安徽马鞍山2016高考英语短文改错二轮课外自练（2）及答案
短文改错
The Problem with Television
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years 1. _______
ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2. _______
a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3. _______
demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are 4. _______
too many people among my family. Some wanted 5. _______
to see the programme while others preferred 6. _______
another. I am happy with any programme but 7. _______
the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8. _______
was no way of settling the matter except by 9. _______
selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. 删去 much。 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )“I can’t watch much television”意为“我不能看许多电视”， 上下文逻辑不通。much 属于多余。
2. 删去 was。由上文句意可知“我现在不看电视， 而过去每晚都看电视”， 因此应用 used to do。
3. watch 改为 watching。作句子主语需用动名词。
4. Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately。此处应用副词作状语。
5. among 改为 in。“in my family”为习惯搭配， 意为“在我家中”。
6. the 改为 one。由下文的another可知， 上文用one。
7. am 改为 was。综观全文时态可知。
8. a lot 后加 of。
9. 此行无错。
10. someone 改为 e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )veryone 或 everybody。someone 意为“某个人”； everyone/ everybody 意为“每个人”。根据上下文逻辑可知。
短文改错
Choose what to eat i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our 2.
body is also diff ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erent. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too 3.
much calories ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )for the 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the 4.
high pace of mod ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices 5.
about what and how ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer ad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )vice about what we should eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
答案及解析
Choose 改为 Choosing 。动名词作主语
have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语
3.Tradition 改为Traditional
4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数
5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事
6.choose 后面加from
7.正确
8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语
9.little改为 less 。 less 和后面的more构成对应关系
10.a去掉 。 health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康
短文改错
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for us to for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )students . Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ike to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) or drink too many.All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nt of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )etter have meal regularly. 8.
In my opin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.
答案及解析：
which改为as ， 非限制定语从句放于句首用as，再说as we all know 众所周知
into去掉， form healthyeating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
we 改为us
with改为about ，be particular about为固定词组
many改为much
health改为 healthy
vegetable改为vegetables ，vegetable是可数名词
Beside 改为Besides ， Beside 是在…旁边，而Besides是“除此之外”
正确
study 前面加to表目的
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
10． 在have后面加been
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live to make m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oney, when others make money to live. 79.
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On a word, money ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) is something but not everything. 85.
(三)
76．was → is 77.Not → No
78. has → have 79. when → while
80. should∧→ be 81.slave → slaves
82. 去掉 but 83. √
84. made→ make 85.On → In
第***套
第一节：短文改错(共10小题)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)
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加he或去掉was安徽马鞍山2016高考英语短文改错及答案
2015年高考改错真题汇编
【2015·新课标全国I】
When I was a ch ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ild, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
2015年课标全国卷I【参考答案】
【答案】【解析】
试题分析：高中即将毕业了，有一些体会和同学们分享。1.感谢老师，家长和朋友们；2.致歉于我曾经误会伤害的人；3.祝福同学们心想事成。
1．【答案】第二句：thin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )k→thought句意：我认为在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。解析：考查动词时态。
2．【答案】第三句中的∧countrysi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )de→the【解析】冠词缺失。in the countryside为常用短语，意为“在乡村，在农村，在乡下”，因此名词countryside之前应该添加冠词the。
3．【答案】第四句中的or→and【解析】连词错误。根据语境“空气干净，并且山是绿的”可知，并列连词or使用错误，应改为and。
4．【答案】第五句中的on→with【解 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )析】介词错误。with the development of为介词短语，意为“随着……的发展”，故文中的介词on使用错误，应改为with。
5．【答案】第六句中的been ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )删除【解析】语态错误。该句的主语Lots of studies是动作的发出者，因此句子应使用主动语态，需要删除been。句意：许多研究表明。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。解析：考查语态。此处表示“研究表明”，所以用主动语态。
6．【答案】第六句中的seriously→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )serious【解析】词性错误。名词problem之前应使用形容词作定语，故副词seriously错误，应改为形容词serious。句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。
7．【答案】第七句中的ai ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rs→air【解析】名词单复数错误。air在此处为不可数名词，故airs应改为单数形式。airs→air句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。解析：考查名词的单复数。air“空气”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。第七句：airs→air考查名词的数。air为物质名词。是不可数名词。
8．【答案】第八句中的Much→M ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )any【解析】形容词错误。修饰可数名词复数animals应用many，因此句中的Much应改为Many。Much→Many句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。
9．【答案】第九句中的found→find【解析】动词错误。根据常识可知，情态动词must之后应该接动词原形，故found改为find。
1O．【答案】第九句中的you ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r→our/the【解析】代词错误。根据主语we和上下文语境可知，形容词性物主代词your。使用错误，应改为our，也可改为定冠词(environment在此处表示特指)。
[评析]在高考短文改错题型中，对代 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )词的考查是热点之一。如果考生脑海中没有“代词”这根弦的话，是不容易发现错误的。因此，要熟练掌握代词的用法，解题的关键是明确代词的指代对象。
短文改错
I am worker at the tap ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) water company. I find that 76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________
health .If th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________
and muddy ,the tele ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )phone will ring again and again. 79.____________
Fortunately, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________
protection of wat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er resources .For the sake of our 81.____________
health ,we should tak ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e good care our water resources 82.____________
and environment ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ).There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________
not careful protect ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )our environment the last drops 84.____________
of water we will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________
【参考答案-----】改错:
I am ∧worker at t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____
health .If the tap wat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_
and muddy ,the te ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____
Fortunately, peopl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_
protection of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____
health ,we s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hould take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____
not careful protect ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )our environment the last drops 84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them
短文改错
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost 76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry 77.
