专题07 书面表达 15篇（辽宁中考真题+中考模拟）-2025年辽宁中考英语高分提升之最新题速递【含答案+解析】
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2025年辽宁中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
专题07 书面表达 15篇（辽宁中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·辽宁） 假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：（1）告知你的打算；（2）询问他的想法；（3）期待回复。
注意：（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
2．（2024·铁岭模拟） 曾子曰："吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？"习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，旨在告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。那么，青少年怎样成为更好的自己呢？
请你根据以下内容提示，以"How to Be a Better Teenager "为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在学校演讲比赛中发言。要点如下：（1）演讲目的；（2）针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议；（3）发出号召。
注意：（1）词数80～100词，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone,
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech.
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Yours,
Li Hui
3．（2024·灯塔模拟） 习总书记告诫青年人"艰难困苦, 玉汝于成"。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程, 从幼稚走向成熟, 从逆境走向成功。"精感石没羽, 岂云惮险坚", 初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难和的经历吗 请以"The harder, The Better"为题, 写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。
要求：（1）确定主题；（2）围绕主题, 表达内容积极向上, 有具体生动的事件； （3）词数80﹣120； （4）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
提示问题：
What was the difficulty
What did you do to get over the difficulty
What have you learned from it
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4．（2024·铁岭模拟） 假如你是李华，你校上周举办了"校园创意节"的活动，请你根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍此次活动。内容要点：(1)目的：丰富校园生活，培养创新能力；(2)内容：创意写作大赛：机器人展……(3)你的感受；……
注意： (1)词数80-100，开头 和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文条理清楚、逻辑连贯；(3)文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：Creative Campus Festival 校园创意节；
innovative adj. 创新的；enrich v. 使······丰富
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to know that you're interested in the Creative Campus Festival held in our school last week.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·朝阳模拟）假定你是李辉，你的美国朋友Nathan 来信询问2023 年中国热门话题"预制菜"的相关信息，请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：（1）引入话题；（2）你的观点； （3）期待回信。
注意：（1）词数为80～100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；（4）参考词汇：prepared food 预制菜。
Dear Nathan，
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I am so happy to receive your letter.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hui
6．（2024·锦州模拟） 学校学生会正在招募志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等)，以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李华，请你用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。
内容提示：
1.你申请志愿者的理由
2.你的优势
3.你当选之后的打算
参考词汇： 传统手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts
要求：
1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4.词数80-100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer.
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I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2024·凤城模拟） 假定你是李华，在你校刚刚结束的校园发明大赛中，你的一项小发明获得一等奖，你的英国笔友Tom询问相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）大赛情况；
（2）发明简介；
（3）参赛感悟。
注意：
（1）词数80﹣100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：设计 design（n. /v. ）
Dear Tom，
I'm excited to share something about the invention competition in our school with you.
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Do you have such an experience or anything special to share with me？Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2024·铁岭模拟） 良好的学习习惯能够帮助我们更高效地感受学习，减轻学习压力，因而培养良好的学习习惯对中学生极为重要。请以 "How to Develop Good Learning Habits"为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们提出几点建议。要点如下：(1)课前预习、为新课做好准备；(2)课堂上认真听讲，做好笔记；(3)课后按时完成作业，多做练习；(4)补充至少一条你的建议
注意：(1)词数:80-100， 标题已给出,不计入总词数;(2)写作要观齐全，可适当发挥；(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
How to Develop Good Learning Habits
9．（2024·铁岭模拟） 假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友 Jack 发邮件向你抱怨中文太难学了。他觉得自己已经学习了很长时间但进步缓慢，因此感到很沮丧。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。要给如下：(1)表示理解并给予安慰；(2)至少三条建议( 和中国朋友一起学唱中文歌；运用app辅助中文学习 )；(3)学习汉语的意义。
注意：(1)词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(2)包含所给要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；(3)邮件中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to hear from you. Thank you for telling me about your problem.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2024·辽宁模拟） 假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。要点如下：
(1)回顾过去；
(2)表达感谢；
(3)展望未来。
注意：
(1)词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you.
11．（2024·鞍山模拟）"灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄 "做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄，生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……本期校英文报 School Time 栏目围绕"A Hero in My Heart"主题征集英语短文,请分享你心目中的英雄。
内容提示：(1) Who is your hero (2) What did he/she do (3) What can you learn from him/her
要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；(3)词数不少于 80。
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12．（2024·鞍山模拟）写一篇日记，说明你不同意家里的哪些规则以及你认为这些规则应该如何改变。
要求：(1)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；(2)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名和地名等)；(3)词数:80~100。
13．（2024·鞍山模拟）无论在学习中还是在生活中，小组合作都具有重要意义。 默契的合作可以提高效率，并培养良好的人际关系。小组合作中，你通常会担任什么角色呢 请从以下表格中任选一个情境和角色，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
Situations Roles
study in class leader, reporter, PPT maker
take part in school activities recorder, director, interviewer
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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14．（2024·鞍山模拟）假如你是李平，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站被公开展示并获得好评。 请你结合下面内容要点和图示信息,以"My Experience of Making a Poster"为题,写一篇发言稿向学校的英语广播站投稿，简述你的制作经历。
内容要点如下：(1)介绍获奖海报的内容；(2)具体讲述制作海报的过程；(3)讲述你的收获或者感悟。
注意：(1)词数 80~100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；(2)可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。(3)发言稿中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I'm Li Hua. I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
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Thank you.
