应用文写作之求助信
第一部分 题型分析
第二部分 写作方法
第三部分 常用句式
第四部分 写作模板
第五部分 模拟再现
第六部分 举一反三
第七部分 题型通关
题型分析
求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。其特点是模拟真实生活场景（如学习困难、活动筹备、信息咨询等），要求考生以书信形式寻求帮助。考查考生的语言应用能力（格式、逻辑、语言得体性）和问题解决能力（明确需求、合理表达请求）。通常给出2-3个要点（如描述问题、提出请求、表达感谢），要求覆盖所有要点内容，字数80左右。
写作方法
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:
1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。
2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
常用句式
礼貌表达需求
I am writing to ask for your help with...
（我写信是想请您帮助……）
I would be extremely grateful if you could...
（如果您能……，我将不胜感激。）
Could you possibly help me with...
（您能否帮助我……？）
I was wondering if you could give me some advice on...
（不知您能否就……给我一些建议？）
解释求助原因
Due to unexpected circumstances, I am unable to...
（由于突发情况，我无法……）
I am currently facing a challenge with...
（我目前在……方面遇到了困难。）
As a beginner in..., I find it difficult to...
（作为……的初学者，我发现……很困难。）
This issue has been troubling me for some time.
（这个问题困扰我很久了。）
具体请求帮助
Would you mind sharing your expertise on...
（您能否分享关于……的专业知识？）
Could you provide me with some tips on how to...
（您能否提供一些关于如何……的建议？）
I would appreciate it if you could explain... in detail.
（如果您能详细解释……，我将感激不尽。）
Any suggestions on... would be highly valued.
（任何关于……的建议都将对我非常重要。）
经典开头
1. Recently, I have difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
最近,我在与同学相处方面有困难,这很困扰我。因此,我别无选择,只能向你求助。
2. I find it quite hard to prepare a good resume, so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
我发现准备一份好的简历很难,所以我写信是想寻求你的帮助。
I’m sorry to bother you, but I meet with some difficulties and I’m writing to turn to you for help.
很抱歉打扰你,但我遇到些困难,所以写信向你求助。
高分正文
4.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
5.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
6.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
7.have trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
做某事有困难。
8.Doing sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
9.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
10.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
经典结尾
11.I would appreciate it if you could tell me your opinion.I am looking forward to your early reply.
12.I wonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me
写作模板
Dear Jason,
I am Li Hua. I intend to involve myself in an English speech contest titled “An Unforgettable Experience in High School’’ this Saturday. I’ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory. Therefore, I’m writing to ask you do me a favor.(自我简介、背景事与写信目的)
I’m not sure of some usages of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article If it’s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.(求助的具体内容)
I’d highly appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your early reply .(表达感激与期待)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模拟再现
（一）
（2025·辽宁·二模）假设你是交换生Jack，对中医很感兴趣，打算主修中医。你给学校的张老师发邮件进行咨询，内容包括：
(1) 学中医的优势和前景;
(2) 他的看法。
注意：(1) 词数80左右。
(2) 为使行文连贯, 可适当增加细节。
参考词汇：Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)
Dear Mr. Zhang,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Jack
（二）
（2025·贵州黔东南·一模）假定你是李华，你校计划举办一场主题为“科技创新与青少年发展”的科技展览，并希望通过英文网站将其展示给更多人。请你写一封邮件给你的外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年，内容包括：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
举一反三
（一）
（2025·湖北·二模）假定你是李华，近期，你准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，你已写好初稿。请你给外教Mary写一封邮件，请她给你指导，内容包括：
1. 写邮件的目的；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：故事续写大赛 Story Continuation Contest
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（二）
（2025·安徽滁州·一模）假定你是李华，是校英文报 “中国传统文化” 栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍针灸 (acupuncture) 的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师 Mr. Roger 写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
写作词数应为 80 个左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（三）
（2025·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你班正为校英语戏剧大赛排练英语短剧，需要外教James的帮助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．写信意图；
