专题09 书面表达 15道 （山东中考真题+中考模拟）-2025年山东中考英语高分提升之最新题速递【含答案+解析】
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2025年山东中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
专题09 书面表达 15道 （山东中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2025·泰安模拟）人生旅途有喜有悲，我们经历过，我们收获过，我们还将不断地去探索，去接触新知，创造更美好的未来同时生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命。假设你是Mary，你们学校正在开展回顾过去、展望未来，以"珍惜"为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿内容包括：
1. 你珍惜什么。
2. 生动描述你的一次经历；
3. 谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分。
4. 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are any important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2025·济南模拟）你校上周组织学生去附近的河岸清理垃圾，请你为校英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：1、活动介绍：2．活动意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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3．（2024·潍坊） Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现考生本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject: problems and solutions
Hey, guys! We have to face all kinds of problems in our daily life. However, different problems have different solutions. What problem did you meet and how did you solve it Please share your story with us. Harry, Australia
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua, China
4．（2024·菏泽） 假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以"A Surprise Brought Us Closer"为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述该节目；
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2024·东营） 假如你校校报英语专栏正在以"Take care of yourself (照顺好自己)"为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：1.我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）……2.具体应该怎么做；3.这样做的好处是什么。
Word bank physical health身体健康 life skills生活技能 mental health心理健康
要求：1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法；2文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；3.照抄试卷内容不得分。
Take care of yourself
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6．（2024·临沂） 假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求：1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric, Thanks for your e-mail. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Ping
7．（2024·烟台） 假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。
主要内容包括：
1.演出时间、地点；
2.课本剧内容简介及意义；
3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.
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Thanks for your attention!
8．（2024·滨州） 生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以"珍惜"为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.你珍惜什么；2.描述你的一次经历；3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.
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9．（2025·济南模拟）近几年来, 中华传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。越来越多的人穿汉服、诵读经典文学、演奏传统乐器、学习制作传统手工艺品……这些都是我们身边的传统文化。某英文杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受传统文化之美, 开辟了"Traditional Chinese culture around me"的专栏。假如你是刘美，请你写一封信投稿。
内容包括: 1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化；
2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解；
3.说明你是如何传播这种文化的。
要求: 1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词汇： hanfu n.汉服 handicraft n.手工艺品 classic n.经典作品, 名著 musical instrument 乐器
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread traditional Chinese culture in our daily life.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.
Yours,
Liu Mei
10．（2025·淄博模拟）"这么近，那么美，周末到河北！"已经成为河北的金字招牌。假如英语课上老师要求同学们介绍自己的家乡河北，请你根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文，推荐大家来河北游玩。
提示:
1. Where is Hebei
2. Where can people go for a visit What can people do there
3. What special foods can people enjoy
要求:
1. 短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: Chengde Mountain Resort (承德避暑山庄); Zhaozhou Bridge; beaches in Qinhuangdao; ski resorts in Zhangjiakou (张家口滑雪场)
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2024·青岛模拟）请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
要求：
1. 词数80-100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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12．（2024·曲阜模拟） 当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，关爱老人应从我们身边的小事做起。假如你是李华，李奶奶是你的邻居，她是一位独居老人，上周六，她生病住院了，请以"Could you please help the old woman "为题，给朋友Mike写一封求助信，请他在本周末给予帮助。
要求：1.须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；3.100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2024·莱芜模拟） 作文
难忘的初中四年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获也有不足，也有对未来的期盼。假如你是李华, 你们学校英语报社近期将举办以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life"为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
内容提示：1.介绍自己难忘的校园生活；2.描述对未来的期盼。
注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2024·天桥模拟）如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上了眼镜。6月6日是"全国爱眼日"。学校英文报拟组织一次征文活动，请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为 How to Protect Our Eyes 的征文稿。内容包括：1. 陈述影响学生视力的因素；2. 介绍保护眼睛的方法（请列举2—3种方法）;3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。
参考词汇： eyesight 视力
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（2024·济南模拟）习近平总书记强调：加快建设科技强国，实现高水平科技自立自强，科学技术是第一生产力，第一党争力，假如你是李华，上周跟随学校去科技馆参观，以下是你拍回来的几张照片，请结合图片和以下提示写一篇英语作文，内容包括：
1. What did you see there
2. What have you learned from the visit
3. What do you plan to do for China's science and technology industry
航天探险 机器伙伴 计算机发展史 身边的小发明
提示词：科技创新technological innovation
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数100左右.