15．（2024·鞍山模拟）随着"双减"政策的实行，同学们有越来越多的课余时间可以自由支配。做志愿者是一个不错的课余活动，它既可以帮助别人，同时又可以锻炼个人能力和提高自身技能。假如你是李华，请你给你想去做志愿者的地方写一封信或电子邮件。下面的几个问题可以帮助你。（1）Which volunteer job do you want to do？（2）What are your interests and hobbies？（3）How can these help you to do the job？（4）Why do you want to do the volunteer job？（5）When are you free to do the job？
注意：词数 80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
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Yours，
Li Hua
答案解析部分
1．Dear Eric,
How is everything going I'm writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation. We are going to design and build model airplanes.
Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us. It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us. Please let me know what you think about this plan. Your participation would mean a lot to us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
这是一篇应用文写作。要求假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件， 时态是一般将来时、一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍总体介绍社团在暑假期间设计和制作飞机模型；然后介绍自己的打算和询问他的看法；最后期待回复。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：write to do；tell sb. about sth.；have a great interest in；want to do；share...with...；let sb. do；think about；mean...to...等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：定语从句I'm writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation.；状语从句Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us.It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us.；Please let me know what you think about this plan.等。连词since、if、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2．One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone,
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech. In our lives, we sometimes become upset and worried about something. However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.
I remember the day when I failed a maths test. I was sad and felt disappointed in myself. However, instead of crying over my mistakes, I decided to change the situation with a positive attitude. I analyzed my weak areas and asked help from my teacher and classmates. With their guidance and support, I had a better understanding of the subject and achieved better results in the following tests.
This experience helped me grow as a person. It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hui
这是一篇演讲稿，说明怎样成为更好的年轻人，内容包括：演讲目的；针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议；发出号召。 时态是一般现在时和一般过去时，人称是第一人称，同时注意一些连词的使用，语法结构正确和上下文的连贯。
这道题是一道很好的写作练习题，它不仅要求学生掌握基本的写作技巧，还要求他们具备良好的思维能力和表达能力。首先，这道题的主题明确，要求写一篇演讲稿，内容涉及自我提升。这有助于学生思考如何组织语言，清晰地给出建议，其次，这道题还要求向学生发出号召。此外，这道题还注重培养学生的思维能力。在写作过程中，学生需要思考如何选择合适的角度和内容来表达自己的想法，如何将内容条理化、逻辑化，这有助于提高他们的思维能力和表达能力。最后，这道题还具有一定的开放性和创造性。学生可以在写作过程中发挥自己的想象力和创造力，使回信更加生动有趣。可能用到的词句give sb a speech给某人演讲 ； ； have a better understanding of... 对……有更好的理解；However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.(if引导的条件状语从句；not only位于句首的部分倒装)；It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.(省略to不定式作宾补；that引导的宾语从句)
3．One possible version:
The harder, The Better
In our life, we may meet with different kinds of difficulties. But how can we deal with them？Here is one of my own experiences.
When I first went into the middle school, I was too shy to communicate with others. And I was afraid to ask others questions that I couldn't work out. I turned to my parents for help and they gave me useful suggestions. They told me that I needed to be brave to talk to others and make new friends. I tried my best to follow their suggestions and finally I did that.
Now I understand that I need to learn how to get over difficulty by myself with confidence.
本文是一篇命题作文。时态是一般过去时，首先介绍什么是困难，其次介绍怎样克服困难，最后介绍你从困难中学到什么。注意要紧紧围绕主题，表达积极向上的内容，并且要有具体生动的事件，运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，首先介绍了什么是困难 When I first went into the middle school, I was too shy to communicate with others. 然后介绍了怎样克服困难 I turned to my parents for help and they gave me useful suggestions. 最后介绍从困难中学到什么 Now I understand that I need to learn how to get over difficulty by myself with confidence. 好词好句different kinds of； Here is one of my own experiences； I tried my best to follow their suggestions and finally I did that. 连词but，and的使用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．One possible version:
Dear_Mike,
I'm_glad_to_know_that_you're_interested_in_the_Creative_Campus_Festival_held_in_our_school_last_week, I'm willing to give you a brief introduction of the activity.
Without doubt, the activity aimed at enriching our school life and improving our innovative ability, One of the most meaningful parts was the Creative Writing Competition, which encouraged us to explore our potential in writing. What attracted me most was the robot exhibition because it increased our knowledge of AI robots. Besides, a speech on the importance of innovation was given to encourage us to actively take part in innovative activities.
In my opinion, this is an interesting and meaningful activity, because it develops our sense of innovation and inspires us to make contributions to the society. I hope that my introduction ea n provide you with a clear understanding of the activity.