2．求助内容；
3．约定时间。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
题型通关
（一）
（24-25高三上·辽宁大连·期中）最近，一位德国留学生Robert用英语采访的视频火了，他流利的英语和自信的态度给大家留下了深刻印象。假如你是李华，希望他能推荐一些英语口语的高效训练方法，请给他写一封英文求助信，内容如下：
1．他对年轻人的影响；
2．求助的内容；
3．表示感谢。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
How is everything going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（24-25高三上·河北邯郸·期中）假定你热衷集邮，但你的父母并不支持这一爱好，于是你向一个名为“学生心声”的专栏写信咨询解决办法。内容包括：
1. 你的意见：增长知识，减压；
2. 父母的意见：浪费钱，占用学习时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A Worried Reader
（三）
（24-25高三上·重庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，你准备参加所在国际学校组织的图书推荐(book talk)活动，做一个2分钟的演讲(presentation)，请你给英国朋友Chris 写一封邮件，寻求他的建议，内容包括:
1.你的推荐书籍与理由；
2.请他分享经验和建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）
（23-24高三上·福建福州·阶段练习）假设你是李华，刚进人高三，在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.说明困难；
2.寻求帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely;
LiHua
（五）
（23-24高三上·广东深圳·期末）假定你是李华。外教Hans要求你班同学做一个主题为“The story of an inspiring person”的小组项目。作为组长, 请你给Hans写一封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 项目设想；
2. 恳请指导。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 5.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（六）
（23-24高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华，本学期你校开设了英语口语课，但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点包括：
1. 告知困难；
2.寻求求助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（七）
（24-25高三上·山东德州·期末）假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的英文阅读分享会。给外教 Ms. Jenkins写一封信，请她帮你修改分享稿，内容包括：
1.介绍分享活动；
2.表达修正请求。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I hope you are doing well.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（八）
（24-25高三上·河北保定·期末）假定你是李华，你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
（九）
（22-23高三上·江苏南通·阶段练习）假如你是李华，一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向福建师范大学黄教授（此领域的专家）写一封求助信。希望他帮你在情节构思、语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。
内容包括：1.介绍困扰；2.希望得到帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：读后续写continuation writing
Dear Professor Huang,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（十）
（2024·江苏·模拟预测）假定你是李华，将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导。内容包括：
1. 陈述问题；
2. 请求指导。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：串词program cue 情景喜剧 sitcom
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（十一）
（2024·江西·模拟预测）假如你是李华， 刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖，请给她写一封英文信表示祝贺，并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛，请她为自己备赛提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80 左右；
2. 开头结尾已写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jessica,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
（十二）
（2024·四川泸州·三模）假设你是李华，最近你和父母相处不是很愉快，因此感到有些苦恼。为此，请向英语报社“知心话栏目”写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简述情况；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua应用文写作之求助信
第一部分 题型分析
第二部分 写作方法
第三部分 常用句式
第四部分 写作模板
第五部分 模拟再现
第六部分 举一反三
第七部分 题型通关
题型分析
求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。其特点是模拟真实生活场景（如学习困难、活动筹备、信息咨询等），要求考生以书信形式寻求帮助。考查考生的语言应用能力（格式、逻辑、语言得体性）和问题解决能力（明确需求、合理表达请求）。通常给出2-3个要点（如描述问题、提出请求、表达感谢），要求覆盖所有要点内容，字数80左右。
写作方法
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:
1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。
2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
常用句式
礼貌表达需求
I am writing to ask for your help with...
（我写信是想请您帮助……）
I would be extremely grateful if you could...
（如果您能……，我将不胜感激。）
Could you possibly help me with...
（您能否帮助我……？）
I was wondering if you could give me some advice on...
（不知您能否就……给我一些建议？）
解释求助原因
Due to unexpected circumstances, I am unable to...
（由于突发情况，我无法……）
I am currently facing a challenge with...
（我目前在……方面遇到了困难。）
As a beginner in..., I find it difficult to...
（作为……的初学者，我发现……很困难。）
This issue has been troubling me for some time.
（这个问题困扰我很久了。）
具体请求帮助
Would you mind sharing your expertise on...
（您能否分享关于……的专业知识？）
Could you provide me with some tips on how to...
