湖南长沙市2016高考英语短文改错练习（附参考答案）
【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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短文改错
before→ago really ∧a huge lake eye→eyes
was volunteered 删掉 was took →put off→ on
possibly→possible exciting→excited
speed→sped me→myself
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【参考答案及解析】
1．especial→especially 考查副词的用法。此处表强调用副词形式。
2．enrich→enriches考查主谓一致。因为reading作主语，故谓语动词用单数形式。
3．read→reading考查动名词的用法。此处through是介词，其后用动名词。
4．This→It考查代词的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )用法。此处it是形式主语，不定式短语to read a story before going to bed是真正的主语。
5．去掉the 考查冠词的用法。此处study是抽象名词。
6．were→are 考查动词时态。根据文意用一般现在时。
7．that→what考查固定句型。解题关键：掌握A is to B what C is to D句型。
8．need后加to考查need的用法。此处need是实意动词，其后接不定式作宾语。
9．on→to 考查动词短语。解题关键：掌握短语stick to “坚持”。
10．interested后加in考查固定短语的用法。解题关键：掌握短语be interested in； what作in的宾语。
短文改错
When I first l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )earned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______
many difficultie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s. The main problem was in that I 2. _______
always thought i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
into English. M ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______
I followed her a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dvice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
or so each day. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
paper as I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______
One day I w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rote a little story and showed to my 8. _______
teacher. She l ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______
They all said t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he story was a good one. Their word were 10. ______
a great encouragement to me.
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。
3. anything 改为 e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )verything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。
4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。
5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。
7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。
9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
10. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。
短文改错。
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1.________
hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2.________
pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3.________
because I didn't want to let her off. I was born to a poor4.________
peasant family, b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ut I really knew life was not easy. All the5.________
things my mother di ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d was the result of her hope that I could6.________
lead better life ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7.________
no gains.”I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8.________
have a chance to go ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to college. Thanks to my mother's push and the 9.________
pressure, I made ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉第二个was 此处不用被动语态，故was多余。
2．experience→experienced 此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。
3．that→what 这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。
4．off→down 结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。
5．but→and或so 此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。
6．was→were 此处主语为all the things，故应用were。
7．better前加a lead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。
8．mother→mother's 此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。
9．√
10．good→bad 根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。
（四川卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
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【答案】66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for
68、改but 为so 69、去a
70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking
72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to
74、改pleasing为pleased 75、√
【重庆八中】
第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Anita Mei was very famous pop singer in Hong Kong. Together 76.______
with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four. In the 77.______
early 1980s, she took part in a local sing competition and won the 78.______
first prize. The song “Bad Girl” made she famous. The following 79.______
years saw Anita make many records. Some of her song were very 80.______
popular. She was always ready to help others, but she made a lot 81.______
of good friends. When SARS hits Hong Kong , she organized 82.______
several concerts with others pop stars, calling on Hong Kong 83.______
people to bravely face the disease. Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.______
in 2003. The lady that whom was brave and beautiful will always be remembered by people. 85.______
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people to bravey fa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ce the disease. Sad, Anita died of cancer 84. Sadly __
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be remembered by people.湖南长沙市2016高考英语短文改错练习（附答案）
【2016高考训练】短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有2处.涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉 。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 。
Dear Andy,
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I’m going to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them to you. I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
1.ask改成asked 2.diet前加my 3.health 改为healthy
4.why 改为because 5.and 改为but 6.probable改为probably
7.rices 改为rice 8.去掉on 9.have 后加a 10.for 改为of
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want as my birthday ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) present. I told him I need no present but 2.
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include my new neig ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hbor Tom. I told him I didn’t like to be with 5.
a person who ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I 6.
seize the chance to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) make new friends. In my birthday, Tom 7.
came besides m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y seven friends. Very quick we became good 8.
friends. Fro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m this I realized give others a chance means giving 9.
myself a cha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nce. It was really unforgettable birthday. 10.
【参考答案及解析】
1. how → what考查宾语从句的连接词。此处what作want的宾语。
2. need → needed 考查动词时态。根据文意此处应用一般过去时。
3. name → names 考查名词单复数。根据后文可知应是七个朋友的名字，故用复数形式。
4. his → my 考查代词指代一致。
5. 正确 经分析本句正确。此处my guest list和my new neighbor Tom应一致。
6. And → But 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处表转折。
7. In → On 考查介词的用法。此处指在“生日这天”，故用介词on。
8. quick → quickly考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词become用副词。
9. give → giving 考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语giving others a chance作means的主语。
10. unforgettable → an unforgettable考查冠词的用法。此处birthday是可数名词，故其前加an。
短文改错
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young
people. According to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) studies, any children spend more time 1. _______
watching televisi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______
much viewing, childr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )en may not be develop the habit of 3. _______
read and th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______
much about ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the radio program young people listen to, 5. _______
although radios can ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______
about the effects o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f television commercials. On one year the 7. _______
average child will ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )see 25,000 television commercials, all 8. _______
plann
ed and written by gro ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )wn-ups to make children to want 9. _______
things that they ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) don’t real need. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. any 改为 many/s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ome。根据句意， 此处应表示“一些， 许多”， 而 any 表示“一些”时， 常常用于否定句、 疑问句和条件句中。
2. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词， 故加 of。
3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。
4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。
5. program 改为 programs。program 为可数名词， 且根据句意， 此处应为复数概念。
6. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词， noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。
7. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在一年中”。
8. 此行无错。
9. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“让某人做某事”。
10. real 改为really。此处应用副词修饰谓语动词 don’t need。
短文改错
下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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答案解析*****短文改错
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which
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the and
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well
I hope tomorrow I will be even happier!