Yours,
Li_Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求给你的外国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍你校上周举办了"校园创意节"的活动 。写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，目的：丰富校园生活，培养创新能力；内容：创意写作大赛：机器人展……以及你的感受。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第三人称单数。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。be willing to do sth愿意做某事；without doubt毫无疑问；encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事；take part in参加等以及句型结构，如 What attracted me most was the robot exhibition because it increased our knowledge of AI robots. Besides, a speech on the importance of innovation was given to encourage us to actively take part in innovative activities. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
5．One possible version:
Dear Nathan，
I am so happy to receive your letter. With the development of science and technology，prepared food has gradually entered my life. Some people like it and believe it brings convenience to people. Some people also oppose it due to health issues. I think prepared food should be widely promoted. Firstly，it does bring convenience to those who do not have time to cook. Secondly，it can bring convenience to those who cannot cook. Thirdly，it is cost﹣effective. So I think it's beneficial for us. What is your opinion I hope to receive your reply.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hui
本文是一篇书信作文；介绍预制菜的相关信息。主要时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏"信息提示"中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出"预制菜"的话题；第二步，表述你自己的观点；第三步，期待回信，表达祝愿。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇due to由于；be beneficial for对……有益；convenience方便 。高分句型Firstly, it does bring convenience to those who do not have time to cook. (who引导的定语从句) ，So I think it's beneficial for us. (it作形式宾语)。
6．One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer.
The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China. Besides, I can have a chance to communicate in English with others and make more friends.
I have many advantages to be a volunteer. First, I am very good at English, so I can talk with them very easily. Second, I am very out-going. I can have a better communication with foreign students. What's more, I have similar work experiences as a volunteer in other activities.
I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I'm sure they will be very interested in it.
I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是一篇书信作文；用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏"信息提示"中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，介绍你申请志愿者的理由；第二步，描述你的优势；第三步，最后介绍你当选之后的打算。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇what's more而且，such as比如，be interested in对……感兴趣。高分句型The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China.（why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句），I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）。
7．One possible version:
Dear Tom，
I'm excited to share something about the invention competition in our school with you. Last Friday an invention competition was held in our school stadium. About twenty students joined it and more than 400 teachers and students came to watch it. Among these inventors，some are from Grade Seven. Although they are young，their inventions are so wonderful and win everyone's high praise. My two classmates and I made a team and joined the competition，too. We were so lucky that we won the first prize for the robot we invented. Using AI technology，this robot can provide help，companionship and entertainment to users，Not only can it help them get something they need，such as cups，keys，glasses and so on，but it is also able to keep them company and let them not feel lonely. Users also can play games with the robot. Preparing for the competition was a great challenge for us. We need to make plans and designs. And we practiced using it and improved it many times. After this experience，I learned a lot about teamwork，creativity and how to solve problems. Do you have such an experience or anything special to share with me？Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours，
Li Hua
本文是一篇书信作文； 介绍发明大赛的情况。主要时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； 根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 第一步，点明写作主题； 第二步，介绍大赛情况及自己的发明； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇more than多于，e able to do sth.能够做某事 。高分句型Not only can it help them get something they need, such as cups, keys, glasses and so on, but it is also able to keep them company and let them not feel lonely.（倒装句） 。
8．One possible version:
How to Develop Good Learning Habits
We all known that it's quite important for every student to develop good learning habits. To a certain degree, good learning habits can help us study something new faster and better. Here are some suggestions。 I'd like to share with you.
First of all, we'd better preview the new lesson in advance and get ready for it before class. Then we should listen to teachers and take notes carefully in class. Third, we must finish our homework on time and do exercises as much as possible, because practice makes perfect. In addition, we should be br ave to ask for help when we have questions about study.
I think if we keep on doing these, we're sure to make great achievements in schoolwork.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 How to Develop Good Learning Habits 为题。写作内容包括培养好的学习习惯的建议。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对培养好的学习习惯的建议进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和I think+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，had better do sth.最好做某事，as+形容词+as possible尽可能……的，等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
9．One possible version:
Dear_Jack,
I'm_glad_to_hear_from_you._Thank_you_for_telling_me_about_your_problem._I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble learning Chinese. It's not easy to study Chinese well, but there is no need to feel worried. Here are some suggestions you may find helpful.
First, learn to sing Chinese songs with Chinese friends. It's a relaxing way but very useful. Second, use apps that are suitable for you to help with Chinese learning. Third, find as many chances as possible to communicate with local people. It can not only improve your spoken Chinese but also improve your listening skills. When you master Chinese some day, you will learn about Chinese history and culture well. You are sure to fall in love with China.
It takes time to learn a language. Be patient and you will make great progress.
Yours,
Li_Hua
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生根据内容提示给朋友Jack回复一封电子邮件。写作时要按照提示的要点，首先对对方的问题表示理解和安慰，然后针对汉语学习的问题给出自己的建议，并阐述学习汉语的意义，最后表达祝愿。写作时，人称应以第二、三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，并确保无语法错误和单词拼写错误。
这道题是一道很好的写作练习题，它不仅要求学生掌握基本的写作技巧，还要求他们具备良好的思维能力和表达能力。首先，这道题的主题明确，要求写一封回信给美籍朋友Jack，内容涉及自己的学习汉语遇到问题和表示理解及安慰并给出建议。这有助于学生思考如何组织语言，清晰地表达自己的想法和感受。其次，这道题还要求学生考虑读者的需求和感受。此外，这道题还注重培养学生的思维能力。在写作过程中，学生需要思考如何选择合适的角度和内容来表达自己的想法，如何将内容条理化、逻辑化，这有助于提高他们的思维能力和表达能力。最后，这道题还具有一定的开放性和创造性。学生可以在写作过程中发挥自己的想象力和创造力，使回信更加生动有趣。可能用到的词句tell about the problem；谈论问题；学习汉语有困难(have trouble learning Chinese)学好汉语不易；
与当地人交流(communicate with local people)；取得巨大进步(make great progress)； I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble learning Chinese. (that引导的宾语从句) When you master Chinese some day, you will learn about Chinese history and culture well. (when引导的时间状语从句)。
10．暂未更新
假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。本文是一篇发言稿；时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；写作步骤：第一步，阐述过去的3年生活。第二步，表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福。第三步，最后结束文章。
建议使用亮点词汇]：in the past在过去，make much progress取得很大进步，make friends交朋友，以及高分句型]：不定式I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help，Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character.（部分倒装句）增加信息的容量。
11．A Hero in My Heart
Every time I look up to the blue sky, I always think of my hero-Yang Liwei. He is just like the brightest star in the sky.