Last weekend, our school organized a visit to the Science and Technology Museum.
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答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
There are any important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. For me, my best friend Jack is the person I want to value most.
Life is colorful with friends. Jack has been my friend since primary school. He is very interesting and so warm-hearted that he is willing to share things with others and always ready to help people. He studies very hard, so he always gets the top score in our class. Last year, I failed an English test and felt upset. Jack noticed that and came along to encourage me patiently. With his help, I didn't lose heart and finally got good grades. I think a real friend is someone who can help you when you are in trouble.
I feel so lucky to have a good friend like Jack and hope our friendship will last forever.
2．A Successful Cleanup Activity
Last weekend, a volunteer activity, aimed at cleaning up the river nearby, was organized for students of our school. Early in the morning, we, accompanied by our teachers, arrived at the river with garbage bags in hand. For several hours, we worked in groups, collecting bottles, cans, plastic bags and other garbage along the riverbanks. With our hard work, the river soon returned to its former cleanliness.
By participating in this activity, not only did we contribute to the beautification of the local community, we also gained valuable team-working skills and developed a sense of responsibility towards our environment.
3．I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice.
Li Hua, China
本题是一篇材料作文写作，要求考生以李华的身份结合自身的经历用英语在 Teens Around
the World网站上跟贴 。写作背景：李华阅读了国际青少年交流网站Teens Around the World上新更新的帖子。内容包括：1. 点明主题——遇到的问题；2. 具体说明解决问题的方法；3. 阐述解决问题后的收获。注意：1. 时态为一般过去时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，详略得当，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为80个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子： I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. （运用了it做形式宾语指代真正的宾语：动词不定式）；Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates.（运用了where引导的定语从句）；Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. （运用了and连接的并列句）。2. 亮点词汇：face a big problem面临一个大问题；imitate the pronunciation模仿发音；the importance of persistence and practice坚持和练习的重要性；additionally 此外； become confident in doing sth 对做某事变得有信心 ； significantly 显著地。
4．A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
At the beginning of the ceremony, our headmaster delivered a speech, expressing his praise, encouragement and expectations to us. The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates. Our teachers collected photos of all of the graduates and made a poster of us all, spelling out the words "Happy Graduation." They also sang an original song for us, wishing us a bright and wonderful future.
I was deeply moved by the teachers' program. I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.
本文是一篇材料作文；介绍一次意外让我们更加亲近的经历。一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅；要求以"A Surprise Brought Us Closer"为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出对毕业典礼的介绍；第二步，具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目；第三步，表达自己的感受。
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，语法规范 准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如亮点词汇At the beginning of... 在……开始；deliver a speech 发表演讲；prepare for 准备。高分句型①The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates.（表语从句和定语从句）。 I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.（并列句）。
5．Take care of yourself
As we all know, health is very important in our life. So you should take care of yourself.
It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet. Also, you should keep doing exercise. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. They are good for your health and have a strong body. What's more, learning some life skills is of great importance. You can learn how to wash clothes, cook and so on. They help you be independent. At the same time, you should do your best to keep your mental health. You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems. In this way, you will have more courage to face the challenges ahead.
Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你校校报英语专栏正在以"Take care of yourself (照顺好自己)"为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍健康的重要性和话题你需要照顾自己；然后从身体健康、生活技能和心理健康介绍怎样照顾自己；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：as we all know；take care of；try to do；keep doing exercise；as well；be good for；be of great importance；learn how to do；help sb. do sth.；at the same time；do one's best to do；in this way等。好词好句运用为文章增色不少，如：状语从句It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet.You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems；动名词做主语Having enough sleep is necessary as well.learning some life skills is of great importance.；祈使句Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!等。连词so、also、what's more、at the same time、when、in this way、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；介绍自己梦想的工作。时态主要为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"；根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇be glad to乐于……；the power of an example榜样的力量；fail in在……方面失败；cheer sb. up使某人振作起来。高分句型I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
7．One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend. It is a story about an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Yu Gong decided to move the mountains with his family. Many people laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
After watching the drama, you are welcome to give your opinions and suggestions on it.
Thanks for your attention!
本文是一篇材料作文；时态以"一般过去时"为主；且写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。 在撰写这篇初中英语作文时，首先需明确广播稿的正式与友好语气，以吸引外国学生的注意力。开头简要介绍自己是光明中学英语社团的一员，随即宣布周末即将举行的活动——课本剧《愚公移山》的演出。接下来，明确告知演出的具体时间（如周六下午2点）和地点（如学校礼堂），确保信息清晰明了。随后，利用简短而富有吸引力的语言概述《愚公移山》的故事梗概，强调其寓意——坚持不懈、勇于挑战的精神，并简述这一经典故事对现代学生的教育意义。最后，以开放和欢迎的姿态邀请外国学生前来观看，并鼓励他们积极分享对演出的意见和建议，以促进文化交流与理解。整体写作思路应围绕"吸引注意—提供信息—激发兴趣—促进互动"的逻辑展开。
这篇范文获得高分的要点在于其结构清晰、内容完整且语言地道。它首先明确了广播稿的目的和受众，即通知来访的外国学生；随后，简洁明了地介绍了课本剧的名称、时间和地点，并详细概述了《愚公移山》的故事情节及其寓意，展现了作者良好的故事叙述和主题提炼能力；最后，以开放和友好的态度邀请观众提出意见和建议，体现了互动性和包容性。范文中的好词好句如"A story about an old man named Yu Gong"直接点明故事主角，引人入胜；"He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died"生动展现了愚公的坚韧不拔；"The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard"则精炼地概括了故事的深刻寓意，令人深思。整篇文章流畅自然，既符合广播稿的特点，又充分展现了作者的英语水平和文化素养。
8．One possible version:
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. Let me tell a story about me.
Last summer, I wanted a new bike. But my family was too poor to afford it. I was very sad and upset. After three weeks, I saw an old bike standing in front of my house. "I don't like the bike. It is too old." My mother didn't say anything after hearing my words. At that night, my father told me my mother cooked some dishes in the restaurant to buy this bike. Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother's love. I regretted what I did and apologized to my mother.
From this experience, we should value what we have and the persons who love us.
本文是一篇记叙文，为提纲作文； 介绍日常生活中重要的事情，值得珍惜的事情。时态主要为一般过去时，人称以第一人称单数为主。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。第一步，开头已给出，引出故事； 第二步，分享自己的经历和收获；第三步，表达感悟。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇too…to太……而不能 ；in front of在……前面 ；apologize to向……道歉。高分句型Let me tell a story about me.（祈使句） ；Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother's love.（让步状语从句）。
9．例文：
Dear Sir / Madam,
I'm glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread traditional Chinese culture in our daily life.
Paper cutting is a very common but typical traditional art form that we can see everywhere around us—on the windows, cups or bags. My mom loves paper cuttings and she puts them up when the Spring Festival is coming. When I was a little kid, she taught me how to make paper cuttings. In my eyes, paper cutting is part of traditional Chinese culture and through paper cutting, people express their best wishes. I like the paper cutting of the Chinese character "chun" because spring means hope to me. I hope every spring is a good start for the year. Now I'm in a paper-cutting club. We often organize some activities or do some projects with our partners. For example, we can cut out some places of interest in Hebei. In this way, we can introduce the local culture of Hebei in a traditional way. I hope more and more people can know better about our traditional culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Liu Mei
10．例文
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
Hebei is to the north of the Yellow River and to the east of the Taihang Mountains. It has a population of about 74 million. Its capital city is Shijiazhuang. There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Chengde Mountain Resort, Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao and ski resorts in Zhangjiakou. You can visit the places where the ancient emperors had been. Besides, relaxing on the beaches is also a good choice. Of course you can also enjoy skiing here. There are also many kinds of delicious local foods in my hometown such as meat pie and smoked meat. I'm sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here.