（您能否提供一些关于如何……的建议？）
I would appreciate it if you could explain... in detail.
（如果您能详细解释……，我将感激不尽。）
Any suggestions on... would be highly valued.
（任何关于……的建议都将对我非常重要。）
经典开头
1. Recently, I have difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
最近,我在与同学相处方面有困难,这很困扰我。因此,我别无选择,只能向你求助。
2. I find it quite hard to prepare a good resume, so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
我发现准备一份好的简历很难,所以我写信是想寻求你的帮助。
I’m sorry to bother you, but I meet with some difficulties and I’m writing to turn to you for help.
很抱歉打扰你,但我遇到些困难,所以写信向你求助。
高分正文
4.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
5.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
6.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
7.have trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
做某事有困难。
8.Doing sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
9.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
10.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
经典结尾
11.I would appreciate it if you could tell me your opinion.I am looking forward to your early reply.
12.I wonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me
写作模板
Dear Jason,
I am Li Hua. I intend to involve myself in an English speech contest titled “An Unforgettable Experience in High School’’ this Saturday. I’ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory. Therefore, I’m writing to ask you do me a favor.(自我简介、背景事与写信目的)
I’m not sure of some usages of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article If it’s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.(求助的具体内容)
I’d highly appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your early reply .(表达感激与期待)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模拟再现
（一）
（2025·辽宁·二模）假设你是交换生Jack，对中医很感兴趣，打算主修中医。你给学校的张老师发邮件进行咨询，内容包括：
(1) 学中医的优势和前景;
(2) 他的看法。
注意：(1) 词数80左右。
(2) 为使行文连贯, 可适当增加细节。
参考词汇：Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)
Dear Mr. Zhang,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Jack
【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am Jack, an exchange student, keenly interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM), and I am writing to seek your expert advice. Fascinated by its holistic approach to health and the profound wisdom it embodies, I intend to major in TCM.
Could you please share with me the advantages of studying TCM and its job prospects At present, I’m especially eager to get a clear picture of how TCM is regarded in today’s healthcare sector and what potential it holds for professional advancement.
I would be grateful for your thoughts regarding my intended major. Given your expertise in this field, your perspective would be invaluable to me. Thanks for taking the time to read my email. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Jack
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生替对中医感兴趣，打算主修中医的交换生Jack给学校的张老师发邮件进行咨询。
【详解】1．词汇积累：
对…… 感兴趣：be interested in→be keen on
寻求：seek→search for
关于：regarding→in terms of
观点：perspective→viewpoint
句式拓展：
同义句
原句：Fascinated by its holistic approach to health and the profound wisdom it embodies, I intend to major in TCM.
拓展句：Because I am fascinated by its holistic approach to health and the profound wisdom it embodies, I have the intention of majoring in TCM.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Fascinated by its holistic approach to health and the profound wisdom it embodies, I intend to major in TCM.（运用了过去分词短语作原因状语和省略that的定语从句）
【高分句型 2】At present, I’m especially eager to get a clear picture of how TCM is regarded in today’s healthcare sector and what potential it holds for professional advancement.（运用了how和what引导的宾语从句）
（二）
（2025·贵州黔东南·一模）假定你是李华，你校计划举办一场主题为“科技创新与青少年发展”的科技展览，并希望通过英文网站将其展示给更多人。请你写一封邮件给你的外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年，内容包括：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Chris,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning a technology exhibition on the theme of “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”. We want to share it on an English website to attract more people, especially teenagers from different countries.
Could you please tell me which technology topics are the most interesting to foreign teen-agers For example, are they more interested in artificial intelligence, space exploration, or maybe something else Also, do you have any suggestions on how to make the exhibition more engaging and interactive for a global audience
Your advice would be really helpful and much appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Chris写一封邮件，向他了解哪些科技创新更吸引外国青少年。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻求帮助：ask for your help→seek your help
吸引：attract→appeal to
此外：also→besides
建议：suggestion→advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school is planning a technology exhibition on the theme of “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”.