Yang Liwei is a great man who was the first to travel into space in China.He always has courage to face difficulties as well as a strong will. Before he could travel into space, he did lots of training that I couldn't imagine. He was the first to try because of his courage. Once, when he started training, he suddenly felt uncomfortable. He noticed a button that could stop the training, but he didn't use it until the training finished. He also tried his best to make his body fixed. As a result, he was chosen to be the first astronaut in China and he succeeded in working in space.
His courage and strength moved me a lot. Whenever I meet difficulties,I always think of him and try my best to solve them. He's certainly the greatest hero in my heart.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 " A Hero in My Heart "为题。写作内容包括人物介绍，事迹和收获。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对人物介绍，事迹和收获三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的时间状语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的start doing sth.开始做某事，try one's best尽力，succeed in sth.成功做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
12．June 5th,2023，Monday,Sunny
Today, I had an argument with my mom, which made me so upset. This afternoon, as soon as I got home from school, I turned on the TV. A few minutes later, my mother suddenly came home. When she found that I was watching TV instead of studying, she became so angry that she started yelling at me and turned off the TV.I knew my mother was worried that I would fail in the final exam.
Trying not to cry, I went to my room and opened my book. However, I really couldn't concentrate on the book. What crowded in my mind was all the rules that my mother set for me. I think sometimes my mother is too strict.
Now I have decided to have a talk with her. And I hope to find out a proper way to balance my family rules and my life.
这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇日记，说明你不同意家里的哪些规则以及你认为这些规则应该如何改变。写作内容包括家里的规则，不同意的地方以及改变的建议。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时和现在时，人称为第一人称和第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对家里的规则，不同意的地方以及改变的建议进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的when引导的时间状语从句和I knew+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的start doing sth.开始做某事，fail in失败，concentrate on sth.专心某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
13．I like to be a PPT maker when taking part in school activities. I can not only practice my skills of making PPT,but also I can get a sense of achievement when it is shown.
Once I was chosen to be a PPT maker team attended a speech. I was upset at first because I thought I didn't have any chance to stand on the stage. A few days before the speech, my teacher noticed that and told me that gold will shine no matter where it is. Encouraged by her, I devoted myself to making the PPT beautiful and colorful. In the end, our team won the first prize and my PPT was also praised by the students and teachers.
Through this experience, I got to know that the success of a team cannot get separated from the efforts of each member. Each one should contribute to the success of the team.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求从以下表格中任选一个情境和角色，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历。写作内容包括喜欢承担的角色及理由，以及承担该角色的经历。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对喜欢承担的角色及理由，以及承担该角色的经历进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的my teacher noticed that and told me that gold will shine no matter where it is. 宾语从句以及because等连词使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的take part in sth."参加某事"，devote oneself to doing sth."致力于做某事"，contribute to sth."贡献"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
14．Dear teachers and friends,
I'm Li Hua.I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.It is about the differences between the past and the present in our city.
I surfed the Internet to collect information for it. I also interviewed some people who know the past of my hometown. They all think highly of the better life now.
Then I started to design the poster. I wrote the text as well as drew the pictures about the changes, I posted it online so that more people could get to know the changes of my hometown.
Through the experience, I feel proud of my hometown, I hope it will be better and better,
Thank you.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 " My Experience of Making a Poster "为题。写作内容包括获奖海报的内容、制作海报的过程和收获/感悟。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对获奖海报的内容、制作海报的过程和收获/感悟等进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的I hope+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的he honored to do sth.很荣幸做某事，think highly of高度评价，feel proud of sth.以……为傲等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
15．Dear Sir or Madam，
Hearing that your traveling club needs some volunteers， I'm writing to apply to be a guide to offer some help.
In my free time， I like reading and traveling， so I know clearly about some famous places of interest.Besides，I can speak very good English， which means I can communicate well with foreign visitors.
More importantly， it is meaningful for me to be a guide because I can not only help people in need but also enrich my experience. Last but not least， it's a good chance to introduce our hometown to others and they will learn more about our culture. In addition， I'm free on weekends.
In short， doing volunteer work can bring me a sense of satisfaction and teach me to be a responsible person.Therefore， I'm really thirsty for the chance to help others as well as improve myself. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲作文，要求给想去做志愿者的地方写一封信或电子邮件。写作内容包括想做的志愿工作、兴趣和爱好、对工作的帮助、原因以及空闲时间。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对想做的志愿工作、兴趣和爱好、对工作的帮助、原因以及空闲时间进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+名词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式等使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的like doing sth.喜欢做某事，not only…but also…不仅……而且，be thirsty for sth.渴望某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
专题07 书面表达 15篇（辽宁中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·辽宁） 假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：（1）告知你的打算；（2）询问他的想法；（3）期待回复。
注意：（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
2．（2024·铁岭模拟） 曾子曰："吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？"习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，旨在告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。那么，青少年怎样成为更好的自己呢？
请你根据以下内容提示，以"How to Be a Better Teenager "为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在学校演讲比赛中发言。要点如下：（1）演讲目的；（2）针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议；（3）发出号召。
注意：（1）词数80～100词，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone,
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech.
