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Self-management is important to us.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2024·河北模拟） 近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付(mobile payment)深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以"Mobile Payment Changes Our Life"为题的征文活动，请根据下面的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 日益流行；改变生活
扫码支付；方便快捷 （举至少1个生活实例）
消费观念 理智消费；购前三思 学会节约；按需购买
要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：扫二维码scan QR codes；支付pay；三思think twice；理智地 wisely
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and answered questions actively. So you got high marks in most of your subjects. You worked well in your group and you showed your ability to us. However, you didn't ask any questions and you didn't take notes. So we couldn't know if you needed help.
In my opinion, you should ask questions if you have any so that you can solve problems in time. What's more, you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand. I hope my advice is of help.
这是一篇材料作文。要求根据你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录，写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，简单评价张军的课堂表现；第二步，就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如got high marks 得高分；take notes 做笔记；In my opinion 在我看来；so that以便等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：So we couldn't know if you needed help.（if引导的宾语从句）；What's more, you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand.（so that引导的目的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）。
2．One possible version:
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take actions to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, We should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
这是一篇演讲稿。要求根据所给内容提示，以"How to be a better teenager"为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：①养成健康的生活习惯……；②学习有计划、有行动；③友善待人；④培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动，比如清扫城市公园。根据所给内容提示可知，此文以一般现在时为主。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文，根据所给内容的提示将各个要点逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇①in order to为了；②for example例如。高分句型：①When others need help, we should try to help them. (when引导时间状语从句)；②Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park. (it is adj to do句型)。
3． As we all know, caring for the elder people is the Chinese traditional virtue. The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to do some physical activities. It helps them stay healthy. Third, we can teach the elder people some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.
Everyone will be old one day, so let's take action and set examples for others.
这是一篇材料作文作文写作。首先要引出照顾老人的话题，然后介绍照顾老人的措施。其次，描述这样做的原因。最后是发出号召。根据所给材料提示可知，短文时态主要以一般现在时为主。短文以第一人称为主，尽量多使用短语和句型。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：take action；set examples for；not only...but also...；stay healthy 等以及句型结构，如：Third, we can teach the elder people some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state. (定语从句) 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
4．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."
It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I usually read after I finish my homework or before I go to bed. I also like travelling. The visit to Beijing last year was my favorite trip. I visited the places of interest in Beijing and learned about its traditional culture. I really understand the meaning of "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."
Do you like travelling Have you ever been to China I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇书信作文，要求以李华的名义给好友Peter写一封回信，告诉Peter"读万卷书，行万里路"的含义，并讲讲什么时候
读书、为什么会经常读、是否喜欢旅行，并介绍自己最喜欢的一次旅行。此文的时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文。首先承接开头，介绍"读万卷书，行万里路"的含义；其次详细介绍，阐述自己的读书习惯和理由，是否爱旅行、最喜欢的旅行；最后表达了美好祝愿。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇：①make sb. do sth.使某人做某事；②like doing sth.喜欢做某事；③the places of interest名胜古迹；④learn about了解。高分句型：①It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. (it固定句型)；②I like reading, because I have learned a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)；③I really understand the meaning of "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man." (名言)。
5．How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生一篇以"My English Study"为题的英语短文介绍自己初中学习英语的心得体会。写作背景：初中毕业在即。内容包括：1. 初中英语学习中所经历的困难；2. 解决的办法；3. 学习英语的感悟。注意：1. 时态以一般过去时为主；2. 注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，条理清晰；4. 写作词数不少于80个。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意时态人称的选择；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：高分句型 How time flies! （运用了感叹句）； Looking back I have many memories of my English study.（运用了现在分词作状语）；When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）；In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well. （运用了部分倒装句）。重点短语：give up放弃，with the help of在…帮助下，as much as possible尽可能多的，keep on doing sth坚持做某事，make progress进步。
6．One possible version:
With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as "YYDS, juejuezi" in their homework. Why do the students do so Because some students think the Internet expressions can make homework more interesting and more humorous. Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words.
In fact, for students, using Internet words has bad influence. On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students' abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages.
In my opinion, students shouldn't use Internet words. Our Chinese language is rich. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。写作中要包含所给的两方面的内容，学生使用网络用语的原因以及学生使用网络用语的不良影响。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将两个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如use the Internet words；get angry and give students low scores等以及句型结构，如too much use of the Internet words will affect the students' abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
7．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
My birthday is coming and I plan to make it meaningful. Usually, I celebrate it by spending time with my family and friends, enjoying a meal and exchanging gifts.