So near! So beautiful! Welcome to Hebei on weekends.
11．例文
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
12．Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors.
Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. Our community volunteers took turns to take care of her. This weekend, it's my turn, but I have an exam. So there is no one around her. Could you please go to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit In the hospital, you can help the old woman wash clothes, or chat with her. I hope she will be very happy and feel much better with your help.
Hope to get the reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你是李华，李奶奶是你的邻居，她是一位独居老人，上周六，她生病住院了，请以"Could you please help the old woman "为题，给朋友Mike写一封求助信，请他在本周末给予帮助。写作中要包含三方面的内容，李奶奶生病住院的现状；你无法照顾她的原因；请求Mike帮忙，交代他可以为李奶奶做的事。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第二人称单数和第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。take turns to do sth轮流做某事，take care of照顾，chat with sb和某人聊天，with one's help在某人的帮助下等以及句型结构，如Could you please go to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit In the hospital, you can help the old woman wash clothes, or chat with her.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
13．My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn't do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn't have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.
Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你是李华，你们学校英语报社近期将举办以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life"为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。写作中要包含所给的两方面的内容，介绍自己难忘的校园生活和描述对未来的期盼。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。not only…but also…不仅……而且……，be grateful to sb对某人感恩，get on well with与……相处的好，give up放弃等以及句型结构，如I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
14．How to Protect Our Eyes
As the saying goes, "Eyes are the window to the soul." However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. The main reason is incorrect writing posture. Some people read in very dark or strong light. Some people lie in bed or read in the car. What's more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV.
Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight.
Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you!
这是一篇材料作文。要求按照所给内容写一篇以"How to Protect Our Eyes"为主题的征文稿。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍影响学生视力的因素；第二步，介绍保护眼睛的方法；第三步，号召大家一起保护眼睛。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如the bad habits of ………的坏习惯；What's more而且；Additionally另外；Together总之等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（and表并列）。
15． Last weekend, our school organized a visit to the Science and Technology Museum. I saw many models of planes, satellites and rockets that I had never seen before. China had great achievements in space exploration. I also saw many robots that can work as human's helpers. They were smart and interesting. Besides, I learned the development history of computers. The first computer was much larger and heavier than that we have today. In the museum, we could also see some small inventions in our daily life such as the toy ships. It was really an eye-opening day to me.
When I saw these in the museum I was proud that human beings had made great progress in technological innovation. As we all know, the science and technology are the primary productive forces and the first competitiveness. We Chinese need to work hard to promote scientific and technological development and innovation, which will make our country stronger and better. As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university. In this way, I can get more chance to make a great contribution to China's science and technology industry.
这是一篇材料作文。要求按照所给内容写一篇英语短文，写下参观科技馆的所见所感。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步：介绍在科技馆的见闻；第二步：分享自己的体会；第三步：表达自己的决心。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如work as充当，担任；As we all know众所周知；such as例如；in this way以这种方式等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I saw many models of planes, satellites and rockets that I had never seen before.（that引导的定语从句）；When I saw these in the museum I was proud that human beings had made great progress in technological innovation.（when引导的时间状语从句）；We Chinese need to work hard to promote scientific and technological development and innovation, which will make our country stronger and better.（which引导的定语从句）。
专题09 书面表达 15道 （山东中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2025·泰安模拟）人生旅途有喜有悲，我们经历过，我们收获过，我们还将不断地去探索，去接触新知，创造更美好的未来同时生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命。假设你是Mary，你们学校正在开展回顾过去、展望未来，以"珍惜"为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿内容包括：
1. 你珍惜什么。
2. 生动描述你的一次经历；
3. 谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分。
4. 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are any important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2025·济南模拟）你校上周组织学生去附近的河岸清理垃圾，请你为校英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：1、活动介绍：2．活动意义。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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3．（2024·潍坊） Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现考生本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject: problems and solutions
Hey, guys! We have to face all kinds of problems in our daily life. However, different problems have different solutions. What problem did you meet and how did you solve it Please share your story with us. Harry, Australia
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4．（2024·菏泽） 假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以"A Surprise Brought Us Closer"为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述该节目；
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2024·东营） 假如你校校报英语专栏正在以"Take care of yourself (照顺好自己)"为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：1.我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）……2.具体应该怎么做；3.这样做的好处是什么。
Word bank physical health身体健康 life skills生活技能 mental health心理健康
要求：1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法；2文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；3.照抄试卷内容不得分。
Take care of yourself
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6．（2024·临沂） 假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I'm really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求：1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric, Thanks for your e-mail. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Ping
7．（2024·烟台） 假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。
主要内容包括：
1.演出时间、地点；
2.课本剧内容简介及意义；
3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。
提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.
