误会类故事
写作导图
一、设置误会
The old man glared at the broken window, firmly believing it was my mischief.
（老人怒视着破碎的窗户，坚信是我的恶作剧）
解析：用firmly believing强调错误认知，通过具体物件（broken window）构建误会场景
She clutched her stolen purse, eyes fixed on the man in black jacket.
（她紧抓被盗的钱包，眼睛死盯着穿黑夹克的男人）
解析：动作描写（clutched）加强紧张感，stolen暗示误会前提
My heart sank seeing Mom's favorite vase in fragments at Tom's feet.
（看到妈妈最爱的花瓶碎在汤姆脚边，我的心沉了下去）
解析：情感动词（sank）推动情节，at Tom's feet制造表面证据
The teacher's frown deepened as I nervously covered the test paper.
（当我紧张地盖住试卷时，老师的眉头皱得更深了）
解析：神态描写（frown）与动作（covered）制造行为误会
二、发展矛盾
"You've done this before!" Her accusation cut through the silent classroom.
（"你以前就这样干过！"她的指控划破寂静的教室）
解析：直接引语增强戏剧性，silent classroom营造对峙氛围
I stepped back, tears blurring the disappointed faces around me.
（我后退一步，泪水模糊了周围失望的面孔）
解析：生理反应（tears）体现委屈，群体反应（disappointed faces）激化矛盾
The crowd's murmurs grew louder:"Thief...liar...disgrace..."
（人群的私语越来越大："小偷...骗子...耻辱..."）
解析：群体语言制造压力，渐强结构（murmurs grew louder）推进冲突
My trembling hands failed to open the evidence that would clear me.
（我颤抖的手打不开能证明清白的证据）
解析：细节阻碍（trembling hands）增加叙事张力
三、揭示真相
Security footage showed a stray cat knocking down the vase.
（监控录像显示是流浪猫碰倒了花瓶）
解析：科技元素（footage）合理化解误会，动物介入增加趣味性
The receipt in my pocket dated from yesterday - I couldn't have bought it!
（我口袋里的收据日期是昨天——我根本不可能买过！）
解析：实物证据（receipt）逻辑解谜，日期矛盾自然揭晓真相
A tear fell on the diary page: "Wanted to surprise Mom with new vase..."
（泪水滴在日记页上："本想用新花瓶给妈妈惊喜..."）
解析：私人记录（diary）揭示动机，情感动词（tear）连接反转
The stranger pulled out a police badge, "I was protecting your wallet."
（陌生人掏出警徽："我是在保护你的钱包"）
解析：身份反转（police badge）制造惊喜，直接引语快速解谜
四、情感转变
Her anger melted into guilt as she saw my bandaged rescuing hand.
（当她看到我包扎的救援伤手时，愤怒融成了愧疚）
解析：melted准确描绘情感变化，身体伤痕（bandaged）见证真相
We stood in the shattered glass, laughter replacing accusations.
（我们站在玻璃碎片中，笑声取代了指责）
解析：环境细节（shattered glass）与情感对比（laughter vs accusations）
His stern face softened, calloused hands gently wiping my tears.
（他严厉的面容柔和下来，粗糙的手轻轻擦去我的泪水）
解析：触觉描写（calloused hands）体现情感流动，softened显示转变
The classroom erupted in applause, my cheeks burning with relief.
（教室爆发出掌声，我的脸颊因释然而发烫）
解析：群体反应（applause）确认误会解除，生理细节（burning cheeks）外化情绪
五、主题升华
That day I learned: Jumping to conclusions breaks more than vases.
（那天我明白：妄下结论打碎的不只是花瓶）
解析：隐喻手法（vases）深化主题，哲理句式提升立意
Mistakes mended with understanding create the strongest bonds.
（用理解修补的裂痕，造就最牢固的纽带）
解析：比喻（bonds）具象化抽象概念，押韵（mended/understanding）增强记忆
The deepest regrets often bloom from the seeds of haste.
（最深的懊悔往往萌发于匆忙的种子）
解析：自然隐喻（bloom/seeds）生动诠释因果关系
In the mirror of truth, every misunderstanding finds its reflection.
（在真相的镜子里，每个误会都找到倒影）
解析：比喻（mirror）呼应主题，哲理表达提升故事内涵
写作贴士
物品线索法：让关键物件（如钱包/花瓶）贯穿始末
例：The red wallet reappeared in the lost-and-found box, its clasp still broken.
（红色钱包重新出现在失物招领箱，搭扣仍然损坏）
感官误导法：通过有限视角制造认知偏差
例：Through the frosted window, the shadow looked like a thief's silhouette.
（透过磨砂窗户，影子看起来像小偷的轮廓）
双线叙事法：同步描写双方视角
例：While I trembled in the closet, Mom was downstairs calling animal control.
（当我在壁橱发抖时，妈妈正在楼下联系动物管理局）
环境映衬法：用天气/场景强化情绪
例：The sudden downpour mirrored my desperation to prove innocence.
