专题06 书面表达18篇（浙江中考真题+中考模拟）-2025年中考英语高分提升之新题速递【含答案解析】
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2025年中考英语高分提升之新题速递
专题06 书面表达18篇（浙江中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·浙江） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件, 向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意：（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·浙江模拟） 书面表达
Recently, many students get a special kind of pneumonia(肺炎). The troublemaker is called mycoplasma pneumonia(MP, 肺炎支原体). It's necessary for students to keep fit.
假设你校英语社团正在开展以健康为主题的讨论并进行征文比赛。请你以"Keep healthy"为主题，结合下列要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：①健康的重要性；②保持健康的建议。
注意：(1)短文必须包括以上所有要点，内容可以适当增加；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数:80~100;(4)短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Keep Healthy
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have realized the importance of health.
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3．（2024·宁波模拟） 三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以"I Remember"为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。
要点如下：1.What's the event 2.When and where did it happen 3.How did you feel at that moment 4.How has the event changed your life
注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
I Remember
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4．（2024·金华模拟） 假如你是李华，你校正举行以"用英语讲中国故事"为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位
民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。
内容包括：故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果），故事的意义。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；
（2）词数：80~100。
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5．（2024·浙江模拟） 假如你是李华，请你根据以下邮件写一封回复邮件。为他提出建议，帮助他走出困境。
Hi, Li Hua,
Thanks for your last letter. Everything goes on well these days. How about you
I had an argument with my mom. She is mad at me. Because my room is always in a mess. What should I do How can I keep my room tidy
Hope to hear from you soon.
Dan
注意：(1)请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；词数：80-100。(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
Hi, Dan,
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Li Hua
6．（2024·杭州模拟） 你校英语节举办了主题为"Sharing My Hometown"的短视频征集活动，你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿，在英语课上分享你们的创作过程及收获。
Process Gains (收获)
Make a plan Collect materials Create a video Learn about local culture better …
注意：(1) 发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2) 你们的收获至少两条；(3) 字数：110字左右。
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7．（2024·上城模拟）为了更好地适应高中的学习和生活，英语课上，大家要对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，请你根据下面的表格内容准备好发言稿，简要补充选择这些活动安排的原因。
内容要点 参考词汇
What are you going to learn English ...
What are you going to do for fun read books ...
How often are you going to exercise every day ...
Where are you going with your friends or family ...
注意：（1）必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；（3）词数 80~ 100 。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I'm happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with,
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8．（2024·东阳模拟） 最近，外教Tom正在策划以"SPORTS"为主题的校园英语角活动，请你根据下面的提示与要求，推荐1-2个与主题相关的topic，并以李华的名义投稿，说说你的理由。
要点 参考词汇
Time On weekdays / On weekends …
Place Inside the school / Outside the school …
Topics Sports and health / Sports events / Sports heroes / Sports culture …
Reasons improve/benefit/open/increase/…
注意：(1)短文须包含所有要点；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：100左右；(4)短文首句已给，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner will be held next week.
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Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2024·杭州模拟） 文明社会，从我做起.请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短文，向校刊English Garden 投稿, 倡导做文明人。
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注意：(1)短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3 幅图片的内容.(以第三人称描述图片故事)(2)必须谈谈你对此事的看法，并说明原因。(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(4)字数100词左右。短文首句已给，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 果皮 skin; 踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth(slipped, slipped); 救护车 ambulance; 一些不文明行为 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin.
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10．（2024·临平模拟）假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友 Mike 介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor（劳动） Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming ……
Cooking course：making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求： （1）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； （2）词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2024·杭州模拟） 回顾初中三年，有许多人和事令人难忘。校英语报 Memories栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你从以下或其他回忆中选择一种，结合具体事例，写一篇分享你的校园回忆的英语征文来参加此次活动。
注意：1.短文须包含所有问题的相关信息，并可作适当的想象和发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数 100词左右，开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Looking back at the past three years, I______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2024·定海模拟）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能(swimming, cooking, fixing…)在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。21世纪报为鼓励青少年争做积极的生活者，特举办"生活技能"英语征文活动。以下是你草拟的流程图，请你根据流程图的提示，以"Little Life Skills Are a Big Help"为题写一篇征文。
注意事项：1.征文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.文章中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息。3.词数在100个左右，短文已给出部分不计入总词数。
Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
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Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
13．（2024·青田模拟） 你校将举办英语文化节, 现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华, 请用英语给负责人写一封书信, 从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意：（1）书信内容要点应选自上表, 可适当发挥; （2）词数: 80—100;（3）书信开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua
14．（2024·浙江模拟） 假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims …
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course: making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求：1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；2. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2024·嵊州模拟） 你校英语俱乐部将举行"劳动教育"主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是 李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：1.短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥。2.补充内容至少各一条； 3. 词数：80-100;4.文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．（2024·瓯海模拟） Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "My personal hero". （以"我眼中的英雄"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Daisy's class was asked to write about their personal heroes. Her father was excited to find out that she had chosen him. "Why did you pick me " He asked. "Because I couldn't spell Arnold Schwarzenegger （阿诺施瓦辛格）," she said.