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Thanks for your attention!
8．（2024·滨州） 生活中有很多值得我们珍惜的东西，如时间、健康、亲人、生命等。假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展以"珍惜"为主题的征文活动，请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.你珍惜什么；2.描述你的一次经历；3.谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives.
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9．（2025·济南模拟）近几年来, 中华传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。越来越多的人穿汉服、诵读经典文学、演奏传统乐器、学习制作传统手工艺品……这些都是我们身边的传统文化。某英文杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受传统文化之美, 开辟了"Traditional Chinese culture around me"的专栏。假如你是刘美，请你写一封信投稿。
内容包括: 1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化；
2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解；
3.说明你是如何传播这种文化的。
要求: 1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇仅供参考；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考词汇： hanfu n.汉服 handicraft n.手工艺品 classic n.经典作品, 名著 musical instrument 乐器
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I'm glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread traditional Chinese culture in our daily life.
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Yours,
Liu Mei
10．（2025·淄博模拟）"这么近，那么美，周末到河北！"已经成为河北的金字招牌。假如英语课上老师要求同学们介绍自己的家乡河北，请你根据以下提示, 用英语写一篇短文，推荐大家来河北游玩。
提示:
1. Where is Hebei
2. Where can people go for a visit What can people do there
3. What special foods can people enjoy
要求:
1. 短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: Chengde Mountain Resort (承德避暑山庄); Zhaozhou Bridge; beaches in Qinhuangdao; ski resorts in Zhangjiakou (张家口滑雪场)
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
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内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
要求：
1. 词数80-100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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12．（2024·曲阜模拟） 当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，关爱老人应从我们身边的小事做起。假如你是李华，李奶奶是你的邻居，她是一位独居老人，上周六，她生病住院了，请以"Could you please help the old woman "为题，给朋友Mike写一封求助信，请他在本周末给予帮助。
要求：1.须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；3.100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
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Li Hua
13．（2024·莱芜模拟） 作文
难忘的初中四年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获也有不足，也有对未来的期盼。假如你是李华, 你们学校英语报社近期将举办以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life"为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
内容提示：1.介绍自己难忘的校园生活；2.描述对未来的期盼。
注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2024·天桥模拟）如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上了眼镜。6月6日是"全国爱眼日"。学校英文报拟组织一次征文活动，请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为 How to Protect Our Eyes 的征文稿。内容包括：1. 陈述影响学生视力的因素；2. 介绍保护眼睛的方法（请列举2—3种方法）;3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。
参考词汇： eyesight 视力
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（2024·济南模拟）习近平总书记强调：加快建设科技强国，实现高水平科技自立自强，科学技术是第一生产力，第一党争力，假如你是李华，上周跟随学校去科技馆参观，以下是你拍回来的几张照片，请结合图片和以下提示写一篇英语作文，内容包括：
1. What did you see there
2. What have you learned from the visit
3. What do you plan to do for China's science and technology industry
航天探险 机器伙伴 计算机发展史 身边的小发明
提示词：科技创新technological innovation
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数100左右.