拓展句：Our school is planning a technology exhibition, the theme of which is “Technology Innovation and Youth Development”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Could you please tell me which technology topics are the most interesting to foreign teen-agers （运用了which引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Also, do you have any suggestions on how to make the exhibition more engaging and interactive for a global audience （运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语）
举一反三
（一）
（2025·湖北·二模）假定你是李华，近期，你准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，你已写好初稿。请你给外教Mary写一封邮件，请她给你指导，内容包括：
1. 写邮件的目的；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：故事续写大赛 Story Continuation Contest
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest organized by an English newspaper.
I have completed the first draft of my story, and I am eager to enhance its quality and I hope that you can help me. I would be deeply grateful if you could take a look at my draft and offer suggestions on how to improve the plot development, characterization and language use. Your insights would undoubtedly be instructive in refining my work.
Your timely help would mean the world to me. Keenly anticipating your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely .
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，已写好初稿，要求考生按照要求给外教Mary写一封邮件，请她指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宝贵的：invaluable → precious
建议：advice → suggestion
关于：regarding → concerning
完成：complete → finish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest organized by an English newspaper.
拓展句：I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest , which is organized by an English newspaper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have completed the first draft of my story, and I am eager to enhance its quality and I hope you can help.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I would be deeply grateful if you could take a look at my draft and offer suggestions on how to improve the plot development, characterization and language use.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
（二）
（2025·安徽滁州·一模）假定你是李华，是校英文报 “中国传统文化” 栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍针灸 (acupuncture) 的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师 Mr. Roger 写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括：
1. 写信事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
写作词数应为 80 个左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Roger,
I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
When it comes to Acupuncture, there is no denying that it carries abundant traditional Chinese culture and enjoys a great reputation around the world. I have written an article “Acupuncture: magic needles”, where I dig deep into the origin and application of this traditional form of TCM. I eagerly ask for your assistance in reviewing my draft, polishing my language and offering insights to better present Chinese TCM. Your feedback will not only contribute to the excellence of my writing but also deepen the readers’ understanding of this fascinating tradition.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师 Mr. Roger写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
名声：reputation→fame
提供：offer→provide
渴望地：eagerly→enthusiastically
传统：tradition→convention
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I eagerly ask for your assistance in reviewing my draft, polishing my language and offering insights to better present Chinese TCM.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could review my draft, polish my language and offer insights to better present Chinese TCM.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’d appreciate it if you could give me a hand.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] I have written an article “Acupuncture: magic needles”, where I dig deep into the origin and application of this traditional form of TCM. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
（三）
（2025·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你班正为校英语戏剧大赛排练英语短剧，需要外教James的帮助。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．写信意图；
2．求助内容；
3．约定时间。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I hope this email finds you well. Our class is preparing a short English play for the upcoming School English Drama Competition. We need your assistance.
Since we have never participated in such an event before, we would greatly benefit from your expertise. Could you please help us by reviewing our lines and giving suggestions for improvement Additionally, we would greatly appreciate it if you could attend our practice sessions and provide feedback on our pronunciation and acting styles.
Could we schedule a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this further Your guidance would be invaluable.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的求助信。要求考生给外教James写封信，就班级排练英语短剧一事向其求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：assistance → help
参加：participate in → take part in
建议：suggestion → advice
此外：additionally → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Could we schedule a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this further
拓展句：Could we schedule a meeting at your earliest convenience so that we can discuss this further
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since we have never participated in such an event before, we would greatly benefit from your expertise.（运用了since引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Additionally, we would greatly appreciate it if you could attend our practice sessions and provide feedback on our pronunciation and acting styles.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
题型通关
（一）
（24-25高三上·辽宁大连·期中）最近，一位德国留学生Robert用英语采访的视频火了，他流利的英语和自信的态度给大家留下了深刻印象。假如你是李华，希望他能推荐一些英语口语的高效训练方法，请给他写一封英文求助信，内容如下：
1．他对年轻人的影响；
2．求助的内容；
3．表示感谢。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
How is everything going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
How is everything going I am Li Hua, a high school student and also one of your fans. I am deeply impressed by your wonderful performance in the interview. So fluent is your oral English that you have really set a good example for the young generation.