人们心目中的英雄各不相同，因为每个人选择的理由不同：可以是上面小朋友的爸爸；可以是在新冠（COVID-19），牺牲了时间甚至是生命的医护人员；也可以是不顾安危，谁是真正的英雄？请结合身边的实例（听到，看到或自己的亲身经历），谈谈你对英雄的诠释。
17．（2024·瓯海模拟） 假如你是Emma，你针对班上同学们对一些学科的喜好程度做了一个调查。请你根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英语短文，将调查结果告诉大家。
Computer science The most popular
Art and history The most interesting
Music and P. E The easiest
English and Chinese The most boring
Math and physics The most difficult
要求：1. 语句通顺，句意连贯；2. 包含表格中所有的信息，可适当发挥；3. 80词左右。
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18．（2024·温州模拟） 假设你是Cindy的好朋友，请根据下面汉语提示，写一篇文章介绍Cindy。
内容提示：1. 13岁，生日9月22日；2. 喜欢运动，放学后和同学打乒乓球；3. 最喜欢英语，认为它很有用；4. 有好的饮食习惯，早餐吃面包，喝牛奶，午饭和晚饭吃水果和蔬菜；5. 不喜欢冰激凌，不想变胖。
要求：
①条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
②文章中不可以出现真实的姓名及班级；
③短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
④60词左右。
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答案解析部分
1．Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you'll enjoy it. Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cut-ting. Chinese painting and so on. I'm sure you'll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I'm sure you'll be interested in them. What's more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover， you can't miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件，向暑期将来中国游学的英国好友Candy推荐一所合适的学校。这是一封推荐信，需要考生根据所给的Candy的兴趣爱好进行推荐，并说明推荐理由。本文说明的是目前的情况，应以一般现在时为主。 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：范例一中的： I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. 运用了宾语从句；I think my school is perfect for you. 运用了宾语从句； I believe you'll enjoy it. 运用了宾语从句； Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there!运用了因果并列句； Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cutting，Chinese painting and so on. 运用了并列句； I'm sure you'll love my school. 运用了宾语从句。
范例二中的： As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice. 运用了原因状语从句，宾语从句； You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. 运用了it作形式宾语； In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. 运用了there be句式； I'm sure you'll be interested in them. 运用了宾语从句。
2．One possible version:
Keep Healthy
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have realized the importance of health. Actually, it is so important in our lives that we can do nothing well without it. Here I feel like sharing some advice which I hope will be of great benefit with you.
To begin with, it is strongly suggested that you should have a balanced diet. For example, never eat junk food which is rich in fat. Second, you are required to take physical activities regularly. It is a wise choice to join a sports club where you can exercise with others and build up your strength. What's more, to keep healthy, it is necessary for you to get rid of the bad living habits such as staying up too late. Last but not least, just as a saying goes, "laughter is the best medicine." Therefore, keep smiling every day and life will smile back.
In short, actions speak louder than words. Only when each of you puts what I said above into practice, can you live a healthier life. Let's take action right now.
这篇作文属于说明文，旨在阐述健康的重要性并提供保持健康的建议。文章需要结构清晰，逻辑连贯，同时语言要准确、生动，以吸引读者的注意力并传达出健康的重要性及具体做法。引言简短介绍健康的话题背景，引出主题。主体详细阐述健康的重要性，如对学习、生活、未来等多方面的意义；接着提供保持健康的建议，如合理饮食、适量运动、充足睡眠、良好心态等。结尾总结全文，强调健康的重要性，鼓励大家积极采取行动保持健康。文章主要使用一般现在时，因为这是在阐述一个普遍真理和现状。在提到具体建议时，也可以适当使用一般将来时，表示未来的行动和计划。注意语言准确避免歧义；逻辑连贯，文章各部分之间要过渡自然，逻辑清晰；避免内容的重复和冗余；仔细检查语法、拼写和标点等细节，确保文章质量。
考查材料作文。该范文结构清晰，逻辑严谨，遵循了引言-正文-结论的经典写作模式。开篇即点明主题， 正文分为四个部分，使得文章条理分明。最后总结全文，强调行动的重要性，并呼吁大家立即采取行动。范文内容充实，紧扣主题，不仅阐述了健康的重要性，还提供了具体可行的建议。每条建议都配以具体的例子或说法来支撑，增强了文章的说服力。写得较好的句子或内容 Actually, it is so important in our lives that we can do nothing well without it. For example, never eat junk food which is rich in fat. It is a wise choice to join a sports club where you can exercise with others and build up your strength. Just as a saying goes, 'laughter is the best medicine. In short, actions speak louder than words. Only when each of you puts what I said above into practice, can you live a healthier life.
3．One possible version:
I Remember
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years' study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.
When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.
Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I've learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.
这是一篇材料作文。本文要求以"I Remember"为题写一篇关于校园生活中的一次活动或经历。写作时可以包含以下要点：第一，这件事情或活动是什么；第二，事情或活动发生的时间和地点；第三，当时你有什么感受；第四，那件事情或活动怎样改变你的生活。本文的时态以一般过去时为主，人称主要是第一人称。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文详细、全面地阐述了作者八年级的时候参加学校的义卖活动。并包含了题目所要求的全部信息。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚。一些固定短语为文章增色不少，如：plan to hold a charity sale，prepare well for，和句型How time flies；What impressed me most is the school charity sale；They encouraged us and gave us some help；It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience；I've learned a lot from the activity；If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need；the world will be much better等等。
4．One possible version:
The Story of Zhao Yiman
On the way to realizing our national dream, there're many heroes who devoted their lives. Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies.