（突然的暴雨映照着我证明清白的迫切）
模拟演练
01
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam is a brave policeman who often comes across dangerous situations. However, when he was young, he experienced a funny story during his work.
That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station as usual. A rich and beautiful woman carrying a purse drove to work. She parked her car in the street outside her office. When she finished her work that afternoon, she got into her car quickly and started driving home as usual. Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back, whose driver was a man with a very ugly look. To her surprise, when she turned left, the yellow car also turned left. When she turned right, the yellow car turned right, too. When she stopped at the traffic lights, the yellow car stopped behind her.
Gradually, fear came into her heart. What should she do How could she get rid of this terrible man To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked. However, she was even more surprised when she saw the car still followed her and stopped behind her. “How dare he follow me here ” she said to herself. She could feel her heart beating faster than ever. At that time, Sam was standing on duty outside the police station. Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than delighted that she would be safe.
At once, she jumped out of her car and ran to Sam without any delay. Pointing at the man inside the car, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him. To find what was happening, Sam walked towards the man who had stopped his car near the woman’s.
But what shocked Sam was that the man didn’t try to escape when he saw him. Instead, the man looked relieved. Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.
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Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.
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02
“Going to Nationals!” We were all screaming and jumping. Kate, Jenny, Wendy and I embraced each other, bouncing. “Good job, Tara.” Said Kate as she put an arm around me. I am the youngest on the relay race team, but I'm fast. When I run, I leave the skin of my shyness behind, and I feel like a horseman on the Mongolian grassland, free, without boundaries.
Everybody ran to their parents in the bleachers ( 露天看台). My Mom didn’t make it. Again. I grabbed my phone and called her. It took a while for her to answer. “Yes, hi dear.” “Mom, we won states, and we are going to nationals.” I burst out in one breath. “Great! Let’s talk later; I’ll pick you up from school.” I wanted to say: “Is that it Why aren’t you proud of me All other parents are here, why aren’t you ” but all I did was“OK, see you soon.”Does she see me Do I matter
It was late after 9 PM. All the parents picked up their children, but my Mom wasn’t here yet. Coach Johnson waited with me. We just stood. A speeding car turned the corner; it was my Mom’s Toyota. Coach patted me on the back and left.
“I am so sorry I am late.Time just flew.” Said Mom. I wanted to cry in disappointment and tell her that I hate to be always last to be picked up and never have her come to my sporting contests, school plays, or anything else; ask her why she won’t make time for me. But when I looked at her and saw her tired eyes and clenched jaw (咬紧下巴), I just said: “That's OK, Mom, I understand.” Her jaw had stayed clenched since we came to this country as Mom would say: “with two pieces of luggage, a three-year-old (me), and $700.”
注意：
1． 续写的词数应为 150 左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Nationals finally came and my Mom came for the first time ever.
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I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself
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Nationals finally came and My Mom came for the first time ever. Seeing my Mom in the bleachers, I was especially excited. I was like racehorses at the gate: nervously waiting and heads held high. I was the last runner in our team.“ I have to seal the win.” I told myself. After Wendy passed the baton in my hand, I exploded forward. The crowd were screaming. My thoughts rocked with the pulse of the blood.I was beginning to pick up speed again when I was suddenly thrown off balance. Just as I was regaining control, I hit the floor and dropped the baton. My world had just ended.
I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself. My legs were all bloody, but that's not what hurt. I disappointed everybody. After a while, my mom, with red eyes, found me. “I will quit the team.” I whispered. “No, love! You had the best time in the race. It was an accident.” She continued to make me feel good, but I heard only her soft voice coming as a warm embrace at me, and then I cried out my sorrow,“ You're… never at my meets… always late… you don't have time… you're not proud of me.” Her voice dropped,“I love you so much that I wanted to build a stronger boat for us. I am proud of you every second.” Thirsty for those words, I ran into her arms. The next day, I went back to the track. When I looked at my Mom in the bleachers, we smiled.
03
An unexpected change on the road
It was a damp evening in September 2013 when I landed in Kuching, the capital city of Sarawak in Malaysia. I was a 19-year-old Dubai-raised kid away from home for the first time to start my undergraduate studies in mechanical engineering.
Alone and homesick, the wet welcome I received at the airport didn't make me feel any better. I had never travelled alone before and the seven-hour flight from Dubai was the longest flight I had ever taken. I pushed my luggage and headed to the airport exit to find a grey van with the name of my university on it. My ride, I assumed, and I was right.
As we left the airport, the driver began talking to me; he told me that I was the last of the new students he had to pick up that day. He shared information with me about the city and its people and what I should see and do. As I am a driving enthusiast myself, we started talking about cars and driving in Dubai and his accounts of driving in Kuching.