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Yours,
Li Hui
3．（2024·灯塔模拟） 习总书记告诫青年人"艰难困苦, 玉汝于成"。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程, 从幼稚走向成熟, 从逆境走向成功。"精感石没羽, 岂云惮险坚", 初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难和的经历吗 请以"The harder, The Better"为题, 写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。
要求：（1）确定主题；（2）围绕主题, 表达内容积极向上, 有具体生动的事件； （3）词数80﹣120； （4）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
提示问题：
What was the difficulty
What did you do to get over the difficulty
What have you learned from it
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4．（2024·铁岭模拟） 假如你是李华，你校上周举办了"校园创意节"的活动，请你根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍此次活动。内容要点：(1)目的：丰富校园生活，培养创新能力；(2)内容：创意写作大赛：机器人展……(3)你的感受；……
注意： (1)词数80-100，开头 和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文条理清楚、逻辑连贯；(3)文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：Creative Campus Festival 校园创意节；
innovative adj. 创新的；enrich v. 使······丰富
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to know that you're interested in the Creative Campus Festival held in our school last week.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·朝阳模拟）假定你是李辉，你的美国朋友Nathan 来信询问2023 年中国热门话题"预制菜"的相关信息，请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：（1）引入话题；（2）你的观点； （3）期待回信。
注意：（1）词数为80～100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；（4）参考词汇：prepared food 预制菜。
Dear Nathan，
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I am so happy to receive your letter.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hui
6．（2024·锦州模拟） 学校学生会正在招募志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等)，以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李华，请你用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。
内容提示：
1.你申请志愿者的理由
2.你的优势
3.你当选之后的打算
参考词汇： 传统手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts
要求：
1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4.词数80-100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer.
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I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2024·凤城模拟） 假定你是李华，在你校刚刚结束的校园发明大赛中，你的一项小发明获得一等奖，你的英国笔友Tom询问相关情况，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
（1）大赛情况；
（2）发明简介；
（3）参赛感悟。
注意：
（1）词数80﹣100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：设计 design（n. /v. ）
Dear Tom，
I'm excited to share something about the invention competition in our school with you.
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Do you have such an experience or anything special to share with me？Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2024·铁岭模拟） 良好的学习习惯能够帮助我们更高效地感受学习，减轻学习压力，因而培养良好的学习习惯对中学生极为重要。请以 "How to Develop Good Learning Habits"为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们提出几点建议。要点如下：(1)课前预习、为新课做好准备；(2)课堂上认真听讲，做好笔记；(3)课后按时完成作业，多做练习；(4)补充至少一条你的建议
注意：(1)词数:80-100， 标题已给出,不计入总词数;(2)写作要观齐全，可适当发挥；(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
How to Develop Good Learning Habits
9．（2024·铁岭模拟） 假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友 Jack 发邮件向你抱怨中文太难学了。他觉得自己已经学习了很长时间但进步缓慢，因此感到很沮丧。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。要给如下：(1)表示理解并给予安慰；(2)至少三条建议( 和中国朋友一起学唱中文歌；运用app辅助中文学习 )；(3)学习汉语的意义。
注意：(1)词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(2)包含所给要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；(3)邮件中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to hear from you. Thank you for telling me about your problem.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2024·辽宁模拟） 假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。要点如下：
(1)回顾过去；
(2)表达感谢；
(3)展望未来。
注意：
(1)词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you.
11．（2024·鞍山模拟）"灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄 "做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄，生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……本期校英文报 School Time 栏目围绕"A Hero in My Heart"主题征集英语短文,请分享你心目中的英雄。
内容提示：(1) Who is your hero (2) What did he/she do (3) What can you learn from him/her
要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；(3)词数不少于 80。
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12．（2024·鞍山模拟）写一篇日记，说明你不同意家里的哪些规则以及你认为这些规则应该如何改变。
要求：(1)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；(2)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名和地名等)；(3)词数:80~100。
13．（2024·鞍山模拟）无论在学习中还是在生活中，小组合作都具有重要意义。 默契的合作可以提高效率，并培养良好的人际关系。小组合作中，你通常会担任什么角色呢 请从以下表格中任选一个情境和角色，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
Situations Roles
study in class leader, reporter, PPT maker
take part in school activities recorder, director, interviewer
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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14．（2024·鞍山模拟）假如你是李平，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站被公开展示并获得好评。 请你结合下面内容要点和图示信息,以"My Experience of Making a Poster"为题,写一篇发言稿向学校的英语广播站投稿，简述你的制作经历。
内容要点如下：(1)介绍获奖海报的内容；(2)具体讲述制作海报的过程；(3)讲述你的收获或者感悟。
注意：(1)词数 80~100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；(2)可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。(3)发言稿中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I'm Li Hua. I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
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Thank you.