Since Anti-Japanese War broke out, people of all works had fought bravely against enemies. One day in 1935, Zhao Yiman was captured unfortunately. Despite of being cruelly treated in the prison, she never gave in. Before she died, she wrote a letter, expressing affectionate love to her son as well as fearless royalty to our country.
A hopeful nation can't live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers. Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful
Zhu Louyan
这是一篇材料作文。要求假如你是李华，你校正举行以"用英语讲中国故事"为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果）和故事的意义。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。break out爆发；fight…against反对；despite of尽管等以及句型结构，如Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies. A hopeful nation can't live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
5．Hi, Dan,
Long time no see, I miss you very much. Everything is fine with me, so don't worry about it. I heard that you had an argument with your mom. Because your room is always in a mess. Here is some advice about your problems.
Firstly you can say sorry to your mother. Secondly, you should do some housework at least twice a week. You can help clean up the room and do the dishes when your mom and dad are busy with work. If you can help at home, they will be relaxed and happy. Last but not least, you should discuss with your parents when you have problems. When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems.
The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. I hope my suggestions can help you.
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求根据所给邮件写一封回复邮件。为Dan提出建议，帮助他走出困境。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，简单问候，表明写作目的是为了给对方一些建议；第二步，介绍如何保持房间整洁以及自己的做法；第三步，书写结语，表达期待。根据材料内容可知，本文主要用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如worry about 担心；be busy with忙于，last but not least最后重要一点，ask for寻求，solve the problems解决问题等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems. (When引导的时间状语从句)；The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级)。
6．Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown.
To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made effort to collect information in different ways. For example, We talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we've realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
7．暂未更新
本文是材料作文；对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，突出计划学商贸城，多久锻炼一次，做什么有趣的事情等，本文应使用"一般将来时"为主；第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，根据题干表格，详细描述暑假的安排和原因；第三步，肯定自己将度过一个有意义的暑假，提出问题，并收尾。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕假期计划的具体内容展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 建议使用listen to听；not only…but also不仅……而且等短语，和高分句型To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. （because引导的原因状语从句）；I think we will have a good time. （宾语从句）。
8．Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner is around the corner. I really hope the event will go smoothly and the following are my suggestions.
I think it's more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. As for the main topic, it's a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to to our daily life. We can share their favorite sports, how they develop the sports and get other benefits. This topic can surely help us live a healthier life. Moreover, why not add a bit of sports culture in your country I believe we will be fond of it.
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给内容写一篇英语短文。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，表明写作意图。引出校园英语角的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述校园英语角的活动内容；第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能对大家有帮助。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如go smoothly 顺利进行；help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事；why not do sth. 为什么不做某事；be fond of 喜欢，钟爱等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I think it's more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. (省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句)；As for the main topic, it's a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to our daily life. (which引导的非限定性定语从句)。
9．To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin. but also helped the girl. Because of the serious situation. We had no choice but to use ambulance.
From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn't happen. It's good for you and others.
In confusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around. Action from now on!
这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片中的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，描述事件的背景，包括事件，地点，人物等信息；第二步，结合题干图片，描述事件的经过并合理想象，补全第3幅图片的内容；第三步，谈谈对此事的看法，并说明原因。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如so…that如此……以至于；by accident 意外地；pick up捡起；lead to导致等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）；In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around.（not only…but also）。
10．Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to study plants and know about farming；Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi，which aims to learn about traditional Chinese cultures；and Chair-repairing，designed to learn and practice new skills.
Among these courses，I've chosen the Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi.（介绍选择的课程）This choice was motivated by my interest in Chinese culture and cuisine.Through this course，I hope to not only learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding of their cultural significance. I believe that this experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional cuisine.
Yours， Li Hua
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇英文邮件给美国笔友 Mike介绍学校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并说明自己选择的劳动课程及其理由。写作背景：本学期李华的学校新开设了三门劳动课程。内容包括：1. 介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的；2. 介绍自己选择的劳动课程。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.表格要点内容必须全部包括，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不能使用真实的名称；4. 时态为"一般现在时"。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to
study plants and know about farming.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）； Cooking
course：making dumplings and Zongzi which aims to learn about traditional Chinese
cultures；（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）； Through this course，I hope to not only
learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding
of their cultural significance.（运用了not only...but also 连接的并列结构）； I believe that this
experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional
cuisine.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）。
11．Looking back at the past three years, the person who I will miss the most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient with all of us. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.
With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
本文是一则记叙文；分享你的校园回忆的英语征文来参加此次活动，突出介绍最想念的人，最有趣的活动，以及你的感受。时态以"一般过去时"为主；根据要求完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可自由发挥。第一步，承接文章所给开头引出下文，说明自己感谢的人。第二步，结合具体事例，表述感谢这个人的原因。第三步，总结文章，对人物再次表达谢意。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕老师帮助对我未来的发展非常有用展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 使用express my sincere thanks表达我真诚的感谢；be good at擅长；lose heart灰心等短语，高分句型My English teacher is like a bunch of sunshine, lighting up my life and helping me move forward.（现在分词作状语）；It is my English teacher that encourages me a lot.（强调句）。
12．Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It's wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online.
Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
本文是一篇命题作文；以"Little Life Skills Are a Big Help"为题写一篇征文，介绍小生活技能对大家有什么帮助：时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出"小生活技能是大帮助"的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"什么生活技能、学习这项技能的原因以及如何学习这项技能"等方面进行介绍；第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
文章应围绕"烹饪技能对自己的帮助"展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构清晰， 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，如亮点词汇be supposed to应该；look after照顾；learn from从……中学习。高分句型In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. (in order to引导目的状语从句)；And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. (it作形式主语)。
13．暂未更新
本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。要求一李华的名义给英语文化节的负责人写一封信，从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。此文时态主要为"一般现在时"和"一般将来时"；写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
写此类作文，要注意运用正确的信件格式。结合所给的题目要求，抓住重点进行分析，做到条理清晰。注意单词拼写，以及句子的流畅性和完整性。写作步骤可以分三步：①第一步，表明写作意图。借用"英语文化节"来引出下文中对推荐的活动的介绍；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"看英文电影、讲英文故事和演英语情景喜剧"三方面入手，重点介绍推荐这些活动的理由；③第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能够被采纳。
可用的亮点词汇：①not only...but also 不但。.....而且；②as well as 和；③share sth with sb 与某人分享某物；④at the same time 同时。可用的高分句型有：①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.（倒装句) ；②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.（定语从句）；③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. （表语从句）。
14．Dear Mike,
How is everything going
This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It's very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.
There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.
Do you have labor courses Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给表格内容英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的；第二步，介绍自己选择的劳动课程。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如and so on 等等；have a lot of fun玩得开心；get close to亲近；look forward to期待等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）；It's very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.（动词不定式作主语）。
15．Dear sir.
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice. I usually helpwith housework,such as doing the dishes,cleaning my bedroom,sweeping the floor and so on.Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits,but also helps to develop my life skills.
Also,sharing with housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.
For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity,I have some suggestions.I think holdingcompetitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.We can encourage students to clean up anddecorate our school as well.Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the valueof labor
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动的重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议；第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获；第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如form good habits养成好习惯；clean up 打扫干净；the importance of……的重要性等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (动名词作主语，not only…but also…连接并列成分)；I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (省略that的宾语从句)。
16．One possible version:
My personal hero
Hi, everyone. The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is 84 years old and he comes from Xiamen. He was brave and not afraid of the virus. He never worried about his own safety. He suggested shutting down Wuhan. His advice has saved thousands of lives. I want to be a doctor in the future. I want to save lives like Zhong Nanshan. I hope I can make a contribution to our country in the future.
本文是命题作文；以"我眼中的英雄"为题写，介绍自己心目中的英雄。时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"；本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄；第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事；第三步，写你为什么崇拜他；第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
描述人物，人称用第三人称和第一人称进行描述，行文时要注意人称时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意过渡词的搭配运用，语法运用准确，单词拼写正确，并适当使用非谓语动词，同时使用亮点词汇：at the age of在……岁；in order to为了；be honored as被授予；study harder更努力地学习，高分句型：I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句）；He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）；I'll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句）。
17．One possible version:
We have many subjects at school this year. I did a survey of my classmates about some of the subjects and this is what I found.
Computer science is the most popular subject. We all like to work on computers, but we have only one class a week. Many students like art and history. They think they are the most interesting subjects. The easiest subjects are P. E. and music. We can relax during the classes. The most boring subjects are English and Chinese. There are too many rules to learn the languages. Math and Physics are the most difficult subjects. They are not very easy to learn.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求针对班上同学们对一些学科的喜好程度做的调查，根据表格提示，写一篇英语短文，将调查结果告诉大家。写作中要包含所给的五方面的内容，电脑科学是最受欢迎的；美术和历史是最有趣的；音乐盒体育是最简单的；英语和语文是最无聊的；数学和物理是最难的。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数和第三人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将五个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定搭配like to do sth喜欢做某事；too…to太……而不能等以及句型结构，如They think they are the most interesting subjects.There are too many rules to learn the languages. Math and Physics are the most difficult subjects.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
18．One possible version:
Hello, boys and girls! My name is Maria. I have a good friend. Her name is Cindy. Her birthday is on September 22nd. And this year she is 13 years old. She likes sports. She often plays table tennis with her classmates after school. Her favorite subject is English, because she thinks it's useful. She has good eating habits, too. For breakfast, she has bread and milk. And for dinner she likes vegetables and fruit. She doesn't like eating ice-cream because she doesn't want to get fat.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据汉语提示，写一篇介绍Cindy的作文。作文的体裁是一篇记叙文，要求从年龄和生日、喜欢的运动、喜欢的科目、饮食习惯等不同方面介绍Cindy。根据材料内容可知，本文要用一般现在时，人称是第三人称单数，注意主谓一致问题及代词的使用，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，注意英语的习惯表达。
这篇短文根据汉语提示将5个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。人称代词she和物主代词her转换灵活，介词使用准确，如on September，after school，for breakfast，一些习惯表达和固定句型，如play sth. with sb., eating habits, want to, get fat的使用，使文章更加流畅，自然；尤其是连词because的使用，让文章内容表达更加丰富，更有条理性。
专题06 书面表达18篇（浙江中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·浙江） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件, 向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意：（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·浙江模拟） 书面表达
Recently, many students get a special kind of pneumonia(肺炎). The troublemaker is called mycoplasma pneumonia(MP, 肺炎支原体). It's necessary for students to keep fit.