Experts have f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ound that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )When one is feeling stressed, it set free, 79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get 80.
rid of the stress and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )you will often feel better before a 81.
good cry. Of course s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ex has nothing to do to crying. 82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more 83.
of this hormone ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )than men. But next time you feel like 84.
bursting into ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health. 85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．
(201***·绵阳诊断)
Tom is a little boy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), but he is only seven years old. One day he1.________
went to the cinema. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )It was the first time for him to do that. He2.________
bought a ticke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t and then went out. But after two or three minutes3.________
he came out and bought ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the second ticket and went in again. After a4.________
few minutes he c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )omes out again and bought a third ticket. Two5.________
or three minutes l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ater he came out and asked another ticket.6.________
Then the gir ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l in the ticket office who asked him, “Why do you7.________
buy so many ticket How many friends do you meet？” Tom8.________
answered，” No ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), I have not friends here. But a big boy always 9.________
stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces.”10.________
答案与解析：
1．but改为and 依据语境，这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。
2．√
3．out改为in 依据语境，男孩买票走进电影院。
4．the改为a 下文bought a third ticket有暗示。序数词前用不定冠词，表示“再一，又一”。
5．comes改为came 结合行文逻辑，这里应用一般过去时。男孩进去又出来了。
6．asked后加for ask for sth.表示“要求得到……”。
7．去掉who 这里不是定语从句，假如是定语从句，原句缺少主句。
8．ticket改为tickets so many后接复数名词。
9．not改为no not是副词，不能修饰名词，应改为no。
10．tear改为tears 这里stop和tear是并列谓语动词，要用第三人称单数的一般现在时。
【重庆主城八区】调研抽测试卷
第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) should keep the balance of nature, 76. ____________
or we don’t always do as we say . 77. ____________
A species can become ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) endangered with different reasons. 78. ____________
But the very import ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ant one is their living places are ruined. We 79. ____________
cut down trees ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. ____________
where animal liv ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e. Because of this, they have no home and 81. ____________
they are going to be die out. 82. ____________
Other reason is money ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). Many tigers are killed by those 83. ____________
who want to sell ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) our fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. ____________
We should do e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )verything which can be done to change the 85. ____________
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.
第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) should keep the balance of nature, 76. knows
or we don’t always do as we say . 77. but
A species can becom ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e endangered with different reasons. 78. for
But the very importa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nt one is∧ their living places are ruined. We 79. that
cut down trees ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. planting
where animal li ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve. Because of this, they have no home and 81. animals
they are going to be die out. 82. be
Other reason is money. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Many tigers are killed by those 83. Another
who want to sell our ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. their
We should do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) everything which can be done to change the 85. that
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.安徽马鞍山2016高考英语短文改错二轮课外自练（1）及答案
短文改错
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of 1. _______
our school football team. We practise for three times 2. _______
every week and often watch football match on TV 3. _______
together. Play football not only makes us grow 4. _______
tall and strong bu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t also give us a sense of fair play and 5. _______
team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 6. _______
for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7. _______
teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each 8. _______
player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9. _______
the team. And they must not break the rules too 10. ______
often if we want to win the game.
