专题30 书面表达 考点2 说明介绍类（第02期）
（2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题）
你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．简要描述;
2．体验和感受。
Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Time last Sunday
Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位)
注意：
1．词数为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4．短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
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（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）
传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项：
1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
（2024·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）
最近，我国第一只预备役柯基警犬福仔在网络上爆火出圈，虽然他腿短，但却因为其独特的优势使他在众多警犬中脱颖而出。请根据下列信息，以“福仔”的口吻向大家介绍一下自己。
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.至少含有两个复合句。
Fu Zai’s Personal File (个人档案) Age: 8 months old Color: brown and white Weight: about 7 kilos Experiences: ·be a pet dog; in the past ·start training; 2 months old Abilities: ·nose; smell ... ·short legs; not run fast; search small spaces The happiest thing: be carried on the trainer’s back Hope: official (正式的)…
Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog (预备役警犬).
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·宁夏·中考真题）
下周三，你校将举办运动会。假如你是校学生会主席，请你代表学生会在校宣传栏英语专栏上用英语给全校学生写一则通知。
内容包括：
1. 时间：下周三上午八点开始，周五下午五点结束；
2. 地点：学校操场；
3. 活动要求：
（1）准时到达操场；
（2）穿运动鞋；
（3）做一些志愿工作；
……（至少再补充两项活动要求）
写作要求：
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：volunteer work 志愿工作 Students’ Union 学生会
Notice
Dear students,
We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We hope all of you have fun.
Students’ Union
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）
话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以How to Improve English Listening and Speaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。
提示词：improve, listen to the teacher, English cartoons, conversation, communicate
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·甘肃兰州·中考真题）
2024兰州马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕，来自国内外的四万名选手共跑 “百里黄河风情线”，感受 “交响丝路·如意甘肃”的独特魅力。此次赛事的成功举办，不仅提升了兰州的知名度和美誉度，更激发了市民的自豪感和归属感。
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文，在班级英语沙龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
内容要求：
1. 短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容；
2. 提出个人看法及观点。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数，不用抄写在答题卡上。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·辽宁·中考真题）
假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）告知你的打算；
（2）询问他的想法；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
（2024·山东菏泽·中考真题）
假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述该节目；
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
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9．（2024·四川内江·中考真题）
假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后，他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容，给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua, I had a good time in your school last week. It is so beautiful and clean. I want to know as students, 1.how you make the school green; 2.how you keep the school clean; 3.how you reuse waste; 4.how you save energy. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alan
参考词汇：plant种植；植物；environment环境；throw扔；bin垃圾桶；sort the rubbish 垃圾分类；turn off 关闭；tap 水龙头
注意：
（1）所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容，并进行合理拓展；
（2）文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数100词左右。
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21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题30 书面表达 考点2 说明介绍类（第02期）
（2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题）
你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．简要描述;
2．体验和感受。
Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Time last Sunday
Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位)
注意：
1．词数为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4．短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
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【答案】One possible version,
Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community
Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer.
Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock. We volunteers were then divided into groups. Some made eco-friendly products. Others gave out reusable water bottles and the bags we made. I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town.
I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring. Wish everyone could care about our community and earth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，着重突出“活动”部分，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍志愿者活动的时间、地点、人物等；
第二步，具体介绍志愿者活动内容；
最后一步，表达个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be divided into被分成
②give out分发
③go all out全力以赴
④care about关心
[高分句型]
①Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock.（before引导时间状语从句）
②I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town.（疑问词+动词不定式）
③I shared what I know with others through the activity.（what引导宾语从句）
（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）
传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项：
1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
（2024·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）
最近，我国第一只预备役柯基警犬福仔在网络上爆火出圈，虽然他腿短，但却因为其独特的优势使他在众多警犬中脱颖而出。请根据下列信息，以“福仔”的口吻向大家介绍一下自己。
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.至少含有两个复合句。
Fu Zai’s Personal File (个人档案) Age: 8 months old Color: brown and white Weight: about 7 kilos Experiences: ·be a pet dog; in the past ·start training; 2 months old Abilities: ·nose; smell ... ·short legs; not run fast; search small spaces The happiest thing: be carried on the trainer’s back Hope: official (正式的)…
Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog (预备役警犬).
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【答案】例文:
Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog. Let me introduce myself to you.
I’m eight months old. I’m brown and white. I weigh about seven kilos. I was a pet dog in the past. And I started training when I was 2 months old. I can use my nose to smell dangerous things. I have short legs so I can’t run fast. But I can search small spaces because of my short legs. I am often carried on the trainer’s back when we go outside to work. That is my happiest thing.
I hope I can be an official police dog soon. I’m happy to serve the people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以“福仔”的口吻介绍自己的基本信息、经历、能力；
第二步，介绍最开心的事以及期望。
[亮点词汇]
①dangerous things危险物品
②because of由于
[高分句型]
①And I started training when I was 2 months old.（时间状语从句）
②I hope I can be an official police dog soon.（宾语从句）
（2024·宁夏·中考真题）
下周三，你校将举办运动会。假如你是校学生会主席，请你代表学生会在校宣传栏英语专栏上用英语给全校学生写一则通知。
内容包括：
1. 时间：下周三上午八点开始，周五下午五点结束；
2. 地点：学校操场；
3. 活动要求：
（1）准时到达操场；
（2）穿运动鞋；
（3）做一些志愿工作；
……（至少再补充两项活动要求）
写作要求：
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：volunteer work 志愿工作 Students’ Union 学生会
Notice
Dear students,
We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We hope all of you have fun.