Therefore, I wonder if you could share some effective approaches to improving spoken English as well as building up self-confidence when communicating with foreigners.
I’d be more than grateful if you could offer some constructive suggestions.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。最近，一位德国留学生Robert用英语采访的视频火了，他流利的英语和自信的态度给大家留下了深刻印象。要求考生给他写一封英文求助信，希望他能推荐一些英语口语的高效训练方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外：also→additionally
流利：fluent→smooth
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I am Li Hua, a high school student and also one of your fans.
拓展句： I am Li Hua, who is a high school student and also one of your fans.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So fluent is your oral English that you have really set a good example for the young generation.（运用了倒装句结构以及that引导状语从句）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I wonder if you could share some effective approaches to improving spoken English as well as building up self-confidence when communicating with foreigners.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
（二）
（24-25高三上·河北邯郸·期中）假定你热衷集邮，但你的父母并不支持这一爱好，于是你向一个名为“学生心声”的专栏写信咨询解决办法。内容包括：
1. 你的意见：增长知识，减压；
2. 父母的意见：浪费钱，占用学习时间。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A Worried Reader
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to seek your advice.
I have a strong passion for stamp collecting. In my opinion, it not only enriches my knowledge in various fields but also serves as an excellent way to relieve stress after a long day of studying. However, my parents hold a different view. They think it’s a waste of money and occupies my precious study time. I understand their concerns, but I truly love this hobby and don’t want to give it up.
I sincerely hope you can offer some effective solutions to help me convince my parents to support my stamp collecting hobby. Thank you!
A Worried Reader
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向一个名为“学生心声”的专栏写信，就你热衷集邮却得不到父母支持这件事咨询解决办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
不同的：various→different
然而：however→ nevertheless
喜爱：love→be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to seek your advice.
拓展句：I’m writing to seek your advice on a problem I’m facing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, it not only enriches my knowledge in various fields but also serves as an excellent way to relieve stress after a long day of studying. （运用了not only...but also引导的并列句）
【高分句型2】They think it’s a waste of money and occupies my precious study time.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
（三）
（24-25高三上·重庆·开学考试）假定你是李华，你准备参加所在国际学校组织的图书推荐(book talk)活动，做一个2分钟的演讲(presentation)，请你给英国朋友Chris 写一封邮件，寻求他的建议，内容包括:
1.你的推荐书籍与理由；
2.请他分享经验和建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your assistance with a 2-minute book talk presentation. I’ll be delivering at school.
I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters. It will definitely captivate my audience. However, I’m struggling to convey its unique qualities in such a short time. Given your experience with similar presentations, I would greatly appreciate any tips you can offer on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged.
I eagerly await your invaluable insights. Thank you in advance for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，寻求他对于演讲的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
使……着迷：fascinate→enchant
肯定：definitely→certainly
宝贵的：invaluable→precious
提前：in advanced→ahead of time
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters.
拓展句：I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland” because it has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve chosen to recommend “Alice in Wonderland”, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Given your experience with similar presentations, I would greatly appreciate any tips you can offer on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged. (运用了省略了引导词的定语从句和疑问词+不定式结构作宾语)
（四）
（23-24高三上·福建福州·阶段练习）假设你是李华，刚进人高三，在英语学习上遇到了困难。请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.说明困难；
2.寻求帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely;
LiHua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
l am Li Hua, one of your students. Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning. Therefore, I am writing to seek your guidance.
My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea. I also have trouble in remembering new words. Hard as I attempt to memorize them, they seem to disappear from my mind sometime later.
l would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
LI Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr.Brown写封邮件，说明自己在英语学习上遇到的困难并向对方寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：come across→meet with
因此：therefore→thus
做某事有困难：have trouble in doing→have difficulty in doing
感激的：grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： l would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
拓展句： l would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Entering the 12th grade, I came across some problems about English learning.（运用了分词Entering作状语）
【高分句型2】Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea.（运用了so...that...引导结果状语从句）
（五）
（23-24高三上·广东深圳·期末）假定你是李华。外教Hans要求你班同学做一个主题为“The story of an inspiring person”的小组项目。作为组长, 请你给Hans写一封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 项目设想；
2. 恳请指导。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 5.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I’m Li Hua, a student from class 5. I am in charge of the group project titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.” I’m writing to share our initial ideas and seek your invaluable guidance.