To add more meaning to my birthday this year, I have two plans. First I will do more housework to express my love to my parents. They have always supported me, and I want to make their day a little easier. And then I want to write in my journal, think about my personal growth, and set new goals for the year ahead. I believe my birthday will be more than just a celebration. It will be a time of giving back and personal development.
I'd love to know about your ideas to make my birthday even more special.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文，按照所给的提示内容给英国笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你计划如何让这次生日过得更有意义。写作中要包含文章应该包括两个方面的要点，第一，先介绍通常情况下如何庆祝生日；第二，介绍今年计划庆祝的方式及理由。根据材料内容可知本文用一般现在时态，人称主要使用第一人称，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇文章详细、全面地阐明了自己的生日庆祝计划，其中使用了一些固定句式，包含不定式作目的状语To add more meaning to my birthday this year, I have two plans.以及宾语从句I believe my birthday will be more than just a celebration.，同时还有其他的固定短语如spend time with sb."与某人共度时光"，think about"考虑"等这些用法为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式，写作时可以适当地引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑。
8．One possible version:
Dear John，
What good news!It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday. I think you should choose cooking. It's wonderful to create your own dishes. You can take care of yourself when your parents are not at home.
In order to develop your cooking skill，you should first ask your mother for help. And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. There are many short videos about cooking on the Internet.
Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
Yours，
Li Hua
这是一封回复邮件，属于应用文 。写作时必须回答邮件中的两个问题：选择哪个活动（cooking or planting vegetables）？为什么选择这个活动？ 可以适当发挥， 并简要提及暑假项目的有趣性。主体部分： 明确回答选择的活动， 解释选择该活动的原因，并提出一些建议或方法来实现这一目标：鼓励John采取行动，并礼貌地结束邮件。 文章要求使用友好的语气来写，段落清晰，逻辑连贯。使用简单明了的词汇和句子结构。 文章主要使用一般现在时来描述建议和原因。 可以适当使用一般将来时来表达未来的行动或计划。
文结构清晰，内容充实，中心思想明确。范文首先表达了对John邮件的高兴之情，并简要提及了暑假项目的有趣性。接着，范文明确回答了John的问题，选择了cooking作为推荐的活动，并给出了两个原因，最后，范文以鼓励John采取行动并礼貌地结束邮件作为结尾。 范文中的句子流畅，表达清晰。如：It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday； It's wonderful to create your own dishes ； And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online 。
9．Hi,Tom,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term. There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in. But I think ping-pong club is the best one for you. Ping-pong is the national sport of China. Many people can play it. If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park. It's a good way to communicate with Chinese people. Besides, I know you like sports, and playing ping-pong is healthy. You can have a lot of fun in playing ping-pong.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Tom发来邮件，说下周将作为交换生来你校学习一个学期，希望你帮助他选择一个社团。请从下面三个社团中选择一个并根据表格中的相关信息回复 Tom。这是一篇应用文作文，时态为一般现在时；从三个俱乐部中选择一个写作，要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。第一步，首先承接开头，介绍学校有很多俱乐部；第二步，介绍推荐参加俱乐部；第三步，介绍选择这个俱乐部的原因。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中be interested in对……感兴趣；communicate with沟通等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了there be句型 There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in，If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park.（if引导条件状语从句）；It's a good way to communicate with Chinese people.（不定式作定语）使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
10．One possible version:
In order to make our school life colorful, the school has set up different kinds of courses. Skills for communicating and website making are very popular. As for me, I prefer to learn how to set up websites.
Why do I choose the course First, I show great interest in the computer. It will be interesting to learn something new about the computer. Second, I think this skill will be of some help when I look for a job in the future. Through this course, I'm certain I'll learn something useful. At the same time, I can make some new friends.
这是一篇材料作文；根据表格内容介绍自己喜欢的一门课程以及选择这门课程给出至少两点理由。结合内容可知，时态为"一般现在时"和"一般将来时"； 应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文，根据所给内容的提示将各个要点逐一进行了陈述。①介绍两门受欢迎的课程，并指出自己喜欢的一门课程；②介绍至少两点喜欢这门课程的理由。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇：①as for至于；
②prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事；③show great interest in对…表现出极大的兴趣④at the same time与此同时。高分句型：I think this skill will be of some help when I look for a job in the future.（省略that的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句)
11．One possible version:
范文1：
It's good to help others in need. I always believe being kind to others is the key to being happy. Once I met a foreigner who was looking for a hotel on my way to the library. I showed him the way and took him to the hotel. To my surprise, he thanked me a lot and later we became pen pals. I feel happy to help him and extremely greterul that I can develop friendship in this way. I will try my best to help others and keep being a kind person.
