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Trouble
中考话题八 Problems and suggestions
（Writing)写作课
Teaching material
8B Unit 1
8B Unit 4
Health problems
Personal problems
Give advice
Give advice
课前任务：熟读教材以上话题单元，摘录并分类整理与problem主题相关的语言表达。
A letter
to students
Beginning
Body
Ending
Talk about problems
Give advice
schoolwork
study until really late
too much homework
too many after-school classes
fail the exam
worry about school grades
...
Let’s talk.
Problems
relationship
argue/fight with my parents
give me a lot of pressure about school
don’t allow me to hang out with my friends
borrow my things without returning
won’t let me have a pet
...
argument between my parents
Problems
Talk about problems(谈论问题）
Let’s read
【好句范例】
1.Some students don't know how to get on well with their classmates, while others have too much homework to do.
2. Students have been competing with each other since they were very young,which brings them too much stress.
3. Some students often feel lonely, and they don't know who they should share their feelings with.
5. These days children have too much homework to do so that they have no free time.
Talk about problems(谈论问题）
Let’s Write
【句子仿写】
1.你可能太担心你的成绩，以至于你不能专注于(focus on）做其他事情。
2.当你感到失望时，你可能会失去学习兴趣。
3.你可能不知道如何与父母和睦相处。
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things.
You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed.
You may not know how to get along/on well with your parents.
Let’s think.
I am not good at maths.
I failed the exam.
Why don’t you ______
ask your teacher for
help
(向你的老师寻求帮助)
Useful expressions:
Why don’t you _______
You should/shouldn’t ____.
You must __________.
It’s best to ______________.
ask your classmates for help
study as much as you can
don’t waste time
do many exercises
study
Give advice.(给出建议）
Let’s think.
go to visit her
give him a hug
write him a letter
take him to the ball game
call him up
Useful expressions:
You’d better _________.
It’s a good way to _____.
It’s a good idea for you to_____.
You can _____
You’d better ______________.
write him a letter
(写封信给他)
buy him a present
I am in dark mood.
I argued with my best friend.
relationship
Give advice.(给出建议）
Give advice.(给出建议）
Let’s read
【好句范例】
1.I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
2.First of all,try to do sports as much as possible.
3. Besides, you should be brave enough toexpress your ideas
4.Talking to friends is a good way to reduce pressure.
5. The more you read,the better your minds will be.
6. If you are in trouble, you can ask your teachers for help.
Give advice.(给出建议）
Let’s Write
1.此外，做运动是放松自己的好方法。
2.如果你对学校生活不满意，你可以和你信任的人谈谈。
3.尽量多和你的同学交流。
Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself.
If you feel unhappy about your schoollife, you can talk to someone you trust.
Try to communicate with your classmates
Express hope.(表达希望）
Let’s read
角度3【好句范例】
1.I am looking forward to your good news.
2.I hope my suggestions are worth taking.
3.I believe you will be better and better as long
as we pay attention to solving the problems
together.
Express hope.(表达希望）
Let’s Write
【句子仿写】
1.我希望每个人都能妥善处理这些问题，有一个健康的身心。
2.我希望每个人都能少一点压力，过上更好的生活。
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.
I hope everybody will have less pressure and live a better life.
Good ways to write a good article
An excellent
article
Structure
(including given information)
结构
Beautiful words
优美辞藻
Sentence pattern
句型结构
Linking words/
Conjunction
过渡词/连词
Extended information
Linking words
Conjunctions
★ however/while
★ when/while/as soon as/until
★ although
★ What’s more/Also/Besides/ In addition
★ not only…but also
★ if/ unless
★ so…that…/such…that
★ Firstly, secondly, thirdly
★ so that…
A letter
to students
Beginning
Body
Ending Express hope
Talk about problems:
1. be worried about grades
2. lose interest in study
3. .....
Give advice:
1. talk to someone you trust
2.listen to music
3 .....
doubt yourself
do sports
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作要求。
第一步，表明写作意图。在成长的过程中，出现一些心理健康问题是很正常的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。通过提出问题和给建议来论述主题；
第三步，书写结语。希望大家都能在学校度过一段美好时光。
[辅助词汇]
①concentrate on 集中注意力做某事
②lose interest in 对......失去兴趣
③spare no effort to不遗余力去做某事
[写作步骤]
Write a passage.(连句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
Dr. Li
Write a passage.(连句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things. You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed during the school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me give you some advice .
If you feel unhappy about your school life, you can talk to someone you trust and learn from each other. Also ,you can listen to light music when you get a bad grade in the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way to relax yourself too.
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.
Dr. Li
作文自评
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
书面表达评分标准（以15分满分为例）
分档标准
第一档（15-13分） ：内容完整，语言准确无误，逻辑连贯，使用高级句式
第二档（12-10分） ：内容基本完整，语言有小错误但不影响理解
第三档（9-7分） ：内容部分缺失或表述不清，语言错误较多
第四档（6-4分） ：仅能表达部分要点，语言错误严重影响理解
第五档（3-0分） ：文不对题或无法组织有效内容
扣分细则
内容 ：每个要点2分缺少要点直接扣分
语言 ：字数不够的每少5个单词扣0.5分 语法/拼写错误每处扣0.5分，同类错误不重复扣分
格式 ：未按要求格式（如书信、日记）扣1分
加分项
使用复合句、过渡词提升连贯性
立意新颖或结合社会热点可能获得更高档位
Write a passage.(连句成文）
Dear students,In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.You may worry about your grades too much so thatyou can't concentrate on doing other things. You maylose interest in study when you feel disappointed duringthe school life. You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. But don't worry. Let me showyou some advice to figure it out.If you feel unhappy about your school life, you cantalk to someone you trust and learn from each other.You can listen to light music when you get a bad gradein the exam. Besides,doing exercise is a good way torelax yourself too.We should treat these problems with a normalmind and spare no effort to study. I hope you all guyscan have a good time in school life.Dr. Li
Let’s Write
Dear students,
In the process of growing up,it's normal for you tohave some mental health problems.
You may worry about your grades too much so that you can't focus on doing other things. （2）You may lose interest in study when you feel disappointed during the school life. （2）You may doubt yourself when you get abad grade in the exam. （2）But don't worry. Let me give you some advice .
If you feel unhappy about your school life, you can talk to someone you trust and learn from each other. （2）Also ,you can listen to light music when you get a bad grade in the exam. （2）Besides,doing exercise is a good way to relax yourself too.（2）
I hope everyone can deal with these problems properly and have a healthy body and mind.（1）
Dr. Li
行文结构2分
THANKS
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