专题32 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（第02期）
（2024·北京·中考真题）
某英文网站正在开展以“记好友，叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最好的一位朋友，并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。
提示词语：kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support
内容提示：
·Who is your best friend Please describe him/ her.
·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
I’m glad to say something about my best friend.
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【答案】One possible version:
I’m glad to say something about my best friend. Her name is Alice. She is helpful and always has a sweet smile on her face. She is really good at dancing.
Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. She encouraged me a lot and helped me practice the moves. Together, we gave a very successful performance. I will never forget this experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，介绍经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最好的朋友并进行描述；
第二步，分享你们之间发生的一次难忘的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①have a smile on one’s face面带微笑
②sign up for报名参加
③a large crowd of一大群
④a very successful performance一个非常成功的表演
[高分句型]
①Last term, there was a dancing festival in our school. (There be句型)
②We both signed up for it, but I was a little shy at first and afraid of dancing in front of a large crowd of people. (并列句)
（2024·山东潍坊·中考真题）
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现考生本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject: problems and solutions
Hey, guys! We have to face all kinds of problems in our daily life. However, different problems have different solutions. What problem did you meet and how did you solve it Please share your story with us. Harry, Australia
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Li Hua, China
【答案】
例文
I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice.
Li Hua, China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的帖子中提到的信息，结合自己的经历，介绍自己遇到的问题及解决方法，注意逻辑清晰，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题——遇到的问题；
第二步，具体介绍解决问题的方法；
第三步，讲述解决问题后的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①face a big problem面临一个大问题
②practice every day每天练习
③imitate the pronunciation模仿发音
④the importance of persistence and practice坚持和练习的重要性
[高分句型]
①I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently.（it作形式宾语）
②Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates.（where引导定语从句）
（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）
假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I’m really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric, Thanks for your e-mail. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；
第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to乐于……
②the power of an example榜样的力量
③fail in在……方面失败
④cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
⑤make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession and I enjoy staying with children.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.（although引导的让步状语从句）
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）
每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Point”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
（1）讲述一个自己的故事；
（2）你的感悟；
（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；
（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My Shining Point
I meet many excellent people every day and at the same time I also find myself really good. I can see the world with kind eyes. I think I don’t like to complain. I find it important to have a positive attitude.
Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise.
In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：以“My Shining Point”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②play a role in在……中扮演角色
③regard…as把……当作
[高分句型]
①However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导的定语从句)
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句)
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词： accident, hurt one’s leg, take…to the hospital, visit
要求：
1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数: 80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整， 语法正确，意思连贯， 合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名， 否则不得分。
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【答案】例文
I like playing basketball with my classmates. But last Saturday, I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. My classmates took me to the hospital quickly. The doctor put some medicine on the cut, and then put a bandage around the hurt part of the leg.
During my stay in the hospital, some of my classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork. That’s very kind of them. I will try my best to help others in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：图片中写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢和同学打篮球；
第二步，具体阐述上周六发生的事故；
第三步，最后表达对同学的感谢以及今后自己也会怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down跌倒
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
③try one’s best to do尽某人最大的努力做
[高分句型]
I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. （when引导的时间状语从句）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题32 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（第02期）
（2024·北京·中考真题）
某英文网站正在开展以“记好友，叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最好的一位朋友，并记述你们之间一段难忘的经历。
提示词语：kind, helpful, encourage, practice, support
内容提示：
·Who is your best friend Please describe him/ her.
·Share an unforgettable experience you had with him/ her.
I’m glad to say something about my best friend.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·山东潍坊·中考真题）
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：
1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现考生本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject: problems and solutions
Hey, guys! We have to face all kinds of problems in our daily life. However, different problems have different solutions. What problem did you meet and how did you solve it Please share your story with us. Harry, Australia
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua, China
（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）
假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping, You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I’m really interested in it. Why did you choose it What/Who influenced you to make the decision Tell me your experience, please. I look forward to hearing from you soon! Eric
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric, Thanks for your e-mail. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping
（2024·吉林长春·中考真题）
每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“My Shining Point”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
（1）讲述一个自己的故事；
（2）你的感悟；
（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；
（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2024·黑龙江·中考真题）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词： accident, hurt one’s leg, take…to the hospital, visit
要求：
1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数: 80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整， 语法正确，意思连贯， 合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名， 否则不得分。
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