We aim to explore the story of an inspiring person, the obstacles they faced, and how they became a lighthouse of inspiration. For our presentation, we’re thinking of combining various elements like short videos, interactive timelines, and possibly a small drama piece, which are intended to make the presentation more engaging. Your knowledge in storytelling and understanding of different cultures is widely recognized, so we would greatly appreciate your guidance in choosing the right individual for our project, structuring our presentation to be both informative and attractive.
Thank you for considering our request. We eagerly waiting for your response and any suggestions you might have.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。外教Hans要求你班同学做一个主题为“The story of an inspiring person”的小组项目。作为组长, 请你给Hans写一封邮件, 内容包括：1. 项目设想；2. 恳请指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求：seek→ask for
吸引人的：engaging→attractive
认可：recognize→acknowledge
考虑：consider→take into…account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am in charge of the group project titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.”
拓展句：I am in charge of the group project which is titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.”
【点睛】【高分句型1】We aim to explore the story of an inspiring person, the obstacles they faced, and how they became a lighthouse of inspiration.（运用了不定式作宾语，省略了引导词的定语从句和how引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】For our presentation, we’re thinking of combining various elements like short videos, interactive timelines, and possibly a small drama piece, which are intended to make the presentation more engaging.（运用了动名词短语作宾语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
（六）
（23-24高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假定你是李华，本学期你校开设了英语口语课，但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点包括：
1. 告知困难；
2.寻求求助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andrew,
I’m writing to share with you a problem I’m currently facing. This semester, our school has introduced an oral English course, and I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of our foreign teacher. I find it challenging to understand his/her accent and follow the pace of the class. As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved.
I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation. Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件，就本学期你校开设了英语口语课，但是你不太适应外教的授课向他寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适应：adapt to →adjust to
步伐：pace→ step
建议：advice →suggestion
期望：look forward to→ expect
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation.
拓展句：I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how I can better cope with this situation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
（七）
（24-25高三上·山东德州·期末）假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的英文阅读分享会。给外教 Ms. Jenkins写一封信，请她帮你修改分享稿，内容包括：
1.介绍分享活动；
2.表达修正请求。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I hope you are doing well.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I hope you are doing well. I am taking part in an English reading sharing event to be held next week in our school, in which students will present their thoughts on a book that has had a significant influence on them. I have chosen to discuss To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, as its themes of justice and empathy strike a chord deeply with me.
I would appreciate it if you could review my presentation draft and provide your valuable feedback. Your insights would greatly help me improve my delivery and understanding of the book.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教 Ms. Jenkins写一封信，请她帮你修改你准备参加学校举办的英文阅读分享会的分享稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
影响：influence→impact
洞察力：insight→perception
提高：improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your insights would greatly help me improve my delivery and understanding of the book.
拓展句：What your opinions about my draft are would greatly help me improve my delivery and understanding of the book.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am taking part in an English reading sharing event to be held next week in our school, in which students will present their thoughts on a book that has had a significant influence on them.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I have chosen to discuss To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, as its themes of justice and empathy strike a chord deeply with me.(运用了as引导的状语从句)
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（24-25高三上·河北保定·期末）假定你是李华，你校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动，你打算投稿。请你给外教 Henry写封邮件，内容包括：
（1）介绍你最喜爱的英语学习网站；
（2）请他对你的投稿作品进行指导。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Henry,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. However, I have no idea if my entry is well-structured. Given your rich experience, could you kindly review my draft in the attachment and provide your insights into how I can polish it I am eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办以“我最喜爱的英语学习网站”为主题的英语征文活动。请考生给外教 Henry写封邮件请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like→be fond of
提供：provide→offer
各种各样的：various→varieties of
此外：additionally→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry themed “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
拓展句：I’m writing to seek your guidance on my entry whose theme is “My Favorite English Learning Website”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The English learning website I like most is “BBC Learning English”, which boasts a wide range of content, catering to various learning levels and interests. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, it integrates cultural insights and global perspectives, providing learners with a deeper understanding of English-speaking cultures. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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（22-23高三上·江苏南通·阶段练习）假如你是李华，一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向福建师范大学黄教授（此领域的专家）写一封求助信。希望他帮你在情节构思、语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。
内容包括：1.介绍困扰；2.希望得到帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：读后续写continuation writing
Dear Professor Huang,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Professor Huang,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I have been struggling with the continuation writing. Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.