15．（2024·鞍山模拟）随着"双减"政策的实行，同学们有越来越多的课余时间可以自由支配。做志愿者是一个不错的课余活动，它既可以帮助别人，同时又可以锻炼个人能力和提高自身技能。假如你是李华，请你给你想去做志愿者的地方写一封信或电子邮件。下面的几个问题可以帮助你。（1）Which volunteer job do you want to do？（2）What are your interests and hobbies？（3）How can these help you to do the job？（4）Why do you want to do the volunteer job？（5）When are you free to do the job？
注意：词数 80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
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Yours，
Li Hua
答案解析部分
1．Dear Eric,
How is everything going I'm writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation. We are going to design and build model airplanes.
Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us. It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us. Please let me know what you think about this plan. Your participation would mean a lot to us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
这是一篇应用文写作。要求假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件， 时态是一般将来时、一般过去时和一般现在时，首先介绍总体介绍社团在暑假期间设计和制作飞机模型；然后介绍自己的打算和询问他的看法；最后期待回复。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：write to do；tell sb. about sth.；have a great interest in；want to do；share...with...；let sb. do；think about；mean...to...等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如：定语从句I'm writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation.；状语从句Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us.It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us.；Please let me know what you think about this plan.等。连词since、if、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
2．One possible version:
How to Be a Better Teenager
Hello, everyone,
It's my honour to stand here to give you a speech. In our lives, we sometimes become upset and worried about something. However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.
I remember the day when I failed a maths test. I was sad and felt disappointed in myself. However, instead of crying over my mistakes, I decided to change the situation with a positive attitude. I analyzed my weak areas and asked help from my teacher and classmates. With their guidance and support, I had a better understanding of the subject and achieved better results in the following tests.
This experience helped me grow as a person. It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.
Yours,
Li Hui
这是一篇演讲稿，说明怎样成为更好的年轻人，内容包括：演讲目的；针对演讲题目给出至少两点建议；发出号召。 时态是一般现在时和一般过去时，人称是第一人称，同时注意一些连词的使用，语法结构正确和上下文的连贯。
这道题是一道很好的写作练习题，它不仅要求学生掌握基本的写作技巧，还要求他们具备良好的思维能力和表达能力。首先，这道题的主题明确，要求写一篇演讲稿，内容涉及自我提升。这有助于学生思考如何组织语言，清晰地给出建议，其次，这道题还要求向学生发出号召。此外，这道题还注重培养学生的思维能力。在写作过程中，学生需要思考如何选择合适的角度和内容来表达自己的想法，如何将内容条理化、逻辑化，这有助于提高他们的思维能力和表达能力。最后，这道题还具有一定的开放性和创造性。学生可以在写作过程中发挥自己的想象力和创造力，使回信更加生动有趣。可能用到的词句give sb a speech给某人演讲 ； ； have a better understanding of... 对……有更好的理解；However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.(if引导的条件状语从句；not only位于句首的部分倒装)；It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.(省略to不定式作宾补；that引导的宾语从句)
3．One possible version:
The harder, The Better
In our life, we may meet with different kinds of difficulties. But how can we deal with them？Here is one of my own experiences.
When I first went into the middle school, I was too shy to communicate with others. And I was afraid to ask others questions that I couldn't work out. I turned to my parents for help and they gave me useful suggestions. They told me that I needed to be brave to talk to others and make new friends. I tried my best to follow their suggestions and finally I did that.
Now I understand that I need to learn how to get over difficulty by myself with confidence.
本文是一篇命题作文。时态是一般过去时，首先介绍什么是困难，其次介绍怎样克服困难，最后介绍你从困难中学到什么。注意要紧紧围绕主题，表达积极向上的内容，并且要有具体生动的事件，运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，首先介绍了什么是困难 When I first went into the middle school, I was too shy to communicate with others. 然后介绍了怎样克服困难 I turned to my parents for help and they gave me useful suggestions. 最后介绍从困难中学到什么 Now I understand that I need to learn how to get over difficulty by myself with confidence. 好词好句different kinds of； Here is one of my own experiences； I tried my best to follow their suggestions and finally I did that. 连词but，and的使用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
4．One possible version:
Dear_Mike,
I'm_glad_to_know_that_you're_interested_in_the_Creative_Campus_Festival_held_in_our_school_last_week, I'm willing to give you a brief introduction of the activity.
Without doubt, the activity aimed at enriching our school life and improving our innovative ability, One of the most meaningful parts was the Creative Writing Competition, which encouraged us to explore our potential in writing. What attracted me most was the robot exhibition because it increased our knowledge of AI robots. Besides, a speech on the importance of innovation was given to encourage us to actively take part in innovative activities.
In my opinion, this is an interesting and meaningful activity, because it develops our sense of innovation and inspires us to make contributions to the society. I hope that my introduction ea n provide you with a clear understanding of the activity.
Yours,
Li_Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求给你的外国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍你校上周举办了"校园创意节"的活动 。写作中要包含所给的三方面的内容，目的：丰富校园生活，培养创新能力；内容：创意写作大赛：机器人展……以及你的感受。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第三人称单数。注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。be willing to do sth愿意做某事；without doubt毫无疑问；encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事；take part in参加等以及句型结构，如 What attracted me most was the robot exhibition because it increased our knowledge of AI robots. Besides, a speech on the importance of innovation was given to encourage us to actively take part in innovative activities. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
5．One possible version:
Dear Nathan，
I am so happy to receive your letter. With the development of science and technology，prepared food has gradually entered my life. Some people like it and believe it brings convenience to people. Some people also oppose it due to health issues. I think prepared food should be widely promoted. Firstly，it does bring convenience to those who do not have time to cook. Secondly，it can bring convenience to those who cannot cook. Thirdly，it is cost﹣effective. So I think it's beneficial for us. What is your opinion I hope to receive your reply.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hui
本文是一篇书信作文；介绍预制菜的相关信息。主要时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏"信息提示"中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出"预制菜"的话题；第二步，表述你自己的观点；第三步，期待回信，表达祝愿。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇due to由于；be beneficial for对……有益；convenience方便 。高分句型Firstly, it does bring convenience to those who do not have time to cook. (who引导的定语从句) ，So I think it's beneficial for us. (it作形式宾语)。
6．One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer.