Last weekend, our school organized a visit to the Science and Technology Museum.
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答案解析部分
1．One possible version:
There are any important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. For me, my best friend Jack is the person I want to value most.
Life is colorful with friends. Jack has been my friend since primary school. He is very interesting and so warm-hearted that he is willing to share things with others and always ready to help people. He studies very hard, so he always gets the top score in our class. Last year, I failed an English test and felt upset. Jack noticed that and came along to encourage me patiently. With his help, I didn't lose heart and finally got good grades. I think a real friend is someone who can help you when you are in trouble.
I feel so lucky to have a good friend like Jack and hope our friendship will last forever.
2．A Successful Cleanup Activity
Last weekend, a volunteer activity, aimed at cleaning up the river nearby, was organized for students of our school. Early in the morning, we, accompanied by our teachers, arrived at the river with garbage bags in hand. For several hours, we worked in groups, collecting bottles, cans, plastic bags and other garbage along the riverbanks. With our hard work, the river soon returned to its former cleanliness.
By participating in this activity, not only did we contribute to the beautification of the local community, we also gained valuable team-working skills and developed a sense of responsibility towards our environment.
3．I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice.
Li Hua, China
本题是一篇材料作文写作，要求考生以李华的身份结合自身的经历用英语在 Teens Around
the World网站上跟贴 。写作背景：李华阅读了国际青少年交流网站Teens Around the World上新更新的帖子。内容包括：1. 点明主题——遇到的问题；2. 具体说明解决问题的方法；3. 阐述解决问题后的收获。注意：1. 时态为一般过去时；2. 注意不要遗漏写作要点，详略得当，突出写作重点；3. 注意语句表达规范流畅，逻辑正确，层次分明；4. 不能使用真实的名称；5. 写作词数为80个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用了一定数量的句式结构，让句子表达更加生动传神，同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如：1. 高分句子： I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. （运用了it做形式宾语指代真正的宾语：动词不定式）；Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates.（运用了where引导的定语从句）；Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. （运用了and连接的并列句）。2. 亮点词汇：face a big problem面临一个大问题；imitate the pronunciation模仿发音；the importance of persistence and practice坚持和练习的重要性；additionally 此外； become confident in doing sth 对做某事变得有信心 ； significantly 显著地。
4．A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
At the beginning of the ceremony, our headmaster delivered a speech, expressing his praise, encouragement and expectations to us. The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates. Our teachers collected photos of all of the graduates and made a poster of us all, spelling out the words "Happy Graduation." They also sang an original song for us, wishing us a bright and wonderful future.
I was deeply moved by the teachers' program. I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.
本文是一篇材料作文；介绍一次意外让我们更加亲近的经历。一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅；要求以"A Surprise Brought Us Closer"为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第一步，引出对毕业典礼的介绍；第二步，具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目；第三步，表达自己的感受。
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，语法规范 准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如亮点词汇At the beginning of... 在……开始；deliver a speech 发表演讲；prepare for 准备。高分句型①The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates.（表语从句和定语从句）。 I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.（并列句）。
5．Take care of yourself
As we all know, health is very important in our life. So you should take care of yourself.
It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet. Also, you should keep doing exercise. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. They are good for your health and have a strong body. What's more, learning some life skills is of great importance. You can learn how to wash clothes, cook and so on. They help you be independent. At the same time, you should do your best to keep your mental health. You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems. In this way, you will have more courage to face the challenges ahead.
Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你校校报英语专栏正在以"Take care of yourself (照顺好自己)"为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍健康的重要性和话题你需要照顾自己；然后从身体健康、生活技能和心理健康介绍怎样照顾自己；最后总结。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：as we all know；take care of；try to do；keep doing exercise；as well；be good for；be of great importance；learn how to do；help sb. do sth.；at the same time；do one's best to do；in this way等。好词好句运用为文章增色不少，如：状语从句It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet.You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems；动名词做主语Having enough sleep is necessary as well.learning some life skills is of great importance.；祈使句Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!等。连词so、also、what's more、at the same time、when、in this way、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
6．Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. I'm very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；介绍自己梦想的工作。时态主要为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"；根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇be glad to乐于……；the power of an example榜样的力量；fail in在……方面失败；cheer sb. up使某人振作起来。高分句型I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
7．One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend. It is a story about an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Yu Gong decided to move the mountains with his family. Many people laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
After watching the drama, you are welcome to give your opinions and suggestions on it.