I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all, I have difficulty in designing plots. In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封求助信，向福建师范大学黄教授求助，希望他在续写的情节构思、语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
寻求：seek →look for
在……方面有困难：have difficulty in →have trouble in
另外：in addition →additionally
合适的：proper →appropriate
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
拓展句：Faced with the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.（现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句，动词不定式作状语）
【高分句型2】First of all, I have difficulty in designing plots.（动名词作介词的宾语）
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（2024·江苏·模拟预测）假定你是李华，将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导。内容包括：
1. 陈述问题；
2. 请求指导。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：串词program cue 情景喜剧 sitcom
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to seek your guidance as I’m going to host our school’s upcoming English sitcom competition. What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor.
I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition. Any advice on my hosting work would be greatly appreciated.
I’m eager for your precious guidance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串词。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
合适的：appropriate→proper
比赛：competition→contest
建议：suggestion→advice
维持：maintain→sustain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager for your precious guidance.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could offer your precious guidance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor. (运用了what引导主语从句)
[高分句型2] I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition. (运用了if引导宾语从句)
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（2024·江西·模拟预测）假如你是李华， 刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖，请给她写一封英文信表示祝贺，并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛，请她为自己备赛提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80 左右；
2. 开头结尾已写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jessica,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jessica,
How are you I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations on winning the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” at your school! What an incredible achievement! Your dedication and talent shine brightly.
I’m also writing to share my excitement about an upcoming English singing competition at our school. As someone with experience in competitions, I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you could offer to help me prepare.
Thank you in advance for your guidance, and once again, congratulations on your well-deserved success! Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖一事，给她写一封英文信表示祝贺，并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛，请她为自己备赛提出建议。
【详解】词汇积累
想要做某事：wanted to → intended to
衷心的：heartfelt → sincere
成就：achievement → accomplishment
感激：appreciate → be grateful for
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations on winning the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” at your school!
拓展句：I would like to express my sincere congratulations on securing the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” held at your school!
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m also writing to share my excitement about an upcoming English singing competition at our school. （使用了动词不定式作状语）
【高分句型2】As someone with experience in competitions, I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you could offer to help me prepare.（使用了介词短语作定语以及省略关系词的限制性定语从句，先行词为advice or tips）
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（2024·四川泸州·三模）假设你是李华，最近你和父母相处不是很愉快，因此感到有些苦恼。为此，请向英语报社“知心话栏目”写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简述情况；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. Recently I have a terrible conflict with my parents. I really feel annoyed so I am writing to ask for your help.
Here’s the way it took place. Last week, there was a comprehensive exam to check our academic achievement in Senior 3. Unfortunately, I didn’t have a good performance. When my parents saw my sharp decline in grades, they owed it to my playing computer games at weekends. I feel completely innocent an d helpless. Actually, I just spend an hour on the game to relax myself every weekend.
I guess the root of my problem is that I have been under great pressure, but I don’t know how to explain it to my parents. Could you please give me some suggestions on how to communicate with my parent s I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。最近你和父母相处不是很愉快，因此感到有些苦恼，要求考生向英语报社“知心话栏目”写一封邮件说明情况并请求帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
生气的：annoyed→miffed
检查：check→test
下降：decline→decrease
建议：suggestion→advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, there was a comprehensive exam to check our academic achievement in Senior 3.
拓展句：Last week, there was a comprehensive exam, which was designed to check our academic achievement in Senior 3.
【点睛】[高分句型1]When my parents saw my sharp decline in grades, they owed it to my playing computer games at weekends.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I guess the root of my problem is that I have been under great pressure, but I don’t know how to explain it to my parents.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