假设你校英语社团正在开展以健康为主题的讨论并进行征文比赛。请你以"Keep healthy"为主题，结合下列要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：①健康的重要性；②保持健康的建议。
注意：(1)短文必须包括以上所有要点，内容可以适当增加；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数:80~100;(4)短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Keep Healthy
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have realized the importance of health.
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3．（2024·宁波模拟） 三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以"I Remember"为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。
要点如下：1.What's the event 2.When and where did it happen 3.How did you feel at that moment 4.How has the event changed your life
注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
I Remember
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4．（2024·金华模拟） 假如你是李华，你校正举行以"用英语讲中国故事"为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位
民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。
内容包括：故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果），故事的意义。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；
（2）词数：80~100。
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5．（2024·浙江模拟） 假如你是李华，请你根据以下邮件写一封回复邮件。为他提出建议，帮助他走出困境。
Hi, Li Hua,
Thanks for your last letter. Everything goes on well these days. How about you
I had an argument with my mom. She is mad at me. Because my room is always in a mess. What should I do How can I keep my room tidy
Hope to hear from you soon.
Dan
注意：(1)请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；词数：80-100。(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
Hi, Dan,
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Li Hua
6．（2024·杭州模拟） 你校英语节举办了主题为"Sharing My Hometown"的短视频征集活动，你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿，在英语课上分享你们的创作过程及收获。
Process Gains (收获)
Make a plan Collect materials Create a video Learn about local culture better …
注意：(1) 发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2) 你们的收获至少两条；(3) 字数：110字左右。
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7．（2024·上城模拟）为了更好地适应高中的学习和生活，英语课上，大家要对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，请你根据下面的表格内容准备好发言稿，简要补充选择这些活动安排的原因。
内容要点 参考词汇
What are you going to learn English ...
What are you going to do for fun read books ...
How often are you going to exercise every day ...
Where are you going with your friends or family ...
注意：（1）必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；（3）词数 80~ 100 。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I'm happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with,
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8．（2024·东阳模拟） 最近，外教Tom正在策划以"SPORTS"为主题的校园英语角活动，请你根据下面的提示与要求，推荐1-2个与主题相关的topic，并以李华的名义投稿，说说你的理由。
要点 参考词汇
Time On weekdays / On weekends …
Place Inside the school / Outside the school …
Topics Sports and health / Sports events / Sports heroes / Sports culture …
Reasons improve/benefit/open/increase/…
注意：(1)短文须包含所有要点；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：100左右；(4)短文首句已给，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner will be held next week.
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Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2024·杭州模拟） 文明社会，从我做起.请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短文，向校刊English Garden 投稿, 倡导做文明人。
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注意：(1)短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3 幅图片的内容.(以第三人称描述图片故事)(2)必须谈谈你对此事的看法，并说明原因。(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(4)字数100词左右。短文首句已给，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 果皮 skin; 踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth(slipped, slipped); 救护车 ambulance; 一些不文明行为 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin.
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10．（2024·临平模拟）假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友 Mike 介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor（劳动） Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming ……
Cooking course：making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求： （1）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； （2）词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2024·杭州模拟） 回顾初中三年，有许多人和事令人难忘。校英语报 Memories栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你从以下或其他回忆中选择一种，结合具体事例，写一篇分享你的校园回忆的英语征文来参加此次活动。
注意：1.短文须包含所有问题的相关信息，并可作适当的想象和发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数 100词左右，开头已写好，不计入总词数。
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12．（2024·定海模拟）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能(swimming, cooking, fixing…)在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。21世纪报为鼓励青少年争做积极的生活者，特举办"生活技能"英语征文活动。以下是你草拟的流程图，请你根据流程图的提示，以"Little Life Skills Are a Big Help"为题写一篇征文。
注意事项：1.征文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.文章中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息。3.词数在100个左右，短文已给出部分不计入总词数。
Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
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Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
13．（2024·青田模拟） 你校将举办英语文化节, 现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华, 请用英语给负责人写一封书信, 从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意：（1）书信内容要点应选自上表, 可适当发挥; （2）词数: 80—100;（3）书信开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua
14．（2024·浙江模拟） 假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses The course you choose and your reason
Courses Aims …
Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course: making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills
要求：1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；2. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2024·嵊州模拟） 你校英语俱乐部将举行"劳动教育"主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是 李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：1.短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥。2.补充内容至少各一条； 3. 词数：80-100;4.文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．（2024·瓯海模拟） Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "My personal hero". （以"我眼中的英雄"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Daisy's class was asked to write about their personal heroes. Her father was excited to find out that she had chosen him. "Why did you pick me " He asked. "Because I couldn't spell Arnold Schwarzenegger （阿诺施瓦辛格）," she said.