The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China. Besides, I can have a chance to communicate in English with others and make more friends.
I have many advantages to be a volunteer. First, I am very good at English, so I can talk with them very easily. Second, I am very out-going. I can have a better communication with foreign students. What's more, I have similar work experiences as a volunteer in other activities.
I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I'm sure they will be very interested in it.
I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是一篇书信作文；用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。时态为"一般现在时"；写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏"信息提示"中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，介绍你申请志愿者的理由；第二步，描述你的优势；第三步，最后介绍你当选之后的打算。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇what's more而且，such as比如，be interested in对……感兴趣。高分句型The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China.（why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句），I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）。
7．One possible version:
Dear Tom，
I'm excited to share something about the invention competition in our school with you. Last Friday an invention competition was held in our school stadium. About twenty students joined it and more than 400 teachers and students came to watch it. Among these inventors，some are from Grade Seven. Although they are young，their inventions are so wonderful and win everyone's high praise. My two classmates and I made a team and joined the competition，too. We were so lucky that we won the first prize for the robot we invented. Using AI technology，this robot can provide help，companionship and entertainment to users，Not only can it help them get something they need，such as cups，keys，glasses and so on，but it is also able to keep them company and let them not feel lonely. Users also can play games with the robot. Preparing for the competition was a great challenge for us. We need to make plans and designs. And we practiced using it and improved it many times. After this experience，I learned a lot about teamwork，creativity and how to solve problems. Do you have such an experience or anything special to share with me？Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours，
Li Hua
本文是一篇书信作文； 介绍发明大赛的情况。主要时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； 根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 第一步，点明写作主题； 第二步，介绍大赛情况及自己的发明； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇more than多于，e able to do sth.能够做某事 。高分句型Not only can it help them get something they need, such as cups, keys, glasses and so on, but it is also able to keep them company and let them not feel lonely.（倒装句） 。
8．One possible version:
How to Develop Good Learning Habits
We all known that it's quite important for every student to develop good learning habits. To a certain degree, good learning habits can help us study something new faster and better. Here are some suggestions。 I'd like to share with you.
First of all, we'd better preview the new lesson in advance and get ready for it before class. Then we should listen to teachers and take notes carefully in class. Third, we must finish our homework on time and do exercises as much as possible, because practice makes perfect. In addition, we should be br ave to ask for help when we have questions about study.
I think if we keep on doing these, we're sure to make great achievements in schoolwork.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 How to Develop Good Learning Habits 为题。写作内容包括培养好的学习习惯的建议。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对培养好的学习习惯的建议进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+形容词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式和I think+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事，had better do sth.最好做某事，as+形容词+as possible尽可能……的，等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
9．One possible version:
Dear_Jack,
I'm_glad_to_hear_from_you._Thank_you_for_telling_me_about_your_problem._I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble learning Chinese. It's not easy to study Chinese well, but there is no need to feel worried. Here are some suggestions you may find helpful.
First, learn to sing Chinese songs with Chinese friends. It's a relaxing way but very useful. Second, use apps that are suitable for you to help with Chinese learning. Third, find as many chances as possible to communicate with local people. It can not only improve your spoken Chinese but also improve your listening skills. When you master Chinese some day, you will learn about Chinese history and culture well. You are sure to fall in love with China.
It takes time to learn a language. Be patient and you will make great progress.
Yours,
Li_Hua
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生根据内容提示给朋友Jack回复一封电子邮件。写作时要按照提示的要点，首先对对方的问题表示理解和安慰，然后针对汉语学习的问题给出自己的建议，并阐述学习汉语的意义，最后表达祝愿。写作时，人称应以第二、三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，并确保无语法错误和单词拼写错误。
这道题是一道很好的写作练习题，它不仅要求学生掌握基本的写作技巧，还要求他们具备良好的思维能力和表达能力。首先，这道题的主题明确，要求写一封回信给美籍朋友Jack，内容涉及自己的学习汉语遇到问题和表示理解及安慰并给出建议。这有助于学生思考如何组织语言，清晰地表达自己的想法和感受。其次，这道题还要求学生考虑读者的需求和感受。此外，这道题还注重培养学生的思维能力。在写作过程中，学生需要思考如何选择合适的角度和内容来表达自己的想法，如何将内容条理化、逻辑化，这有助于提高他们的思维能力和表达能力。最后，这道题还具有一定的开放性和创造性。学生可以在写作过程中发挥自己的想象力和创造力，使回信更加生动有趣。可能用到的词句tell about the problem；谈论问题；学习汉语有困难(have trouble learning Chinese)学好汉语不易；
与当地人交流(communicate with local people)；取得巨大进步(make great progress)； I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble learning Chinese. (that引导的宾语从句) When you master Chinese some day, you will learn about Chinese history and culture well. (when引导的时间状语从句)。
10．暂未更新
假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。本文是一篇发言稿；时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时；写作步骤：第一步，阐述过去的3年生活。第二步，表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福。第三步，最后结束文章。
建议使用亮点词汇]：in the past在过去，make much progress取得很大进步，make friends交朋友，以及高分句型]：不定式I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help，Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character.（部分倒装句）增加信息的容量。
11．A Hero in My Heart
Every time I look up to the blue sky, I always think of my hero-Yang Liwei. He is just like the brightest star in the sky.