Thanks for your attention!
本文是一篇材料作文；时态以"一般过去时"为主；且写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。 在撰写这篇初中英语作文时，首先需明确广播稿的正式与友好语气，以吸引外国学生的注意力。开头简要介绍自己是光明中学英语社团的一员，随即宣布周末即将举行的活动——课本剧《愚公移山》的演出。接下来，明确告知演出的具体时间（如周六下午2点）和地点（如学校礼堂），确保信息清晰明了。随后，利用简短而富有吸引力的语言概述《愚公移山》的故事梗概，强调其寓意——坚持不懈、勇于挑战的精神，并简述这一经典故事对现代学生的教育意义。最后，以开放和欢迎的姿态邀请外国学生前来观看，并鼓励他们积极分享对演出的意见和建议，以促进文化交流与理解。整体写作思路应围绕"吸引注意—提供信息—激发兴趣—促进互动"的逻辑展开。
这篇范文获得高分的要点在于其结构清晰、内容完整且语言地道。它首先明确了广播稿的目的和受众，即通知来访的外国学生；随后，简洁明了地介绍了课本剧的名称、时间和地点，并详细概述了《愚公移山》的故事情节及其寓意，展现了作者良好的故事叙述和主题提炼能力；最后，以开放和友好的态度邀请观众提出意见和建议，体现了互动性和包容性。范文中的好词好句如"A story about an old man named Yu Gong"直接点明故事主角，引人入胜；"He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died"生动展现了愚公的坚韧不拔；"The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard"则精炼地概括了故事的深刻寓意，令人深思。整篇文章流畅自然，既符合广播稿的特点，又充分展现了作者的英语水平和文化素养。
8．One possible version:
There are many important things that are worth valuing in our daily lives. Let me tell a story about me.
Last summer, I wanted a new bike. But my family was too poor to afford it. I was very sad and upset. After three weeks, I saw an old bike standing in front of my house. "I don't like the bike. It is too old." My mother didn't say anything after hearing my words. At that night, my father told me my mother cooked some dishes in the restaurant to buy this bike. Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother's love. I regretted what I did and apologized to my mother.
From this experience, we should value what we have and the persons who love us.
本文是一篇记叙文，为提纲作文； 介绍日常生活中重要的事情，值得珍惜的事情。时态主要为一般过去时，人称以第一人称单数为主。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。第一步，开头已给出，引出故事； 第二步，分享自己的经历和收获；第三步，表达感悟。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，亮点词汇，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如亮点词汇too…to太……而不能 ；in front of在……前面 ；apologize to向……道歉。高分句型Let me tell a story about me.（祈使句） ；Although it was not the one that I wanted, it was my mother's love.（让步状语从句）。
9．例文：
Dear Sir / Madam,
I'm glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread traditional Chinese culture in our daily life.
Paper cutting is a very common but typical traditional art form that we can see everywhere around us—on the windows, cups or bags. My mom loves paper cuttings and she puts them up when the Spring Festival is coming. When I was a little kid, she taught me how to make paper cuttings. In my eyes, paper cutting is part of traditional Chinese culture and through paper cutting, people express their best wishes. I like the paper cutting of the Chinese character "chun" because spring means hope to me. I hope every spring is a good start for the year. Now I'm in a paper-cutting club. We often organize some activities or do some projects with our partners. For example, we can cut out some places of interest in Hebei. In this way, we can introduce the local culture of Hebei in a traditional way. I hope more and more people can know better about our traditional culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Liu Mei
10．例文
Hello, everyone. I want to introduce my hometown Hebei.