人们心目中的英雄各不相同，因为每个人选择的理由不同：可以是上面小朋友的爸爸；可以是在新冠（COVID-19），牺牲了时间甚至是生命的医护人员；也可以是不顾安危，谁是真正的英雄？请结合身边的实例（听到，看到或自己的亲身经历），谈谈你对英雄的诠释。
17．（2024·瓯海模拟） 假如你是Emma，你针对班上同学们对一些学科的喜好程度做了一个调查。请你根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英语短文，将调查结果告诉大家。
Computer science The most popular
Art and history The most interesting
Music and P. E The easiest
English and Chinese The most boring
Math and physics The most difficult
要求：1. 语句通顺，句意连贯；2. 包含表格中所有的信息，可适当发挥；3. 80词左右。
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18．（2024·温州模拟） 假设你是Cindy的好朋友，请根据下面汉语提示，写一篇文章介绍Cindy。
内容提示：1. 13岁，生日9月22日；2. 喜欢运动，放学后和同学打乒乓球；3. 最喜欢英语，认为它很有用；4. 有好的饮食习惯，早餐吃面包，喝牛奶，午饭和晚饭吃水果和蔬菜；5. 不喜欢冰激凌，不想变胖。
要求：
①条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
②文章中不可以出现真实的姓名及班级；
③短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
④60词左右。
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答案解析部分
1．Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you'll enjoy it. Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cut-ting. Chinese painting and so on. I'm sure you'll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I'm sure you'll be interested in them. What's more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover， you can't miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件，向暑期将来中国游学的英国好友Candy推荐一所合适的学校。这是一封推荐信，需要考生根据所给的Candy的兴趣爱好进行推荐，并说明推荐理由。本文说明的是目前的情况，应以一般现在时为主。 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：范例一中的： I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. 运用了宾语从句；I think my school is perfect for you. 运用了宾语从句； I believe you'll enjoy it. 运用了宾语从句； Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there!运用了因果并列句； Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cutting，Chinese painting and so on. 运用了并列句； I'm sure you'll love my school. 运用了宾语从句。
范例二中的： As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice. 运用了原因状语从句，宾语从句； You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. 运用了it作形式宾语； In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. 运用了there be句式； I'm sure you'll be interested in them. 运用了宾语从句。
2．One possible version:
Keep Healthy
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have realized the importance of health. Actually, it is so important in our lives that we can do nothing well without it. Here I feel like sharing some advice which I hope will be of great benefit with you.
To begin with, it is strongly suggested that you should have a balanced diet. For example, never eat junk food which is rich in fat. Second, you are required to take physical activities regularly. It is a wise choice to join a sports club where you can exercise with others and build up your strength. What's more, to keep healthy, it is necessary for you to get rid of the bad living habits such as staying up too late. Last but not least, just as a saying goes, "laughter is the best medicine." Therefore, keep smiling every day and life will smile back.
In short, actions speak louder than words. Only when each of you puts what I said above into practice, can you live a healthier life. Let's take action right now.
这篇作文属于说明文，旨在阐述健康的重要性并提供保持健康的建议。文章需要结构清晰，逻辑连贯，同时语言要准确、生动，以吸引读者的注意力并传达出健康的重要性及具体做法。引言简短介绍健康的话题背景，引出主题。主体详细阐述健康的重要性，如对学习、生活、未来等多方面的意义；接着提供保持健康的建议，如合理饮食、适量运动、充足睡眠、良好心态等。结尾总结全文，强调健康的重要性，鼓励大家积极采取行动保持健康。文章主要使用一般现在时，因为这是在阐述一个普遍真理和现状。在提到具体建议时，也可以适当使用一般将来时，表示未来的行动和计划。注意语言准确避免歧义；逻辑连贯，文章各部分之间要过渡自然，逻辑清晰；避免内容的重复和冗余；仔细检查语法、拼写和标点等细节，确保文章质量。
考查材料作文。该范文结构清晰，逻辑严谨，遵循了引言-正文-结论的经典写作模式。开篇即点明主题， 正文分为四个部分，使得文章条理分明。最后总结全文，强调行动的重要性，并呼吁大家立即采取行动。范文内容充实，紧扣主题，不仅阐述了健康的重要性，还提供了具体可行的建议。每条建议都配以具体的例子或说法来支撑，增强了文章的说服力。写得较好的句子或内容 Actually, it is so important in our lives that we can do nothing well without it. For example, never eat junk food which is rich in fat. It is a wise choice to join a sports club where you can exercise with others and build up your strength. Just as a saying goes, 'laughter is the best medicine. In short, actions speak louder than words. Only when each of you puts what I said above into practice, can you live a healthier life.
3．One possible version:
I Remember
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years' study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.
When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.
Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I've learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.
这是一篇材料作文。本文要求以"I Remember"为题写一篇关于校园生活中的一次活动或经历。写作时可以包含以下要点：第一，这件事情或活动是什么；第二，事情或活动发生的时间和地点；第三，当时你有什么感受；第四，那件事情或活动怎样改变你的生活。本文的时态以一般过去时为主，人称主要是第一人称。写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文详细、全面地阐述了作者八年级的时候参加学校的义卖活动。并包含了题目所要求的全部信息。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚。一些固定短语为文章增色不少，如：plan to hold a charity sale，prepare well for，和句型How time flies；What impressed me most is the school charity sale；They encouraged us and gave us some help；It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience；I've learned a lot from the activity；If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need；the world will be much better等等。
4．One possible version:
The Story of Zhao Yiman
On the way to realizing our national dream, there're many heroes who devoted their lives. Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies.
Since Anti-Japanese War broke out, people of all works had fought bravely against enemies. One day in 1935, Zhao Yiman was captured unfortunately. Despite of being cruelly treated in the prison, she never gave in. Before she died, she wrote a letter, expressing affectionate love to her son as well as fearless royalty to our country.