范文2:
I still remember that rainy day. I was on my way home when I noticed an old man. struggling with his heavy bags. So, I ran to him and offered to help. He was very surprised and grateful. As we walked together, we had a nice chat. I could tell he was really happy, and that made me feel good inside. When we got to his house, he thanked me a lot. I left with a big smile on my face. That small act of kindness not only made the old man happy but also made me very happy. It made me understand that being kind doesn't take much effort, but it can bring a lot of happiness. Since then, I often look for chances to be kind and feel happy every time I do it. Kindness really can make both others and ourselves happy.
这是一篇命题作文。要求以"Be Kind, Be Happy!"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人的经历，谈谈善良给你带来的收获。文章的时态应是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时注意一些常见句式的应用，连词、固定短语的搭配使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
这是一篇不错的短文，分三步对此文进行了陈述。第一步，通过回忆的方式讲述自己在某个雨天帮助老人的经历；第二步，描述帮助老人的过程中自己的感受和收获；第三步，总结这次经历对自己的影响和启示。亮点词汇：① offer to do 主动提出做；② make sb. do 让某人做；③ not only...but also 不但….而且。高分句型：① I was on my way home when I noticed an old man struggling with his heavy bags. (when引导时间状语从句）；② It made me understand that being kind doesn't take much effort, but it can bring a lot of happiness. (宾语从句）的运用为文章增色不少；使文章显得更加自然，流畅，显得更有档次。
12．Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.
First, you should read books or watch programs about Chinese culture. They can help you understand Chinese better. Second, you should speak Chinese as much as possible. There are different dialects in many cities. Talking to local people can improve your speaking skills. Last but not least, take notes when you learn some new words and review them. I think these suggestions can help you.
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。本题要求回复一封电子邮件。邮件中提到Mike对中国文化很感兴趣，并提到暑假将来中国旅游，但是Mike中文学得不好，请李华提出一些关于学习汉语的建议。提出建议通常用到的是一般现在时，写作中注意主谓一致，也要注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系等。
写作时要注意文章的内容一定要紧贴题意，以及要求的体裁，本文是要求写一封电子邮件，所以要注意介绍邮件的正确格式。结合提示的语境等，丰富写作内容，使得整篇有理有据。同时也要注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度以及逻辑清晰合理。邮件的开头用Dear...，署名用到yours，再另起一行在末尾写上写信人姓名。可用到的开门见山的语句，如I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.先提出要多看书籍，如you should read books or watch programs about Chinese culture. 然后鼓励多说，如you should speak Chinese as much as possible. ，最后提出要多复习，如Last but not least, take notes when you learn some new words and review them.同时注意连接词等的使用。使用First，Second，Last but not least是文章更有层次感，运用需得体，表达准确，使文章更加流畅自然。
13．Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.
First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It's also a great way to improve our physical fitness.
At noon, we'll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills.
In the afternoon, we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we'll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求以"亲近大自然"为主题给Mike写一封电子邮件介绍自己的设计计划。为电子邮件。时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。首先，写明计划中的时间，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来指定夏令营活动计划。以及活动内容。最后是祝愿，相信会玩得愉快。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：first of all；enjoy oneself；each other；look forward to 等以及句型结构，如：First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. (目的状语从句) 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
14．One possible version:
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
Self-management is important to us. I think I behave well in managing myself. I can manage my pocket money well. I have healthy living habits—getting up early and keeping running every day. However, I sometimes have difficulty managing my time of study and rest.
To better manage myself, I will make a clear plan for my study and rest time and firmly carry it out. Besides, I will ask my friends and parents for their advice. I will also read some books about managing oneself, from which I will get some useful tips.
Managing myself is a long way to go, but I will keep learning while doing.