(201*·石家庄质检)
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________
答案与解析：
1．hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。
2．piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。
3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。
4．√
5．But→So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。
6．west→western 依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。
7．improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。
8．hoped→hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。
9．去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。
10．how→what no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。
【渝东七校名校联盟】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
In my hometown there used to be a temple with a 76. ________
history of over eight hundred years. It lies in a 77. ________
valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful 78. ________
and famous that many tourists came visit it every 79. ________
day. They took photo; they wrote down their names on 80. ________
the walls, they were brought food and drink and left rubbish 81. ________
everywhere. One day some toursts did a fire to cook 82. ________
food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind 83. ________
blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly 84. ________
temple was burned out and only a little walls remained. 85. ________
The beautiful temple disappeared.
参考答案
76. to后加 be 77. lies-lay 78. such so 79. came后加to
80. photo-photos 81.去掉were 82. did-made 83. of后加a
84. wholly-whole 85. little-few湖南长沙市2016高考英语短文改错练习附答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Cheetahs(猎豹) are the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly The only animal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.
【答案解析】
61. fast——fastest in the world提示我们要用最高级。
62.running——run be able to 后用动词原形
63.fastly——fast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。
64.amazed——amazing –ed修饰人，-ing修饰物
65.去掉best favorite=like…best，这里重复，去掉best。
66. catch up后加上with catch up with 追上；赶上
67.had ——has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。
68. as——than 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。
69. a——an excellent example元音发音前用an。
70. is——are several species是复数，故用there are。
2012模拟短文改错I
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【参考答案及解析】
1. 正确 经分析本句正确。
2. swam – swim 考查动词时态。文章讲述的是通常的惯例，故用一般现在时。
3. wants前加who / tha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t, 或Everyone – Whoever考查句子结构分析。此处must have是谓语动词，wants前加who/that构成定语从句，把Everyone – Whoever构成主语从句。
4. few前加a, 或few – some 考查句意理解。此处意为：你必须知道有一些危险。故用a few或some。
5. its – your 考查代词指代一致。此处your应与有保持一致。
6. is – be 考查句意理解及并列关系。此处be与know并列。
7. problem – problems 考查名词的单复数。根据句意可知可能的问题不止一个。
8. to – with 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握短语“主语（人）be familiar with ”。
9. 去掉that 考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what是宾语从句的连接词，故去掉that。
10. easily – easy考查形容词的用法。此处look相当于系动词，故用形容词。
短文改错
What should you do when your parents become 1. _______
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with them about it ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) . Remembering not to shout 3. _______
at them. They us ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ually will try to change, but they will 4. _______
take some time be ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cause they get angry all their life, and that 5. _______
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method a couple o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f times. Do any nice things for your 7. _______
parents that they don’t expect—like cooking,
doing the dishes, w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ashing clothes, or clean 8. _______
the floors. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )If this doesn’t work , bring in friend that you 9. _______
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答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。
3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。
4. they 改为 it。the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y 前为转折连词 but， 表明其后为一个句子， 这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如： Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didn’t help。此处的代词 it， 代替“Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。
5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。
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8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。
9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。
fortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与……自在/愉快”。例如：
She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。
短文改错。
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76．∧left → had 77. √
78. In → On 79. 第一个the→ a
80. with → in 81. do → did
82. None → Neither 83. while → when
84. surprising → surprise 85. speak → speaking
第***套
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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参考答案
66.boy前加a 6 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )7.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook 69.but改为and 70.√ 71.about后加to 72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months
短文改错。
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himsel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。湖南长沙市2016高考英语短文改错附答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短信。信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的单词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Jack
短文改错（1×10=10分）
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2012模拟短文改错H
When we talk about ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) city life, we’ll think tall 1．_________
buildings, bus ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y streets and comfortable live 2．_________
conditions．Besides, th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere is much pollution in 3．_________
the city now．People h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ave to put up with noisy 4．_________
and harmful smoke．How about country life The 5．_________
first feelings c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ome into our minds are peace and quiet． 6．_________
We can enjoy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the blue sky, golden crop and fresh air． 7．_________
But life in the cou ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ntry is not so easy as it in the city． 8．_________
In my opinion, if we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) pay attention to protect the 9．_________
environment an ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d developing the country, and we’ll enjoy 10．_________
a modern and peaceful life．