A hopeful nation can't live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers. Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful
Zhu Louyan
这是一篇材料作文。要求假如你是李华，你校正举行以"用英语讲中国故事"为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果）和故事的意义。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。break out爆发；fight…against反对；despite of尽管等以及句型结构，如Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies. A hopeful nation can't live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
5．Hi, Dan,
Long time no see, I miss you very much. Everything is fine with me, so don't worry about it. I heard that you had an argument with your mom. Because your room is always in a mess. Here is some advice about your problems.
Firstly you can say sorry to your mother. Secondly, you should do some housework at least twice a week. You can help clean up the room and do the dishes when your mom and dad are busy with work. If you can help at home, they will be relaxed and happy. Last but not least, you should discuss with your parents when you have problems. When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems.
The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. I hope my suggestions can help you.
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求根据所给邮件写一封回复邮件。为Dan提出建议，帮助他走出困境。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，简单问候，表明写作目的是为了给对方一些建议；第二步，介绍如何保持房间整洁以及自己的做法；第三步，书写结语，表达期待。根据材料内容可知，本文主要用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如worry about 担心；be busy with忙于，last but not least最后重要一点，ask for寻求，solve the problems解决问题等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：When you ask for help from them, they can always give you some good advice and solve the problems. (When引导的时间状语从句)；The more we communicate with parents, the better relationship we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级)。
6．Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown.
To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made effort to collect information in different ways. For example, We talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we've realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
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本文是材料作文；对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，突出计划学商贸城，多久锻炼一次，做什么有趣的事情等，本文应使用"一般将来时"为主；第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，根据题干表格，详细描述暑假的安排和原因；第三步，肯定自己将度过一个有意义的暑假，提出问题，并收尾。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕假期计划的具体内容展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 建议使用listen to听；not only…but also不仅……而且等短语，和高分句型To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. （because引导的原因状语从句）；I think we will have a good time. （宾语从句）。
8．Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner is around the corner. I really hope the event will go smoothly and the following are my suggestions.
I think it's more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. As for the main topic, it's a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to to our daily life. We can share their favorite sports, how they develop the sports and get other benefits. This topic can surely help us live a healthier life. Moreover, why not add a bit of sports culture in your country I believe we will be fond of it.
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给内容写一篇英语短文。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，表明写作意图。引出校园英语角的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述校园英语角的活动内容；第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能对大家有帮助。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如go smoothly 顺利进行；help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事；why not do sth. 为什么不做某事；be fond of 喜欢，钟爱等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I think it's more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. (省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句)；As for the main topic, it's a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to our daily life. (which引导的非限定性定语从句)。
9．To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin. but also helped the girl. Because of the serious situation. We had no choice but to use ambulance.
From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn't happen. It's good for you and others.
In confusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around. Action from now on!
这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片中的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，描述事件的背景，包括事件，地点，人物等信息；第二步，结合题干图片，描述事件的经过并合理想象，补全第3幅图片的内容；第三步，谈谈对此事的看法，并说明原因。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如so…that如此……以至于；by accident 意外地；pick up捡起；lead to导致等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）；In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around.（not only…but also）。
10．Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
This term，we have three labor courses at school.We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to study plants and know about farming；Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi，which aims to learn about traditional Chinese cultures；and Chair-repairing，designed to learn and practice new skills.
Among these courses，I've chosen the Cooking course：making dumplings and Zongzi.（介绍选择的课程）This choice was motivated by my interest in Chinese culture and cuisine.Through this course，I hope to not only learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding of their cultural significance. I believe that this experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional cuisine.
Yours， Li Hua
本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇英文邮件给美国笔友 Mike介绍学校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并说明自己选择的劳动课程及其理由。写作背景：本学期李华的学校新开设了三门劳动课程。内容包括：1. 介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的；2. 介绍自己选择的劳动课程。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.表格要点内容必须全部包括，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不能使用真实的名称；4. 时态为"一般现在时"。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：We have three fascinating options：Vegetable-planting，which aims to
study plants and know about farming.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）； Cooking
course：making dumplings and Zongzi which aims to learn about traditional Chinese
cultures；（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）； Through this course，I hope to not only
learn how to make these delicious traditional dishes but also gain a deeper understanding
of their cultural significance.（运用了not only...but also 连接的并列结构）； I believe that this
experience will enrich my cultural knowledge and enhance my appreciation for traditional
cuisine.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）。
11．Looking back at the past three years, the person who I will miss the most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient with all of us. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.
With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
本文是一则记叙文；分享你的校园回忆的英语征文来参加此次活动，突出介绍最想念的人，最有趣的活动，以及你的感受。时态以"一般过去时"为主；根据要求完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可自由发挥。第一步，承接文章所给开头引出下文，说明自己感谢的人。第二步，结合具体事例，表述感谢这个人的原因。第三步，总结文章，对人物再次表达谢意。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
文章应围绕老师帮助对我未来的发展非常有用展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 使用express my sincere thanks表达我真诚的感谢；be good at擅长；lose heart灰心等短语，高分句型My English teacher is like a bunch of sunshine, lighting up my life and helping me move forward.（现在分词作状语）；It is my English teacher that encourages me a lot.（强调句）。
12．Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It's wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online.
Little life skills are a big help. Let's take action now.