这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给内容完成自我管理评价，再根据提示写一篇短文。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍自我管理的重要性和具体做法；第二步，介绍自己提高自我管理能力的计划；第三步，书写结语。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时和一般将来时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如have healthy living habits 有健康的生活习惯；have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难；make a clear plan for 制定一个明确的计划；carry out 执行等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I will also read some books about managing oneself, from which I will get some useful tips.（which引导的定语从句）；Managing myself is a long way to go, but I will keep learning while doing.（并列句）。
15．One possible version:
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people's daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smartphones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, we need to think twice about what we want to buy. Next, we should learn to save, and buy what we can afford. Last but not least, we must spend money on what we really need. We shouldn't buy everything we want.
本题是一篇材料作文写作，属于说明文。要求考生以李华的身份向学校开展的征文活动投稿，介绍移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。写作背景：手机扫码支付深受人们喜爱并在多数消费场地被广泛使用。 内容包括：1. 承接短文开头，引出话题，说明移动支付的受欢迎程度和它带来的影响；2. 至少举一个实例说明移动支付在日常生活中的便捷使用；3. 提倡理性消费，分享消费理念。注意：1. 提示内容必须全部包括，可适当发挥；2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如： It is becoming more and more popular in China.（运用了现在进行时）； It has made people's daily life very convenient. （运用了现在完成时以及形容词做宾语补足语）；First of all, we need to think twice about what we want to buy.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）；Next, we should learn to save, and buy what we can afford. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）；Last but not least, we must spend money on what we really need.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）； We shouldn't buy everything we want. （运用了省略了关系代词that引导的定语从句）。
专题07 书面表达15篇（河北中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·河北） 假定英语课上你们正在就"课堂表现"开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record)，请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
Class Record Name: Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Did you listen to the teacher carefully √
Did you answer questions actively √
Did you ask any questions √
Did you work well in your group √
Did you take notes √
注意：(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(2) 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·石家庄模拟） 曾子曰："吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？"习近平总书记演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以"How to be a better teenager"为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示：
1.养成健康的生活习惯……；
2.学习有计划、有行动；
3.友善待人；
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动，比如清扫城市公园。
写作要求
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥；
2语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；
4.不少于 90 词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies；志愿活动 volunteer activity
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2024·邱县模拟） 孝亲敬长是中华民族的传统美德（virtue）。你校英文网站正开展"孝敬老人，从我做起"的征文活动，请你结合生活实际，根据下面的提示写一篇短文，以号召更多人行动起来，孝敬祖辈，传承美德。
提示：
1) Ways to care for the elder people: spend time together, teach them new things...
2) Reasons to do so: make them feel young, help them keep in good health...
3) Encourage others to take action
注意：
1)短文须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3)词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
As we all know, caring for the elder people is the Chinese traditional virtue.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2024·顺平模拟） 李华的英国好友Peter最近读到汉语中的一句俗语"Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."，他对此甚是不解。下面是来信的部分内容，请你根据所给内容，以李华的名义写一封回信。
Recently I have read a book about China. In the book, there is an old Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles." What does it mean Which is more important, reading or traveling Please tell me about it.
注意：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须回答以上两个问题，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·河北模拟） 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以"My English Study"为题，
谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。
1、要点包括：你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟；
2、字数要求：不少于80字。
My English Study
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2024·河北模拟）随着网络用语 (Internet words) 的日渐流行,"栓Q、YYDS、juejuezi、尊嘟假嘟"等网络用语成为不少学生的口头禅,甚至开始进入他们的书面作业。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包含所有要点并适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
提示：
1.学生使用网络用语的原因.
2.学生使用网络用语的不良影响。
With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as"YYDS, juejuezi"in their homework.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·竞秀模拟） 假定你是李华，你的生日快到了，请给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你计划如何让这次生日过得更有意义。
提示：
1. How do you usually celebrate your birthday
2. Give two special plans to make this birthday meaningful and tell the reasons.
注意：（1）文中须包含所给提示要点，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
My birthday is coming and I plan to make it meaningful.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'd love to know about your ideas to make my birthday even more special.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2024·高碑店模拟）李华的英国朋友 John的班级将要开展暑期实践活动，下面是 John 给李华发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据邮件内容，以李华的名义回复。
Our class will have summer activities. My teacher gives us two projects，cooking and planting vegetables. Can you give me some advice？Which activity should I choose？Why？
注意：（1）须回答邮件中的两个问题，可适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear John，
What good news!It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2024·衡水模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Tom发来邮件，说下周将作为交换生来你校学习一个学期，希望你帮助他选择一个社团。请从下面三个社团中选择一个并根据表格中的相关信息回复 Tom。
ping-pong club the national sport of China, healthy...