Yang Liwei is a great man who was the first to travel into space in China.He always has courage to face difficulties as well as a strong will. Before he could travel into space, he did lots of training that I couldn't imagine. He was the first to try because of his courage. Once, when he started training, he suddenly felt uncomfortable. He noticed a button that could stop the training, but he didn't use it until the training finished. He also tried his best to make his body fixed. As a result, he was chosen to be the first astronaut in China and he succeeded in working in space.
His courage and strength moved me a lot. Whenever I meet difficulties,I always think of him and try my best to solve them. He's certainly the greatest hero in my heart.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 " A Hero in My Heart "为题。写作内容包括人物介绍，事迹和收获。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对人物介绍，事迹和收获三个方面进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的时间状语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的start doing sth.开始做某事，try one's best尽力，succeed in sth.成功做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
12．June 5th,2023，Monday,Sunny
Today, I had an argument with my mom, which made me so upset. This afternoon, as soon as I got home from school, I turned on the TV. A few minutes later, my mother suddenly came home. When she found that I was watching TV instead of studying, she became so angry that she started yelling at me and turned off the TV.I knew my mother was worried that I would fail in the final exam.
Trying not to cry, I went to my room and opened my book. However, I really couldn't concentrate on the book. What crowded in my mind was all the rules that my mother set for me. I think sometimes my mother is too strict.
Now I have decided to have a talk with her. And I hope to find out a proper way to balance my family rules and my life.
这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇日记，说明你不同意家里的哪些规则以及你认为这些规则应该如何改变。写作内容包括家里的规则，不同意的地方以及改变的建议。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时和现在时，人称为第一人称和第三人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对家里的规则，不同意的地方以及改变的建议进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的when引导的时间状语从句和I knew+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的start doing sth.开始做某事，fail in失败，concentrate on sth.专心某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
13．I like to be a PPT maker when taking part in school activities. I can not only practice my skills of making PPT,but also I can get a sense of achievement when it is shown.
Once I was chosen to be a PPT maker team attended a speech. I was upset at first because I thought I didn't have any chance to stand on the stage. A few days before the speech, my teacher noticed that and told me that gold will shine no matter where it is. Encouraged by her, I devoted myself to making the PPT beautiful and colorful. In the end, our team won the first prize and my PPT was also praised by the students and teachers.
Through this experience, I got to know that the success of a team cannot get separated from the efforts of each member. Each one should contribute to the success of the team.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求从以下表格中任选一个情境和角色，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历。写作内容包括喜欢承担的角色及理由，以及承担该角色的经历。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对喜欢承担的角色及理由，以及承担该角色的经历进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的my teacher noticed that and told me that gold will shine no matter where it is. 宾语从句以及because等连词使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的take part in sth."参加某事"，devote oneself to doing sth."致力于做某事"，contribute to sth."贡献"等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
14．Dear teachers and friends,
I'm Li Hua.I am honored to share my experience of making a poster with you. Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.It is about the differences between the past and the present in our city.
I surfed the Internet to collect information for it. I also interviewed some people who know the past of my hometown. They all think highly of the better life now.
Then I started to design the poster. I wrote the text as well as drew the pictures about the changes, I posted it online so that more people could get to know the changes of my hometown.
Through the experience, I feel proud of my hometown, I hope it will be better and better,
Thank you.
这是一篇命题作文，要求以 " My Experience of Making a Poster "为题。写作内容包括获奖海报的内容、制作海报的过程和收获/感悟。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对获奖海报的内容、制作海报的过程和收获/感悟等进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的I hope+宾语从句等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的he honored to do sth.很荣幸做某事，think highly of高度评价，feel proud of sth.以……为傲等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
15．Dear Sir or Madam，
Hearing that your traveling club needs some volunteers， I'm writing to apply to be a guide to offer some help.
In my free time， I like reading and traveling， so I know clearly about some famous places of interest.Besides，I can speak very good English， which means I can communicate well with foreign visitors.
More importantly， it is meaningful for me to be a guide because I can not only help people in need but also enrich my experience. Last but not least， it's a good chance to introduce our hometown to others and they will learn more about our culture. In addition， I'm free on weekends.
In short， doing volunteer work can bring me a sense of satisfaction and teach me to be a responsible person.Therefore， I'm really thirsty for the chance to help others as well as improve myself. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
这是一篇提纲作文，要求给想去做志愿者的地方写一封信或电子邮件。写作内容包括想做的志愿工作、兴趣和爱好、对工作的帮助、原因以及空闲时间。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对想做的志愿工作、兴趣和爱好、对工作的帮助、原因以及空闲时间进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的It is+名词+（for sb.）+to do sth.句式等使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的like doing sth.喜欢做某事，not only…but also…不仅……而且，be thirsty for sth.渴望某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
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