"Never make a Sarawakian angry” he warned. “No road rage (路怒). Very dangerous!" He then went on to list his experiences of road rage and by the time he had finished, I had made up my mind to be very passive on the roads.
Not long into our journey, the lights of the car behind flashed at us. This continued more aggressively and my driver started to panic. We pulled over to the roadside in a well-lit area. My heart was pounding but I tried to put on a brave face as the man from the car emerged and made his way to my side of the van. As he reached my window, I lowered it and tried to force a smile. He reached into the van and I let out a loud “Whoa (used to tell someone to become calmer)!"
注意: .
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag.
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With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger.
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04
A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman—polite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.
With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold（大胆的）as he could be, grabbed（抓）a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didn`t get that hint（暗示）, since he didn`t stop grabbing the cookies.
“How annoying!” she thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched（用力咀嚼）some cookies and watched the clock.
She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, “If I weren`t so nice, I would blacken his eyes.” With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do.
With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, “Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn’t he even show any gratefulness ”
She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为 130 左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘气）with surprise.
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Paragraph 2:
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her.
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As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘气）with surprise. There was an unopened bag of cookies. A terrible thought crossed her mind, “If my cookie bag is here, the other one I ate is his and he just tried to share with me.” She realized that the man wasn’t the irritating cookie thief and he was polite enough. In contrast with him, she was the impolite one. But it was too late to say sorry to him.
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. Her face burned with shame and apologized for what she did and said to him. “It doesn’t matter!” the man smiled at her and said. It was totally unexpected for her to hear his response. She understood that real politeness and gentleness was sincere kindness, even though others treated you in a rude way. It was the man who taught her the truth.
05
It was dark, cold and raining on December 24. James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place. He was very tired. He took out his car key and put down his umbrella. He put the key into the lock and turned it. Nothing happened. The door would not open. Then James realised that it was the wrong car. His car was red, but this one was dark blue. “Oh dear! I must have parked in a different place this morning,” thought he. Putting up his umbrella, he set off to look for his car. The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.
Having walked round all the side streets, James didn’t find his car. He was exhausted and angry. “Someone must have stolen my car,” he thought. “Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it.” The policeman there was very helpful. He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number. As James was leaving, the policeman wished him a merry Christmas.
“Christmas!” thought James. “Oh no! I’ve forgotten all about Christmas. I haven’t bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut. What shall I do ” When waiting for the bus, he got wetter and more miserable (难受的). He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar. He felt like bursting into tears.
When James got home, he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard. “What are you doing, Jessica ” he asked. “The big gold star for the Christmas tree,” Jessica replied. “Just a moment. I’ll go into the garage (车库) and fetch the stepladder (梯子) for you,” said James. When James saw .the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it, he felt even more unhappy. “What a lovely tree!” he thought as he went downstairs, “I haven’t even got one present for Jessica. I’ve lost my car and I’m completely wet. I must have lost my umbrella, too.”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement.
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Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present.
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06
The Rude Boy
James Selton was one of the rudest boys in the village where he lived. If a person in the street was well dressed, he would cry out, “Dandy(花花公子)!” If a person’s clothes were dirty or torn, he would throw stones at him, and annoy him in every way.
One afternoon, just as the school was dismissed, a stranger passed through the village. His dress was plain and somewhat old, but neat and clean. He carried a cane(手杖) in his hand, on the end of which was a bag and he wore a broad-brimmed(宽边的) hat.
No sooner had James seen the stranger than he winked to his playmates, and said, “Now for some fun!” He then silently went toward the stranger from behind, and, knocking off his hat, ran away.
The man turned and saw him, but James was out of hearing before he could speak. The stranger put on his hat, and went on his way. Again did James approach, but this time, the man caught him by the arm, and held him tightly. However, he contented himself with looking at James a moment in the face, and then pushed him from him. No sooner had the naughty boy found himself free again than he began to pelt(连读投掷) the stranger with dirt and stones.
But James was very frightened when the man was struck on the head by a brick, and badly hurt. All the boys ran away, and James skulked(偷偷摸摸走动) across the fields to his home.
As he drew near his house, his sister Caroline came out to meet him, holding up a beautiful gold chain and some new books for him to see. She told James, as fast as she could talk, that their uncle, who had been away several years, had come home, and was now in the house; that he had brought beautiful presents for the whole family; that he had left his carriage at the tavern(客栈),a mile or two off, and walked on foot, so as to surprise his brother, their father.
注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She said while he was coming through the village, some wicked boys threw stones at him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
His uncle went up to him, but stopped suddenly when seeing his face.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________误会类故事
写作导图
一、设置误会
The old man glared at the broken window, firmly believing it was my mischief.
（老人怒视着破碎的窗户，坚信是我的恶作剧）
解析：用firmly believing强调错误认知，通过具体物件（broken window）构建误会场景
She clutched her stolen purse, eyes fixed on the man in black jacket.
