2025年上海中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
专题08 书面表达 15篇 (上海中考真题+中考模拟)
一、书面表达
1.(2025·上海市模拟)同学们因疫情(the epidemic)被迫居家学习已一个月了,中考又迫在眉睫,你的好朋友Luke对此感到很焦虑,另外无法外出缺少社交活动也让Luke感到非常的郁闷无聊。请给她写一封信,结合自己的做法和体会,从学习、生活和心理调适等方面给她一些建议和鼓励。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)
manage anxiety
social activities
a sense of connection
keep a regular schedule
a chance to
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city.
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2.(2025·金山模拟)Write at least 60 words on the topic "Activities on spreading the culture of Spring Festival"(以"传播春节文化的活动"为题,写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格)
最近联合国教科文组织 (the UNESCO) 宣布将中国的春节列入世界非物质文化遗产名录 (the list of Intangible Cultural Heritage)。为了庆祝这一重要时刻, 你所在的社区向居民们征集在社区内传播春节文化的活动方案,诸如,举办春节美食分享会、春节故事演讲比赛、制作传统手工艺品 (handicrafts)如窗花剪纸和红灯笼、写福字 (write the Chinese character Fu)、贴春联 (paste the Spring Festival couplets)、表演舞龙 (dragon dances) 或舞狮等等。你作为一名社区志愿者,请设计至少二种活动,并结合自己的擅长和活动的意义说明理由。
说明:文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
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3.(2025·黄浦模拟)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
李华正带领团队参与学校举办的"用英语讲好上海故事(Telling Shanghai Stories in English)"活动。团队需要在外滩(The Bund)、豫园(Yu Garden)和人民广场(People's Square)中选择一个作为讲述的主题,但队友们对选择哪个主题有不同意见,大家争论不休。
请以李华的身份给队友们写一封邮件,并提出一个解决争论的办法。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4.(2025·崇明模拟)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假设你是初三学生林东,下周有一所国外姐妹学校来你校进行为期两周的学习交流活动。学校请你给来校交流的外国同龄学生做一个主题为"交流文化、增进友谊"的发言。你的发言必须包含以下两点:
1. 向对方学生介绍一项具有中国特色的传统文化
2. 谈谈两周中你准备为这批外国学生安排什么跨文化交流活动(参观文化景点、文化交流活动、文化习俗体验等)
(注意:短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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5.(2025·杨浦模拟)你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫,负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr. Wang,表达你的歉意。
道歉信内容须包括:
·表达歉意;
·解释缺席的原因;
·提出补救措施。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分;
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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6.(2025·青浦模拟)Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根据以下情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假如你是吴磊,收到一封来自外国朋友 Mathew的电子邮件,他提到寒假会来上海参加一个为期一周的交流访学活动,活动方提供了三种住宿方案,分别是住当地同学家 (stay with one of the local classmates) 、住学校宿舍 (live in the school dormitory) 或住宾馆 (stay at a hotel) 。
Mathew希望你能给他出出主意,请你根据这一情况给他回一封邮件。
内容要点如下:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐其中一种住宿方案,并说明理由。
注意:
●文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
●照抄试卷中内容不得分。
●邮件格式不计入总词数。
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7.(2025·虹口模拟)Write a text message of at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一个不少于60个词的短信,标点符号不占格。)
春节即将来临。假如你是学生李华,你想给你的班主任张老师发一个短信,感谢她在过去一年对你的帮助。请从李华的草稿中选择一件事情,完成这个短信。
短信须包含以下内容:
1. 你发送短信的原因;
2. 简要描述这件事情。
Things I want to thank Ms Zhang for… □encouraged me to take part in the Comics Club □taught me the link method, very helpful
注意:
1.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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8.(2025·嘉定模拟)Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的班级正在制作一本毕业相册(yearbook),现向同学们征集照片。请你选择一张最喜欢的照片,描述照片的内容(如时间、地点、人物、事件等),并说明选择的理由。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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9.(2025·普陀模拟)根据以下情境写一篇字数不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。
假如你是李明,你的好朋友王林最近常常抱怨平凡的生活千篇一律,又苦恼不知如何发现或创造不凡。请给他写一封信,结合你的自身经历或所见所闻,谈谈你对"平凡"和"不凡"的理解,并给他一些建议。
注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
你可以这样开始:
Dear Wang Lin,
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10.(2024·浦东模拟)Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信,标点符号不占格。)
学校公众号近期准备增设一个专栏,以更好地向外界宣传校园文化与特色等,现向学生征集方案。假如你是该校学生王一鸣,请给张老师写一封电子邮件,表明你想增设的专栏名称和内容,并结合自身经历,阐述理由。
注意:
1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息, 否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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11.(2024·普陀模拟) 假设你是李华,刚到英国学习. 生活了两个月。在英国期间,你住在大卫(David)家中。请在答题卡指定的位置上,用英语给他写一封感谢信,内容要点如下:
表达谢意 感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。
难忘的事 大卫很耐心地帮助你学习英语; 大卫带你去游览了伦敦; 大卫的母亲在你生病时送你去医院,给你做好吃的食物。
学习收获 提高了英语水平,更多地了解了英国的文化。
发出邀请 邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。你会……
注意: 1. 信件要包含所给的内容要点,其中最后一个要点应用 2 句话作适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 个左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 信中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
Dear David,
I've just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because
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Yours, Li Hua
12.(2024·松江模拟) Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍,取得了看似不可能的成功,体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难,请结合自身经历,谈谈你是如何克服困难,并取得了何种收获或成功。
注意:1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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13.(2024·青浦模拟) Write at least 60 words on the given topic "Actions speak louder than words". (根据所给题目"行动胜于空谈"写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
常言道"行动胜于空谈",一个行动往往胜过千言万语,我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经历或是所见所闻,谈谈你的心得感悟。
写作要点:(1) 围绕"行动胜于空谈"的主题,讲述一则你生活中的小故事。(2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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答案解析部分
1.例文
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city. But remember, you're not alone. I'm here to share some ideas that have helped me stay calm and motivated.
First, I kept a regular schedule by waking up early, attending classes and setting study goals. It helped me feel in control. Next, I stayed connected. I joined online book clubs and virtual study groups with friends, which gave me a sense of connection even when we were apart. Finally, when stress hit, I kept a journal or tried baking. These habits helped me manage anxiety. I thought of that time at home as a chance to explore new interests.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
2.例文
As a community volunteer, I am excited to propose two activities to celebrate the inclusion of Chinese New Year in the UNESCO list of Intangible Cultural Heritage. These activities will help spread the rich traditions of Chinese New Year within our community.
One of the best ways to experience a culture is through its food. I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. Another activity is a workshop for making traditional Chinese handicrafts, such as paper-cutting. This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children.
In the end, by participating in these events, residents can gain a deeper understanding of the traditions and values associated with this important festival. Let's come together to celebrate our rich cultural heritage!
3.例文
Dear teammates.
I understand that we have different opinions on choosing the theme between The Bund, Yu Garden and People's Square for the "Telling Shanghai Stories in English" activity. Everyone has their own reasons for preferring a certain place, and that's great because it shows our enthusiasm for this project.
However, the continuous argument won't lead us to a conclusion. I think we can do this: First, we each write down the unique features and stories we can tell about our preferred place. Then, we share these with each other. After that, we can vote on which place has the most interesting and representative stories to tell. In this way, we cannot only make a fair decision but also learn more about these wonderful places in Shanghai.
Let's work together to make our presentation a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
4.例文
Dear friends,
Hello! I'm Lin Dong, a student from Grade 9. Welcome to our school! I'm very happy to introduce traditional Chinese culture to you. It's Chinese calligraphy. It's an art of writing Chinese characters with a brush. It has a long history and is very beautiful.