答案及解析
1. was 改为 am。综观全篇时态可知。
2.删去 for。time 表示次数时 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )， 之前一般无介词， 直接用作状语。如： We have meals three times a day。
3. match 改为 matches。
4. Play 改为 Playing。此处应用动名词作主语， 表示经常性、 习惯性动作， 而动词不定式作主语则表示一两次的动作。
5. give 改为 gives。此处和上文 makes 一起作谓语， 属平行结构。
6. 此行无错。
7. instead 后加 of。in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )stead 为副词， instead of 为介词短语。此处接宾语 ourselves， 需用介词短语。
8. important 改为 importance。
9. captain ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )前后 the。像 chairman， captain， monitor， mayor 这类词表示职务时， 前面用零冠词。但如这类职务用于指某人时， 前面用定冠词。
10. they 改为 we。
短文改错
At Chinese New Year ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ), my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )fore New Year’s Day, I went out with my 77. ____________
friends from scho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ol to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. 78. ____________
It was the noisiest re ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )staurant I had ever been to, and the 79. ____________
food was deli ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cious. After that, we went to shopping for new 80. ____________
clothes and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher, 81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my su ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese 82. ____________
New Year very excit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ed. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o many tests this week, so I have to 84. ____________
start studying hard ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )again now. I wish the holiday were long! 85. ____________
书面表达 （满分30分）
61. bunch 62. praise 63. permission 64. blame 65. consideration
66. differs 67. familiar 68. relief 69. delivered 70. gradually
71. misled 72. length 73. promoting 74.appointed 75. annoyed
76. have改为had
77. 此行无错。
78. the改为a。
79. and改为but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改为surprise。
83. excited改为exciting。
84. 去掉第二个so。
85. long改为longer。
短文改错
I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember goin ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )g there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. At ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember goi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
【重庆南开中学】
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
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“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people mak ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time ove ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rsleeping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
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They always regret ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )should form the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
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of poverty and even death. 85．
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I’m a middle schoo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I
noticed many of my cla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ssmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in
the other day. I was s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )urprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or
chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.
On my opini ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.
The Internet sho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uld be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet
is good if we make go ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )od use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local
government should t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ake measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
参考答案
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1．named
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school. I went ther ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students
2,去掉in 3.surprised
playing computer ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )games, watching films or chat. Some students were even
4．chatting
talking about love affairs online.
5.in
On my opinion, cyb ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er cafes should be a place which we can find much useful
5.in 6.where
informations. The I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nternet should be a window to the outside world rather than
7 information
place for ga ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mes. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it
8 a place
will give us grea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t harm. So the local government should take measure to make
9．do 10 measures
sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
(2012·唐山三模）
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In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
答案解析******短文改错
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increasingly
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like But
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merchants
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are
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what their
expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.
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(2013·昆明市适应性检测)
We had a discuss ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion on “overnight fame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on on “overnight fame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as example. Only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is the process in which try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(二十二) (2013·浙江省五校联考)
A young man called L ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ow Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man ca ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lled Low Carbon Brother a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a life with so many modern around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改错。
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 1. _______
Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to 2. _______
know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. 3. _______
My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4. _______
capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We 5. _______
study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, 6. _______
English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot 7. _______
in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. 8. _______
Do you play any ball games What your favorite 9. _______
sport I look forward to hear from you soon. 10. ______
Yours,
Li Hua
答案及解析
1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。
2. to 后加 be 或 become。
3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。
4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。
5. 此行无错。
6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。
7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。
8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in…为固定短语， “对……感兴趣”。
9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。
10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。
短文改错专项训练3
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右
边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：?
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。?
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。?
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。?
注意：原行没有错的不要改。?
A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang
1._____
Hotel on March 18.Over 50 universities from 10 countries
2._____
open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to
3._____
continuing their further study. More and more middle school
4._____
students have joined in the tide of going abroad. The
5._____
lower-aged group have become the new highlight of this tide.
6._____
And whether early entry into international education means
7._____
better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family
8._____
too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both
9._____
parents and educators. How do you think of this tide of
10._____
going abroad
参考答案
1. exhibition是held的承受者,应该用被动语态,因此须在之前加was。
2. 本题是正确的。
3. be eager to do sth.为固定搭配,意为“渴望做某事”．故在eager之前加are。
4. to continue their further study是动词不定式做目的状语，之后应用动词原型，故
将continuing改成continue。
5. join in 通常用来表示加入正在进行的某一项活动， 而join意指加入到某一行列中来
，故去掉in。
6. group为单数名词，故把have改成has。
7. 根据上下文的逻辑意义判断，此处是转折关系而非并列关系，故把and改成but。
8. whether…or为固定搭配，故把nor改成or。
9. 前文the young是指“年轻人们”，是复数，故把himself改成themselves。
10. 问你觉得什么怎么样应用what do you think of，而不用 how．故把how改成what。
短文改错
Born in Oct. 28, 195 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )5, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field.