（她紧抓被盗的钱包，眼睛死盯着穿黑夹克的男人）
解析：动作描写（clutched）加强紧张感，stolen暗示误会前提
My heart sank seeing Mom's favorite vase in fragments at Tom's feet.
（看到妈妈最爱的花瓶碎在汤姆脚边，我的心沉了下去）
解析：情感动词（sank）推动情节，at Tom's feet制造表面证据
The teacher's frown deepened as I nervously covered the test paper.
（当我紧张地盖住试卷时，老师的眉头皱得更深了）
解析：神态描写（frown）与动作（covered）制造行为误会
二、发展矛盾
"You've done this before!" Her accusation cut through the silent classroom.
（"你以前就这样干过！"她的指控划破寂静的教室）
解析：直接引语增强戏剧性，silent classroom营造对峙氛围
I stepped back, tears blurring the disappointed faces around me.
（我后退一步，泪水模糊了周围失望的面孔）
解析：生理反应（tears）体现委屈，群体反应（disappointed faces）激化矛盾
The crowd's murmurs grew louder:"Thief...liar...disgrace..."
（人群的私语越来越大："小偷...骗子...耻辱..."）
解析：群体语言制造压力，渐强结构（murmurs grew louder）推进冲突
My trembling hands failed to open the evidence that would clear me.
（我颤抖的手打不开能证明清白的证据）
解析：细节阻碍（trembling hands）增加叙事张力
三、揭示真相
Security footage showed a stray cat knocking down the vase.
（监控录像显示是流浪猫碰倒了花瓶）
解析：科技元素（footage）合理化解误会，动物介入增加趣味性
The receipt in my pocket dated from yesterday - I couldn't have bought it!
（我口袋里的收据日期是昨天——我根本不可能买过！）
解析：实物证据（receipt）逻辑解谜，日期矛盾自然揭晓真相
A tear fell on the diary page: "Wanted to surprise Mom with new vase..."
（泪水滴在日记页上："本想用新花瓶给妈妈惊喜..."）
解析：私人记录（diary）揭示动机，情感动词（tear）连接反转
The stranger pulled out a police badge, "I was protecting your wallet."
（陌生人掏出警徽："我是在保护你的钱包"）
解析：身份反转（police badge）制造惊喜，直接引语快速解谜
四、情感转变
Her anger melted into guilt as she saw my bandaged rescuing hand.
（当她看到我包扎的救援伤手时，愤怒融成了愧疚）
解析：melted准确描绘情感变化，身体伤痕（bandaged）见证真相
We stood in the shattered glass, laughter replacing accusations.
（我们站在玻璃碎片中，笑声取代了指责）
解析：环境细节（shattered glass）与情感对比（laughter vs accusations）
His stern face softened, calloused hands gently wiping my tears.
（他严厉的面容柔和下来，粗糙的手轻轻擦去我的泪水）
解析：触觉描写（calloused hands）体现情感流动，softened显示转变
The classroom erupted in applause, my cheeks burning with relief.
（教室爆发出掌声，我的脸颊因释然而发烫）
解析：群体反应（applause）确认误会解除，生理细节（burning cheeks）外化情绪
五、主题升华
That day I learned: Jumping to conclusions breaks more than vases.
（那天我明白：妄下结论打碎的不只是花瓶）
解析：隐喻手法（vases）深化主题，哲理句式提升立意
Mistakes mended with understanding create the strongest bonds.
（用理解修补的裂痕，造就最牢固的纽带）
解析：比喻（bonds）具象化抽象概念，押韵（mended/understanding）增强记忆
The deepest regrets often bloom from the seeds of haste.
（最深的懊悔往往萌发于匆忙的种子）
解析：自然隐喻（bloom/seeds）生动诠释因果关系
In the mirror of truth, every misunderstanding finds its reflection.
（在真相的镜子里，每个误会都找到倒影）
解析：比喻（mirror）呼应主题，哲理表达提升故事内涵
写作贴士
物品线索法：让关键物件（如钱包/花瓶）贯穿始末
例：The red wallet reappeared in the lost-and-found box, its clasp still broken.
（红色钱包重新出现在失物招领箱，搭扣仍然损坏）
感官误导法：通过有限视角制造认知偏差
例：Through the frosted window, the shadow looked like a thief's silhouette.
（透过磨砂窗户，影子看起来像小偷的轮廓）
双线叙事法：同步描写双方视角
例：While I trembled in the closet, Mom was downstairs calling animal control.
（当我在壁橱发抖时，妈妈正在楼下联系动物管理局）
环境映衬法：用天气/场景强化情绪
例：The sudden downpour mirrored my desperation to prove innocence.
（突然的暴雨映照着我证明清白的迫切）
模拟演练
01
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam is a brave policeman who often comes across dangerous situations. However, when he was young, he experienced a funny story during his work.