During these two weeks, we have planned some cross-cultural activities for you. We'll visit some famous cultural places like the Forbidden City. There, you can see many old buildings and learn about Chinese history. We'll also have cultural exchange activities. You can try to write Chinese calligraphy and make Chinese paper-cutting. And we'll have a Chinese food festival. You can taste many delicious Chinese dishes and learn how to make some simple ones.
I hope you'll enjoy these activities and make more friends here.
5.例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. I am extremely sorry for missing my shift for the library organization work this week.
The reason for my absence was a sudden and severe stomachache that prevented me from attending. I was in so much pain that I couldn't make it to the library. I deeply regret the inconvenience this may have caused.
To make amends for my mistake, I would like to volunteer to work extra hours this Saturday. Furthermore, I will be more mindful of my schedule to ensure that this won't happen again. I sincerely hope you can forgive me for my oversight.
Thank you for your understanding and patience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Feng
6.例文:
Dear Mathew,
I am very pleased to learn that you will come to Shanghai for exchange and study activities during the winter vacation, and I warmly welcome you! Shanghai is a city full of vitality and charm. I believe you will spend an unforgettable time here.
For accommodation options, I recommend that you choose to stay at a local classmate's house. This not only allows for a deeper experience of Shanghai's local culture, but also deepens our understanding and friendship with China through communication with classmates. Of course, the accommodation choice ultimately depends on your personal preferences, but I believe it would be a very good choice.
Looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai and sharing the beauty of this city with you.
Yours,
Wu Lei
7.Dear Miss Zhang,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help in my study. Without your help, my study would not be the top three in my class. It was you who always stood by me when I am fall. You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. What's more, you encouraged me to take part in the Comics Club though my parents thought it was a waste of time.
You always worked tirelessly to train my patience. Your continuous encouragement is my greatest motivation.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.例文
In my collection of photos, there is one that I like best. It was taken last summer on the school playground. In the photo, my whole class was standing in a circle, holding hands, with big smiles on our faces. We were in the middle of a team-building game. That day, the sun was shining brightly, and we were all sweating but having a great time.
I choose this photo because it truly represents the unity and friendship in our class. Whenever I look at it, those happy memories of us working together and laughing together come flooding back, and it makes me feel warm and nostalgic. It's the perfect photo to put in our yearbook to remember those wonderful days.
9.例文
Dear Wang Lin,
I know you are bored with everyday life and don't know how to find or create something great. In fact, every ordinary day is filled with potential extraordinariness. Take my neighbor Uncle Zhang as an example. He works as an ordinary postman, delivering mails every day. But he always has a big smile on his face and tries his best to remember everyone's preferences and needs. Once, he found an important document in a parcel and went out of his way to return it to the owner immediately, which saved the owner a lot of trouble.
For us, we can start small. You love painting, right Maybe you can use your paintbrush to decorate the old walls in the neighborhood, turning them into beautiful artworks. Also, when helping your parents with housework, you can try to come up with new ways to make it more efficient and fun.
Life is like a blank canvas, and we are the painters. By putting our heart into the ordinary, we can create the extraordinary.
10.例文:
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am writing to propose a new column for our school's public account called "Student Growth Stories".
This column can feature the personal growth experiences of students in our school. For example, it could include stories about how students overcame difficulties in their studies. I once had a hard time with math. I was really frustrated because I couldn't understand some complex problems. But with the help of my teacher and my own efforts, I gradually improved. I believe such stories can inspire other students.
Also, it can show students' achievements in various fields like sports and arts. It would be a good way to present our school's vibrant campus culture and the unique characteristics of our students.
Thank you for considering my proposal.