本文是一篇命题作文；以"Little Life Skills Are a Big Help"为题写一篇征文，介绍小生活技能对大家有什么帮助：时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出"小生活技能是大帮助"的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"什么生活技能、学习这项技能的原因以及如何学习这项技能"等方面进行介绍；第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
文章应围绕"烹饪技能对自己的帮助"展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构清晰， 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，如亮点词汇be supposed to应该；look after照顾；learn from从……中学习。高分句型In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. (in order to引导目的状语从句)；And it's also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. (it作形式主语)。
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本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。要求一李华的名义给英语文化节的负责人写一封信，从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。此文时态主要为"一般现在时"和"一般将来时"；写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
写此类作文，要注意运用正确的信件格式。结合所给的题目要求，抓住重点进行分析，做到条理清晰。注意单词拼写，以及句子的流畅性和完整性。写作步骤可以分三步：①第一步，表明写作意图。借用"英语文化节"来引出下文中对推荐的活动的介绍；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"看英文电影、讲英文故事和演英语情景喜剧"三方面入手，重点介绍推荐这些活动的理由；③第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能够被采纳。
可用的亮点词汇：①not only...but also 不但。.....而且；②as well as 和；③share sth with sb 与某人分享某物；④at the same time 同时。可用的高分句型有：①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.（倒装句) ；②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.（定语从句）；③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. （表语从句）。
14．Dear Mike,
How is everything going
This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It's very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.
There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.
Do you have labor courses Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给表格内容英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的；第二步，介绍自己选择的劳动课程。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如and so on 等等；have a lot of fun玩得开心；get close to亲近；look forward to期待等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.（疑问词+动词不定式结构）；It's very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.（动词不定式作主语）。
15．Dear sir.
Labor is a very important part of our life.Here is my experience and some advice. I usually helpwith housework,such as doing the dishes,cleaning my bedroom,sweeping the floor and so on.Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits,but also helps to develop my life skills.
Also,sharing with housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work.
For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity,I have some suggestions.I think holdingcompetitions about labor skills is an excellent idea.We can encourage students to clean up anddecorate our school as well.Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the valueof labor
这是一篇应用文。要求按照所给内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动的重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议；第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获；第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如form good habits养成好习惯；clean up 打扫干净；the importance of……的重要性等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. (动名词作主语，not only…but also…连接并列成分)；I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (省略that的宾语从句)。
16．One possible version:
My personal hero
Hi, everyone. The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is 84 years old and he comes from Xiamen. He was brave and not afraid of the virus. He never worried about his own safety. He suggested shutting down Wuhan. His advice has saved thousands of lives. I want to be a doctor in the future. I want to save lives like Zhong Nanshan. I hope I can make a contribution to our country in the future.
本文是命题作文；以"我眼中的英雄"为题写，介绍自己心目中的英雄。时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"；本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄；第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事；第三步，写你为什么崇拜他；第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。最后检查所用时态，人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确。语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
描述人物，人称用第三人称和第一人称进行描述，行文时要注意人称时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意过渡词的搭配运用，语法运用准确，单词拼写正确，并适当使用非谓语动词，同时使用亮点词汇：at the age of在……岁；in order to为了；be honored as被授予；study harder更努力地学习，高分句型：I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句）；He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）；I'll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句）。
17．One possible version:
We have many subjects at school this year. I did a survey of my classmates about some of the subjects and this is what I found.
Computer science is the most popular subject. We all like to work on computers, but we have only one class a week. Many students like art and history. They think they are the most interesting subjects. The easiest subjects are P. E. and music. We can relax during the classes. The most boring subjects are English and Chinese. There are too many rules to learn the languages. Math and Physics are the most difficult subjects. They are not very easy to learn.
这是一篇提纲作文。要求针对班上同学们对一些学科的喜好程度做的调查，根据表格提示，写一篇英语短文，将调查结果告诉大家。写作中要包含所给的五方面的内容，电脑科学是最受欢迎的；美术和历史是最有趣的；音乐盒体育是最简单的；英语和语文是最无聊的；数学和物理是最难的。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数和第三人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将五个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定搭配like to do sth喜欢做某事；too…to太……而不能等以及句型结构，如They think they are the most interesting subjects.There are too many rules to learn the languages. Math and Physics are the most difficult subjects.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
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Hello, boys and girls! My name is Maria. I have a good friend. Her name is Cindy. Her birthday is on September 22nd. And this year she is 13 years old. She likes sports. She often plays table tennis with her classmates after school. Her favorite subject is English, because she thinks it's useful. She has good eating habits, too. For breakfast, she has bread and milk. And for dinner she likes vegetables and fruit. She doesn't like eating ice-cream because she doesn't want to get fat.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据汉语提示，写一篇介绍Cindy的作文。作文的体裁是一篇记叙文，要求从年龄和生日、喜欢的运动、喜欢的科目、饮食习惯等不同方面介绍Cindy。根据材料内容可知，本文要用一般现在时，人称是第三人称单数，注意主谓一致问题及代词的使用，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，注意英语的习惯表达。
这篇短文根据汉语提示将5个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。人称代词she和物主代词her转换灵活，介词使用准确，如on September，after school，for breakfast，一些习惯表达和固定句型，如play sth. with sb., eating habits, want to, get fat的使用，使文章更加流畅，自然；尤其是连词because的使用，让文章内容表达更加丰富，更有条理性。
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