That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station as usual. A rich and beautiful woman carrying a purse drove to work. She parked her car in the street outside her office. When she finished her work that afternoon, she got into her car quickly and started driving home as usual. Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back, whose driver was a man with a very ugly look. To her surprise, when she turned left, the yellow car also turned left. When she turned right, the yellow car turned right, too. When she stopped at the traffic lights, the yellow car stopped behind her.
Gradually, fear came into her heart. What should she do How could she get rid of this terrible man To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked. However, she was even more surprised when she saw the car still followed her and stopped behind her. “How dare he follow me here ” she said to herself. She could feel her heart beating faster than ever. At that time, Sam was standing on duty outside the police station. Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than delighted that she would be safe.
At once, she jumped out of her car and ran to Sam without any delay. Pointing at the man inside the car, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him. To find what was happening, Sam walked towards the man who had stopped his car near the woman’s.
But what shocked Sam was that the man didn’t try to escape when he saw him. Instead, the man looked relieved. Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.
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Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.
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【答案】参考范文：
The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. Actually, the man just wanted to give the purse back to the woman. He said when the woman got into her car, she dropped the purse on the street unconsciously. The man was parking his car near the woman and saw what had happened. So he started to drive his car to chase the woman. The woman opened the purse and made sure nothing was lost. She bowed to the man, took out 100 dollars and handed it to the man. But the man had left before she knew it.
Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman. He told her that though not handsome, the man had a heart of gold. In addition, he taught her not to judge men by their looks. After hearing Sam’s words, the woman felt embarrassed about what she had done. Luckily, she realized her fault and felt grateful to the man. The woman promised that next time, when she saw something strange, she would not make any judgement until figuring out the truth.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了萨姆在做警察时遇到了一位女士，这位女士认为有坏人在跟踪自己，后来发现是因为女士觉得那个男人长的不好看误会了人家，他其实是想把这位女士的钱包送还的故事。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这个人只是笑了笑，然后开始讲实话。”可知，第一段可描写事情的真相。
②由第二段首句内容“然后，萨姆陷入了沉思，开始和那个女人说话。”可知，第二段可描写萨姆跟女士讲道理，不要以貌取人。
2．续写线索：害怕——求助——真相大白——感谢——感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
①追：chase/go after/run after
②意识到：realize/be aware of
情绪类
①窘迫的：embarrassed/abashed
②感谢：be grateful/be thankful/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The man was parking his car near the woman and saw what had happened. (这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. The woman promised that next time, when she saw something strange, she would not make any judgement until figuring out the truth. (这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
02
“Going to Nationals!” We were all screaming and jumping. Kate, Jenny, Wendy and I embraced each other, bouncing. “Good job, Tara.” Said Kate as she put an arm around me. I am the youngest on the relay race team, but I'm fast. When I run, I leave the skin of my shyness behind, and I feel like a horseman on the Mongolian grassland, free, without boundaries.
Everybody ran to their parents in the bleachers ( 露天看台). My Mom didn’t make it. Again. I grabbed my phone and called her. It took a while for her to answer. “Yes, hi dear.” “Mom, we won states, and we are going to nationals.” I burst out in one breath. “Great! Let’s talk later; I’ll pick you up from school.” I wanted to say: “Is that it Why aren’t you proud of me All other parents are here, why aren’t you ” but all I did was“OK, see you soon.”Does she see me Do I matter
It was late after 9 PM. All the parents picked up their children, but my Mom wasn’t here yet. Coach Johnson waited with me. We just stood. A speeding car turned the corner; it was my Mom’s Toyota. Coach patted me on the back and left.
“I am so sorry I am late.Time just flew.” Said Mom. I wanted to cry in disappointment and tell her that I hate to be always last to be picked up and never have her come to my sporting contests, school plays, or anything else; ask her why she won’t make time for me. But when I looked at her and saw her tired eyes and clenched jaw (咬紧下巴), I just said: “That's OK, Mom, I understand.” Her jaw had stayed clenched since we came to this country as Mom would say: “with two pieces of luggage, a three-year-old (me), and $700.”
注意：
1． 续写的词数应为 150 左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Nationals finally came and my Mom came for the first time ever.
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I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself
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【答案】
Nationals finally came and My Mom came for the first time ever. Seeing my Mom in the bleachers, I was especially excited. I was like racehorses at the gate: nervously waiting and heads held high. I was the last runner in our team.“ I have to seal the win.” I told myself. After Wendy passed the baton in my hand, I exploded forward. The crowd were screaming. My thoughts rocked with the pulse of the blood.I was beginning to pick up speed again when I was suddenly thrown off balance. Just as I was regaining control, I hit the floor and dropped the baton. My world had just ended.