参考答案：
Born in Oct. 28, 195 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )5, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public
on
elementary school ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin
and ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) where began
programming computers ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior
his
year, Gates lef ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would
developing guided
be a tool of grea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field.
value a安徽马鞍山2016高考英语短文改错二轮课外自练（3）及答案
短文改错
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 1. _______
party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 2. _______
had an examination on Monday morning. It is 3. _______
a very important exam but I can’t afford to 4. _______
fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 5. _______
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I 6. _______
won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you 7. _______
can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish 8. _______
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 9. _______
birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 10. ______
Yours,
Li Ming
答案及解析
1. on 改为 for。动词 thank 与名词 thanks 通常与介词 for 搭配。
2. much 后加 to。 I’d like to do something 为固定结构。
3. had 改为 have。综观全文时态可知。
4. but 改为 so。根据上下文逻辑， 此处应为因果关系。
5. 删去 all。all 与 the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )whole 重复， 只能保留一处， 由于在此题型中， 只有多一个单词的可能， 故此处只能删去 all。
6. prepare 改为 pre ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )paring。与上文的 reading 形成平行结构， 以满足“spend some time on sth./in doing sth.这一句型的需要。
7. 删去 in。含有 this， that， last， next 等的时间状语前不加任何介词。
8. 此行无错。
9. wonderful 前加 a。
10. return 改为 retur ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ns。return 此处为名词， many happy returns of the day 意为“祝你健康长寿”。
短文改错
Once upon a time there ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a ra ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long ” He thre ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )w his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his field ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for une ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )xpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ope to get reward without hard work. 10.
答案及解析
1. worked 前面加who，这里因该是who引导的定语从句修饰前面的farmer
2. 正确
3. lie 改为lying
4. him 改为 himself
5. get前面加to ， 这里用不定式做真正的主语
6. dreamed 改为dreaming ，用动名词做伴随状语
7. foolish 改为foolishness
8. are 改为were ，时态要前后一致
9. should 后面加not
10. reward 改为rewards
短文改错----1
My cousin Xiao Hong an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d I went on trip to my uncle’s 76. _____________
last Sunday. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )We were riding along a hillside then suddenly 77. _____________
some big ston ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )es were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. 78. _________
Xiao Hong’s legs got s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )erious hurt and so did mine. We 79. _____________
couldn’t move a bit. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead. 80. ____________
Waving our hand, we c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ried for help like crazy. On hearing 81. ____________
us, they run to the s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )pot as fast as they could. Thanks to 82___________
their help, we wer ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e all sent to a nearby hospital and received 83. ____________
medical treatment ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in time. Although we do not know about their 84. ________
names, we fel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l they like our dear big brothers and sisters. 85. _______
【参考答案
】76.on︿ a 77. then ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) →when 78 were去掉 79 serious → seriously 80.正确 81. hand→hands 82.run→ran 83.all→both 84.about 去掉 85.they︿are
短文改错
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________
She was my close frie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________
on a phone, the fire ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________
burnt. I quickly tu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rned off the gas, opening all the 81．_______________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________
surprise, two fir ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________
was rather worried. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I told about the firemen that it 84．_______________
was my carele ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ss cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________
【参考答案】
76．as→When 77．answer后加it 78．She→It
79．a→the 80． room后加was
81．opening→opened 82．With→To 83．√
84．去掉about 85．which→that
短文改错。
Coffee houses can be seen anywhere in America. 76.
People from Eur ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )opean brought the idea with them. Soon 77.
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76．anywhere → everywhere 77.European → Europe
78. in ∧→ the
79. any ∧→ other 80. 去掉who 81.them → it 82. √
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【重庆南开中学高】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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改错
76．well改为much 77．myself改为me 78．specially改为special
79．activity改为activities/在activity前面加the
80．because的后面加of
81．gain改为gained 82．new前面加a
83．but改为and 84．去掉was 85．becoming改为become
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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答案解析------短文改错
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truly accept
look forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