Erhu club one traditional Chinese instrument, beautiful sound...
paper-cutting club one of Chinese traditional arts, interesting...
提示：
1) Which club will you choose for Tom
2) Why do you choose it
注意：
1) 回复邮件中须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
2) 回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi Tom,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2024·唐山模拟） 为了丰富学生们的校园生活，你校开设了各类课程，下面是其中很受欢迎的两门课程。请写一篇短文介绍你喜欢的一门课程以及你选择这门课程的理由。
Skills for communicating Want to communicate better with others Come here! Website making Here you will learn how to set up websites on the computer.
注意：（1）选择一门课程，并给出至少两点理由；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等；（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
In order to make our school life colorful, the school has set up different kinds of courses.
11．（2024·石家庄模拟） 善良的人们常以自己的善举温暖这个世界，把爱与希望传递给他人。这样的行为不仅帮助了他人，也使他们在付出的过程中体验到了真切的快乐。亲爱的同学，请以"Be Kind, Be Happy!"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人的经历，谈谈善良给你带来的收获。
1. What did you do to help others 2. What do you learn from this experience
注意：1. 要点齐全，语言流畅；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名；3. 书写规范、卷面整洁，词数80个左右。
Be Kind, Be Happy!
Kindness makes the world a better place.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2024·河北模拟） 假如你叫李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike给你发来了电子邮件，请根据邮件的内容回复。
Dear Li Hua, You know I like Chinese culture very much. I plan to travel to China this summer holiday. I'm learning Chinese now, but I can't do it well. Can you give me some advice Yours, Mike
注意：(1)邮件中必须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥。 (2)邮件中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2024·邯郸模拟） 假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以"亲近大自然"为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。
Morning climb mountains
Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories
Afternoon pick fruits
要求：
1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由；
2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we'll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
14．（2024·邯郸模拟）自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校正在对学生进行自我管理方面的调查。请你先完成下面的自我管理评价，再根据提示写一篇短文。
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
提示: (1) Do a self-assessment according to your form.(2) Make a plan to improve your self-management abilities.
注意：(1)短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Self-management is important to us.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2024·河北模拟） 近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付(mobile payment)深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以"Mobile Payment Changes Our Life"为题的征文活动，请根据下面的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 日益流行；改变生活
扫码支付；方便快捷 （举至少1个生活实例）
消费观念 理智消费；购前三思 学会节约；按需购买
要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：扫二维码scan QR codes；支付pay；三思think twice；理智地 wisely
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and answered questions actively. So you got high marks in most of your subjects. You worked well in your group and you showed your ability to us. However, you didn't ask any questions and you didn't take notes. So we couldn't know if you needed help.
In my opinion, you should ask questions if you have any so that you can solve problems in time. What's more, you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand. I hope my advice is of help.
这是一篇材料作文。要求根据你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录，写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，简单评价张军的课堂表现；第二步，就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如got high marks 得高分；take notes 做笔记；In my opinion 在我看来；so that以便等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：So we couldn't know if you needed help.（if引导的宾语从句）；What's more, you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand.（so that引导的目的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）。
2．One possible version:
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What's more, we should make a study plan and take actions to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, We should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
这是一篇演讲稿。要求根据所给内容提示，以"How to be a better teenager"为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：①养成健康的生活习惯……；②学习有计划、有行动；③友善待人；④培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动，比如清扫城市公园。根据所给内容提示可知，此文以一般现在时为主。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文，根据所给内容的提示将各个要点逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇①in order to为了；②for example例如。高分句型：①When others need help, we should try to help them. (when引导时间状语从句)；②Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park. (it is adj to do句型)。
3． As we all know, caring for the elder people is the Chinese traditional virtue. The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to do some physical activities. It helps them stay healthy. Third, we can teach the elder people some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.
Everyone will be old one day, so let's take action and set examples for others.
这是一篇材料作文作文写作。首先要引出照顾老人的话题，然后介绍照顾老人的措施。其次，描述这样做的原因。最后是发出号召。根据所给材料提示可知，短文时态主要以一般现在时为主。短文以第一人称为主，尽量多使用短语和句型。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：take action；set examples for；not only...but also...；stay healthy 等以及句型结构，如：Third, we can teach the elder people some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state. (定语从句) 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
4．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying "Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles."