I had let everybody down and I ran out to hide myself. My legs were all bloody, but that's not what hurt. I disappointed everybody. After a while, my mom, with red eyes, found me. “I will quit the team.” I whispered. “No, love! You had the best time in the race. It was an accident.” She continued to make me feel good, but I heard only her soft voice coming as a warm embrace at me, and then I cried out my sorrow,“ You're… never at my meets… always late… you don't have time… you're not proud of me.” Her voice dropped,“I love you so much that I wanted to build a stronger boat for us. I am proud of you every second.” Thirsty for those words, I ran into her arms. The next day, I went back to the track. When I looked at my Mom in the bleachers, we smiled.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和同学赢得了洲际比赛，将要冲向全国的比赛，但是别的同学的父母都到场和自己的孩子一起欢呼时，作者只能打电话给母亲，电话那头母亲没有表示祝贺，作者因此感到很失望，作者希望母亲能来现场看比赛，也希望母亲能够早点来接自己，但是想到母亲一直咬紧牙关养育自己，作者的内心的想法也说不出口。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“全国赛终于来了，我妈第一次来了。”可知，第一段可描写作者母亲来看作者比赛的场景。
②由第二段首句内容“我让大家失望了，我跑出去躲起来。”可知，第二段可描写作者比赛失误后的羞愧，母亲的鼓励。
2．续写线索：母亲看作者比赛——比赛失误——作者感到羞愧——母亲的安慰和鼓励——作者和母亲误会解开
3．词汇激活
行为类
①降低：fall/lower
②使失望：disappoint/upset
③离开：quit/depart from
情绪类
①温柔的：soft/gentle
②激动的：excited/agitated
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I was beginning to pick up speed again when I was suddenly thrown off balance.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. I love you so much that I wanted to build a stronger boat for us.(由so…that引导结果状语从句）
03
An unexpected change on the road
It was a damp evening in September 2013 when I landed in Kuching, the capital city of Sarawak in Malaysia. I was a 19-year-old Dubai-raised kid away from home for the first time to start my undergraduate studies in mechanical engineering.
Alone and homesick, the wet welcome I received at the airport didn't make me feel any better. I had never travelled alone before and the seven-hour flight from Dubai was the longest flight I had ever taken. I pushed my luggage and headed to the airport exit to find a grey van with the name of my university on it. My ride, I assumed, and I was right.
As we left the airport, the driver began talking to me; he told me that I was the last of the new students he had to pick up that day. He shared information with me about the city and its people and what I should see and do. As I am a driving enthusiast myself, we started talking about cars and driving in Dubai and his accounts of driving in Kuching.
"Never make a Sarawakian angry” he warned. “No road rage (路怒). Very dangerous!" He then went on to list his experiences of road rage and by the time he had finished, I had made up my mind to be very passive on the roads.
Not long into our journey, the lights of the car behind flashed at us. This continued more aggressively and my driver started to panic. We pulled over to the roadside in a well-lit area. My heart was pounding but I tried to put on a brave face as the man from the car emerged and made his way to my side of the van. As he reached my window, I lowered it and tried to force a smile. He reached into the van and I let out a loud “Whoa (used to tell someone to become calmer)!"
注意: .
1．续写词数应为150左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag.
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With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger.
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【答案】
Then I looked down at his hands to see that he was holding a travel bag. “Is it yours I've found it at the airport and tried to catch up with you." the man said. I opened the bag and it contained my passport, return tickets, as well as cash and letters for the university. I had left it behind on the trolley at the airport and this man had been trying to return it to me. At this moment, I realized that we had wronged him completely. (76words)
With a sigh of relief, I took my bag and thanked this stranger. The stranger's friendly smile put me at ease. I imagined the horrible scenario had he not returned it. When we arrived, the driver wished me luck with my university studies and drove away. These acts of kindness instantly cheered me up and thanks to this honest stranger, the initial self-doubt I had about my decision to study so far away from home was replaced with hope and excitement.
【解析】
本文围绕人物展开，主要讲述来自于迪拜的19岁的学生一个人来到马来西亚上学，下了飞机之后，因为不适应而感觉不好。搭了一辆出租车去学校，出租车司机人很好，他们聊了很多，其中关于不要在路上招惹到司机，他们容易是路怒者，会很危险。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后，我低头看到他的手里拿着一个旅行包。”可知，第一段可描写那个人来还我的包。
②由第二段首句内容“我松了口气，放下心来，拿过了我的包并且感谢了那个男人。”可知，第二段可描写作者对马来西亚人的善良而感动，并且对在这里的学习和生活抱有希望。
2．续写线索：发现——询问——检查并确认——错怪——感谢——希望
3．词汇激活
行为类
①发现：found/notice
②尽力：tried to/manage to
情绪类
①友好的：friendly/kind
②恐怖的：horrible/terrible
【点睛】
【高分句型1】At this moment, I realized that we had wronged him completely.（由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】When we arrived, the driver wished me luck with my university studies and drove away.（由when引导的时间状语从句）
04
A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman—polite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.
With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold（大胆的）as he could be, grabbed（抓）a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didn`t get that hint（暗示）, since he didn`t stop grabbing the cookies.
“How annoying!” she thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched（用力咀嚼）some cookies and watched the clock.