【参考答案及解析】
1．think后加of / about 考查动词的用法。此处think不能直接带宾语，故改成think of的形式。
2．live改为living 考查分词作定语。此处living conditions生活条件。
3．Besides改为However 考查副词的用法。根据文意前面为优势后为劣势，故表转折用however。
4．noisy改为noise / noises 考查形容词和名词的用法区别。此处名词作with的宾语，故用noise。
5．正确 经分析本句正确。
6．come前加that或come改为com ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing 考查句子结构的分析。本句的谓语动词是are，所以come需以分词作定语或作定语从句的谓语的形式出现。
7．crop改为crops 考查名词的单复数。根据语意应用复数形式。
8．it改为that 考查代词的用法。此处that用于比较句型，因其后有定语in the city。
9．protect改为protecting 考查介词的用法。因为pay attention to中的to是介词，故用动名词。
10．去掉第二个and考查句子结构的分析。本句前面是if引导的条件句，后面是主句，所以去掉and。
短文改错
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Si ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )chuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 1. _______
mountain with al ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______
was fine. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______
the mountai ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______
climbed the mo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )untain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______
and told stories. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______
since the scenery ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______
Evening came ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) down. We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______
the top of the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment my head ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) touched the pillow. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。
2. 此行无错。
3. noon 后加 whe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。
4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。
5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。
6. picture 改为 pictures。
7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。
8. 删去 down。
9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。
10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。
【重庆南开中学】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ).对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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短文改错----漏词
漏词考查主要集中在：名词前漏冠词；不及物 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )动词后漏掉相应的介词。不定式前少了不该省的to；分句与分句之间往往漏掉相应的连词；句子中助动词、情态动词的遗漏。复合句中关系词、连接词的遗漏；以及句子中替代词的遗漏等。
1.One day, the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )school held party, where I was invited to talk about Tianjin. (08天津卷)
析：初次提到的可数名词单数前面要加不定冠词，因此要在party前加不定冠词a。
2.It was a lesso ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n to us that it was possible give without expecting anything（09浙江卷）
析：在it is/was possible to do sth结构中，动词不定式符合不能省略，因此要在give前加to。
三、多词
多词考查主要集中在介词、 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )副词、连接词、冠词、不定式符号to、代词、助动词等。这些词大都为虚词，在句子中的作用显得不大，但极易引起误用，是学生语言运用中最常犯的错误。
1.The market at th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket.(09全国卷I)
析：句子的意思为 “市场把位置让给了一个超市”。这里并不表示被动意义，要将been去掉。
2. I’m sorry that I wa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday.（09全国卷II）
析：return to的意思为返回到某地，而在句子中的意思为归还某物，不能加to，要将to去掉。
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参考答案（一）
76．he → she 77. 第二个the → a
78. covering → covered 79.√
80. turn∧→ to 81. Lucky → luckily
82. 去掉when 83. directions → direction
84. catch → caught 85. for∧→ what
第***套
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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a rainy day. W ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e would be much happier and are able to study 70_________
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little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we湖南长沙市2016高考英语短文改错附参考答案
【2016高考训练】短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
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I can’t wait to seeing you in China.
Yours,
Li Hu
短文改错：（10分）
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see
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2012模拟短文改错G
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saw an old man fell off his bike. Many people crowded 2．
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【参考答案及解析】
1．while-when考查状语从句的连接词。根据文意此处为“这时，突然”之意，故用when。
2．fell-fall考查非谓语动词的用法。根据see sb do sth可知用fall。
3．an-the考查冠词的用法。第二次提到那位老人应用定冠词the。
4．has-had考查动词时态。根据文意他在上个星期六之前他就学会了急救，故用过去完成时。
5．she-he考查代词指代一致。此处指Tom故用he。
6．checked-check考查并列关系。此处check和leave并列。
7．去掉in考查动词的用法。打电话应用call sb。
8．use-using考查现在分词作状语。此处using the mouth-to-mouth way作方式状语。
9．V经分析本句正确。
10．that-what考查主语从句的连接词。此处what作do的宾语。
【2015·陕西】
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2015年陕西卷【答案】【解析】
试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。
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（浙江卷）短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tree then, so I'll to say” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.
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I was playing at my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys
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the toy or faced my ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late
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【重庆南开中学】
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
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if he lets me g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o without a ticket. But this does not 78.
always happen. Tr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )affic police is sometimes very 79.
polite. During a ho ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )liday in Sweden, I find this 80.
note in my car, "Sir, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )we welcome you to our city. 81.
This is a 'No Par ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )king' area. You will enjoy you your 82.
stay here wheth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er you pay attention to our street signs. 83.
This note is s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )imple a reminder." If you receive a 84.
request like this, you ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) can fail to obey it! 85.
改错76．traffic前加a 77．unlucky--lucky
78．me—you 79．is--are 80．find--found 81．in—on
82．去掉you 83．whether--if 84．simple—simply
85．can--can't/can后加not或never
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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the kitchen looking ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It 72.
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参考答案
66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook
69.but改为and 70.√ 71.about后加to
72.Shake改为Shaking 73.apologize改为apologized
74.me改为myself 75.month改为months