It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I usually read after I finish my homework or before I go to bed. I also like travelling. The visit to Beijing last year was my favorite trip. I visited the places of interest in Beijing and learned about its traditional culture. I really understand the meaning of "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."
Do you like travelling Have you ever been to China I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇书信作文，要求以李华的名义给好友Peter写一封回信，告诉Peter"读万卷书，行万里路"的含义，并讲讲什么时候
读书、为什么会经常读、是否喜欢旅行，并介绍自己最喜欢的一次旅行。此文的时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文。首先承接开头，介绍"读万卷书，行万里路"的含义；其次详细介绍，阐述自己的读书习惯和理由，是否爱旅行、最喜欢的旅行；最后表达了美好祝愿。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇：①make sb. do sth.使某人做某事；②like doing sth.喜欢做某事；③the places of interest名胜古迹；④learn about了解。高分句型：①It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. (it固定句型)；②I like reading, because I have learned a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)；③I really understand the meaning of "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man." (名言)。
5．How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生一篇以"My English Study"为题的英语短文介绍自己初中学习英语的心得体会。写作背景：初中毕业在即。内容包括：1. 初中英语学习中所经历的困难；2. 解决的办法；3. 学习英语的感悟。注意：1. 时态以一般过去时为主；2. 注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，条理清晰；4. 写作词数不少于80个。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意时态人称的选择；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：高分句型 How time flies! （运用了感叹句）； Looking back I have many memories of my English study.（运用了现在分词作状语）；When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）；In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well. （运用了部分倒装句）。重点短语：give up放弃，with the help of在…帮助下，as much as possible尽可能多的，keep on doing sth坚持做某事，make progress进步。
6．One possible version:
With the increasing popularity of Internet words, more and more students like to use them frequently. Students are even starting to use Internet words such as "YYDS, juejuezi" in their homework. Why do the students do so Because some students think the Internet expressions can make homework more interesting and more humorous. Also doing homework will be more enjoyable for students if they use the Internet words.
In fact, for students, using Internet words has bad influence. On the one hand, some teachers might not know what the Internet words mean, so they might get angry and give students low scores. On the other hand, too much use of the Internet words will affect the students' abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages.
In my opinion, students shouldn't use Internet words. Our Chinese language is rich. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions
这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。写作中要包含所给的两方面的内容，学生使用网络用语的原因以及学生使用网络用语的不良影响。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将两个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如use the Internet words；get angry and give students low scores等以及句型结构，如too much use of the Internet words will affect the students' abilities to learn the correct ways of expressing languages. Why not learn to use beautiful expressions 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
7．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
My birthday is coming and I plan to make it meaningful. Usually, I celebrate it by spending time with my family and friends, enjoying a meal and exchanging gifts.
To add more meaning to my birthday this year, I have two plans. First I will do more housework to express my love to my parents. They have always supported me, and I want to make their day a little easier. And then I want to write in my journal, think about my personal growth, and set new goals for the year ahead. I believe my birthday will be more than just a celebration. It will be a time of giving back and personal development.
I'd love to know about your ideas to make my birthday even more special.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文，按照所给的提示内容给英国笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你计划如何让这次生日过得更有意义。写作中要包含文章应该包括两个方面的要点，第一，先介绍通常情况下如何庆祝生日；第二，介绍今年计划庆祝的方式及理由。根据材料内容可知本文用一般现在时态，人称主要使用第一人称，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇文章详细、全面地阐明了自己的生日庆祝计划，其中使用了一些固定句式，包含不定式作目的状语To add more meaning to my birthday this year, I have two plans.以及宾语从句I believe my birthday will be more than just a celebration.，同时还有其他的固定短语如spend time with sb."与某人共度时光"，think about"考虑"等这些用法为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式，写作时可以适当地引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑。
8．One possible version:
Dear John，
What good news!It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday. I think you should choose cooking. It's wonderful to create your own dishes. You can take care of yourself when your parents are not at home.
In order to develop your cooking skill，you should first ask your mother for help. And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. There are many short videos about cooking on the Internet.
Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
Yours，
Li Hua
这是一封回复邮件，属于应用文 。写作时必须回答邮件中的两个问题：选择哪个活动（cooking or planting vegetables）？为什么选择这个活动？ 可以适当发挥， 并简要提及暑假项目的有趣性。主体部分： 明确回答选择的活动， 解释选择该活动的原因，并提出一些建议或方法来实现这一目标：鼓励John采取行动，并礼貌地结束邮件。 文章要求使用友好的语气来写，段落清晰，逻辑连贯。使用简单明了的词汇和句子结构。 文章主要使用一般现在时来描述建议和原因。 可以适当使用一般将来时来表达未来的行动或计划。
文结构清晰，内容充实，中心思想明确。范文首先表达了对John邮件的高兴之情，并简要提及了暑假项目的有趣性。接着，范文明确回答了John的问题，选择了cooking作为推荐的活动，并给出了两个原因，最后，范文以鼓励John采取行动并礼貌地结束邮件作为结尾。 范文中的句子流畅，表达清晰。如：It's so interesting to do a project during summer holiday； It's wonderful to create your own dishes ； And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online 。
9．Hi,Tom,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to our school to study for a term. There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in. But I think ping-pong club is the best one for you. Ping-pong is the national sport of China. Many people can play it. If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park. It's a good way to communicate with Chinese people. Besides, I know you like sports, and playing ping-pong is healthy. You can have a lot of fun in playing ping-pong.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Tom发来邮件，说下周将作为交换生来你校学习一个学期，希望你帮助他选择一个社团。请从下面三个社团中选择一个并根据表格中的相关信息回复 Tom。这是一篇应用文作文，时态为一般现在时；从三个俱乐部中选择一个写作，要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。第一步，首先承接开头，介绍学校有很多俱乐部；第二步，介绍推荐参加俱乐部；第三步，介绍选择这个俱乐部的原因。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中be interested in对……感兴趣；communicate with沟通等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了there be句型 There are many clubs in our school that you may be interested in，If you master it, you can play ping-pong with your Chinese classmates or people in the park.（if引导条件状语从句）；It's a good way to communicate with Chinese people.（不定式作定语）使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
10．One possible version:
In order to make our school life colorful, the school has set up different kinds of courses. Skills for communicating and website making are very popular. As for me, I prefer to learn how to set up websites.
Why do I choose the course First, I show great interest in the computer. It will be interesting to learn something new about the computer. Second, I think this skill will be of some help when I look for a job in the future. Through this course, I'm certain I'll learn something useful. At the same time, I can make some new friends.
这是一篇材料作文；根据表格内容介绍自己喜欢的一门课程以及选择这门课程给出至少两点理由。结合内容可知，时态为"一般现在时"和"一般将来时"； 应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
这是一篇不错的短文，根据所给内容的提示将各个要点逐一进行了陈述。①介绍两门受欢迎的课程，并指出自己喜欢的一门课程；②介绍至少两点喜欢这门课程的理由。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。亮点词汇：①as for至于；
②prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事；③show great interest in对…表现出极大的兴趣④at the same time与此同时。高分句型：I think this skill will be of some help when I look for a job in the future.（省略that的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句)
11．One possible version:
范文1：
It's good to help others in need. I always believe being kind to others is the key to being happy. Once I met a foreigner who was looking for a hotel on my way to the library. I showed him the way and took him to the hotel. To my surprise, he thanked me a lot and later we became pen pals. I feel happy to help him and extremely greterul that I can develop friendship in this way. I will try my best to help others and keep being a kind person.
范文2:
I still remember that rainy day. I was on my way home when I noticed an old man. struggling with his heavy bags. So, I ran to him and offered to help. He was very surprised and grateful. As we walked together, we had a nice chat. I could tell he was really happy, and that made me feel good inside. When we got to his house, he thanked me a lot. I left with a big smile on my face. That small act of kindness not only made the old man happy but also made me very happy. It made me understand that being kind doesn't take much effort, but it can bring a lot of happiness. Since then, I often look for chances to be kind and feel happy every time I do it. Kindness really can make both others and ourselves happy.
这是一篇命题作文。要求以"Be Kind, Be Happy!"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过善行温暖他人的经历，谈谈善良给你带来的收获。文章的时态应是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时注意一些常见句式的应用，连词、固定短语的搭配使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
这是一篇不错的短文，分三步对此文进行了陈述。第一步，通过回忆的方式讲述自己在某个雨天帮助老人的经历；第二步，描述帮助老人的过程中自己的感受和收获；第三步，总结这次经历对自己的影响和启示。亮点词汇：① offer to do 主动提出做；② make sb. do 让某人做；③ not only...but also 不但….而且。高分句型：① I was on my way home when I noticed an old man struggling with his heavy bags. (when引导时间状语从句）；② It made me understand that being kind doesn't take much effort, but it can bring a lot of happiness. (宾语从句）的运用为文章增色不少；使文章显得更加自然，流畅，显得更有档次。
12．Dear Mike,
I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.