Yours,
Wang Yiming
11.One possible version:
Dear David,
I've just got back home. I want to say thanks to you and your family because you took good care of me during my stay in the UK. You were patient enough to help me with my English. You showed me around London. Your mother sent me to hospital when I felt sick and cooked delicious food for me. Now, I have improved my English and learnt more about British culture. I would like to invite you and your family to my home. I will cook Chinese food for you. I'm sure you
can have a goodtime visiting China.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文写作。要求给大卫写一封感谢信,感谢大卫及其家人对你的悉心照顾。写作过程中注意包含题目给出的要点,可适当补充相关的内容,注意时态主要为一般过去时,人称主要为第一人称,时态、语态、人称和语气等方面要保持一致性,行文要符合英文的表达习惯,注意语句通顺和上下文的连贯。
这篇感谢信非常得体且全面,既表达了对大卫及其家人的感激之情,又详细列举了对方给予的帮助和关怀,同时还分享了自己的学习收获,并礼貌地发出了邀请。整封信的语言简洁明了,没有冗余的词汇或句子,同时用词得体,符合感谢信的正式场合。信的格式正确,包括称呼、正文和落款,符合英文书信的书写规范。一些短语和固定表达,如:took good care of me、patient enough、showed me around London、sent me to hospital、cooked delicious food for me,以及句型I would like to invite you and your family to my home.、I'm sure you can have a good time visiting China.不仅丰富了文章的语言,还增强了情感表达的效果。
12.I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others' confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than I used to be. With my parents' encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don't give up, and we will win.
这是一篇材料作文。要求结合自身经历,阐述面对困难时的态度、克服方法以及最终的收获或成功。通过分析材料可知,首先简述自己在生活或学习中遇到的重大困难。接着,详细展开自己是如何通过不懈努力、坚持不懈的信念去克服这些困难的。随后,转入结果描述,即自己最终如何战胜困难,取得了何种具体的收获或成功。最后,可简短总结这段经历对自己的意义。写作时,需采用一般过去时或现在完成时,以叙述过去或至今已完成的经历,人称以第一人称为主。在写作过程中,需注意语言流畅、逻辑清晰,通过具体事例和细节描写来增强文章的说服力和感染力,让读者能够感同身受,体会到克服困难的价值与美好。
这篇文章内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。开头直接点出作者曾经的困难。通过对比其他同学的自信和自己的害羞,表达了作者内心的矛盾和挣扎,使得情感更加真实动人。详细描述了为了克服害羞所采取的措施。结尾以一句简洁有力的话总结全文,鼓励读者相信自己,坚持不懈,同时也升华了文章的主题。With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on,这段文字生动地描绘了作者取得成功后激动人心的场景,让读者感受到那份来自内心深处的喜悦和成就感。
13.Actions Speak Louder than Words
As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great important. Here is a thing happened in my life.
When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. Then I gradually realized that taking action to develop a plan and putting it into practice is very important for me. It not only helps me achieve better grades, but also benefits me in my daily life.
In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one is very important.
这是一篇命题作文。本文要求以"行动胜于空谈"为题,旨在通过具体的生活实例来阐述并论证这一主题。通过分析材料内容可知,本文主要包括以下四个要点:首先引入话题,简要阐述"行动胜于空谈"的普遍意义;然后,围绕这一主题,讲述一则自己生活中的小故事,通过具体实例来展现行动的力量。再结合这个故事,谈谈自己的心得感悟。最后,总结全文,重申"行动胜于空谈"的观点,并鼓励读者。在时态运用上,由于本文是议论文,且涉及对过去经历的回顾和对未来行为的倡导,因此可以采用一般现在时来阐述观点和事实,同时适当穿插一般过去时来讲述具体的故事。人称以第一人称单数为主。注意确保论据充分、论证有力,语言准确、简洁明了,避免使用过于复杂或晦涩的词汇和句式。
这篇文章内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整,时态运用灵活准确。引言部分简洁明了,故事叙述具体且有教育意义,感悟深刻且积极向上,结论部分总结有力。As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great importance 这句话直接引出了主题,并强调了行动的重要性,为后文的故事和感悟做了很好的铺垫。In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one is very important. 这句话简洁地总结了全文的主旨,即设定明确的目标并采取行动去实现它们的重要性。这种总结方式既清晰又有力,给读者留下了深刻的印象。