Hebei is to the north of the Yellow River and to the east of the Taihang Mountains. It has a population of about 74 million. Its capital city is Shijiazhuang. There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Chengde Mountain Resort, Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao and ski resorts in Zhangjiakou. You can visit the places where the ancient emperors had been. Besides, relaxing on the beaches is also a good choice. Of course you can also enjoy skiing here. There are also many kinds of delicious local foods in my hometown such as meat pie and smoked meat. I'm sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here.
So near! So beautiful! Welcome to Hebei on weekends.
11．例文
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
12．Could you please help the old woman
Dear Mike,
Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors.
Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. Our community volunteers took turns to take care of her. This weekend, it's my turn, but I have an exam. So there is no one around her. Could you please go to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit In the hospital, you can help the old woman wash clothes, or chat with her. I hope she will be very happy and feel much better with your help.
Hope to get the reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你是李华，李奶奶是你的邻居，她是一位独居老人，上周六，她生病住院了，请以"Could you please help the old woman "为题，给朋友Mike写一封求助信，请他在本周末给予帮助。写作中要包含三方面的内容，李奶奶生病住院的现状；你无法照顾她的原因；请求Mike帮忙，交代他可以为李奶奶做的事。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第二人称单数和第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。take turns to do sth轮流做某事，take care of照顾，chat with sb和某人聊天，with one's help在某人的帮助下等以及句型结构，如Could you please go to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit In the hospital, you can help the old woman wash clothes, or chat with her.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
13．My Unforgettable Middle School Life
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn't do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn't have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.
Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
这是一篇命题作文。要求假如你是李华，你们学校英语报社近期将举办以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life"为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。写作中要包含所给的两方面的内容，介绍自己难忘的校园生活和描述对未来的期盼。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。not only…but also…不仅……而且……，be grateful to sb对某人感恩，get on well with与……相处的好，give up放弃等以及句型结构，如I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
14．How to Protect Our Eyes
As the saying goes, "Eyes are the window to the soul." However, 70% of us have poor eyesight. What has caused this problem The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes. The main reason is incorrect writing posture. Some people read in very dark or strong light. Some people lie in bed or read in the car. What's more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV.
Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight.
Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you!
这是一篇材料作文。要求按照所给内容写一篇以"How to Protect Our Eyes"为主题的征文稿。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步，介绍影响学生视力的因素；第二步，介绍保护眼睛的方法；第三步，号召大家一起保护眼睛。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如the bad habits of ………的坏习惯；What's more而且；Additionally另外；Together总之等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（and表并列）。
15． Last weekend, our school organized a visit to the Science and Technology Museum. I saw many models of planes, satellites and rockets that I had never seen before. China had great achievements in space exploration. I also saw many robots that can work as human's helpers. They were smart and interesting. Besides, I learned the development history of computers. The first computer was much larger and heavier than that we have today. In the museum, we could also see some small inventions in our daily life such as the toy ships. It was really an eye-opening day to me.
When I saw these in the museum I was proud that human beings had made great progress in technological innovation. As we all know, the science and technology are the primary productive forces and the first competitiveness. We Chinese need to work hard to promote scientific and technological development and innovation, which will make our country stronger and better. As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university. In this way, I can get more chance to make a great contribution to China's science and technology industry.
这是一篇材料作文。要求按照所给内容写一篇英语短文，写下参观科技馆的所见所感。写作时应遵循以下步骤：第一步：介绍在科技馆的见闻；第二步：分享自己的体会；第三步：表达自己的决心。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时，写作要点已给出，写作时应注意文章逻辑通顺，书写工整，并突出重点。
这篇文章内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如work as充当，担任；As we all know众所周知；such as例如；in this way以这种方式等运用较为得体，表达比较准确。下列句式增加了文章亮点，使文章更加流畅自然。如：I saw many models of planes, satellites and rockets that I had never seen before.（that引导的定语从句）；When I saw these in the museum I was proud that human beings had made great progress in technological innovation.（when引导的时间状语从句）；We Chinese need to work hard to promote scientific and technological development and innovation, which will make our country stronger and better.（which引导的定语从句）。
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