She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, “If I weren`t so nice, I would blacken his eyes.” With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do.
With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, “Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didn’t he even show any gratefulness ”
She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为 130 左右；
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘气）with surprise.
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Paragraph 2:
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her.
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【答案】As she reached in her baggage, she gasped（喘气）with surprise. There was an unopened bag of cookies. A terrible thought crossed her mind, “If my cookie bag is here, the other one I ate is his and he just tried to share with me.” She realized that the man wasn’t the irritating cookie thief and he was polite enough. In contrast with him, she was the impolite one. But it was too late to say sorry to him.
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. Her face burned with shame and apologized for what she did and said to him. “It doesn’t matter!” the man smiled at her and said. It was totally unexpected for her to hear his response. She understood that real politeness and gentleness was sincere kindness, even though others treated you in a rude way. It was the man who taught her the truth.
【解析】
本文以饼干为线索展开，讲述了一位女士在登机前被邻座的先生“偷吃”了饼干。经过多次试探，这个先生并没有“收敛”，故而她认为这位先生非常没礼貌并且粗鲁。登机后女士发现自己的饼干仍然在包中，并且冤枉了那位先生。她意外地发现那位先生坐在她的后面，并且向他道歉。这件事使她明白真正的礼貌是发自内心的善意。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“当她伸进行李时，她惊讶地喘着气。”可知，第一段可描写女士意识到那位先生并没有粗鲁地偷吃自己的饼干。相反，自己才是那个不礼貌且粗鲁的人。
由第二段首句内容“令她惊讶的是，她发现这位先生正坐在她后面。”可知，第二段可描写女士向先生道歉，并且明白真正的礼貌的意义。
2．续写线索：看到饼干——意识到错误——想道歉——发现那位先生——道歉——感悟
3．词汇激活
行为类
道歉：say sorry/ apologized
笑：laugh/ smiled
情绪类
令人恼怒的：annoying/ irritating
【点睛】
[高分句型1] She realized that the man wasn’t the irritating cookie thief and he was polite enough.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] It was the man who taught her the truth.（运用了It was…who引导的强调句）
05
It was dark, cold and raining on December 24. James left his office and walked slowly across the street to the parking place. He was very tired. He took out his car key and put down his umbrella. He put the key into the lock and turned it. Nothing happened. The door would not open. Then James realised that it was the wrong car. His car was red, but this one was dark blue. “Oh dear! I must have parked in a different place this morning,” thought he. Putting up his umbrella, he set off to look for his car. The rain poured down and the evening got colder and colder.
Having walked round all the side streets, James didn’t find his car. He was exhausted and angry. “Someone must have stolen my car,” he thought. “Now I shall have to go to the police station and report it.” The policeman there was very helpful. He wrote down a description of James car and then took his address and telephone number. As James was leaving, the policeman wished him a merry Christmas.
“Christmas!” thought James. “Oh no! I’ve forgotten all about Christmas. I haven’t bought my wife a present and now all the shops are shut. What shall I do ” When waiting for the bus, he got wetter and more miserable (难受的). He had no umbrella and the rain flowed down into his collar. He felt like bursting into tears.
When James got home, he found his wife standing on a chair and looking for something in a very high cupboard. “What are you doing, Jessica ” he asked. “The big gold star for the Christmas tree,” Jessica replied. “Just a moment. I’ll go into the garage (车库) and fetch the stepladder (梯子) for you,” said James. When James saw .the well-decorated Christmas tree and lots of presents under it, he felt even more unhappy. “What a lovely tree!” he thought as he went downstairs, “I haven’t even got one present for Jessica. I’ve lost my car and I’m completely wet. I must have lost my umbrella, too.”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement.
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Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present.
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【答案】As James opened the garage door, he spotted something, frozen in amazement. Inside the garage was his red car. He suddenly remembered that it wouldn’t start this morning so he just took a taxi to work. James was overjoyed. He was just about to rush upstairs and tell Jessica the good news when he heard, “Meow! Meow!” He looked inside the car and there sat a small kitten with pointed ears and green eyes. James’ eyes were glued to the kitten for a few minutes and a brilliant idea struck him. “This is for Jessica.” He picked the kitten up.