Students’ Union
【答案】例文
NoticeDear students,
We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting. It will begin at 8:00 am next Wednesday and end at 5:00 pm next Friday. It will be held on our playground. The followings are what you should pay attention to.
First, you must get to the playground on time. Don’t be late. Second, you should wear comfortable clothes and sports shoes. Third, you need to do some volunteer work, such as cleaning the playground, giving some water to the runners. Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins. Last but not least, you can bring some snacks or drinks.
We hope all of you have fun.
Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍运动会开始的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍运动会的注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②on time按时
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①It will be held on our playground.（一般将来时被动语态）
②Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins.（when引导时间状语从句）
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）
话题作文：英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。请你以How to Improve English Listening and Speaking为题，分享一下提高英语听说能力的方法。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分。
提示词：improve, listen to the teacher, English cartoons, conversation, communicate
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really important in learning English. Today I would like to share some useful tips on how to improve English listening and speaking skills with you.
First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Secondly, we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech competitions and English evenings. Through these activities we can improve our English skills in an easy and relaxing way. Thirdly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.
All in all, what we need is more free time and more space. We must be able to master listening and speaking skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题目内容介绍如何提高英语听说能力，可结合实例。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示要分享一些提高英语听说能力的方法；
第二步，详细介绍提高听说能力的方法；
第三步，提出希望或鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②have fun doing sth.做某事玩得开心
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①As English learners, we all know that only by mastering listening and speaking skills can we learn English well.(宾语从句以及倒装句)
②we need to find more opportunities to communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.(because引导的原因状语从句)
（2024·甘肃兰州·中考真题）
2024兰州马拉松于5月26日在金城兰州圆满落幕，来自国内外的四万名选手共跑 “百里黄河风情线”，感受 “交响丝路·如意甘肃”的独特魅力。此次赛事的成功举办，不仅提升了兰州的知名度和美誉度，更激发了市民的自豪感和归属感。
请你以“Marathon in My Eyes”为题写一篇英文短文，在班级英语沙龙活动中分享对此项赛事的看法。
内容要求：
1. 短文应包括以上思维导图中所有提示内容；
2. 提出个人看法及观点。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息；
4. 文章标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数，不用抄写在答题卡上。
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Marathon in My Eyes
This year, 2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held. I feel proud of my hometown. I’d like to share my ideas with you.
First, the government organized the event well. It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience. Then, the runners were welcome. They tried their best to finish the marathon. After the event, they tasted some delicious foods. Their spirit encouraged more people. Next, the volunteers also played an important role in the event. They worked hard to support the runners. What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.
In my opinion, the event was a great success. We should hold it every year. It is not only good for our health, but also a wonderful way to bring people closer together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上、下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体介绍这项赛事的参与者；
第三步，提出个人看法及观点。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②play an important role 发挥重要作用
③support 支持
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.（what引导的主语从句）
（2024·辽宁·中考真题）
假定你是李辉，你组建的社团打算在暑假期间设计、制作飞机模型。得知你的英国朋友 Eric有意参与。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）告知你的打算；
（2）询问他的想法；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
How is everything going I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation. We are going to design and build model airplanes.
Since I know you have a great interest in aviation, I thought you might want to join us. It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us. Please let me know what you think about this plan. Your participation would mean a lot to us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，并告诉对方你的暑期打算；
第二步，询问对方的想法；
第三步，期待对方的回复，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be going to do sth. 打算做某事
②share sth. with sb. 与某人分享……
③have a great interest in 对……有极大的兴趣
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you about an exciting project that my club is planning for the summer vacation.（that引导的定语从句）
②It would be wonderful if you could share your ideas and skills with us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2024·山东菏泽·中考真题）
假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述该节目；
2. 表达你的感受。
写作要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
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【答案】例文
A Surprise Brought Us Closer
Last week, we had a graduation ceremony in our school.
At the beginning of the ceremony, our headmaster delivered a speech, expressing his praise, encouragement and expectations to us. The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates. Our teachers collected photos of all of the graduates and made a poster of us all, spelling out the words “Happy Graduation.” They also sang an original song for us, wishing us a bright and wonderful future.
I was deeply moved by the teachers’ program. I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅；
③提示：要求以“A Surprise Brought Us Closer”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对毕业典礼的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①At the beginning of... 在……开始
②deliver a speech 发表演讲
③prepare for 准备
[高分句型]
①The most surprising thing was the program that our teacher prepared for all our graduates.（表语从句和定语从句）
② I sincerely thank the teachers for their help and support in the past three years, and I wish everyone the best in the future.（并列句）
9．（2024·四川内江·中考真题）
假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后，他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容，给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua, I had a good time in your school last week. It is so beautiful and clean. I want to know as students, 1.how you make the school green; 2.how you keep the school clean; 3.how you reuse waste; 4.how you save energy. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alan
参考词汇：plant种植；植物；environment环境；throw扔；bin垃圾桶；sort the rubbish 垃圾分类；turn off 关闭；tap 水龙头
注意：
（1）所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容，并进行合理拓展；
（2）文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数100词左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Alan,
I am pleased to hear from you. I’m also glad you like our school. Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year. Secondly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage, we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin. Thirdly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks. At the same time, we will also use old items to make some reusable items, such as using cans as pen holders. Finally, to save energy, we turn off the tap when brushing our teeth. When we leave the classroom, we turn off the power. These are some of our approaches. Do you usually do this too I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对收到对方的来信表示开心，并引出主题；
第二步，根据对方邮件的问题，逐一进行回答。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的来信
②At the same time与此同时
[高分句型]
①If we see garbage, we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin.（条件状语从句）
②When we leave the classroom, we turn off the power.（时间状语从句）
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