First, you should read books or watch programs about Chinese culture. They can help you understand Chinese better. Second, you should speak Chinese as much as possible. There are different dialects in many cities. Talking to local people can improve your speaking skills. Last but not least, take notes when you learn some new words and review them. I think these suggestions can help you.
Look forward to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。本题要求回复一封电子邮件。邮件中提到Mike对中国文化很感兴趣，并提到暑假将来中国旅游，但是Mike中文学得不好，请李华提出一些关于学习汉语的建议。提出建议通常用到的是一般现在时，写作中注意主谓一致，也要注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系等。
写作时要注意文章的内容一定要紧贴题意，以及要求的体裁，本文是要求写一封电子邮件，所以要注意介绍邮件的正确格式。结合提示的语境等，丰富写作内容，使得整篇有理有据。同时也要注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度以及逻辑清晰合理。邮件的开头用Dear...，署名用到yours，再另起一行在末尾写上写信人姓名。可用到的开门见山的语句，如I am very glad to know that you are learning Chinese now. Let me give you some advice on how to learn it well.先提出要多看书籍，如you should read books or watch programs about Chinese culture. 然后鼓励多说，如you should speak Chinese as much as possible. ，最后提出要多复习，如Last but not least, take notes when you learn some new words and review them.同时注意连接词等的使用。使用First，Second，Last but not least是文章更有层次感，运用需得体，表达准确，使文章更加流畅自然。
13．Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I'm glad to make a plan for our group.
First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It's also a great way to improve our physical fitness.
At noon, we'll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills.
In the afternoon, we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we'll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求以"亲近大自然"为主题给Mike写一封电子邮件介绍自己的设计计划。为电子邮件。时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。首先，写明计划中的时间，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来指定夏令营活动计划。以及活动内容。最后是祝愿，相信会玩得愉快。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：first of all；enjoy oneself；each other；look forward to 等以及句型结构，如：First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. (目的状语从句) 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
14．One possible version:
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
Self-management is important to us. I think I behave well in managing myself. I can manage my pocket money well. I have healthy living habits—getting up early and keeping running every day. However, I sometimes have difficulty managing my time of study and rest.
To better manage myself, I will make a clear plan for my study and rest time and firmly carry it out. Besides, I will ask my friends and parents for their advice. I will also read some books about managing oneself, from which I will get some useful tips.
Managing myself is a long way to go, but I will keep learning while doing.
这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给内容完成自我管理评价，再根据提示写一篇短文。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍自我管理的重要性和具体做法；第二步，介绍自己提高自我管理能力的计划；第三步，书写结语。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时和一般将来时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如have healthy living habits 有健康的生活习惯；have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难；make a clear plan for 制定一个明确的计划；carry out 执行等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I will also read some books about managing oneself, from which I will get some useful tips.（which引导的定语从句）；Managing myself is a long way to go, but I will keep learning while doing.（并列句）。
15．One possible version:
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people's daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smartphones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, we need to think twice about what we want to buy. Next, we should learn to save, and buy what we can afford. Last but not least, we must spend money on what we really need. We shouldn't buy everything we want.
本题是一篇材料作文写作，属于说明文。要求考生以李华的身份向学校开展的征文活动投稿，介绍移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。写作背景：手机扫码支付深受人们喜爱并在多数消费场地被广泛使用。 内容包括：1. 承接短文开头，引出话题，说明移动支付的受欢迎程度和它带来的影响；2. 至少举一个实例说明移动支付在日常生活中的便捷使用；3. 提倡理性消费，分享消费理念。注意：1. 提示内容必须全部包括，可适当发挥；2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如： It is becoming more and more popular in China.（运用了现在进行时）； It has made people's daily life very convenient. （运用了现在完成时以及形容词做宾语补足语）；First of all, we need to think twice about what we want to buy.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）；Next, we should learn to save, and buy what we can afford. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）；Last but not least, we must spend money on what we really need.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）； We shouldn't buy everything we want. （运用了省略了关系代词that引导的定语从句）。
同课章节目录