Pleased to know his car was there, James entered the room with the present. “This is your present,” said to Jessica happily. “Oh, thank you, darling. I’ve always wanted a kitten,” her face lit up. Just then the telephone rang. It was the policeman. James was told that his car hadn’t been found but his umbrella was got in the police station. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him. Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公James在圣诞节的时候误认为自己的车丢了，心情变得沮丧，没有给家人买圣诞礼物，天下着雨，雨伞也丢了，心情非常糟糕，浑身湿透的回到家里，后来发现车在车库里，警察也找到了丢失的伞，心情变好的故事。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“詹姆斯打开车库门，发现了什么东西，惊讶地僵住了。”可知，第一段可描写James发现自己的车在家里，也找到了给妻子的礼物，以及他的心情变化。
②由第二段首句内容“詹姆斯很高兴知道他的车就在那里，他带着礼物进了房间。”可知，第二段可描写James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨伞，James非常高兴，沐浴在圣诞节温暖的气氛中。
2．续写线索：找到了车——发现了小猫——给妻子送礼物——警察找到了雨伞——高兴起来
3．词汇激活
行为类
①冲上楼：rush upstairs/dash upstairs/go upstairs hurriedly
②.突然想起：strike /occur to/hit
情绪类
①.高兴：overjoyed/very delighted/extremely happy
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He suddenly remembered that it wouldn’t start this morning so he just took a taxi to work.（运用了that引导宾语从句，so连接并列句式）
[高分句型2]. Putting the phone down, James gazed at Jessica, joy welling up inside him.（运用了现在分词作状语，独立主格结构）
[高分句型3] . Bathed in the warm Christmas atmosphere, James walked over to Jessica and hugged her tightly.（运用了过去分词作状语）
06
The Rude Boy
James Selton was one of the rudest boys in the village where he lived. If a person in the street was well dressed, he would cry out, “Dandy(花花公子)!” If a person’s clothes were dirty or torn, he would throw stones at him, and annoy him in every way.
One afternoon, just as the school was dismissed, a stranger passed through the village. His dress was plain and somewhat old, but neat and clean. He carried a cane(手杖) in his hand, on the end of which was a bag and he wore a broad-brimmed(宽边的) hat.
No sooner had James seen the stranger than he winked to his playmates, and said, “Now for some fun!” He then silently went toward the stranger from behind, and, knocking off his hat, ran away.
The man turned and saw him, but James was out of hearing before he could speak. The stranger put on his hat, and went on his way. Again did James approach, but this time, the man caught him by the arm, and held him tightly. However, he contented himself with looking at James a moment in the face, and then pushed him from him. No sooner had the naughty boy found himself free again than he began to pelt(连读投掷) the stranger with dirt and stones.
But James was very frightened when the man was struck on the head by a brick, and badly hurt. All the boys ran away, and James skulked(偷偷摸摸走动) across the fields to his home.
As he drew near his house, his sister Caroline came out to meet him, holding up a beautiful gold chain and some new books for him to see. She told James, as fast as she could talk, that their uncle, who had been away several years, had come home, and was now in the house; that he had brought beautiful presents for the whole family; that he had left his carriage at the tavern(客栈),a mile or two off, and walked on foot, so as to surprise his brother, their father.
注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She said while he was coming through the village, some wicked boys threw stones at him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
His uncle went up to him, but stopped suddenly when seeing his face.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
She said while he was coming through the village, some wicked boys threw stones at him. He was badly/severely hurt and the wound was just over the eye. Hearing this, James immediately realized that it was he that hurt his uncle. Shameful and frightened, he dared not step into the house. At that time, he heard his father calling him to come in. “What makes you look so pale ” asked Caroline, changing her tone. With palms sweating, he had no choice but to obey. Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead bound up, talking happily with his father. What a sense of shame did James now feel! Hanging down his head, he walked toward / approached his uncle.
Paragraph 2:
His uncle went up to him, but stopped suddenly when seeing his face. Then he cried, “Oh! It’s you!” But when his uncle saw the puzzled father, he immediately explained that he just met James in the street. In a flash, James learnt that his uncle was ready to forgive him. But facing such a kind uncle, he couldn’t conceal his guilt. Having confessed what he had done to his uncle, James felt relieved. He never forgot this lesson so long as he lived. It cured him entirely of his low and insolent/rude manners.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了James Selton是他住的村子里最粗鲁的男孩之一，他经常捉弄他人。一天下午，放学时，一个陌生人经过村子，James开始捉弄这个陌生人，用砖块击中陌生人的头部并受重伤。James吓坏了赶紧回家，妹妹告诉他，他们的叔叔离开这里多年，现在回到家里，并给他们全家买了漂亮的礼物。
【详解】
1．段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她说，当他穿过村子时，一些坏男孩向他扔石头。”可知，第一段可描写叔叔受伤的情况和James的担心和害怕，不敢回家。
②由第二段首句内容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但当他看到他的脸时突然停住了。”可知，第二段可描写James的叔叔认出来他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如释重负，决定改掉自己低贱无理的举止。
2．续写线索：意识到——害怕——羞愧——坦白——改正
3．词汇激活
行为类
①.意识到：realize/be aware of/become aware of
②.交谈：talk with/chat with/ have a chat with
③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit
情绪类
① .愉快地：happily /merrily/cheerfully
②.羞愧：shame /disgrace
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Hearing this, James immediately realized that it was he that hurt his uncle.(运用了现在分词作状语和宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather his uncle, with his forehead bound up, talking happily with his father.(运用了倒装结构，with的复合结构，现在分词作状语)
